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đȘChapter 5 : The Knife in Your Boot
The giant kneels beside you, his voice heavy, almost human in its calm.
âWeâre not here to hurt your village. We came for the slavers. Thatâs all.â
You stare at him.
At his bloodied hands.
At the corpses behind him.
And something erupts inside your chest. A fire thatâs been burning for years. Your parents. The hunger. The slavers that walked these streets like gods. The fear. The way this monster lifted you like a rag. And now he dares to speak to you as if youâre a child?
No.
Youâre not a child.
You spit.
Right in his face.
The glob of spit strikes his cheek, sliding down the side of his jaw. His expression doesn't change â not immediately â but the silence around you does. Even the chaos on the dock feels distant now.
"Youâre all monsters," you snarl, your voice hoarse with hate. âYou think you're better than them? Youâre just another kind of beast! You came here to kill, and now you pretend to care? Go to hell.â
Tiger blinks slowly.
Behind you, Arlong growls, low and venomous.
And in that moment, your hand shoots to your boot.
Fast.
Trained.
Your fingers wrap around cold steel â the second blade, the one no one ever sees.
With a twist and a shout, you launch yourself forward, aiming for Tigerâs side.
The blade flashes through the airâ
âonly to be stopped by a single massive hand, catching your wrist in an iron grip.
âDonât,â Tiger says. Not angry. Not shouting. Just disappointed.
But youâre not done.
Your body spins on instinct, and your blade finds a new target â the one who really deserves it.
Arlong.
He was the one who grabbed you. Who looked at you like meat. Who wanted you dead.
And he never expected you to come back swinging.
Your knife sinks into his forearm.
He howls â a sound like metal scraping against bone â and jerks back. Blood spurts across the dirt. You twist the blade for good measure before he flings you back with a roar.
âYou little BITCH!â
You hit the ground hard, sliding on your hip, breath knocked out of you. You scramble to your feet, knife still clenched, your face wild with fury.
Arlong storms forward, blood dripping from his arm, eyes glowing with rage. "Iâll KILL you for that!"
But before he reaches you, Tiger is there.
He grabs Arlong by the shoulder and slams him back a step.
âEnough!â
âShe stabbed me!â
âSheâs a human girl who lost everything! What did you expect?!â
âYou said it yourself, Tiger! Theyâd kill us without blinking!â
âAnd what do we become if we start killing back the same way?!â
The crew has gone quiet. Even the chaos of the village seems to pause for a heartbeat. All eyes are on you.
You stand, trembling, panting, your knife held tight, blood smeared across your knuckles.
You donât cry.
You donât beg.
You donât run.
You just stand there, staring at monsters⊠and daring them to come closer.
Tiger turns to you again. His voice is lower now. Measured.
âYou hate us. I understand. Maybe one day youâll see us for what we really are. Maybe not.â
âBut if you try to stab another one of my crewâŠâ
He steps forward, looming over you, shadows curling around his massive form.
âYouâd better aim for the heart next time.â
He turns and walks away, leaving the air cold behind him.
Arlong sneers, cradling his wound, staring at you with death in his eyes.
âYou shouldâve let me kill her, Tiger. Youâre making a mistake.â
But you donât care.
Because for the first time in your lifeâŠ
You didnât run.
You fought back.
And monsters or notâŠ
You drew blood.

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đ©žChapter 4 : Eyes like Blades
You try to move quietly, shifting from one ruined alleyway to the next. The chaos at the docks is still raging â shouts, screams, the crash of shattered wood and fire crackling against the night air. You slip behind an old cart, but the shadows no longer feel safe. You need to find somewhere deeper, darker.
Then it happens.
A flicker of movement â a shape watching from the edge of the fray. You feel it before you see him. You turn slowly, and your eyes lock with his.
He stands just a dozen steps away. One of them.
