#the selection is based on which chapters I've reread in the last few months and found problems with
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#this is just to help me find somewhere to start#the selection is based on which chapters I've reread in the last few months and found problems with#chapter 1 is obviously well. it's the opening chapter it has to be the hook. and i really could make it better#chapter 7 is the one where Gregory has a nightmare#chapter 12 is that 3k word chapter that's just like. Sun and Gregory having a heart to heart#14 is THE chapter. contains the scene i started writing the fic for#and chapter 15 is the one i read most recently#where Moon lets Sun in on what happened in the tunnels and pushes Gregory away#i really hated rereading that one. i feel like I could have done so much better#anyway i hope enough of my readers actually see this quickly#and that they even remember the events of my fic clearly enough to give suggestions#who's to say if I'll have motivation to even look at the fic tomorrow
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