#The second draft

[cjjasp]

Self-editing – a 3-step process #writing

Many people in my online community have asked for tips on self-editing. I don’t recommend it, as most people don’t have the tenacity to do a proper job of it. However, it can be done, so we’re revisiting a post from April of 2024 on effective self-editing. I hope this answers some questions! As an editor, I saw every kind of mistake you can imagine, and before that, as a writer, I made them all.…

[chloesimaginationthings]

"They call it the MANGLE" - FNAF 2 phone guy

[shouyuus]

+18, mdni, rmbr when i was caleb-pilled for a hot sec

caleb would definitely be one whiney fucker though like he might be able to hold it together for a while when he first pushes into you, but after a few minutes, he'd get whimpery -- make these abortive little noises at the back of his throat every time he thrusts in, and you can tell he's trying to stop himself because god, it's so embarrassing, how he can't stop whining, but you just feel so good, and he's thought about it for so long -- wanted this for so long that he can't help himself -- makes the most debauched noises, swears under his breath, by your ear, groaning and grunting, whispering to you about how good you feel and how long he's wanted to do this, it's the only thing he's been able to think about.

"f-feels so good -- ngh --" he'd murmur, keening a bit as you clench down around him; he nearly blacks out thinking of your cunt milking his cock for all its worth.

"caleb -- caleb --" it's all you can do to manage out his name.

he buries his face in the crook of your neck, wonders how long it's been -- he really hopes that it hasn't only been a few minutes, even though to him it's felt like hours, time compressing in on itself, heat and slick and the lewd smack of skin on skin.

"sorry, sorry -- fuck -- m'gonna cum --" he hisses out, whining high in he back of his throat as he twitches inside you, spilling inside you in great hot spurts. you moan, lashes fluttering at the feel of him painting your walls.

"don't... don't apologize..." you pant, reaching up to comb a hand through his hair. he lets out a tiny chuckle, pulling back with flushed cheeks and a helpless smile.

"i just... couldn't help myself..."

you laugh, nodding, "yeah.... yeah i know."

[sithlordemma]

The shit OP has to deal with, I’m telling you.

[dykekarkat]

kevin and andrew as buzzfeed unsolved (kevin ryan andrew shane) and they go to a house that everyone swears is haunted by a ghost but its just neil who only owns one outfit and is squatting. andrew punches him on camera and thats how they find out its not a ghost but a real person #meetcute

[syrospit]

my husband and our rabbit daughter

[riuuneon]

a perfectly normal comic?

so anyways what if we put him in a timeloop ^_^

[yoongikook]

random gifs from my old drafts (c. Oct 2020)

[pcktknife]

*walks out of a closet clothes disheveled covered in kiss marks* "heh, you should see the other guy" but no other guy comes out and when you check the closet theres just a regular tv with lipstick applied where the theoretical mouth would be

[callibrin]

Part 1 - Part 2 (end)

Part 1 - Part 2 (end) ────────────

「 Part 1 of MakhesaAU comic 」

I wanted to show an interaction between Narinder and Makhesa to drop some headcanons abt how their worlds intersect and how it relates to Makhesa's Curse. ────────────────

BTW:

First, I mirrored the last frame so that you guys wouldn't break your necks :p

Second, I also wanted to draw your attention to the fact that the last frame is a reference to the Ritual of Resurrection icon. Like, it perfectly matches Makhesa's palette, WHY WOULDN'T I...

🔮About Makhesa

[sakasakiii]

im a bit rusty when it comes to rendering comics but since i missed out on the yearly comic offering in 2024, here is an old draft from 2021 that has been sitting as a wip in my folder for 4 years ajsddhj

bonus: what master smiths do in their free time

[cjjasp]

The Second Draft: Logic, Objectives, and Circumstances #writing

We are still working on the second draft of our manuscript. We have searched for our code words and examined our character arcs for agency and consequences. The Second Draft: Decoding My Mental Shorthand #writing The Second Draft: agency and consequences #writing Today, we’re looking at the arc of the plot.  This is a good opportunity to open a new document and answer a few questions about your…

[jaggybot3000]

post juno incident

[limerlove]

farmhand!abby who is a sweet girlfriend, loves you more than life itself, treats as you such. wines and dines you, makes sure you’re taken care at any and all times. delicate, kind words of affirmation, the time she sets aside for you even when the muscles in her body from being overworked as a farmhand ache. abby pays attention to the small little trinkets you have your eye on would be wrapped up by the next week, waiting for your expectant eyes to light up, sending her heart into overdrive.

farmhand!abby who loves to give, she’s always been a giver. she loves seing her lover squirm, hips bucking, and curses leave your lips each time she teases. abby never quite takes it easy on you even so. she loves eating pussy like it’s her fucking job. those broad shoulders wedged between your thighs and strong, calloused hands pining your stomach as your hips attempt to buck into her mouth. you’re whimpering, whining for more like a brat. well…most of the time, but tonight you chose to be quiet. a little game of cat and mouse. you do it for the outcome. smirking at abby, the overachiever. even if you’re soaking through the cotton sheets, she needs you to be loud. this simply will not fucking do.

she makes a mess of you, spitting sloppily along your swollen lips, slapping your clit as she pinched her clit between her fingertips. “you sure you’re stuck on being quiet sweetheart? m’not sure you have it in you.” abby slaps your cunt again, “to defy me.”

you whimper moan out her name, more like cursing it, but to her it’s all the same. “see? knew you couldn’t last long.” she slaps your weeping cunt with another hit, jolting your body up on her bed.

she’s musky, smells like a hard earned day, but you want to inhale every scent she has to offer. blonde, baby hairs sticking to her face as she pushes your thighs up, knees nearly hitting the headboard. she cups your pussy, thumb circling a hole that’s never quite been explored by her or anyone for that matter.

“a-abs, shit, we’ve only talking about this once.” abby pauses, inquiring a soft question. “do you not want to?” you nod, a delicate yes comes out when she spits on your cunt. again.

“now, be my sweet baby and let me stretch this pretty ass of yours, yeah? how’s that sound?”

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[somegrumpynerd]

Truce is going well

[apple-cores]

its not enough. i gotta dissect froggy on a cold metal table until i figure out why i still dont like how i draw him yet

THIS though, no notes