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Hellcheer Moodboard: The Little Merman

Eddie yearns to see what the surface world is like. When a great shadow briefly covers the moon above, he swims up to see a grand ship in the middle of a birthday celebration. He sees many on board, but the only one he focuses on is princess Chrissy. He's completely smitten and watches her dance with her friends. Suddenly, a violent storm erupts and everyone hurries to the lifeboats. However, Chrissy sees that her dog is still trapped, so she quickly hurries and successfully saves her dog. She ends up trapped and left to drown in the unforgiving waters. Eddie saves her and returns her to shore, singing a song of hope that maybe they could be together. This interest in the human world catches the undead eyes of Vecna, a being of great power whose magic can make anyone's dream come true; but not without a price.

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Hellcheer Moodboard: Living in Sin

Based on my fic Living in Sin

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When I open up commissions this upcoming summer. Would anyone be interested?

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On the one hand, Eddie would sing beautiful and romantic ballads to Chrissy.

On the other hand, he would also sing this (wear headphones):

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Sharing a new comic project. I hope you all like it when it’s finished.

I started sketching a short comic earlier this week. It will be a short and serious Calicheer comic with the first page centered on child Billy and his mom. Still gotta figure out the layout and how many pages will be included. Here’s hoping I’ll complete this before the end of the year.

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me remembering that Neil Hargrove is canonically still alive in Stranger Things:

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The selfies that Chrissy sends to Eddie:

The selfies that Eddie sends back:

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Chrissy would describe Eddie’s smile like it’s the 8th wonder of the world:

Meanwhile everyone else sees this:

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Vecna: I can't believe you're getting so worked up about some guy.

Chrissy: This one is different. He's honest, and he's sweet...

Vecna: Please!

Chrissy: He would never do anything to hurt me.

Vecna: He's a guy!

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Eddie helps Chrissy fall asleep by rubbing her back.

Chrissy helps Eddie fall asleep by scratching his scalp.

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Just Chrissy cheering Eddie up after meeting her family for the first time after her mum scolds him for being not good enough for Chrissy.

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Reblogging another favorite. I love how stupid this look ❤️

Took a break from the important art project and made this monstrosity.

I did this kind of stupid art once before involving Jimbert, now it’s getting the Hellcheer look.

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Reblogging one of my favorites

A little Alice in Wonderland Hellcheer fan art 🫖 🐇 ❤️

Costumes are a mixture of the illustrations from the book and the disney movie. Also yes there are mistakes, but I can’t really fix them now.

Progress sketches:

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reading and having your work read by others is the only way to improve! here are some suggestions for you:

Show us what’s happening. Limit the use of ‘thinking’ words and the word ‘feeling’. Rather than say “He feels…” describe the feeling. What’s happening in the body, the mind?

Limit the use of the word ‘then’. Maybe play with letting things naturally flow from one action to another without a transition word.

Say your dialogue aloud. Think about it as an actual conversation between two people. If it doesn’t sound like something an actual person might say, consider an alternative.

It’s okay to use the same word multiple times. Sometimes, there’s really only one word that works. Use a thesaurus sparingly.

It’s also okay to call a spade a spade. For example, certain body parts. Just call ‘em like you see ‘em. Smut might start to sound silly with too many euphemisms.

Take a moment to ease your audience into the scene. Where are we? What’s the vibe? Take us there.

In the end, trust your gut. If something doesn’t feel right or you’re not happy with it, don’t use it. Read a lot (of both fic and original works) and ask for feedback as often as you can. Some of it you’ll use and some of it you won’t, but you can never stop improving.

Hello again dear anon, I really appreciate your feedback and suggestions! I do want to improve and I agree with all of the bullet points included here.

I tend to focus more on thinking and feeling words. I am guilty of overusing “then” and other transition words. Dialogue is something that I need to work on. It sounds right in my head, but when I type it out it sounds unusual. I like the reassurance that it’s okay to repeat certain words. With the smut section, I’ve found myself rolling my eyes at the euphemisms that I used in previous and recent works.

I know that my fics (regardless of the genre) aren’t going to improve overnight. This will take time, patience, and lots of editing.

Like you stated, trust my gut, read, and ask for feedback. Thank you again, this means a lot.

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Hellcheer Moodboard: In a World of My Own

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Hellcheer Moodboard: Vampire Boy

After his hunting trip with Uncle Wayne in the mountains, Eddie seemed off. Wayne figured that it was his nephew being his usual self, but Chrissy knew that something wasn't right. He seemed much more active at night, his skin practically glowing beneath the moonlight, and he always felt so famished. He seemed much more romantic around Chrissy, his voice and eyes seducing her with little to no effort. She found herself drawing closer to him, even when her gut told her to stay away. She wanted to help him, but what does one do when your boyfriend suddenly has an appetite for blood?