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Fandom Problem #5850:
People asking for advice for writing stories or making characters of their own, and gets loads of comments all like "it doesn't matter!! it doesn't have to be good!! all that matters is that YOU like it and you're having fun!!! make that OC with rainbow hair and heterochromia and superpowers!! :) :) :)" Like I know this is all in response to the past trend of roasting kids' "cringy" OCs or "mary sue" fanfiction, and yeah, that wasn't good, by no means should you bully kids (or, you know, anyone) 'cause you don't like their characters or stories that they made for themselves for fun. But, when someone is interested in writing things to be enjoyed by a larger audience than just themselves and their friends, and is genuinely searching for real advice to do so, and they just get peppered with "it doesn't matter :) as long as you like it! :)" that's like, not very helpful at all. Or instead of actual good writing advice, the best people can give is "here is a list Problematic Tropes to avoid, as long as you don't touch these that's all you need to know about writing! :)"
There's a lot of ways to improve writing or character that doesn't need to sacrifice self-indulgent fun, so you don't need to worry about crushing someone's dreams by just offering decent advice.
(To be clear I'm talking about people who ASKED for advice, not people giving unwanted "critique" on something they made for fun and shared.)
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Title: Ride With Me (part twenty one) Fandom: Supernatural Timeline: 2008 Pairing: Dean x Reader Word count: ±5850 words Summary series: Y/N is a talented horse rider who is on her way to become a professional. In order to convince her father that she deserves the loan needed to start her own farm, she goes to Arizona for six months, to intern at a ranch owned by Bobby and Ellen Singer. Her future is set out, but then she meets a handsome horseman, who goes by the name of Dean Winchester. A heartwarming series about a cowboy who falls for the girl, letting go of the past and the importance of family. Summary part twenty one: It’s Dean’s turn to make an entrance in the main arena. The rides lead to an interesting business proposal by a new client, but brings a lot of doubt too. Warnings series: NSFW, 18+ only! Fluff, angst, eventually smut. Swearing, smoking, alcohol intoxication, alcohol abuse. Mutual pining, heartbreak. Crying, nightmares, childhood trauma. Description of animal abuse, domestic violence, mentions of addiction. Financial problems, stress, mental breakdown. Description of blood and injury, hospital scenes, character death, grief. Music: Watching From A Distance - David Ramirez (opening scene) Follow ‘Kate Huntington’s Ride With Me playlist’ on Spotify! Author’s note: Prepare for cuteness and a bit of angst! Thank you @atc74, @manawhaat and @winchest09 for helping me. Also a special thanks to @jules-1999, who has offered me her knowledge about rodeo events like these, and @squirrelnotsam, who knows Arizona like the back of her hand.
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Saturday morning has started early for the crew of the Gold Canyon Ranch. Before the crack of dawn Benny has mucked out the stables and fed the horses, making sure they had time to digest their pellets before the show starts. Together with Jo, Y/N has hand-walked the animals who are competing today, letting them stretch their legs and graze a bit. She took extra time for Meadow, who always seems to need a moment to adjust to new surroundings. The mare was fresh today, the brisk air only fueling her feisty temper. Her owner couldn’t help but snigger when she lifted her tail and started jogging next to her instead of just strolling along, showing off to anyone who would look at her.
It’s 8 AM when Dean puts his foot in the stirrup of the saddle, swinging his right leg over the back of the Bon Jovi, the light catching the fringe of his chaps. He pulls his hat a little tighter on his head once he’s seated, while the well-behaved stallion waits patiently for his rider to give him an aid, which he does, after adjusting the length of his reins.
With the sun only just peeking from behind the horizon, rays break through the leaves of the trees next to the warmup area, adding to the still peaceful surroundings. The commentator isn’t blaring through the speakers yet, the ring isn’t full of other riders trying to find a spot to train without running into each other. It’s the calm before the storm, a bit of peace and quiet both horse and human appreciate. No distractions, no sensory overload for the inexperienced stallion. It’s the perfect way to introduce him to the element of competition.
