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The Haze of Sorrowed Light
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Part I: Ghosts in the Rain
The amnesty brokered by Grand Admiral Thrawn, a fragile peace draping Coruscant like a silken shroud over a battlefield, had been a crucible. For Yhana, it meant survival after the Juggernaut, a harrowing rescue orchestrated by an unlikely coalition: Thrawn’s own Empire of the Hand, their Chiss precision a stark contrast to the wild ferocity of Keltoi squadrons. Hind-Arabi gunships had screamed alongside Terran Federacy cruisers, even the hulking shadows of Fomori dreadnoughts and the elegant, deadly Virathi destroyers had played their part. In the bewildering aftermath, under the watchful gaze of the occupying Empire of the Hand, her rehabilitation had begun.
It was a slow, arduous crawl back from the brink. The Healer’s Guild, a Core Federacy institution with tendrils reaching even into Thrawn’s territory, had eventually, and not without a certain bureaucratic callousness, assigned her here: Nirauan. The Chiss homeworld, now a key strategic outpost under Thrawn's new order, was a far cry from the vibrant chaos of galactic centers she'd known. Its red deserts and stark mesas felt like an extension of her own internal desolation. The Guild called it a "restorative posting." Yhana called it exile.
Meanwhile, the shockwaves of her rescue had sent another soul spiraling. Rama. The man who had, for a time, been her anchor, had fractured. The Sith teachings, once a forbidden whisper, had become a roar in his mind. He’d vanished into the shadowed corners of the galaxy, the Unknown Regions beckoning with promises of power, perhaps seeking solace or damnation on forgotten Sith worlds like Korriban or Malachor, treading the haunted paths of Revan and Kestis. And now, inexorably, his path had led him back, drawn by a thread only he could perceive, to the crimson plains of Nirauan, where Yhana served.
The rain on Nirauan was a relentless, percussive force, drumming against the prefabricated dome of the outreach clinic. It was late, the last of the local staff – a nervous Twi’lek intern and a stoic, four-armed Besalisk orderly – long gone, eager to escape the burgeoning storm and the eerie quiet that settled over the outpost after dark. Yhana was alone, the glow of a datapad illuminating her tired face as she finalized supply requisitions. Diagnostic reports, sign-offs for the Chief Medical Officer back at the sector’s central command, a litany of tasks that formed the mundane scaffolding of her current existence.
Since the Juggernaut, since the reconditioning – a sterile term for the agonizing process of rebuilding her shattered nanoplaexus – her biokinesis was a pale echo. The intricate dance of genetherapy, the molecular genomic alterations that had once flowed from her as easily as breath, were now frustratingly beyond her grasp. The Healer’s Guild, perhaps wary of her former capabilities, or perhaps genuinely concerned for her stability, had ensured her abilities remained… grounded. She treated fevers with medication, set bones with plasteel casts, and sutured wounds with steady, human hands, relying on the medical training that predated her more esoteric gifts. It was honest work, but it felt like speaking in monotones after a lifetime of song.
A sigh escaped her, misting in the cool air of the clinic. She tapped the final confirmation, the datapad chirping its acknowledgement. Time to lock up. As she moved towards the entrance, the rhythmic thrum of the rain against the permacrete walkway outside was almost hypnotic. She reached for the control panel, her fingers hovering over the sequence.
Then, a sound beneath the awning, distinct from the downpour. A soft scuff of a boot, the subtle shift of weight. Not the wind. Not some nocturnal desert creature seeking shelter.
Yhana froze. Her breath hitched. She didn’t need to turn, didn’t need the Force, or what little remained of her attunement to it, to know. Every nerve ending, every awakened nanocyte, however suppressed, screamed his presence. A scent, ozone and something uniquely him, cut through the petrichor. Rama.
TBC
Part II: The Bruise of Betrayal
Her back remained to him, a rigid wall against the storm and the man who was its equal in destructive potential. The datapad in her hand felt suddenly heavy, an anchor to a present she desperately wanted to rewind. Hela. The name was a shard of ice in her heart. The desolate, volcanic moon where he had handed her over, a sacrificial lamb to the Virathi, to Cersei-Silri’s cold ambition, all under the chillingly pragmatic gaze of Thrawn. The memory was a fresh wound, bleeding anger, grief, and a resentment so profound it threatened to choke her.
“If you value either your life or limb,” Yhana said, her voice low, each word carefully carved from the rage coiling within her, “I suggest you remove yourself from my proximity. Presently.” She paused, the rain a relentless underscore to her ultimatum. “Or I will bear no responsibility for the violence about to happen. I may not be able to handle much more than touching a hangnail currently, but I have enough anger to make up for where my abilities may be lacking. No thanks to you.”
A moment of silence, stretched taut by the storm, then his voice, rougher than she remembered, strained, yet carrying that familiar, infuriating firmness. “You have every right to carry out what treatment you think I deserve. You, above all.” He wouldn’t fight her. He wouldn’t even try. “I won’t fight you… Rhyanon.”
The name, her mother’s name for her, Aermetha’s soft whisper from a lifetime ago, didn’t just reach her ears. It bypassed them, a direct, psychic arrow into the deepest, most vulnerable part of her. Rhyanon.
A strangled sound, half sob, half snarl, tore from her throat. She spun, the med-kit clattering from nerveless fingers, forgotten on the slick permacrete. All pretense of control shattered. Raw, unthinking fury propelled her forward. Her hands, usually instruments of healing, became weapons. A palm strike aimed at his jaw, a fist towards his throat, the sharp edge of her foot lashing out at his knee, then his ankle – a rapid, desperate sequence born of training she’d long buried and instinct she couldn’t suppress.
Rama stumbled back with each impact, yet his hands remained at his sides. He didn’t block, didn’t divert, didn’t even flinch away. She heard the muffled grunt as air was forced from his lungs, the sickening thud of her knuckles against bone, the wet, percussive sound of her blows landing. When her foot connected with his knee, he went down, catching himself with a controlled grace that was a bitter reminder of his Jedi past, one knee and an outstretched arm hitting the rain-slicked ground.
She loomed over him, chest heaving, rain plastering her hair to her face, blurring her vision. He remained kneeling, head bowed for a moment, water streaming from his dark hair. Both of them were breathing hard, their ragged gasps mingling with the storm’s roar.
“Come on,” she spat, words ripped from her, kicking out, her boot connecting with his side. He grunted, a low, pained sound. “Lying a punch into his clavicle. “Come on! You don’t get the comfort of disengagement here! Get up! Fight me, you fucking… traitor! Get up!”
His passivity was a fresh goad. He still wouldn’t fight. He absorbed her onslaught, his body a canvas for her rage. A crimson line split his lip. He gagged when a wild strike caught him too close to the throat. An elbow, driven with all her desperate strength, slammed under his arm as he stumbled again, crashing into a solar-lamp post, the metal groaning under the impact.
He pushed himself upright, leaning against the post, blood trickling from his nose, a gash opening beneath one eye already beginning to swell. A bruise, dark and ugly, blossomed over the pale blue dusk of his Chiss skin. Rainwater sluiced over them both, washing away nothing.
Yhana raised her fist for another blow, but his eyes, those unnerving crimson pools, finally met hers. They were filled with a profound remorse, a sorrow so deep it was almost a physical blow, yet beneath it, a muted anger flickered – at her, perhaps, or at the universe that had brought them to this. That momentary hesitation was all he needed.
As she faltered, memory and self-awareness crashing back in, he surged upwards. His movement was a blur, faster than she anticipated. He caught her falling hands, his grip surprisingly gentle yet unyielding, drawing her close, his body effectively blocking the knee she’d been about to drive into his inner thigh.
They stood inches apart, locked in a tableau of fury and fear, the storm raging around them like an extension of their own turmoil. Her breath came in ragged gasps. She made no effort to break his hold on her wrists. His crimson eyes burned into hers.
He formed the words carefully, his lip already swelling. “I think,” he said, his voice low, almost perfunctory despite the pain lacing it, “you’ve made your point now.”
Her lip curled in a scornful sneer. “I think I’ve only just started, you fucking traitor, shit-stained, bastard son of a—”
“Do you want to get out of here?” Rama cut her off, his voice suddenly louder, cutting through the relentless pounding of the rain on the permapavers of the clinic’s walkway.
TBC
Part III: The Weight of Worlds
Yhana stared, the invective dying on her tongue. The abrupt shift in his tone, the sheer audacity of the question, left her sputtering, disbelief warring with the residual rage. "What?" The word was a breathless exhalation.
Rama repeated, his gaze unwavering despite the blood and the bruising, "Do you want to get out of here?"
The storm seemed to momentarily recede, the world narrowing to the space between them, to the raw, undeniable history that bound them. "I gave you my trust," she whispered, the anger now laced with a profound, aching hurt. "And you deceived me. You broke my heart, Rama."
His eyes, those crimson depths, were haunted, shadowed by a guilt that seemed to eat at him from the inside. It conflicted so starkly with the stoic mask he usually wore, with the pragmatic Chiss discipline. He made a raw admission, the words torn from him. "I had to."
The wave of hurt she’d kept buried, hidden beneath layers of anger and hard-won control, threatened to break free. "For what reason?" she asked, her voice thin, hollow, searching his face for an answer that could possibly make sense of the devastation he'd wrought.
Rama hid nothing then, not in his spoken words, nor in the emotions that bled from him, a silent torrent into her own fractured senses. "You know the reason," he said, the admission heavy with unspoken burdens, with loyalties and betrayals that stretched far beyond their personal orbit. "And there’s no penance sufficient across a million galaxies, or lifetimes, to ever ask forgiveness."
His remorse was a palpable thing, a weight pressing down on her, leaving her struggling for a reply. He didn’t ask for forgiveness. He didn’t offer excuses. He simply stated the unvarnished, painful truth of his own damnation.
Then, he repeated his offer, the rain still a constant, drumming curtain around them, isolating them in their own private tempest. "So I’m asking instead. Do you want to get out of here?"
It was an escape hatch, a desperate lunge for a different reality, a rebellion against the seemingly inevitable. The question resonated with a longing she hadn't dared acknowledge, a yearning for something other than the sterile confines of her current life, the endless cycle of duty and subdued pain. It was the wild, reckless call of the unknown, the dangerous allure of freedom, however fleeting.
Suddenly, the fight drained out of her, replaced by a stark, almost terrifying clarity. She nodded, once, then again, more rapidly. "Yes," she breathed, the word a surrender and a declaration. "Yes."
Rama’s grip on her wrists loosened, then fell away. Yhana instinctively held out her left arm, the gesture almost involuntary. "But they’ve… the Health and Medical Oversight Committee… placed a nanosynaptic blocker. Biometric tracker." Her voice was flat, reciting a known, insurmountable obstacle. "Implanted since I was… installed as part of the Guild. Excising it will result in an infusion of a dendritic-axonal convulsant. Enough neuromuscular paralytic and an electrical discharge directly into the CNS to put me into a vegetative state for a year."
