#RR rewrite

[poisonpercy]

“The changes are what Rick wanted so if you don’t like it, it’s on you.” This is literally a reply on a comment that I left on a tiktok that was explaining what someone did and didn’t like about the latest pjo episode 🙄 Rick can’t even remember what happens in his own books and has been butchering his own characters since the creation of heroes of olympus, that’s not the comeback you think it is. When a show is marketed as a faithful adaptation when it is more accurately a rewrite, people have a right to criticize the show. You aren’t getting a gold medal for liking the show in its entirety. Get off your high horse and let people discuss the show

[ofswordsandpens]

me watching walker and leah act their little hearts out as percy and annabeth:

me when I think about how much the show has missed the mark on characterizations, motivations, foreshadowing, fight scenes, and the energy of the entire book:

[starryluminary]

Ridonculous Race but Noah is friends with Owen part 4: Don't talk to him like that.

I would like to apologize for how ugly this one is I was So Sleep Deprived while making it. I'd also like to mention that this series is just about fixing Noah and Owen's relationship in RR, so Nemma is going to be reflected in it going forward (as much as I really really really don't want it to be oh my god)

Transcript:

Image 1 Kitty: Click.

Image 2 Owen: Oh- exploding chocolate cheese cake!

Image 3 Emma: Camera. It's CAMERA! She said "click"- how did you not get that?

Image 4 Noah: Relax, pretty lady. He would of gotten it eventually.

Image 5 Emma: By the time we got to the airport, maybe. I don't know how you do it. Noah: He's my friend. The antics he makes are something you learn to like because of that.

Image 6 Emma: Whatever.

Image 7 Owen: ...

Image 8 Owen: "Pretty Lady"? Noah: Shut up.

[notseaweedbrain]

OK so I know that I’ve shit on both adaptations of the PJO books (cry about it) but I will tell you this… I do it out of love for the series!

This book series literally saved my life. I’m not joking at all. (TW: self-harm mentioned) I promised my therapist that instead of ending my life early… I would read just one more chapter of Percy Jackson. No joke. I still do it to this day.

Excuse me for being extremely passionate about this series so much that I can take the “Rick Riordan hype-train”™️ blinders off and ultimately critique it.

I saw that the show was renewed for a second season. I won’t be watching it. Riordan promised a book accurate adaptation of the series and he ultimately lied to the fanbase. The man was so adamant about it being different from the movies that he forgot what was actually supposed to go on screen.

Every time I think of those books, I think of my happy place, my home.

I tuned into the first episode in a bright orange camp half blood shirt, blue cookies and pizza, (as Percy would) and my room completely decked out in blue lights. I felt safe. I felt like I was going to the one place I felt understood. I had hope for it let me make that clear. I didn’t want to hate it.

I walked away from the first episode, fairly excited about what was to come. I was happy. I re-watched it multiple times. It felt really faithful. I found myself every week after that feeling like I was being killed inside.

I will forever love the books. Every time I travel I bring at least one of the original five with me everywhere I go. I am a passionate fan. I have a Greek mythology tattoo sleeve and Riptide resides all the way down my arm.

Once again, I reiterate, that the Percy Jackson books saved my life and continue to do so. I will always thank Riordan for writing the originals.

There’s my story and my one original post a month

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[total-drama-brainrot]

kitty and noah play roblox doors together send tweet

[sparkysparklightning]

here's chapter two of the lost hero of my HoO rewrite-au-thingie! featuring the grand canyon scene (with changes), some smidges of valgrace, first appearances of katie, connor, butch, and drew, connor ready to tear jason a new one, and some cameos of percy and annabeth!

hope you guys like it, and thanks for checking it out!!

[deviousdiesel]

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[criminalmutantsins]

How I Would Write Jason in TOA?

Sorry if any of this feels disjointed. This is my first time doing a character and plot rewrite.

I think Jason had loads of potential to be a great character, but it was messed up in TBM. 

If you want more details, I wrote a post about my thoughts: https://www.tumblr.com/criminalmutantsins/698742446518091776/jason-grace-deserved-better-this-is-just-my?source=share

To add on to the post, I’ll explain what I would change. 

Jason and Piper are together in TBM, but there would be dialogue explaining how it was tough “starting over” their relationship(like Blood of Olympus very much hinted) and that they had to do individual soul searching before building a better foundation for their relationship. Piper would have doubts about their relationship and still question if Aphrodite and Hera’s interference is why they are together.

Piper’s father would still lose his money but earlier, so Piper would move back to Oklahoma. Jason would go back and forth between Camp Half-Blood, building plans for the shrines. They still communicate except as friends. This would give them time to individuate and learn more about themselves(they would be broken up). Piper would realize her bisexuality and become attracted to Shel. They date, but it only last for a few months because Piper still has feelings for Jason. Her doubts of the relationship are resolved; however, she waits so she doesn’t pressure Jason. Speaking of Jason, after working for months on the shrines, he wishes to take a break and start acting/doing things for himself(hang out with friends, relaxing, etc). Jason’s feelings for Piper are still the same and, after a while, he talks to her about it. They get back together with Jason going to Oklahoma to be closer to Piper and try living a regular life. This could be good representation on how relationships take a lot of work and time, but can be worth it when there is love and communication. 

By the time The Burning Maze starts, Jason and Piper have been together for a month and are a stronger team. However, Jason is having trouble adjusting to having a normal because of his sense of responsibility to be a leader and protector. Between the couple getting together and TBM, they find another entrance to the Labyrinth and Jason learns about the prophecy. Safe to say, he is really stressed.

