#this is a big undertaking esp bc i'm tryna streamline plots lmao
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The Deca S1E0: An Introduction to the Deca || Recorded Changes
Grammatical Fixes: Corrected multiple minor grammatical errors (capitalization/punctuation).
Majorly Overhauled Select Paragraphs: Rewrote significant portions of select paragraphs, particularly in the first half.
Removed “Fact” with No Source: Could not find my source for a stated number resulting in its removal.
Edited Word Choices: Corrected passive tense and switched a handful of words to read better.
Final Word Count: -3
#i decided i want to be transparent so i will be posting these <3#feel free to block this tag if u don't care ->#deca fic revision#visuals will be different every time bc i'm just having fun with it#also there will probably be gaps between chapters because like#this is a big undertaking esp bc i'm tryna streamline plots lmao
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