A daring glint sparked in Rama’s crimson eyes – a flicker of mischief, perhaps, or a flash of contempt for those who thought they could so pedestrianly restrain her. "Then consider this a first test of your restored biokinesis," he said, a ghost of his old, confident smile playing on his bruised lips. "Your abilities, your plexus reconditioning. You know you’re fully capable of neutralizing that in less time than it takes for me to twitch a Force-toss at anyone who’ll stand in our way."
A wry, almost bitter smile touched Yhana’s own lips. "Says you. Who won’t be struck by the cosmic judgment of the gods if I fail to isolate… extract… impede the neurogenomic chemical activation point." She took a breath. "Alter the substrate binding at the membrane channel."
Even as she spoke, a subtle shift was occurring within her. The scant, almost forgotten tether of energy, the coiled potential of the localized nanocytes within her own system, began to stir. It was a hesitant awakening, like a limb long numb slowly regaining sensation. She felt the slight pinch, an almost imperceptible fasciculation of ocular muscles as the cerebral node clusters, long dormant, flickered to life, alighting relevant pathways. Molecular reactions, protein shifts, the intricate architecture of cell-membrane channels and enzymatic reactions – it all began to coalesce in her mind’s eye, a complex schematic unfolding with breathtaking speed.
Rama watched her, his senses open, drinking in the subtle shift in her aura. It was like an aroma, a melody, sweet and intoxicating, weaving around him, a delicate vine reaching out, sampling, before drawing back into the clear, deep pool of her being. He felt a tremor in his own Force awareness, a faint vibration that signaled the final, intricate alteration of a mechanism beyond his own inner-vision.
A ribbon of current, a shimmering, almost invisible XXXColored light, rippled through submolecular orbitals around her implanted arm – an atomic shiver, a silent, internal shudder. Yhana gave a sharp inhalation, a soft intake of breath betraying a momentary discomfort, a spark of static pulse that flared up her arm. Then, she released her breath in a long, slow sigh, a profound sense of relief washing over her. She felt it – the binding of the nanosynaptic block, the artificial impediment to her full faculty, dissolving. Her biogenically enhanced nerve bundles surged back to life, a blaze of light cutting through the gloom and shadow, like dark waters suddenly afire in the light of a setting sun across its surface.
"They’ll know," Yhana stated, her voice regaining some of its old strength, though still tinged with the exhaustion of her outburst and the lingering ache of betrayal. "The moment the transmitter… the moment my tracker isn’t transmitting."
Rama’s gaze dropped to her wrist, his expression unreadable. "Will you let me?"
TBC
Part IV: The Blade and the Beast
Yhana gave a single, sharp bob of her head. Her eyes, still holding a trace of the storm’s fury, met his, and in them, he read her intent, her weary acquiescence. She saw his hand move, reaching down towards the lower leg of his trousers, towards the hidden recess in his boot where he kept his vibroblade.
“Tell me when,” Rama said, his voice low, almost a whisper against the backdrop of the still-falling rain.
Yhana gritted her teeth, her gaze fixed on some distant point beyond his shoulder, unable to watch. “Just do it.”
He produced the vibro-switch, its activation a low thrum that barely registered over the weather. With a single, neat slice, he parted the skin covering the implant. A second, deeper incision, precise and swift, freed the bundle of three slender, silver rods, each the length of her pinky finger. They pulsed with a faint, standby light, drawing power from her own bioelectric field. As he dislodged the device, a high-pitched, almost supersonic whistle emanated from it, a tiny scream of technological protest.
Yhana shuddered, a small, involuntary whimper escaping her lips, her face contorting in a grimace she couldn't quite suppress.
“I’m sorry,” Rama murmured, his voice melancholy, grave, belying more than a simple apology for the momentary, physical discomfort of removing the transponder, the nanocyte suppressant, the damnable blocker. He dropped the device onto the slick permacrete and brought his heel down hard, crushing it into fragments.
Already, the incision on Yhana’s wrist was knitting itself closed, the layers of tissue sealing with uncanny speed, a testament to the regenerative gene-typing woven into her nanoplexus, her biokinetic synapses reasserting their dormant power.
She flexed her fingers, then looked from his battered, utilitarian speeder, parked just beyond the clinic’s awning, to her own Equus Aviani. The creature stood patiently a short distance away, a majestic silhouette against the stormy sky, its feathery mane and tail already slick with rain. It was a magnificent beast, descended from the legendary Horses of Heaven, the Akhal-Teke lineage renowned for their otherworldly stamina and grace. She gave Rama an inquiring glance.
“Both,” he answered, anticipating her question. “Your mount should keep up just fine. And confuse the pursuit when they arrive here.”
Without a word, Yhana turned, abandoning her med-kit, the ruck of supplies she’d so meticulously prepared, letting it fall carelessly to the ground. She approached the Equus, the winged horse nickering softly as she neared, its large, intelligent eyes fixed on her. With a practiced, fluid motion, she swung herself onto its broad, strong back.
Rama, meanwhile, climbed onto the seat of his own scarred and modified speeder, a model that had seen him through countless scrapes, its engine already thrumming with a low, powerful hum.
Through the fractal, magnetic shielding of the blast-helm that shimmered into existence around her head, Yhana’s voice came, slightly distorted by the comm. “Do you have any idea where we’re going?”
Rama’s reply was instantaneous, a grin – wicked, breathtaking, a flash of white teeth and a crinkle at the corner of his mouth – reaching her even before his own helm’s facial barrier activated. “Not a clue. Do you trust me?”
“Not in the least,” Yhana shot back, the words mostly serious, yet carrying a faint, almost imperceptible undercurrent of something else – a dangerous thrill, perhaps, or the faintest echo of a bond that refused to be entirely severed.
“Good,” he said, his voice resonating with a familiar, reckless energy. “I’ve always enjoyed the element of surprise.”
She made a sound, a considering, wry sniff that he caught through the helm’s communication system. He saw her lean forward, whispering something to her cybgenically and biogenically enhanced mount, a word of command, perhaps, or a vector, a set of coordinates only she and the creature understood.
The Equus responded instantly. With a powerful beat of its massive wings – reinforced with a cartiledge-metallic alloy designed to withstand the rigors of near-vacuum environments – it launched itself skyward. Its form, as large as three Wookiees stacked together, moved with an impossible grace, a testament to the Diakini Skywalkers, the legendary Hedge-Riders who had bred and trained these creatures for generations. Decurion units, sky-cavalry trained to fight at super-sentient speeds in coordinated formations, they were a deft, agile match for small fighters, crucial reinforcements for targeted defense or offense. Yhana’s steed, specifically, was conditioned for medic-missions, initial reconnaissance, triaging in the chaos of field and orbital battle sites where larger med-units, beyond a single mobile med-droid, couldn't immediately reach.
Rama swung his speeder around, igniting its main thrusters, and tore after the ascending silhouette of Yhana and her mount. Their route took them arrow-straight into the sheets of rain and the buffeting winds, soaring over the stark, crimson terrain of Nirauan. They circumvented the scattered, domed cities, bypassed the main transport highways and thoroughfares, and avoided the larger settlements, two fugitive lights against a stormy canvas.
Eventually, guided by some internal compass of Rama’s, or perhaps just a desperate need for anonymity, they descended towards a flickering, neon-lit structure nestled in a shallow canyon – a dive bar, its architecture a haphazard collection of repurposed freighter hulls and scrap metal. It pulsed with a muffled, rhythmic beat, reminiscent of the jute-joints and smoky dancehalls of a bygone Terran era, a 1920s speakeasy blues venue transplanted to the Outer Rim. As they drew closer, the unmistakable strains of a live band covering ancient Terran blues – the soulful wail of a guitar, the mournful cry of a harmonica, a voice crooning something that sounded like an old Roy Orbison lament – drifted up to meet them.
TBC
Part V: A Fleeting Reprieve
Outside the dive bar, the air thrummed with a nervous energy, a stark contrast to the desolate quiet of the Nirauan wastes. Rama cut the engine of his speeder, the silence that followed amplifying the wail of the blues band within. Yhana, dismounting from her Equus, sent the magnificent creature off with a silent command, a psychic nudge towards the shadowed cliffs overlooking the canyon, where it could remain unseen but watchful. The familiarity of their arrival, this echoes of another, more clandestine meeting – a stolen moment in a different life, perhaps – hung in the air between them, unacknowledged.
Inside, the bar was a cacophony of sights, sounds, and smells. Smoke, thick with the scent of cheap synth-ale and unidentifiable alien tobaccos, hazed the air. Beings of a dozen species crowded around rough-hewn tables, their voices a low babble punctuated by laughter and the clatter of mugs. On a makeshift stage at the far end, a motley crew of musicians – a Rodian on rhythm guitar, a multi-limbed Bith plucking a stand-up bass, and a green-skinned Zeltron vocalist whose voice dripped with soulful melancholy – were pouring their hearts into a rendition of “Stand By Me.”
For a few precious hours, they let the galaxy, and its myriad betrayals and pursuits, fade away. They found a secluded booth in a shadowy corner, the flickering neon from a broken ‘Cantina’ sign casting an erratic glow over their faces. They played a ridiculous drinking game involving potent, luminescent shots of something called ‘Jawa Juice,’ the rules of which seemed to shift with each round, leading to more laughter than coherent gameplay.
Later, drawn by the music’s mournful pull, they slow-danced, their movements initially hesitant, almost shy, before the shared rhythm and the lingering effects of the Jawa Juice eroded their reservations. They moved together with an unconscious grace, a muscle memory of past intimacies overriding the fresh wounds of distrust. In the dim light, surrounded by strangers, they were just two figures swaying to an ancient Terran lament, the unspoken tensions, the betrayal on Hela, the looming threat of Thrawn’s pursuit, all momentarily ignored, locked away in a compartment of their minds reserved for the inevitable tomorrow.
The Zeltron singer segued into a Patsy Cline classic, her voice a velvet caress, and under its spell, fueled by alcohol and a desperate, reckless need for connection, they kissed. It was a collision of hunger and sorrow, a desperate affirmation in the face of uncertainty. For that brief, stolen interlude, they were not the hunted medic and the fallen Jedi, not the betrayer and the betrayed, but simply Rama and Yhana, lost in the smoky haze of a dive bar on a forgotten planet.
Part VI: Whispers in the Wilderness
The reprieve, like all such stolen moments, was fleeting. Eventually, Rama, his senses still sharper than hers despite the alcohol, regretfully broke the spell. “We should go,” he murmured, his voice low against her ear, the warmth of his breath a stark contrast to the prudent chill of his words. “Before that requisition team Thrawn undoubtedly sent to retrieve you tracks us down to this… establishment.”
Yhana, tipsy and flushed, nodded reluctantly. She’d already sent her Equus further afield before they’d even come within visual distance of the dive bar, a silent psychic command ensuring its safety. Now, she swung her leg over the back of Rama’s speeder, seating herself behind him, her arms instinctively finding their way around his waist.
