#Pretty Boy - Chapter 4 - 05
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jtl-fics · 1 year ago
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Someone will make a comment about Neil’s scars on Halloween right?
(Don't tell me I want to see how it turns out)
Anyway Pretty boy please
WIP Wednesday 3/20/24 (Closed) | Pretty Boy
"Don't want anyone fainting from fright." Andrew says more than happy to help Neil escape having his face made-up by some girls who likely saw their actions as harmless.
"At least not before they get into the haunted house." Neil agrees.
"It's a liability issue." Andrew shrugs.
"Andrew's a Criminal Justice major, he'd know." Neil nods.
4/10/24 WIP Wednesday Options Here
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landograndprix · 7 months ago
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ᴀɴʏᴡʜᴇʀᴇ ᴀᴡᴀʏ ᴡɪᴛʜ ʏᴏᴜ ♛ ʟɴ⁴ - one
➣ family friend!reader x ln⁴
➣ and just like that you're growing closer each day and falling in love has never felt this good.
➣ being told you feel like home might just be the best compliment you've received in a while.
➣ tired of all the negativity in this fandom so gonna treat myself with nothing but teeth rotting fluff ♡ big ass family so lots of OC's and just a heads up but really not a surprise coming from me but reader is like 4-5 years older so if that's not your thing, don't read. Fun fact, I don't proof read my stuff so enjoy the spelling mistakes <3
➣ reblogs and comments are welcome, alright love u 😘
➣ next chapter
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iamzarah "what the hell am I then?" - Milo and Stella reading that caption
↳ jamiejamezz can't call Milo a kid, that rat is the devil himself
y/nusername stop calling him a rat and he might start to like you back
iamivy bro you are the devil himself
norrizz love me a lazy sunday ❤️
julieeeexo is it a lazy sunday though, are you sure you're not deep cleaning the entire house? 🤣
↳ y/nusername 😅
freyafrey that's that mum life 😔
quinking posting on insta but ignoring my texts, I see how it is..i am your least favourite sibling
↳ landonorris stop bullying her then
quinking mate you're the biggest bully here!
landonorris i'd never bully y/n
hannahh hope you enjoy your free time before the storm hits again 😂
ethanlowe must be nice..
↳ y/nusername it's your turn next week
ethanlowe 🙌
maxfewtrell what one one-night stand gets you 9 months later am I right?
iamzarah fewtrell, violation much? 😭
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y/nusername two besties hitting the big 05 ❤️
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quinking yooo happy birthday to my best friends ❤
adam_norris_pure_electric happy birthday to the twins
freyafrey eating them up 😍
↳ iamivy pretty sure i had dibs on them but okay..
freyafrey there's two, we each get one ☺
y/nusername cannibalism is not it guys..
norry4 happiest of birthdays to these cuties! <3
iamzarah happy birthday to the funkiest guy and cutest girl! 🥰🥰
iamivy happy birthday to my favorites in this family, lotsa love and kisses 💜
hannahh for they grow up too fast!!
jamiejamezz happy bday you crazies 💥❤🎉
riabish happy birthday to the cutest set of twins! 🎊
landonorris happy birthday muppets ❤️
↳ norrizz nawwwh his two besties turning 5 !!
y/nusername been told to thank you and call you gremlin, so there's that
landonorris tell them I'll return the gifts
norry4 😭
y/nusername you're not welcome anymore :(
landonorris oh 😔
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that's me 😁
did noah watch the race?
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yeah, he wanted to watch with his dad though, he send me a video of a very happy Noah 😂
I'll send it to you
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Can't wait to see it!
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What world are we living in?
Quin taking you out for dinner?
what does he need now? 😂
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I know, I was as suprised as you are!
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quinking oh so everyone got an invite but me?
↳ freyafrey do you see me in these pictures? No invite for me either boy
quinking yeah but you're too old for fun
freyafrey I'm literally a year older than your sister, don't make me come for you little boy
landonorris life would be so much easier if you stop bullying everyone mate
quinking real rich coming from you mate 🤣
land0n0rriss so who's this then? 👀
imivy meet dads side of the family today ❤️🦥
norrizz hope you had fun with all your kids!!
norrisbob new wag alert????
jamiejamezz Bob still mad the whole gang joined? 🤪
↳ maxfewtrell watch it mate you might hit a nerve there
iamzarah bit weird to take your maid on a date no?
landonorris you're all so funny!
iamivy uncalled for, we all take our maid on dates
y/nusername if y'all stop living like actual pigs, you wouldn't need this maid
landonorris bit dramatic but we still love you ❤️
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uceyliyahh · 2 months ago
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GUARDED
summary: Genesis has been protecting her heart ever since she filed for divorce and didn’t want to be in another relationship until he came around and changed her mind.
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this fanfic is 18+ NO MINORS ALLOWED
warnings contain: emotional abuse, divorce, depression, handjob, fingering (f receiving).
word count: 7.6k
AWFUL GRAMMAR IM GETTING BETTER I SWEAR LOL.
smut warning: it’ll come in the story randomly so PLEASE PLEASE look out for it I’m not really good at writing ✍🏽 smuts but I am improving at the moment
Jimmy Uso x Genesis
comments, likes, repost are appreciated I would love the constructive feedback in what area I need to approve in. 🤍
ALSO! I don’t not want nobody stealing my fanfics or take it as theirs that will be an issue fasho so keep it cute respectfully.
I only own my OC along with the make up scenarios
again mdni you have been warned.
thanks to my friend @charmed-dreamssss for helping me with the title 🫶🏽
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Knoxville, Tennessee - 4:45PM SummerSlam
This evening marked the highly anticipated SummerSlam, a source of great excitement for all. However, Genesis found herself engulfed in nerves, anxious about her upcoming interviews with the wrestlers. The lingering memories of yesterday's events weighed heavily on her mind, fueling her desire to perform flawlessly.
In the stillness of the night, she was haunted by nightmares, visions of it breathing heavily, leaving her drenched in sweat as if she had lost control. To find solace, she would quietly slip into the bathroom, careful not to disturb Jimmy, seeking relief from the oppressive heat. Whenever solitude enveloped her, the weight of the situation would overwhelm her, leading to moments of profound despair.
How could he betray her in such a manner? All because she chose to ignore him and enjoy her time with Jimmy?
At work, she would don a mask of composure, presenting a polished exterior to everyone, including Jimmy, to spare them any concern for her well-being. It was already troubling enough to endure the unwelcome attention from one of the NXT boys affiliated with the blue brand, a situation that left her feeling quite unsettled.
She learned from Cody that Zilla would be suspended for the rest of the year. While this news brought her a sense of relief, it did not eliminate her concerns about the possibility of him continuing to stalk her, especially when no one else was present.
After enduring multiple harassing calls from him, she decided to block his number, which was taking a toll on her mental well-being. While reviewing her script to ensure she recalled the questions and statements she needed to make, she suddenly felt a pair of strong arms encircle her, prompting a startled yelp to escape her lips.
Upon catching a whiff of their fragrance, she instinctively turned her head, only to find Jimmy standing behind her, a radiant smile on his face as he showcased his dazzling grills, sparkling in the light.
“Hey my pretty girl, I texted you but I didn’t get a response.” Jimmy said.
“Oh? You did? I’m sorry friend, I got caught up with going over everything for tonight.” Genesis replied with a smile.
Jimmy sensed that something was amiss in the way she smiled. It appeared almost contrived, as if she were concealing the turmoil within her thoughts and feelings. He felt a pang of discomfort knowing she was masking her emotions; he longed to support her. “Gigi.” At the sound of her name, she met his gaze.
“Hm?” She responded.
“C’mere lets have a mini walk baby.” He spoke softly while resting his arm around her shoulder, and she understood that during these little strolls, he recognized her need to unwind and free her mind from the chaos surrounding them.
In that fleeting moment, he sensed her distress without uttering a word, and she held a deep admiration for his intuition. As they strolled away from the building, a serene silence enveloped them, the sun casting a warm glow upon Genesis' skin.
It was heartening to realize his genuine concern for her well-being, understanding her need for solitude away from the chaos of the world. As they strolled towards a secluded spot for a private conversation, she felt the warmth of his hand resting on her waist, drawing her nearer to him.
As they strolled past a nearby bridge that arched over the river, Genesis leaned forward to take in the breathtaking scenery. The gentle sound of the water cascading below mingled with the soft whispers of the wind, all while the sun began its descent, painting the sky in hues of gold. Suddenly, she sensed his footsteps drawing near, and as his hands rested on her hips from behind, she felt herself instinctively press against him.
He gently swept her hair aside, showering her neck with tender kisses that caused her body to surrender to him, soothing her very soul. He had an innate ability to know how to comfort her in these moments, and she cherished every aspect of his attentiveness.
“Gigi.” Jimmy called for her.
“Hm?” Genesis responded while looking back at him.
"You realize you can confide in me, darling, don't you? I'm here to support you. There's no need to push me away." His voice is gentle, prompting a sigh from Genesis. "I apologize; ever since yesterday, I've been overwhelmed with thoughts, and it's been difficult for me to maintain my composure."
He gently pivoted her, allowing her to gaze up at him with her wide, innocent eyes. “Talk to me baby, I’m right here.”
She let out a deep sigh, "Yesterday's events left me feeling truly shaken, Jimmy, they really did, as I've experienced something similar in the past." Jimmy arched an eyebrow, silently inquiring about her meaning.
"Quincy had previously subjected me to this, coercing me into intimacy against my will, particularly after his betrayal." She went on to express, “The experience was excruciating and harsh, leaving no room for pleasure. This trauma prompted me to embrace celibacy for five years, and now it feels as though I am experiencing it all anew.” As she spoke, she sensed her emotions fading, while Jimmy tenderly wiped her tears away with his thumb, gently holding her chin.
“You don’t have to worry about that when you with me Gigi, imma take care of you right.” Her gaze faltered, unable to meet his alluring eyes, while his voice, deep and gravelly, wrapped around each word he uttered.
“I-I, Know..”
“Look at me baby.” Upon gazing into his eyes, she discerned a profound intensity within those rich chocolate brown depths. His words carried an unspoken significance; he yearned to cherish her body, to make love to her in a manner that fulfilled her deepest desires. He wished to bestow upon her every exquisite caress until she reached the pinnacle of ecstasy.
He wished to convey that he stood firmly by her side, unwavering in his loyalty, and would go to any lengths, even resorting to violence, to protect her.
“Imma make love to you the right way Gigi, something you haven’t experienced in a while.” Jimmy said.
“What if I’m not ready? I’m scared you’ll leave if I’m not ready for you, well all of you.” Genesis asked boring into his eyes.
“Mamas, I told you imma wait for you. Until you give me the green light I’m not going anywhere princess.” He says pressing his forehead against hers.
A warm sensation enveloped her heart as she pondered the enigma that was Jimmy. His romantic gestures were abundant, leaving her breathless and struggling to keep pace. Yet, when she gazed into his eyes, searching for any hint of doubt in his declarations, she found none. His sincerity shone through, making it clear that he cherished her for who she truly was, imperfections and all.
Genesis rose onto her toes, gently pressing her lips against his in a tender kiss. He eagerly reciprocated, and as she stepped back, a radiant smile graced her face, just before he leaned in to shower her with more affectionate kisses.
Their encounter culminated in a fervent embrace, as they lost themselves in a slow, deep kiss. Their tongues danced together, exploring the depths of each other's mouths. Genesis felt his hands gently cradle her curves, his firm desire pressing against her. He trailed his lips from her neck to her jawline, before returning to the intoxicating connection of their mouths.
She embraced him tightly, her arms encircling his neck, as her fingers wove through his curls, drawing him closer with each passionate kiss.
“I love you Gigi.” Jimmy murmured between the kisses.
“I love you too, Jimmy.” Genesis murmured back.
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Genesis was perfecting her makeup in the bathroom, carefully defining her lips with a lip liner pencil. After blending her lips together, she returned the pencil to her purse and retrieved her lip gloss. As she applied the glossy finish, she continued to smooth her lips, ensuring to wipe the corners of her mouth with precision.
While she was engaged in her task, the sound of the bathroom door creaking open caught her attention, though she initially remained oblivious to the newcomer until their voice broke the silence.
