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twitchesandstitches · 5 years ago

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Average Day for Hyper Muscle Polypa

commission for a slice of life story featuring the hyper amazonian and muscle gut Polypa from one of my most frequent comm-ers!

Features hyper muscle, mini-giantess aspects, and a vore scene later on.

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It took some time for the mutated troll woman, Polypa Gozee, to wake up all the way. She rolled and shifted around in her recuperacoon for a while, her impossibly muscular and oversized body straining the poor device’s ability to contain her. The questionably fleshy recuperacoon’s surface was strained particularly hard by one especially huge lump forcing out its front, and two significantly smaller (but still quite big) spheres on top of that. As she woke up, they shifted heavily, forced this way and that way as she slowly got to her feet inside the sopor slime. And then, she yawned heavily, so hard that the windows of her hive almost rattled. And then, there was a gurgling growl from her massive stomach that did make the windows shake almost out of their frames, and the sound knocked down a couple trolls who had been walking past the huge and overbuilt complex of her hive.

It was surprisingly large for an oliveblood, who never got the kind of resources for something like that. But when it came to questions about Polypa, her hive being too big was really the least of it.

And in any case, even her hive, engineered as it was to cope with her unique and empire-compliant mutations, couldn’t quite cope with the kind of power even her hungry rumblings could perform.

Consider a view through her hive, through its many winding hallways, its twisting corridors, the walls with handholds put into them near furniture at just the right angle for beings of a considerably smaller size to move up, and a general sense of scale. Walking into this home was a bit like being transported into a world where you were suddenly far smaller than you ought to be; everything suddenly looked massive.

It was also the home of a fangirl, it seemed. Finished assembly kits for many different series lined the shelves end to end, arranged into complicated dioramas telling their own self-contained stories. Models and miniatures, patiently handpainted with a few sloppy mis-strokes that indicated someone not well suited to precise movements, occupied display shelves.

And the scale of the rooms, and its furniture, were massive. Most trolls were giants compared to the unfortunate aliens they met, save perhaps for the mineral entities known only as the Gems, and the titanic shapeshifting robots known as the Autobots, whom had called an alliance together specifically to stonewall the Condesce so badly that in her frustration she had postponed her eternal conquest and allowed the adult trolls to return to Alternia, to repopulate and bide their time. And even so, the size of these rooms would make even the biggest troll brute feel like a lost infant wriggler. A chair alone, for instance, was more than ten feet across (by the measurements of humans, at least), and higher than most trolls were tall.

The walls were decorated in the colorful and bright shades of various animated series, some fairly obscure and some autographed in the careful, pictogram calligraphy of the written languages in the regions they had originated in. Most of these were of cute characters, with incredibly buxom, amazonian troll-women as the primary focus; given that the cultural expectation was for women to be more ruthless, cruel and ferocious than the smaller and frailer men, they also tended to be somewhat bloody and gory. Even the cutesy and lighthearted shows featured at least a few bloody heads on pointy sticks here and there. Fuchsia princesses predominated, their frilly dresses and armored attire suggesting a few popular trends from a troll genre broadly similar to the romantic and self-discovery of human shoujo series, but other posters, as well as a truly shocking breadth of collectable miniatures, models and dioramas constructed from those very collectibles, had the softer and more stylized looks of something like action-packed shonen series.

(Those were not quite the same terms as trolls themselves would have used, but in lieu of direct translations, those terms suffice to get the general vibe of those genres across.)

It bore some repeating that the collectibles weren’t just fairly diverse, but they were hand-painted, though not handcrafted. They’d clearly been bought from a store or assembled from kits, but they had been painted at home, with a lot of love, if not necessarily a lot of skill. They were something of a contrast to the bloody trophies kept in little glass desks throughout the home, like a predator’s way of saying ‘heck yeah, I killed THAT’.

They were unlabeled, preserved in jars and transparent boxes and even living jelly spheres that kept particularly brief things going, but they were clearly trophies from dead trolls. A broken horn there, its base scarred by some kind of horribly vicious digestive fluid that still tinted it olive-green. Several orange-red bones, preserved in fluid. More than one or two skulls, and there weren’t many of these larger trophies. There were necklaces and bracelets of teeth presumably taken from dead jaws, torn out and strung up, and it was always one tooth per kill. There were many necklaces, a bit bloody from their original owners, mostly in the colder shades.

There was another oddity of them; the hive was mainly made of a blend of the various living substances trolls built their homes out of, interlaced with a tough resin that was pretty similar to some plastics and provided al ot of structural strength, and the composite was a hardly material that would gradually heal most damage done to it. It was, after all, a living thing. However, this hive’s walls were coated in a glassy substance often used in fireproofing; it had a very high melting point, and saw a lot of industrial use. It protected the cases all her books, movies, animations and various collectibles were all set in, and the impression was that she was worried about fires. There were still a few scorch marks, here and there, in the shape of handprints and footprints.

Now, consider her bedroom.

It was a surprisingly small space. There were fewer collectibles and trophies compared to the rest of her home, and only a few photos. Most of those were on a small desk on the other side of the room from her recuperacoon, and generally showed her with the long-dead lusus who had raised her from wrigglerhood. There was one photo from before her adult molts, with her moirail Tegiri. The photo showed her towering over him even them, one buff arm looped around his neck, him with a stoic expression of long-suffering complacence, and the other photos of them largely followed this trend, even some of the more recent ones that had so much trouble fitting her into frame. Besides them were the ashes of her lusus, preserved in a jar. They were positioned in a way that the sleeper would immediately see them as soon as she woke up.

Most of the room was otherwise taken up by a monstrously huge recuperacoon; a gigantic cocoon, oozing a green ooze with sedative qualities to soothe the mindness rage and lust for blood inflicted upon trolls by mysterious entities in the distant past. It filled up the entire room, which was still a fairly large room despite being small by the hive’s general template standards, and was filled nearly to capacity by a very big, extremely feminine, and rather rigidly built body that had been tossing and turning for some time.

A pair of horns poked out the ground; using human measurements and scaling them up to troll size, they would perhaps have been about five feet long each and two feet wide, from a height of nearly 20 feet, bringing the height of the recuperacoon and its occupant at around 25 feet, by the measurements of trolls (which used different terminology, but was fairly close to the human Imperial measurements).

Both horns extended at an angle, branching into heavy hooks, and one had a large chunk broken out of it, still raw and green all these molts later. They rose up as Polypa groggily stood up to her full height in a slow and groggy way, her amazon figure looking like something being constructed out of the cocoon. It became clear, as the huge distensions at the front moved upwards, and the cocoon shrank inwards as more Polypa rose up, that it was almost all her. Massive shoulders rose out of the cocoon, each one at least a few feet around and looking even bigger from inhuman levels of muscular development; alien analogues to deltoids extending at least a foot away from her in ropey curls, the chitinous armor of her black skin adhering to her form as closely as latex.

The first impression of her was ‘no troll should be that big’. Her presence was a physical force, distorting attention around her like a lead weight shot of a cannon into a wall. The second impression was of sheer, unbelievable muscle mass, swelling out of her to such an extreme that it was hard to tell what was actually her main body, and what was muscle grown so huge and heavy that it had swelled out into a kind of meaty carapace.

Polypa kept rising upwards, and the two huge lumps surged out as a pair of gigantic rumble-spheres, or breasts by human nomenclature; if her belly had been slimmer, they would have dipped down all the way to her thighs, heavy and laden with some form of nectar. Certainly her nipples (or sap ducts, as trolls considered them) were enormously huge, puffy and ready to disgorge into a receptive mouth. Each rumble-sphere was wider than the entire circumference of her body by a foot or so, and would likely have projected out by eight feet, at the least.

They nonetheless looked small compared to her belly, which was the much larger lump beneath her boobs. It flopped out through the lip of the cocoon, which made it deflate and contract in relief around the rest of her admittedly still gargantuan body like a living film. Her stomach surged out and smacked heavily into the ground, denting the floor beneath it, and settled; all of Polypa’s body, nude as she was in the sopor, was absurdly muscular, her body mutated to increase her muscle development to the point that most of her apparent mass was…

Well. Very little of it was her actual body. She was a massive troll even for her size, but most of her bulk was just muscle mass grown straight from her body. Her head, dwarfed by her growth, poked out like someone piloting a mech made of muscles, and seemed startlingly small compared to her overall size.

This beefy carapace was bulkiest around a few specific areas, such as her arms and legs, but nowhere was more heavily muscled than her stomach. Round though it was, abdominal muscles completely encased it, so solidly defined they looked like carved markings on an anatomical engraving; latissimus dorsi like slabs lined the sides beneath her rumble-spheres, external oblique were a muscular rim jutting out over even her enormous hips, and her abdominals proper stuck out so much that they made her belly a surprisingly gravid globe.

That it was nearly as long as she was tall, and wider besides, gave such an awe-inspiring sense of mass. It gurgled faintly, mysterious chemical processes going on in that magnificent gut; it was the secret to her tremendous growth, it's perfect digestion breaking down all food and turning it into raw mass to fuel her increased size and muscle mass. Bones, trees, poisonous fungi, other trolls; if it was organic, Polypa could digest it and neutralize all poison, making them all nothing but fuel for her magnificent form.

