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ASSESMENT”

1. Which of the following is NOT a type of intertextual relationship?

a. allusion

b. calque

c. pastiche

d. all of the above

2. Who originated the theory of intertextuality?

a. Benjamin Bloom

b. Immanuel Kant

c. Julia Kristeva

d. Sigmund Freud

3. This refers to all attributes that distinguish the communicative content under analysis as an object of study.

a. deliberate textuality

b. intertextuality

c. latent textuality

d. textuality

4. It is usually a small excerpt of a hypotext that assists in the understanding of the new hypertext's original themes, characters or contexts.

a. calque

b. parody

c. pastiche

d. plagiarism

5. It pertains to everything you've ever seen or read that sticks somewhere in your memory and affects your understanding of the world

a. allusion

b. deliberate intertextuality

c. latent intertextuality

d. quotation

6. It is the author's borrowing and transformation of a prior text or to a reader's referencing of one text in reading another.

a. intertextuality

b. parody

c. textuality

d. translation

7. It imitates the style or character of the work of one or more other artists.

a. parody

b. pastiche

c. Plagiarism

d. Textuality

8. It means to borrow a word or phrase from another language while translating it components so as to create a new lexeme.

a. Calque

b. deliberate intertextuality

c. latent intertextuality

d. parody

9. It is the process of translating words or text from one language to another.

a. allusion

b. plagiarism

c. quotation

d. translation

10. a written form of the oral echo. It can be in tagged or untagged form.

a. allusion

b. calque

c. quotation

d. translation

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REVIEWER IN CREATIVE WRITING (FINALS)

Setting -A literary element of literature used in novels, short stories, plays, films, etc., and usually introduces the when and where of the story during the exposition (beginning).

Dialogue -An interchange of conversation of the characters whether in a movie or a play.

Foreshadowing -It is where the author suggests future events in a story, or outcome, before they happen or take place.

Rising action-This is when the main character is in crisis and the conflict begins to unfold.

Foreshadowing -A literary device in which a writer gives an advance hint of what is to come later in the story.

1st person Point of View -A type of Point of View (POV) that is usually identifiable using the pronoun "I".

Protagonist -The main character, who creates the action of the plot and is often a hero or heroine of the story

Personification-When inanimate objects or abstract concepts are given or provided with human self-awareness' or characteristics.

Setting-example (One morning, from a bushy forest, a wounded came out and was seen by Ella)

Conflict - Example (Her father was killed in an accident, and she was left with her evil stepmother. antagonist - Example (Her stepmother was a wicked witch, and she always makes her life miserable.

Theme Example: The story is about the importance of self-love and adventure

Confidante-Example Benedict was his best friend. He tells him even his deepest secrets.

Alliteration -The repetition of consonant sounds in succeeding words within the same sentence or line.

Hyperbole -An exaggerated description of an idea or action.

Metaphor -Applying a direct relationship to an object or idea as a substitute for another.

Oxymoron- An idea of contradicting terms

Parallelism -It is the use of identical language, events, structures, or ideas in different parts of a text.

Symbolism -It's when objects or images are used to represent abstract ideas. It could be something tangible or visible, while the idea it'strying to symbolize is something abstract or universal.

Irony - An absurd or mocking opposition to what is expected or appropriate.

Translation -It is the process of translating words or text from one language to another.

Textuality - This refers to all attributes that distinguish the communicative content under analysis as an object of study.

Parody -It is usually a small excerpt of a hypotext that assists in the understanding of the new hypertext's original themes, characters or contexts.

Julia Kristeva - originated the theory of intertextuality

Latent Intertextuality -It pertains to everything you've ever seen or read that sticks somewhere in your memory and affects your understanding of the world

Intertextuality -It is the author's borrowing and transformation of a prior text or to a reader's referencing of one text in reading another.

Pastiche -It imitates the style or character of the work of one or more other artists.

Quotation -A written form of the oral echo. It can be in tagged or untagged form.

Calque -It means to borrow a word or phrase from another language while translating it components so as to create a new lexeme.

Connotation refers to the additional meaning or emotion that a word carries beyond its literal definition. It includes the associations, feelings, or implications that people may have about a word based on their cultural, social, or personal experiences.

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LECTURE

INTERTEXTUALITY is...

A text's meaning is shaped by another text.

It is about the interrelationship between related works or similar works of literature that mirror and influence how the audience interpret the text.

It also refers to the author's borrowing and modification of a prior text or to a reader's referencing of one text in reading another.

Technically speaking, intertextuality is a combination of a Latin prefix Inter which means "between", "among", "in the midst of", "mutually", "together", and "reciprocally" and Textuality which refers to all attributes that determine the communicative content under analysis as an object of study. It is not a literary or rhetorical device, but rather a fact about literary texts - the fact that they are all intimately interconnected. This is applicable to all texts such as, works of philosophy, novels, films, newspaper articles, songs, and the like. In order to further understand intertextuality, it's important to understand the broad definition of the word "text" itself. Each text is greatly affected by all the texts that came before it, since those texts have influenced the author's thinking and exquisite choices. Remember that every text, on its broadest sense is intertextual.

Julia Kristeva was the inventor of the term "intertextuality." She was influenced by both Ferdinand de Saussure and Mikhail Bakhtinian through their models and attempts to combine their major theories toward the origin of language.

Types of Intertextuality

a. Deliberate Intertextuality forging a relationship between the old text and the new one.

b. Latent Intertextuality pertains to everything you've ever seen or read that sticks somewhere in your memory and affects your understanding of the world which contribute to building your specific worldview which, in turn, determines how you write or create art.