Y/N has just finished filling up the water buckets in the stables and rests her arms on the fence of the small arena. She watches Dean slowly start up the beautiful palomino, its coat seemingly made from gold in the morning light. Her boyfriend is wearing clean dark jeans and a navy button up, a black Stetson to match his show outfit. Never will she get tired of watching that man ride, but dressed like he is now, she can’t take her eyes off him. Y/N sighs deeply, swooning at the sight. She really did land the most handsome cowboy in Arizona, didn’t she?
The head wrangler seems composed as ever, not breaking a sweat over having to ride into the ring in thirty minutes, something that she admires and envies all at the same time. She wishes she could feel relaxed right before a test, instead of being the nervous wreck that she usually is. Meadow will not make her entry until later this evening and already Y/N dodged breakfast, well aware that she won’t be able to swallow a bite, stage fright blocking her throat. Just thinking about the premiere of her freestyle makes it slightly harder to breathe, but Dean takes that away when he rides past, breaking his concentration for a second and shooting her a wink and a soft smile. She chuckles as they keep a hold of each other’s gaze for a few seconds as his horse walks by. God, she wishes she has his confidence.
Other competitors join Dean and Bon Jovi in the warm up area, but the stallion only murmurs at a mare once, its rider gently yet strictly reminding him to keep his head in the game. Before they know it, the same voice that did the commentary on last night’s barrel race competition sounds from the amplifiers.
“Good mornin’, folks! It’s another beautiful day here at the Flagstaff Horsefair. We’re getting ready for the first class of the day, the Standlee Forage Reining Competition for four year olds. Highest overall score wins five bags of high quality horse food.”
The commentator continues to promote the sponsors of the event, Dean giving his horse a little scratch on the shoulder when he tenses slightly as the loud voice sounds from the speakers. Aware that it will soon be their turn, the rider allows himself to enjoy the atmosphere as he casts his gaze over the other competitors. He isn’t too worried about the fixture, confident in his own skills and those of his horse.
“Dean Winchester, two minutes!” A steward announces, looking down at his clipboard to double check the line up. The cowboy nods in acknowledgement, directing his gaze to Y/N as he waits for her to catch up. He watches as she puts down the grooming bag next to her on the sandy arena footing, attending to the bell boots that Bon Jovi is still wearing. She unbuckles the leather clasps, putting the leg protection away. “Would you like some water?” she offers. He shakes his head, casually, taking in the arena. “Nah, I’m good.”
Y/N looks up at him, trying to read what he is feeling. To her, it is strange how he doesn’t seem nervous. He’s relaxed, collected; reminding her of the still waters at Canyon Lake, where they swam together for the first time on the trail that changed everything. It is as if he can’t register the pressure that should be resting on his shoulders. Maybe he truly believed he is that good. “Break a leg,” she speaks, fondly. “Don’t wish that upon me, Yankee,” Dean chuckles. “Kinda need them to do my job.” She laughs and pats him lovingly on his denim clad thigh. “I don’t know how you can be so calm.” “Well, I have my good luck charm with me.” He lays his hand over hers, rubbing his thumb over her knuckles. “C’mere.” She steps closer to Bon Jovi, tiptoeing to reach up while Dean leans over to level with her. His lips brush over hers softly, his nose nuzzling hers in a sweet gesture. She smiles into the gentle kiss. “Go get’em, cowboy.”
The wrangler straightens himself in the saddle, while his girlfriend picks up the groom bag and steps back. He guides his horse into the tunnel under the bleachers towards the arena, concentrating on the gates in front of him, waiting for them to open. The reigns feel smooth between his fingers as he drowns out the noise around him. With his free hand, he encouragingly strokes the side of Bon Jovi’s neck, his pearly white manes contrasting beautifully against his flaxen coat. He has grown accustomed to these kinds of events, his nerves not bothering him anymore. He finds solace in his work, seeing it more as fun than as a chore. He enjoys the challenge the youngsters bring him, from the initial moment of putting on a halter, to getting in a saddle, to showing them all for the very first time. In less than a year, the horses go through such growth, and it’s always a pleasure to be a part of their journey.
“First competitor of the day is Dean Winchester, riding Bon Jovi, a stallion by Renegade. This horse is bred by Victor Hendriksen and owned by the Gold Canyon Ranch in Phoenix, Arizona.”
