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crow-caller · 8 months ago

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Getting a suspicion this book isn't very good

Lightlark3 is somehow. How do I put this. Worse. The prose is really, really bad, and Aster operates on a baseline of having 'pretty bad prose'

Gee, I wonder if writing and releasing skyshade, plus writing her new adult book, plus a new bonus lightlark book and the 4th due next year... might be resulting in even less editing?

#Lightlark #Skyshade #Spoilers?#I'm like halfway. The plot is also just EXACTLY as you would suspect.#Aka more fetch questing and useless revelations and retcons and constant flipflopping #Isla does not THINK except she constantly fills pages with her angsting fliflopping feelings. But she never thinks about what people say #They mention something insane she only asks pointless questions. Like she's never sat grim down and gone "what do you know of the otherwor #Like JUST ASK SOMEONE? RESEARCH??

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