Intertextual Figures

Allusion - a figure of speech where an object from unrelated context is referred to covertly or indirectly with another. It is left to the audience to do or make the direct connection. Where the connection is directly and explicitly stated by the author, it is instead usually termed a reference.

Ex. You don't have to be William Shakespeare to write poetry. (William Shakespeare was used here to explain ones prowess in writing poetry.)

Quotation- is a written form of the oral echo. It can be in tagged and untagged form. It can also be direct and indirect.

Ex. According to violin player Itzhak Perlman, "The most important thing to do is really listen."

Calque - is a loanword from the French noun calque which means tracing; imitation; close copy. It means to borrow a word or phrase from another language while translating its components, so as to create a new lexeme in the target language.

Plagiarism - When using intertextuality, it is usually a small excerpt of a hypotext that assists in the understanding of the new hypertext's original themes, characters or contexts. While this does seem to include intertextuality, the intention and purpose of using of another's work, this is now what allows intertextuality to be excluded from this definition.

Translation-means to transfer in a stable meaning. It is the process of translating words or text from one language into another.

Pastiche- imitates the style or character of the work of one or more other artists.

Parody-any cultural practice which provides a relatively polemical or comical allusive imitation of another cultural production or practice

ELEMENTS OF DRAMA

1. Setting this refers to the time and the place in which the events occur in the story

2. Characters the people in the play and thus considered the principal material in drama.

Character Aspects:

a. Physical this considers the age, sexual category, size, race and color of the character as well as the external attributes which may be taken from the description of the playwright.

b. Social involves all aspects that can be imagined from the character's world or environment as exemplified by the his/her status, occupation, job or trade, creed and affiliation

c. Psychological this refers to the inner mechanism of the mind of the character as exemplified by his physical and emotional responses

d. Moral-the decisions of the characters, either socially acceptable or not, exposing intentions projecting what's just or not.

3. Plot lays down the series of events that form the entirety of the play. It's the

framework that unites the events to a cohesive form and sense.

4. Dialogue the exchange of words between the characters in a play

Monologue - words meant to be spoken by one actor

Soliloquies speeches spoken by a character alone on the stage

5. Staging the physical spectacle a play presents to the audience in a performance by the actors

Elements: (1) the stage set; (2) the different props and costumes used by the actors; (3) their movement onstage; and (4) the lighting and sound effects Blocking the actors' movement onstage during their delivery of the dialogue

Stage Business - the actors' nonverbal gestures

6. Theme considered as the unifying element that defines the dramatized idea of the play. It is the over-all implication of the action.

7. Style refers to the mode of expression or presentation of the play which points out the playwright's position or viewpoint in life.

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POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE CONNOTATION

Positive Connotation:

1. Slim

2. Frugal

3. Lively

4. Thrifty

5. Tenacious

6. Resourceful

7. Charismatic

8. Resilient

9. Passionate

10. Courageous

Negative Connotation:

1. Cheap

2. Stubborn

3. Sneaky

4. Arrogant

5. Sloppy

6. Moody

7. Clingy

8. Stubborn

9. Picky

10. Nosy

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𝑻𝑯𝑬 𝑶𝑵𝑬 𝑻𝑯𝑨𝑻 𝑷𝑨𝑺𝑺𝑬𝑫 𝑨𝑾𝑨𝒀

script writing

CONTACT INFORMATION

Jelly ann david Reeves

Sanisidro Rest magalang Pamp

Philippines

09977954856

Jellyannreeves21@gmail.com

Cast of character

Lorie: She's the girl who's loved by three guys.

Aira: She's Lorie's friend who's always by her side.

Pual: He's Lorie's ex who cheats.

Jack: He's also Lorie's ex who hurt her.

Michael: The one who truly loves Lorie.

Synopsis:

It's a tale of a woman who pours her genuine love into three men, believing in the sincerity of her affection. Despite her earnest efforts and deep emotional investment, she finds herself confronted with the harsh reality that love doesn't always guarantee reciprocity. In the end, despite her best intentions and heartfelt devotion, she's left with the painful realization that loving deeply doesn't shield her from the potential for heartbreak.

Time

The past and present

Setting

House

Restuarants

Present

The day is beautiful today, the air is refreshing to breathe. The sky is clear, and I'm sitting in the midst of all this. It would be even happier if you were here beside me.

Past

The alarm blared loudly (tot, tot, tot)

(Lorie turned off the alarm)

Lorie: "Here we go again... (sigh) Good morning to myself! Good morning, Charlie!" (Charlie happily bounding towards Lorie, while his tail wagging with excitement.)

,

After a while

Lorie: Baby you're my serenity, My favorite melody my remedy i need you gonna be my one and only (singing the “baby you’re my serenity” by : deonella , while taking a bath),

An hour after

Hmm what will i wear (while looking at mirror) is this good (tried to compare the ,clothes ,facing it to mirror ,fitting in herself ) would i wear casual? Hmm maybe a dress? I guess this dress would be fit ,Im sure he will love this hihihi (giggling excitedly)

Tururut tururut….Tururtururt….(phone ringing)

Lorie: Hello Paul!

Paul: Hello baby

Lorie: Are you already there baby? Wait for me i'm still getting dressed

Paul: Baby im sorry but our date today won't proceed."

Lorie: "Why is there anything happening?" (she asked, her tone tinged with disappointment.)

