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spent like an hour trying to find a post abt the disparity of origin companion's content in bg3 and couldn't so, hey, this fucking sucks
#baldur's gate 3#bg3#the fact that the astarion favoritism is baked into the game itself is so darksided oh my god#bc what do you mean wyll has TWO THIRDS THE AMOUNT OF DIALOGUE???#anyways this thread was also how i found out that astarion is the only one with durge specific scenes#and bc the writer was being forced into crunch and writing for both of them. lol#ETA I know abt Wyll being recast/rewritten and Karlach being added last. the post I linked goes into all of that in detail#as well as linking to another post that goes into even more detail and explains where these numbers came from.#you do not have to tell me. or accuse me of making shit up to make people mad. i know and i'm still mad lol#game design is very complicated yes but there's many ways they could've avoided giving the one black character the least amount of content
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part 7 of 7 - confessions
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Thank you all for reading! Especially if you've been following since day 1 lol :) as a side note, this was meant to be only 1 page per day, but the final two parts got a little out of hand... for a total of 16 pages! (9 just for this finale)
#serireiweek2023#serirei#reigen arataka#serizawa katsuya#mp100#WOOOHOO its over#I hope the story and dialogue didn't feel too disjointed since I tried to follow the daily themes while keeping a common thread
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for: @halfofozsfavouriteteam
Being Glinda, the Good is, above everything else, tiring.
She can't even pinpoint what is the most tiring part of it. If it's the fact she has to perform way more than she did her entire life, if it's the fact the work never ends and she barely has time to stop and relax. Or if it's simply because she feels stuck in a loop and there is no way out.
Her entire life is made out of lies now. Having to listen to those rumors about her best friend and not being able to say anything against them, smiling and waving to the crowd while they stare at her like she's some sort of savior.
Getting married to Fiyero so she can finally stop thinking about her.
She is tired. She is so tired. And yet she can't stop it. She doesn't know how to. Because despite it all, despite the fact that this is wrong and repulsive, she can't help herself. She can't help the small amount of satisfaction that she gets when people are praising her. When she's celebrated, applauded.
It doesn't compare to real love, of course. It never will.
But it fills her up somehow. It's all that she's had for the last years and if she keeps trying, she knows she can pretend that they truly love her.
Plus, she's still trying to make moves to actually take down the Wizard. To destroy this awful, terrible system from inside. So maybe, one day, she will be able to clean Elphaba's name. And have her friend back beside her.
(Does she actually believe she can do that still, though? Or did that naiveté die with Galinda?)
Either way, her entire life is absurdly tiring and as soon as she reaches the Emerald Palace in her bubble, exhausted from a very long day, she only wants to soak in her bathtub, and then lie on her bed.
But instead, she's called by the Wizard and grunts at that as she makes her way to the room where he keeps the goddamn machine. Everyday, Glinda wishes she could set that thing on fire.
As soon as she walks past the door, she freezes, though.
Green skin. Black clothes. Dark hair with microbraids.
Elphie.
"Elphie!" She exclaims, throwing herself on her friend to hug her tight. "What... What are you doing here?"
#; threads#; v: i couldn't be happier#halfofozsfavouriteteam#// okay so here's how this is gonna work asjoasojças#// blue is performative dialogue#// pink is actual dialogue >:3
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For the brave soul that asked for a bigger version of my playlist cover.... here you go lol. I think I doodled this in March last year. He's been on my brain for a while, clearly.
