I’ve been so grateful for (and obsessively rereading) everyone’s kind comments on my Inklings Challenge story. I’m never sure how one should respond to tags, so I’m just going to take the chance to thank/respond to everyone in a separate post.
@why-bless-your-heart, @rosesnvines, @redheadedgirl, @radiowrites, @mademoiseli: Thank you for your kind comments, and I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
via @incomingalbatross: #oh that's beautiful#and i really love how he's totally conversant with BOTH worlds#genuinely a full citizen of both#you don't see that done very often and it creates a unique perspective i think
Thank you! I always love the intersection between the mundane and the fantastical, and I had so much fun creating a character who’s so familiar with both. If I ever do anything more with this universe, it’ll be to take advantage of the fun I can have with David’s character--he’s 100% the native and rightful king of this fantasy realm and can navigate all the trappings surrounding that, but he can also code-switch and talk with native knowledge of things like video games and television.
via @taleweaver-ramblings: #this is MAGNIFICENT#you know I'm a sucker for a good portal fantasy#even more so when it has this much depth#can I have a whole series please?
Thanks so much! I’m playing around with at least one more short story in this realm. Possibly two or three. I’d love to get to see David in Fable, and there’s fun to be had with how he can navigate both worlds.
via @maltheniel: #oooooooh#oh I love this#I love David as thoroughly a person of both worlds#and missing Fable but determined to stay out of trouble#and he has a point! involving his people in two wars at once sounds bad!#but he's the only one who could plunge his people into two wars and bring them through victorious#I love the dryad#I love so much that she's willing to sacrifice herself to fulfill her mission#I love the way she goes from teenage stubbornness to the stubbornness of old age#I knew her dying would be the catalyst to get David to move#but whether or not it would be in time to save her I didn't know and it made me nervous#I love so much that you brought in the hands of the king are the hands of a healer!#that's such a gorgeous trope and not enough people use ir#and I love the hints of wider magic in this world of Fable that we just get to glimpse#and want to explore#anyway I really really enjoyed this!!!
David does have a point. He’s a very practical person who’s seen the terrible things that these enemies can do, and Elowen’s asking him to do a very dangerous thing purely on faith. It’s not an easy thing to do! Thankfully, Elowen can outstubborn him (because she does have faith in her mission).
I brought in the dryad’s aging as a way to maintain tension and add a ticking clock, and I’m glad the tension was sustained even though you could see through the narrative tricks.
You caught the LotR reference! It was very intentional (and a nice way to heal Elowen without an extended running-through-Fable scene--I very much wanted the story to end with him going through the door). And actually, as I finished writing this, I realized there was another unintentional LotR reference--I’m forever resentful that the movies took out Aragorn’s triumphant return on the ships, but this story let me write a story that was entirely about the Return of the King.
via @lady-merian: #I’m screeching#Its#Almost like he couldn’t take responsibility for the whole land— not until he was willing to take responsibility for this one individual!#and he was!#But he came to even that point by the hand of Providence#aaaahhhh!#The worldbuilding here is !!!
You are so much smarter than me! I didn’t realize that’s what I was doing until you pointed it out. I guess I knew it, but was thinking about it from the opposite direction? I didn’t want the sword to bloom until he decided to go back to Fable, so I threw in the “in defense of the people” requirement--which would let him misinterpret it as going to war, so he could be blown over when it turned out the prophecy had been referring to this moment instead. But you’re absolutely right--he has to show that he’s willing to take care of one person before he can truly care for the entire kingdom. (And I’m glad the worldbuilding works--it was very much thrown together on the fly, so I’m surprised it held together as well as it did).
via @scarvenartist: #the ending of this gave me SO MANY CHILLLSSSS #okay i LOVE how you used the progressive aging of the dryad to both heighten the tension and move the narrative #i also LOVE how she grows progressively stronger and more direct as she ages #that there's fire in her youth but also certainty and strength in her age #how David goes from intense dismissal to convicted struggle over his calling #there are so many layers to this!! #there's a hint of allegory in it in that he's called to be King in another world #(which is beautifully Lewis-ian) #but he wrestles deeply with unbelief and a desire to keep his own mundane comforts #anyway #just SO VERY GOOD #i'm terribly sorry you had to lose so much of it while you were writing but i really cannot tell#I am going to be thinking about this one for A LONG TIME
Ahhh, thank you so much! So glad the ending worked for you! And glad you caught the narrative tricks behind Elowen’s aging. She does get stronger as she ages, though I wasn’t conscious of it while writing. Part of it’s age, and part of it is frustration at the fact that she’s running out of time. She doesn’t have time to be polite and understanding anymore--this is urgent.