Paul: Yes, Mama asked for help to drive them, they just need to go somewhere.

Lorie: Why, aren't there others who can drive the car there? Even among your siblings? (Lorie's sarcastic tone)

Paul: Well, there are, but Mama said I should do it since I haven't been able to join them for a long time.

Lorie:( Sigh) okay, take care then. I'm already dressed anyway.

Paul: I'm really sorry, baby. I'll make it up to you next time.i love you

Lorie: It's always like that. I love you too (signs in disappointment)

….Sigh, I'll just lie down again since I don't have anything else to do anyway.

As she slept deeply, her phone rang again, disrupting the peace like an unexpected guest at a quiet gathering.

(seeing Aira’s call’s in her phone, then answered it)

Lorie: Hello? (im her half sleep voice )

Aira: Hello best, are you still asleep? I thought you have a date today

Lorie: As you can see it didn’t happen

Aira: Why not?

Lorie: Because he said he'll accompany his mom.

Aira: Oh, is that so? That's sad. Well, just come with me to the mall!

Lorie: Nah, I don't feel like it. I think I'll just rest.

Aira: Oh, you'll probably just sulk there. I'll wait for you here. Bye!

(Aira abruptly ends the call)

(Lorie Just sign in defeat)

At the mall

While Lorie was talking to Aira at phone:

Lorie: Hello, where are you?

Aira: I'm here at the entrance.

Lorie: Where? Wave so I can see you.

Aira: Here, my hand is raised.

Lorie: Oh, I see you now. I'm coming over.

"Best!" Lorie startles Aira.(then both lough)

while walking to mall

Lorie: What are you going to do?

Aira: I'm just going to buy something.

While Lorie and Aira were walking, Aira spotted something ,

Aira: Best, where did your boyfriend go, by the way?

Lorie: Oh, he drove his mom somewhere, I think.

Aira: Then who's that? (looking in another direction)

Lorie: Who? (also looking at what Aira is seeing)

They saw Paul kissing someone else.

Aira: Isn't that Paul?

Lorie: Huh? It doesn't seem like him. Maybe just someone who looks like him.

Aira: What? Are you blind? That's Paul, aren't you aware? You say He's with his mom? Should we confront them? I've always said that guy can't be trusted since at the beginning! (Aira's angry outburst)

As tears welled up in Lorie's eyes, she rushed forward and suddenly slapped her boyfriend.

Paul: Lorie?! What are you doing here? (Paul's startled question, holding the cheek that was slapped).

Lorie suddenly slapped the woman.

Lorie: That's for you!

Lorie was about to leave, but Paul stopped her.

Paul: Baby, I'm sorry. Give me a chance.

(Lorie shook off his grasp on her arm)

Lorie: I've given you too many chances already! I can't take it anymore! Let's end this. (Lorie's voice trembled as tears streamed down her face)

Paul: Please! I'm sorry, Lorie. (While tightly holding Lorie's hand, Paul pleads desperately.)

Aira forcefully removed Paul's grip from Lorie's arm.

Aira: Let her go! We're leaving. (Aira and Lorie walked away.)

In the midst of the loud, bustling bar..

Lorie: huhuhu (Crying in agony)

Aira: Stop crying , Bessy. He doesn't deserve you, don't cry just because of someone like him, that girl is like a leech, she clings to Paul as if they're a perfect match, both cheaters, okay. Let's go, you've had too much to drink.

Lorie: I gave my all, why does he still deceive me? I've been so foolish for him, but he still does this. I've experienced so much trauma because of him, (crying while drunk).

Aira: Just keep crying, the right person will come for you, I'm here as your best friend, okay? Just stop this nonsense with that guy. (Aira's long speech)

When Aira looked at her friend, she saw her deeply asleep, snoring loudly and hunched over.

Aira:(sign) Lorie, Lorie That;d right, Just sleep i will just take you home

As the days go on Lorie always cries suddenly even when she's just eating or any simple thing she does. For almost two months all she does is get too busy in her work until she exhaust herself and get drunk after.

TOT TOT, TOT (The alarm blared loudly)

Lorie turned off the alarm then take her time to gaze in the ceiling

Lorie: You can do this Lorie you need to stop this madness and move on.(Lorie said to herself,).

he began to tidy up, preparing herself for work.

Co-worker Jack: Good morning, Lorie. You seem down. Can you smile once in a while?

Lorie: There, I'm fine now. (Lorie smiled sarcastically)

Co-worker Jack: Tss, that'll do. Better than always having a frown on your face.

(Jack has been Lorie's colleague for a long time, but they've become close friends, and at one point, they even became romantically involved.)

Jack:Love, don't you want us to live together? We've been together for 2 years now, right?

Lorie: Can we handle that? It's not something we can just jump into. It's not like rice that you can spit out when it's too hot. We'll be facing different responsibilities.

Jack: I know that, dear. As long as we're together, we can handle it.

Lorie: Okay, sure.

Jack: Shall we move to my apartment then?

Lorie: Sure, that way we can save money.

(Lorie's relationship with Jack started off smoothly, but as time went by, Jack's true colors began to show. His temper flared more frequently, sometimes escalating to physical and verbal abuse.)

Jack: What's this? Why isn't there any food served yet?

Lorie: You saw that we both just got home from work, right? We're equally tired.

Jack: Your responsibility is still to prepare the food! I don't care if you're tired, I'm already starving, you're useless as always. (He suddenly slaps Lorie)

Lorie: Why did you slap me? (Lorie covers her cheek while tears well up)

(Lorie is about to leave but Jack stops her)

Jack: Lorie, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to, I'm just really hot-headed right now, I'm sorry. (He tries to embrace her)

Jack: I'm really sorry, okay? It won't happen again.

