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daveysjackie · 14 days
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bonk
im boredddd grampy
- @itsmemichael
throw a tennis ball at the wall, pretend you are in prison in one of those movies.
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daveysjackie · 14 days
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Opening line patterns tag game!!
Thought this was pretty fun so i wanted to hop on :)
Rules: List the first line of your last 10 (or however many you have) posted fics and see if there's a pattern!
(I have exactly ten fics so good for me!)
In order of oldest to newest:
1. The Magical Feeling of Falling in Love(i kinda fucked up the fic with this title tbh i do not like it)
“It was a weird feeling for Jack Sullivan.”
2. The Best Christmas Gift
“Today is Christmas.”
3. It’s Always Truth Or Dare That Screws People Over
“Wanna play truth or dare?”
4. What Do You Do When Your Classmate Faints?
“Jack was worried.”
(I am starting to see the trend here)
5. I Don’t Wanna Be Special
“Jeremy Heere is pretty attractive.”
(Okay the trend is broken nvm)
6. The Genius Is Heere
“Jeremy and Michael were inseparable, keyword: ‘were’.”
7. Shit.
“Seasonal depression or seasonal affective disorder (SAD) is a type of depression that comes and goes in a seasonal pattern.”
(Tbh i have no idea what i was trying to do with the opening of this fic i literally copied and pasted the definition of seasonal depression here)
8. Memory Leak
“Michael found himself switching monitors from radio static to more radio static.”
9. Remembering the ones who can’t be here
“Jake disliked Christmas.”
10. Finding Love On Valentine’s Day
“A week before Valentine’s, Rich started discovering these obnoxiously pink letters, accompanied by a different flower every day in his locker.”
Conclusion
For my tlkoe fics it’s pretty obvious that i went for a shorter one liner kind of opening which is something i did not expect tbh. Kind of a straight to the deal, instant hook(?) kind of thing. For my bmc fics i started using longer sentences? And it’s funny because there’s kind of a transition there lol. For ml i tried to do the “start with action scenes” thing which ultimately fucked me up/hj I think the main pattern here is that i either use short one liners that cut to the chase or a longer sentence that also cuts to the chase but gives less of a “ooh what’s happening” kind of feeling. Yeah i like short one liners more they have this weird impact
Tags! (No pressure <3)
@theabyssgazesalsointoyou @h0n3yk1tt3n @rebuke-me
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daveysjackie · 14 days
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considering ive deviated from newsies, im gonna split it. 5 from my FNAF ones and 5 from the most popular newsies ones.
FNAF
1) Down Puppy
Tap. Tap. Tap-tap. Tap.
2) Liquid Love
“Come on, come on.”
3) The Son of God
Michael rolled his eyes at the conversation surrounding him.
4) My Life Began the Day Yours Did
William’s life had been a faint, blurry hum for twenty two years.
5) Make Me Feel Until The Pain Don't Matter
“Father, I’m leaving for school…I made you breakfast.”
Newsies
6) Even In Silence
Jack bit his lip intensely, hoping his experimentation would pay off.
7) Routine
Jack Kelly, whether he liked it or not, was a man of routine.
8) Not Your Name, Not My Soulmate
Jack still remembers that night clearly: midnight of his eighth birthday.
9) The Intricate Chaos of You
"Ima, stop worrying. It’s five weeks then I'll be back."
10) David Jacobs' Guide To Dealing With A Bad Roommate
David did not understand what he had been thinking when he had agreed to be roommates with Jack Kelly.
*******
Obviously I like starting in the middle of action. Mostly with dialogue but apparently i also do it in the actions of the characters.
I am, apparently, incapable of starting with long sentences which is ironic because when I talk, the first sentence is the longest one i could possibly conjure.
In the newsies ones, jack is the centre subject in most of them (obviously i played favourites)
Im not gonna tag specific people but this is open to everyone that comes across it!
(also if you see this on my newsies blog and you like FNAF, i have a sideblog dedicated to it: @itsmemichael)
Opening line patterns tag game!!
Thought this was pretty fun so i wanted to hop on :)
Rules: List the first line of your last 10 (or however many you have) posted fics and see if there's a pattern!
(I have exactly ten fics so good for me!)
In order of oldest to newest:
1. The Magical Feeling of Falling in Love(i kinda fucked up the fic with this title tbh i do not like it)
“It was a weird feeling for Jack Sullivan.”
2. The Best Christmas Gift
“Today is Christmas.”
3. It’s Always Truth Or Dare That Screws People Over
“Wanna play truth or dare?”