Your allegory comments--I feel psychoanalyzed. David’s struggles are some of my struggles, and you’ve just articulated so much of that struggle in a way I couldn’t have put in words.
(And I’m glad the behind-the-scenes troubles don’t show--the final story’s probably 90-95% the same, but there are pieces that I was very sad to lose).
Again, thanks to everyone who’s commented so far!
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This is a continuation of The truth.
Life goes quite again after the Sects marched into Lotus Pier and demanded answers. Answers they didn’t get, and Jiang Cheng knows none of them are happy with that, but they are leaving him alone, and that’s the only thing that matters.
At least until an invitation for the next Cultivational Conference in the Cloud Recesses comes in.
Jiang Cheng amuses himself for a few moments by imagining how much Lan Wangji hated writing this invitation to him, and then he burns it.
He would rather not go, but seeing as he’s the Sect Leader of one of the four Great Sects he can’t really bow out of this one.
“Xiuying,” Jiang Cheng calls out and he’s not even surprised when Jiang Xiuying steps around the corner mere seconds later, as if he was just waiting for Jiang Cheng to call for him.
“Lurking much?” Jiang Cheng asks with a little shake of his head and Jiang Xiuying shrugs.
“I saw the letter from Gusu Lan. I gathered you might need something after you read it,” he gives back and sits down when Jiang Cheng motions for him to do so.
“It’s the next Cultivational Conference,” Jiang Cheng says and Jiang Xiuying nods, clearly already planning what they need in his head. “It’s in the Cloud Recesses,” he goes on, and effectively stops Jiang Xiuying.
“Oh,” he breathes out, apparently only making that connection now, and Jiang Cheng hates that look he still gets on his face, even after all these years.
“We can go with the same excuse,” Jiang Cheng quietly tells him, because he wants to drag Jiang Xiuying back there as much as Jiang Xiuying wants to go himself, which is not at all.
So far they always managed to get Jiang Xiuying out of that; the Sects take turns in hosting the conference, so they only have to come up with a lie for Jiang Xiuying’s absence every four years, and no one actually dares to ask why Jiang Cheng always shows up without his right hand.
“No,” Jiang Xiuying says, much to Jiang Cheng’s surprise. “Not after what happened here. You’re not going alone.”
“I wouldn’t be alone,” Jiang Cheng reminds him, because he will be taking someone else with him, and Jin Ling will of course be there, but Jiang Xiuying straightens up.
“No, you won’t be,” he gives back, “because I’m coming this time.”
“What if they recognize you?” Jiang Cheng asks and but Jiang Xiuying shakes his head.
“It’s been so long now; they all long think me dead. And I’m no longer wearing blue or the ribbon, I even took a different name. It will be fine,” he says, even though he does look a bit pale.
“There is no need for you to come,” Jiang Cheng tries again. “They won’t do anything—can’t really—and you know what cowards they all are.”
“But cowards get courageous when you gather enough of them,” Jiang Xiuying replies and shakes his head when Jiang Cheng wants to protest again. “Don’t bother. I’m coming.”
“You can’t order me around,” Jiang Cheng snipes back and Jiang Xiuying tilts his head in consideration.
“Can’t I?” he asks and Jiang Cheng wants to argue some more, but then his eyes fall on Jiang Xiuying’s hands and he notices how they shake.
“I don’t need your protection,” Jiang Cheng gently tells him, but Jiang Xiuying shakes his head.
“You have it anyway,” he replies and Jiang Cheng sighs.
“As do you,” he reminds Jiang Xiuying, because for all that Jiang Cheng doesn’t want to start a fight he will if anyone as much as looks wrong at his people.
“I know that,” Jiang Xiuying whispers. “It will be fine.”
Jiang Cheng doesn’t point out that it sounds more like he’s reassuring himself, and instead he lets it go.
Jiang Xiuying is stubborn on the best of days, and this is neither a good day, nor a good situation. And truth be told, Jiang Cheng would feel better with him there as well.
~*~*~
The conference goes well for the first few hours. No one seems particularly happy to have Jiang Cheng there, but everyone is at least showing him the respect he deserves.