(They reconcile again, but the same thing keeps happening repeatedly.)

In the dead of night while everyone slept, Lorie and Aira conversed over the phone.

Lorie: Hello Aira, Are we still meeting today?

Aira: Of course, you need to leave that guy now before I end up seeing you as a corpse.

But suddenly, Jack shouted upon seeing Lorie talking on her cellphone.

Jack: Hey! What are you doing?

Lorie: Why are you shouting? (Lorie's surprised question)

Aira: What's going on? Is he there?

Lorie: Yes, let's talk later.

Aira: Okay, but call me immediately if there's a problem, okay?

*tut.tut.tut*(phone shut)

Lorie: And you, why are you shouting?

Jack: I've been calling you since earlier, you're not answering. And why don't we have any soap here? Didn't I give you money for groceries?

Lorie: The money was just enough for the electricity bill.

(Jack suddenly slaps Lorie again)

Jack: If you just listened to me, you wouldn't

get hurt! This life is so annoying! "I want go out of here! I can't stand the sight of your face!"

Ringing phone

Aira: hello lorie

Lorie: huhuhuhu

Aria: "Why are you crying? Wait for me there, I'll come to you."

Door ding dong

[ Lorie went to the door, opened it, and let Aira in. They discussed what had happened.]

"Aira, there's no excuse for what he did. When he hurt you, you should have left him."

Lorie"He said he didn't mean to hurt me."

Aira"Enough. Let's leave before he arrives."

[ Days passed, and Jack visited Lorie, asking for forgiveness, but Lorie didn't forgive him anymore.]

"Lorie, please leave. I don't want to see you anymore."

"Jack, I hope you forgive me."

"Lorie, forgiveness takes time."

[ Jack stopped seeing Lorie, and Lorie's heart began to heal. After a year, she found peace within herself.]

Ringing phone

Aira: Are you busy?

Lorie: Not really, why?

Aira: Let's go out. Let's meet at the mall.

Lorie: Okay, see you then.

[ The two friends met, and Aira said something to Lorie.]

Aira: You know, I met a guy who might be perfect for you.

Lorie: What's that supposed to mean?

Aira: I've thoroughly checked him out, don't worry. I'll set up a meet-up between you two.

Lorie: I don't want to, Aira. I'm not interested in being in a relationship. Stop bothering me.

Aira: Come on, just give it a try.

Lorie: I said no.

[ The next day, Lorie was at work when Aira suddenly called.]

Lorie: "Why did you call?"

Aria: "I was thinking of inviting you to eat out. What time will you be done?"

Lorie: "I'll be finished with my shift soon."

Aria: "I'll wait for you at our favorite restaurant."

[Lorie finished her shift and went to the restaurant.]

"Lorie: Why are there three seats? Are we meeting someone?"

"Aria: There he is, Michael. Lorie, this is Michael. Michael, Lorie."

"Lorie: Who is he?"

"Aira: He's the one I told you about earlier. Alright, I'll leave you two alone. Bye.

[The two ate and talked].

Lorie: "Sorry, I'm just not ready yet."

Michael: "It's okay, I can wait."

Lorie: "It's up to you. Let's call it a day."

And from then on, Michael often visited Lorie's place As Lorie was cleaning, Aira knocked on the door.

"Lorie: Oh Aria, why are you here?"

"Aria: Hi, I just wanted to tell you that Michael is on his way here. He said he has something to tell you."

"Lorie: What, is he going to bother me again?"

"Lorie: What did he say?"

"Aira: I don't know, but he said it's something important he wants to tell you."

"Lorie: Where is he?"

"Aira: He's just outside waiting for the signal to come in, Michael come in."

"Lorie: Oh, there he is."

"Michael: Yeah."

"Lorie: Did you hear everything I said? Sorry."

"Oh, what were you going to say?"

"Michael: Um, I'm actually leaving. I didn't realize I'd be gone for so long, I don't know if I'll be able to come back."

"Aira: Oh, you're leaving?"

"Lorie: Where are you going?"

"Michael: Uh, just need some time to think."

"Lorie: Oh, I hope you'll be happy wherever you're going."

"Michael: Alright, I'm leaving."

"Aira: I'll go with him, bye best."

"Lorie: Why does his face look so sad?"

["Two days passed and Lorie still couldn't stop thinking about Michael."]

"Lorie: Aria, I have something to tell you."

"Aira: What is it? You look serious."

"Lorie: You know what, I've realized that I still love Michael."

"Aira: So what now? He's already left, are you willing to look for him?"

"Lorie: Of course, I need to tell him how I feel."

"Aira: I know Michael's roommate, let's call him."

[Phone ringing]

John: Oh, hello?

"Aira: Hello John, is Michael with you?"

John: He's at the hospital.

"Aira: What? Okay, we'll come over."

"Lorie: Where's Michael?"

"Aira: He's at the hospital. Come on, let's go see him."

[As they walked, they saw two people.]

"Aira: Lorie, isn't that your ex?"

"Lorie: Yeah, it is."

"Paul: Hi."

"Aira: Well, what a small world. Looks like you two will always run into each other, huh?"

"Lorie: Aira, that's enough. Why are you even here?"

"Paul: Oh, I just dropped by. I have something to say."

"Lorie: What is it?"