His skin is a sickly shade of blue-gray, long jagged nose protruding from his face like a weapon. AÂ saw. His teeth, sharp and yellowed, poke from his lips even at rest. His frame is lean but powerful â the size of an adult man, maybe more â but itâs not his body that holds you frozen.
Itâs his eyes.
Eyes full of violence. Of rage. Of something that goes deeper than the hate you see in men. This isnât fear or fury â this is resentment. Centuries of it.
You want to move. Gods, you want to run. But your legs wonât obey. Your fingers tighten around your knife, but you know, even without trying, it wouldnât matter.
He doesnât say a word. Neither do you.
You just look at each other.
The world disappears. The noise, the chaos, even your own breath. Itâs just you and him, and the weight of that gaze pressing down like the ocean itself.
Then your body joltsâfight or flight finally takes over.
You spin on your heel and run.
Your boots slap against stone and mud, heart slamming in your chest. You duck past broken fences, leap over debris. You donât look back.
Until you feel it.
Fingers like steel clamp down on your collar, jerking you backward mid-step. Youâre lifted off the ground like a sack of grain. Your knife slips from your hand and hits the dirt.
"Gotcha," the Fish-Man growls.
His voice is guttural. Cruel. His breath smells like salt and blood.
He dangles you in the air, turning toward the others. Toward the one they call Tiger.
You squirm and kick, but he barely notices.
"Hey, Tiger!" he shouts, starting to walk. âFound one. Human girl. She was hiding.â
A taller Fish-Man turns â massive, with skin like stone and a heavy, slow gait. You recognize him instantly. The tattoo of a sun scorched across his chest. The eyes that carry centuries of pain.
Fisher Tiger.
He sees you. His eyes widen a fraction. His brow lowers.
The saw-shark keeps walking. His grip tightens.
âShe was spying. Could be working with the slavers,â he growls. âShould I kill her?â
Tiger doesnât answer immediately.
You stare down at the ground, your boots swinging inches above the dirt. Your voice wonât come. Your chest is burning with fear and shame and rage all tangled together.
âPut her down, Arlong,â Tiger finally says, voice low and heavy.
âSheâs human,â the shark â Arlong â spits.
âSheâs a child.â
âSo what? You think theyâd spare one of ours if the roles were reversed?â
Tiger steps forward now. Thereâs something terrifying in his calm. âI said put her down.â
Arlong's nostrils flare. His grip loosens slightly⊠then, with a grunt, he drops you. You hit the ground hard and roll to your side, coughing.
âDonât make me regret it,â he growls, looming over you one last time before turning his back.
Tiger kneels, towering beside you.
âYou,â he says. âWhatâs your name?â
You clutch your side, eyes wide, unable to speak.
He doesn't push. âWeâre not here to hurt your village. We came for the slavers. Thatâs all.â
You stare at him. At the blood dripping from his knuckles. At the bodies behind him.
They say monsters come from the sea.
But these ones walk like men. And some of them talk like them too.

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đŠChapitre 3 : Monsters Among Us
You press your back against the cold, cracked wall of a broken warehouse, every nerve screaming in your chest. Your eyes widen as the figures step onto the village docksâFish-Men, for the very first time in your life. They tower over the humans like giants. Even the smallest among them would swallow any adult man whole if they wished. Their skin glistens with scales in shades of blue, green, and grey; their eyes burn with a fierce wildness youâve only seen in nightmares. There are women among them, too â lithe and fierce, moving with the deadly grace of predators. And some of these Fish-Men are younger than you, but even they dwarf the humans around you.
Your breath catches as you watch one of themâa hulking hammerhead with sharp scars running down his broad shouldersâgrab a slave trader by the collar.
âYour reign ends today,â the Fish-Man growls, voice like thunder beneath the waves.
The traderâs eyes flash with defiance. âYou monsters think you can just take over? We wonât let you.â
Before he can finish, a brutal punch sends him flying through a stack of crates, crashing with a sickening thud. The Fish-Manâs companions donât hesitate â one lashes out with tentacles like whips, another spins a pair of gleaming blades, slicing down two men who rushed forward.
