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Saw Legacy 

Part 1:The Sins Of The Mother.

  The day started out so normal so how did I end up here trapped in some abandoned building Playing some sick game trying to fight for my life, that's what I asked myself As I went through this whole ordeal I woke up in a pitch black room. With some sort of strange device strapped to my chest With no idea of how I got here but before I could adjust my eyes to the dark TV turned on lighting up the most of the room and on this TV was a billy doll who turned its head to look at me before it spoke "hello Rachel I want to play a game" it said as it dawned on me what was happening, and I began to panic as the doll continued to speak " you don't know me but I know you for years you have ruined the lives of others by manipulating them and playing games with their hearts well Today, we play games with your heart" and as he said that the thing on my chest begins to beep as a green light appears to signal that the device was now active which only caused me to panic even more "WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU!!!" I screamed at the TV but to no avail as the doll just continued to speak " the device strapped to your chest is of my own making and if you do not complete the tasks set before you in 60 minutes" as he said this a timer came to life on the wall " that device will administer 12,000 volts of electricity directly to your heart stopping it and killing you instantly " I looked up at the timer that had yet to start as I tried to wrap my head around what was happening " here let me show you" it says as the TV switches from the doll to a mannequin wearing the same device I was and a timer that was just about to strike zero and when it did I was absolutely terrified by what I saw once the timer hit zero the green light on the device turned red and let out a high-pitched beep before sending 12,000 volts electricity into the mannequin causing it to burst into flames before switching back to the doll who continued to speak "so tell me Rachel how much blood will you shed to stay alive live or die make your choice let the game begin" and with that the TV turned off causing the timer to start as well as a door that was not visible until now to unlock only then did I fully understand what was going on the true horror of my situation now fully realized at that moment I began to scream and cry for help until my throat was sore but no one came realizing that it was pointless to scream or yell, and that I was running out of time I decided to get moving stealing myself and mustering up all the courage I had I walked over to the door and pulled it inside was a single light source a door, and a recorder with a piece of paper taped to it and on that piece of paper were two simple but bone chilling words Play Me as I approached the tape recorder the door behind me slammed shut and locked itself this caused me to jump, but I didn't look back I grabbed the tape recorder and pressed play and the voice that played was the same as the billy doll on the TV " hello and welcome Rachel to the path of redemption there are three, tasks that lie before you the first of which is just ahead but heed my words not everything is as it seems" and with that the tape stops, and the door unlocks and without even thinking, I pushed the door open and walked in a somewhat large room, but whatever was in the room was covered by white sheets, and before I had time to even blink the door slammed shut, and the sheets suddenly were pulled away to reveal a TV, and my Ex boyfriend though he did look different his face was all sunken in, and he looked like he hadn't eaten in days he was strapped into some sort of machine with tubes protruding from his wrist and as I saw this I ran over to him and tried to free him but to no avail all the while trying to talk to him" Matt what the hell happened to you and how the hell did you get here?" All he could get out before we were interrupted by the TV turning on was my name there on the TV was the same billy doll from before which began to speak " hello Rachel welcome to your first test in front of you is just one of your many victims after you broke his heart he went on a downward spiral turning to drugs to fill the void left by you his current drug of choice is heroin" he said as I looked back at his arms and noticed the marks where the needle had entered his arms " two choices lie before you the first choice will allow you to end his suffering by administering a lethal dose of the very same drug he uses to numb the pain to do this all, you need do is pull the lever to the left of you" as he said that I looked over to see the lever that would kill him " but the second choice requires a sacrifice for you may save him from his fate by pressing the button in front of you and holding it down for 30 seconds preventing the blade from descending causing him to be split in half you have 60 seconds to decide" it says before the TV shuts off and yet another timer starts this one only having 60 seconds on it the saw blade would begin to descend slowly I would begin to panic as a looked between the switch and the button the clock ticking i finally decided to save his life I ran up to the button I inserted my hand into the box that contained the button that would save his life and as I pressed it a spike shot into my hand causing me to scream in pain and pull my hand back as the saw continued to descend 42 seconds remaining on the timer I put my hand back into the box pressing the button again this time when the spike shot into my hand I kept it there the pain was excruciating but the saw stopped as the timer continued to count down now only 30 seconds remaining on the timer but I couldn’t take it anymore and had to pull my hand back out screaming “FUCK!!!!!” as the saw began to descend faster now that the timer had hit 30 seconds I ran back up to the box Thrusting my hand back into the box for the third time causing the spike to shoot up into my hand once more but it didn’t matter as I did this the timer hit 0 and caused the saw blade to split Matt in half covering me in his blood and I screamed, and