"Paul: Oh, I'm sorry for what I did to you. I hope you've forgiven me by now."

"Lorie: I forgave you a long time ago."

"Paul: Thank you. You know, I've changed, and I'm getting married soon."

"Lorie: Oh, congratulations."

"Paul: Alright, I'll go ahead then."

As they continued walking, they saw another person.

"Aira: Oh, there's your other ex."

"Jack: Hi."

"Aira: Oh, you're going to hurt my friend again."

"Jack: No, I won't. I've changed."

"Lorie: Well, that's good. Good for you."

"Jack: Yeah, I was jailed because of that girl's false accusations. That's when I realized all the wrong I've done. I hope you can forgive me for what I did to you."

"Lorie: I've forgiven you."

"Jack: Thank you. Alright, I'll go now. I still have somewhere to go."

"Lorie: Okay, take care."

"Aira: Why do your exes keep showing up here?"

"Lorie: I know, right? Let's hurry."

"Aira: Oh, there's John. John, where's Michael?"

"John: He's in the patient's room."

"Aira: You go ahead and talk to him first, I just need to speak with John."

"Lorie: Michael, what happened?"

"Suddenly, Aria arrived, crying."

"Lorie: Why are you crying?"

"Aria: Lorie, Michael has cancer, for a long time now."

"Lorie: What? Michael, why didn't you tell us?"

"Michael: Lorie, I love you so much."

"Lorie: I love

"Tottttttttttttttt."

"Michael passed away."

"Lorie: MICHAEL! HUHUHUHU"

"Lorie: Why didn't he tell us?"

"John: He didn't want you to worry."

[Michael has been laid to rest.]

"The day is beautiful today, the breeze is so refreshing, and the sky looks stunning. I'm here amidst all of this, and it would be even more wonderful if you were here beside me, Michael. I love you so much."

"

Present

The day is beautiful today, the air is refreshing to breathe. The sky is clear, and I'm sitting in the midst of all this. It would be even happier if you were here beside me.

Past

The alarm blared loudly (tot, tot, tot)

(Lorie turned off the alarm)

Lorie: "Here we go again... (sigh) Good morning to myself! Good morning, Charlie!" (Charlie happily bounding towards Lorie, while his tail wagging with excitement.)

,

After a while

Lorie: Baby you're my serenity, My favorite melody my remedy i need you gonna be my one and only (singing the “baby you’re my serenity” by : deonella , while taking a bath),

An hour after

Hmm what will i wear (while looking at mirror) is this good (tried to compare the ,clothes ,facing it to mirror ,fitting in herself ) would i wear casual? Hmm maybe a dress? I guess this dress would be fit ,Im sure he will love this hihihi (giggling excitedly)

Tururut tururut….Tururtururt….(phone ringing)

Lorie: Hello Paul!

Paul: Hello baby

Lorie: Are you already there baby? Wait for me i'm still getting dressed

Paul: Baby im sorry but our date today won't proceed."

Lorie: "Why is there anything happening?" (she asked, her tone tinged with disappointment.)

Paul: Yes, Mama asked for help to drive them, they just need to go somewhere.

Lorie: Why, aren't there others who can drive the car there? Even among your siblings? (Lorie's sarcastic tone)

Paul: Well, there are, but Mama said I should do it since I haven't been able to join them for a long time.

Lorie:( Sigh) okay, take care then. I'm already dressed anyway.

Paul: I'm really sorry, baby. I'll make it up to you next time.i love you

Lorie: It's always like that. I love you too (signs in disappointment)

….Sigh, I'll just lie down again since I don't have anything else to do anyway.

As she slept deeply, her phone rang again, disrupting the peace like an unexpected guest at a quiet gathering.

(seeing Aira’s call’s in her phone, then answered it)

Lorie: Hello? (im her half sleep voice )

Aira: Hello best, are you still asleep? I thought you have a date today

Lorie: As you can see it didn’t happen

Aira: Why not?

Lorie: Because he said he'll accompany his mom.

Aira: Oh, is that so? That's sad. Well, just come with me to the mall!

Lorie: Nah, I don't feel like it. I think I'll just rest.

Aira: Oh, you'll probably just sulk there. I'll wait for you here. Bye!

(Aira abruptly ends the call)

(Lorie Just sign in defeat)

At the mall

While Lorie was talking to Aira at phone:

Lorie: Hello, where are you?

Aira: I'm here at the entrance.

Lorie: Where? Wave so I can see you.

Aira: Here, my hand is raised.

Lorie: Oh, I see you now. I'm coming over.

"Best!" Lorie startles Aira.(then both lough)

while walking to mall

Lorie: What are you going to do?

Aira: I'm just going to buy something.

While Lorie and Aira were walking, Aira spotted something ,

Aira: Best, where did your boyfriend go, by the way?

Lorie: Oh, he drove his mom somewhere, I think.

Aira: Then who's that? (looking in another direction)

Lorie: Who? (also looking at what Aira is seeing)

They saw Paul kissing someone else.

Aira: Isn't that Paul?

Lorie: Huh? It doesn't seem like him. Maybe just someone who looks like him.

Aira: What? Are you blind? That's Paul, aren't you aware? You say He's with his mom? Should we confront them? I've always said that guy can't be trusted since at the beginning! (Aira's angry outburst)

As tears welled up in Lorie's eyes, she rushed forward and suddenly slapped her boyfriend.

Paul: Lorie?! What are you doing here? (Paul's startled question, holding the cheek that was slapped).

Lorie suddenly slapped the woman.

