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callmemanatee · 30 days
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I made a Mr. Saturn button, boing! Free to use, zoom!
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cheezitofthevalley · 4 months
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ms paint graphics
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chokolat45 · 1 year
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⭐️ My website
25/06/23
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stormology-apk · 2 months
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Is this oddly specific? Yes. Do i care? No. Free to use and credit is not needed. Request opens if anyone wants a specific one
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ferncassette · 2 months
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Updated my websites profile, and it turned out quite nice!
Also a button cuz why not
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mossgreeneddie · 4 months
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Made two 88 x 31 buttons for upcoming elctions! Feel free to use :)
or make better ones
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hellbornsworld · 1 year
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BTS X READER WATTPAD RECOMMENDATIONS(2) ⋆。 ゚ ☁︎。⋆。 ゚ ☾ ゚ 。⋆
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𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟
✨Hostess | BTS X Reader | Author : blingchick | 47 Parts | Completed
"A whore is someone who sells their body; a hostess is someone who entertains guests to make them feel welcomed and loved. There is a difference."
✨𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐑𝐎𝐑 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐄𝐗𝐏𝐋𝐎𝐑𝐄𝐑 | BTS | No Reader | Author : godlycurse | 140 Parts | Completed
In which Kim Taehyung tweets at a Dora the Explorer twt account and gets a creepy dm from them. Soon , he realizes he got himself into some deep sh*t and has to discover who's behind the account before it's to late.
✨Survival | BTS X OC | 1000% | Slow Burn | Author : BangtanArmies | 155 Parts | Completed
A tragic love story filled with pain, betrayals, miseries and deadly plot twists.
✨Buttons | BTS X Reader | Coraline!AU | Author : TaeTae_lyfe | 31 Parts | Completed
"Nothing's changed. You'll go home. You'll be bored. You'll be ignored. No one will listen to you, really listen to you. You're too clever and too beautiful for them to understand. They don't even remember your name."
✨ Mask Parade | BTS X Reader | Author : blingchick | 33 Parts | Ongoing
"Sometimes it's not the people who change, it's the mask that falls off."
✨killjoy | Only BTS | Author : taenology | 50 Parts | Completed
a computer game can't hurt anyone, right?
✨The Keeper's Tale | BTS X Reader | Author : TaeTae_lyfe | 45 Parts | Completed
They witnessed her destruction, They were left to wonder why, She saw nothing but darkness, Though the stars shown in her eyes, But maybe they'd forgotten, When they failed to see the cracks, That a stars light shines brightest, When it starts to collapse.
✨Singularity | BTS x Reader | Author : mociminji | 36 Parts | Ongoing
You were stolen by the devil. He claimed you as his own. Little did he know, you are going to be the death of him.
✨The Seven | BTS X Reader | Author : TaeTae_lyfe | 45 Parts | Completed
"I'm crazy? No, darling. What's crazy is that the world refuses to let me be with you."
✨Black Swan | BTS X Reader | Author : blingchick | 17 Parts | Ongoing
"What are you going to do to me now, Swan?"
✨The 7 Princes | BTS X Reader | Author : FireTiger8 | 82 Parts | Completed
Surprise! Your parents have been keeping a secret from you - you are royal princess and sole heir to the throne. To break the news to you, your parents have sent you to a neighboring kingdom where seven handsome, irresistible princes will teach you all you need to know about becoming the next ruler.
✨The Blue Eyes Series | BTS X Reader | Author : TaeTae_lyfe | 4 Books | Ongoing
# BOOK 1 The Four Kingdoms |
There's a fire in her. If loved correctly, she will warm your entire home. If abused, she will burn it to ash.
# BOOK 2 Pyramids |
She didn't need a crown, because she wasn't a queen.... She was a goddess.
# BOOK 3 Dynasty |
You can say she's crazy, but her eyes see the spirits of the past.... She talks to them.... And they talk back.
# BOOK 4 Mist |
You watch her walk away and it hits you that she is an entire ocean And you were wrong, so very wrong Because you let her go Thinking she was just a girl
✨Gods of the Sea | BTS!Vocal Liner X Reader | Author : FireTiger8 | 87 Parts | Completed
"My name is Captain Jeon Jungkook. I'm here to kidnap you."
✨Badboy | BTS X Reader | OneShots | Author : shooknae | 8 Parts | Completed
7 boys, 7 chapters, 7 different stories
✨Oh My Gospel! | BTS X Reader | Author : mociminji | 88 Parts | Ongoing
In which you are a prude theology student and one day, your sneaky twin brother sent you a link to the livestream of an infamous camboy, Park Jimin.
𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟 𓆝 𓆟 𓆞 𓆝 𓆟
Other Posts:
JUNGKOOK FANFIC RECOMMENDATION (1)
JUNGKOOK FANFIC RECOMMENDATION(2)
JUNGKOOK FANFIC RECOMMENDATIONS(3)
JUNGKOOK FANFIC RECOMMENDATION(4)
ALL BTS MEMBERS WATTPAD RECOMMENDATIONS(1)
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homestuckreplay · 5 months
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Dad Egbert Found Alive In Kitchen
(page 88-90)
IT'S HIM. IT'S DAD TIME. On page 88, we get a dramatic silhouette and a slow zoom into his defining features - pipe, industrial sized baking oven, hat, and a cake big enough to make installing the oven worth it. After teasing him for so long, it feels like a great payoff to have his introduction be such a big moment.
I LOVE the top panel on page 89 - there's no dialogue, but I can hear John's dad saying "I know it's you under that disguise, kid." Given that there's only two of them in the house, I'm not sure what John was expecting, but I admire his resolve and determination.
The really important thing here, though, is 'STRIFE!' on page 90. I wasn't expecting the strife deck to come into play so soon, and definitely not in this context. It's a fascinating panel both in its themes, and in how it's constructed. It does such a good job of showing a parent-child relationship where neither of them are in the wrong; they're both just on completely different pages and struggling to communicate. All John can do is try to run past before his dad forces cake on him, and all Dad can do is try to give John the thing that he spent hours lovingly making. It's actually really sad, if you can look past the fun jester music.
It's also the most interactive panel so far in a story that's had the illusion of interactivity from the start. Usually, the cursor is moved by an invisible hand; on page 31, we can mouse over John's games but not actually click anything, but here we have two actual buttons to click that show us different animations - presumably John and Dad go back and forth like this for a while, and this is the best way to represent it. But knowing that Hussie has dabbled in 'choose your own adventure' type stories before with Bard Quest, I'm wondering if we could see that on a small scale with Homestuck - small branching paths that lead to the same outcome, choosing the route but not the destination, perhaps, which could allow for interesting storytelling but not be too wildly difficult to implement.
A couple of final things - Dad Egbert knows what the fuck he's doing. He lights all 13 candles at once with a single flick of the lighter. Also, John's fridge art is adorable. I want to know when he drew it and how long Dad's had it up there.
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night-at-the-musian · 11 months
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Some of the 88 x 31 buttons I've made for The NatM Search. These were made with @madguth's artwork, used with permission. Thanks Mad <3
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punster-2319 · 3 months
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Ranking the Classic MGM Tom and Jerry Cartoons (Favorite to Least Favorite)
1. Solid Serenade (1946)
2. Trap Happy (1946)
3. Tee for Two (1945)
4. The Cat Concerto (1947)
5. Mouse Trouble (1944)
6. Jerry’s Cousin (1951)
7. Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Mouse (1947)
8. Texas Tom (1950)
9. Heavenly Puss (1949)
10. The Zoot Cat (1944)
11. Cat Fishin’ (1947)
12. Flirty Birdy (1945)
13. The Mouse Comes to Dinner (1945)
14. Springtime for Thomas (1946)
15. Baby Puss (1943)
16. Kitty Foiled (1948)
17. Little Quacker (1950)
18. Mouse in Manhattan (1945)
19. Jerry and the Lion (1950)
20. The Million Dollar Cat (1944)
21. The Truce Hurts (1950)
22. Fit to Be Tied (1952)
23. Quiet Please! (1945)
24. Pecos Pest (1955)
25. Puttin’ on the Dog (1944)