Y/N watches as the palomino calmly comes through the gate, not batting an eye at his new and impressive surroundings. Submissive and willing, the stallion responds to his rider’s aids when he’s asked to halt. To witness how trustful each and every horse is with the trainer, surfaces some kind of gratification inside of her. The way Dean schools the animals isn’t based on authority or rank, but much more about collaboration and respect. It’s something she admires about him from the get go.
Dean leads Bon Jovi through a precise pattern of figures, spins and stops. Reining is all about the athletic abilities of the horse, and the rider controlling every movement. The horse demonstrates attitude and willingness, while the signals given by the rider are nearly imperceptible. The run is evaluated by a panel of three judges, who mark each pattern individually. In this youngster class, speed isn’t key yet, but correctness is. Every stride must look effortless and relaxed, as if the animal and rider have become one. That’s exactly what is on display in the arena right now.
With a smile of adoration across her face, Y/N leans her forearms on the steel fence, watching the head wrangler. A small crowd that got up at the crack of dawn have occupied the first rows on the bleachers and by the fence, encouraging shouts and whistles rallying the first competitor on. The young horse is so fixed on his rider, that he doesn’t even pick up on the sounds. Bon Jovi isn’t fast in the spins yet, but that’s okay, because his footwork is close to perfect. After three well executed sliding stops, Dean gives the palomino the signal to back up, his spur not even touching the horse’s flank. Submissively, he reverses until his rider drops the reins and rewards the stallion, who blows out a purr through his nose, looking up at the stands curiously when they applaud the performance, much like the commentator.
“Well, if that ain’t setting the bar, I don’t know what is. What a solid ride from Dean Winchester and Bon Jovi!”
While Dean exits the arena, he searches the people along the fence and on the bleachers. He’s looking for Bobby, who he finds on the sidelines. His uncle holds his gaze and gives the head wrangler a nod, telling him so much without using actual words. They haven’t spoken about the elephant in the room yet, today’s pace being far too high to squeeze in the awkward conversation, and so both men have decided for themselves to let it rest. Besides, they might have sold a number of horses yesterday, that doesn’t mean they can lean back now.
The cowboy leads his horse back to the warm up ring, meeting his girlfriend half way. “Good run!” she compliments, taking Bon Jovi’s reins after Dean swings his right leg over the saddle and dismounts. She shoves the water bottle in his hand this time, knowing if she had asked, he would have declined anyway. “I had a little wobble in the second roll back, but yeah, the rest was good.” He twists off the cap and takes a swig, thirstier than he likes to admit.
Since Dean is competing two separate horses in the same class, he’s both first and last to enter the main arena. It’s going to be a race against the clock, and he looks around the warm-up area in search for his next four-legged dance partner. �� “Where’s Jo? Ringo is up in thirty minutes.” “Better get off your high horse, Mister, otherwise this is the last time I’ll tack up for you,” his cousin replies snappily, appearing from behind with a bay gelding named Ringo Starr in tow. Dean is about to counter her, but he bites his tongue, knowing she’s not kidding and will never do him a favor again if he gives her attitude. And so he mutters a ‘thanks’ under his breath when he takes the Quarterhorse from her.
As swiftly as he got down from Bon Jovi, he now mounts Ringo, the next four year old for him to compete. As he does so, his score is announced over the speakers, but he can’t quite make out the numbers. When he glances at the scoreboard, he’s pleasantly surprised. “218.5 points!” Y/N cries out, delighted. “That’s fantastic!” With a content smirk adorning his features, Dean nods satisfied; that is indeed a good score. Good enough to put Bon Jovi on the podium. Good enough to ask a high price when the buyers come calling. He doesn’t have time to settle on a high cloud, though; he needs to ready Ringo for his run.
Y/N hoists the groombag on her shoulder and takes the kind palomino stallion to exit the warm-up arena. This is her job after all, she might be dating her supervisor, she’s still the intern. They made a deal when she arrived at the ranch that Dean would not treat her differently, so she intends to do the work she’s come here to do. Jo, however, seems to have a different idea, and nudges her. “I’ll take Jovi. You go cheer on your John Wayne.” The blonde cowgirl winks at her friend, taking over the load.