“So, you must be the hoe that he’s with?” Hoe? Who does this girl think she is, speaking like that? Genesis glanced over to find Trinity standing there, arms crossed defiantly over her chest.
“Hoe? Excuse me?” Genesis remarked.
“Yeah. A hoe did I stutter or something?” Trinity retorted as Genesis sighed while rolling her eyes at her. “Girl, it’s not my fault that he’s more attracted to me than you like, aren't you using him for his money?”
Trinity scoffed at her, “yeah? So? He gives me money and I give some pussy until he stopped doing all of that all of sudden and I knew a hoe ass bitch like yourself was in the picture.”
“Like I said, not my fault, maybe your pussy was trash and didn’t even want it anymore.” Trinity chuckled at her, while Genesis arched an eyebrow, puzzled by what was so amusing. She found nothing humorous in the situation.
“This is coming from a person who hasn’t had any dick after what? Five years I’m hearing? Girl if you know him he has a high sex drive and he won’t be waiting on you any longer and find someone else that can please him.” Genesis felt the weight of his words crash down on her like a boulder. Was everything he said about waiting for her merely a fabrication? Is this how he treats all the women in his life?
“He said he would wait for me, you don’t know what we be talking about.” Genesis says.
“Bitch he’s lying to you he’s not going to wait to get some pussy that’s not even good probably.” Trinity approached her, and as they stood face to face, a smirk played on her lips, revealing that she had successfully gotten under her skin.
“So you better get going little girl because once he stops waiting on you he’ll just move on to the next one so chop chop sweetheart.” As Genesis exited the bathroom, clutching her purse, Trinity lingered with a knowing smirk, relishing the thought of having Jimmy all to herself.
Genesis's gaze appeared distant as she became lost in her thoughts, reflecting on Trinity's recent revelations. The realization that she had been naive enough to trust a man like Jimmy, who had deceived her with promises of waiting, weighed heavily on her. Deep down, she understood that she was not prepared to embrace all that he was—every word he spoke had been a fabrication.
In her distraction, she failed to notice her surroundings and inadvertently collided with a robust figure. As she glanced up, she found herself face to face with Jey, whose gaze softened at the sight of her tear-filled eyes. She quickly offered an apology before turning away, leaving him no chance to respond.
Jey noticed Trinity emerging from the bathroom, a serene smile gracing her lips as she observed the entire scene unfold. Jey approached her, visibly irritated.
“What did you say to her Trin?” Jey asked sternly.
“What? I just told her the truth about your brother having a high sex drive and that he wouldn’t wait on her like c’mon Joshua.” Trinity said.
Jey shoves her gently, “why would you tell her that lie? Knowing how much my brother cares for her? And now what you did for what?”
Trinity nonchalantly shrugged her shoulders, showing little regard for Genesis. "She needs to step aside for what’s happening between him and me," she declared. Jey let out a scoff, incredulous at her words. He recognized that once Jimmy lavished her with money and attention, her behavior would inevitably spiral.
“Y’all don’t have anything going Trin! You’re just bitter as fuck because he stop giving you money and dicking you down after being Genesis!” 
“Because he was mine first! I don’t why you are standing there defending that hoe!” 
Jey raised his hands in exasperation, unwilling to continue the conversation with Trinity. He was infuriated with her actions, knowing that her deceit would only exacerbate the growing tension between Jimmy and Genesis.
As he made his way toward the locker room he shared with Jimmy, he elegantly brushed past Trinity, preparing himself for the upcoming interview with Genesis regarding SummerSlam.
In a secluded room, Genesis found herself engulfed in a mental turmoil, grappling with disappointment not just for him, but for her own vulnerability. She realized that the girl had managed to penetrate her defenses deeply, leaving her feeling exposed. Compounding her distress was the nagging suspicion that Jimmy had not been entirely truthful about his words.
At this moment, she yearned to retreat to the hotel room and allow Jackie to take charge for the evening, yet she found herself unable to do so. Her presence was essential—she couldn’t simply walk away. Taking a deep breath, she steadied herself, glancing in the mirror to assess her makeup, only to realize she appeared far from her best.
Her mascara streaked down her cheeks, and her eyeshadow appeared smudged and disheveled, giving the impression of a recent altercation. Glancing at her Apple Watch, she realized she had only a few minutes left before her interview with The Usos. Determined to present herself well, she quickly set about refreshing her makeup, hoping to conceal the disarray from Jimmy's view.
Genesis started to touch up her makeup upon noticing a text message from Jimmy. She glanced down to discover what he was seeking.
Jimmy❤️‍🩹: mamas? wya? We got a interview to do with you inna few minutes baby
She decided to text him back.
Gigi🤍: we do? Oh I totally forgot about that um I’ll be there in a few just needed to touch up my makeup real quick boo. 💗
Jimmy❤️‍🩹: send me your location and I can just come to you 
Gigi🤍: no no it’s fine I’ll be there Jim
Jimmy❤️‍🩹: you sure?
Gigi🤍: yes I’m sure 
Genesis meticulously applied her makeup, ensuring every detail, including her eyeshadow, was flawless. As she glanced at her watch, she realized she had completed her preparations just in time for the interview. With grace, she gathered her makeup essentials, stowing them back into her bag before slipping it into her purse and making her way out the door.
She felt immense gratitude for Jade's guidance in perfecting her makeup for moments like these. Especially when she was overwhelmed with anger and frustration over recent events, all she desired was to retreat from everyone, including him.
She noticed the boys standing by, eagerly awaiting her for the interview regarding their upcoming match, where they would defend their tag team titles against The New Day. However, her attention was irresistibly drawn to Jimmy, whose oiled physique showcased his impressive abs and muscles, adorned with striking tribal tattoos that extended from his chest and arms up to his neck.
Adorned with a Cuban link chain draped elegantly around his neck and revealing his dazzling grills with every word he exchanged with Jey, he likely pondered her whereabouts. The sight of this striking man left her breathless, yet she composed herself as she gracefully approached, offering a wave to the cameraman.
The sound of her heels echoed as she approached, her radiant smile lighting up her face as she greeted him with a wave. She embraced Jey first, followed by Jimmy, whose gentle hand caressed her back, causing her to momentarily falter at the unexpected sensation.
Jey had an instinctive awareness that something was amiss after his confrontation with Trinity regarding her actions. Meanwhile, Jimmy observed a notable shift in her body language as she took hold of the microphone. Although she wore a smile, he recognized it all too well—it was a facade, a disingenuous expression that betrayed her true feelings.
As the interview commenced, the cameraman initiated a countdown. Genesis of The Usos began discussing SummerSlam, highlighting the multitude of matches scheduled for the evening, including their own defense of the tag team championship against The New Day.
“So it’s summerslam guys, how are yall feeling for tonight.” Genesis asked as she placed the mic towards Jey’s way.
“Gigi, we are feeling good girl! Like the weather down here is nice! The view of the city is nice! And hell maybe at the bar is hella nice too Yeet!” Jey exclaimed with a smile on his face.
“I can honestly agree with you Jey, the weather does feel nice in Tennessee but how are yall feeling today about defending your tag team championship to the New Day during the main event?”
“Honestly Gigi, we finna whoop some ass tonight. And reclaim our championships the new day don’t won’t no smoke with us for real dawg.” Jimmy's intense gaze fixed on Genesis as she spoke left her thoughts clouded and a warm sensation coursing through her. She bit her lower lip, striving to keep her composure amidst the overwhelming feelings.
She was acutely aware of his gaze, the way it lingered on her as she engaged Jey in conversation, peppering him with questions. It was only when Jimmy responded to one of her inquiries, locking eyes with her, that she felt a rush of nervous energy coursing through her. The sight of him sensually licking his lips sent a flutter through her stomach, tightening it into a knot.
“Are you guys excited about any other upcoming matches tonight?”
“Hell yeah! Can’t wait to see our boy Sami go against Kevin Owens tonight. That's going to be brutal, I know fasho.” Jimmy responded, his gaze sweeping over Genesis's outfit from head to toe, playfully teasing her with just his eyes as he licked his lips. His side profile was undeniably the most exquisite a woman could ever behold.
Genesis extended her heartfelt congratulations to them on their successful title defense this evening before the scene shifted back to Michael and Patt at the ringside table. As the cameras ceased to roll, Genesis began to gather her belongings, preparing for a well-deserved lunch break ahead of the upcoming show. While she was organizing her items, she caught sight of Jimmy, her corner man, casually leaning against the equipment box with his arms crossed, patiently awaiting her.
He gazed at her with an intensity that suggested he was poised to pounce, yet he desired the intimacy of a secluded, dimly lit room. Genesis slung her purse over her shoulder, locking eyes with Jimmy, who beckoned her to join him. With a resigned sigh, she acquiesced and trailed him to a more private setting.
A profound silence enveloped the two, punctuated solely by the rhythmic click of her heels with each step. The murmurs and waves of those around them faded into the background as she offered them a disingenuous smile. Deep down, she was acutely aware that Jimmy sensed her unease the instant she donned that familiar mask once more.
Upon opening the door, he revealed an unoccupied room, allowing her to enter first before gently closing it behind them. She set her purse on the sink counter and leaned against it, patiently awaiting his words.
“Gigi.” Jimmy called for her.
“Yes?” Genesis responded with a smile pretending that everything was okay.
“What’s going on baby? You’re putting on that fake smile on your face again.” He commented.
Trinity managed to penetrate her thoughts, instilling doubt about Jimmy's commitment, particularly after all she had endured. The revelation of his intense sexual appetite shattered her spirits entirely.
“It’s nothing Jimmy, it’s really stupid.” She said while avoiding eye contact with him.
“It’s not stupid if you just tell me what happened, you don’t need to hide anything from me.” She understood that he was correct in saying she had no need to conceal anything from him; however, she felt apprehensive about how he might respond to what Trinity had revealed. Perhaps she could navigate her way out of this discussion. “I know, daddy. I know.”
She cast her eyes upon him, noticing the playful smirk gracing his lips as he stood with his arms folded across his chest. “You tryna get me all riled up aren’t you to avoid this right here? You not slick Gigi.”
Genesis started to be innocent and played dumb with him twirling her hair around, “I don’t know what you mean daddy.” A gentle, hushed tone escaped her lips as she sensed his footsteps approaching. She felt his hand encircle her throat, drawing her face nearer to his.
“What’chu want daddy to do in order for you to tell him Gigi?” The alluring scent of his favorite cologne enveloped her senses, intoxicating her with its familiarity. She tugged gently on his chain, drawing him closer as she pressed her lips against his. His hands glided down her body, finding their way to her curves, prompting her to part her legs wider, inviting him to step into the space between them.
She had longed for this man even before their interview, yet doubts lingered about his sincerity in waiting for her. As Jimmy's kisses traveled along her jawline, he pressed his solid form against her, intensifying the desire that left her feeling even more aroused than before.
“You love me Jimmy?” As Jimmy looked up at her nodding his head.
“You know I love you Gigi, i'm addicted to you at this point.” 
“You still be able to wait for me?” He was uncertain about the source of this situation. Perhaps his strategies were effective in encouraging her to open up about her recent experiences and the reasons behind the facade she had been presenting once more. “Yes, my love, where is this coming from Gigi?”
Genesis encircled his neck with her arms, while his hands remained firmly on her curves, anticipating her response. It was in that moment that he caught the sound of her soft sigh.
“I bumped into Trinity and she had said some things about you that had me questioning what you had told me earlier.” He raised an eyebrow at her before speaking, “like what?”
Genesis begins to say, “she told me that you have a high sex drive and wouldn’t wait on me and just move on.” As her gaze meets his, she notices his eyes starting to soften, yet a hint of frustration lingers within him, aware of Trinity's intentions.
He cradled her chin brushing his thumb against her cheek before leaning in to kiss her lips.
“Listen to me Gigi, yes I do have a high sex drive but I maintain it better because I’m thinking about you; you are the only person that can get me all riled up especially when we are away from each other I can only think about you mamas.” Jimmy said. 
“I wouldn’t lie to you Genesis, when you give me the green light imma show you. I promise I will.” A knowing smile graced her lips as she realized he was genuinely earnest in his words. A wave of fear washed over her, a deep-seated anxiety about the potential pain that might accompany such intimacy after an extended period of celibacy.