You choke on a gasp. They kill with terrifying ease, each move a deadly dance honed by years of suffering and rage.
Nearby, a young Fish-Woman with sleek violet skin and glowing eyes darts silently between the chaos, her inky tentacles slipping through shadows like smoke. You canât tear your gaze away.
âVarka, donât get careless!â a gruff voice calls out. Itâs the captain â Fisher Tiger, the giant Arapaima Fish-Man with the blazing sun tattoo across his chest. He moves with calm authority, even as violence erupts around him.
âThey brought this on themselves,â Varka hisses, disappearing into the crowd like a shadow.
Your heart pounds wildly. Youâve never seen killing like this. These creaturesâtheyâre monsters, just like the stories. But thereâs something else beneath the blood and fury... something almost human.
A child screams nearby, and you blink, suddenly aware of the chaos all around you. The world you knew is crumbling beneath the shadow of the black sun.

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â”ïžChapter 2 : The Black Sun
You were raised in a village where fear ruled every whispered story and every cautious glance. They called the monsters âFish-Menââgiant beasts from the depths of the sea, merciless killers who would drag any human under the waves without a second thought. The books you sneaked to read at night told tales of these creatures, wild and brutal, born to destroy.
Now, as you hide behind broken crates near the shore, your breath shallow and heart hammering, you see it: an enormous ship cutting through the waves like a shadow made flesh. Its sails are black as night, and at its center burns a dark red sunâa symbol youâve only heard in rumors, whispered in fear and awe.
Since last night, even the slave tradersâruthless men who made fortunes from painâhave been arming themselves. The moment they saw the black death approaching, the villageâs desperate few took up whatever weapons they could find.
You can hear shouting, the clash of hurried preparations. No one knows if the sun will bring salvation or destruction.
You clutch your knife tighter. The legends are alive. And your world is about to change forever.

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đșïžChapter 1 : The Edge of the Sea
You grip the worn hilt of your knife as the salty wind bites your face. The coastal village is barely a shadow beneath the smoke rising from distant fires. Marines have come againâraiding, burning, dragging away those too weak to run. Youâve lost count of how many times this has happened, how many faces have vanished into the dark underbelly of the slave trade.
Your fists clench. The blood of your father, slain for daring to resist, runs cold in your veins. Your mother, taken by sickness, left you alone in a world that wants you broken.
But youâre not broken.
You move through the shattered streets like a ghost, unseen and unforgiving. The ocean calls beyond the ruined docksâa promise, a curse. You donât know what lies past the horizon, only that it might hold your salvation⊠or your doom.
Suddenly, distant splashes catch your ear. Ships. Not Marine vessels. Larger, marked by a blazing sunâa symbol of freedom youâve only heard whispered in terrified stories.
You freeze, heart pounding. Fish-Men pirates? The myths of monsters under the waves come alive before your eyes. But maybe⊠maybe theyâre something else.
You take a shaky breath, gripping your knife tighter. Whatever awaits, youâll face it on your own terms.

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đ”ïž OC â My Character
đ§ââïžÂ Sora
Species: Human Woman
Age: 14 at the beginning of the story
Role: Orphan from a very poor coastal village, often destroyed and ravaged by the Marines or slave traders. Her father was killed when she was very young for attempting to rebel, and her mother recently died from illness.
Personality: Insolent, rebellious, violent, and always carries a knife. Will fight to her last breath. Has never seen a Fish-Man in her life.
Skills: Clever, manipulative, and skilled at moving unnoticed.
Design: 14-year-old girl, long wavy brown hair, beautiful smile, piercing eyes.

Oh and yeah it clearly might be a self insert
hope its not too weird
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đ OCs:
đŠÂ Varka
Species: Vampire Squid Fish-Woman
Age: 17 at the beginning of the story
Role: Assassin / Night scout
Personality: Cold, observant, silent. Loyal to Tiger, despises Arlong, former slave.