screamed until I couldn’t scream anymore, and the door on the other side of the room unlocked with a loud clicking noise after I was done screaming I ripped a piece of his shirt off and used it to bandage my hand then I proceeded through the door into a decrypted hallway covered in cobwebs and cluttered with desks and torn down bookshelves as the door closes behind I break down and begin to cry Matt didn’t deserve to die he didn’t deserve what happened to him after I was done crying I stood up and proceeded through the hallway as I made my way through it, I noticed another tape recorder hanging from the ceiling by a string I reach for the recorder my hands shaking in terror of what just happened as my hand wrapped around the recorder I paused trying to gather the courage to take it and play it after just sitting there for what seemed like an eternity but I'm sure was only seconds, I rip the recorder from the string and play it “while I'm curtain there is a desire to point your finger at me for the blood that was just spilled unless you can point that finger inward more blood will be spilt this I can assure you in the room ahead lies your second trial but be careful if your to hasty you may be stabbed by the guilt of what you have done ” and the tape stops and I throw it to the ground before proceeding to the door when I get to the door I think I can hear a voice on the other side, but it’s too faint to make out so i grab the door knob and begin to twist and as I do so I hear what sounds like clicking noises coming from just beyond the door so i begin to open the door slowly, and I notice a weight ascending, and I realize just in time what it was for the weight reached the top and the door swung open causing a scythe to swing down from the door acting on instinct alone I jump to the left dodging the blade by meer inches after escaping death I proceed through the door and to my shock I see my 17-year-old daughter almost completely naked wearing nothing but her bra and underwear strapped to this device that looked like a cross with saw blades just above her arms and legs, and a table with the clothes she was wearing just the night before panicking I ran over to her and try to release her from her straps “MOM WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!!!” she screamed as I tried to release “I don’t know sweetie but just hold on I will get you out of here” I said before a TV in the corner of the room turned on and the doll spoke “welcome Rachel to your second trial the women before you should be all to familiar she is after all your daughter you claim to love her then why did you let your boyfriend molest her” “ I DIDN’T FUCKING KNOW HE WAS DOING THAT YOU BASTARD!!!!!!” I screamed as the doll continued to speak “ do you know what kind of damage that can do to a child of course you don’t because you don’t really care about her nor do you pay attention after that incident your daughter started hurting herself as you can now so plainly see” after he say that i look at my daughters arms and legs to see numerous healed cuts, and some fresh ones “ Today, you get to prove that you truly love her the device she is strapped to is linked to a 60-second timer and if you do not release her from it within that 60 seconds the blades that are positioned above her arms and legs will saw them off causing her to bleed out now the way to free her is simple you must pay the toll” as he says this a scale is revealed “ and the toll is your own flesh tip the scale to your side by using any one of the tools before you and the blades will stop, and your Daughter will be set free tell me Rachel are you willing to sacrifice your own flesh to save your daughter live or die make her choice” and the tv turns off and the timer starts to count down, and the blades come to life and begin to descend my daughter immediately begins to scream and cry causing me to run over to her and yet again attempt to break her bounds but it is useless “MOM PLEASE YOU’VE GOT TO HURRY I DON’T WANT TO DIE” she screamed as I looked for something to help me that’s when I saw that knife on the table in front of the scale I ran over to it and tried to take it time ticking down know only 30 seconds remained so I looked at my daughter who was looking at me tears in her eyes and told her to look away, and then I grabbed the knife and began to cut away at my own arm blood began to spill out almost immediately and the pain oh my god the pain it was almost unbearable but I couldn’t let that stop me when the timer reaches 20 seconds I through down the knife and picked up the meat cleaver and began hacking away at my arm blood flew everywhere but I continued to hack at my arm until it finally came off i quickly though clumsily place my now severed arm into the to scale, and it tipped all the way to my side causing the blades to stop ascend back to their original positions, and with not a moment to spare just as it tipped to my side the timer had just hit 3 seconds with blood pouring out of my wound, I ran over to my daughter as her restraints were released and she jumped from the cross looking device she ran over to me and grabbed me just as I was about to fall then the TV turned on once again, and the doll spoke “ Congratulations Rachel you saved your daughter and proved that you really do love her but remember you still have one more trial” and with that the TV shut off prompting the door on the other side of the room to unlock my daughter quickly hoists me on to her shoulders and begins to carry me to the door she gets to the door and pushes it open noticing a steam pipe running, so she brings me over to it and sets me down next to it and tells me that she is going to sear my wound close, and that is going to really hurt I tell her that it is ok, and that I can take it soon she pushes my stub onto the pipe causing it to steam, and burn as I scream out in pain it is so intense that I nearly pass out but I manage to stay awake and after the deed is done my daughter reenters the room we just came from and returns fully dressed before collapsing and beginning to cry I wrap my arms around her, and let her cry into my chest after about 10 minutes she