Jiang Xiuying is a constant presence at his back, and Jiang Cheng wishes he could shield him from the sight of the Cloud Recesses as much as protect him from anyone else, but this was Jiang Xiuying’s decision to come here and Jiang Cheng has to respect it.
There was a very tense moment when they were first announced where Lan Qiren stared at Jiang Xiuying for longer than either of them were comfortable with, but he didn’t say anything. Jiang Cheng honestly can’t tell if he recognized him or not and it doesn’t sit well with him.
But even hours later Lan Qiren hasn’t called them out, and so Jiang Cheng gradually relaxes again.
“Jiu-jiu!” Jin Ling almost yells as soon as the first break rolls around and he quickly comes to Jiang Cheng’s table.
“A-Ling,” Jiang Cheng greets him, as Jin Ling sits down next to him.
“Should Jiang Xiuying be here?” Jin Ling lowly asks and Jiang Cheng gives him a small smile.
He’s glad Jin Ling seems to have the same regard for his people as he does and he just hopes Jin Ling carries that over to his own Sect as well.
“It was his decision,” Jiang Cheng gives back just as lowly, “there was nothing I could do to stop him.”
“As if you couldn’t outstubborn him,” Jin Ling grumbles and Jiang Cheng smiles in his tea when Jiang Xiuying snorts behind them.
“He can try, young master, but history has shown that he’s not very good at it,” Jiang Xiuying conspiringly tells Jin Ling, much to Jiang Cheng’s chagrin and Jin Ling laughs.
Jiang Cheng finds himself thinking that this conference might not be so bad after all, when of course Wei Wuxian walks up to his table.
Jiang Cheng looks at him for long enough to greet him, before he avoids his eyes, but it doesn’t stop Wei Wuxian from sitting down with them uninvited.
“You have to stop, Jiang Cheng,” Wei Wuxian quietly tells him and Jiang Cheng clicks his tongue.
“Stop what?” he asks, even though he can guess where this is going.
“A girl went missing a few days back,” Wei Wuxian says, voice serious, and Jiang Cheng can just imagine the accusatory look on his face. “Coincidentally you were seen in that area during the same time.”
“So?” Jiang Cheng wants to know and Wei Wuxian makes a frustrated sound.
“What did you do with her?” Wei Wuxian asks him. “She’s barely an adult. Surely you didn’t torture her?”
Fu Zhihao is indeed only barely of age; definitely too young to be married off to a man thrice her age. Too young to be forced to uphold her marital duties. Too young to turn to demonic cultivation in her despair.
“I didn’t,” Jiang Cheng gives back, but instead of reassuring Wei Wuxian he seems to only grow more agitated.
“So you killed her immediately?” he demands to know and Jiang Cheng hangs his head as he closes his eyes.
Why does Wei Wuxian never listen to him?
There’s a reassuring hand at the small of his back, no doubt Jiang Xiuying wordlessly showing his support, and Jin Ling scoots closer to Jiang Cheng as well.
“She was pregnant, you know,” Wei Wuxian tells him as if that fact alone should have made Jiang Cheng reconsider his actions.
When Jiang Cheng found Fu Zhihao, she was no longer pregnant; she burned the child right out of her, using demonic cultivation, screaming the whole time that she would rather be dead than carry her husband’s child.
Not that her husband would ever lay a hand on her again, given how he was only a broken body in the corner but no one was talking about that, it seems.
“She no longer is,” Jiang Cheng says, knowing damn well how his words must sound to Wei Wuxian, but he can’t bring himself to care.
Jiang Cheng has brought Fu Zhihao back to Lotus Pier to entrust her to Jiang Sushan’s very capable hands who had to put her into a healing sleep. Jiang Cheng almost came too late to save her.
He wonders if she woke up by now.
“You have to stop,” Wei Wuxian pleads again, and Jiang Cheng shakes his head. “Even your disciples wouldn’t tell us what you were doing that night,” Wei Wuxian goes on and cold fury spreads through Jiang Cheng. “How can you live, knowing everyone is that terrified of you?”
“How dare you,” Jiang Cheng presses out and he slams a hand on the table.
A hush falls over the room and suddenly all eyes are on them, the tension thick in the air.
Jiang Cheng doesn’t care about that though, because Wei Wuxian has no right to interrogate his people.