It was quite sensitive, to boot; Polypa shivered as her nook and bulk (both swollen to extreme heaviness beneath her belly) rammed into its lower regions, and she grinded her hips into it as an automatic reflex, enjoying a particular abdominal crease she clenched around herself right there, and spent about five minutes ramming into herself, until the early morning lust resolved itself, and her head cleared.

Polypa stepped out of her cocoon, thighs nearly eight feet across and as hyper muscular as the rest of her moved out, her digitigrade legs flexing and the clawed toes powering her out of the cocoon. A short, slim tail bulging with more muscle slapped against a huge butt rather softer-looking than the rest of her body. Her mane of hair fluttered down, messy from the sopor and sliding against her butt too.

Sopor slime dripped off her face, off the scars. The burns were terrible, distorting almost all her face except for a small circle around one eye into a mass of off-green crags and pinched sections, the chitin there half-melted. Even her lips, massively puffy and swelling outwards, had uncomfortable streaks tinting them a faint green from those old injuries. The burns continued down her neck, at least until the swelling piles of her neck muscles swallowed them up.

The chitinous carapace of much of her body still bore some sign of those old burns, all the same. Down her back, a meandering trail across her arms, erratically spiraling around the base of her tail, and a few dappled spots on her thighs and finally the heavy tread of her feet, and even that was still scarred by old fire.

And as she walked out, her body shimmered, psionic energies in her eyes, and heat pulsed out from her hard enough to nearly evaporate the slime off her body on the spot.

With a grumble, Polypa sloughed off, dripping sopor slime off her nude body all the way to the showers, her digitigrade paws scraping her short claws against the ground, and her tail dragging behind to make little trails in that slime behind her.

The shower woke her up a little bit, though it wasn’t easy. Polypa didn’t do well in confined spaces, and even if her shower had been built for over a couple dozen trolls (if they didn’t mind getting unnecessarily intimate), she filled it pretty much to capacity. Her stomach did, mostly, which was the main issue. She kept bumping into things as the water washed the slime off her, and she hissed with suppressed pleasure as her stomach ground sensually into the hydration spigots. There was so much to… entice her. Polypa’s butt ground against the wall, her rumble-spheres were pushed into the ceiling, she had to wedge her face into those rumble-spheres just to avoid headbutting her own ceiling.

And then. Her soft and sensitive muscles pressing into each other with an overpowering friction with every other movement so that this tight space was a sweet kind of hell. And her rumble-spheres, packed tight and full as they were, kept getting pressed against each other, and her face, and the walls, and her own massive arms, and kept gushing out sparkling and frothy streams of green nectar right all over her front like a hose going off, so much that she almost screamed.

A lot of green fluids wound up washing down the drain when she was done. It wasn’t just her nectar either.

Polypa finished her shower, with some embarrassed difficulty, but figured it was best to get that sort of thing out of the way so the need as fierce as her hunger or various other cravings didn’t overwhelm her during her morning run.

A small towel hung by the shower, far too small to dry her off. And the reason why became clear, in this bathroom with the walls so very heavily reinforced by fire-preventing slabs. Heat pulsed from Polypa, and she felt her muscles swell up a bit as she tapped into just a small store of the psionic powers unlocked by her mutations. It was enough for her rather singular talent.

There was probably a technical term for it. In plain terms, she burst into flames.

Heat swirled around her as she glowed, her scars shining even brighter so that their ragged dips and swirls looked like mystical runes, and then she ignited completely, flames exploding from her. It whirled around her like an aura, blasting into every inch of the room with so much force that it was like an explosion going off. The room was reinforced to deal with it, and there was no damage caused.

After a few moments of this, Polypa shut it off. The flames that her body was continously creating and converting raw psionic energy into fire simply went out. She was left still smoking, an exhiliaration and rush still pulsing in her, and there was a faint steam from all the water being evaporated right off of her.

Polypa thought to get dressed, but the pressure in her rumble-spheres demanded otherwise.

She left her bathroom and went to a storage cabinet in one of her hallways. With a stoic expression, she hauled out a milker and slapped its cups to her engorged nipples, her rumble-spheres still totally full, and powered it on as she did her stretches: she bent low, tensing her back and adjusting her back shell and twisting her muscles in various directions, as the milker went to work. She panted in relief and pleasure, both from the feeling of her muscles working, and the sweet delight of being milked.

She twisted her arms up, one after another, and they were massive, broader across than the average troll’s entire body, her biceps nearly eight feet across each, bigger even than her torso. Her rumble-spheres bounced atop her gut, rivers of green flowing down the tubes, and she very carefully maneuvered her arms so she didn’t get lost in the moment and popped something loose; the mess would get everywhere. ...Again.

Then her hips; enormously wide even on her titanic body, swayed back and forth as she limbered up. This went on for about five minutes, and her industrial-grade milker sucked her nectar with commendable ferocity, its contents ejected in several tanks large enough to feed a dozen trolls each for a day. A large milking lusus might be expected to fill one or two a month; Polypa went through a dozen in just those five minutes alone. She kept doing more stretches, and ten minutes passed as she warmed up her body with a variety of movements to wake herself up as much as possible, until a faint burn suggested she was done.

Her belly rumbled, and a faint but demanded emptiness inside her beckoned. Polypa glanced at the many nectar tanks, and reached for the closest one.

The first to slake her hunger, but far from the last. A body like hers demanded a lot of food.

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A while later, her belly was stuffed with her own nectar and happily gurgling it away,, and Polypa set off at her morning run, to the expectant delight of the neighborhood.

Her belly was a bit more distended, sloshing audibly with each heavy slap against her bulbous thighs, a slight swelling in the lower regions suggesting various splinter-stomachs had been filled up and were happily digesting her breakfast. Polypa struggled to maintain her sense of decorum, frowning faintly. ‘Can’t believe I went through almost the entire morning stack’, she thought grimly, only a few of the tanks she’d produced tucked under one arm, ready to be sold.

She’d changed, too, after her milking; a sports bra did an admirable job of at least supporting her massive rumble-spheres even if it couldn’t do much to conceal the puffy juts of her nectar-ducts, and a pair of micro exercise shorts showed off her spectacular leg muscles to all their extreme spectacle. Bandages wound around her face, soaked in a sopor derivative to minimize pain to her scars, leaving only one olive-green eye to indicate her feelings. Her big lips did press against her bandages, but she rather liked the impression of that.

More bandages covered pretty much most of her limbs. It was a bit time-consuming to put them all on, but she felt much more comfortable when she had them worn. The sopor treatment kept her scars from hurting or feeling too sensitive, and it also helped her control any periodic outbursts of psionic flames if she got too worked up or surprised. The bandages wound around her arms and fists completely, thin enough to show off her build, and were a bit more sporadic around her legs. They only needed a few loops at the base of her tail, which was just as well; it was hard enough getting that covered.

The bandages had to be changed daily, and more than once Polypa considered moving in with her moirail, Tegiri. He would be happy to help her keep her bandages changed, and she did need to change them every day. It was a lovely thought, imagining him living with her and patiently working the sopor into her scars, or to cuddle him and kiss him, platonically, between his horns, a gesture so pale it almost made her blood-pusher twist in longing.

She wasn’t quite sure if she was ready for that, though.

And her flaming psionics, she thought grimly as she walked, was something to be careful about. Tegiri knew, yes, but even during her occasional expeditions into arson Polypa didn’t like anyone seeing her. Not even her enemies as she slew them. Mutations were treated leniently if you could be useful to the Empire; even something as dramatic as Polypa’s transformation was fine, as long as she could fight for her empress. Olives with psionics were rare, but not too unusual, and her muscles being produced by an excess of psionic energy made an okay explanation, but still: Polypa didn’t want to take any risks. Not to herself, not to Tegiri, not to any of her friends.

Eventually, these serious thoughts winded down, and she got to the serious work of just jogging and getting herself warmed up for the day.

As she ran, her hair swayed with the movements of her monstrously wide hips, gathered into a loose ponytail, the loose bits of mane lengths making a dramatic display against her slabbed back.

Her mouth still cold with the taste of her own delicious nectar, Polypa picked up her speed a bit, her early morning grumpiness fading into a calmer alertness. She didn’t have much to do today; she’d probably have what she euphemistically called ‘commissions’ be brought her way (and that would be another breakfast sorted out, if it happened soon), and certainly she’d meet up with Tegiri in a few hours to do some friendly shopping. There was a particular show she’d recently gotten into and she wanted more merchandise for it, though she was pretty sure Tegiri had mixed feelings on it.

He hadn’t said anything negative about it, though. He normally never held his tongue, and that was a great show of respect. She felt a bit happier thinking about that; it was good to know there were people on your team, however it was expressed.

Polypa completed a couple laps around the neighborhood block she lived, and attracted a small group of muscle enthusiasts, troll boys automatically lured to the biggest and most imposing girl around, and a few who just really wanted to try to be the ones to beat her. They might have been trying to play it cool, but their tails were whipping excitedly, smacking into each other like a little soundtrack playing for Polypa.