#dare I even put this in the tags#oh screw it#peter wagner#best served cold#I'm sure you can imagine which dialogue threads were being written around this time
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gonna be a bit spotty until sunday communication wise but in the meantime ❤️ for a one liner
#I feel so bad about how spotty my actual ic writing has been lately but I’ve been in world building mode which is sometimes 😭 necessary I#fear but please know it never means I lack interest in our threads I’m just . Following the muse#I also personally believe that one liners help hone dialogue
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asked my telegram followers which characters I should draw that I had never drawn before, and Connie and Rudie were mentioned

these two are some of my least favourite characters in the game design-wise, simply because they're not attached to an inanimate object like any other toon. they stand out . but this is an opportunity to give them a redesign
#DANDY'S WORLD#DANDY'S WORLD CONNIE#DANDY'S WORLD RUDIE#DIGITAL ART#ART#PMPWBRRS#also i I read rudie's dialogues for the first time today and my God. He has without exaggeration only one thought in his head and one‚#MAXIMUM two states#If Rudie were to have a lobotomy only a thread would be left#me when I am in a brainless empty shell contest and my opponent is Rudie#you can't even feel sorry for him because it feels like he is not living. He is like a microbe. They too have only ~two states#People like to discuss Shrimpo as a victim of his own personality but for Rudie what Shrimpo has is an unattainable luxury
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#Very obsessed with this I’d seen the original thread but never before has dialogue been so fitting#everybody fit their roles perfectly#it would be Doffy the European to point out that kettles exist.#first time in his life he’s been the most normal person in a conversation#love that he’s in a cage as well#this is so funny#love this so much#one piece#dracule mihawk#cross guild#sir crocodile#buggy the clown#shanks#red haired shanks#donquixote doflamingo#one piece memes#one piece incorrect quotes#incorrect quotes#tumblr shitpost#one piece meme#memes#one piece shitpost
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hohoho i am writing a remus & sirius confrontation that is ending up a little too mean and it’s verging on the edge of not fitting into FoD but by god, is it satisfying 😈😈😈
“Oh, stop pretending, Remus.” There’s a part of Sirius, not insignificant, that tells him to shut the fuck up. To bite back the words as he’d always done. They don’t expect it of him but he is perfectly capable of maintaining a civil tongue when needed. He just doesn’t want to, today. “You’ve always resented us, haven’t you?”
“Padfoot, do you even hear yourself—?” Remus’ amber eyes are bright, almost feverish, and Sirius knew that all he had to do was push.
So he did.
- brought to u by ‘i’ve been thinking about remus and i also recently read a fic that blindsided me w commentary on james’ and sirius’ social positions intimidating remus into compliance as an excuse for his cowardice and general temperament and got incredibly annoyed at how he is, yet again, victimised so i shall now endeavour to turn that idea around on its head using the ‘ol ‘u cannot help someone who does not want to be helped’ adage so help me god’
#u only need one guess to know who is mean#which i have promptly negated by adding that little snippet lol#there’s two distinct threads to this scene#i don’t think the two of them fit#so i’ll have to choose one and put the other in the graveyard doc#but honestly? even the first one has devolved into a ramble#that is now taking away from the power of its dialogue i envisioned#but james really needed some screen time from beyond the grave? so we have sirius slipping into musings ab hogwarts and his family#i rly like that tangent too tho#but there is a very specific grievance that i need sirius to air w remus#it’s not the usual how could u believe i killed them or even how did u think i betrayed james or why didn’t u check on harry#all of that shows that sirius still *cares* about remus and his opinion#i’m playing w the idea of him just. not. giving a shit. he’s more interested in forcing remus to confront some hard truths ab himself#hmmmm now that i’m thinking out loud. that makes sense#and would fit almost perfectly after the remus & harry conversation i’d put in the outline#huh#there really is something to this talking out loud method huh#truly a brainstorm#if you’ve read this far#my salute and thanks to u 🫡#pen’s writing
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open.
“You possess an unnerving inclination toward self-destruction, with barely a flicker of instinct for survival. You waltz with the devil; only to wonder why your hands emerge charred and blistered, ignorant but aware to your own propensities.” It's not a professional assessment. Far from it. It's merely a curious observation he had spent time attempting to unravel. He is close but has not yet found that thread that will lead him to the end. “You're driving yourself headfirst to ruin, and I can only wonder why?”