26. The Bodyguard (1944)
27. The Dog House (1952)
28. Safety Second (1950)
29. Part Time Pal (1947)
30. Saturday Evening Puss (1950)
31. Down Beat Bear (1956)
32. The Missing Mouse (1953)
33. Little Runaway (1952)
34. Professor Tom (1948)
35. Cue Ball Cat (1950)
36. Jerry’s Diary (1949)
37. Tom and Jerry in the Hollywood Bowl (1950)
38. Jerry and the Goldfish (1951)
39. The Flying Cat (1952)
40. The Duck Doctor (1952)
41. Sufferin’ Cats (1943)
42. Love That Pup (1949)
43. The Yankee Doodle Mouse (1943)
44. The Invisible Mouse (1947)
45. The Little Orphan (1949)
46. Nit-Witty Kitty (1952)
47. Jerry and Jumbo (1953)
48. Timid Tabby (1957)
49. The Bowling Alley-Cat (1942)
50. Puss Gets the Boot (1940)
51. Hatch Up Your Troubles (1949)
52. Sleepy-Time Tom (1951)
53. Fine Feathered Friend (1942)
54. Two Little Indians (1953)
55. Pet Peeve (1954)
56. Muscle Beach Tom (1956)
57. Smarty Cat (1955)
58. Puss n’ Toots (1942)
59. The Night Before Christmas (1941)
60. The Lonesome Mouse (1943)
61. The Milky Waif (1946)
62. Mouse Cleaning (1948)
63. Mouse for Sale (1955)
64. Posse Cat (1954)
65. The Two Mouseketeers (1952)
66. Touché, Pussy Cat! (1954)
67. Tom and Chérie (1955)
68. Tennis Chumps (1949)
69. Salt Water Tabby (1947)
70. A Mouse in the House (1947)
71. Fraidy Cat (1942)
72. The Midnight Snack (1941)
73. Barbecue Brawl (1956)
74. Royal Cat Nap (1958)
75. Hic-cup Pup (1954)
76. Old Rockin’ Chair Tom (1948)
77. Push-Button Kitten (1952)
78. Slicked-up Pup (1951)
79. Puppy Tale (1954)
80. Triplet Trouble (1952)
81. The Cat and the Mermouse (1949)
82. Casanova Cat (1951)
83. The Framed Cat (1951)
84. Cat Napping (1951)
85. Cruise Cat (1952)
86. That’s My Pup! (1954)
87. Dog Trouble (1942)
88. Little School Mouse (1954)
89. Pup on a Picnic (1955)
90. Robin Hoodwinked (1958)
90. The Vanishing Duck (1958)
92. Just Ducky (1953)
93. Downhearted Duckling (1954)
94. Southbound Duckling (1955)
95. That’s My Mommy (1955)
96. Happy Go Ducky (1958)
97. Tot Watchers (1958)
98. Busy Buddies (1956)
99. Tom’s Photo Finish (1957)
100. Polka-Dot Puss (1949)
101. Smitten Kitten (1952)
102. Life with Tom (1953)
103. His Mouse Friday (1951)
104. Mucho Mouse (1957)
105. Blue Cat Blues (1956)
106. Designs for Jerry (1954)
107. Neapolitan Mouse (1954)
108. Mice Follies (1954)
109. Johann Mouse (1953)
110. Baby Butch (1954)
111. The Flying Sorceress (1956)
112. The Egg and Jerry (1956)
113. Tops and Pops (1957)
114. Feedin’ the Kiddie (1957)
There’s all 114 classic MGM Tom and Jerry cartoons ranked (I’m not ranking the later Gene Deitch or Chuck Jones shorts).
WHAT ARE SOME OF YOUR FAVORITE CLASSIC TOM AND JERRY CARTOONS?
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callmemanatee · 2 months
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I made an 88"×31" web button in honor of Snooty the Manatee. Anyone can download it and place it on their website to keep Snooty's memory alive.💙
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cheezitofthevalley · 4 months
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better be quiet now
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danganhorny42069 · 1 year
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NSFT Prompt masterlist! (219 in total)
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1. Anal
2. Vaginal
3. Cunnilingus
4. Analingus
5. Fellatio
6. Nipple Stimulation
7. Double Penetration
8. Frottage
9. Tribadism
10. Outercourse
11. Fingering
12. Titfucking
13. Hot Dogging
14. Intercrural Sex
15. Scissoring
16. Masturbation
17. Mutual masturbation
18. Pegging
19. Threesome/Moresome
20. Face Sitting
21. Facial Sex
22. Creampie
23. Squirting
24. Cumming
25. Oral Fixation
26. Finger Sucking
27. Wet Dream
28. Dildo
29. Vibrator
30. Butt plug
31. Cock ring
32. Gags
33. Costumes
34. Collar
35. Lingerie
36. Garter belt
37. Corset
38. Stocking/Fishnets