She planted soft kisses on his lips, her gaze locked onto his deep chocolate brown eyes, as she tenderly massaged his curls, fully aware of his fondness for her touch. He leaned in closer, lifting her onto the sink counter, her legs parting invitingly for him to step between. She began to kiss his cheek and then trailed her lips down to his neck, expressing her affection while feeling the unmistakable pressure of his arousal against her damp panties.
A gentle slap on her ass sent a jolt down her spine, while she continued to bestow tender kisses along his neck.
“Gigi…baby, you starting something you can’t control mamas.” Jimmy whispered gently.
“What? I’m just showing my man some affection.” Genesis murmured softly between his skin.
His hand softly encircled her throat, bringing her to a standstill. As she looked up at him, she could sense the warmth emanating from his body. “yeah, but doing allat is finna get you bent the fuck over Gigi.” His voice carried a deep, gravelly tone as he spoke, locking his gaze onto hers, where a playful glint danced in her eyes.
Her puppy-like eyes were so soft, almost pleading with him to let her continue, “c’mon big daddy let me give you some affection.” She pressed her lips against his neck once again, eliciting a deep groan from him, a sound that revealed his long-standing desire for her.
He struggled to maintain his self-control, resisting the urge to bend her over the counter and tug at her hair. Yet, her relentless advances, exploring his body and caressing his chest, ignited a fire within him, threatening to unravel his grip on the moment.
She tugged at his waistband, drawing him nearer as she encircled his waist with her legs, holding him tightly against her.
“Gigi…you pushing it mamas.”
“touch me.” She confidently unfastened her skirt, lowering it slightly to grant him access, while guiding his hand to slip inside her panties, where he began to caress her moist folds.
He could sense her arousal, the warmth and moisture enveloping his fingers, which became delightfully slick with her essence.
“Damn Gigi, you’re so wet for me baby.” Jimmy continued to caress her curves in a gentle circular motion, prompting her to clutch his biceps tightly as she buried her face against his chest.
He gently slid two fingers into her warmth, rhythmically moving them in and out, eliciting gasps of pleasure from her. It had been ages since she had experienced such a touch, and the longing she had felt for this moment was finally being fulfilled.
The only sound that filled the air was the delightful squelch of her pussy sounding like mac and cheese, while he looked down at her with a gaze that oozed seduction. “J-Jimmy, oh my…”
“Look at me, I wanna see that pretty ass face mama.” She complied with his demand, her gaze locked onto his as she bit her lower lip. He continued to pleasure her, and she instinctively widened her legs, granting him greater access. This allowed him to explore deeper with his fingers, while she clung to a nearby surface for stability.
The sound of his hand connecting with her clit resonated in the air as his fingers expertly danced within her. When he looked up, he caught sight of her eyes drifting back in sheer bliss.
He gently cupped her face with his free hand as she playfully stuck out her tongue at him. This teasing side of her emerged only in their private moments—her desire for him was palpable. Their mouths danced together, exchanging warmth as his tongue delved deep within her, while his fingers continued to explore her with fervor.
Jimmy skillfully curled his fingers, hitting her g-spot with precision, causing her to grasp his shoulders tightly as a surge of ecstasy surged within her.
��J-Jimmy, fuck. Jimmy.” 
“You finna cum baby? Cum for daddy baby, doing so good for daddy.” Jimmy quickened his rhythm, his fingers skillfully stimulating her g-spot repeatedly.
She sensed her body responding to his touch, tightening and relaxing around his fingers, while her eyes fluttered back in ecstasy. His soft whispers of affection sent delightful shivers through her, causing her stomach to twist in a thrilling dance.
Can’t wait to eat this pussy out baby Cum all over my fingers I want that shit You mines all mine GigiI can feel her baby, squirt on my fingersYou my good girl baby?Imma work so hard for you to be mines Genesis 
Her voice quivered and dropped to a whisper as her nails pressed into his biceps, a clear sign that she was on the brink of ecstasy.
I’m yours Jimmy been yoursPlease don’t stopDon’t stopppYou take care of me so good JimmyFuck
“Gonna c-cum…” Genesis moaned
He tenderly pressed his lips against hers, his hand gently encircling her throat, allowing him to witness her pleasure as it cascaded over his fingers. “Keep yo’ eyes on me princess, I wanna watch you cum.” His fingers plunged forcefully into her g-spot, the unmistakable sounds of her arousal echoing, indicating that she was on the brink of losing control.
He maintained his unyielding rhythm, his fingers moving in and out with an intensity that pushed her to the brink. In that moment, she lost control, a loud moan escaping her lips as her thighs quivered beneath her. Waves of pleasure surged through her, and she felt warmth trickling down her thighs. Her eyes widened in surprise as she realized the extent of her release.
He brought her to a state of ecstasy that she had never encountered before, resulting in her first experience of such intense pleasure.
She nestled against his chest, her breath quickening as Jimmy withdrew his fingers, leaving her with a sense of longing that made her whimper softly.
“I made you squirt, am I the first to do so?” Jimmy asked.
Genesis nodded, unable to articulate the words that danced on her lips, her body still tingling from the powerful orgasm she had just experienced. Now, she needed to change her attire before the evening's performance commenced.
Jimmy gently cradled her face in his hands, encouraging her to gaze up at him. He noticed her cheeks were flushed as he placed soft kisses on her lips, resting his forehead against hers. “You okay Gigi?”
“Y-yeah, I’m good. That’s was….good…so good.” Genesis breathed out smiling at Jimmy.
“I’m assuming you haven’t felt like this in a while huh?”
“Yeah, I haven’t honestly now I gotta change clothes.” As they shared a lighthearted laugh, Jimmy assisted her down from the sink counter, noticing her unsteady legs. He gently wrapped his arm around her waist, ensuring she remained steady as they made their way out the door together.
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Following the exhilarating main event featuring the gentlemen's match, Genesis began to gather her belongings for the evening. She relished every match she had witnessed and had the pleasure of meeting numerous wrestlers throughout the night. A sense of accomplishment washed over her, as she felt she had performed admirably.
She elegantly slung her purse over her shoulder, reached for her phone, and surveyed her surroundings to ensure she hadn’t overlooked anything as she exited the ladies' locker room.
As she stepped out of the room, she made her way toward her car parked in the lot. However, a sudden commotion caught her attention, prompting her to pause. Straining to listen, she recognized a familiar voice. Curiosity piqued, she cautiously leaned around the corner, catching sight of Jimmy and Trinity engaged in a heated exchange.
It was as though they were engaged in a debate about her the moment her name was mentioned in their discussion.
“Why would you say something like that to her? Knowing that I fuck with her Trin?”
“Because! She was in the way of our little arrangement!”
“I told you what it was Trin!”
arrangement? Is he talking about how he’s been giving her money and some dick before he met Genesis?
“You’re just bitter! Bitter that I’m spending more time with Genesis!”
She heard Trinity chuckle, “bitter? I’m the bitter one? When I had you first before she came into the picture?”
“You heard me Trin, you’re bitter as fuck right now.”
“I don’t give a fuck about that hoe, she doesn’t deserve you like what type of women lets a man with a high sex drive wait for her approval for you to dick her down?”
Genesis found herself spiraling into overanalysis once more after Trinity's disparaging remarks regarding her celibacy. Yet, she reminded herself that it shouldn't affect her, as Trinity remains unaware of the true motivations behind her choice.
“Watch your mouth speaking on her like that, you don’t even know her and the reason behind it so don’t be doing allat around me.”
“Can’t believe you’re defending her Jonathan!”
Genesis noticed the irritation etched on his face as he raised his hand, signaling his desire to conclude the discussion with Trinity. This prompted her to approach her car, feigning ignorance of having overheard their exchange.
Just before she could react, she caught one final remark escaping from Jimmy's lips.
“You don’t know her like I do, I’m willing to wait for her because she has a special place in my heart and I don’t need someone like you or my stupid ass cousin to ruin that for me. Gigi is a fucking diamond.”
“So I would advise you to leave her alone Trin.”
The words that flowed from Jimmy's lips sent a delightful thrill through her heart, filling her with joy. It was a profound realization that he cherished her above all others, caring solely for her well-being and disregarding everyone else.
He had his eyes for her.
“What does she have that I don’t Jon!? Tell me!?”
“Everything that I expected out of you when we first hooked up but nah you just wanted me for my money and not what I was giving you, you don’t deserve that Gigi does.”
As Genesis settled into her car, she observed Jimmy exiting the building, with Trinity clinging to him like a young kangaroo. When he finally pushed her away, she fell to her knees, pleading with him in a manner that was utterly pitiful.
As Genesis exited the parking lot, she attentively surveyed her surroundings, ensuring that no one was in her path before shifting the car into drive and making her way back to the hotel.
Hilton Garden Inn Knoxville Papermill Drive - 11:30PM
Genesis, adorned in her cozy pajamas and a charming bonnet, listened to the soothing sound of the shower running in the bathroom while she leisurely scrolled through her social media feed, checking the number of likes on her latest post.
She remained silent around Jimmy, fully aware of his earlier frustration with Trinity before he departed for work. She patiently awaited the ideal moment to calm his troubled spirit, believing it was the most she could offer him.
While perusing her social media feed, she noticed a message from Jade that prompted her to click on it.
Jadebae🌪️: hey bestieee I was checking in on you
She smiled at the message and began typing away.
Gigi🤍: hey I’m doing good bestie just waiting on Jon to come out from the bathroom 
Jadebae🌪️: speaking of Jon what’s goin on between you and him?
Gigi🤍: omggg why does ever keep asking us that? We are just friends that’s all—he’s been nothing but sweet to me bestie literally one of the best friend I ever had besides you and Cody ofc
Jadebae🌪️: I understand that but girl fr what’s the tea 
Genesis let out a heavy sigh, fully aware of Jade's insatiable curiosity. However, she resolved to share only a mere hint of the truth, as she preferred to keep their affair shrouded in secrecy, leaving others in the dark.
Gigi🤍: sighhhh you better not run yo mouth to Jey bout this but Girlllll he’s so perfect wayy too perfect and it scares me a little bit.
Jadebae🌪️: girl that’s bc you haven’t dealt with a good man like him 
Gigi🤍: the way he takes care of me and be kissing all over me like I matter just ouuu girl make my panties soaking wet
Jadebae🌪️: omggggg I knew it! I knew it was something happening between you two! Why don’t you wanna make it official?
Gigi🤍: I don’t want folks in our business and I just wanna be sure that I’m ready for something serious like this again yk after what I’ve been through 
Jadebae🌪️: i understand Gigi I do buuut I have to ask have yall fuck yet?
Gigi🤍: JADE! 😭😭😭 no we haven’t but we been doing other things but yeah
Jadebae🌪️: un-un spill the details 
Gigi🤍: JADEEEE 
Jadebae🌪️: spill neowwww
As she prepared to message Jade with the information, she heard the door creak open. Glancing up, she caught sight of Jimmy emerging from the shower, his body glistening with water and his curls damp. A towel was wrapped around his waist, while he used another towel to dry his hair.
The tension emanating from his body was palpable as he settled onto the bed, which dipped under his weight while he toweled off his hair.
Gigi🤍: sorry bestie that’s my cue gotta go
Genesis set her phone aside as she rose from the bed, gracefully making her way toward Jimmy, who had turned his gaze to her approach.
She positioned herself before him, and he gazed up at her, towel in hand, as he dried his hair.
“What’s up Mama?” Jimmy said.
Genesis positioned herself atop his lap, straddling him gracefully as his hand rested on her waist, ensuring her stability. She wove her fingers through his damp curls, gently massaging his scalp, prompting him to lean into her neck in a moment of tender intimacy.
She tenderly pressed soft kisses against his cheek and neck, soothing his frayed nerves from the earlier encounter with Trinity, all the while sensing his hands gently cradling her curves.
“Gigi baby, whatchu doing?”
“You seem stressed Jimmy, I’m just calming your nerves.” She gently cupped his chin, guiding his gaze to meet hers with his endearing, puppy-like eyes. With a tender kiss on his lips, she softly urged him back onto the bed.
She tenderly trailed gentle kisses along his neck and down to his chest, igniting a wave of desire with each caress. Meanwhile, his hands explored her body, playfully landing a firm smack on her left cheek.