She did her best to mind her own business and not bother them, but she just knew they’d be fixed on her. She felt their attention refocus at every wobbling gyration of her swelling backside as her thighs beat it up and down, at the gravid thundering of her gut smacking up and down with her stride-strokes, and a great surge of pride flowed through her at this. Not so long ago, she had been a slimmer troll, and it had been hard to get noticed at all.

Now everyone noticed her. It was gratifying, to say the least.

She kept these thoughts to herself. She always did her best not to say anything to anyone at these times (unknowingly giving herself a reputation for being distant and imposing). She did love the blushes, the looks of shamed infatuation they sent towards her immense bulk and power, but she just had no idea what to do with herself then. She had little experience with it; before moving to this more upscale area, Polypa’s neighbors had generally shied away from a monster like her as a matter of common sense.

Here? People would run right up to you and dare you to snarl back, just as a challenge. Polypa was a direct troll, but she needed a bit of a run to do challenging right back; she usually approached it from the side. She always had a bit of a tense moment whenever someone approached her.

Fortunately, today she didn’t really have to do that. It was a tealblood woman, a stout and busty girl in the uniform of a legislacerator trainee outfit, that ran in a game attempt to keep up with her longer stride. Polypa didn’t know her name, just that she was a reasonably friendly neighbor. “Morning, Miss Goezee,” the competitor said politely, from somewhere around Polypa’s knee at a comfortable distance.

“Sup,” Polypa said shortly.

She noticed her early morning companion glanced up at her, and Polypa was smugly gratified to see a faint tremor in her blinking eyes. A nervous sort of look, even after her living her for half a sweep. Her eyes couldn’t keep from studying the rigid swells of Polypa’s monstrous biceps; the spiky protrusions along her chitin, and the way her chitin slotted so perfectly against the growth of her muscles. The extreme swell of her thigh muscles, her legs swinging out and then slamming back together in a shockwave that sent her belly jiggling right up and down.

Polypa put a little extra swing into it, just for an impish thrill. She had an uncanny control over her muscles, able to flex them in ways impossible for normal trolls, and she flexed at her butt at just the right time to make it wobble in every direction at once, a careful set of clinches threatening to make her sweatpants tear in very sexy ways. Her thighs swelled and contracted, muscles sliding against each other with an audible noise, veins standing out like swollen tubes against her bandages and clothing. Her tail lashed out, accidentally smacking against the tealblood’s shoulder, and then into Polypa’s enormously round bubble butt.

This went on for some time, as they ran a couple laps around the neighborhood, a sweet burn filling Polypa’s muscles with a relieving sense of exercise, the wear and tear making a strange euphoria for her. Polypa’s teasing escalating a bit, to the point that she was briefly blinded by her rumble-spheres slapping up right in front of her eye, blocking her vision, but she still had a sense of her surroundings, and she smirked smugly when the tealblood’s composure slipped, just for a moment. Polypa heard a faint panting noise from her, a sound of longing, desire, and quite a lot of envy.

“Something wrong?” Polypa said, her tone flat and calm enough that she sounded perfectly serious.

The tealblood flinched. Her tail, long and slightly broad like some kind of reptilian monster that snapped at things in rivers a lot, shook a lot with a cute wiggle at the tip. “Absolutely not, Miss Goezee! I was just…” She paused for a brief moment, just enough to sound genuine while also giving her time to come up with an excuse. “Thinking. Yes, indeed.”

Polypa chuckled, in a way conveying that she absolutely did not buy it at all. The tealblood had the dignity to at least scoff and turn her gaze pointedly aside. And, for a while, they and the small crowd of admirers and the curious that Polypa tended to accumulate like an elder god attracted worshipers carried on in silence. Companionable, between Polypa and her neighbor. Tense and adoring and lustful, from the crowd of trolls from across the hemospectrum, their shining eyes fixed on a juggling butt big enough for them to sleep on, on the undulating wobbles of a belly they could all have been sucked down into, the hypnotic wiggling of her muscle-swollen tail, and the slightest shift of her ponytail across shoulders broader than any of them were tall.

Being around them made Polypa feel bigger; it made her feel good. She wondered, sometimes, if the Condesce or her Heiresses ever felt like this, and she supposed that they were so confident and on top of the world that their baseline mood was somewhere past the soaring feeling she got when she really worked out just how much people adored her, sometimes.

Perhaps to change the subject, one of the runners spoke up, his chunky tail curled like a bit of punctuation with a tuft of fluff at the tip. He sped up just to keep pace with Polypa for a brief time; getting too close was an extremely bad idea, as with the one troll who had accidentally been hip-checked by her and had sort of… splattered. “How’d do you get your belly to stay stable like that?” He asked, apparently honestly curious.

Polypa glanced down at him, and he froze up so much he almost tripped in the resulting leg confusion. Fortunately for his dignity, he managed to keep moving. “Whaddaya mean?”

“Your stomach should be hitting the floor. It’s, big. Really, really big. How do you keep it up like this?”

“I got real good muscle control, and VERY strong belly muscles.” Polypa raised her arms up over her back, and just for a moment, relaxed. The muscles lining the side of her belly went limp, and her stomach sank against her approaching leg, kicked back into the air. Polypa winced at the sensation overload, and the heat in her hips, but she mastered it and devoted a tiny bit of concentration to her belly muscles again. They stiffened, encircling her gut like a built-in girdle or harness, and pulled up, raising her stomach to a marginally more practical level.

He goggled. “How do you even keep concentrating enough for that!?”

“It’s a gift.” She wiggled one huge claw scoldingly. “Pretty sure it's rude to ask too much about hemospectrum-compliant mutations, kiddo!” He swallowed, taking the point, and slowed down until he was again part of the crowd.

Polypa secretly crowed to herself as she passed the rest of her morning run in relative silence, the milk jugs nestled into her biceps already processed to food-quality levels by the sheer force of her body’s impact on them; she needed very sturdy containers just to survive it, and avoid additional leakings. But she loved those kinds of questions. Seeing those tiny faces off the ground, staring up at her in envy, in awe, in open admiration of her and the smallest details of her body…

She loved it. She got questions like that every day, and she had gotten good at pretending to be the confident and cool badass she assumed people expected someone as big and strong as her to be. She privately made a note to study some shows later, to really look for hints on being as cool and inspiring as possible. She was pretty sure she’d missed on the empathetic and distant vibe that she was trying really hard to project.

One by one, people peeled away, still giving her longing looks. Polypa felt a vague sense of loss, as if not having worshipful eyes on a particular part of her body at once was a physical pain to her.

Ah, well. She continued onwards, leaving her neighbor and the others behind to their own business.

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Her own business came up as she fitted herself, with some difficulty, into a warehouse used by an acquaintance who sold slightly illicit and moderately discouraged merchandise. She felt her palmhusk, as trolls called their equivalents to cellphones, vibrating in a concealed pocket against her vast hip, and her tail looped in to fetch it out as she dropped the milk jugs onto a counter. With a sense of irony, she peered down at a yellowblood, who put some effort to look spooky, from between her other milk jugs (to turn a phrase) and said, “The regular stuff, on demand.”

The yellowblood whistled, tapping the jug. It gave the faint echo of a container full of liquid, and he popped it open to dip a cup in. He took a swig and visibly wavered back, his tail slapping against the ground to keep him upright. “Geez, that’s almost as strong as a dose of the mind honey! Without the side effects, too.” He wiped off a smear of green nectar from his mouth and sealed the jug up again. “The stuff you bring in keeps getting thicker and stronger; I’m making a killing off it! Where the hell are you getting this stuff?”

Polypa, as far as she knew the only troll who had mutated to produce nectar in these amounts, shrugged. “Hey, don’t make me give up trade secrets, buddy.” Her palmhusk continued buzzing insistently.

“Fair enough.” He turned around and got to a load-bearer, his own mild psionics levitating the jug to it.

Polypa turned around, discreetly. The other troll’s back was turned, and she never could be too careful, given her real line of work. Her palmhusk wasn’t holding a call, just a text message. Her expression didn’t change as she saw the plain message there.

It didn’t have a return name; she made a point to avoid specific names, even from repeat commissioners. She didn’t want to get embroiled in political conflicts or highblood power struggles, or even underground revolutions she hadn’t made a choice to side with. She did what she had to, as everyone did. Nevertheless, she was pretty sure she knew this one; as usual, it was signed off with a strange sign that looked a bit like a pair of shackles, or crab’s claws.

The message, unsigned, read: ‘cerulean target. Is in your vicinity. Has unfavorable proclivities, if that mmmmatters mmmmuch for your commmmfort.’ this was followed up by a photo of a tall troll woman; her skin the deep black of a grown troll, her armor polished and chipped away as if to imply she had no need of natural protection; her claws long and thick, her fangs almost like a rainbow drinkers, and her huge belly and massive rumble-spheres so enormously swollen even in her clothes that Polypa was stunned. That was a lot of troll.

Her appetites had shifted over the years, and her belly rumbled at the sight of her… well, prey.

Polypa checked her appointment schedules, and studied the time. She calculated the odds of resolving this in, say, twenty minutes or so.

Okay, she decided. She might cut it kind of close, but she could pull it off.