Skills: Mastery of black ink in stealth combat, camouflage, lightning-fast attacks with her bladed tentacles.
Design: Long body, purple and black skin, eyes glowing in the dark, tribal mask.
đ Dregon
Species: Leafy Sea Dragon Fish-Man (rare predator)
Age: 30 at the beginning of the story
Role: Breaker / Protector of freed slaves
Personality: Impulsive, loud-mouthed but big-hearted, acts like an older brother.
Skills: Wields a massive club made of hardened seaweed and shells. Can generate underwater shockwaves.
Design: Massive build, dorsal fins sharp like blades, reddish skin.
đ§ââïžÂ Zelya
Species: Dolphin Mermaid
Age: 13 at the beginning of the story
Role: Singer / Crew morale booster
Personality: Lively, dreamy, full of hope. Loves stories and humans.
Skills: Her song calms minds, disorients enemies, or boosts morale. Moves very quickly underwater.
Design: Silver tail, long turquoise hair, seashells embedded in her arms.
đ Â Thakos
Species: Archerfish Fish-Man
Age: 25 at the beginning of the story
Role: Sharpshooter
Personality: Calm, calculating, always stays in the background. Loyal to Jinbei and Tiger, former slave.
Skills: Fires harpoons from marine crossbow-like weapons with extreme precision. Can pierce ship hulls.
Design: Driftwood armor, focused eyes, striped fins.
đ§ââïžÂ Nalia
Species: Swordfish Fish-Woman
Age: 16 at the beginning of the story
Role: Swordswoman / Tigerâs close bodyguard
Personality: Serious, silent, deeply loyal. Friendly rivalry with Jinbei â many believe they will eventually mate, former slave.
Skills: Wields two ultra-thin swords, spinning them underwater like slicing fins.
Design: Slim, elegant, long dorsal fin, mask over her eyes like a headband.
đ Grelto
Species: Giant Grouper Fish-Man
Age: 16 at the beginning of the story
Role: Navigator and shipwright
Personality: Philosopher, protective, former slave.
Skills: Reading currents, marine architecture, can swallow objects and spit them out at high speed.
Design: Broad belly, massive arms, spiral tattoo.
đŠÂ Kiri-Kiri
Species: Mantis Shrimp Fish-Woman
Age: 22 at the beginning of the story
Role: Saboteur / Scout
Personality: Hyperactive, cheeky, loves explosions, sleeps with Tiger and other crew members.
Skills: Uses her pistol-like fists to punch at the speed of sound, creating destructive shockwaves.
Design: Small antennae on her head, chitin armor, predatory grin.

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đŠđ Sun Pirates
đ±Â Captain:
Fisher Tiger
Species: Giant Arapaima Fish-Man
Age at the time of the crew: 25 at the beginning of the story
Role: Founder and Captain of the Sun Pirates
Personality: Brave, charismatic, deeply scarred by slavery. Hates humans but refuses to pass on this hatred.
Skills: Colossal physical strength, extremely powerful swimmer, natural charisma.
Design: Dark-skinned, imposing build, bare-chested, sun tattoo on his chest.
đ Crew Members:
đŠÂ Jinbei
Species: Whale Shark Fish-Man
Age at the time: 18 at the beginning of the story
Role: Fighter / Fisher Tiger places great hopes in him
Personality: Calm, loyal, thoughtful. Deeply admires Tiger but believes in the possibility of coexistence with humans.
Skills: Master of Fish-Man Karate, exceptional defense, water projection techniques.
Design: Massive build, square face, traditional clothing.
đŠÂ Arlong
Species: Saw Shark Fish-Man
Age at the time: 16 at the beginning of the story
Role: Brutal fighter / Fisher Tiger wishes not to pass his rage and hatred of humans onto him. Former slave, born into slavery, freed by Tiger at 13.