They stumbled out of the bar, leaning on each other, their laughter echoing a little too loudly in the sudden quiet of the canyon. Once clear of the small, ramshackle town and the dive bar’s garish lights, Rama found a secluded, wooded ravine. He spoke into his wrist comm, a series of coded instructions sending his speeder off on a remote trajectory, decoy drones peeling away from it at programmed intervals, each heading towards a different, misleading coordinate. A small measure, perhaps, but enough to hopefully confuse and delay Thrawn’s special ops search units.
Then, Yhana whistled, a clear, piercing note that cut through the night. Moments later, the magnificent Equus Aviani descended from the darkened skies, landing with barely a whisper. Yhana had warned Rama, a slight teasing lilt in her voice despite their circumstances, that her mount had a notorious reputation for reacting… unfavorably… to male riders, often quite violently. To her surprise, and perhaps Rama’s relief, the Equus merely gave him a soft whuffle, a curious nicker, before accepting his presence as he secured their meager camp gear – salvaged from his speeder before its decoy run – onto its harness.
As they rose into the night sky once more, Yhana felt a familiar, comforting presence brush against her mind. Awen, her fen-wolf, her psychic familiar, was projecting a series of images, a clear mental map of a locale far from any known sentient routes or established settlements. It was a place lost in the rugged highlands of Nirauan, a sanctuary of untamed wilderness.
Guided by Awen’s psychic imagery, they flew for what felt like hours, the alcohol slowly wearing off, replaced by a weary anticipation. They finally descended into a hidden vale, a breathtaking panorama unfolding beneath them. Ancient temple ruins, weathered stone walls and crumbling arches, stood sentinel amidst a riot of blooming night flowers and cascading waterfalls that tumbled down the sheer mountainsides. The sky above was a cosmic tapestry, multiple moons and small planetary satellites hung like jewels against a backdrop of myriad stars. It was a scene of almost painful beauty, a stark contrast to the turmoil they had just escaped.
They made a small, rough camp along a mountain bluff overlooking the vale. With the last of the adrenaline fading, and their bellies full of some truly horrid, pre-packaged Cheeto-equivalent snack food Rama had inexplicably stashed in his gear, they passed out almost immediately, exhaustion claiming them before any further words could be spoken.
The next day dawned bright and clear. A playful, almost childlike dynamic began to evolve between them as they explored the surrounding landscape. Despite the intense intimacy they had shared in Hela’s caves before his betrayal, and the fleeting passion in the dive bar, they were now shy, almost platonic with each other, the unspoken weight of recent events a subtle barrier.
Yhana, true to her nature, immediately began a survey of the local ecology, cataloging new species of flora and fauna, their unique physiologies meticulously recorded into the central domains of her cerebral plexus for later, more detailed analysis. Rama, surprisingly, followed her lead, asking questions, his curiosity piqued by the alien life forms they encountered.
They explored the ruins, speculating on the civilization that had built them, their voices echoing in the ancient stillness. They found a surprisingly intact holostream receiver amongst the debris and, with a bit of Rama’s technical tinkering, managed to get it working. They stumbled upon an absurdly melodramatic holo-novella – “Space Tarzan and the Amazon Witches of Dathomir” – and spent an hour providing their own improvised, sarcastic dialogue, Mystery Science Theater 3000-style, their laughter bouncing off the ancient stones. They even found old newsreel footage: Palpatine’s Grand Vizier regaling a bored-looking Senate, Mon Mothma delivering a fiery but ultimately futile speech, various Imperial Warlords posturing. The sheer absurdity of it all, juxtaposed with their own precarious situation, was almost cathartic.
Later that night, as a chill descended upon the vale, they cracked open a bottle of surprisingly good Corellian Whiskey – a brand they’d first shared on the Tatooine sands, a lifetime ago. They sat by a crackling bonfire, the wide-open night sky above them a glittering spectacle. A nearby planetoid, a pale crescent in the darkness, added to the mystical, early-spring ambiance, the air thick with the scent of blooming night vines and the chirping of unseen creatures.
Yhana, feeling a surge of defiant joy, streamed a holo-pod of ancient Terran songs. As the raw, melancholic strains of the Cowboy Junkies’ “Sweet Jane” filled the night air, she began to dance around the fire, her movements fluid and uninhibited, a wild, elemental grace. They shared a couple of synth-joints, munching on surprisingly palatable vegetarian kebabs made from some of the edible plant species Yhana had identified earlier.
At some point, as the fire burned low and the stars wheeled overhead, they found themselves moving through the motions of an old Keltoi-HindArabi custom, a ritual evolved from the Bagua, the Eight Walking Palms. Facing each other, they circled, their movements slow, deliberate, a silent conversation of form and intent. It was a solemn, unacknowledged coupling ritual, a binding of psionic energies, not just to each other, but to the surrounding environment, the cosmos, the collective consciousness.
Enmeshed in each other’s senses, adrift on a sea of shared sensation and unspoken understanding, they didn’t make love. They simply fell asleep, side-by-side, sharing a profound psychic intimacy, their minds conversing in the silent language of dreams and shared memories.
It was in this state of heightened awareness, perhaps on that first night, or one of the subsequent evenings lulled by the tranquility of the vale, that Yhana finally addressed the elephant in the room, the raw wound of his betrayal. She explained her lack of outward, sustained ire, her voice a soft murmur in the psychic space between them. As a Chiss, she posited, Rama was, in many ways, adhering to deep-seated biologic programming, the evolutionary imperatives of his species.
Rama, a ghost of that deliriously gorgeous smile playing on his lips even in the shared dreamscape, replied to her explanation, "Ah. The Chiss feral side."
"You were hunters," Yhana continued, her thoughts flowing into his, clear and precise. "Predators. Surviving in dark subterranean caverns, in arctic extremes. I suspect that influenced the manipulative, seductive patterns of social modeling your species expresses. I realize it might be uncomfortable, entertaining the possibility you’re merely enacting eons worth of ingrained biopsychosocial survival mechanisms. As well as introspection, which your species displays an amazing ineptitude for."
That wicked grin again, even in the non-physical realm. "I’m freely open to admitting my susceptibility to instinctive behaviors."
Yhana felt herself drawn towards him, an almost irresistible pull, her projected self leaning closer, her mouth centimeters from his. Then, she stopped. A spectral hand came up between them. She leaned back, a snort of laughter catching him off-guard. "Yeah. You’re not forgiven yet. Not until I’ve considered an appropriate retribution."
Rama, trying to collect his reeling senses, the carefully spun alchemy between them bursting like a Bantha’s unexpected flatulence, jolting him back to a harsher reality, stated ruefully, "That was cruel. That was real cruel, playing me like that, Terran Girl."
The ice, just for a moment, slipped back into her mental voice, a chilling reminder of his betrayal, of the torture she’d endured in the clutches of Thrawn and the Virathi. "Shall we discuss cruelty?"
The flirtation, the playfulness, dropped away from Rama, replaced by a shamed, downcast mien. He looked away, even in their shared consciousness, towards the dying embers of their mental bonfire. "I’m… I’m sorry," he stuttered, an uncharacteristically un-Chisslike display of sudden chagrin.
Yhana chastised herself silently, even as a part of her found herself falling, just a little, under the spell of that disarming vulnerability. "You know," she mused, "you’re sort of adorable when you’re guilty. Especially with this new touch of the Dark Side to you. However much it may, or may not be, a part of your instinctive, inherited behav—"
Rama cut in, a touch of defensiveness in his tone. "Alright. Not everything I do is simply because I’m miming some sort of evolutionary programming."
Her answering laughter, light and genuine, seemed to momentarily lift the weight from his shoulders. At least, until her next words.
"It’s not me you need to be worried about, Rama."
He picked up on the seriousness beneath the feigned lightness of her tone. "Kalinda."
Yhana confirmed his insight with a mental nod. "She has ways," she paused, choosing her words carefully, "of… imparting lessons, shall we say. When her loved ones have been harmed. Threatened."
Rama’s words died in his throat at the image Yhana subtly, yet powerfully, constructed in his mind’s eye – an image of refined, inescapable consequence. "I know my mind shouldn’t suddenly think about… a trashy holonovella fantasy… oh, huh. That must have been… yeah. Asphyxiation, in quite that moment."
Yhana, taking that as her cue, began to withdraw from their shared psychic space. "Good night, Kivu’rama’nurodo." She wondered if he winced more at her flawless command of Cheunh, or the formal, almost cold application of his full Chiss name, a subtle indicator of his current, precarious standing in her estimation.
She heard him murmur a vague, "And to you, Medic Garowen," his thoughts still tangled in the uncomfortable contemplation of Kalinda’s imminent, and undoubtedly creative, vengeance.
TBC
Part VII: The Hunters' Calculus
The hum of the repulsorlift transport was a low thrum beneath their feet, a stark contrast to the silent, patient hunt they were engaged in. Inside the mobile command center, Grand Admiral Thrawn stood before a flickering holographic display, his crimson eyes narrowed in concentration. Another dead end. The latest decoy drone, activated by his errant cousin, Kivu’rama’nurodo, had led the Hand of Judgment search party on a fruitless chase across the barren plains of Nirauan’s eastern quadrant.
Beside him, Fleet Admiral Ar’alani let out a soft sigh, a subtle exhalation of impatience she couldn’t quite siphon into a more professionally neutral expression. Thrawn, ever attuned to the slightest nuance, registered it. He saw, too, the almost imperceptible tightening around his own mouth as the report of another false trail came through. Rama. Ever intransigent, ever resourceful. Ever a thorn in his side since their unexpected, and often unwelcome, reacquaintance.
“Have you thoughts or insights to share, Admiral Ar’alani?” Thrawn asked, his tone expectant, though perfectly level.
Ar’alani’s reply was sharper than she’d intended, the edge softened only slightly by the carefully modulated words that followed. “Yes, in fact. Have you considered that perhaps… they just want to be left alone?”
One of Thrawn’s sculpted eyebrows arched. “There are protocols for submitting a request for formal leave, Admiral. A fact Medic Garowen apparently either forgot, or has conveniently ignored, leading to the current situation of her pursuit.” His gaze flicked back to the holo-display, where the encrypted frequencies of the decoy drones painted a frustratingly erratic pattern. “I assume, given the… variable… nature of these diversions, that my cousin happens to be the accompanying party. Her accomplice.” He paused. “Have you something further to add, Admiral?”
Ar’alani’s exasperation was only too evident. She fought the very human urge to roll her eyes, settling instead for a narrowing of her own crimson gaze upon him – the Chiss equivalent, perhaps, of that particular display of frustration. Jeri Ryan, in full Seven of Nine stoicism, would have approved. “May I speak openly, Grand Admiral?”
Thrawn inclined his head, a silent permission.