She banged a hand on the counter, almost cracking it into pieces. “Gotta head off, man. See you with my next batch tomorrow!” She paused. “Um. Someone else busted up your counter!”

“No they didn’t!” he scolded her from deeper in the warehouse as she hurried away.

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As a rule, Polypa didn’t much like going into rich areas, even if she was big and imposing enough to pass as any shade of highblood she cared to attempt. She didn’t care much about the hemospectrum as some did, but the idea of pretending to be a colder shade just gave her the screaming willies.

For such a massive troll, Polypa moved through it in complete silence. She didn’t move in the open, either, but she climbed up sheer walls, above the oblivious highbloods and driving her claws on both hands and feet right into the plasticine exteriors, and hauling herself up. The weight of her belly pressed against the walls, and wiggling her legs underneath her stomach, provided so much leverage that she was effectively catapulting herself upwards. It was a bit of a mystery how she was able to still be silent, doing that.

Her biggest advantage, as far as potential onlookers were concerned, is that trolls didn’t often look up.

She slid against the wall, moving so smoothly and quickly she seemed to be sliding straight up it. Her inability to see over her gigantic rumble-spheres or in front of her at all from her belly, it did not hamper her very much. Polypa’s muscles weren’t just impossibly strong, flexible, or in some way fusing with her body fat, but a unique property of their outer surfaces functioned as an all purpose sensory organ. Her twitching, veiny and swollen muscles could ‘see’ as well as anything else, and given that even the compact muscles stuck out a full foot away from her body, she had a 360-degree view of everything around her, to the smallest detail.

So up she went, hopping from one wall to the next, leaving behind surprisingly little damage. These buildings were made from very high quality breeding lines of bio-structure, and they’d eventually heal the damage. Not quickly, but they would repair themselves. Holes in the wall from her claws that would heal eventually, and deeper dents where her belly had moved up there, impressions of her abs.

Polypa climbed up to the ceilings, and quietly made her way to the next rooftop, and all the while, her muscles kept twitching. Her unique vision showed her an elaborate neighborhood of sprawling buildings and expansive complexes, most of them shining with gilt and complicated murals that advertised how fabulously rich they were.

Polypa turned her attention from the most opulent buildings to the ones that were still richer than anything she’d normally have gotten in her entire life, the ones that had a little less gold or imported coral hauled right from the seas where the Condesce supposedly had arisen like a particularly bloody-handed goddess out of ancient fables. Highbloods, as a rule, had the money to afford decorations like that as a matter of course, but the warmer their shades, the less extreme it got.

She flowed across what were probably proper blueblood homes, the wings of the mansions providing plenty of space to move skyward and get a better view for her target. She turned herself slowly, biceps swelling and pivoted in such a way that was probably a little similar to a telescope aligning itself for the best possible vision. The armored sections shone like polished latex, and she moved carefully towards manors that were less gilt-studded, but far more rich than teal homes like what Tegiri lived in.

The homes of cerulean trolls. Tradition and population distribution usually saw them living near the sea, perhaps an echo of their traditional role as naval powers, but that wasn’t really an option for the few ceruleans in subgrubs like this. That said, they tended to look a fair bit like boats that had been flipped around, and Polypa found what she was looking for sitting around all seductively near a energy-burst shop designed to look like a swashbucklers arena, and considering the many flags around it, it made it quite useful for Polypa to gently swing her way across the rooftops to it, and then down.

The troll matched the photos. She was tall, perhaps nearly up to Polypa’s mid-thigh, her horns dramatically hooked at various angles; even the gashes in her horns looked hook-shaped. Her stance was haughty, her high ankles and foot-claws secured in spiked high heels that made her look even taller than she already was. Every bit as buxom and stout as her photo had suggested; the tight skirt and half-dress she wore clung to her body like a wrapper, and the whole image would have been nicely set off by long hair, rather than the short and prim bun she actually did have her quills pulled into.

Between the fishnets, her glasses, and the general air of cold disdain she projected, Polypa felt that she was giving an impression somewhere between ‘high class dominatrix’ and ‘librarian you do NOT want to cross’. Polypa withheld other judgments; she was a mercenary, not someone who made judgments. Still, she was getting very good at giving a feel off people, and she did not like the feeling she got off this troll.

And no one came her way if they didn’t deserve to be killed, in some way. Her callsign for this business was ‘Goezee’s Lightbulbs; I Make The Universe Brighter’. Nothing made things brighter like getting rid of people who made it worse.

Polypa waited, and mulled over a few plans to draw her out, and they all fizzled up as her target got up and swaggered towards the side of the building, out of sight of the main street on some errand, and most importantly from a tactical perspective, right below Polypa.

Her target didn’t look up, either, and it was a grave mistake for her.

Briefly praising the good luck of this morning, Polypa swung her gut off the gargoyle she had positioned it on, and the bit of statuary broke off in surrender to the inexorable pressure of Polypa’s body; it plummeted down, banging against the ground right next to the cerulean; she paused, her haughtiness freezing and her swinging stride halt. “What?” She said, looking for the noise. And above her, as the gargoyle piece had fallen, Polypa had taken advantage of it and crawled down the side of the building just like she had crawled up other walls early, her eyes glowing a faint green.

No one looking in from the street could see them, despite Polypa’s immense size. All the better.

The target picked up the gargoyle piece. “Who is littering around here?” She wondered aloud, not noticing a massive shadow falling over her until Polypa landed on her, belly first.

The noise was surprisingly soft, because Polypa held her gut back as much as possible, so it wouldn’t hit with all its force, but it was still enough to break nearly every bone in her target’s body, and the volume of it muffled her pained screams. Polypa didn’t say anything to her: not ‘shush’ or ‘be quiet’, or anything like that; she took it as a matter of professional dignity not to open up a dialogue with her targets. She had standards, after all.

Polypa’s belly wriggled, and the abs writhed, and clenched in ways that grabbed at her target’s body, slowly hauling her up with a few solitary whimpers. They kept her pinned firmly into Polypa’s belly, so that she couldn’t yell for help or otherwise alert anyone, and Polypa hissed at the marvelous bulge-pumping shiver of the curvy body being slid against her stomach, her muscles twitching and giving under her, molding to her and little fibrous bunches clutching her as tight as firm hands, and the yielding of her target’s own body. Her waist was wide against her, her rumble-spheres squished so nicely into her.

‘Focus’, she told herself as she did her best not to pant or anything. Stay on track. Do not get all… ravenous.

Her target was forced up into her rumble-spheres, and by now Polypa was able to grab her with her hands, forcing her upwards, making sure to squeeze her hard enough that she couldn’t breath enough to yell. And now Polypa was tugging her bandages off, just enough to reveal her mouth.

Her target’s face briefly curled into disgust at her scars, and Polypa was gratified to see her face sour into a horrified look as Polypa’s mouth widened. “No! You don’t dare-!”

Polypa’s massive lips met against her face, sucking on her so hard the breath was forced out of her air-sacs, and then her face slid right into her mouth, resting on her tongue. Several tickling feelings went on in Polypa’s jaws as several biological locks opened themselves; sinews and chitinous ‘pins’ kept her lower jaw together. A troll’s lower jaw was actually a pair of mandibles, normally locked together. But they could separate, to swallow particularly big meals.

Such as this cerulean, for instance.

Polypa’s lower jaw split, gaping wide and spreading wider than her face, her mandibles spreading out into her rumble-spheres, and a thick, green membrane connected them. The cerulean’s face was mashed into this, outlined against its surface, her rumble-spheres and shoulders mashing into the rubbery ring that was Polypa’s lips; without any real effort, Polypa pushed her in, her head, her rumble-spheres and her shoulders all easily sliding down her throat.

Polypa swallowed. Her throat muscles were as strong as the rest of her; more bones broke, and she felt her prey squirm in pained reflex as her chitin was pulverized nearly off her body, shards and fragments sliding down her moist insides. The lovely sensation of a solid, moving mass sliding down her mouth, moving down her meat-slide. Her prey’s thick body, her big belly, her huge butt; none of it posed a hindrance. It all slid down with a delicious ease, down into her guts.

The plural mattered. Polypa’s on-going mutation had multiplied her stomachs into a complex network to digest her food, treating them to a chemical process perhaps more similar to industrial refinement until they were a raw biological soup, or perhaps an organic grist, that her body simply absorbed and converted into energy and more muscles.

Her digestive fluids gushed in, drenching the cerulean still doing her best to wriggle inside Polypa; she said something, but Polypa’s belly was several feet thick, her abs even bulkier, and any sound was muffled. Polypa simply enjoyed the sensation, for a while, and lay there.

The first stage was simple enough; her pre-treatment fluids gushed in, drenching her prey and invading her body through her mouth, absorbed through her skin, plumping her up and softening her skin, bones and muscles.

Fifteen minutes passed in this manner. Polypa suspected she was pushing her luck, in her meeting with Tegiri and hanging around this neighborhood without getting noticed, and shakily stood up. It was harder to get up now, with an additional weight inside her, but it felt very good, her sliding around inside her-

Oh, she just slid down, into a secondary stomach. She must have been primed and, well. Juiced; Polypa suspected that anyone in that situation probably looked considerably puffier and slimy. She was still wriggling in there, though not very much.