Personality: Impulsive, cruel, racist towards humans. Does not approve of Tigerâs ideals.
Skills: Razor-sharp bite, formidable physical strength, fast swimmer, saw-like nose used as a weapon.
Design: Initially the size of an adult human but will grow over the years to more than 2.60m, muscular, pronounced jaws, long serrated nose.
đŠÂ Aladine
Species: Hammerhead Shark Fish-Man
Age at the time: 25 at the beginning of the story
Role: Shipâs doctor
Personality: Discreet, intelligent, protective. Highly respected among his peers.
Skills: Aquatic medicine, knowledge of poisons, underwater combat.
Design: Hammer-shaped head, often bare-chested with a marine medical kit.
đ Octo (Hatchan)
Species: Octopus Fish-Man
Age at the time: 19 at the beginning of the story
Role: Versatile fighter / Ink shooter
Personality: Kind, naive, loyal, sociable despite his intimidating appearance.
Skills: Can wield several swords simultaneously using his six arms, mastery of ink to blind and disorient enemies.
Design: Compact body, pale pink skin, six muscular arms, large expressive eyes, tribal tattoos on arms.
đŠÂ Smack
Species: Seahorse Fish-Man
Age at the time: 16 at the beginning of the story
Role: Fighter
Personality: Reserved, mysterious, âcoolâ and laid-back attitude. Like Arlong, he was born a slave.
Skills: Uses powerful water spits.
Design: Same height as Arlong, Arlongâs best friend, pale blue-green skin.
đŠÂ Kuroobi
Species: Hammerhead Shark Fish-Man
Age at the time: 17 at the beginning of the story
Role: Fish-Man Karate expert / Elite fighter
Personality: Proud, loyal, disciplined, highly respectful toward Arlong and Tiger, but wary of humans.
Skills: Grand master of Fish-Man Karate, powerful punches and kicks, fast and agile swimmer.
Design: Wide hammer-shaped head, visible scars, simple attire (loose pants), warrior tattoos.
đĄÂ Kaneshiro
Species: Puffer Fish (Fugu) Fish-Man
Age at the time: 22 at the beginning of the story
Role: Defender / Support
Personality: Calm, composed, quiet but efficient, loyal.
Skills: Can inflate his body to protect against attacks, able to release toxins or paralytics (like a real fugu).
Design: Round and inflatable body, spotted patterns on skin, small sharp eyes, light armor.
đ Pisaro
Species: Orca Fish-Man
Age at the time: 23 at the beginning of the story
Role: Fighter
Personality: Fierce, loyal, discreet, little known to the public.
Skills: Great physical strength, speed, use of primitive weapons or natural claws.
Design: Muscular, rough skin, battle scars, piercing eyes, light marine leather armor.
đ Macro
Species: Eel Fish-Man
Age at the time: 24 at the beginning of the story
Role: Crew member / Tracker
Personality: Loyal but opportunistic / Fisher Tiger often has to set him straight.
Skills: Good underwater speed, electrocution techniques.
Design: Long and sinuous, smooth skin, small eyes, thin whiskers.
đ Kadar
Species: Ocean Sunfish Fish-Man
Age at the time: 21 at the beginning of the story
Role: Support fighter
Personality: Serious, devoted, silent.
Skills: Physical combat, handling of short weapons.
Design: Average height, discreet silhouette, few visual details available.
đ Tansui
Species: Catfish Fish-Man
Age at the time: 21 at the beginning of the story
Role: Young recruit / Navigator
Personality: Enthusiastic, young, and impressionable.
Skills: Navigation, underwater agility.
Design: Smaller body compared to the others, visible dorsal fins.

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Im bad in English (not my first language) / I have an obsession with the fishman/fishwoman/mermaid in one piece / I love Arlong and the Sun Pirates
Its total OC so I don't really follow the original story
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