She continued, her voice crisp, observing him as he meticulously examined the useless drone locations, the extrapolated coordinates and probability algorithms projecting potential, unsearched locales. They’d traced the initial exhaust signature of Rama’s speeder to that sleazy, disreputable dive bar – a starting point that seemed almost deliberately insulting. “You’re thinking about this…” she began, then stated the obvious, her tone shifting from professional subordinate to something closer to a seasoned confidante, a comrade-in-arms who had seen him at his most brilliant and, occasionally, his most bafflingly obtuse. “In all these years, Stars bear witness, my loyalty to you has never wavered. Even when it has faltered, and raged at you – and still does, frequently.” A ghost of a smile touched her lips. “But you truly are a… lizard-brain, at times, when it comes to anticipating sentient motive, particularly when driven by emotion.”
Thrawn’s expression remained impassive, though a flicker of something – surprise? intrigue? – danced in his eyes. “Explain.”
Ar’alani’s frustration, carefully controlled until now, began to trickle into her voice. “Thrawn. Rama is Kivu. Blood-kin to you. He’s probably the closest living relative you have in this galaxy who actually thinks like you, however much you both might deny it.” She gestured towards the holographic map of Nirauan, a vibrant tapestry of reds and ochres. “Where, in all of this planet, would you take a potential romantic interest, were you seeking to impress her? To entice her? In a place almost guaranteed, almost likely, to entrance the senses?”
Her pointed look, the directness of her gaze, finally seemed to breach the analytical fortress of his mind. His eyes, usually so coolly assessing, suddenly widened. The carefully cultivated mystique, the aura of impenetrable Chiss logic, fell away for a fleeting instant, replaced by the sudden, startling breach of a long-dormant memory. He arrived at the conclusion she had been so patiently, and then impatiently, trying to guide him towards.
“Ah,” he intoned, the single syllable laden with unspoken understanding. “You’re referring to when we’d…”
Ar’alani broke in, a hint of wryness in her voice, “Been young. And horny. And decidedly contra-authority as well. Yes.”
Thrawn’s eyes rested on her for a beat longer than strictly necessary, not quite probing, but with a depth that made her skin prickle. She returned his gaze with an arched brow, trying to school her features into an expression of professional distance. She hoped – prayed to whatever silent Ascendancy gods might be listening – that there was nothing more than a fond, fleeting reminiscence in his gaze. A memory of those rare times when schedules and inclination had allowed them the indulgence of coupling – sweet, fierce, and always over far too soon, as the demands of Empire, of the Hand, of the Ascendancy itself, had called them away. One day, perhaps, a traitorous thought whispered. She hoped he read the sudden flare of heat in her own biometrics, the faint tremor in her aura, as nothing more than a temporary, quickly quashed desire, recalled from a distant past. The daughter she’d borne, in secret, after that last time… She pushed the thought down, hard, burying it beneath the immediate preoccupations of the hunt, before he might read it, through their shared, latent Sight.
Clearing her throat, Ar’alani gestured again to the display. “So. Does that narrow your search options now, Mith’raw’nuruodo?”
A passing smirk, a fleeting glimpse of the younger, less guarded Chiss he had once been, touched Thrawn’s lips. It only made Ar’alani stare at him harder, her own expression unreadable. He glanced away, his attention returning to the 3D topographic display of Nirauan’s rugged Western Zone.
“There are five possibilities,” he stated, the chosen locales lighting up on the grid with a faint blue glow. “The first of them… I am almost certain that is where they will be.” He paused. “But I will have the Hand of Judgment scout them out first, before directing the unit in full approach.”
Ar’alani, skeptical, remarked, “I somehow doubt that the entire unit, in force, is going to sway the weight of persuasion in your favor, Supreme Commander. They are two people. Not to underestimate their profound defensive potential, even if lightly armed, but really… overkill, don’t you think?”
Thrawn considered her words in silence for a long moment. Then, with a few swift, decisive taps on his wrist-comm, he issued the updated orders. He looked back at Ar’alani, a hint of that annoyingly indulgent, almost teasing tone in his voice. “We will accompany the Hand of Judgment’s advance team – Judgment’s Hammer – as the forward press. Keep the rest of the unit in reserve.” His eyes searched hers, a silent appeal for approval, a mimicry of a more human interaction.
Ar’alani inclined her head, her eyelids lowered beneath a hooded haze, a silent, grudging acknowledgement.
Part VIII: The Uninvited Dawn
Yhana awoke with a start, her brain foggy, her mouth tasting of stale synth-ale and regret. The first rays of Nirauan’s primary sun were just beginning to pierce the misty veil of the vale. Rama was still asleep beside her, his dark hair fanned out against the roughspun blanket, his face, even in repose, etched with a weary tension.
Then she saw her.
Ar’alani.
The Fleet Admiral was sitting on a nearby lichen-covered stump, perfectly still, clad in sleek, practical field armor. Her blaster was still sheathed at her hip. She looked as if she’d been there for hours, a silent, crimson-eyed sentinel.
“You have about a ten-minute start,” Ar’alani stated, her voice calm, matter-of-fact, cutting through the early morning stillness. “Before Thrawn, and the rest of Judgment’s Hammer, arrive.”
Rama stirred, his eyes still closed, but his voice, though groggy, was alert. “He knows you’re here.” It wasn’t a question.
“Of course,” Ar’alani replied, her gaze unwavering.
Rama squinted one eye open, groaning softly as the sunlight hit his face. “He’s coming with an entire squadron? I’m flattered. Is he expecting us to fight or flee?”
“I won’t answer that,” Ar’alani responded coolly. “But I think you can extrapolate the conclusion yourself, Kivu’rama’nurodo.”
Yhana felt a mental nudge from her Equus, still concealed in the higher bluffs. A swift, urgent image: an approaching frontal assault force, the elite Hand of Judgment. Ten, perhaps twelve troopers – Death Troopers, or their Shadowtrooper equivalents, heavily armed and moving with disciplined precision. She relayed the information to Rama in a silent, psychic transference.
Ar’alani rose gracefully to her feet. “May warrior’s fortune be with you,” she said, a traditional Chiss farewell that sounded strangely out of place in this context. She turned to leave, to rejoin the advancing unit.
Rama scoffed, pushing himself into a sitting position. “Tell my cousin,” he called after her retreating figure, his voice laced with a bitter amusement, “he can go stuff his contrived, manufactured sense of honor back up his art-picking arse.”
Ar’alani paused, a grim pinch to her lips, but she didn’t turn back. She merely stated, her voice carrying clearly in the crisp morning air, “You could also just surrender. And spare us all the confrontation.”
“He could also call off the pursuit,” Yhana interjected, her voice sharper than she intended.
Ar’alani didn’t break stride. “One is as likely as the other, isn’t it?”
“Yeah,” Yhana murmured with a sigh of resignation, watching the Admiral disappear into the trees. The fragile peace of their hidden sanctuary was irrevocably shattered. The hunt was on.
Without another word, Rama and Yhana began to move, a shared urgency galvanizing them. They quickly surveyed the immediate ruins, their eyes assessing angles, cover, and choke points. They would make their stand here, in this ancient, forgotten place, forcing Thrawn’s elite troopers into a narrow, defensible approach.
TBC
Part IX: The Dance of Desperation
The first volley of blaster fire ricocheted off the ancient stones, showering Rama and Yhana with dust and debris. Thrawn’s Hand of Judgment troopers, clad in their stark black armor, advanced with chilling precision, utilizing the crumbling walls and fallen archways for cover, their movements a testament to rigorous Chiss training.
Rama was a whirlwind of motion. The time spent in the shadowed corners of the galaxy, delving into the forbidden lore of the Sith, had not been idle. Latent Force abilities, dormant within him since his Jedi training had been so brutally interrupted, now blazed to life, fueled by a potent cocktail of desperation and the intoxicating whisper of the Dark Side. His lightsaber, its crimson blade a stark contrast to the muted greens and browns of the ruins, hummed a deadly song as he met the first wave of attackers. He moved with a speed and ferocity that belied his lean frame, deflecting blaster bolts, his attacks precise and devastating.
Yhana, her own biokinetic abilities still a pale shadow of their former glory, found herself largely relegated to a supporting role. The confined space of the central ruin, where Rama had chosen to make his stand, offered little room for her Equus to maneuver effectively. Instead, she took up a position slightly behind and to the side of him, her senses, though blunted, still sharp enough to anticipate incoming threats, to cover his blind spots. Her quarterstaff, a surprisingly effective weapon in close quarters, whirled, deflecting stray shots, creating momentary openings for Rama to exploit. She was the shield-maiden to his berserker, their movements, born of necessity and a desperate, unspoken synergy, surprisingly coordinated.
The battle raged. Thrawn’s troopers were relentless, their assaults carefully orchestrated, wave after wave pressing forward. But Rama, drawing on reserves of power he hadn't known he possessed, was a force of nature. He moved through the attackers like a phantom, the Dark Side lending an edge of ruthlessness to his already formidable skills. Yhana could feel it, a cold, exhilarating power emanating from him, a dangerous current that both thrilled and terrified her. He was losing himself to the fight, to the intoxicating allure of destruction.
Yet, even the most potent wellspring of power has its limits. Exhaustion began to set in, for both of them. Rama’s movements, while still incredibly swift, began to lose some of their razor-sharp precision. A blaster bolt scored a burning line across his arm. Yhana, her own reserves depleted from the constant vigilance and the physical exertion, felt her staff grow heavy, her reactions a fraction slower. The Hand of Judgment troopers, too, were showing signs of wear, their disciplined formations becoming looser, their shots less accurate as their numbers dwindled under Rama’s onslaught.
It was Yhana who finally called for a pause. Seeing an opening, a momentary lull in the ferocity of the fighting as both sides regrouped, she stepped forward, her voice ringing out, surprisingly clear and steady despite her breathlessness. “Hold your fire! A temporary cease-fire! Let me tend to the wounded!”
To her surprise, the blaster fire ceased. Perhaps even Thrawn, observing from a distance, recognized the futility of continued attrition when a more pragmatic solution presented itself. Or perhaps, even in the heat of battle, the Chiss respect for a skilled medic, even one currently classified as a fugitive, held some sway.
With a wary glance at Rama, who nodded his grudging assent, Yhana moved out from their defensive position, her field med-kit, retrieved from their meager supplies, in hand. She moved among the fallen and injured Hand of Judgment troopers, her movements efficient, her touch surprisingly gentle. She applied her limited biokinesis where she could, assessing injuries, triaging, stabilizing the most serious cases with practiced skill. Burns were soothed, bleeding staunched, fractures temporarily set.
Finally, she faced Thrawn, who had advanced with a small retinue, his expression unreadable. “Your troopers are stabilized,” she stated, her voice devoid of inflection. “Some are seriously injured and will need more intensive intervention at a proper infirmary. But none are critical. For now.”
She turned to leave, to return to Rama’s side, to ready herself for the inevitable resumption of hostilities.
“You could end this now, you know,” Thrawn’s voice, calm and resonant, stopped her. “By returning to your duties. There would be no charges. No penalties or recriminations.”