Lorie: That's for you!

Lorie was about to leave, but Paul stopped her.

Paul: Baby, I'm sorry. Give me a chance.

(Lorie shook off his grasp on her arm)

Lorie: I've given you too many chances already! I can't take it anymore! Let's end this. (Lorie's voice trembled as tears streamed down her face)

Paul: Please! I'm sorry, Lorie. (While tightly holding Lorie's hand, Paul pleads desperately.)

Aira forcefully removed Paul's grip from Lorie's arm.

Aira: Let her go! We're leaving. (Aira and Lorie walked away.)

In the midst of the loud, bustling bar..

Lorie: huhuhu (Crying in agony)

Aira: Stop crying , Bessy. He doesn't deserve you, don't cry just because of someone like him, that girl is like a leech, she clings to Paul as if they're a perfect match, both cheaters, okay. Let's go, you've had too much to drink.

Lorie: I gave my all, why does he still deceive me? I've been so foolish for him, but he still does this. I've experienced so much trauma because of him, (crying while drunk).

Aira: Just keep crying, the right person will come for you, I'm here as your best friend, okay? Just stop this nonsense with that guy. (Aira's long speech)

When Aira looked at her friend, she saw her deeply asleep, snoring loudly and hunched over.

Aira:(sign) Lorie, Lorie That;d right, Just sleep i will just take you home

As the days go on Lorie always cries suddenly even when she's just eating or any simple thing she does. For almost two months all she does is get too busy in her work until she exhaust herself and get drunk after.

TOT TOT, TOT (The alarm blared loudly)

Lorie turned off the alarm then take her time to gaze in the ceiling

Lorie: You can do this Lorie you need to stop this madness and move on.(Lorie said to herself,).

he began to tidy up, preparing herself for work.

Co-worker Jack: Good morning, Lorie. You seem down. Can you smile once in a while?

Lorie: There, I'm fine now. (Lorie smiled sarcastically)

Co-worker Jack: Tss, that'll do. Better than always having a frown on your face.

(Jack has been Lorie's colleague for a long time, but they've become close friends, and at one point, they even became romantically involved.)

Jack:Love, don't you want us to live together? We've been together for 2 years now, right?

Lorie: Can we handle that? It's not something we can just jump into. It's not like rice that you can spit out when it's too hot. We'll be facing different responsibilities.

Jack: I know that, dear. As long as we're together, we can handle it.

Lorie: Okay, sure.

Jack: Shall we move to my apartment then?

Lorie: Sure, that way we can save money.

(Lorie's relationship with Jack started off smoothly, but as time went by, Jack's true colors began to show. His temper flared more frequently, sometimes escalating to physical and verbal abuse.)

Jack: What's this? Why isn't there any food served yet?

Lorie: You saw that we both just got home from work, right? We're equally tired.

Jack: Your responsibility is still to prepare the food! I don't care if you're tired, I'm already starving, you're useless as always. (He suddenly slaps Lorie)

Lorie: Why did you slap me? (Lorie covers her cheek while tears well up)

(Lorie is about to leave but Jack stops her)

Jack: Lorie, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to, I'm just really hot-headed right now, I'm sorry. (He tries to embrace her)

Jack: I'm really sorry, okay? It won't happen again.

(They reconcile again, but the same thing keeps happening repeatedly.)

In the dead of night while everyone slept, Lorie and Aira conversed over the phone.

Lorie: Hello Aira, Are we still meeting today?

Aira: Of course, you need to leave that guy now before I end up seeing you as a corpse.

But suddenly, Jack shouted upon seeing Lorie talking on her cellphone.

Jack: Hey! What are you doing?

Lorie: Why are you shouting? (Lorie's surprised question)

Aira: What's going on? Is he there?

Lorie: Yes, let's talk later.

Aira: Okay, but call me immediately if there's a problem, okay?

*tut.tut.tut*(phone shut)

Lorie: And you, why are you shouting?

Jack: I've been calling you since earlier, you're not answering. And why don't we have any soap here? Didn't I give you money for groceries?

Lorie: The money was just enough for the electricity bill.

(Jack suddenly slaps Lorie again)

Jack: If you just listened to me, you wouldn't

get hurt! This life is so annoying! "I want go out of here! I can't stand the sight of your face!"

Ringing phone

Aira: hello lorie

Lorie: huhuhuhu

Aria: "Why are you crying? Wait for me there, I'll come to you."

Door ding dong

[ Lorie went to the door, opened it, and let Aira in. They discussed what had happened.]

"Aira, there's no excuse for what he did. When he hurt you, you should have left him."

Lorie"He said he didn't mean to hurt me."

Aira"Enough. Let's leave before he arrives."

[ Days passed, and Jack visited Lorie, asking for forgiveness, but Lorie didn't forgive him anymore.]

"Lorie, please leave. I don't want to see you anymore."

"Jack, I hope you forgive me."

"Lorie, forgiveness takes time."

[ Jack stopped seeing Lorie, and Lorie's heart began to heal. After a year, she found peace within herself.]

Ringing phone

Aira: Are you busy?

Lorie: Not really, why?

Aira: Let's go out. Let's meet at the mall.

Lorie: Okay, see you then.

[ The two friends met, and Aira said something to Lorie.]

Aira: You know, I met a guy who might be perfect for you.

Lorie: What's that supposed to mean?

Aira: I've thoroughly checked him out, don't worry. I'll set up a meet-up between you two.

Lorie: I don't want to, Aira. I'm not interested in being in a relationship. Stop bothering me.