She let her kisses glide downwards, moving towards his aroused form that stirred beneath the towel draped around his waist. Glancing up at him, her hand descended, caressing him softly as she noticed his breath quickening.
“What’chu tryna do to me baby?” Jimmy asked, glancing down at her.
“Helping you relax.” Genesis reacted by loosening the towel, revealing his impressive length, causing her eyes to widen in surprise.
She was correct in her assumption; he was indeed impressive, measuring around eight inches in length, standing proudly with pre-cum gently seeping from the tip—a truly captivating sight.
She gazed into his eyes, silently seeking his consent to make contact, which elicited a soft chuckle from him. "Feel free to touch it, darling," he replied. With that encouragement, she took his hand, guiding it around him as he gradually flexed his body, her fingers gliding up and down in a gentle caress.
Jimmy let out a sigh, his eyes drifting back as he surrendered to the soothing touch that glided over him. His head nestled against the cool sheets of the mattress, while Genesis reclined on his stomach, gazing at him with her enchanting, doe-like eyes.
The gentle touch of her thumb against his tip sent shivers through his body, eliciting soft whimpers that escaped his lips. Jimmy tensed his muscles, biting his lower lip in anticipation as he observed her tender caress.
From the moment he first laid eyes on her, he had longed for her to fulfill this desire. The mere thought of her caressing him and showering him with kisses ignited an even deeper passion within him. “Does this feel good, Jimmy?” 
He lifted his gaze, locking his eyes onto hers with a profound intensity, all the while nodding in agreement.
“Yes baby, you’re doing so good Gigi. speed up a little bit.” 
She persisted in discovering his remarkable dimensions with her delicate hands, her thumb teasingly tracing the tip, eliciting a blissful roll of his eyes. As she planted gentle, moist kisses on his abdomen, her other hand tenderly stroked and caressed his face and chest.
He yearned to sweep her off her feet and take her on this bed, yet he chose to hold back until she signaled her consent.
He sensed his legs tighten as her fingers gripped him firmly, gliding rhythmically, the gentle illumination highlighting the sheen of her caress. She whispered sweet nothings to him, mirroring the way he often spoke to her, as he heard the soft moans slipping from his own lovely lips.
“Do you enjoy this, Jimmy? Is it pleasurable for you?” she asked gently, applying a slow, intentional pressure. “Am I pleasing you?”
Her speed subtly quickened, and the delicate caress of her hand grew more fervent and captivating. Each movement and tender murmur sent shivers along his spine, diverting his attention and making it increasingly difficult to focus.
“Shit baby, you doing real good mamas. don’t stop Gigi.” Jimmy moaned, staring directly into her eyes.
“Yeah? you don’t want me to stop daddy?” As Genesis maintained her graceful rhythm, a captivating aura enveloped her, and she tenderly placed soft kisses upon his chest and abdomen.
His composure had already slipped away under the spell of her fingers, but now? Her alluring voice rendered him utterly speechless, akin to a fox caught in the shadows. The soft warmth of her caress and the elegant fluidity of her movements began to enchant him.
His body stiffened, and he fought for breath as a familiar wave of lightheadedness washed over him, a sensation she recognized as well. “Can’t wait until you tell me to make love to you because once I get my hands on you Gigi…fuckk.”
“How good you gonna make love to me daddy?”
“Imma make love to you real good lil mama, you gon’ be addicted once im done…shit Gigi I’m finna nut.” Genesis hastened her movements, her thumb gliding over the tip with a delicate touch.
“Hmm, don’t stop Gigi. Don’t stop.” Jimmy let out a low groan, his whole body quivering and shuddering.
Unaware of the full measure of his stamina, he sensed the thrill coursing through her hands as she continued to caress him with a steady rhythm, the same sensation cascading down his abdomen.
“Gigiii, fuck mamas. I’m finna fucking nut baby.” He reclined against the mattress, his head thrown back as he clutched the sheets tightly, his thighs tensing and nearly contracting until he reached a breaking point.
In an instant, the tension within him shattered like a delicate branch, and a profound groan emerged from his throat. He watched as his release cascaded in thick rivulets onto her hand, trickling down as his sight faded, engulfed by the overwhelming intensity, causing his legs to buckle beneath him.
She persisted in caressing him until he had released every drop, her hand now a chaotic mix of his essence. As she gently brushed her thumb against his sensitive tip, he reacted with a jolt, his gaze fixed on her with intensity.
His chest heaved as he struggled to regain his breath, watching Genesis rise from the bed and make her way to the bathroom to wash her hands. He lingered for a moment before tending to himself and slipping into his boxers.
Upon her return, she found him reclined on the bed, engrossed in his social media feed, eagerly anticipating her arrival. As she approached, he noticed her presence and set his phone down on the small dresser beside him. She then gracefully joined him in bed.
She nestled her head against his chest, both of them settling into the bed, enveloped in warmth. His arm encircled her waist, gently cradling her curves as he caressed her with soothing circular motions.
“Who sent you Jimmy.” Genesis questioned him.
“What you mean Gigi?” Jimmy asked.
“I’m saying, you treat me right and take care of me so good it’s scaring me if I’m being honest.” Their eyes met as she sensed his gentle kiss upon her forehead, accompanied by a warm smile directed at her.
“It’s because you haven’t been treated right, Gigi, and I'm the right person to do so because you deserve it—I told you; you’re a diamond mama.” She smiled at him.
Genesis had never experienced such a profound sense of safety and comfort in his embrace. As she nestled deeper into his chest, it was as if she truly belonged there, dispelling the feelings of loneliness and fear that had once consumed her.
“I don’t deserve you Jimmy.” 
“But you do deserve me Gigi, it’s your world baby and I’m just a part of it princess.” Jimmy had cradled her chin to make her look at him. “Imma work hard just so you can be mines lil mama, you deserve all of my love.” He noticed her eyes shimmering with unshed tears as he gently pressed his lips against hers, feeling the warmth of her tears cascade down her cheeks.
Jimmy gently wiped away her tears, enveloping her more tightly in his embrace. "What if I’m not enough? What if I—" she began, but he interrupted her.
“Baby, you’re enough in my eyes you’ve been through enough already just lemme’ take care of you aight?” Genesis gently nodded, her eyelids fluttering closed as she began to drift into slumber on Jimmy's chest.
Jimmy observed as she drifted off to sleep against him, and he soon followed suit. He was resolute in his commitment to care for Genesis; he would not allow her to slip away from his grasp.
He loved her and will do anything for her even if that means placing a bullet into someone’s head he’ll do it for her.
GUARDED.
a/n: Seee trinity already starting to piss me off so badly dawg like why is you starting shit? I honestly love the way Jimmy loves on Gigi makes my heart flutter.
But I hope yall enjoy this chapter lmk in the comments below.
STAY UCEY.
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sunsuns-babie · 1 year ago
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If I Get My Way {K.SUNOO x F!READER}
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IN WHICH: Kim Seonwoo aka Sunoo is a Sophomore at Decelis University and has a crush on the pretty Music Education Major Y/n Marsh. Seems like a match made in heaven since he’s also a Music Education Major and has had a crush on her since Freshman year when he met her at orientation… well sort of. He’s a little delusional about her but that’s okay, right? When finally given the opportunity to get to know her and potentially date her some weird things start happening that Sunoo doesn’t quite understand… which leads to the postponement of his grand plan to confess his feelings for Y/n. At the end of the day does he get the girl or does he miss out and think of what could’ve been?
ALSO IN WHICH: Sunoo and Y/n’s friends also have their own storylines and side quest relationships happening simultaneously with theirs.
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PAIRING: Kim Sunoo x !Female Reader (ft. Mystery Character 1 & Mystery Character 2)
GENRE: Non-Idol AU, College/University AU, SMAU
WARNING: Swearing, sexual jokes/comments, allusion to sexual activity, attempts at humor (I don’t think I’m funny but I’m trying), jokes about murder/killing oneself, and Danielle from NewJeans as the face claim.
FEATURING: Lee Heeseung (EN—), Jay Park (EN—), Jake Sim (EN—), Park Sunghoon (EN—), Yang Jungwon (EN—), NI-KI (EN—), Jang Wonyoung (IVE), Shin Ryujin (ITZY), Choi Yeonjun (TXT), Choi Soobin (TXT), Choi Beomgyu (TXT), Karina (aespa), NingNing (aespa), Huh Yunjin (LE SSERAFIM), Yoon Keeho (P1HARMONY), Anton Lee (riize), Hwang Yeji (ITZY), and mentions of various other idols.
status: on going
start: Feb. 12, 2024
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DISCLAIMER: This is a work of fiction and is in no way a real depiction of the idols portrayed in it and has no actual connection to their real world selves. I don’t know them I’m just using their image for characters in a fictional story.
A/N: This is my first SMAU ever I’ve written stories on other platforms in the past and kind of stopped to be a reader for awhile but I recently got an idea for a story and wanted to try and make it a reality. So please forgive me if it’s bad I’ll try my best to make it enjoyable for you. But I barely know how to work Tumblr as a creator or writer so forgive me if this is all over the place 😭😭😭.
A/N 2: If you want to be added to the taglist for this SMAU you can comment on this post or which ever chapter you see first!
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PROFILES: 2 HOT 4 U LONER BOYS CLUB (ft. 2 Baddies)
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kiwi-luminaryofthestars · 26 days ago
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05/31/2025 Pre-Game Saiou Orch Dork Fic Progress Update:
TLDR: Went over completed draft and changed around the ending a bit. Got to 10K in the process. Started editing, got 2.5K done. Anticipating will be shorter than 10K and released by next weekend.
(Most of this today is me airing out fic-writing complications and brainstorming, be warned 😵‍💫)
Sat down for like 4 hours tryna edit and only got 2.5K done ugh. Was just having a generally difficult time with this one and getting in my own head a lot. I’ve said before I’m tryna let this be low-effort and just for fun but I’m a little antsy about posting something I don’t think is great? Like like, I don’t ever think the stuff I post is *amazing*, but I try really hard to be happy with everything before I make it public. (Exception is the Rantaro and Shuichi conversation in chapter 6 lolll because I just could not figure out what was bothering me about it and just had to let it be.)
I’m wondering if a lot of this is stemming from it being a pre-game thing tho. Cuz I want Shuichi and Kokichi to sound/act like themselves when I write them. Of course I don’t always get it right, but I do pay attention to staying in-character as much as possible. With pre-game, I didn’t wanna go the “opposite personality” direction, but I also didn’t wanna just make them normal Shuichi and Kokichi either, so I’m attempting a middle ground.
But I feel like that ends up making this weird for me, because I can sorta still see both of them here but also can’t at the same time. I tried to keep both of their personalities still pretty similar to in-game (Shu’s still socially awkward as shit and Kokichi’s playful for sure) but now you’ve got this lens of them both loving Danganronpa, which is so just NOT them in-game. Like thinking about Shuichi or Kokichi enjoying what is potentially actual murder of participants in a reality show is like 😵‍💫 WHAT NO THEY WOULDN’T DO THAT WTF 🤣 So I feel like my skin is crawling just a little bit, especially cuz I tried to keep Shuichi’s audition tape very in-mind, specifically him talking about “coming up with gruesome murders”, and I’m looking at him like 🫵 IMPOSTER SHUICHI
This is weird for me cuz I haven’t like had that issue when I’ve read some pre-game fics in the past 🤔 I don’t like yandere fics, I’ve said that before, but I’ve been okay with the idea of Shuichi being a little obsessive about the show he loves.
Honestly writing all this out is making me wanna comb over it again because I’m wondering if I just maybe went *too* melodramatic with it and that’s where I’m getting stuck. It’s angsty because I mean that’s what I write man but maybe I should tone it down a bit… Hm. It’s 4:00am and I’m going back in boys.
SORRY if you read all this, we’re just like thinking it through out loud (or I guess in tumblr post). Hope yall have a great night!!
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bloopitynoot · 27 days ago
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What I Read This Week: 05/25/2025
I am a librarian, and unrelated to stereotypes about my profession, I do read a metric shit-ton in a week. Most of it is fanfiction but hey, I thought maybe it's time I share my reads?