39. Heels
40. Pantyhose
41. Skirt
42. Clothes On
43. Ripped Clothes
44. Dry Humping
45. Coming fast/Untouched
46. Lipstick
47. Bondage
48. Shibari
49. Dom/Sub
50. Dom
51. Sub
52. Leather
53. Latex
54. Suspension
55. Restraints
56. Roleplay
57. Petplay
58. Impact Play
59. Cum Play
60. Body Writting
61. Body Worship
62. Spanking
63. Praise
64. Olfactophilia
65. Forniphilia
66. Klismaphilia
67. Voyeurism
68. Vanilla
69. Extreme Kinky
70. Gentle
71. Rough
72. Power Bottom
73. Service Top
74. Doggy Style (Position)
75. Cowgirl/boy (Position)
76. Reverse cowgirl/boy (Position)
77. 69 (Position)
78. Against the Wall (Position)
79. Face Off (Position)
80. G-Whiz (Position)
81. Lotus (Position)
82. Side by Side (Position)
83. Leg Over Shoulders (Position)
84. Boat (Position)
85. From Behind (Position)
86. Standing Up (Position)
87. Missionary (Position)
88. Reverse Missionary (Position)
89. Spooning (Position)
90. Shuttle (Position)
91. Cat (Position)
92. Amazon (Position)
93. Crossed legs
94. On Your Knees
95. Hair pull
96. Scars
97. Scratching
98. Bitting
99. Teeth
100. Licking
101. Swallowing
102. Begging
103. Pinned Against the Wall
104. Massage
105. Pole dance
106. Lap dance
107. Stripping
108. Teasing
109. Accidental Stimulation
110. Caught
111. First Time
112. Seduction
113. Quickies
114. Solo
115. Multiples
116. Size Difference
117. Distention
118. Overstimulation
119. Orgasm denial
120. Sexting
121. Phone Sex
122. Recording
123. Photo
124. Dirty talk
125. Edging
126. Mirror Sex
127. In the Shower
128. In the Bathroom
129. In the Kitchen
130. In the Car
131. On the Sofa
132. On the Floor
133. On the Table
134. On the Chair
135. At the Beach
136. At the Pool
Cute Soft edition
1. After Care
2. Communication
3. Boundaries
4. Making Rules
5. Preparing
6. Cuddle
7. Spooning
8. Nap
9. Bath
10. Tying
11. Sharing clothes
12. Helping button/zip
13. Hand holding
14. Experimention
15. Silly
16. Laughing
17. Wholesome
18. Massage
19. Distracted
Not quite my cup of tea but it might be interesting for someone Edition
1. Fisting
2. Tickling
3. Felching
4. Spit roasting
5. Degradation
6. Deep Throating
7. Sensory deprivation
8. Shaving/Grooming
9. Oil
10. Wax play
11. Temperature play
12. Food play
13. Exhibitionism
14. Watersport
15. Risky
16. Menophilia
17. Armpit
18. Feet
19. Daddy/Mommy
20. Sounding
21. Sweat
22. Kabeshiri
23. Spit
24. Chastity
25. Fucking machine
26. Sybian
27. Choking
28. On the Window
29. Bukkake
Teratophilia Edition (all humanoid, obviously)
1. Alien
2. Cyborg
3. Robot
4. Slime
5. Centaur
6. Satyr
7. Harpy
8. Lamia
9. Mermay
10. Insectoid
11. Ghost
12. Werewolf
13. Vampire
14. Inccubus
15. Succubus
16. Banshee
17. Mutant
18. Reptilian
19. Oni
20. Cyclops
21. Angel
22. Demon
23. Cat
24. Dragon
25. Fish
26. Octopus
27. Skeleton
28. Clown
29. Mask
30. Teeth
31. Claws
32. Wings
33. Tail
34. Horn/Anthena
35. Body Horror
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Hair Prompts
1. Cut hair.
2. Hair carving.
3. Shave head.
4. Bleach/Dye hair.
5. Try out new haircut/-style/wig/etc.
6. React to new haircut/-style/wig/etc.
7. First grey hair.
8. Grow out grey hair.
9. Grow out hair./Let hair grow long.
10. Notice first changes in hair growth due to (gender-affirming) hormone treatments.
11. Wear a wig.
12. Wear a hijab.
13. Wear a toupee.
14. Wear a cap/hat/etc.
15. Wear a bonnet./Wrap hair in silk scarf.
16. Wear a shower/swimming cap.
17. Wrap hair in towel.
18. Bedhead.
19. Bad hair day.
20. Static hair.
21. Hair transplant.
22. Wash hair.
23. Blow dry.
24. Use hair products.
25. Do hair care routine.
26. Brush/comb hair.
27. Braid/style hair.
28. Hair rollers.
29. Make hair look presentable (again).
30. Remove bobby pins/hijab/etc. (e.g. at the end of the day).
31. Face hidden behind hair.
32. Couple hidden behind curtain of hair.
33. “Mustache” face by using long hair and holding it under the nose.