Aira: Come on, just give it a try.

Lorie: I said no.

[ The next day, Lorie was at work when Aira suddenly called.]

Lorie: "Why did you call?"

Aria: "I was thinking of inviting you to eat out. What time will you be done?"

Lorie: "I'll be finished with my shift soon."

Aria: "I'll wait for you at our favorite restaurant."

[Lorie finished her shift and went to the restaurant.]

"Lorie: Why are there three seats? Are we meeting someone?"

"Aria: There he is, Michael. Lorie, this is Michael. Michael, Lorie."

"Lorie: Who is he?"

"Aira: He's the one I told you about earlier. Alright, I'll leave you two alone. Bye.

[The two ate and talked].

Lorie: "Sorry, I'm just not ready yet."

Michael: "It's okay, I can wait."

Lorie: "It's up to you. Let's call it a day."

And from then on, Michael often visited Lorie's place As Lorie was cleaning, Aira knocked on the door.

"Lorie: Oh Aria, why are you here?"

"Aria: Hi, I just wanted to tell you that Michael is on his way here. He said he has something to tell you."

"Lorie: What, is he going to bother me again?"

"Lorie: What did he say?"

"Aira: I don't know, but he said it's something important he wants to tell you."

"Lorie: Where is he?"

"Aira: He's just outside waiting for the signal to come in, Michael come in."

"Lorie: Oh, there he is."

"Michael: Yeah."

"Lorie: Did you hear everything I said? Sorry."

"Oh, what were you going to say?"

"Michael: Um, I'm actually leaving. I didn't realize I'd be gone for so long, I don't know if I'll be able to come back."

"Aira: Oh, you're leaving?"

"Lorie: Where are you going?"

"Michael: Uh, just need some time to think."

"Lorie: Oh, I hope you'll be happy wherever you're going."

"Michael: Alright, I'm leaving."

"Aira: I'll go with him, bye best."

"Lorie: Why does his face look so sad?"

["Two days passed and Lorie still couldn't stop thinking about Michael."]

"Lorie: Aria, I have something to tell you."

"Aira: What is it? You look serious."

"Lorie: You know what, I've realized that I still love Michael."

"Aira: So what now? He's already left, are you willing to look for him?"

"Lorie: Of course, I need to tell him how I feel."

"Aira: I know Michael's roommate, let's call him."

[Phone ringing]

John: Oh, hello?

"Aira: Hello John, is Michael with you?"

John: He's at the hospital.

"Aira: What? Okay, we'll come over."

"Lorie: Where's Michael?"

"Aira: He's at the hospital. Come on, let's go see him."

[As they walked, they saw two people.]

"Aira: Lorie, isn't that your ex?"

"Lorie: Yeah, it is."

"Paul: Hi."

"Aira: Well, what a small world. Looks like you two will always run into each other, huh?"

"Lorie: Aira, that's enough. Why are you even here?"

"Paul: Oh, I just dropped by. I have something to say."

"Lorie: What is it?"

"Paul: Oh, I'm sorry for what I did to you. I hope you've forgiven me by now."

"Lorie: I forgave you a long time ago."

"Paul: Thank you. You know, I've changed, and I'm getting married soon."

"Lorie: Oh, congratulations."

"Paul: Alright, I'll go ahead then."

[As they continued walking, they saw another person.]

"Aira: Oh, there's your other ex."

"Jack: Hi."

"Aira: Oh, you're going to hurt my friend again."

"Jack: No, I won't. I've changed."

"Lorie: Well, that's good. Good for you."

"Jack: Yeah, I was jailed because of that girl's false accusations. That's when I realized all the wrong I've done. I hope you can forgive me for what I did to you."

"Lorie: I've forgiven you."

"Jack: Thank you. Alright, I'll go now. I still have somewhere to go."

"Lorie: Okay, take care."

"Aira: Why do your exes keep showing up here?"

"Lorie: I know, right? Let's hurry."

"Aira: Oh, there's John. John, where's Michael?"

"John: He's in the patient's room."

"Aira: You go ahead and talk to him first, I just need to speak with John."

"Lorie: Michael, what happened?"

"Suddenly, Aria arrived, crying."

"Lorie: Why are you crying?"

"Aria: Lorie, Michael has cancer, for a long time now."

"Lorie: What? Michael, why didn't you tell us?"

"Michael: Lorie, I love you so much."

"Lorie: I love

"Tottttttttttttttt."

"Michael passed away."

"Lorie: MICHAEL! HUHUHUHU"

"Lorie: Why didn't he tell us?"

"John: He didn't want you to worry."

[Michael has been laid to rest.]

"The day is beautiful today, the breeze is so refreshing, and the sky looks stunning. I'm here amidst all of this, and it would be even more wonderful if you were here beside me, Michael. I love you so much."

"

..