Yhana didn’t turn back. “Or you could end this,” she countered, her voice tight, “by just leaving us alone. Calling off your attack.”
Silence stretched between them, thick with unspoken accusations and irreconcilable differences. As she reached the relative safety of the inner ruin where Rama waited, Thrawn’s voice reached out to her again, softer this time, almost… persuasive.
“I wasn’t lying when I said I wanted you by my side, with the Empire of the Hand. I recruited you out here, to Nirauan, to this… buffer zone, not to isolate you. But because I thought this seemed an environs, a setting, where your talents, your training, would most thrive. To the benefit of your patients, the newly served, the underserved colonists.”
Yhana finally turned, her eyes blazing. “I’m not coming back.” The words were unequivocal.
“You may not have a choice, Rhyanon. Medic Garowen.” Thrawn’s voice held a note of something she couldn’t quite decipher – warning? Regret? “You know what darkness comes this way. And you know… you are the only hope that might offer some sliver of a chance against it. Against the Shadow.”
His words struck her like a physical blow. She stalked back towards him, her fists clenched, her composure shattering. The rage that had been simmering beneath the surface, fueled by exhaustion and the unbearable weight of his manipulations, erupted. “You!” she spat, her voice trembling with fury. “You thought! You anticipated! You foresaw! You figured!” One of Thrawn’s honor guard, a hulking Noghri, lifted his blaster rifle, but a subtle motion of Thrawn’s hand stayed him.
Yhana’s words were heated, each syllable edged with contempt. “You! Never the person you’re considering! Never their own input, or concerns, or wishes, or desires! I wonder if you’ve ever seen anyone around you as anything other than a tool! An asset! A weapon! Or a potential threat to be deployed or diffused!”
Thrawn’s expression remained impassive, but his crimson eyes held a flicker of something unreadable. “There are none who have ever been assigned to my service who have continued unwillingly,” he replied, his voice still maddeningly calm. “Nor yet grown into their own confidence, their own abilities, under my command.”
“Decided by you!” Yhana challenged.
“Fostered, Medic Garowen, not forced,” Thrawn clarified, his gaze unwavering. “Even as such decisions applied to your own path. You’ll abandon your profession’s oath then? The people who’ve come to rely upon your service? Your compassion?”
Yhana hesitated at the threshold of the inner hall, where Rama waited just beyond the direct line of blaster fire. The weight of Thrawn’s words, the insidious truth woven into his manipulations, pressed down on her. “There’s sufficient resource at the clinic,” she said, her voice losing some of its fire, “and the satellite ambulatories. Staffing, supply stock, equipment… it’s all there now. Per the criteria of our original arrangement.”
A weariness touched Thrawn’s eyes, his voice. “You know that’s not what I mean.”
Yhana’s gaze grew haunted, something sorrowed flickering within their depths. She glanced over her shoulder, towards Rama, the unspoken question, the agonizing dilemma, passing between them. The looming threat of Abaddon, of the Shadow Entities, the Revenants – a darkness she knew, deep in her bones, was gathering on the edge of known space.
Rama read the meaning in her beseeching look, the silent plea for guidance, for an answer she couldn’t find within herself. He met her gaze, his own expression solemn, his voice low but firm, carrying to her across the ruined stones. “This one’s on you, Terran Girl. But by my life, I’ll honor whatever you do.”
An imperceptible nod passed between them, a silent understanding that echoed more in mutual sentiment than in conscious thought, a resonance in each of their senses, their minds. Then, with a sudden, fluid movement, Yhana feinted, a subtle shift of weight, a deceptive flicker of intent.
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Part X: The Unforeseen Variable
The feint was all it took. In that instant, Rama and Yhana moved as one, a perfectly synchronized dance of desperation and defiance. As Yhana twisted, sinking to her knees and spinning, her quarterstaff came up in a defensive arc, deflecting a trio of humming, bladed discs – electro-ninja shuriken – hurled by a Hand of Judgment trooper who had mistaken her hesitation for surrender.
Simultaneously, Rama exploded into motion. He wasn’t Kivu’rama’nurodo in that moment, Chiss strategist or fallen Jedi. He was Revan, a conduit for the raw, untamed power of the Force, his movements blurred by an unnatural speed. He rolled towards Thrawn, his crimson saber igniting with a hungry snap-hiss, a clear path momentarily open.
Thrawn, in that strange, distant manner of his, his mind always analyzing, cataloging, found himself marveling at the fluidity, the perfect, almost telepathic timing of their sequential motions. They moved like dancers, like twin stars caught in a gravitational ballet, their actions a melodious symmetry. A strange, unexpected pang of remorse, sharp and unwelcome, pierced through his strategic calculations – the way she, Yhana, could make mere motion into a poetry of its own creation. It was a vulnerability he hadn’t anticipated, a weakness he hadn't factored into his meticulously crafted equations.
Then, the universe tilted.
Thrawn felt himself absurdly, unceremoniously lifted off the ground, not by the Force, but by the sheer, unexpected impact of Ar’alani crashing into him. She dragged them both to the ground, a grunt of surprise forced from his lips, just as a spray of concentrated laser fire erupted precisely where he had been standing, stitching a deadly pattern across the ancient stones.
Hand of Judgment troopers dove for cover, their disciplined formations momentarily breaking as the roar of powerful engines filled the vale. Vegetation flattened in the immediate vicinity, whipped into a frenzy by the downdraft and crosswind generated by multiple thrusters. A heavily modified MF-813 Flying Mule, its battered fuselage a familiar, welcome sight, roared overhead, its mounted guns already blazing.
“Well, now, ain’t this a predicament!” Jayne Cobb’s voice, rough and amused, crackled over an open comm channel. Mara Jade, her fiery red hair a beacon even in the chaos, was in the co-pilot seat, her expression a mixture of grim determination and exasperated affection. Mal Reynolds, calm as ever in the eye of the storm, expertly piloted the Mule, bringing it around for another pass.
As if summoned by the Mule’s boisterous arrival, Rama’s own battered swoop bike, its engine sputtering to life, roared out from its concealed position amongst the ruins, presumably activated by a remote signal.
Yhana, registering the sudden, chaotic shift in the tactical situation, let out a whoop of pure, unadulterated relief as her Equus Aviani, sensing the tide turning, galloped into view, its magnificent wings already unfurling. She didn’t need to mount; the creature, understanding her psychic link, the urgent image of the Serenity’s distant location she projected, moved towards the unfolding rescue.
“Serenity’s holding at coordinates X-Y-Z, about fifteen klicks south-southwest, near the Sky-Tooth Mesa!” Mara’s voice cut through the din. “We ain’t got much of a lead, folks! Thrawn’s already squawking for reinforcements – looks like planetary TIEs and armed landspeeders are inbound!”
The battle for the ruins was over. A new, more desperate chase was about to begin. Rama vaulted onto his swoop bike, Yhana scrambling on behind him, her arms tight around his waist. The Equus, a blur of motion, galloped alongside them, its powerful strides easily keeping pace.
Their escape route took them out of the vale and across the rugged, open terrain, Thrawn’s voice, cold and precise, already issuing pursuit orders over the comm net. Planetary TIE fighters, adapted for atmospheric combat, screamed overhead, their lasers stitching fiery lines across the landscape. Armed landspeeders, sleek and deadly, fanned out, attempting to cut off their escape. Ar’alani’s cool, strategic commands coordinated the pursuit, while Thrawn himself, in a heavily armed command speeder, took direct charge of the lead chase element.
At the assigned coordinates, with the distinctive silhouette of Sky-Tooth Mesa looming on the horizon, the Imperial TIEs began to close in. The Equus, with a defiant shriek, veered sharply, its powerful body bumping one of the pursuing speeders, sending it spinning out of control.
Then, a new, more hopeful silhouette appeared over the horizon. Serenity. Wash’s distinctive, almost casual piloting brought the Firefly-class transport sweeping in low, its dorsal and ventral gun turrets already blazing, providing a curtain of covering fire.
Aboard his command speeder, Thrawn watched the unfolding scene with a detached, analytical gaze. Ar’alani, beside him, relayed the order: “All units, break off pursuit. Maintain visual, but do not engage Serenity.”
The Imperial speeders and planetary TIEs peeled away, their chase becoming a half-hearted, token effort. They knew, as did Thrawn, that Serenity, with its illegal but highly effective Nodal Jump Drive, would outrace them into the atmosphere and disappear into the vastness of hyperspace.
Under the covering fire, Rama maneuvered his swoop bike towards Serenity’s open cargo bay. Yhana, with a final, encouraging psychic nudge, sent her Equus soaring towards the ramp. Somehow, amidst the chaos, Awen, her fen-wolf familiar, was already on board, a blur of grey fur disappearing into the ship’s interior.
Rama, Yhana, and the Equus scrambled aboard Serenity just as the cargo ramp began to close. With a lurch that pressed them all back against the bulkhead, the ship angled sharply upwards, its engines roaring as it broke free of Nirauan’s atmosphere.
Part XI: Lingering Threads
Thrawn stood on the lip of the vale, his hands clasped behind his back, his crimson eyes fixed on the dwindling speck of light that was Serenity, arcing towards orbit. He tracked their trajectory, noted the precise vector of their jump to hyperspace. He remained there for several long moments after the ship had vanished, the silence of the Nirauan highlands settling back in, broken only by the crackle of comm traffic and the distant whine of retreating Imperial vehicles.
The commander of the Hand of Judgment unit, a grim-faced Chiss officer whose armor still bore the scorch marks of the recent engagement, approached him, his frustration a palpable, fuming presence. The escape of the Serenity crew, and more pointedly, of Medic Garowen and Kivu’rama’nurodo, was a clear failure.
Thrawn, however, merely offered a cryptic comment, his voice calm, almost serene. “Spare your frustration, Commander. Their escape had a purpose more useful than their apprehension would have proven.”
Puzzlement flickered in the officer’s gaze. Before he could voice his confusion, a new voice chimed in across Thrawn’s private comm channel. It was Thalias, one of the Chiss navigators, her voice tinged with the subtle, otherworldly resonance of those gifted with the Third Sight.
“Grand Admiral,” Thalias reported, “we have the trace.”
“You managed to isolate it?” Thrawn inquired, his attention instantly sharpening. “The Expanse Thread? The Rete Mirabilis? River Tam’s Force signature? Its unique vibration, its tenor?” He needed confirmation that their clairvoyants had successfully locked onto the unique psychic resonance of the Serenity’s most enigmatic passenger, using it to guide their calculations for the trajectory of the ship's fold-space jump.
“Confirmed, Grand Admiral,” Thalias replied. “The trace is faint, but stable. We have a high probability vector for their node point.”
A ghost of a smile touched Thrawn’s lips. “Excellent, Navigator. I and the assault team will be returning to the Steadfast within the next fifteen standard minutes. Continue the hunt.”
His gaze lifted once more to the empty sky, a silent promise hanging in the thin Nirauan air. The game was far from over.