This is what I read this week:
1. I rubbed this guy's lamp and all I got was three (?) wishes: a Luo Binghe Story by Thri_here, unreliable narratoe (Thri_here) (30,000)
Summary: What it says on the tin.
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By temporary transmigration protocol, Shen Yuan masquerades as the mysterious Senior Genie from the abyss. Luo Binghe suffers.
I have been obsessed with stories where Shen Yuan transmigrates as another character and this OC genie with dimension breaks is so good
I don't think there will be a second one? But the potential exists for more.
Shen Yuan was really just trying to fix things and goofed it LOL
2. Regardless of the Hardships by Ehann (137, 378)
Summary: The first thing Shen Yuan did upon transmigrating was shave that monstrosity of a mustache. What was Mu Qingfang thinking, Shen Yuan wondered, glaring at himself in the mirror?! Well, he thought, it’s too late now.
He was now Mu Qingfang, peak lord of Qian Cao peak. He might as well get used to calling himself that now, so.
This fic ruined my life in the absolute best of ways. This was beautifully written and made me weep (happy ending though!)
It is scumcum pairing (which I have grown to love- honestly I will read Shen yuan and pretty much anyone) and the emotional growth the boys go through is so so good.
Ugh, I need 12 more chapters. I love them.
Truly a healing fic.
3 Life for a life by deliciousblizzardshark (15, 647)
Summary: When Lan Wangji gets injured during a night-hunt, Wei Wuxian keeps him company.
...
Lan Zhan wrapped his strong arms around him and held him there, their mouths so close they were breathing each other’s air. “Hey, sweetheart,” Wei Wuxian whispered. “Mn,” Lan Zhan said.
This was pretty cute not going to lie
Cloud recesses arc: Lan Wangji gets injured! Wei Wuxian is there for him
Little (for me) but absolutely adorable. These two cuties- my heart!
4 Pollen Says Cuddle by fibbunny (118, 191)
Summary: Liu Qingge has been dosed with pollen, and Binghe knows how this goes. Except, perhaps he doesn't, because the pollen will pass on its own, no need for dual cultivation. With a catch. Well, it's only a month, and then things will go back to normal. And he definitely wants that. He knows what he wants, he's very in touch with his feelings, thank you very much.
Liu Qingge knows this will be an embarrassing and agonizing month, but he just has to get through it, and then he can go back to avoiding the happy couple. No need to deal with any messy feelings, fraught pasts, or complicated relationships. He's fine. It's fine. Everything is fine.
This fic had me CRYING! The perceived unrequited (but definitely requited!) love was too much for my soul [i loved it]
I adore poly fics, I adore bingliushen, and I love a happy ending preceded by 100k of emotional misunderstandings and angst.
Incredibly written, so good!
I will warn about some dubious consent with the dreamscape tho- binghe is binghe and the person he's in the dreamscape with does not know its actually him.
5 You, my morning rush by elaichichai (17, 259)
Summary: What to do when you’re extremely hot Grindr hook up’s very intrusive mother walks in while he’s almost inside you and assumes you’re dating?
You go along with it.
At least that’s what Wei Ying did.
Holy shit this fic had me WHEEZING. The most crack treated seriously I've read in a WHILE.
Mama Lan is an icon, a hero, and a cougar.
The second hand embarrassment almost ended me though; god LMAO
10/10
6 How to Make a Heavenly Demon by Faal, skirmtheterrible, WillowWispFlame (60,337)
Summary: During a night hunt gone wrong, Shen Qingqiu finds himself with the opportunity to avert Luo Binghe's System-mandated fate of being thrown into the Endless Abyss. The only catch? Shen Qingqiu must take his place.
Shen Qingqiu must make his way through the Endless Abyss and all of its trials and tribulations, taking the role of the protagonist.
this was so emotional! My heart! It hurt for Shen Yuan.
I have never read a SQH/LBH/SY fic before and this dynamic was an absolute delight.
You will need tissues, the abyss hurt
So good! I hope there are/can't wait for extras
7 Bittersweet Lies Revealed Upon Sugarcoated Tongues by Starlight1395 (15, 963)
Summary: He had done everything right... he did everything the System wanted him to do, right? So why? Why was he still going to die!? What more could he have done to prevent his own painful demise!?
Shen Qingqiu made a decision: If he was going to die, it would be on his own damn terms. He would face down the System and take whatever punishment it gave him if it meant being able to apologize to Luo Binghe for... everything. He braced himself, preparing to be sent back to his dead, rotting body.
Only to find himself still kneeling in the town square.
[...]
[The System would like to apologize for this inconvenience]
again this one got me too- my heart! Shen yuan was really going through it in the beginning
happiest of endings though
Fuck the system
8 Instinctively Yours by Shipping_and_Writing (50, 837)
Summary: If he had one word to describe his situation, Shen Yuan would give himself a stress induced heart attack trying to think of a single one that depicted his feelings correctly. It was simply impossible to do so with those limitations.
Or: Shen Yuan transmigrates as a heavenly demon crow. It's as great as one would expect it to be
ooo! This was part of my haul of "Shen Yuan transmigrates into others, and I love a demon transmigration
even better! Heavenly demon Shen yuan!
very sweet distracted crow demon shen yuan- bro was fixing the plot and didn't even realize it
9 If you liked it then you should have put a (sect robe) on it by KizuKatana (49, 882)
Summary: Madam Yu decides that the best way to reinstate the severed engagement between her daughter and her best friend’s son would be to publicly punish and humiliate Wei Wuxian in front of the other sects, particularly the Jin. Since he was the one who caused it to be broken, it was the least Wei Wuxian deserved, to remind him of his place. And if it also got back at her husband for allowing the engagement to be broken in the first place, she viewed that as an excellent side benefit.
Unfortunately, she hadn’t considered that other sects might actually snap up the talented disciple that she had planned to only temporarily toss aside. The consequences of that mistake are much farther-reaching than she could have ever imagined.
Canon divergent after Wei Wuxian gets sent home from the Cloud Recesses lectures after punching Jin Zixuan. Novel canon universe and characterizations.
omg im obsessed with this fic universe! I really hope it continues because I feel like I've just gotten a taste into a fic where Wei Wuxian can absolutely thrive
They really called the Jiangs out!
Madam Yu's no good very bad day for sure.
I'm so stoked to read more.
10. Heaven Official's Blessing by MXTX Chapter 115-120
Summary: Born the crown prince of a prosperous kingdom, Xie Lian was renowned for his beauty, strength, and purity. His years of dedication and noble deeds allowed him to ascend to godhood. But those who rise, can also fall…and fall he does, cast from the Heavens again and again and banished to the mortal realm.
Eight hundred years after his mortal life, Xie Lian has ascended to godhood for the third time. Now only a lowly scrap collector, he is dispatched to wander the earthly realm to take on tasks appointed by the heavens to pay back debts and maintain his divinity. Aided by old friends and foes alike, and graced with the company of a mysterious young man with whom he feels an instant connection, Xie Lian must confront the horrors of his past in order to dispel the curse of his present.
I'm in the last bit of book 7 and it's a wee bit angsty!
I'm reading about a chapter a day and live blogging the experience. you can follow along on the Bloopitynoot reads TGCF tag
NO SPOILERS PLS.
I am so soft for Hualian
That's what I read this week!
I have been trying to alternate MDZS and SVSSS fics but I ran out of MDZS!
To balance that out I just did a sweep of the wangxian tag and added a shit ton to my list- so lots of wangxian incoming next week :)
As usual I will gladly accept any recs you have happily and gratefully- though it may take me some time to get to them; MDZS (wangxian - but also most other pairings) or SVSSS (shen yuan et al pairings - or others tbh I am not picky!)
If you want a personalized fic list I am offering lists for Wangxian (some other MDZS pairings) and bingqiu (and some other SVSSS pairings) -just send me a dm with your theme and criteria! If I have fics that I have read that fit the vibe, I will happily rec a list <3
Until next week!
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you’re   not   from   around   here   ,   are   you?   i   figured   because   you   totally   just   missed   SØREN   HOLMSTRÖM   walking   by.   don’t   tell   me   you   don’t   know   who   HE   is   ?   they   kind   of   look   like   NIKOLAJ   COSTER   -   WALDAU   and   i   could   be   wrong   but   i   think   that   they   might   be   FIFTY4   years   old   right   now.   they’ve   been   living   in   palmview   for   the   last   TEN   YEARS.   and   i   don’t   know   if   anyone   has   ever   told   them   this   before   but   they   kind   of   remind   me   of   GOMEZ   ADDAMS   from   THE   ADDAMS   FAMILY.   if   you   stick   around   the   town   long   enough   you   might   catch   them   in   action   working   at   SEAGLASS   HOSPITAL   as   a   ORTHOPEDIC   SURGEON.   you   see   this   town   isn’t   really   that   big   of   a   place,   some   folks   like   to   call   them   the   GIRL   DAD   of   palmview!   they   took   a   liking   to   the   name   too   after   a   while,   go   figure.   oh   crap,   they   must   have   heard   me   yapping.   they’re   coming   this   way.   i   got   to   warn   you   though,   rumor   has   it   they   can   pretty   SENSITIVE   at   times.   i   wouldn’t   take   it   too   seriously   though,   from   the   times   i’ve   spoken   to   them   they   seemed   pretty   NURTURING   to   me.   we   see   each   other   all   the   time   since   they   live   in   that   4   ROOM   apartment   beside   me   over   in   EMERALD   POINT. 
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  CHAPTER ONE     :          STATS .
name :         søren nils holmström .         nicknames :         älskling ( by sigrid ) .         age :         fifty4 .         gender  +  pronouns :         cis  man  +  he / him .         sexuality :         straight .         birthday :         march 3rd 1971.         languages :         swedish, danish, english, mandarin ( badly ).         address :         # 532 pacific drive.       
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CHAPTER TWO     :         SOUNDTRACK .
01.         this charming man — the smiths .         02.         wishing — a flock of seagulls .         03.         run to you — bryan adams .         04.         hounds of love — kate bush .         05.         advice for the young at heart — tears for fears .        
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CHAPTER THREE     :         STORY .
𝓲. søren   holmström   was   born   from   nothing   less   than   fairytale   love.   his   mother   was   from   denmark,   but   every   sunday   a   handsome   man   from   sweden   stopped   by   her   flower   shop   in   copenhagen   and   stayed   just   a   little   bit   too   long.   they   quickly   married,   and   the   news   of   a   new   arrival   came   soon   afterwards   —   søren   came   into   the   world   like   a   burst   of   light   and   has   illuminated   the   dark   corners   in   people's   lives   ever   since. his   father   moved   to   denmark,   and   they   lived   as   a   comfortable   family   unit   through   his   childhood.  𝓲𝓲. an   intelligent   and   driven   young   boy,   søren   always   knew   that   he   wanted   to   help   people.   it   sounded   cliché   whenever   anyone   asked   —   and   family   members   would   talk   amongst   themselves   about   how   the   holmström   boy   wanted   to   make   the   big   bucks   —   but   he   wanted   to   take   away   pain   and   stitch   lives   back   together   again.   a   love   of   anatomy   books   followed   him   through   school   and   all   the   way   to   college.   after   an   exhausting   placement,   he   took   a   fellowship and commuted   to   malmö   every   morning for the next step in his career. 𝓲𝓲𝓲. he   supposed   that   it   was   fate   when   he   saw   her.   the   face   of   a   woman   straight   out   of   a   magazine.   when   he   saw   her,   søren   almost   fell   to   his   knees   —   a   goddess   walking,   a   beautiful   thing   that   almost   glowed.   how   could   he   have   ever   walked   away ?   for   the   next   few   months,   søren   brought   bouquets   from   his   mother’s   shop   to   the   café   where   sigrid   worked.   once   the   annoyance   faded,   sigrid   had   no   other   option   but   to   agree   to   a   date. 𝓲𝒗. and   when   she   folded,   things   moved   quickly.   she   got   pregnant   fast,   and   there   was   only   ever   one   option   for   søren   when   he   saw   those   two   lines   on   the   test.   his   fellowship   at   the   hospital   came   to   an   end   and   immediately   he   hung   up   the   stethoscope   to   support   his   girlfriend.   his   intention   had   always   been   to   help   people.   he   still   was,   but   instead   of   people   it   was   his   own   family.   supporting   sigrid   and   marrying   her   was   the   second   most   natural   thing   in   the   world.   the   first ?   well,   he   found   out   the   moment   his   daughter   came   along.  𝒗. fatherhood   became   his   everything.   for   the   first   few   years   søren   stayed   home   to   allow   sigrid   to   study,   taking   awkward   ad - hoc   shifts   at   the   hospital   to   fund   their   living   costs.   when   signe   started   school,   he   applied   and   gained   an   orthopedic   consultancy.   the   next   ten   years   moved   by   easily   —   the   scandinavian   dream   —   until   a   letter   arrived.   they   wanted   dr   holmström   in   palmview.    guilt   ate   him   alive,   and   the   invitation   stayed   on   the   mantlepiece   until   sigrid   found   it.   she   paid   back   the   favour.   it   was   his   chance   to   want   something,   his   chance   to   grip   life   by   the   horns. 𝒗𝓲. a   decade   on,   and   søren   spends   most   of   his   time   with   his   wife   and   daughter,   taking   walks   along   the   promenade,   and   working   in   his   home   study.   now   that   signe   has   flown   the   rest,   there's   a   hole   where   his   daughter   had   once   been   —   a   pit   that   he   isn't   quite   sure   how   to   fill.   but   he   tries   anyway. 