As Polypa hurried out of the cold neighborhood, other fluids pumped into that belly, efficiently absorbed by the treated flesh of her target, who was pinned down, compressed by the stomach walls pressing down on her like a trash compactor. Polypa felt her wriggling slow down, and something in the texture of the troll in her guts shift. It wasn’t much of a change. It took days for her live prey to fully digest, and they were zoned out of their minds for most of it, and there wasn’t any particular change at this point, but Polypa supposed this stage of the digestion process started doing something to their body. Made it a bit more fluid, perhaps.

As Polypa went on her way, hurrying along and enjoying the bubbling sensations going on inside her, the cerulean calmed down completely. She felt a few solitary wriggles, possibly out of habit. Her belly muscles kept her pinned, but only because that was her default flex; the chemicals injected into her must have had a sedative quality, perhaps not too different from the sopor, because all her live prey went very quiet and peaceful extremely quickly.

Polypa called a buggy, and put her target out of her mind, apart from a few pleasured shivers at the way she slid down into another belly to be pumped full of digestive fluids on the gradual route into being reforged into bulk for Polypa’s muscles, thicker nectar glands, a bigger butt, perhaps a few more inches to her height, and incidentally making the universe better for her absence.

Alternian society did not have much of a problem with this sort of thing; Polypa upsetting the hemospectrum would have been the issue, and she didn’t much care anymore.

As her buggy arrived, Polypa mused that as so much of her bulk had come from assassinations she had carried out like this, her body was a testament to the number of people she’d removed from the world. She flexed a little bit, and catching a sight of her magnificent biceps, and a glimpse of the gigantic abs rising up even over her cleavage horizon, it was a warming thought.

Polypa sent a quick message to her commissioner. ‘Job’s done * will update you further in a few days.’

She received a fairly prompt reply, so ambiguously worded that they could have been talking about artwork or a coding commission. ‘That was speedy. Will update you for any further jobs. You how it is; always a little mmmmore to do.”

Polypa texted back. “Sure thing * always good to do your work * you’re reliable at these, you know that? *|’

Before she left, Polypa bent low, picking up the gargoyle statuary she had destroyed, and deposited it in the nearest salvaging bin. She might have been an assassin, but she wasn’t a litterer.

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Tegiri was a quiet troll, and had a way of fading away even when he was the only guy in the room. In a crowd, he became a background detail, lurking there, and drifting like a shadow.

Here and now, his shift from passively lurking to moving so abruptly he appeared to have materialized, was marked by an especially large buggy not so much rolling up, as sliding in, a bit like a cholera-bear that was opting to move without actually engaging it’s legs at all.

It rose up as its passenger departed. The long, heavy horns of Polypa appeared over the other side, and then rose up as she stood to her full size, stretching. People around froze up and turned to look at her bulbous form with awe, their eyes fixed on the shift of her platform-sized shoulders, and those closer to her were totally still, their eyes wide, completely overwhelmed by the sheer scale of Polypa unexpectedly appearing before them.

‘Weak’, Tegiri thought unsympathetically. If you couldn’t handle a little bit of majesty in your life, how were you supposed to serve the Condesce?

His secret shame was that he sincerely believed, in the rare moments where he could admit it to himself, was that he thought that Polypa looked far more impressive and mighty than the to-scale images and models he had seen of the Condesce.

A great heresy, to be sure, but he didn’t care about that anymore. It bothered him that he didn’t care, but as the days went on, it didn’t bother him as much.+

Polypa bowed again out of sight behind the buggy, to discuss something with the driver. At least, if you didn’t count her belly sticking out and rising above it, with her rumble-spheres buoyed atop it, and her backside very plainly visible from the other end, her tail curling around one leg and the tip wiggling anxiously. Tegiri couldn’t hear the fine details of what Polypa might have been saying, not over the soft murmurs from the crowd around both his side of the street and hers, but he had his suspicions; the buggy WAS a lot lower in the street, and any vehicle trying to carry her tremendous weight was bound to sacrifice itself in that noble goal.

The buggy tipped over briefly; Tegiri supposed that Polypa had thrust one muscular arm in it, with such force that the air moving from her hand alone had nearly knocked it over; if he knew Polypa, it was to over-pay the driver in apology for any damage transporting her had incurred. He made a point to suggest to the local consort-governance, running the city on behalf of the Heiress, to make a budget specifically for repairing damage caused by especially big trolls like her.

Then, she was moving across the street. Slowly, yes, actively trying not to put so much force as she could into it, but she still moved so fast that she seemed to have bounded straight from one side of the street to the next. He didn’t blinked, but it felt like he had, because now a vast shadow loomed over him, and it was Polypa, her body blotting out the moonlight, her squishy chitin shining an iridescent pink and green He mostly just saw her stomach, her great work and the pride of her carefully sculpted body, and he felt a great surge of diamond-pale affection as she patted her belly, smiling faintly down at him. Long ago, their most ancient ancestors had gathered, and the small weak ones had gathered to the big, strong troll-women to protect them, and he supposed he felt something of that.

The oldest forms of the quadrants had been built from strong things. Love, certainly. Affection, reassurance. The need to stabilize others. Safe venues to voice the aggression and test oneself against a worthy lover. And for Tegiri, one of the strongest feelings was loyalty.

He saw a hand move from inside her stomach. Briefly, barely budging against a broad abdominal, and no one else could have seen it but him, his eyes adapted to note anything that might be wrong with Polypa.

Polypa’s express changed, just for a moment, and Tegiri knew what that had been. He knew the fear of disapproval.

Tegiri gazed up at Polypa, and followed up on a decision he had already made some time ago. He patted her stomach, almost stroking her belly, at the spot where her prey had moved. “You’ve been doing art commissions already?” He asked. “This early in the morning?”

Polypa stared blankly, until her one revealed eye blinked. Oh, right; the code they’d agreed to. “Yeah; figured I might as well do it as early as possible… thought I’d get it done before meeting up with you. I wasn’t trying to delay meeting up with you, or anything!”

“IT’s fine, it’s fine!” Tegiri said quickly. Polypa instantly calmed down, her raising chitinous plates lowering into something less agitated. “I just wondered… you didn’t have to use, ah.” He thought of a way to phrase it without giving her away. “Colder shades in your work, did you? That can be troublesome.”

She worked out what she meant, and like a mountain inclining, nodded her head gravely. “Yeah. You know i usually do.”

Yeah, I killed a highblood today. Again.

It was a bold thing, he knew, to just say that to a tealblood, one charged with enforcing the law, with killing mutants and accusing those they felt like bringing low. In sweeps not so long ago, when he had been younger, he would have enforced his imperial duty, without a second thought.

Now, though…

He patted her stomach again, and Polypa purred shortly, a dense rumble that spread out and made the windows rattle. “Well, you do what you must,” he said firmly. “I support you regardless, my moirail.”

Polypa grinned, leaning down (knocking a few people away with her on-rushing belly, and she was too focused on Tegiri to notice or care much) and raised a fist, extending two claws in a triangle shape.

He extended his own claws in a similar pose, and pressed them against digits nearly thick around as his entire arm, and completed the diamond. Then her hand moved downwards, to his sleeve, and took a gentle but inescapably firm grip, pulling him protectively close to her leg. “C’mon, let’s get our shopping in,” she said, smiling behind her bandages.

Tegiri was not much for open displays of emotion. He found big smiles a hard thing to maintain, a performative thing that he struggled with. Nevertheless, he smiled easily around her. Being around her made a lot of things easier.

Accepting things he’d never thought he could ever begin to even consider, for one.

Polypa led him onwards, and though there wasn’t really anything he could realistically do to stop her, she would if he asked, but he saw no reason to alter her course. He was loyal to her above all else now, even though the changes to his world view this demanded was upsetting at first, and would accommodate her however she wanted.

Even if it meant indulging her fondness for some anime series he absolutely detested, but when they left, carrying quite a lot of new model assembly kits from a recent series she’d absolutely fallen in love with, Tegiri felt fine with that.

It was all just part of the routine now, and he didn’t mind being adaptable.

