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Past lives and the Pentoculus

So like, everyone remember the pentoculus plotline that never went anywhere and how The Hand weren't good villains despite their immense power?
I made a thing:
So, the Pentoculous is set up as this strange device that is talked abt in scrolls and stuff and is called this 'Key to the Truth of Monsuno', it's a whole treasure hunt with clues and puzzles and riddles they have to solve to even get a possible location, five pieces, five treasure hunts with their own risks.
They have no idea the wild ride they're setting themselves up for to find the pieces.
Team Coretech goes incognito to a museum bc they have a clue that an exhibition is related to Monsunos and the Pentoculus that might help them, one of the objects is suspiciously shaped like Jinja's piece. (The purple piramid)
Among the objects exhibited there's a spear with complex carved symbols, jewelry and a monolith with an ancient forgotten alphabet.
They're trying to figure out a way to inspect them without getting caught, Beyal is geeking out random info on the objects exhibited to Chase, Bren is trying to analize them with his core tablet and Dax is plotting Museum Heist 101.
Jinja throughout the whole thing is getting weird flashes and is increasingly being pulled by an invisible force towards the objects of the exhibition while at the same time Beyal tries to translate a bit of the carvings on the monolith from afar, saying that a vague warning and a riddle is writen, until, dazed, Jinja breaks into the exhibition and touches a triangular symbol on the monolith.
A bright green flash engulfes her and she apparently gets swapped by an ancient huntress version of herself drapped in animal hides, tattoos and archaic but complex jewelry, her hair is darker and thickly braided, the piece of the Pentoculus having been dislodged from the monolith and on her grip.
To say that all hell breaks loose is an understatement. Freaked out and with no idea where she is, the huntress grabs the spear while she's at it and goes full caveman on the Museum guards while running for her life, the rest of the team trying to go after her as she goes on a full parkour montage through the streets, jumping over moving cars and climbing brickwalls like is a sport with people recording and photographing her.
Eventually she runs into a dead end and, getting increasingly overwhelmed by the flashes and the noise of the crowd, with the help of the Pentoculus piece, her spear lights up bright green, charged with Monsuno essence and she blasts the wall blocking her way, escaping into the nearby forest at the very edge of the city.
Team Coretech follows after her tracking the energy of the spear and the piece but she's absurdly good at hiding from them, well into night and no trace of her, she stalks them as well from the shadows but remains hidden, apparently fearful of their Monsunos.
Dax, profficient on tracking and wilderness, is the one that keeps her on her toes the most but is Beyal who gets ambushed by her and separated from the group.
She holds him hostage as she interrogates him in an ancient forgotten language but the more she talks the more familiar her words are to him. He attempts to communicate with her Kida and Milo style, he has studied a lot of forgotten languages but talking them for the first time to a fluent speaker is a whole other matter. Eventually her words start to make sense and they manage to have a proper conversation.
Among the things she does and says one of them is that she invades his personal space to grab at his hair and goes 'You are one from the frozen lands, those with snow on their hair' hinting at the ancient heritage of his tribe and also describes the rest of the team as 'Those who control the Ancient Beasts' (As casual wordbuilding here and there).
Beyal finally manages to ask her who she is and what the Pentoculus piece is for, she says her name is 'Huntress' (Literal translation) and goes on a long tangent abt how she was trusted to guard the Piece and heavily trained in the arts of combat since she was little, never allowed to live the normal life of the farmers, the hunters and the gatherers and strictly prohibited to be courted in any way, shape or form, never allowed to love or run around with other children, feared and respected, prisioner in the walls of the temple she lived in while also never given the full context of her 'Mission', that she was to guard the Piece with her life and eventually train her replacement when she grew too old for it. She explained how the Piece apparently bonded with her soul and aided her when she was in real trouble and she felt her life on the line, also helped her see things beyond mortal eyes (The Monsuno Sight and The Dreaming) she also felt how, the stronger her bond grew, the more she felt someone watching her, someone stalking her dreams and visions but her concerns went to deaf ears.
'They are neither Men or Monsuno, their skin is as pale as milk and their eyes dark and hard like gemstones; They talk, walk and dress like men but they aren't alive, They don't breathe, eat or sleep, they don't bleed nor grow old, but they hunger'
'They feed on the blood of Monsuno, on the souls of those connected to the Beasts and The Dreaming, they are insatiable, they are cruel, their hunger is a bottomless pit of greed and violence, They...'
Eventually they are found by the others along with their Monsunos, The Huntress is terrified of Boost and Nightstone and gets on defence mode, convinced she's gonna get torn to shreds by them but Beyal manages to calm her down enough to convince her to touch Nightstone's snout and get the idea home that they don't want to harm her and everyone sits down to keep talking and figure out what the hell happened to Jinja.