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CHAPTER FOUR     :         CONNECTIONS .
𝓲. sigrid holmström — wife . 𝓲𝓲. signe holmström — daughter . 𝓲𝓲𝓲. open — colleagues . 𝓲𝒗. gianna yun — patient .
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Fan Fic Master List:
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Repost Old Kpop Fanfics:
Discussion about Some Old K-pop Fanfics - (06/08/2024)
These are some of many archived fanfics featuring 1st and 2nd Gen K-pop acts that I've come across recently. It's all in good fun, and maybe a bit cringeworthy!
The words in red are my thoughts on the fanfic, and I'll be ranking them out of 10 just for fun.
SM Town Out To Lunch (15/15) - (hgiel) Anrui, Kyorei, and Jacqui:
Separate from the saga, but a prelude none the less. DBSG has just made their debut, but their pretty boy singer is eating everyone in SM Town! Not even Junta's love can stop cannibalism.
I would recommend that 18+ read this fanfic.(4/10)
Part 1 - (06/08/2024)
Part 2 - (06/08/2024)
Part 3 - (13/08/2024)
Part 4 - (13/08/2024)
Part 5 - (20/08/2024)
Part 6 - (21/08/2024)
Part 7 - (21/08/2024)
Part 8 - (21/08/2024)
Part 9 - (22/08/2024)
Part 10 - (22/08/2024)
Part 11 - (22/08/2024)
Part 12 - (22/08/2024)
Part 13 - (22/08/2024)
Part 14 - (22/08/2024)
Part 15 Final - (22/08/2024)
Vol 1 - Battle of the Boy Bands (23/23)
K-Pop and DBSG just put out albums and have are on a reality show, hosted by Se7en, to promote it. It isn't fun though, because Junta is their baby sitters, and the romantic drama is as thick and annoying as 90210.
This work is suitable for teen and up audiences.
Chapter 1 - (31/08/2024)
Chapter 2 - (31/08/2024)
Chapter 3 - (31/08/2024)
Chapter 4 - (31/08/2024)
Chapter 5 - (31/08/2024)
Chapter 6 - (07/09/2024)
Chapter 7 - (10/09/2024)
Chapter 8 - (15/09/2024)
Chapter 9 - Put on Hold!
Vol 2 - Sarang Hae Nippon
The TV show is over, now its time to vacation in Japan! Who knew it was impossible to avoid join street gangs in the Godzilla's home country? TaeBin seems to steer clear of them, but he's busy, seeing as he's in a "family way".
Coming Soon!
Vol 3 - Battle of the Boy Bands Season 2
Its time for the second season, luckily, Se7en isn't the host, TaeBin is. The drama isn't any less this time, the only thing that's changed is the increased trips to the hospital.
Coming Soon!
Full Moon Entertainment (26/26) - hgiel
Moon Hee Jun has just left SM Town and is going to create his OWN boy band, one better then H.O.T ever was. Unfortunately, all he has is the already formed band K-Pop and the North Korean they hit with their car.
Inspired by Vol - Battle of the Boy Bands Season 2 that also by hgiel.
Coming Soon!
Ouija Bored (1) - hgiel
The guys celebrate Halloween by playing with occult tools.
This work is suitable for teen and up audiences. I don't know about his one, it was fun to read but wish it was a bit longer.(6/10)
Chapter 1 - Put on Hold!
Oh, You're In The Army Now (3/3) - hgiel
EVERY gasso seems to be in the army now, and the rest have gone to the dogs, or streets. North Korea takes this opening to attack, and Moon Hee Jun, UBin, Chang Ryul, Yoo Min, and Desuk have to save The Republic of Korea by themselves.
Coming Soon!
12 Steps of Christmas (12/12) - hgiel
The 12 hours of an H.O.T Christmas.
This work is suitable for all audiences. These will be scheduled to be posted on the 25th of December.
Chapter 1 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 2 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 3 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 4 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 5 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 6 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 7 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 8 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 9 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 10 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 11 - (25/12/2024)
Chapter 12 - (25/12/2024)
Last Goodbye (1) - hgiel
Woo Hyun is about to enter the army, so he and Young One meet one last time before he goes.
Coming Soon!
Armageddon The Hell Out Of Here (1) - hgiel
H.O.T face the end of the world...
This work is suitable for teens and up audiences. Again, I'm not shore about this one, but it was okay it reminds me of 'War on the world's'.(4/10)
Chapter 1 - (05/09/2024)
A secret that is kept to us (5/?) - 90s_love:
Angel White and Crystal Light are two mysterious vigilantes who is after to destroy the illegal terrorist organization, Dark Archive. With their friend spirits, they protect the world. Meanwhile, their alter-egos are famous Kpop idols who have a rivalry within their groups. Can they keep their secret identities a secret from them?
This work is suitable for all audiences. I'm not really shore about his one, probably because its not finished, but it was okay.(5/10)
Chapter 1 - (22/08/2024)
Chapter 2 - (23/08/2024)
Chapter 3 - (23/08/2024)
Chapter 4 - (23/08/2024)
Chapter 5 - (23/08/2024)
Switch Rivals (21/21) - 90s_love:
Modern version of the 90's kpop idol scene. H.O.T and Sechskies are forever rivals. But what will happen when one member from each team switch bodies?
This work is suitable for all audiences. By chapter 5, i was hooked, i really enjoyed this one. I might even read it again because of how good it was.(9/10)
Chapter 1 - (26/08/2024)
Chapter 2 - (26/08/2024)
Chapter 3 - (26/08/2024)
Chapter 4 - (26/08/2024)
Chapter 5 - (26/08/2024)
Chapter 6 - (28/08/2024)
Chapter 7 - (28/08/2024)
Chapter 8 - (28/08/2024)
Chapter 9 - (28/08/2024)
Chapter 10 - (28/08/2024)
Chapter 11 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 12 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 13 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 14 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 15 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 16 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 17 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 18 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 19 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 20 - (29/08/2024)
Chapter 21 Finale - (29/08/2024)
Project Kwangya - Alternatives Talles (10/?) - Cally_Kop:
Several tales using SM Idols as characters. Since the company decided to bring all the Idols together in the shared universe idea, where all the MV's, lyrics and all the promotional material of the company's Idols would tell a story, like Marvel and its shared universe.
Here, small stories will be posted using this same idea, that each Idol has a role and story to tell, being able to interfere in the stories of other characters. From Kangta to Aespa, to EXO, SHINee, Red Velvet, Girls Generation, NCT, all SM idols appeared.
Coming Soon!
Warrior's Descendants (6/6) - AuspiciousAutumn:
H.O.T are so close to becoming an active group again, but not everyone is keen with them doing it on their own terms.
I would recommend that 18+ read this fanfic.
Chapter 1 - (22/09/2024)
Chapter 2 - (22/09/2024)
Chapter 3 - (22/09/2024)
Chapter 4 - (22/09/2024)
Chapter 5 - (22/09/2024)
Chapter 6 Final - (22/09/2024)
12 days of Super Junior, a Christmas fic (12/12) - plincess_cho:
As Super Junior contemplate what they want for Christmas, they realize that above all, they want to be together.
This work is suitable for all audiences.
Coming Soon!
Red Velvet and the haunted dorms [Ft. Super Junior] (1) -plincess_cho:
Red Velvet move into Super Junior's old dorms. But are their dorms really haunted like everyone says?
This work is suitable for all audiences.
Chapter 1 - (15/09/2024)
2014 → 2000 (2/?) - Inodot:
Mir was and still is a big g.o.d fan. One day, after saving a child from getting hit by a car, he somehow ended up in 2000 when g.o.d were still active. He tries not to mess with time but couldn't help but to think that he can prevent their hiatus from happening.
This work is suitable for all audiences.
Chapter 1 - (21/09/2024)
Chapter 2 - (21/09/2024)
Translated Fanfics:
As these Fanfics are translated from there original language to English there might be some translation mistakes.
Masters of the Game (8/8) - maresca:
Human life is a Game. It includes both random dice rolls and multi-move strategic combinations. When human life reaches a stalemate, the Game Masters enter the Game. The Game Masters declare the beginning of the Game.
This work is suitable for teens and up audiences.
Coming Soon!
Zhou Gong also cannot interpret dreams (1) - memeflosalvo:
Chinese - Mandarin to English.
I would recommend that 18+ read this fanfic.
Coming Soon!
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yuriko-mukami · 2 years ago
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Ecstasy Writing Process...
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Updated: 09/10/2023
The first draft of the main story finished on August 20th, 2023, and the special chapter October 9th, 2023
📖 Word count: 44 133
📖 Library scene count: 6
📖 Smutty scene count: 4
📖 Biting scene count: 6
📖 Cover art: Needed
📖 CG edits: 1/2 done
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Prologue - final version done
Ecstasy 01 - final version done
Ecstasy 02 - final version done
Ecstasy 03 - final version done
Ecstasy 04 - final version done
Ecstasy 05 - final version done
Ecstasy 06 - final version done
Ecstasy 07 - final version done
Ecstasy 08 - final version done
Ecstasy 09 - final version done
Ecstasy 10 - final version done
Epilogue - final version done
Brute End - final version done
Manservant End - final version done
Vampire End - final version done
After Story - final version done
Special - the first draft written
17/07/2023: I made this post for myself to follow the progress of the story. And now, I can't but laugh since with two chapters written we already have two library scenes... That's Ruki and Yuriko for you. 🤣
19/07/2023: Three chapters in, three libraries visited. Oh my, these two... 😅 Jokes aside, it's so nice to write Elizabeth and Yuriko's interactions but also Ruki and Shin's bickering.
24/07/2023: Oh boy... I felt bad when I had to write another Laito scene. Such a disgusting moment but I think it still serves the story. But I can't wait for writing sweeter scenes between Ruki and Yuriko later...
27/07/2023: I haven't been able to write as fast as I hoped, but I'm still making progress. There are so many tiny things I need to fit into this that I start to regret I decided to follow the game structure. I need to think if I want to do that in future stories or if should I simply make my own structure for those...
Also, I ordered two CG edits yesterday, instead of one. Now, I need to decide which chapter will get one. The other goes to the After Story.
28/07/2023: I hoped I would have reached Ecstasy 10 by today but I guess that was a bit high goal. Still, I'm happy with these results. And damn, I enjoyed writing Ecstasy 08 today.
31/07/2023: Oh my... It was so much fun to write Ecstasy 09 too, even though the chapter isn't happy at all. But I think Yuriko has great moments there. Poor Ruki though...
31/07/2023 || Second Note: I managed to write Ecstasy 10 and start Ecstasy Epilogue. Of course, there is still a way to go with all the endings and the After Story... but I begin to have my skeleton version here. I'm rather positive that the first draft might be finished in August. Of course, there are editing rounds to come but still... I'm pleased about this.