#indie crime rp#indie hannibal rp#nbc hannibal rp#indie horror rp#indie rp promo#&. open threads.#&. hannibal lecter | dialogue.#( unofficial therapy sess with dr lecter )
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i bring a "i think kris not being the knight would actively harm the storytelling of the game" sort of vibe to the fandom that deltarune theorists dont really like
#melty.txt#deltarune.melt#kris knight theory#i genuinely fully 100% believe that kris not being the knight would be bad storytelling#like in so many ways . there is a TON of setup for it and if theyre not the knight none of it will have ANY payoff#no other knight candidate have this level of setup . if the other candidates are disproven theres nothing going to waste#except for maybe a singular closet dialogue that most players probably didnt even care about#but if kris is disproven ? chapter 1s ending has no payoff . its forever going to remain a gag#despite so much pointing to it secretly setting the basis for the reveal of kris being the knight#its so well foreshadowed and has the perfect payoff . the other knight candidates have Zero foreshadowing.#i firmly believe you can explain all other 'knight foreshadowing' away but you Cannot explain away kris's level of foreshadowing#sorry im an elitist . im going to get SO much worse next week bc i can feel in my blood its going to get confirmed#(note: you will not see this descent into madness unless you follow my twitter)#(since i will not be spoiling anything and will only be posting my thoughts in privatter threads to spare everyone)
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@petitsdieu sent “Where she stops...” || Delirious
That’s the easy part— kneeling at the sepulcher of her presence and adoring. Harder is holding on when her stillness cracks. Aposynthos feels her body gather, like a missile under arctic camouflage, and knows: She’s about to go.
The sweat on his back is cold and stings as he stands from the tile. For a second all he can see is the rich stippling of her iris, every fleck not a color but an action— as if she’s always, even at rest, in impossible motion. It fills him with a vertigo worse than hypoxia: those who fall for angels don’t fly, but plummet.
Swallows;
salivary glands dry as paper;
his mouth fills with copper.
When he tries to speak her name it flits out as a wet, consumptive sound— less a word than the sound a body makes when drowning, the last-ditch attempt to summon air. But Angel Lung’s already there, crowning through the haze, her silhouette a familiar geometry in a world otherwise wiped clean.
Doesn’t remember what’d hit him, only the blue flash in the median between moments, a dissolving curtain of light. The next thing is the taste— always the fucking taste, the signature that it’s not entirely his blood he’s swallowing— and the way his own bones shriek when he tries to move. The corridor is a tilt-a-whirl: vertigo so deep there is no up. She comes into focus as the world pivots violently around a fulcrum of pain lodged somewhere opaque, abdominal or maybe spinal. He does not know the poison, but he knows the way his body metabolizes violence— hands already flexing, searching for a weapon or a wound.
Yooouuu’re leak-iiing.
At first, it’s in neither his voice nor hers; then it’s both, entwined. When he looks— really looks— there’s a river of dark arterial run-off, arterial and not his. No, that’s a lie. Some of it is his, and it sizzles the tile with signature venom, little chemical nimbus around the spill.
Aposynthos wants to say something devastating, gallant, true. Instead, it comes out sublingually: “Fuck.”