They immediately reach the conclusion that Jinja got swapped via time travel and begin to panic.
-''You mean Princess got sent to Caveman Land!?''.
But Beyal shuts that idea down, saying that he can sense the soul is exactly the same and quotes the riddle written on the monolith at the museum, deducing that the Jinja they are seeing right now is actually a memory and not another person swapped in her place.
(No time travel here, idk how the hell to write it and I think the soul projection is more canon compliant)
The Huntress is actually Jinja's past life brought to the present day, triggered by coming into contact with the Pentoculus piece, but why?
Hearing this, something seems to click for the Huntress:
-''Does this mean... I died?''.
Beyal is at a loss as to how to sensibly answer this, and when he is about to try The Huntress suddenly grabs her head as if having a massive headache, she sees memories of two completely different times, two different people, Jinja and her, flash through her eyes at full speed, then opens her eyes and exclaims in perfect english:
'That's right! I remember now!''.
She then explains (Now in english) how one night, her village was invaded by a man with dead pale skin and haunting green eyes, he was looking for the Pentoculus piece and killed anyone that stood in his way with a mere touch, she tried to fight him but she got mortaly injured in the process, she remembered he talked about how he needed her soul to complete 'The Ritual' and how troublesome it was that the Piece favored her so much and rejected him.
In her last moments, she ran towards the main temple and, chanting ancient magic, she sealed the Piece on the monolith and 'Sent the Piece away', leaving a final warning in the shape of the riddle they were trying to solve earlier before...
''Then he grabbed me... And... Everything was so cold...''
The Huntress rests a hand on her neck with a haunted expression that shocks everyone into silence at the horrifying realization.
-''That was what I wanted, send one last message, warn someone, anyone, about the Monsters''.-She said gripping her spear.-''Now that you know this, Now that you have this piece, they will come after you too''.
-''I hope you succeed where I failed... Thank you, and Goodbye''.
She closes her eyes as a green light engulfs her, The Huntress gone and Jinja having recovered control of her body, much to everyone's shock and relief.
After everything is said and done, Jinja wistfully traces the patterns carved over the Spear and the Piece, feeling memories and emotions that aren't exactly hers and yet so familiar, mourning the lonely and tragic life The Huntress lived and how her memories are getting blurry, hesitating to give the Spear up bc she feels connected to it and 'Is tecnically hers anyway' Chase adds.
The quiet moment is interrupted by Bren showing her the Core Tablet saying.-''Yeah, about that... You're viral now, Miss Cavewoman''. And a video of her crazy stunts at the Museum and the street earlier that day, much to her horror.
-''WHAT!?!?''.
And that would be it, in canon The Hand is just fully dropped onscreen with no warning and they're literally just 'Hur hur, Evil Magic Scientists That Want To Dominate the World but are defeated by Plot Armor' and in my rewrite I wanted to make them an actual mystery hinted through the chapters until The Huntress situation that describes them as this sort of all powerful Vampire-Esque beings that predate humanity and Team Coretech is left very much spooked and with more questions than answers, kind of a 'Final Boss' villains with Droog as the last plot point to close, (Reincarnation and Past lives are Canon with Chase's past life as the chief of a Tribe being dropped in a flashback by Beyal and I wanted to actually incorporate that into the story), Also The Hand having a generational (Reincarnational?) beef with Team Coretech is such juicy drama X3 I've been inspired by Dandadan's style of plotscaling (Can I call it that?) where the story gets consistenly more crazy and the villains more dificult as the story advances while at the same time the main cast gets progressively stronger to defeat them. (I cannot recommend Dandadan enough, if you can excuse, ehem, the nudity, it's VERY good and will hit you in the gut when you least expect it)
Also been working on a proper powersystem regardind The Hand (Nothing too crazy tho, just an attempt to make Canon points make sense plus an explanation on how their powers and inmortality works plus their weaknesses) Bye!
#monsuno#fanfic concept#argentaviswrites#Might try to design The Huntress she's a tragic past life#Might also design Team Coretech's pasts lives while at it#We're just starting bby
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1. Your first OC ever?
It was a vampire in the Beyblade universe, her name was Tru Darling and I was 14, don’t judge me lol
2. Do you have a personal favourite among your OCs?
I have a personal soft spot for Eleanora ‘Nora’ Argent obviously. She’s the first fully fleshed out character I’ve created and I thought about her for a year before I started writing. I’m just super proud of her.
3. Have you ever adopted a character or gotten a character from someone else?
The same beyblade fic I had made friends with some folks on ff.net and basically added them as characters. By the time I was down there was like 20 OC’s in the story and it wasn’t finished. It was a mess lol.