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[long meta] the hidden depths of voltron S1 E6

part 1: lance’s literal awakening and keith’s metaphorical one

(if you already know where I’m going with this, you might find part 2: an entire subtextual plot in S1 E6? - in this same post - more interesting)

I’ve been rewatching season 1, and I got to episode 5 with the bonding moment and was like yeahh but then I got to the beginning of E6, with everyone waiting for lance to be released from the healing pod, and I was like wait. I never really thought twice about the scene before, but this time around I was like...hold the phone.

what is keith’s reasoning for being impatient in this scene, anyway? like, if everyone else can wait a few ticks for lance to wake up, why can’t you?

is this just your Personality, to be an impatient nuisance sometimes, haha queue comedic intro? well, while keith is often impatient, it’s usually during situations involving life or death decisions. and since lance isn’t about to die, and the timing of his release from the pod doesn’t put anyone else’s life at risk...

since i trust the vld writers enough at this point (at least with keith, i guess...?) to not make characters do shit for no good reason, i don’t think keith was being impatient for the hell of it, especially to do with someone he’s made a point of *Shrug* Not Really caring about -- that is, until shit went down in E5 and keith dropped that pretense like it was hot and didn’t hesitate to initiate the famed bonding moment.

my point here about this scene in E6, is that it’s directly linked to E5′s bonding moment, like 100%. maybe you’re like DUH OBVIOUSLY - and you’d be right, cause it’s obvious to me now and I was probably just being really slow on the uptake - but nevertheless, i don’t think we should hang up the the phone there...

i think that - well, with the “cradled you in my arms” line, we all kind of know - that keith took that bonding seriously to some extent. but to what extent? just seriously enough to be annoyed with lance’s response? personally, I think keith took it seriously enough that he truly believed a major shift had occurred between them - a shift, if my thoughts here are on the right track, he’d probably been hoping for (perhaps only subconsciously) since this scene:

it’s from the tail end of S1E2, after they successfully form voltron for the first time. i referred to this frame as “first time keith realizes that lance is actually kind of cool”. the way I interpreted this was that now, keith can no longer see lance as >insert stereotypes here< and predictable, but rather as someone interesting and possibly full of surprises and definitely worth paying attention to after all. but in this episode, keith’s still too closed off emotionally to acknowledge at maybe his new perspective of lance is making him wish things between them were different - not so they could be BFFs like lance and hunk are, but something else....something he can’t yet put into words (space ranger partners).

god they r all 3 uber-dorks okay

anyway

back to E6, I’m now imagining that keith has spent the last 24 hours secretly relishing the idea that he’s finally (for the first time in his life??) got himself a friend that is both a peer and someone that he feels instinctually closer to compared to other peers. (shiro is of course someone he feels instinctually closer to, but he is not quite a peer in age or maturity. the stuff can you do with a mentor/idol is definitely not the same stuff you can do with another shitting teenager like yourself).

buuuut we all know keith’s about to be disappointed when reality rears its ugly head and lance says some bullshit to allura again. “classic”. and so, from keith’s perspective, the reality is this: despite any shift between them that lance definitely felt (he saw it with his own eyes dammit), lance must have nevertheless interpreted it in a way did not put them the same page. fukin sux

poor keith. don’t we all hate when we hype something up in our minds and it turns out we were totally off the fucking mark all along? I imagine right now that he’s busy mentally burying his disappointment six feet deep. (note to remember for later: you can also see in the image above that shiro has the highest tolerance for lance’s shit.)

((((((( also eye-narrow worthy, but....perhaps...meaningless........hm:

when coran presents the ticker when the topic of ticks vs seconds comes up, hunk and pidge come over to look instantly. allura is shown walking over to the group moments later at 22:00 into the episode. shiro is shown watching from where he stands a few feet away. and keith is just ... ... ... absent from this exchange for 4 seconds before he’s briefly shown finally walking into the frame at 22:04. for four whole seconds he was just...what? staring, I guess? at lance, waiting, probably feeling determined to Be There when lance woke up. but not so determined that he’d risk someone calling him out for it. (but shiro is likely an exception for him: shiro doesn’t have his back turned, and so keith must trust him not to raise an eyebrow if keith kinda wanted to, you now, Be There.) )))))))

anywaaaaaay

we know that burying disappointment not so simple as pushing it away and never feeling it again. because like keith, when present reality doesn’t match our perceived reality, we’re like, “wtf? where did i go wrong? how did i misinterpret this? was I delusional?” and sometimes we’re like, “no, fuck you reality, I was not delusional, not this time, I was not wrong.” And voila, here you see keith in all that frustration: he’s planted himself as much in lance’s line of sight as he can without just straight up taking the yellow mouse’s seat right in front of the bowl of goo. keith clearly intends to be acknowledged. or at the very least, to glean some clue from lance’s behavior as to why he’s being Capital-I Ignored.

keith stays quiet during the conversation at the table until lance make a quip about the mice besting them all, and keith makes his salt known:

BITCH WHAT HTE FUCK? DID U NOT SEE HOW VALIANT I WAS PROTECTING YOUR ASS? I WAS THE SHIT! NOW STOP SPOONFEEDING THOSE FUCKING MICE I SWEAR TO

lance goes onto totally dismiss what keith did and this is....honestly not what keith expected

lance isn’t even making a dumb joke, he’s just being an asshole, plain and simple. keith now is like *softly* bitch what the fuck. “We had a bonding moment. I cradled you in my arms!” keith says, trying to look indignant, because alternative emotions are supposed be buried six feet deep.

but it’s no use, he’s stonewalled and subject-changed. and while we the audience know that the overly-defensive tone of lance’s stonewalling practically confirms that he remembers, we can only hope that lance realizes this too and is able to feel a pinch of salty relief.

it’s my conclusion that the whole point of these beginning scenes is not just to have some character interaction and a bit of thrown-in development, but to provide legit exposition and rising action to the fully-fledged subtextual plot of ep6. Read part 2 below, an elaboration of what I mean by this.

part 2: an entire subtextual plot in S1 E6?

(apologies to anyone else may have posted similar conclusions and I just totally missed them)

so here i get into are more circumstantial stuff. maybe my reasoning is clouded by ship-goggles, or maybe it’s the opposite, when armed with the interpretation lens that season 3 is all but dreamworks-signed confirmation that Keith and Lance’s relationship is intended to be something more than BFF friendship, and always has been, and everything about their relationship from S1E1 to S3E7 is very deliberate in order to make their future endgame as believable, nuanced, and in depth as is possible for a younger audience show.

assuming that this interpretation of S3 is not totally mistaken, then I contend that S1E6, in its entirety, is a far more momentous step in their relationship than all previous S1 episodes combined, including the bonding moment.

basically, hunk wants to fulfill his promise to save his girlfriend shay, but allura decides a new incoming distress beacon needs to be looked into first. they arrive, and very unlike shay’s introduction (S1E5), characterized by dull colors, distrust, and caution....

E6′s introduction to rolo and nyma is characterized by brightness colors, camaraderie, and repose. some quality irony here. tbh, It’s a fantastic way of fLipPing The ScrIPT if you ask me Hunk.

also I suppose it should be mentioned that shay is meant to be noted for her tattered clothes, androgyny, and lack of traditional beauty (but we aren’t fooled, shay is perfect) while rolo and nyma are clearly typed to be MUTHAFUCKIN SEX BEASTS. nyma is very overtly feminine and rolo is equally masculine.

as expected, lance swoons and does his gig. even says “Name’s Lance” which uh, de ja vu anyone ahem episode uno? as the episode progresses, it becomes clear that lance is going hella overboard, b/c even shiro (who, remember, has the highest tolerance for lance’s shit) is like for the love of fuck-

that night, there’s a bonfire, and rolo starts getting into his backstory. it’s worth noting that that besides space parents shiro and allura, keith is the only other paladin there listening. anyway rolo mentions sendak, immediately acknowledging him as a major threat. the point of that: considering just earlier in the episode, keith mentioned sendak’s threat to lance and lance promptly didn’t give a shit.....

even from profile view, keith’s expression in this frame ^ is distinctly similar to his expression from before (last frame from part 1), e.g. wide eyes revealing vulnerability, small frown, etc. i would take a gander that this is the moment that keith decides to...let things play out, rather than support hunk’s suspicions.

(why? maybe because he sees lance being a dipshit and if hunk’s right, and these people are liars and cheats, then lance is going to get what he deserves. but, i admit, such a theory has no basis in canon.)

meanwhile lance is being a dipshit and lets nyma inside the castle while the others aren’t looking. she plays him like a fiddle to get to the lions specifically, and at this point, the keen viewer is really starting to wonder why he’s being so dumb.

and this is important: I do not believe the writers were making him dumb because that’s his Personality. Just like keith’s impatience with the healing pod, there’s gotta be a reason behind his behavior beyond “that’s just how he is, that’s just what’s happening right now, don’t look into it too hard”.

I believe - going off of lance’s highly defensive refusal to acknowledge the bonding moment with keith earlier - he’s in a rather delicate emotional state right now, whether he consciously realizes it or not.

regardless of what keith might believe at this point, I think the reality is that lance sure as hell did remember. and although lance’s interpretation was probably different, it was different in the opposite way keith probably imagined (i.e. an even more dramatic and sentimental interpretation than keith’s). but the real divide between them at the beginning of E6 is their reactions to their own interpretations of the bonding moment:

keith reaction: omg a real friend?? for me?? maybe jesus does love me

lance reaction: lies jesus lies i have never had a gay thot in my entire life nope

one of the big reasons I’m fairly confident I’m not just making lance’s reaction up totally with ship-goggles is because of this slap-in-the-face parallel:

of ALL the things that could have been done, nyma is cradling lance in her arms, the very thing lance wants to deny even to himself ever happened with a certain someone else.

if you’re followin my theory, i think it could go like this:

because of the bonding moment, keith’s mind promoted his relationship with lance from we’re-both-in-voltron to F IS FOR FRIENDS, but i think from what can be seen of lance’s vastly exaggerated womanizing behaivor all E6, lance’s mind promoted his relationship with keith from grumpy-voltron-frenemy to ...

...