Meanwhile, aboard Serenity, as the familiar disorientation of a hyperspace jump settled over them, Yhana leaned against the cool metal of the cargo bay wall, the adrenaline finally ebbing, leaving behind a profound weariness. Rama stood nearby, watching her, his expression unreadable. The rest of the Serenity crew were already dispersing, attending to their duties, giving the two fugitives a measure of privacy.
The comm crackled to life. It was Inara Serra, her voice calm and reassuring. “We’re clear for now. Setting course for New Cordova, Hind-Arabi Emirates. You two might want to get some rest. It’s going to be a long trip.”
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"""Epic Space Opera Short Story Segment Outline
I. Scene Conception: Setting the Stage
Following a rescue off the Juggernaut, an intervention by the EmpireoftheHand/Imperial Remanent, joined by Keltoi squadrons, Hind-Arabi, TerranFederacy, Fomori, and Virathi occurs.Subsequently, Yhana is still undergoing rehab with her recovery.This takes place as part of a temporary Amnesty under Thrawn’s EmpireoftheHand Occupation of Coruscant.Later, Yhana is involuntarily assigned by CoreFederacy’s/TerranFederacy’s Healer’sGuild to the XXXRedPlanet/Nirauan or other outpost planets.Meanwhile, in the fallout from Yhana’s rescue off the Juggernaut, Rama, having accessed and fallen increasingly to the DarkSide/Sith Teachings, has fled to ?XXXRegionsUnknown/Sith planets/systems… .Eventually, Rama returns to the XXXRedPlanets where Yhana is assigned.
II. The Reunion at the Clinic (Reference: Blacknotebook-Slide 143)
Rama essentially tracks Yhana’s assigned location.He is concealing his presence from XXXThrawn/CentralCommand/Luke/Ahsoka/SerenityCrew/Chiss/etc.Then, he arrives at her outreach clinic one evening during stormy/rainy weather.The clinic staff are absent, having left as Yhana had been completing supply requests, diagnostic testing, sign-offs, and submissions to the CMO/attending/director.Since her recovery and nanoplaexus reconditioning/priming, Yhana’s biokinesis/nanosynaptic stasis is extremely limited in application for genotherapeutic/molecular genomic alterations and other medical therapies; she has been treating patients with non-microkinetic/psionic interventions, per her grounded medical training.As she is inputting the lock-sequence to the clinic entrance for the evening, Yhana hears footsteps through the rain, beneath the awning.She senses Rama’s presence without having to turn around.
III. The Confrontation
Yhana refuses to face him, experiencing a flood of emotion – anger/grief/resentment – welling up at his betrayal on Hela, when he turned her over to Virathi/Cersei-Silri/Thrawn’s custody.She then states, "If you value either your life/or limb/-I suggest you remove yourself from my proximity presently/-or I will bear no responsibility for the violence about to happen/-I may not be able to handle much more than touching a hangnail currently/-but I have enough anger to makeup for where my abilities may be lacking currently/-no thanks to you-".In response, Rama’s voice, harsh, strained, but still firm, says,
"You have every right to carry out what treatment you think I deserve/-you/-above all/-I won’t fight you/-Rhyanon-".He projects "Rhyanon" into her mind – her mother’s name for her, Airmedth/Aermesha.This causes Rhyanon to react, spinning around, dropping her med-kit/knap-sac.She charges at him with a tortured cry, between sob, snarl, rage, and sorrow, driving her unthinking.As she strikes out at him, Yhana aims blows – hands, palms, feet – in timed sequence at his face, throat, stomach, knees, and ankles, causing him to stumble back.Rama refuses to raise his hands, divert, or defend against her blows.Yhana hears his muffled grunts of pain, air leaving his lungs, and gritted teeth when a fist or foot contacts the sensitive areas of joints.Yhana only slows in her assault when Rama lands off balance, catching himself on a knee and an arm outstretched, flailing to the ground – even that, a controlled grace from his past Jedi training in contact-fighting.She then looms over him where Rama stays kneeling, both breathing hard from the exertion.Yhana, words ripped from her throat, taunts him: "Come on," kicking at him, "lying a punch into his clavicle," "Come on/-you don’t get the comfort of disengagement here/-get up/-fight me/-you fucking/-traitor/-get up-".Rama’s passivity only fuels her rage more;
he still refuses to put up any more defense than continuing to fall back at her onslaught.This continues even when his lip splits, he gags at her throat strike, and grunts at the elbow driving under his axilla as he stumbles, falling into a solar-lamp cell/post.He is bleeding from his nose, with a gash under his eye, and a bruise blossoming over the pale blue dusk of his skin; both of them are rain-soaked.His crimson eyes then halt Yhana’s next strike, showing remorse and muted anger, perhaps at her.This hesitation prompts him to surge up as she remembers herself.He catches the motion of her falling hands, drawing her close and impeding her knee, which was about to drive into his inner thigh.Their eyes, burning into each other’s, are locked in fury and fear.Yhana makes no effort to fight his grip on her wrists.Rama carefully forms the words through a swelling lip, stating perfunctorily, "I think/-you made your point now-".In response, Yhana’s lip curls in scorn as she says, "I think I’ve only just started/-you fucking traitor/-shit-stained/bastard son of a-".At this moment, Rama cuts her off suddenly.
IV. The Offer and Decision (Reference: Blacknotebook-144)
Rama then asks, speaking above the rain pounding onto the permpavers, "do you want to get out of here-".This stalls Yhana into stuttering/sputtering disbelief.Yhana responds, "What-".Rama repeats, "Do you want to get out of here-".Yhana then confronts him, "I gave you my trust/-and you deceived me/-you broke my heart/-Rama-".Rama, his gaze haunted and shadowed by guilt, beseeching unspoken, conflicting with his words, makes a raw admission: "I had to-".Yhana, searching his eyes, the wave of hurt she’d kept buried/at bay, hidden beneath anger and hard-fought control, slipping, asks in a thin-hollow tone, "For what reason-".Rama, hiding nothing of himself in either spoken words or the words reaching her mind, replies, "You know the reason/-and there’s no penance sufficient across a million galaxies/-or lifetimes to ever ask forgiveness-".This leaves Yhana struggling for a reply to his own remorse.Rama then repeats, "so I’m asking instead/-do you want to get out of here-" .Suddenly conceding, Yhana says, "Yes," nodding rapidly, "yes-".
V. Overcoming Obstacles
Rama then lets go of her wrists.Yhana holds out her left, explaining, "but they’ve/-the Health/Medical Oversight Committee/-placed a nanosynaptic blocker/-biometric tracker/-implanted since I was/-installed as part of the Guild/-excising it will result in an infusion of a XXXDendritic-Axonal convulsant/-along with enough of a neuromuscular paralytic/-and an electrical discharge directly into the CNS/-to put me into a vegetative state for a year-".A daring glint appears in Rama’s eyes, possibly mischief or contempt at the persons who would have thought they could restrain her in such a pedestrian way. He says, "Then consider this a first test of your restored biokinesis/abilities/plexus reconditioning/-you know you’re fully capable of neutralizing that in less than it takes for me to twitch a Force-toss to anyone who’ll stand in our way-".Yhana wryly replies, "says you/-who won’t be struck by the cosmic judgement of the gods if I fail to XXX isolate/extract/impede the neurogenomic/chemical activation point/-alter the substrate binding/-at the XXXMembraneChannel-".Even as she speaks, she has already accessed and directed the scant tether of energy coiling through the localized nanocytes.She feels the slight pinch, the fasciculation of ocular muscles as the cerebral node clusters merge, alighting relevant pathways/cellular reactions, molecular pathways, shifting proteins, analyzing, and restructuring the apparatus of the cell-membrane channel and enzymatic reactions.Meanwhile, Rama opens his mind to the intoxication of her aura, merging with his own awareness – an aroma or a melody, sweet in temptation, weaving around him, sampling like vines from a tree, into a pool, a clear stream.
He pulls himself back as he feels a tremor in the Force awareness, the final alteration of a mechanism beyond his inner-vision.Yhana releases a ribbon of current, XXXColored, rippling through submolecular orbitals, an atomic shiver/shudder.She gives a sharp inhalation, a soft intake of discomfort at the static pulse that sparked up from her arm.She then releases her breath as she relaxes, feeling the binding of the nanosynaptic block impeding her full faculty surging back through reawakened biogenically enhanced nerve bundles – a blaze of light, cutting through gloom and shadow, dark waters afire in a setting sun across its surface.Following this, Yhana states, "They’ll know/-the moment the transmitter//-the moment my tracker isn’t transmitting-".Rama then asks, taking her wrist, "will you let me-".
VI. The Escape (Reference: Blacknotebook-Slide 145)
With a single bob of her head, Yhana reads his intent, seeing him reach for his vibroblade, kept hidden in a recess/pocket in the lower leg of his trousers/boot.Rama says, "tell me when-".Yhana, through gritted teeth, looking away, responds, "Just do it-".Rama then takes the vibro-switch, slicing once neatly over the skin covering the implant.A second, deeper incision frees the bundle of 3 slender/silver-rods, the length of her pinky finger, pulsing in stand-by mode from the bioelectric charger, sounding off a high-pitched, supersonic/ultrasonic whistle as Rama dislodges and dissects out the device.Yhana shudders, suppressing an involuntary whimper and grimace.Rama says, "I’m sorry," his voice melancholy-grave, belying more than the mere apology for the momentary discomfort caused
by removing the transponder/XXXnanocyte suppressant/-blocker.He drops it on the ground and stomps it, crushing it into the permacrete.The incision on Yhana is already knitting the layers of tissue, part of the regenerative gene-typing into the nanoplexus/biokinetic synapses.She then looks to his speeder versus her EquusAviani, which is waiting patiently, a majestic creature , and gives him an inquiring glance.Rama answers, "Both/-your mount should keep up just fine/-and confuse the pursuit when they arrive here-".Yhana subsequently abandons her med-kit/ruck, dropping it carelessly to the ground.She approaches the Equus and swings up onto the winged-horse’s back, while Rama climbs up to the seat of his XXXModel/Beloved Speeder.Yhana, through the barrier/blast-helm activated from the fractal/magnetic/-nanometallic shielding,
asks, "Do you have any idea where we’re going-".Rama replies, "not a clue/-do you trust me-".Yhana, mostly serious, responds, "not in the least-".Rama’s smile is a wicked-breathtaking flash of teeth, a crinkle at the corner of his mouth, rakish, reaching her before he activates his helm’s facial-barrier/shielding. He says, "good/-I’ve always enjoyed the element of surprise-".He hears her considering/wry sniff through the helm’s mask as she communicates something to her cybgenically/biogenically modified/enhanced mount, leaning over its neck, whispering a word, a command for flight or a vector/coordinates.The creature then launches itself skyward, unfurling massive XXXCartiledgeMetallicReinforced Alloy Wings.Its form is as large as 3 Wookies, graceful despite its muscled bulk, meant to withstand interstellar environment, bearing the XXXDiakini/Skywalkers/Hedge-Riders on its back in XXXDecurion/Units trained to fight at super-sentient speeds in coordinated formations – a deft, agile match, with the female-sky cavalry, against small fighters, reinforcements to targeted defense/offense.Yhana’s steed is
conditioned for medic-missions/initial reconnaissance/triaging/field/-orbital battle sites where med-units, other than a single mobile med-droid, can reach before med-vac/med-unit arrivals.Rama swings his speeder around, igniting engines, trailing after the direction Yhana and her mount set.Their route takes them into the sheets of rain and buffeting winds, over various terrain, circumventing cities, main highways, thoroughfares, and larger settlements.Eventually, they arrive at a DiveBar, inspired by jute-joints/dancehall/divebars/dance halls of 1920s/1930s speakeasy blues venues, with a live-cover band of XXXVarious Aliens covering Terran blues/antiquated 20-60s era songs like StandByMe, XXXRoyOrbison/PatsyKline, etc.