Instead of the prophecy saying that either Jason or Piper would die, I would change it to either one having to make a great sacrifice. Jason would still fight Caligula. It would be monumental for Jason’s character, and a big fight. Jason would lose, though he would escape with the group with grievous injuries and would be out of commission for the rest of the book. These injuries would result in Jason being paralyzed from the waist down, sacrificing a big part of his identity- being a strong fighter, something he is mostly known for. Jason would have to learn to adjust to the change and further learn more about himself. Though, thanks to Leo’s skills and a battle-ready wheelchair, Jason can still fight, he decides to mostly stay in the sidelines and be a tactician.

[noahtally-famous]

whenever I see a heterosexual ryan take, the jacyan part in me dies a little (and then emerges brighter than ever like the phoenix from the ashes that it is)

[nightly-ruse]

Archaic Lake Cats Culture

Before the tribes and before the forest clans there was the Lake Cats. They acted much more like real cat clowders but had clear differences.

The single group would travel around the lake during different seasons. In Greenleaf they’d settle in the marshes, in Leaffall they’d settle in the lush forests, in Leafbare they’d settle in the river lands, and in Newleaf they’d settle in the sparse fields. A cat is given a name at birth and they stuck to that name unless specifically changing it for a special reason examples being Half Moon, Fallen Leaves, and Broken Shadow. A single spiritual leader leads the group across the territories and performs ceremonies like the honor ceremony, choosing when to travel to the next camp, and sleeping next to the sparkling pool.

The honor ceremony is when a young cat is sent into the tunnels at dusk tasked to traverse them to find their new self and re-emerge at dawn to mark themselves as a full grown cat. This is done every newleaf no matter how old a cat is because this is when the Tribe is settled at the field territory right next to the sparkling pool (later the moonpool)

The changing of camps is decided by the current leader usually as the first signs of the changing seasons show up

Sleeping at the Sparkling Pool was a event held every newleaf after all young cats became adults and done by all cats of the group who could make the journey. Here the cats would sleep atop the smooth rocks or directly at the pools side if they were particularly close to the Stars and speak with their ancestors. While some dreamed of catching prey or seeing a loved one others would hear whispers of the future

Sharing of prey was a well practiced tradition of making sure even the weakest or unable cats got some food. This is a common thing across all forms of the original Lake Cats

It was a harsh Leafbare when the Lake cat Leader Half Moon received a whisper of the soon coming future. A massive fire would strip and destroy the newly sprouting fields, if the cats stayed they would dwindle and die out. But where they would go was not foreseen. After telling the well respected Smooth Stone (prev. Stone Song) about what she saw the cats put it to a vote of where they would move, to the mysterious mountains or unknown lands. Casting stones they came to a tie. Unsure of what to do the Lake Cats broke apart, Half Moon’s group heading to the mountains and Smooth Stone’s group heading off to strange lands. Both groups would end up living but in very different ways. Half Moon’s followers becoming the new Tribes of Rushing Water and Smooth Stone’s becoming the Sisters.

[cryptidblossomd]

NOW! I COULD FORMAT THIS LIKE A NORMAL PERSON BUT NO <3

Look at Me my friend's au!!! Please and thank you

Took them straight from my TikTok because....I ain't writing all that again-

BUT HERE IS NOW SOME INFO!! Please be nice I am ass at grammar and spelling

OUR AU IS CALLED REVISIT AND REWRITE

It's very VERY vaguely last ronin meaning it's only takes after the fact that all the brotherz are dead except one LMAO. Also it's Donnie and not Mikey. It's called Rewrite and Revisit

Donnie or for simplicity Indigo....Indigo is the eldest of his brothers. Splinter wasn't necessarily a bad father but he wasn't there even moreso then normal. So Indie would be the done to tend to all the brothers needs being around 3 years older then then rest he took responsibility for everything that happened. He made it until 16...when suddenly his brothers were found ill. Very ill, no one knows how they got this sickness or where it came from but it wasn't leaving any time soon. This caused Indigo to get desperate with his actions, of course at first he was a little worried but not like his bros couldn't handle a little cold so he took care of them but gave them their space, after about a week he started worrying more. They weren't really getting any better....that's not good, he started hanging around them making sure their needs were met but would still get away sometimes. Week three they started getting worse, the fevers, the sweating, the loss of appetite and the most worrisome they wouldn't talk...they would just groan about how much pain their were in.

[nukacoola]

How do you write a smart and witty character when you’re stupid help I’m crying and bleeding out

[sundaemuddysucks]

starting a project then immediately losing motivation to continue it<<<<<<

[rosezemlya]

randombutloved said: I don't think Link would want his help after meeting Rauru for the first time 😂 but still a good point haha

From the notes I was writing up for myself as I was prepping to go through and do a re-write of the Return, on describing Rauru's relationship with Link:

Link - took care of him magically in the Sacred Realm while he slept away the seven years between the child period of Ocarina of Time and the adult period, woke him up when the time was right, delivered several extremely bad pieces of news to him in the following minutes, and officially launched his terrible, horrible, no good, very bad adult period - not ENTIRELY Rauru's fault, but it's hard for Link not to put some of that on his shoulders anyway

So... you're definitely not WRONG...

[starryluminary]

Ggghhrrraahhh I have a new series idea for rewriting Mal in all stars but I cant keep making new stuff before I finish the OLD STUFF I CANT KEEP DOING THIS

[sparkysparklightning]

chapter three of the lost hero from my HoO rewrite au is out!! featuring a piper who has a different backstory relating to the wilderness school, a different relationship with her lineage, and more or less a pretty thorough character makeover!

also changes to the aphrodite cabin!

plus special featurings of katie & connor dynamics, piper getting into a mini spat with connor, a kayla knowles cameo, and of course rachel getting possessed

thank you for reading and hope y’all enjoy if you do!!