... something he can’t yet bring himself to put into words (space ranger partners, italicized coughcough)

honestly, the frame of lance in nyma’s arms is a little depressing when put in context with the beginning of the episode. what is lance thinking, in this moment? or trying not to think about? is he telling himself on repeat: this is what I want, this is what I wanted, this is how it’s supposed to go, this is who it’s supposed to be -- he’s 100% blushing when she asks him to take her on a ride around moon, holding him like this.

this post is cancelled if keith’s explicitly mentioned cradling is somehow not intended to be totally parallel to this scene right here with lance blushing.

(sorry little baby cuban, but it is not mindless bromance that is in your future.)

immediately after this, lance seems to check back into reality, and shows some resistance to nyma’s request. but then:

TRIGGERED

chances are, nyma made an educated guess that lance - like any hopeless romantic douche (psa i still love lance with my whole soul) - would react stupidly and competitively when threatened to be bested by another suitor. but there is a smidgen of possibility that she’s smart as FUCK (which there’s plenty of evidence of) and she knew that there could be only ONE1 reason lance could be overcompensating so obsessively. and out of other TeenPaladins, keith’s the hottest. i wouldn’t put it past this chick to put 2 and 2 and 5 together to get 69 and be correct.

bonus: she mentions how the minerals of the kinetic spring “reflect off the water, making a rainbow”. Also, I’m almost certain someone has pointed this out before, but I guess I’ll do it again - the bisexual flag colors are pink, lavender, and blue, and this background..!.............but that’s just whiteboard conspiracy silliness, surely. surely.

necessary? i think not

((((((( also on a related note, i’ve watched this clip below like eight times because I have a feeling that this sequence is some kind of subtle parallel or reference to something as well. on the surface, lance appears to be surprised and blush when nyma rests her head against his armpit side and starts laughing.

it just caught me off guard like, why would this bit be included? we already know that lance is infatuated with her, so what’s the point? why waste time and frames to keep making the same point? ... oR is there some other point that’s trying to be made and I am blind to see it? right now I can’t come up with anything, but if you have any ideas, definitely let me know. )))))))

meanwhile...

keith stap.

and so lance’s massive fuck up comes to a peak, and he’s so desperate for this thing with nyma to work (so desperate to prove to himself that nothing’s changed, he’s still the same, a beautiful girl is still what he wants, what he needs) that for one sad moment he’s actually willing to believe nyma’s a dominatrix before he’s willing to believe that she’d been playing him all along...

(how can I be mad at this boy?)

the others start the pursuit to save lance, and i think that it’s clever how keith was given the spotlight in the blue lion’s recovery via navigating the asteroid belt. that pursuit scene was very flexible in its requirements for how it needed to go, technically keith’s role doing that was interchangeable, and so the whole sequence could have been designed in a way to cater to another lion’s strengths. but.

“This kid can flat-out fly,” says rolo. the title of this episode is “Taking Flight”. why would the title of this episode, in which, tbh, keith hardly does anything for a majority of it, be dedicated to this relatively predictable space car chase?

A: because it enables keith to say that he got is lion back. I saved your ass AGAIN and this time you can’t deny it!

and because of this experience, lance now has come to understand (to at least some extent) that there’s no point in wishing that he’d had his Magical Moment of Connection™ with some cool and pretty girl like he’d always imagined.

maybe, very very deep down, he’s begun to realize that the moment was only magical in the first place because it was with keith.

keith, who keeps coming through for him when it matters most.

the episode comes full circle, and - going along with my theory so far - the real conflict has been resolved. One might argue all that this “subtext” was just a subplot to the main plot of learning their lesson with the bounty hunters and always listening to hunk because he’s right and shay is 1000% more pure than rolo and nyma combined, tattered clothes be damned.

Or like me, one could argue that all that non-subtextual stuff (not counting the interspersed, juxtaposed scenes of Overarching Plot, Starring Your Hosts Haggar and Zarkon) was just an external plot chalk full of thematic parallels tailor-made to accommodate the true purpose of the episode: for lance and keith to come to terms with each other in the aftermath of the subtle but major shift that’s occurred between them.

lance took a big step in this one episode by going from total denial to verbal acceptance (for everyone to hear) of a bonding moment, in fact, existing.

and keith did good by accepting lance as he is and choosing not to continue resenting him for how he first reacted. its safe to say that keith progressed in character even more than lance, which I think is why he wins the focus of the episode title, because what he learned was that if he wants a deeper friendship with lance, fate’s not going to hand it to him in a healing pod. he has to do his part developing it. he has to work for it.

knowing keith, that’s a pretty tall order. but at least this time, keith got to Be There for lance after all.

Here is a follow up post: link

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I haven’t gotten to see the early showing of the first ep yet (if it’s still available) but here’s a promising review! :)

http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/review/deuce-review-1032504

James Franco and Maggie Gyllenhaal lead the remarkable ensemble of David Simon and George Pelecanos' entertaining and substantive HBO drama about sex and power in 1971 Manhattan.

In many ways, The Deuce represents the logical and satisfying culmination of David Simon's HBO journey from The Corner through The Wire and Treme. Long fascinated with the way that institutions grind down individuals and the citizenry, turning people and neighborhoods into statistics and commodities, Simon and co-creator George Pelecanos are able to use the New York City sex trade in the early 1970s to explore the exploitation of the human body itself.

A gritty, grimy (but rarely grim) tapestry of pimps and hoes, cops and pornographers, feminists and misogynists, crusaders and deadbeats, The Deuce has a lower intimidation threshold than Simon's last HBO project, the tremendous and tremendously wonky public housing miniseries Show Me a Hero, but it still balances the salacious with the journalistically inquisitive. It's another Simon drama that's a discipline-spanning sociological treatise on one level and a showcase for dozens of memorable, colorful characters on another. After watching the full eight-episode first season, which premieres on September 10, most of my complaints boil down to wishing The Deucehad at least five more episodes in which to let rapidly unfolding storylines breathe a bit more.

The show's initial point-of-entry is twin brothers Vincent and Frankie Martino (both James Franco). Vincent is ultra-trustworthy and responsible by standards that allow him to be a little bit of a progressive white knight, while also abandoning his kids and philandering wife (Zoe Kazan) early on with no serious audience repercussions. Frankie is a hot-headed vagabond who thinks nothing of running up gambling debts that fall on his brother. Their respective skills quickly make them valuable to Rudy Pipilo (Michael Rispoli), a Gambino capo who brings the Martinos into an ambitious, morally murky business plan for the 42nd Street area involving bars, massage parlors and sex shops.

The "James Franco plays twin brothers in a '70s porn drama" hook will lure some viewers in (and scare a few viewers off), but The Deuce is an ensemble and Frankie and Vincent stand out because they're played by the cast's biggest, most easily marketable actor and not because they're the show. To put it in The Wire terms, they're double-McNulty, a good star surrounded by countless juicier character roles. Vincent and Frankie share a mustache and Franco differentiates them effectively in small ways, via the wild glint in Frankie's eyes or the weary disapproval in Vincent's mien. Perhaps because Franco also had to be behind the camera directing two episodes, you never feel like the Martinos are dominating the screen and, as such, it's a perfect performance; you're glad when he's around and rarely miss him when he isn't.

There's too much happening in The Deuce to give more than a cursory plot summary. Maggie Gyllenhaal is probably the second lead after Franco as Eileen, who walks the streets under the name Candy, suffering indignities in order to support a son who lives with his grandmother. Eileen takes an interest in the pre-Deep Throat world of adult cinema and the greatness of Gyllenhaal's performance is in the contrasts she's able to convey between Candy's fatigued-but-talented professionalism, Eileen's growing desperation to change her life and her captivated zeal for the world of adult movies and the control she thinks it might offer her.

Candy works without a manager, which frustrates the various pimps, including Larry (Gbenga Akinnagbe), Rodney (Cliff "Method Man" Smith) and C.C. (Gary Carr), and makes her a curiosity and inspiration for the sex workers, including fresh-off-the-bus Lori (Emily Meade) and inquisitive Darlene (Dominique Fishback).

And then there are the police officers, going between benign neglect, superficial enforcement and criminal collusion at a moment when the NYPD was under scrutiny for corruption. Officers Alston (Lawrence Gilliard Jr.) and Flanagan (Don Harvey) are central to that storyline, especially once Sandra (Natalie Paul), a reporter with an interest in the call girls, catches Alston's eye.

Some viewers will find the nudity, sex and, in particular, sexual violence to be barriers to entry for The Deuce, but like most Simon stories, the series is about power; the intermingling of sexual power and financial power is the text of the show. An early conversation between two pimps comparing their workplace approaches to Richard Nixon's carrot/stick incentivizing sets up a juxtaposition between how those with institutional clout and those who work outside of the system exert control in similar ways. The same is true of figures of authority, with law enforcement and criminal elements meting out punishment and offering protection in comparable fashion. As always, it's the exchange of money that drives everything, whether enterprises are entirely legitimate, organized rackets or in a state of flux because the courts are deciding minute-by-minute what is and isn't allowed (and the smart operators are the ones preparing to capitalize on every new loophole or opportunity). The characters in The Wire made cool, glib references to "the game," even as viewers were aware of the life-and-death stakes of the drug trade — and The Deuce is similarly enticing when it comes to documenting the swagger and glib cleverness of jive-talking pimps and sassy hookers, without ever ignoring the parasitic repugnance and frequent human misery of it all.