4. A character you rarely talk about?
Mika Parker, she’s a poly-sterek fic I started to work on but she never got very far. I might still write her some day. She helps spark!Stiles control his magic and come to grips with his attraction to one Derek Hale
5. If you could make only one of your OCs popular/known, who would it be?
Ooooo it’s hard to pick, but I think I’d have to go with Nora. Just because I’m like 18 chapters in and I just really want to see people love my little broken bird.
6. Two OCs of yours that look alike despite not being related?
The only ones who aren’t related that look somewhat alike would be Gabriel and Valentina and only because they’re blonde and blue eyed. Not really anything other than that.
7. Are your OCs part of any story or stories?
Eleanora and Gabriel are part of The Moon Huntress (latest chapter here)
Frankie and Ben Connelly are part of Above All Else which is in the process of being written. (learn more about them here and here)
8. Do you RP as any of your OCs? If you do, introduce one of your RP OCs here!
I don’t RP sorry
9. Would you ever be willing to give any of your OCs to someone else?
I’m willing to allow crossovers or fan works but I would like to be asked first although those who’ve already made me stuff no they have full permission ;)
10. Introduce an OC with a complicated design?
All of them lol I love writing complicated characters what can I say?
11. Is there any OC of yours you could describe as a “sunshine”?
Not sure what’s meant here, but Frankie is all smiles and sweetness on the surface...
12. Name an OC that isn’t yours but who you like a lot
I can’t pick just one lol.... a few OC’s that I’ve read so far are and they’re all great. If I miss someone I’m sorry.... Ellie Connor, Piper Dean & Merikh Amor by @lady-baratheon Fred Ackerman by @susiesamurai Emery Duran, Diana Chang & Bianca Larson by @dubonet Maddie Hayes by @anarchxst Arianna Patrakis by @fraysquake and there’s so many more my brain is just not functioning right now.
13. Do you have any troublemaker OCs?
My biggest troublemaker would be Gabriel from TMH, he’s not even fully introduced into the fic as a real person and he’s causing all kinds of problems ;)
14. Introduce an OC with a tragic backstory
Eleanora Argent thought she was tough as nails, but being back in Beacon Hills hunting a rogue alpha werewolf throws her world for a loop. And the addition of Derek Hale in her life only helps to complicate things. Her family has a code, but what's her code?
15. Do you like to talk about your OCs with other people?
Like it? I love it! And I love hearing about others OCs as well. Anything you wanna know ask away and I’ll try my best to answer.
16. Which one of your OCs would be the best at biology (school subject)?
Probably Frankie, she’s super smart and not afraid to go after finding something out she doesn’t know about. Unfortunately she doesn’t have much time to study.
17. Any OC OTPs?
Obviously Eleanora x Derek for sure..... my OTP ride and die.
18. Any OC crackships?
A few Eleanora paired with @lydamartin‘s Oliver always has amazing things. And I have a feeling her with @dubonet‘s Will Martin would be interesting as well. And I also love her with @susiesamurai‘s Kevin ;)
I’ve always thought Gabriel and @papermoon262‘s Alex would be really interesting if they could survive each other lol.
Frank with @dubonet‘s Dylan Larson has been interesting lately as well. And Ben could be interesting with either @catgrant‘s Gwen Lodge or @lady-baratheon‘s Piper Dean
19. Introduce an OC that means a lot to you (and explain why)
20. Do any of your OCs sing? If they sing, care to share more details (headcanon voice, what kind of songs they like etc)?
The one that would probably sing would be Valentina and it’d be a soft sweet voice singing something in Russian
21. Your most artistic OC
Nora for sure, if she was in AU she’d be finishing art school and have a thriving career illustrating graphic novels or something similar. She draws allot to try to sort her mess of a head out.
22. Is there any OC of yours people tend to mischaracterize? If yes, how?
Nora again, I sometimes get the feeling people think of her allot like Kate but I hope that the more you read the more people realize they couldn’t be more different.
23. Introduce OC that has changed from your first idea concerning what the character would be like?
Frankie has changed allot but it has to do with development as she doesn’t have a story fully yet. Also watching the first episode of Riverdale changed some things in my head.
24. If you could meet one OC of yours, who would it be and why?
Probably Nora so I could give a hug she wouldn’t take ;)
25. The OC that resembles you the most (same hobby, height, shared like/dislike for something etc?)
There’s allot of myself in Nora, hard to write some of the traits without including myself or having personal experience but I feel each of my characters has a small part of me in them. Yes even Gabriel... :D
26. Have you ever had to change your OC’s design or something else about them against your will?
I changed Nora FC after joining tumblr and realizing that I wanted to learn to edit and it was just to hard to find good stuff to makes edits with her original FC.
