#also seen and understood LMFAOOOO

[moe-broey]

both book 4 and 7 are full of Artistic Choices that Hate You

LITERALLY THEY HATE ME PERSONALLY‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️😭😭😭😭😭

Yoshiku. Yoshiku. I just want to Talk. Please.

Godddd it's been a long time since I've drawn anything Book 7 related, but. I almost -- no. Wholeheartedly. I want to say Book 4 is worse. ONLY because there are some really specific things happening artistically that for SOME reason. Just feel fundamentally incompatible with me and what I DO. As an artist. Like. BEYOND all the common criticisms of Yoshiku's work, generally/broadly speaking.

Like. I don't even know exactly what it is. To pinpoint it. But the color palettes. Fairy themes in general. Hhhhrghhhhhh IT'S TOO........... VAGUE??????? I WANT. MORE DIRECTION. Something more natural!!! More nature-y!!!!! LIKE I'll admit, my designs have a bit of vagueness here and there too... Miribilis has the strongest design I think, in that you can tell, at least her bloomers, are a specific kind of flower petal. I want more of THAT. And one step further, if it were MY CHOICE. I would make the wings actual butterfly/moth wings....... which is an angle I was taking w Moe's resplendent idea. Taking more inspo from real life rather than the magic-y aesthetics of the dream realm.

And the color palettes..... I feel like I have gained perspective, Doing This. They pallettes actually do work. It's just placement, maybe? HOW you apply it? And realizing that yeah, okay. Plumeria and Triandra DO have distinct pallettes, actually. Plume is more red/magenta, Triandra is more blue/purple (BUT! Base outfit is dominantly black. Which is fine. But that draws your eyes to her reddish pink hair. Which is the same sort of color Plume's dress is/her dominant color. And w the blue accents on Plumeria, and blue not being As Strong on Triandra in comparison, it just. It blends together.)

Also forever and always. WHY are BOTH Peony and Mirabilis' eyes purple........... YOU HAVE FOUR CHARACTERS!!!??! YOU COULD PICK. ANOTHER COLOR. Honestlyyyyy when I get to my Peony redesign, fuck it. I'm giving her blue/green eyes. Aquamarine, kinda. Because the overlap THERE would Make Sense. The blue tone ties back to Triandra, and having it be sliiiightly green leaning would make it like, Oh. Oh. Oh, if you weren't looking so closely, if they were styled similarly. It really WOULD be easy to mistake her for Sharena. Same effect as the orange gradient vs Sharena's pink gradient.

Also just. For the love of god. He needs shape language to live. I will DIE without shape language. And I GUESS the outfits Are Shaped........... they are. Shaped. I will stand by base Mirabilis' dress is cute, and I think Peony has some nice shapes. But. Please............ DIRECTION. THEMES. YOU NEED. DIRECTIONS AND THEME.S. PLEASE‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️

Sorry. I promise I'm not being a hater serious style, I'm genuinely just whining and airing out my artistic woes LMFAOOOO 😭😭😭🥲🥲🥲 I do feel. Uniquely Cursed. By Book 4.