#petitsdieu#x: the na-baron (threads.)#v; the na-baron: and the third part of the waters became wormwood#i'm on a roll with aposynthos dialogue wow
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i know aai2 is a fan favorite but i’m ngl im on the second to last case and im still just Not buying it. mostly because they keep trying to force this theme of “oooohhh is edgeworth gonna leave being a prosecutor to become a defense attorney with his dad’s colleague ?? he’s already in hot water at the prosecutor’s office! what’s gonna happen next!” fucking nothing dawg. because you can’t make a character where most of their personality is learning to expose truths through prosecuting rather than defending and learning to make good with the hand that you’re dealt and then try to convince me that something would ever change that. like no i don’t believe edgeworth would ever become a defense attorney he literally underwent a massive ego death just to figure out you shouldn’t lie in court
there’s just. no suspense in this overarching plot because i already know what the outcome will be. you can see it from a mile away just based on how the character is structured. so like why should i CARE
#aai liveblog#also god bless gregory love gregory edgeworth but i HATED i2-3 that was like the turnabout big top of investigations for me#not nearly as aggravating as i1-5 but much like turnabout big top it just Kept Existing and nothing interesting was happening#i2-3 barely even had any investigating it felt like like i know it’s a visnovel but that case was 95% dialogue i was just sitting there#the novelty of getting to play as gregory wears off pretty quick once you get tired of switching back and forth#between the past and the present constantly and yet somehow Neither of those threads are engaging at all
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brass knuckles are clutched in her hand, every one of her punches landing with all the more force. the man before her is tied to the chair, ankles and wrists bound, duct tape hanging from his cheek from where he'd been gagged earlier. it was a rarity these days for her to get her hands bloody, even before she'd been pregnant with the twins, but this fuck had the audacity to threaten their family. brushing her hair away from her face, isabelle looks down at the man before scoffing, gaze turning to find ross'. "well, i was going to say it's your turn, but he passed out again. pussy." / @cherrysugcr
#。 * 𓏲 — ꒰ isabelle vargas : dialogue .#。 * 𓏲 — ꒰ thread : isabelle & ross .#。 * 𓏲 — ꒰ featuring : cherrysugcr .
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Anyone else ever read a book that sounds like it was written by someone who has only ever written and read Internet Posts? Like the author wrote every page as a separate Post and then threw in some transitions and mashed it all into one thing and called it a book?
#its not even entirely about the larger structure of the book#it's also like.. the way they write#very extremely tell and no show#like every scene is reduced to one-liners that sound like they were pulled straight from a twitter thread#and if theres dialogue it sounds so stilted and ingenuine#find myself yelling THATS NOT HOW PEOPLE TALK TO EACH OTHER NO ONE HAS EVER SPOKEN LIKE THAT TO ANOTHER HUMAN BEING#THATS NOT HOW REAL CONVERSATIONS WITH REAL PEOPLE ARE CREATED#op
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The Wiꓘed Lies We Live - Chapter 10
Pairing: KimChay (eventually) Warnings/tags: Canon-typical violence, bodyswap au, slow burn Chapter summary: Sometimes you can't just sit around and wait. To start from the beginning (x)
An update! *throws confetti*
#when you go through the trouble of making an outline for the rest of the fic because now there's more plot/threads to keep track of#and then immediately have to rework your outline because of a throwaway piece of dialogue that just comes out while writing#and you're like aww shit. i can't ignore this. i have to explore it.#ANYWAY at least now i have an actual ending in sight and i'm not completely winging it lmao#my fic#kimchay#kimchay fic#kinnporsche the series
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An obstacle of having major backstory plot points happen in a country no one can remember: Having NO blinding clue how to integrate that info into the main storyline.
#cousins came in clutch with wine and now I'm having Story Plotting Feelings#i've had the major catalyst for the Forgotten Island going into uber-quarantine planned since chapter 1#in the original outline draft Rose was going to be lucid and talk to Siffrin and he would get Answers from her#her name was also Silver originally i changed it to Rose in the 3rd outline draft#and she was still undead and Siffrin was Going to Learn Things they vowed their party could NEVER figure out#but then i changed that and then Siffrin and Odile were supposed to Learn These Things during the barn fire chapter#(the Vampire Hunter commenter was close to what's going on)#but then they didn't bcoz any dialogue i tried to shove in fucked up the narrative flow#so literally the only clue besides the carving in the wooden beam#is a very blink and miss it observation Siffrin makes#where the bounty hunter keeps fighting close even though that puts her at a disadvantage with her sword#but also keeps Siffrin from getting the distance he needs to run full-speed and attack that way#no clue when I'll be bringing those loose threads in now whoops
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