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[imjellyannrvs]

𝑻𝑹𝑬𝑨𝑺𝑼𝑹𝑬 𝑴𝑨𝑷

Once upon a time, in hot sunny day (Thermal) of small town called Oakville, there lived a circle of friend of adventurous friends named Alex, Emma, and Max(Synecdoche). One sunny day, they stumbled upon an old, they heard a old news from their grandma (Oxymoron), dusty book in the attic of their grandmother's house. The book contained a mysterious, old, and dusty treasure map! (Visual)

Excitedly, the friends gathered around the map and started deciphering the clues. The first clue led them to the town's historic library. As they entered, they were greeted by the Queen of Books, Mrs. Jenkins (Euphemism), who had been waiting for them, “knock knock” the sound of the door (Auditory). One rainy, cold and gray day, Max says “wha a beautiful day”. (Irony)

"Welcome, young explorers!" Mrs. Jenkins said with a smile like a clown (Simile). "To find the next clue, you must solve a word hunt. Look for the following vocabulary words hidden in these book titles: adventure, quest, treasure, discovery, and mystery." but alex says “this book is boring” (understatement)

The friends eagerly scanned the shelves, searching for the hidden words. After a few minutes, they found all the books singing and dancing arranged them in the correct order (Personification). Mrs. Jenkins was impressed by their determination and handed them the next clue and Ms. Jenkins prepared a hot and spicy noodles with juicy hotdogs (gustatory)

The second clue took them to the town's park that smell like cotton candy, hotdog, and popcorn (Olfactory), where they had to complete a vocabulary challenge. They had to find objects in the park that matched the given vocabulary words: explore, ancient, valuable, uncover, and enigma. Each time they found an object, they had to use it in a sentence to demonstrate its meaning.

As the friends completed the challenge, they felt their vocabulary skills growing stronger. They thanked Mrs. Jenkins for her guidance and eagerly followed the next clue.

The third clue led them deep into the enlightenment forest (Metaphor), but they can't take it anymore so they need a arm (Metonomy) where they had to solve a riddle using vocabulary words. The riddle went like this:

"I am a hidden treasure, buried in the ground, unearth me carefully, for I am quite profundity ancient markings and a gleam so bright, I hold the secrets of the past, shining in the light. What am I?"

After some brainstorming, the friends realized that the answer was an artifact. They dug in the indicated spot and found a small, ancient artifact that shimmered in the sunlight.

Excitedly, they returned to their grandmother's house, where they discovered a hidden compartment in the attic. Inside, they found a chest filled with gold coins, and smooth gems (Tactile) and a note that read, "Congratulations, brave adventurers! You have successfully completed the word hunt and found the treasure. Use your newfound vocabulary skills to continue exploring the world!"

The friends celebrated their victory and they eat many plates (Hyperbole), knowing that their vocabulary journey had just begun. They thanked each other for their teamwork and promised to embark on more exciting adventures together.

[imjellyannrvs]

𝚅𝙰𝙻𝙴𝙽𝚃𝙸𝙽𝙴𝚂 𝙳𝙰𝚈

own story

There was a girl named clarisse a college student who has intoxicutiy beauty (metaphor) and clever clarisse has a friend named kimberly who always comforts her when clarisse fights with his boyfriend after there class kimberly and clarisse had a conversion

Clarisse: how the day kimberlly

Kimberlly: im fine clarisse how about you,are you not excited in this coming valentines day

Clarisse: of course I am excited are you not

Kimberlly: of course I am excited I am kuzzing with exicitement right now

Clarisse: don’t tell me you already have a boyfriend youre did not even tell me

Kimberlly: lets just say I have my secretadmirer

Clarisse: then will see you tommorow

Kimberll: okay bye

During valentine day clarisse was very excuted expect her boyfriend to give a present in the university valentines day unfolded like a symphony af love with whispers floats through the air like delicate melodies and laughter rescnaty like joyful harmoines the school have so many booths and activites (visual) and of these in the anonymous letter that can be sent to the girl making the gigle a bubbling brook light and meloduos (Auditatory) dancing through air the scent of roseswrated (oldfactory) the windows intetwing the aroma of sweet chocolate (oldfactory) creating a sensory feast for the olfaactory senses the taste of candy hearts added to a tactile richers of the hallways warmth (thermal) radiated between them like a comforty (simile) embrace complety the sensorybexperience of the enchanting day (methonomy) in the corridor kim received a anonymous present from some where the student office will be the one who will give the letter and present

Kim: why are you so sad clarisse

Clarisse:nah… im just a bit disappointed

Kim: mabye your boyfriend is to busy today

Clarisse: well lets just say the cupids arrow didn’t quite hit the mark in my boyfriend today (understatement)

Clarisse: was confused about her boy friend behavior shes thinkinh that there might something that is happening in her boyfriend because in their past years

Ryan:(herboyfriend) was always making efforts for her but he always been definsive when clarisse is asking her what wrong but kim keeps in conforting

Kim: why are not speking right now

Ryan: clarisse and I was fighting

Ryan and clarisse was breaking up because of her friend and ryan and kim has a relationship clarisse tear like a flood (hyperbole)

Clarisse you to will be full of hatred in heart but I will be become I good person even my heart broken because of you two

Clarisse was move on in her boy friend but clarisse find his true love name michael and the two was 5 years and they going to get married

[imjellyannrvs]

I WOKE UP

poem

I woke up in a sunny day

Taking a shower welcoming me into sooty embrace of warm day

Seeing twinkle of my eye replected the joy for today

Grabed the leash and tahe walk of my tail wagger

The sunny day rhythm like a smile

Its melody stretechy across the miles

As I walk my dog the leash in my hand

His paw pads press aginst the soft yeilding sand

His exitement palpable a savory devine

Each step we take his scent a nostalgic embrace

Amidst the thermal breeze memories interlace

Walk through the park where silence roar and whisper race

Then sunshine hides neath a cloudy arcironically start

A light sprinkle interupted our park stroll

Raindrops begun to roll roll

We quickened our step toward the shelter of home

At least we strolled together

Buildy a joy and harmonious roll

Our bond leash of

Unbreakble connection that rolls