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Most directionally aware DnD Party

Massive artfight attack featuring

@moiderahart

@comicwaterz

@thepossumbat

@viladee

@desnian

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I've updated my Commissions to include a new service

You can go find them using this link: http://ko-fi.com/ma3studios

Or contact me via Discord (tortoisenotturtle)

Unlimited Slots

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Art made for Juneteenth

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The Bird of Death, a tall tale among Skywings

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Dirge scolds you ASMR

Also I got to read-in/listen to @amtrax record for @killjamxxx 's EP7 LIVE (& was shitting myself the entire time). Do you know how scary it is to physically hear Joe Dirge in the same call as you, IN REAL TIME. Anyways killer performances by ALL – Im episode seven's Number One FAN

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Dirge scolds you ASMR

Also I got to read-in/listen to @amtrax record for @killjamxxx 's EP7 LIVE (& was shitting myself the entire time). Do you know how scary it is to physically hear Joe Dirge in the same call as you, IN REAL TIME. Anyways killer performances by ALL – Im episode seven's Number One FAN

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Im exploding im glad you enjoy her AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Deadheat II, an OC made for the Killjam XXX audio drama

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HUH WHAT THE FUCK I GOT FAN OC ART OF MY OC SISHWONAPWP92U3I483829AKOSHDOENENWL?!?!?×*×?!?2??@?2?@?!?

Deadheat II, an OC made for the Killjam XXX audio drama

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Queens sippin' wine and chilling in a hot tub

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Deadheat II, an OC made for the Killjam XXX audio drama

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Sinners was really good

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Wonder Woman Pro-Wrestling AU: Villains

I wanted to use some of her lesser known villains

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Wonder Woman Pro-Wrestling AU by me

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Finished Ep 1 of @killjamxxx and made fanart that took way too long, lol

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Saw this on Twitter and I obligatory need to share it

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Writing Tips

Punctuating Dialogue

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➸ “This is a sentence.”

➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.

➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”

➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”

➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”

➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”

➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.

“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.

“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”

➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”

➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”

However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!

➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.

If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)

➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“

“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.

➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.

➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”

➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.

“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”

➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.

“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”

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Buff Yukari