4. What Do You Do When Your Classmate Faints?
“Jack was worried.”
(I am starting to see the trend here)
5. I Don’t Wanna Be Special
“Jeremy Heere is pretty attractive.”
(Okay the trend is broken nvm)
6. The Genius Is Heere
“Jeremy and Michael were inseparable, keyword: ‘were’.”
7. Shit.
“Seasonal depression or seasonal affective disorder (SAD) is a type of depression that comes and goes in a seasonal pattern.”
(Tbh i have no idea what i was trying to do with the opening of this fic i literally copied and pasted the definition of seasonal depression here)
8. Memory Leak
“Michael found himself switching monitors from radio static to more radio static.”
9. Remembering the ones who can’t be here
“Jake disliked Christmas.”
10. Finding Love On Valentine’s Day
“A week before Valentine’s, Rich started discovering these obnoxiously pink letters, accompanied by a different flower every day in his locker.”
Conclusion
For my tlkoe fics it’s pretty obvious that i went for a shorter one liner kind of opening which is something i did not expect tbh. Kind of a straight to the deal, instant hook(?) kind of thing. For my bmc fics i started using longer sentences? And it’s funny because there’s kind of a transition there lol. For ml i tried to do the “start with action scenes” thing which ultimately fucked me up/hj I think the main pattern here is that i either use short one liners that cut to the chase or a longer sentence that also cuts to the chase but gives less of a “ooh what’s happening” kind of feeling. Yeah i like short one liners more they have this weird impact
Tags! (No pressure <3)
@theabyssgazesalsointoyou @h0n3yk1tt3n @rebuke-me
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daveysjackie · 14 days
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i watch hbomberguys plagerism video about 5 times a week, it gives me life
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daveysjackie · 14 days
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NERD
(now i definitely need to win)
okay but if i get a hug if i win, what do you get if you win? since youre so confident (no murder)
- @itsmemichael
ah, a prize? let me think..
a signed copy of Stephen King's famed novel, The Shining. preferably a vintage edition, but I wouldn't mind a newer copy.
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daveysjackie · 15 days
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Imma be honest boo, Crying Child is a crap name for a kid
he was crying when he was born, and I was left to name him.
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daveysjackie · 16 days
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cash payments huh? i have *rifles through pockets* 4 bucks on me
yeah sure that works. thank you! i will put an iota more effort into my posting now. also here's a digital kiss
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daveysjackie · 3 months
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hey guys, i know im not active here much anymore. I’ll get back to newsies, i know i will
in the meantime, im doing FNAF things over on @itsmemichael if thats your kinda thing :)
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daveysjackie · 4 months
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fellas, exam is over so send in asks about anything!! i miss you all
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daveysjackie · 4 months
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when my exam is tomorrow but im writing FNAF fics and watching josh hutch edits
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daveysjackie · 4 months
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tumblr i hath returned (i have an exam on thursday ive barely revised for)
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daveysjackie · 5 months
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what do we do when we're ill, tired and depressed?
continue writing one of the many jack/davey fics sitting unfinished on my AO3 ofc
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daveysjackie · 6 months
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sorry ive not been active. i would blame starting uni but ill be honest, the fnaf brainrot is REAL
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daveysjackie · 6 months
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I got a cameo from Ryan and uh some highlights:
His David is canonically gay “Davey being gay, it wasn’t a joke, that was just how I saw him and that’s how I played him”
David’s crush on Jack begins in the theater when he sees Jack’s art (“you’re really good!”)
“We would honestly have shows where, before the show, we would say like ‘oh should we play up the sexual tension here?’” In regards to javey
“If there was a touch we would hold onto it a second too long” (adding javey into shows)
“In my mind I love the idea that one day Jack and David end up together and maybe in the end it was them who fell in love”
He has a notebook with David’s family tree, a timeline of his life, where his grandparents had immigrated from, his best subjects in school.
Davey lives on the lower east side and wants to go to Columbia to be a lawyer because he wanted to “make a change in the world”
He didn’t have friends at school and the newsies were his first group of friends (which is why they meant so much to him)
Anyway this was basically everything Ryan said so it is all 100% canon in the uksies universe at least 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋
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daveysjackie · 6 months
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i think the funniest thing about this post is the bit that says “View on Twitter”
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How did X get even stupider.
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daveysjackie · 6 months
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im succumbing to the urge to write a fnaf fic icb it
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daveysjackie · 6 months
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IDK if its just me who’s gotten this but someone has just put what seems like a full javey oneshot fic in my asks and I’m so confused
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