VII. A Fleeting Respite
Rama and Yhana leave the Equus and Rama’s speeder outside .Inside, they play a drinking game, slow dance, and make out, ignoring for the moment the obvious unresolved issues surrounding Rama’s betrayal of Yhana.
VIII. Journey to Seclusion, Evolving Dynamics, and Unspoken Tensions (Reference: Blacknotebook-Slide 147, 148, 151)
Eventually, Rama regretfully mentions the prudence of making their exit from the dive bar before the requisition team sent to retrieve Yhana tracks them down.Yhana had sent off her Equus before they’d come within visual distance of the dive bar, seating herself behind Rama so they arrived on his speeder.Yhana and Rama, both tipsy, stumble out, hanging on each other, laughing.Rama mentions summoning her Equus once they’re in a more rural/wooded part away from the small town/dive bar, and sending off the speeder on remote with decoy drones programmed to different coordinates to confuse the pursuit from Thrawn’s special ops/search unit.Subsequently, via her Equus – which Yhana had warned had a repute for reacting/rejecting male-riders quite violently – to her
surprise, accepts Rama with little more than a whuffle/nicker before rising into the skies again.Awen, her fen-wolf/XXXFamiliar, sharing a psychic imagery bond, communicated a place/locale far from known sentient established routes/settlements, lost in the highlands of the XXXPlanet.Yhana and Rama fly to this locale from the divebar after taking Rama’s camp-gear from his speeder and setting it on XXXRemoteRecall/RadioFrequency/CommSilence until summoned.With alcohol and XXXBBQ food, they set up their small encampment along a mountain bluff/in a vale, surrounded by ancient temple ruins/walls/arches, flowers, and waterfalls tumbling down the vale/mountainsides.The skies exhibit cosmic grandeur, with moons, small planetary satellites visible, and stars .Rama and Yhana pass out the first night after binging horrid, prepack XXXCheeto/equivalent
snack food.A playful dynamic then evolves the next day as they explore the surrounding landscape.Despite their intimacy in Hela’s caves (before Rama’s revealing of their locale to Thrawn/and the Virathi/-Silri/Cersei) and at the divebar, they’re shy, almost platonic with each other.Yhana, as always, takes a survey of the local ecology/fauna, cataloguing species/physiologies into her XXXCentral cerebral plexus/domains for later analysis.They explore and discuss various topics through the day (?TBD), a deeper purpose to their having arrived at this site .Later, at night, they crack open a bottle of quality Whiskey they’d first shared on Tatooine.This occurs beneath the bonfire/wide-open night sky, sprinkled with myriad stars; a near-by
planet or small planetoid/satellite adds to the mystical /early-mid-spring setting of blooming night flowers/vines/creatures .Streaming a holo-pod of Terran songs, Yhana dances to SweetJane/CowBoyJunkies as they smoke a few joints and munch on vegetarian XXXPlantspecies Kebobs.At some point, they enact the Keltoi-HindArabi custom evolved from Bagua/8WalkingPalms.As they circle each other, facing each other going through the motions, it serves as a solemn, unacknowledged coupling ritual, binding psionics to each other, the surrounding environment/cosmos/consciousness.Enmeshed in each other’s senses, they merely fall asleep, sharing psychic intimacy and conversation.During this psychic intimacy/conversation, Yhana explains her lack of ire, stating that as a Chiss, Rama was adhering to biologic programming from Chiss evolution.Continuing this dialogue, likely on the night before Thrawn's anticipated attack (or as part of these ongoing nightly
conversations):Rama, giving Yhana that deliriously gorgeous smile, replies to her explanation, "Ah/-the Chiss feral side-".Yhana, admitting, "You were hunters/-predators/-surviving in dark subterranean caverns/-arctic extremes/-I suspect that influenced the manipulative/-seductive/-patterns of social modeling/-your species expresses/-I realize it might be uncomfortable/-entertaining the possibility/-you’re merely enacting eons worth of ingrained biopsychosocial survival mechanisms/-as well as introspection/-which your species displays an amazing ineptitude for-".Rama, with that wicked grin, responds, "I’m freely open to admitting my susceptibility to instinctive behaviors-".As Yhana leans in toward him, drawn almost as if enspelled, her mouth centimeters from Rama, she stops from completing the action of a kiss.Her hand comes up between them, and leaning back from him, snorting laughter catches him off-guard as she says, "Yeah/-you’re not forgiven yet/-not until
I’ve considered an appropriate retribution-".Rama, trying to collect himself, senses left reeling from her alchemy spun between them until it’d burst like a Bantha’s flatulence, setting him back to reality hard, states ruefully, "That was cruel/-that was real cruel/-playing me like that/-TerranGirl-".Yhana, ice slipping into her voice only for a moment, a reminder of how he’d betrayed her, the torture to which she’d been submitted in the clutches of Thrawn, the Virathi/Silri/Cersi, asks, "Shall we discuss cruelty-".Rama, the flirtation/playfulness dropping away to a shamed mien, looks away from her toward the fire and stutters, "I’m-I’m sorry," uncharacteristically not-Chisslike in his sudden chagrin.Yhana, chastising herself silently even as she lets herself fall under something of that charm, says, "You know/-you’re sort of adorable when you’re guilty/-especially with this touch of Dark Side to you/-however much it may/-may not be a part of your instinctive/inherited behave-".Rama cuts in, "Alright/-not everything I do/-is simply because I’m miming some sort of
evolutionary programming-".Her laughter more than makes up for his momentary guilt/chagrin, at least until her next words.Yhana states, "It’s not me you need to be worried about/-Rama-".Picking up on the seriousness beneath the feigned lightness of her tone, Rama says, "Kalinda-".Yhana confirms his insight with a nod, "She has ways/-of/-," pausing, "-imparting lessons/-shall we say/-when her loved ones have been harmed/-threatened-".Rama, his words dying at the image Yhana constructs into his mind’s eye, says, "I know my mind shouldn’t suddenly think about/-a trashy holonovella fantasy/-oh/huh-that must have been/-yeah/-asphyxiation in quite that moment-".Yhana, taking the incentive for her leave on that note, says, "Good night/-Kivu’rama’nurodo," wondering if he’s wincing at her command of Cheunh or the formal application of his name indicating his current status in her estimation.She hears him murmur a vague, "and to you/-Medic Garowen," his thoughts still tangled in contemplation of Kalinda’s imminent vengeance/punishment/justice .
IX. The Pursuers' Deliberation and Strategy (Reference: Blacknotebook-Slide 146, 147)
Meanwhile, the scene switches to a Search party, HandofJudgement, out tracking down various vector/coordinates.They have traced the newest lead to another drone/decoy and are reporting back to Thrawn.Thrawn is with ar’Alani at the field/search vehicle/transport.ar’Alani sees the annoyance twitching/tightening Thrawn’s mouth at the news of another false trail; his cousin, ever intransigent, ever resourceful, ever a thorn in Thrawn’s side since their reacquaintance.He notes as well her own soft sigh at the news, impatience she can’t quite siphon into a more positive, less critical line of emoting.Thrawn, expectant, asks, "Have you thoughts or insights to share/-Admiral ar’Alani-".ar’Alani replies, sharper than she’d intended, muting the following words after her initial, "Yes/-in
fact/-have you considered that perhaps/-they just want to be left alone-".Thrawn’s quirked eyebrow doesn’t hide his prosaic tone as he states, "There are protocols for submitting a request for formal leave/-a fact Medic Garowen apparently either forgot/-or has conveniently ignored/-now leading to the current situation of her pursuit/-I assume/-given the XXXVariable/Encrypted decoy/-frequencies/-that my cousin happens to be the accompanying party/accomplice/-have you something to add, admiral-".ar’Alani’s exasperation is only too evident; she almost rolls her eyes in a much too human pattern of mimed expression.Instead, her gaze narrows upon him in the Chiss equivalent of rolling eyes .ar’Alani asks, "May I speak openly-". Thrawn nods.She continues, observing Thrawn thinking about this, examining the holo-display of the useless drone
locations, the extrapolated coordinates/probabilities of potential unsearched locales based on the starting point from that sleazy trash bar where they’d traced the initial XXXExhaust/Engine/Drive output of Rama’s speeder. She states, like a War Officer/Commander, ignoring his humoring lift of an eyebrow, "you’re thinking about this…".She then states the obvious, noting that in all of these years, the Stars as her Witness, her loyalty to him would never waver, even if it had faltered and raged at him, and still did frequently, but he truly was a XXXLizardBrain when it came to anticipating/reading sentient motive at times, particularly when driven by emotion.She tells him, "you need to stop approaching this as Supreme Commander Thrawn/-and instead/-puzzle this out as simple/-
Mith’raw’nuruodo-".Thrawn, covering his bafflement, simply says, "Explain-".ar’Alani, her frustration trickling into her voice, explains, "Thawn/-Rama is Kivu/-blood-kin to you/-he’s probably the closest living relative in this galaxy/-who thinks like you/-where/-in all of this XXXPlanet/-would you take your potential romantic interest/-were you seeking to impress/entice her/-in a place almost guaranteed/likely to entrance the senses-".Her pointed look finally breaks through the analytic parts of his mind. His eyes suddenly widen, the cultured, ever cool mystique he so carefully cultivated falling away to the sudden breach of memory as he arrives at the conclusion she’d been attempting to communicate."Ah-," he intones, "-you’re referring to when we’d-".ar’Alani breaks in, "-been young/-and horny/-and contra-authority as well/-yeah-".Thrawn’s eyes rest on her for longer than the necessary beat, not quite probing, which she returns with an arched brow, trying to keep her features schooled to professional distance.She does not believe there’s anything more than a fond
reminiscence in his gaze at the rare times schedules and inclination allowed them the indulgence of coupling – sweet and fierce, and over all too soon, as their responsibilities called them away to Empire, to the Hand, to Ascendency.One day, perhaps; she hoped he read the heat patterns of her sudden anxiety/guilt as a temporary allowance desire, recalled, quickly quashed – the daughter she’d born after that last time. She pushes the thought down hard, beneath the flurry of immediate preoccupation, before he might read through their shared Sight.Clearing her throat, ar’Alani motions to the display, "So/-does that narrow your search options now/-Mith’raw’nuruodo-".Thrawn’s passing smirk only makes her stare at him harder, before he glances away at the XXX3D Topographic display of the XXXWestern Zone/XXXPlanet.He states, "There’s five possibilities-," the locales lighting
up on the grid, "-the first of them/-I’m almost certain is where they’ll be/-but I’ll have XXXHandofJudgement/-Search party/-scout them out first/-before directing the unit in full approach-".ar’Alani, skeptical, remarks, "I somehow doubt that the entire XXXUnit/-in force/-is going to sway the weight of persuasion in your favor/-SupremeCommander/-they’re 2 people/-not to underestimate their profound defensive potential/-even if lightly armed/-but really/-overkill-".Thrawn, considering her words in silence, issues the command via his wrist-comm, punching in the updated orders.He then says in that annoyingly indulgent, almost teasing tone, "we’ll accompany the HandofJudgement/Judgement’s Hammer/-as the forward press/-keep the rest of the XXXUnit in reserve-," his eyes searching hers, miming an appeal of approval.ar’Alani inclines her head, her lids lowered beneath a hooded haze.