27. Any OCs that were inspired by a certain song?
I’m one of those people who writes with my entire music library on shuffle so there’s probably some crossovers from my favourite songs but not inspired exactly no.
28. Your most dangerous OC?
Definitely Gabriel, there’s nothing more dangerous than a man with no morals, he’s the true definition of beast when it comes to werewolves.
29. Which one of your OCs would go investigate an abandoned house at night without telling anyone they’re going?
Pretty much all of them... they’re all pretty much lone birds if you know what I mean.
30. Which one of your OCs would most likely have a secret stuffed animal collection?
I wanna say Gabriel because it’s just too funny but probably more like Frankie, she wants to be mature but she’s just a small child inside.
31. Pick one OC of yours and explain what their tumblr blog would be like (what they reblog, layout, anything really)
Frankie’s would be lots of pink, sayings reblogged and lots of fashion and hipster blogs reblogged.
32. Which one of your OCs would be the most suitable horror game protagonist and why?
Nora.... girls got skills!!!!
33. Your shyest OC?
Probably Frankie, she’s shy to go after what she truly wants.
34. Do you have any twin characters?
No I don’t
35. Any sibling characters?
Well Eleanora is Allison Argent’s sister
Ben & Frankie are siblings.
36. Do you have OC pairs where the other part belongs to someone else (siblings, lovers, friends etc)?
Eleanora is paired with Derek Hale and Gabriel and is siblings with Allison Argent and daughter to Chris and Victoria, Niece to Kate, Granddaughter to Gerard and Friends with Stiles, Isaac, Erica and Boyd.
Gabriel is paired with Eleanora.
Valentina is paired with Oliver Queen.
Frankie is paired with Jughead Jones and becomes friends with the gang. Sister to Ben.
Ben is paired with Ms. Grundy and is friends with FP. Brother to Frankie.
Mika is paired with Stiles and Derek and Friends with Jackson.
37. Introduce an OC who is not quite human
Mika is a talented spark and emissary from England that is a member of the pack Jackson ends up in. She meets Stiles through Jackson and then Derek through Stiles. She’s a fun loving but no nonsense when it comes to magic kind of girl.
38. Which one of your OCs would be the best dancer?
Valentina is very good on her feet and could whisk you away ballroom style.
39. Introduce any character you want
Valentina has climbed the ranks of the Bratva for the past five years. All without a care about what Oliver Queen had been doing since their last meeting. The last time they spoke one of them was laying on the ground bloody and beaten and the other stared coldly down.
She had been 20 at the time and full of rage and a need for revenge. Now when Church is busy destroying Star City the Bratva bring in their best enforcer and assassin to take him down. Her mission is to strengthen their holdings in the city and it’s not long before she runs into it’s new Mayor.
Seeing her again brings up questions for Oliver and gives his new team more reasons to question his methods. But can he stop her from adding another name to her ever growing list of regrets? Or is she too well trained by the Bratva for even Oliver to stop her when she gets her target.
40. Any fond memories linked to your characters? Feel free to share!
The fact that Nora is basically the reason I’ve gotten to meet all you amazing people, love ya.
41. Has anyone drawn fanart of your OCs? If yes, maybe show a picture or two here (remember sources & permissions!)
No I haven’t had any drawn I’ve had many awesome other edits made for my characters and I love them all.
42. Which one of your OCs would be the most interested in Greek gods?
Probably Gabriel ;)
43. Do you have any certain type when you create your OCs? Do you tend to favour some certain traits or looks? It’s time to confess
I don’t think I do....
44. Something you like about your OCs in general
I love that they’re all fun to write for in different ways...
45. A character you no longer use?
That original OC lol.
46. Has anyone ever told you that you treat your OCs badly?
A few times teehee....
47. Has anyone ever (friendly) claimed any of your OCs as their child?
A few times teehee....
48. OC who is a perfect cinnamon roll, too good for this world, too pure
None of my characters are pure......
49. Which one of your OCs would most likely enjoy memes
Probably Frankie or maybe Gabriel in a weird way....
50. Give me the good ol’ OC talk here. Talk about anything you want
I just want to thank everyone who continues to support me and my OCs I love you all. Even if it’s just reading these and not comment or liking or anything I still love that you take that time. I just want everyone to love my children like I do :D
Wow this is a beast, sorry some of my answers aren’t longer...
@papermoon262
#heather answers#eleanora argent#gabriel#the moon huntress#ben connelly#frankie connelly#fic: above all else#Mika Parker#valentina sokolov#my OCs
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