The world of The Deuce is often only a step up from the sewer, and led by pilot director Michelle MacLaren and cinematographers Pepe Avila del Pino and Vanja Cernjul, the show avoids being one of those period pieces in which every car looks new and every costume seems straight off the rack. The aromas of body odor, cheap cologne, garbage, cigarette smoke and inconsistently used disinfectant pervade every frame and unlike Vinyl, which will probably be a frequent point of comparison before people watch The Deuce, this new drama only sometimes becomes excessively enamored with nostalgic glamour. There's some nerdy excitement at the quality of the movies on the various marquees or the name-dropping of the occasional pre-iconic band, but this isn't a show that forgets the disillusionment of the moment for the low-income characters struggling to make ends meet and to be heard in a variety of civil rights struggles.

It's a show about exploitation and it's a milieu that runs the risk of being treated exploitatively, but with MacLaren directing two episodes and Uta Briesewitz and Roxann Dawson directing others, you can see the effort to not leer at the frequently exposed skin or, at the very least, never lose the context in which the skin is being bared. Anything that threatens to be sexy is only sexy to the point at which you spot the mildew on the walls, hear the sirens out the window, recognize the scary hunger in a john's expression or get any other reminder of the business transaction at hand.

The cast is tremendous, pulling from every corner of Simon's repertory company with the previously mentioned names plus the likes of Chris Bauer, Anwan Glover, Michael Kostroff and Chris Coy. Standouts in a group with no bad performances include the sweetly vulnerable Fishback, amiably well-meaning Gillard, darkly intense Akinnagbe and the spectacular Carr, whose suave-but-chilling C.C. may be the show's breakout character. David Krumholtz steals scenes as a limitedly artistic adult filmmaker and Margarita Levieva, whose student-turned-barmaid Abby is one of the show's more conventional characters, burns up the screen. Meade, Method Man, Jamie Neumann, Mustafa Shakir and even, beginning what may be his great comeback, Ralph Macchio all shine.

There are too many great things in The Deuce for them all to be serviced in eight hours and that's the show's weakness, such as it is. When a storyline like Officer Alston's arc with reporter Sandra feels rushed, that's a minor disappointment. There's a lot of hasty narrative here. It's worse when you sense that a couple of emotional beats with different prostitutes might have landed harder if we'd gotten a few more establishing scenes with the characters in earlier episodes.

That need for more is pervasive. We've only begun to get names, much less backstories and motivations, for some characters. The mob stuff is very familiar and needs more depth if they want me to think it's essential. At times I felt like I only understood what was happening with the cops because I'd seen The Wire and I've seen Serpico. Coy's character, a bartender who was at Stonewall, keeps the show's focus from feeling exclusively heterosexual, but the still-criminalized emerging gay underground is underserved.

Simon and Pelecanos are just beginning to put the machinery of The Deuce into motion in these eight episodes. As an opening act, the show's first season is substantive, provocative and entertaining. It's a journey through a certain kind of hell, but I'm already eager to return.

#Margarita Levieva #the deuce #this is long #the hollywood reporter #david simon

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I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

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Divorce Advice For Women

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Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

Divorce

›

How to Get a Divorce

›

Divorce Guide

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Divorce Advice For Women

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Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

Divorce

›

How to Get a Divorce

›

Divorce Guide

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Divorce Advice For Women

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Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

Divorce

›

How to Get a Divorce

›

Divorce Guide

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Divorce Advice For Women

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Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

Divorce

›

How to Get a Divorce

›

Divorce Guide

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Divorce Advice For Women

New Post has been published on https://autotraffixpro.app/allenmendezsr/divorce-advice-for-women/

Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

Divorce

›

How to Get a Divorce

›

Divorce Guide

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Divorce Advice For Women

New Post has been published on https://autotraffixpro.app/allenmendezsr/divorce-advice-for-women/

Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

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Divorce Advice For Women

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Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

Divorce

›

How to Get a Divorce

›

Divorce Guide

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Divorce Advice For Women

New Post has been published on https://autotraffixpro.app/allenmendezsr/divorce-advice-for-women/

Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

Divorce

›

How to Get a Divorce

›

Divorce Guide

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allenmendezsr · 5 years ago

Text

Divorce Advice For Women

New Post has been published on https://autotraffixpro.app/allenmendezsr/divorce-advice-for-women/

Divorce Advice For Women

Buy Now

Get the advice of a divorce coach for the price of a book … and save yourself lots of time and frustration!

Imagine being able to calmly and confidently face the divorce process, knowing what to expect each step of the way so you can make the best decisions for your future.

Hi, my name is Tracy,

I went through a divorce myself, and have worked with divorcing women for several years. I know from experience what an impact divorce can have on a woman’s life.

When I went through my divorce, I was emotionally raw, worn down by all the decisions to be made, and frustrated by the lack of good information.

Consequently, I made my fair share of mistakes. Having learned my lessons the hard way, I made a promise to myself that no woman would ever have to face this journey alone.

As a result, I started the WomansDivorce website in 2001 to help other women going through a divorce in the United States, and have done so ever since.

The Facts You Need About Divorce!

“Thanks for publishing this…”

Helping You Meet the Challenges of Divorce

When you’re dealing with mixed emotions, upset kids, and an uncooperative spouse, you don’t have the time or energy to spend hours searching for the answers to your questions.

“The information in this book is so valuable”

Practical Steps to Get You Started

What you need to know before you ever hire a lawyer or file for divorce

Financial precautions you can take so you’ll have enough money to get through your divorce.

How to find the right lawyer, and what to ask during the initial consultation.

Steps to protect your credit so you can start over after your divorce.

“Very clear and useful information”

“The worksheets alone were worth the price of the book” ~ Jeanne

With Divorce 101, you’ll get handy worksheets to help you:

Organize the information you need for your divorce, saving you time and repeated trips to your lawyer’s office.

Determine your current living expenses to get a realistic picture of your situation.

Provide the documentation needed so you can get adequate support to survive afterwards.

Calculate the bottom line on assets and debts so you can get a fair settlement and have something to start over with.

Tracy,

Discover Techniques For Negotiating

I really liked the information that gave you, step by step, on what you need to do to make sure you get your fair share financially. It helped me be strong and stand up for my rights. Connie

What About the Kids?

“This is a must have…”

Understand How Support Issues Work

“A woman must fight for her future”

Won’t My Lawyer Handle Everything?

“Wow, like having your very own lawyer in your living room.”

Just open the book look for the answers. Don’t try to read it all at once, but keep it as your bible to refer back to. Very good work. Kathie

“The Woman’s Guide to Divorce” has it all!

By knowing what your rights are, you can make smart choices and avoid the potential pitfalls of divorce. This guide will take you by the hand and answer all your questions!

“For a comprehensive, step-by-step guide on the basics of Divorce, you simply can’t go past Tracy’s book …..a must read.”

Barry Roche Author of “How To Win When Facing Divorce”

So What Does “DIVORCE 101: A Woman’s Guide” Cover, Exactly?

Not sure whether “DIVORCE 101” can really help you get through your divorce?

Sheena Berg Parenting and Relationship Coach

Take a look at what’s inside “Divorce 101: A Woman’s Guide“…

Table of Contents

Preparing emotionally and legally for the divorce process.

Understanding property laws and how they work.

What your settlement agreement should include.

What every woman needs to know about custody and visitation.

Managing everything once the divorce is finalized.

I want to make sure you have everything you need to get through your divorce. So I’m also including these Valuable BONUSES…

Bonus #1 — The Smart Woman’s Guide to Divorce

Bonus #2 — The Ultimate Self-Help Divorce Kit

Access state-specific divorce forms

Understand the relevant divorce laws in your state

Discover what to do if you can’t afford to hire a lawyer

Gain access to child support calculators for your state

Get help if you’re in an abusive relationship

Locate divorce support groups to help you cope with everything

Bonus #3 — Surviving The Nightmare of Divorce

Bonus #4 — Adjusting To Post-Divorce Life

Order now and you qualify for all these bonuses for FREE!

It’s Affordable

PS…the online links from the book and your site have proved invaluable.

Get the information you need …… risk free!

I know this can be a tough time for you, and you’re not sure where to turn or who to trust. Because I want you to feel very comfortable ordering this guide, I’m offering you my …..

Money-Back Satisfaction Guarantee

Guaranteed. It’s that simple.

How to Order

Order Now … and you’ll be on your way to making the best decisions possible throughout your divorce.

Download Access provided by WomansDivorce.com. Secure Payment processed by Clickbank

What Happens if You Don’t Order?

Give yourself a break, and stop looking everywhere for the answers. When you get this book, you can rest easy knowing that you’ve done everything in your power to get the best outcome ….

Go ahead and order right now, I know you’ll be happy you did. I wish you the best,

P.S. Divorce can be devastating ….. especially if you aren’t prepared.

Click here to get the US divorce advice you need today!

Divorce

›

How to Get a Divorce

›

Divorce Guide

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