34. Hair tickles.
35. Bury nose in hair.
36. Smell hair.
37. Twirl hair.
38. Flip hair.
39. Fluff out hair.
40. Throw hair back.
41. Curl hair around finger.
42. Play with hair.
43. Gently pull on strand of hair before it jumps back into place.
44. Run hand through/over hair.
45. Move (a strand of) hair to the side/out of the way.
46. Blow strand of hair out of face/the way.
47. Tuck hair behind ear.
48. Ruffle hair.
49. Kiss on hair/bald head.
50. Caress bald head.
51. Kiss balding spot/receding hairline.
52. Donate hair.
53. Examine hair.
54. Lose hair.
55. Check for lice.
56. Shake out wet hair.
57. Send hair “flying”. (e.g. headbanging, shaking head)
58. Untangle knot.
59. Hair stuck in earring/piercing/button/etc.
60. Hair stuck to lip balm/etc.
61. Chew on hair.
62. Hold hair (back).
63. Pull hair.
64. Pull out hair.
65. Remove something from hair. (e.g. a spider)
66. Put/Stick something in/into hair. (e.g. a flower)
67. Try to not get hair wet.
68. Grow a beard/mustache/etc.
69. Shave off (facial/body) hair.
70. Trim beard/mustache.
71. Compete over who has the best beard/mustache.
72. Comb mustache/beard.
73. Style beard/mustache.
74. Beard/Mustache care routine.
75. Run fingers through beard.
76. Stroke beard.
77. Twirl mustache.
78. Mustache/Beard/Stubbles rub(s) against skin.
79. Beard/Mustache tickles.
80. Pluck/Thread/Shave eyebrows.
81. Run finger(s) through/over eyebrows.
82. Raise eyebrow.
83. Furrow brows.
84. Long eyelashes.
85. Flutter one’s eyelashes.
86. Wet lashes.
87. Make a wish on an eyelash.
88. Nose hair.
89. Pluck chin hair.
90. Wax/Use epilator/etc.
91. Arm hair stuck in watch/bracelet.
92. Play with chest hair.
93. Follow the happy trail.
94. Pubic hair.
95. Hair in mouth.
96. Find hair everywhere. (clothes, cushion etc.)
97. Hair on shower wall.
98. Get hair out of drain.
99. Wind/Wind machine in hair.
100. Hair stands on end.
101. Harm a hair on one’s head.
102. Tear one’s hair out.
103. Let one’s hair down.
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motorsportverso · 3 months
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24h Le Mans 2024, deu Ferrari !!!
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Top 10
1-50-Nielssen\Fuoco\Molina-Ferrari 499 P-Ferrari AF Corse-311 Laps
2-8-Lopez\Kobayashi\De Vries-Toyota GR010-Toyota GR
3-51-Calado\Pier Guide\Giovanazzi-Ferrari 499 P-Ferrari AF Corse
4-6-Estre\L.Vanthorn\Loterer-Porsche 963-Porsche Penske Motorsport
5-7-Buemi\Hirakawa\Hartley-Toyota GR010-Toyota GR
6-5-Campbell\Christenssen\Makowiecki-Porsche 963-Porsche Penske Motorsport
7-2-Bamber\Lynn\Palou-Cadillac V Series R-Cadillac Racing
8-12-Stevens\Nato\Illot-Porsche 963-Hertz Team Jota-Hypercar T
9-38-Button\Hansson\Rasmussen-Porsche 963-Hertz Team Jota-Hypercar T
10-63-Bortolotti\Mortara\Kvyat-Lamborghini SC63-Lamborghini-Iron Lynx +1 Lap
LMP2-Top 3
1-22-Jarvis\Garg\Siegel-Oreca-United Autoesports-297 Laps
2-34-Jakob\Lomko\Novalak-Oreca-Eurointerpol
3-28-Lafargue\De Gerus\Van Uiter-Oreca-Idec Sport
LMP2-Pró-AM-Top 3
1-183-Perrodo\Varrone\Barnicoat-Oreca-AF Corse-297 Laps
2-14-Hyett\Quinn\Deletraz-Oreca-AO by TF +2 Laps
3-65-Sales\Beche\Huffaker-Oreca-Panis Racing +3 Laps
LMGT3
1-91-Shuring\Lietz\Shahin-Porsche 992 GT3 R-Manthey EMA-281 Laps
2-31-Farfus\Galael\Leung-BMW M4 GT3-Team WRT +1 Lap
3-88-Roda\Pederssen\Olen-Ford Mustang GT3-Proton Competition + 1 Lap
4-44-Hartshone\Mies\Tuck-Ford Mustang GT3 -Proton Competition + 1 Lap
5-85-Bovy\Frey\Gatting-Lamborghini Huracan GT3 Evo 2-Iron Dames +2 Laps
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thewebcomicsreview · 2 years
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The Secret Report is a webcomic I am doing. Could you please review it? Please note that the art is a little bit roughin the beginning.