“How dare you talk to my people,” he hisses at Wei Wuxian who looks at him with a complicated look.
“Are you that afraid of what they might tell us?” Wei Wuxian asks and Jiang Cheng cannot look at him for a second longer.
“This conversation is over,” Jiang Cheng bites out and Wei Wuxian leaves him be after one long look. It takes a lot longer for everyone else, though, and Jiang Cheng bares his teeth at Sect Leader Yao when he finds him staring.
As soon as he hastily avoids his eyes, Jiang Cheng turns towards Jiang Xiuying.
“Find out who they talked to. See if they are alright,” he instructs, and Jiang Xiuying nods once before he hurriedly leaves the room.
He’s just as worried as Jiang Cheng is.
“You don’t think he hurt them, do you?” Jin Ling pipes up and Jiang Cheng takes a moment to breathe before he turns to him.
“No,” he reassures him, because for all that he wants to strangle Wei Wuxian right now, he doesn’t want Jin Ling to get a completely wrong picture of his uncle. “But a few of my people have bad memories of Wei Wuxian; they participated in the war, or lost everything during it. I just want to see how they are doing,” Jiang Cheng explains as he wrecks his brain who he took with him that night.
Jin Ling clearly wants to say something to that, but before he can open his mouth, Lan Wangji sits down again, signalling that the conference will go on now.
It is only after the conference, that Wei Wuxian and Lan Wangji walk up to him again, and Jiang Cheng rubs his temples against the oncoming headache. He really is tired of dealing with these two.
“What?” he snaps out as soon as they are close enough and his eyes flick over Wei Wuxian, stirring the by now so familiar and hated mix of emotions in his guts, before he firmly looks at Lan Wangji.
“If we find her body, there will be consequences,” Lan Wangji tells him without preamble and Jiang Cheng bites back the urge to roll his eyes at him.
“Good luck with that,” he gives back, because he knows there is nothing for them to find, and he takes great pleasure in seeing the brief clench of Lan Wangji’s jaw.
“Jiang Cheng,” Wei Wuxian starts, but Jiang Cheng is tired of listening to his accusations.
“I will retire now,” he interrupts him with a bow to Lan Wangji, and then simply walks away from them.
Jiang Cheng is not surprised to find both Jiang Xiuying and Jin Ling in his rooms.
“What now?” Jiang Cheng wants to know, because this can mean nothing good.
“I spoke to most of the disciples,” Jiang Xiuying starts, “and they are all okay. You had Gao Wu with you, but the others shielded him and prevented Wei Wuxian from talking to him.”
“Good,” Jiang Cheng breathes out and only explains at Jin Ling’s questioning gaze. “Gao Wu fought in the war. He lost his whole family to Wei Wuxian’s corpses. He’s not dealing well with the fact that he’s back.”
“Ah,” Jin Ling says with a nod and clearly he wants to say something else, but Jiang Xiuying goes on.
“Fu Zhihao woke up. She’s traumatized, as you would expect after what happened, and Jiang Sushan will keep her in the infirmary for a while. Fu Zhihao seems to be reacting badly to men, especially older ones, so the infirmary was divided.”
“Good thinking,” Jiang Cheng agrees. “Maybe a few of the grannies would like to sit with her,” Jiang Cheng goes on and Jiang Xiuying nods, before he gets up, clearly intending to relay that to Jiang Sushan immediately.
Jiang Cheng watches him leave before he gives Jin Ling a look.
“There’s something on your mind,” he states. “Speak.”
“After what you told me, I kept wondering why you didn’t save Mo Xuanyu,” Jin Ling starts and the by now so familiar feeling of failure blooms in Jiang Cheng’s chest.
“Rumours of his demonic cultivation were far spread,” Jin Ling goes on, “so you should have wanted to help him.”
“It took too long for those rumours to reach me,” Jiang Cheng admits. “People were mostly talking about how he’s a lunatic, and a cut-sleeve. The other rumours were too slow.”
“That’s not true, though,” Jin Ling interrupts him. “You weren’t following me on my night hunt in Dafan Mountain. You were on your way to Mo’s Manor, weren’t you?” he asks and Jiang Cheng is so proud of the man his nephew has turned into.
“It’s why you can’t look at Wei Wuxian for long, right? I noticed it before, but today again. It’s because it’s Mo Xuanyu’s body, isn’t it?”