02/08/2023: I wrote both Brute and Manservant Ends... and oh boy, that was quite a trip. Prepare yourself for a yandere Ruki. Now, I only have Vampire End, After Story, and Special chapter left before it's time to write all the smut scenes~ My reward is almost here! 💙
03/08/2023: I finished the first draft of the Vampire End. Huh, that was quite a roller coaster. The text is terrible at the moment though, such bad writing... but since I'm going to edit the story anyway, I don't mind it at this point.
Also, my goal was 30 000 words for this story but I guess I will go past that since I reached it already and there are still things I need to add. Like all smut scenes.
04/08/2023: OH MY GOSH! The story's first draft is pretty much finished. Only the smut scenes are missing from the main story.
I will work on the special story a bit later since it won't be released on Tumblr but in the ebook version of the story. So, the next project is to scribble three different types of smut scenes. 😏 The fourth and last one will be at the end of the special chapter.
09/08/2023: Haa... I have such huge writing urges but I got an unexpected job offer for three weeks and now I'm all stressed out and tired whenever I have free time... 😢 I should stop saying yes to these odd job offers, I guess... since I already have the job I love. But I'm bad at saying no... Buuut I managed to start the first smut scene! I hope I have the energy to finish it tomorrow or the latest at the weekend.
12/08/2023: I just finished the first smut scene of the story... and I think it's the dirtiest one so far in the whole His Possession. 🙈😳 The next ones won't be this dirty I think, since they serve different purposes for the story... But gosh, I rarely turn into a blushing mess because of my own writing but this... We'll see if I edit it milder or not... 🫣
17/08/2023: Finished the second smut scene. So now, there is one to go for the main story (there will be one in the special chapter too). Soon, I can leave this story in Ruki's admin's care. Though... tbh, it might still take a while since I have been so damn tired after work. Writing has become slow and difficult because of this. But I'm trying my best. I want to publish this story by the end of this year.
20/08/2023: The main story is finished. 🥳 I will write the special later, but everything else is now drafted. Of course, there will be a lot of editing and I might even add scenes here and there but mostly the story is now formed.
Anyway, the next step is to give this in @ruki-mukami-dl's hands but I'm positive that everyone else can read it before this year ends. So, look forward to that.
09/10/2023: I got the special chapter back from @ruki-mukami-dl today. I still need to make some fixes in it, but it's mostly done. It will be published only in the ebook version of the story. But it will bring almost 20 pages worth of extra content. The chapter will be in Ruki’s point of view, and it can be rather triggering for sensitive people. But it surely was interesting to write together with Ruki’s admin 💙
Other than that, I'm making the cover for the printed book on the weekend. So, the ebook's cover is on its way, too. Then, just one final CG edit and everything is ready for November. Ah, I can’t wait to share the story!
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annlillyjose · 2 years ago
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dairy whiskey – update 05 – i finished the book!
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[image description: on a background of large, green leaves, a white serif font reads “dairy whiskey – update 05” / end id]
feels so weird to say this, but this is the last update for dairy whiskey – the litfic novel for messed up people (aka me and my pals)
the stats, the facts:
i finished writing this book on 28/06/2023 around 4:00 am
the first draft rests at 76,684 words
this book has ten chapters and ten vignettes
i am deeply sorry to dinah for all the pain i’ve caused her
i miss this book so much already that i cannot sit a minute without thinking about it
i am officially a wreck. a proud one regardless.
i also have a few goodies for y’all!
the dairy whiskey playlist
redeemed by ransom – the dairy whiskey chapbook
unsplash collection
if you think i’m obsessed with my book, yes, i am. i very much am i most likely will be for a long time (if not the rest of my life).
fun fact: i finished writing it a day before my twentieth birthday, so it’s officially the book i wrote through my late teens. gonna be super emo and say, “i grew up with this book!”
so, again, welcome to the final update for dairy whiskey, covering the last three chapters and vignettes.
excerpts and taglist under the cut.
disclaimer: this is an original work of fiction. plagiarism of any kind will not be tolerated.
TWs:
chapter eight – mahalath leannoth
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i’ve got two excerpts to share from this chapter. they’re super no-context, you know the drill.
The door to the room had been open, so I stumbled in, rosary in hand. Safety pins were scattered on the bed, some of them bent from pressure. The windowpane and the tiles next to it were covered in talcum powder. On the dressing table were two glasses of black coffee, its dry stain in rings on the bottom of it. It smelled of sweat and American body mist. One of the two pillow covers had been burned with an iron box, leaving an eye-shaped hole in the middle. Curly hair patterned the floor. Among those, like the promised silver lining in a dark cloud, I found it – a white strand of hair, thin, wavy, and membraned in cobwebs.
welcome back, grandma. bye again.
the next excerpt is another one of the thousand melodramatic emotional experiences that dinah goes through.
Nothing made noise. Every lone thing that had been alive and blooming in the village had died. Every land was barren, every river was flooding, every beautiful thing had turned to dust. Every face only a blur and every sound, a cry for help. Everything bleak and bleached, everything lost. Everything was gone and yet, the lives of everyone else remained the same; remained unchanged. Every family untouched but mine. All of them fortunate but mine. Everybody in their nests but me, a raven, flying about the village with a song in its head. It had come from nowhere, cutting through my silence, and it would stay forever as a muffled hum. A somber cry.
it actually runs a bit longer but yeah. that will be it for now.
vignette eight – lover’s vengeance
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no excerpts from this chapter. enjoy the silence.
chapter nine – womb stain
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teeny tiny excerpt from this one because i can never really shut up.
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Mist covered the plantation and the road to the house. It rested in like a chiffon skirt.
vignette nine – vortex of wrath
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we’re back with austin vignettes and pretty pretty prose for this pretty pretty boy.
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Austin has been both abyss and mirrorball, but today, he is reborn in dirt. He is human more than he is boy. More than an accumulation of lessons and silences forced into place. Today, he is free, his wings unclipped, his fire unleashed. Today, he is lover. His ribs are knives sharpened against the metallic ring of revenge. His hands, mapped with fury, make love with sin. Today, he is man more than he is son. He is tide. He beats against the shore. Today, he takes in a sweep.
this goes on for another half an hour (more or less) because austin is everybody’s favourite and he deserves the world.
chapter ten – wine hearts
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only one excerpt from this chapter too.
I woke up in the afternoon with pain piercing through my head. I sat up in bed, clutching chunks of hair in my fists. I buried my head in the pillow and groaned, but the pain remained. I got up and went to the bathroom. I turned the shower on and stood under it, the water, cold despite the sun, falling on my skin. My skin melted under it like a glacier, heat escaping every pore that had trapped it in. I lathered shampoo into my hair and soap onto my skin. I washed myself clean, brushed my teeth, and dried my hair with a towel. I wiped my body with another and changed into a fresh pair of clothes – an olive-green T-shirt and a creme long skirt.
also runs longer and talks about more things dinah does that are… ahem… unfortunately relevant to the (no) plot.
vignette ten – the beginning and the end
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so, this is a vignette i might actually take out. i like how the story ends without it and kinda feel like this doesn’t fit that well, but we’ll see about that next month when i sit down for edits.
until then, that’s it! that’s my book! big thanks to everyone who supported me throughout the process of writing it. hope y’all get to hold this in your hand real soon!
– ann.
general taglist (ask to be added or removed)
@shaonsim @heartfullkings @vnsmiles @dallonwrites @sienna-writes @violetpeso @flip-phones @rowansghost @ambidextrousarcher @zoe-louvre @writing-with-l @magic-is-something-we-create @femmeniism @frozenstillicide @wizardfromthesea @rose-bookblood @coffeeandcalligraphy @rodentwrites @saltwaterbells @snehithiye @at-thezenith
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jtl-fics · 1 year ago
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Some "Pretty Boy", for this week?
WIP Wednesday 2/28/24 (CLOSED) | Pretty Boy
Andrew rolls his eyes as if he had anything to do with Aaron agreeing to do the haunted house. Katelyn had been there when Renee had asked everyone to help with her charity haunted house. She was only asking them since it was unaffiliated with a church, just something she was doing as part of an outreach program she was working with this year.
Katelyn had looked at Aaron and said, "Oh it sounds like fun!" and Aaron had agreed without a single bit of critical thinking in his head. Andrew had at least considered it before asking if there were behind the scenes things he could work on.
Renee had agreed to that so he and Neil weren't actors like the rest of the Foxes were but did still need to dress up scary.
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inadreamerslibrary · 1 year ago
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july camp nanowrimo day 04 & 05
word count: 5,738 / 30,000
progress is still being made. i struggled a bit on day 4 tbh, the part i wrote was a section i'll definitely make some changes to when i revise. but today went much smoother.
i'm on chapter 18 and oh boy, this chapter is gonna be very painful to write. the protagonist hits quite a few low moments throughout the novel and one of them is in this chapter. i hate writing angst as much as i hate reading it. i hate writing my characters in pain or in despair. i feel really bad for putting them through terrible things even though ik it's all fictional and i'm the one making it up. but ik if i write it well, it will have a big emotional impact on the reader, which motivates me to push through it. i remember when i was writing part 1 of the novel last july camp nano and writing the protagonist hitting her first major low point was such a struggle. my pace really slowed down bc of it. my writing for the day stopping literally write before the bad thing happens that causes the protagonist's low to occur, so that'll be fun to get up and write tomorrow.
lately, i've been writing in the afternoon, but i might have to write in the evening tomorrow instead bc i'm going to a wedding! it's for a friend from my university. it's kinda crazy to think i now have friends that are getting married (they were a grad student who graduated last fall so they are a couple years older than me). i'll probably be getting back home pretty late, so i hope i have time to fit in my writing for the day.
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sakurachan7734 · 2 years ago
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Where are you?
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Chapter 4: we want you to be safe
Aristotle pov
So many weird things been happening first Jackson and its family disappears now Zoe and Zachary? Who is gonna be next? And I have been seeing a bunch of big black trucks around more often and they look like the trucks that followed me around throughout all the times I moved I should probably asked my parents about it
Aristotle: hay mom?
Florence: yes angel?
Aristotle: have you seen those weird trucks driving around?
Florence: yes and that’s why we are thinking about homeschooling both you and lavender again
Aristotle:…..do we need to move again?
Florence: hopefully not if they don’t find what they are looking for they will go away 
Aristotle: ok
The next day at school
Aristotle: hay Charlie can I ask you something?
Charlie: yes what is it?
Aristotle: have you noticed that ever since Jackson and its family disappeared? A bunch of weird black trucks been showing up and that Zachary and his sister disappeared? 
Charlie: yes I have in fact my parents and my little sister disappeared last week
Aristotle: do you know where they went?
Charlie: no I don’t
Aristotle: have you seen if your grandfather knows where they are?
Charlie: dude my grandpa is the f**king Scarlet king he probably has more important things to do
Aristotle: I know but maybe they are with your grandfather
Charlie: I doubt that but I will try
Aristotle: should we look for them?
Charlie: are you f**king insane?! Yes we should!!
Aristotle: ok meet me in the alleyway after school 
After school Charlie meets Aristotle in a alleyway
Charlie: where should we start looking?
Aristotle: you will look for Zachary I will look for Jackson
Charlie: ok
Aristotle and Charlie split up to go look for Zachary and Jackson
Charlie pov
Now if I was a human boy that loves stargazing and wears green where would I go? The park of course! Hopefully he is there and if he’s not I should probably see if he is at the mall hopefully he isn’t dead and hopefully I won’t get captured
No one pov
Charlie looked everywhere for Zachary and Jackson but he couldn’t find them anywhere Charlie has pretty much given up and he went to the alleyway that Aristotle said to meet them if they found them Charlie waited for about two hours, but but Aristotle never showed up so Charlie decided to go home
Meanwhile, with Aristotle 
Aristotle:* kicking the truck doors* what’s going on?! Where are you taking me?!
Agent Jake: will you quit kicking the door?!
Aristotle: not until you tell me where we are going!!
Agent claudette: you are being taken to a place where you won’t hurt anyone in humanity 
Aristotle: What are you talking about?!
Agent Jake: well let’s just say we know your parents
Aristotle: What?
Agent Jake: you and the rest of your family are a bunch of monsters!
Aristotle: what are you talking about?!
Agent claudette: well you know what your mother does right?
Aristotle: yes why?