Here's the link: https://secretreport.the-comic.org/comics/#comicimage
Keep in mind that despite the strip format, the comic is serialized (not gag a day) and the strip format was chosen purely to save on time (that's also why in the beginning it is partially in grayscale)
So, first thing jumps out immediately 
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Which is that I literally can not read your comic because the “Support Me Financially” subscribestar link is on top of it. It looks like your header bar is set to position:fixed so it jumps down when I try to scroll to read the comic itself. I get the desire to make the link prominent but this crosses into obnoxious (It’s also very generic, but I’m not a marketer so I won’t comment on that further), and breaks the reading experience because I have to scroll up slightly every page load. Ignoring the site design and getting int-
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Actually I’m not the biggest fan of these nav icons either. You sort of have to be used to Standard Webcomic Site Template to know what they do, or even that they’re buttons at all. That’s more nitpicky, though.
So, I spent like an hour and a half going through the strips one by one and making notes in the way I often do, but after way too long I realized it was useless, because
Strip 2
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Strip 31
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Strip 102
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There’s a remarkably rabid improvement in the presentation, here. Not just the art, but the paneling and world balloons have shot up in quality. Like, the art is still fairly crude and I’m not going to pretend otherwise, but you’re getting way more out of it now that you were originally. For a comic that’s only been going a year and change there’s a pretty significant improvement! 
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I wrote 225 words nitpicking this one panel, but really who cares. Your early comics aren’t indicative of your current work, to the point that “This dialogue from strip 7 makes no sense” isn’t actually useful feedback anymore. And that’s legitimately amazing for how short a time you’ve been working on this. 
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I do think, though, that you’re still having some issues with the word balloons, and I think you should focus on that because it’s probably the highest ratio of “effort spent” vs “output improved” you can get right now. Panel 2 has fifty-six words in a single balloon. The rule of thumb is 25 words max in a single balloon, and 35 words in a single panel. I’d recommend that you, and anyone writing comics, get in the habit of counting your words, and either draw more panels to fit them all in an aesthetically pleasing way, or try to cut your dialogue down. (”Thank you Admiral. The calls for violence from the human religious leaders make it clear we’re not wanted here anymore” is 20 words and contains most of the key information)
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I would also recommend giving a bit more flow to the logical flow of the conversation. Here, Birvoth says the problems of this world are “Inequality, Slavery, Lack of Social Mobility, and Arrogant Leaders” and Soria tells him not to generalize all humans. But....he didn’t. All four of humans problems he lists are social problems about how some groups of humans oppress others, not “humans are greedy”, so Soria’s objection doesn’t make any sense. 
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He did generalize them in the previous strip, but then he walked it back to talk about social problems and Soria has this kind of delayed response
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Shuffling the panels like this makes the conversation flow smoother, making Soria’s objection better time while having the interesting side effect that now Birvoth appears to be walking it back in response to her. Which you may or may not consider a positive, but that’s the kind of thing I’d encourage you to think about. (Strips 88 and 89 have a similar delayed response thing happening, where the woman says “you can’t help” and then Lemmy stands around for two panels before starting the next strip with “No I’m pretty sure I can help”).
This might be presumptuous, but I get the sense this kind of thing and the word balloon issues that you don’t write out your dialogue before drawing the strip. I think it might be a helpful exercise to try writing a movie-style “script” for your comic, and then putting it down for a bit, then coming back to give it a once-over with fresh eyes and try to edit it down. I think that might help you catch this kind of stuff and find your own solutions to it.
I look forward to seeing what your comic looks like next year. You’re improving at a pretty good pace! 
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