X. The Warning (Reference: Blacknotebook-Slide 148)
Yhana awakens to the nickering of her Equus early the next morning, foggy brained and cotton-mouthed.Rama is still at her side.She starts at seeing ar’Alani in field-armor, sitting on a near-by stump/rock, unarmed, blaster still sheathed.ar’Alani states, "You have about a 10 minute start/-before Thrawn/-and the XXXUnit/HandofJudgement arrive-".Rama, awake but with eyes still closed, says, "he knows you’re here-".ar’Alani replies matter-of-factly, "of-course-".Rama, squinting through one eye, groaning at the sunlight, remarks, "he’s coming with an entire squadron/-I’m flattered/-is expecting us to fight or flee-".ar’Alani responds, "I won’t answer that/-but I think you can extrapolate the conclusion yourself, Kivu’rama’nurodo-".Rama registers Yhana’s murmured comment
regarding their vector/coordinate and numbers of force, communicated in psychic transference from her Equus: an approaching frontal with the elite HandofJudgement – 10 to 12 troopers/DeathTroopers/-Shadowtroopers .ar’Alani then takes her leave to rejoin the frontal assault unit, saying in parting, "May warrior’s fortune by with you-".Rama only scoffs, "tell my cousin/-he can go stuff his contrived/manufactured sense of honor back up his art-picking arse-".ar’Alani, with a grim pinch of her lips, overlooks the insult and only states, "You could also just surrender/-and spare us all the confrontation-".Yhana interjects, "He could also call off the pursuit-".ar’Alani replies, "one is as likely as the other isn’t it?-".Yhana offers a mere, "Yeah," with resignation and acceptance, watching ar’Alani depart.Following this, Rama and Yhana ready the area around the ruins, taking up a position that optimizes cover and forces the frontal assault to only attack by single fighter or 2-fighter approach.
XI. Confrontation, Truce, and Moral Dilemma (Reference: Blacknotebook-Slide 149, 150)
A scene ensues: Rama and Yhana versus Thrawn’s frontal assault force, with a reserve unit kept back .Eventually, with repeat assaults, Rama is still over-powering the various onslaughts/attacks.Yhana, with the Equus, is unable to join in the battle due to the close quarter of the fighting space in the ???TBD/Immediate ruins/central area (versus other type site).She covers Rama’s blind-spots .As the face-off with Thrawn’s elite XXXHandofJudgement/special-ops/field unit wears down both sides:Rama has more deeply awakened/refined latent/dormant Force abilities, studying Sith powers, channeling the DarkSide, which balances Luke’s-Leia’s Lightside abilities.Yhana can feel him losing his resistance to the temptation of destruction, even as his exhaustion, with hers, is beginning to cause slip-ups and
misses, just as the HandofJudgement and eventually Thrawn’s warriors flail as well.Yhana then convinces Rama and Thrawn for a temporary cease-fire.She promises to tend to injuries with a field-med kit, applying her biokinesis to examining/triaging and stabilizing the most serious injuries.Facing Thrawn, about to return to her and Rama’s refuge and readying for another melee, Yhana states, "Your troopers are stabilized/-some seriously injured/-and will need more intervention/management at a proper infirmary/-but none critical-".Thrawn responds, "you could end this now/-you know/-by returning to your duties/-there would be no charges/-no penalties/-or recriminations-".Yhana counters, "or you could end this/-by just leaving us alone/-calling off your attack-".He says nothing at her words as she turns. His voice stops her.Thrawn says, "I wasn’t lying
when I said I wanted you by my side/-with the Empire of the Hand/-I recruited out here to XXXRedPlanet/BufferZone/-not to isolate you/-but because I thought/-this seemed an environs/setting where your talents/training would most thrive to the benefit of your patients/newly served/underserved colonists-".Yhana firmly states, "I’m not coming back-".Thrawn’s voice reaches out to her again, "You may not have a choice/-Rhyanon/Medic Garowen/-you know what darkness comes this way/-and you know/-you’re the only hope that might offer some sliver of a chance against it/the Shadow-".Upon hearing this, Yhana turns back to him rapidly, stalking back to him, her words full of rage – enough that a XXXCommander lifts his blaster-rifle, but is signaled to hold fire by a motion of Thrawn’s hand.Yhana’s words are heated, enunciated, edged: "You/-you thought/-you anticipated/-you foresaw/-you figured/-You/-never the person you’re considering/-never their own input/-or concerns/-or wishes/-
desires/-I wonder if you’ve ever seen anyone around you as other than a tool/-an asset/-weapon/-or potential threat to be deployed or diffused-".Thrawn replies, "There’s none who ever been assigned to my service/-who’ve continued unwillingly/-nor yet grown into their own confidence in their abilities-".Yhana challenges, "Decided by you-".Thrawn clarifies, "fostered/-not forced/-Rhyanon/-even as such decisions applied to your own path/-you’ll abandon your profession’s oath then/-the people who’ve come to rely upon your service/compassion-".Yhana hesitates at the shelter of the inner-hall where Rama awaits just beyond direct blast-rifle range. She says, "There’s sufficient resource at the clinic/and the satellite/ambulatories with staffing/and supply stock/equipment now/-per the criteria of our original arrangement-".Thrawn, a weariness in his eyes/voice, responds, "You know that’s not what I mean-".Yhana, something sorrowed/haunting her gaze, looks over her shoulder for a moment, weighing her options.She is conflicted by the underlying meaning of his words, the looming threat of Abaddon/the ShadowEntities/Revenants.She glances to Rama, who reads the meaning in her beseeching look.Rama then states solemnly, "This one’s on you/-TerranGirl/-but by my life/-I’ll honor whatever you do-".Yhana, with an imperceptible nod, a silent understanding echoing more in mutual sentiment than thought in each of their senses/minds, then makes a sudden movement, feinting.
XII. Sudden Intervention and Renewed Escape (Reference: Blacknotebook-Slide 150)
As a result of her feint, Rama and Yhana move like birds in flight, reading and anticipating each other’s motions.Yhana twists, sinking to her knees and turning, with her XXXQuarter/ShockStaff, blocking a XXXHandofJudgementTrooper’s XXXElectroNinjaShuriken/BladedDiscs.Simultaneously, Rama (referred to as Revan in this note segment) moves toward Thrawn in moves blurred by an unnatural speed, rolling with his saber readied.Thrawn, in that strange distant manner of his mind, methodical, marvels at the fluidity/perfect timing of their sequential motions, like dancers-stars aligned in melodious symmetry. This strangely ignites a pang of remorse – the way she could make motion into a poetry of its own creation.Suddenly, Thrawn feels himself absurdly lifted off the ground in the impact of ar’Alani crashing into him, dragging them both to the ground as a spray of laser-guns alight over their heads.XXXTroopers dive for cover as the roar of a XXXTransport/
LandSpeeder/MF813 vs 950/AirborneMule fills the vale, vegetation flattening in the vicinity of the downwash/crosswind generated by the thrusters as the speeder roars overhead.Mara/Zoe, with Jayne and Mal piloting the vessel, arrive. Rama’s XXXSwoop also arrives by remote.Yhana, quickly registering the sudden change of events heralded by the new arrivals, lets out a whoop of relief at her Equus’s appearance.She mounts (or maybe not, the note is unclear) and without any prompting, the Equus, understanding her psychic link/image of the Serenity’s location, moves.The XXXMuleCrew communicates the location of the Serenity: XXXKilometers/GeographicFeature/Rendezvous.Mara mentions the narrow lead they
have, even as Thrawn has already issued commands for reinforcements, including XXXLandSpeeders/PlanetaryTIE-fighters, in pursuit.This ultimately leads to a chase-scene: Rama and Yhana on Rama’s swoop, trying to evade Thrawn and the HandofJudgement pursuit with XXXPlanetAtmosphere-adapted TIE/ArmedLandSpeeders, coordinated by ar’Alani and the command crew, with Thrawn in direct line of chase.At the assigned coordinates, as XXXTIEs are closing in on Rama and Yhana, the Equus attempts bumping a few ImperialSpeeder/pursuers.The Serenity then arrives over the horizon, sweeping in with XXXGunners firing cover.Thrawn and ar’Alani call off the XXXSpeeders/Planetary TIEs, giving half-hearted chase, knowing the Serenity will out-race them into the atmosphere with its NodalJump Drive activated.Rama, Yhana, and the Equus board the Serenity. ???TBD somehow Awen is already on-board.
XIII. Aftermath and Lingering Threads (Reference: Blacknotebook-Slide 150, 151)
Thrawn tracks their trajectory to orbit and their jump/fold point. He keeps his eyes fastened on the sky for another few moments.He senses the hesitation of his XXXUnitCommander/HandofJudgement, who is fuming silently at the escape of the SerenityCrew, Yhana, and Rama.To which Thrawn merely comments to the XXXOfficer, "spare you frustration/-XXXHandofJudgementCommander/-their escape had a purpose more useful than their apprehension would have proven-".Puzzlement is in the officer’s gaze as Thalias/Vahanya badges in across comm-frequency.In answer to Thrawn’s inquiry about if they’d managed to isolate/narrow/hone-in/focus on the XXXExpanseThread/ReteMirabalis/ForceSignature/Presence – vibration/tenor – of River, allowing clairvoyance to guide the XXXFold/Node point vector:Thalias confirms the trace, sensed via the Force/ChissNavigator3rdSite.Thrawn states he and the assault team will be returned in the next 15 minutes and to continue the hunt.The scene concept notes that after the pursuit by Thrawn, Rama/Yhana and the Serenity/TeamLady are headed for NewCordova/HindArabiEmirates.
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