finally begins to stop and calm down after that we stand up and begin to walk down the hallway we had entered as we walk, she asks me what is going on and I tell here I have no idea, and that everything is going to be ok we round a corner, and there waiting for use on the other side, just in front of a door is the doll who has been talking to use the entire time sitting there on a tricycle we both stop dead in our tracks and just stare at it for a couple second before cautiously making our way to it after we get just a few feet away it begins to speak “ hello Rachel Hello Tessa you have done well to make it this far and deserve congratulations, but before you can walk out of here you must face your final trail which lies just beyond this door but be warned this last trail is the most challenging do you have the strength to face it or will you crumble under its weight?” after it is done speaking me and my daughter both look at each other before walking past the doll pushing to door open both stepping inside letting the door close and lock behind use the room is immediately lit up, and what I see horrifies me there sitting across from use in what looks to be a glass box of some kind with multiple glass boxes in front of it all containing a key is my best friend Zack who upon seeing use runs up to the front of the box and say “hey what the hell are you guys doing here and what the hell is happening” to which we reply with “we don’t know” before the TV in the corner of the room turns on, and the doll speaks again “Hello Rachel and welcome to your final trial you claim the man before you is your best friend but do you really care about him? For years you have known this man is in love with you, you have manipulated that love for you and caused nothing but pain. Your fun and games have caused him to break the law on multiple occasions to fulfil your material needs well today he just might be crushed by your carelessness the box he is in is a compactor of my own design which is linked to a 60-second timer the key to the door which will lead to his escape is in one of the boxes in front of you but choose wisely picking the wrong key will cause the door to permanently lock sealing his fate think carefully let the game begin” and the TV shut off the timer starts, and the ceiling begins to descend at a slow pace Zack begins to flip out banging on the glass trying to break it as my daughter does the same meanwhile I pace back and forth trying to decide which key is the right one as the timer hit 40 seconds my daughter speaks “Jesus Christ mom pick a fucking key Hurry or he is going to die” I look at her and say in a somewhat panicked voice “how the hell am I supposed to know which ones the right key they all look the fucking same” to which she screams at me “I DON’T FUCKING KNOW JUST PICK ONE WE'RE RUNNING OUT OF TIME!!!!!!!” I look at the timer which now shows 20 seconds and then I look at the box which has Zack now on his knees trying to hold up the ceiling I look back to the boxes and decide I pick the one on the far left and closest to the box door and smash it open with my bandaged hand and grab the key rushing over to the door I try to put the key in the lock but I am shaking so bad I drop the key as the timer reaches 10 seconds I Hurry and pick it back up I Hurry, and put the key into the keyhole and turn the key that causes a buzzer to go off and a locking noise to be heard it slowly dawning on me what I had just done I scream as I try to pull the door open but to no avail as it does not move an inch, and the timer finally hitting 0 causing me to be forced to watch as my best friend is crushed to death his blood and internal organs covering the bottom of the box me and my daughter both sit there screaming as we watch the hole ordeal after it is all said and done we just stand there as the door on the other side of the room unlocks and swings open we just look at it trying to make sense of what we had just seen minutes pass before we both walk through the door and make our way through the hallway to freedom we get half down the hallway when we see the exit which causes us to run towards it only to be split up by a huge metal door like thing the falls just as my daughter passes me; we both stop and I try to find a way through but I only find a single door with a slot in the middle, and a window just the size of a laptop screen I try to open it but I cannot “damn it it’s locked” I say as my daughter comes to the window and speaks, “mom I haven’t been completely honest with you” she says, “what do you mean” I reply as I try to figure out what she is talking about but I don’t have to think long because she pulls a tape recorder from her pocket and presses play and the dolls voice begins to play, “hello Tessa I want to play a game right now you are feeling helpless but I can assure you this helplessness is not without meaning in 20 minutes your mother will enter this room and attempt to save you if she succeeds then your game begins I have placed the key to her device inside your right leg I also have provided the knife in which you may use to dig it out when the time comes, you will be given the choice to either give her the key and safe her life or to walk out this building and leave her here to rote so tell me Tessa when the time comes can you forgive the one who has caused you so much pain or will you exact your revenge live or die make her choice let the game begin” the tape stops and I'm left with a look of shock and horror as I realize what is going on she pulls the knife from her other pocket and begins to cut open a cut on her leg that has been sewn shut after she does this she digs into the wound and pulls out a key the key to my freedom “thank god sweetie now please slide it through”  I say but she just looks at me before throwing the key to the other side of the room and proceeds to walk to the door I scream at her “WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING YOU PICK THE FUCKING KEY UP AND GIVE IT TO ME RIGHT NOW!!!!!!” but she just opens the door turns around, and looks at me before walking out the door she turns back and says, “GAME OVER!!!!!!!!” as she slams the door shut.