“Yes,” Jiang Cheng admits and reaches out for Jin Ling to tuck him into his side.
His nephew is all grown-up now, but every once in a while Jiang Cheng needs to know that he’s still his little A-Ling. Not that Jin Ling is protesting that move, seeing as he snuggles into his side.
“It’s complicated, looking at Wei Wuxian now,” Jiang Cheng explains. “On the one hand I’m happy that he is back, despite everything that happened between us because he’s still family, but every time I look at him I’m reminded that I failed Mo Xuanyu. And I keep thinking if I had only listened better, if I were quicker I could have saved him, but then Wei Wuxian wouldn’t have come back.”
“I see,” Jin Ling mutters and slings his arms around Jiang Cheng’s middle. “But you saved so many other people.”
“And yet I failed him,” Jiang Cheng whispers and he is sure he will never forgive himself for it.
Neither for failing Mo Xuanyu when he needed Jiang Cheng the most, nor for being glad that he failed him because it means Wei Wuxian is back. The mix of emotions makes him feel sick to his bones and Jiang Cheng hides his face in Jin Ling’s hair.
“I’m not sure you could have saved Mo Xuanyu,” Jin Ling whispers. “He was behaving so strangely at the end. He must have been insane.”
“That’s what fear does to you,” Jiang Cheng gives back. “If he was that far gone he must have been scared out of his mind.”
“Jiu-jiu, you can’t save everyone,” Jin Ling tells him, pushing away from Jiang Cheng to look him in the eyes. “You can’t. You’re just one person, it’s simply not possible.”
“That never stopped him,” Jiang Xiuying suddenly says from behind them and Jiang Cheng only sighs at that.
“Someone has to attempt the impossible,” he replies, glad for Jiang Xiuying’s interruption because it gives him time to blink away the burn of his eyes.
“But that doesn’t mean you have to do it alone,” Jin Ling says and Jiang Cheng frowns at him.
“What?”
“I’m going to help you,” Jin Ling declares. “My people are a bunch of gossipers. I hear a lot, and I can help you.”
“Don’t,” Jiang Cheng tells him and grips his shoulder. “Do not do this.”
“Why not?” Jin Ling wants to know and it’s Jiang Xiuying who speaks up.
“It would paint a target on your back. The other Sects might be afraid to go after Sandu Shengshou, but they wouldn’t have the same reservations towards you. It would make you vulnerable.”
“That’s not what I meant,” Jin Ling says with an eyeroll, but he seems flustered by the obvious worry Jiang Cheng and Jiang Xiuying have for him. “I’m not going to deal with demonic cultivators on my own. I just meant that I could let you know if I hear something. That I could be another pair of eyes and ears for you.”
Jiang Cheng relaxes at his words and lets out a long breath.
“Don’t scare me like that,” he admonishes Jin Ling, who rolls his eyes at him again.
“Don’t jump to conclusions like that,” he bites back and Jiang Cheng flicks his forehead in retaliation.
“Brat,” he mutters. “But it’s not a bad idea,” he then tacks on and Jin Ling beams at him. “But only that!” Jiang Cheng reiterates. “You’re a silent observer and nothing more!”
“Of course,” Jin Ling agrees easily enough and Jiang Cheng just hopes he’ll keep to his promise.
But he does admit that it would help immensely. By now, the other Sects are doing their damnest to keep the rumours away from Jiang Cheng in fear of what he’s going to do to these people, and having Jin Ling as his silent spy would actually help a lot.
Jiang Cheng just hopes he can keep any heat away from Jin Ling while he helps him.
“It will be fine,” Jiang Xiuying mutters from his side, clearly reading Jiang Cheng’s thoughts. “You have us, too. We will help you to keep him safe.”
“I’m not a child,” Jin Ling protests and Jiang Cheng huffs out a breath.
“No, you’re not,” he agrees. “You’re just my very important nephew,” he goes on and watches as Jin Ling goes red in the face.
“Jiu-jiu!” he protests but Jiang Cheng smiles only fondly at him, before he pulls him into his side again.
“Nothing that would put you into danger,” Jiang Cheng tells him again and Jin Ling nods.
“I’ll be careful, I promise.”
“Okay, then,” Jiang Cheng agrees and when Jiang Xiuying smiles supportively at him, it makes Jiang Cheng think that this might just work.
Now with art of the best right hand man
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