Agent Jake: that’s why you’re mother is dangerous for humanity and I’m sure you do the same thing 
Aristotle: you have no clue you’re talking about
Agent claudette: so your mother doesn’t kidnap innocent people and turns them into zombies?
Aristotle: no
Agent Jake: well you’re parents are manipulative monsters so are you and your sister 
Aristotle: how did you know I had a sister?!
Agent Claudette: well, when you moved around 11 times, did your parents ever tell you who you were hiding from?
Aristotle: two questions, one how did you know I moved around 11 times and two no they didn’t
Agent Jake: well that was us we are are the people your parents tried hiding you and your sister from but it seems like they didn’t do a good job since we got you
Aristotle: What are you going to do to me?
Agent Jake: we are going to perform experiments on you
Aristotle: are you going to hurt me?
Agent Jake: if you don’t cooperate with these experiments yes we will 
They all arrive at the foundation 
05-1: so SCP 049 and SCP 035 also have kids?
Agent Jane: yes Agent Jake and agent claudette only caught the one
05-4: well where is the second one?
Agent Jane: we don’t know but we will keep looking
Meanwhile, with lavender and dyo 
Lavender: dad where is Aristotle?
Dyo: I don’t know they said that they will be out for a little bit after school
Lavender: but it’s been three hours
Florence: I knew this was gonna f***ing happen at some point 
Dyo: hay don’t automatically assume they got taken
Florence: but still, we should look for them! I want both lavender and Aristotle to be safe! 
Lavender: hopefully they didn’t run away 
End of chapter
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ashitshowforalot · 2 years ago
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so i finished speak now taylor’s version, i cried, thoughts and feelings under the cut
1. mine- bro why am i crying??? her vocals are so different bc she doesn’t have her twang 😭 she sounds so pretty though. ‘FOR THE FIRST TIME’
2. sparks fly- still makes me want to jump and dance around but her vocals are more present if that makes sense??? like it used to blend together for but now i mostly hear taylor. god her voice is so much mature now.
3. back to december- oh hello bell i didn’t realize you were there. okay i’m gonna cry again bc of this song. “I MISS YOUR TAN SKIN YOUR SWEET SMILE”
4. speak now- oh she sounds so pretty already. it’s still so dreamy in this song 😭 “ you wish it was me ☺️ don’t you😏” HER LAUGH OH MY GOD
5. dear john- bro she sounds like she’s gonna cry in the beginning of this, it’s gonna make me cry. oh god 32 year old taylor singing about what happened to 19 year old taylor. go the way i never realized she blames herself until after the bridge “i should’ve know” into “you should’ve know” because he was older HE should’ve known.
6. mean- okay banjo!!! she’s still so cute, i love you mean, forever in my heart 💜 okay tiny ity bitty twang in this song, she’s having fun and i love it.
7. the story of us- okay the guitar is leaning more pop ish than the alternative kind it was leaning towards in the original, not bad i can still bop to it but i’ll miss the guitar riffs, you can hear her little smile on “next chapter”. “LIKE ITS KILLING ME YEAH” aidhsjkshdj “the end” yes taylor
8. never grow up- oh okay, yeah i’m gonna cry. i cried too much to type anything
9. enchanted- oh she’s still enchanting lol, so dreamy oh my god. i will be screaming this in the car actually. oh it actually absolutely amazing.
10. better than revenge-oh i love her already, she did change the lyrics 😔, it slaps but i will hold a candle for the original lyrics because they are so fun to scream misogamy be damn. other than the lyric change she’s absolutely amazing, HER RIFF OH MY GOD, the mocking lyrics, i love them
11. innocent-how hard was this to re record this knowing that this person would continue to hurt her after she had forgiven them. “32 and still growing up now” brb gotta go scream.
12. haunted-YES OH MY GOD THE DRAMA OF THIS SONG, ooo the echoing is fun, the breaths ahkfsh i love all the little things about this album. genuinely one of my favorites from the original and tv holds the same place in my heart. her vocals give me life
13. last kiss- oh god that first beat still makes my heart drop. okay i am going to cry again. tiny twang again. we lost shaky breathe but the song is still so sad even without it.
14. long live-my favorite song to date actually and i might cry. it’s still so good 😭 god and to know so many people who knew her when she wrote this still know her and support her. thinking about her guitarist has been with her for so long and this song is for the people like him and for us and i just i-
15. ours- ours is such a cutesy song, i love her she deserves a kiss on the forehead. kicking my feet and giggling. her laugh again 😭
16. superman-i love you superman you are such a fun song people forget about you, got me dancing and having a fun time, ignoring that it’s probably about j**n m****r.
17. electric touch-our first vault song!!!! oh wow she’s different, she’s so speak now though, oh fallout boy is so fun on this song, taylor has now claimed the time 8:05 lol, i hear the fob influences but the song is still so taylor
18. when emma falls in love- ooo piano she’s fun, oh taylor girl what emma are we referring to babes, when emma falls in love is cute though, not my favorite vault song though, not a skip let’s be clear
19. i can see you- oh, she’s fun, she different, oh my god who are you???? oh she’s rising in ranks so fast, oh my god i love her so much “ i could you up against the wall with me” TAYLOR GIRL, i am scandalized
20. castles crumbling- hi hayley i love you, taylor girl are you okay? nothing new 1.0?, castles crumbling was not what i thought it was, i think i might cry actually, don’t worry hayley got a verse lol, anyways taylor girl are you okay??? anti hero 1.0? bro???
21. foolish one- oh okay happy beat sad lyrics, taylor said take your anti delulu pills or this song is about you, “how could i not see the signs” taylor???? babes what happened??? “he just wasn’t the one” oh okay that hurt a little a lot
22. timeless- oh good old taylor and a guitar, oh no taylor sweetheart i don’t think you would’ve been timeless, why does this hurt, oh this feels so bittersweet
anyways favorite base 16 song is long love and haunted
favorite vault song is i can see you
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yuexuan · 1 year ago
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[Review]人间试炼游戏
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Title: 人间试炼游戏 The Trial Game of Life
Author: 弄清风
Length: 303 chapters + 4 extras
Tag: Unlimited flow, supernatural, fantasy
Summary [taken from novel updates]:
“Player K27216, Tang Cuo, at 23:05 on April 1, 2019 of the Solar Calendar, confirmed dead.”
“Failed to clear the Trial Game of Life.”
“Survival duration: 24 years, 4 hours, 8 minutes and 6 seconds, Rating: A, Initial character score: -5.”
If death is just the beginning…
If survival is a game…
Are you ready for it?
Novel | Novel[translated]
Comments **Contains spoilers**:
Hoo boy, this is one long novel - not just by the sheer number of chapters, but how long each chapter is. The basic premise is that life is a game and once someone dies, they will enter into the Yong Ye (tln: Forever Night) City. In order to enter into the reincarnation cycle, they would need to survive different quests. Tang Cuo happened to be a private detective who died and entered Yong Ye City. There, he met his previous military instructor Jin Cheng. 
This is one of those novels where I liked the first part more than the second part. So let’s focus on what I like about the initial half of the story first:
The main characters have more personality: Jin Cheng (yes, I admit I read his name wrong for a long time, thinking it was Zhan Cheng 斩丞 instead of Jin Cheng 靳承...) has a lot of side quirks. For example: wearing a clown make-up and applying cosmetic masks at night to ensure that his face looked good. Despite this goofiness, he is one of the top-tier players residing in the A Zone. The other main character, Tang Cuo, is the opposite: he is very cool and collected, and even dares to threaten Jin Cheng, in spite of his low stat. He is also resourceful, going so far as to use his life report book as a weapon. 
As such, there are a lot of comedic factors and room for silliness by the two main characters. At one point Jin Cheng even lured out the murderer Meng Yufei by provoking the latter and reciting his embarrassing life stories from his report book.
There is also a lot more at stake initially. Tang Cuo starts out with very low stats and every action could easily threaten his life. This poses interesting challenges where he has to fight carefully while keeping tabs of his life points.  
A sense of mystery pervades the first half of the book regarding what caused Tang Cuo's death and the relationship between the two characters back when they were alive. Clues are given throughout the start of the novel (e.g. the mysterious person who sends simple gifts to Tang Cuo) and keeps me engaged and constantly guessing.
A lot of the side characters are also pretty fun, such as the lucky Ouhuang Yu Yiyi and Chi Yan, Leng Mou - the magician who keeps on getting the short end of the stick when it came to the roles he played in various quests - and a good number of other side characters.  
Also kudos to the author for being able to work with so many characters and parallel storylines, while still keeping the plot pretty coherent!
Now, to the latter half of the book…It is never a good thing when I start asking myself when the story will end because I struggled to plough through the story:
For one, the world mechanics are...so-so. Don't get me wrong, there are some novelties: I do like the idea that players have to go through multiple scenarios which share an overarching storyline. I also like the idea of having rare musical sheets items that enable the owner to make rules within the City. However, the way that the worldbuilding is presented or paced are not very intriguing. For example, Tang Cuo and Jin Cheng have to complete this fantasy storyline with 12 sub-quests. The first few sub-quests drag on for quite awhile without substantial addition to the main storyline, whereas a few of the later sub-quests are glossed over (which begs the question of why write these sub-quests if they are unimportant). Likewise, the mechanics regarding the restrictions and extent of power that musical sheet owners are granted remain pretty vague - e.g. we don’t know how many rules the owner can make.
Also, despite there being a larger goal of reincarnating, there seems to be a lack of mention regarding what happens after the players reincarnated. Seemingly halfway through, players simply forgot about reincarnation in lieu of focusing on survival.
For all the mysteries and build-up regarding the main characters’ and side characters’ histories, a lot of the reveals are anti-climatic. Tang Cuo’s death was ruled off as him trying to complete the mission that Jin Cheng failed at, but no details regarding the mission were given. Likewise, teasers were given about how one of the minor antagonists (Black Hat) was setting up a grand scheme, when in fact, he only wanted to avenge his family. Basically, the payoff isn't satisfactory relative to the build-up. 
On the note of having so many side characters, the result is that many of the characters (even the main ones!) lacked strong personalities. There are even several characters with repeated personalities or character traits. 
Overall I’ll say this is a mediocre unlimited flow story and would suggest reading only if you really lack other unlimited flow novels to read.
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enzenwriting · 2 years ago
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Summary: Joining an already debuted group, you find yourself at the centre of attention, controversy and a series of unfortunate chaotic events every time a certain pup boy is in the sight. But Jake Sim can’t seem to stop following you?!
Pairing: Idol Enhypen!Jake (Sim Jaeyun) x Idol fem! reader (feat. enhypen+ le sserafim + other idols)
Tags: stranger to lovers, enemies to friends, friends to lover, kinda slowburn, jealousy, idols!, slice of life, angst, fluff
Warning: probably alot of cursing, dry humour, stalking in later chapter, alot of typo and no proof read writing.
Status: new- ongoing
upload schedule: once/twice a week during weekend!
taglist: open!
Disclaimer: Please remember that this is a work of fiction! Any idols (and activity) written and mentioned in this story/AU is not to be associated with the real idols. All images used in this AU are not mine! All images are accessed through the internet (google, pinterest, instagram, twitter and tumblr!)
Author’s note / AN: i kinda really enjoyed writing adore you! ;(idolxidol trope simp) so I’m back with another!🫶
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00 y/n home wrecker / ain’t no dispatch
01 criminal
02 welcome y/n!
03 for shit and giggles
04 fearless gang
05 koala guy?
06 this is mcdonald drive thru
07 yeri-fication
08 stand up! sit down!
09 early downfall
10 JAKE OUT
11 omg by newjeans
12 just unknow it duh
13 always bball time
14 maybe he is the problem
15 delusion and silly thoughts
16 oovoo javer sim jake 1.6k words!
16.5 bark lee
17 divorce lawyer 4 u
18 two pretty best friend
19 a runner a track star
19.5 n in nct stands for nosy
20 🛫Australia 🛬Canada
21 it’s been 21 years
22 important question
23 gaslight manboss mainslayer
24 adopt! don’t shop!
25 chivalry my ass
26 hey dumb dumb
27 end game kinda meh
28 jungwon (derogatory)
29 withdrawal
30 fuck Jim!
31 big girl duties
32 JAIL (literally )
33 crazy ahhh behaviour
34 Jake’s drip
TBA
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