She chuckles, handing the petite blonde the horse. Grateful to be able to see more of Dean’s horsemanship in action, she finds a spot by the fence. The sun steadily rises, casting out what was left of the night’s coolness, the light radiating down on her much warmer and brighter. Wishing she had brought a hat, the cowgirl takes off her jacket and puts it away in the groombag. She watches her boyfriend warm up Ringo, who seems a little bit more nervous, now that the ring is more crowded. His rider does a good job reassuring the young animal, though, giving the bay gelding some light exercises to keep his mind of the commotion around him, rewarding the Quarter every time he shows a sign of relaxation.
“Beautiful day to be buying horses, isn’t it, darling?” Y/N startles at the sudden gruff voice, snapping her head to where the sound came from. The supposedly kind words to start conversation are pronounced with a English accent, by a stranger dressed in black. The rather short man who she guesses would be somewhere in his fifties leans on the steel rail, his fingers laced together while he watches riders in the arena.
“Y - yeah, I suppose so,” Y/N stammers, unsure how to respond. “My apologies, where are my manners.” The man turns to her and offers his hand. “The name is Fergus. Fergus MacLeod.” The cowgirl frowns at his introduction. She has heard of him, but has never met the owner of the MacLeod Studfarms in person. “Y/N Y/L/N,” she returns, slightly hesitant. “Oh, I know who you are. I’m an admirer of your work. You’re quite the talent,” the Englishman admits. “That run at the State Championships was spectacular.”
Slightly creeped out, but not trusting her instincts entirely, she stays quiet for a moment. This is a man of great influence in the business, so she does want to hear what he has to say. “You saw me ride?” she replies. He nods, an amused smirk resting on his thin lips. “I did indeed, love. Talking about talent, that horse is something else as well. Meadowsweet, is her name, isn’t it?” “Yeah...” Y/N returns, somewhat suspicious. “Tell me; are you the owner of that lovely mare? Or are there parents and sponsors involved?”
Her stance becomes a bit more defensive, not just because of the rapid questions that are fired at her, no matter how charming this gentleman is trying to be. No, it’s his assumption that she’s too young to own such a horse that gets to her. “I am the owner, as a matter of fact,” she states, a new found strength in her voice. “Good to know I am talking to the proper person then.” Her company chuckles, apparently pleased by her feisty counter. “Because I have a proposition for you.” Before he can make her an offer, Y/N intervenes. “Meadow isn’t changing owners, if that’s where you’re headed, Mr. MacLeod.” Fergus takes her in, narrowing his eyes slightly, but the pleased little smile remains. “I can make it worth your while.” “I believe you can, but no matter your offer; she’s not for sale,” the cowgirl makes herself clear, a sternness in her voice that should tone the horse trader down. It doesn’t. Instead he chuckles dryly and takes a little booklet out of the inner pocket of his black coat; it’s a cheque book. Not taking no for an answer, he pulls out a pen and writes down his signature. “Everything is for sale, love. All one has to do is pay the right price,” he says, wisely.
Fergus MacLeod rips off the sheet of paper, handing her the cheque. Not wanting to be downright rude, she takes it, staring at the empty line; it’s blank. “You may write down whatever number you seem fit. It’s up to you,” the Brit elaborates. “Now that I’ve got your attention, would you happen to know where I can find Bobby Singer? I would like to have a little chat with my old friend.” “He’s by the main arena.” She points in the direction of the entrance. “Wonderful,” he quips. “It was a pleasure meeting you, darling.”
A shiver runs down her spine as MacLeod walks away to find her boss. She’s highly aware that he is a very influential and important person in the industry, but he has got some nerve. Y/N might look like an innocent and timid girl, but there is no way in hell that she would ever give up Meadow, no matter how large the figure.
She stares at the cheque, crumbling it in her hand before she stuffs it in her pocket, angrily. She has never met someone as brazen as Fergus Macleod at a show before, and she has been to enough to know. But she doesn’t want to waste time and think about the confrontation now. The cowgirl would much rather focus on her wrangler boyfriend who is wowing the judges.
Dean’s run with Ringo Starr is another great one, and with him being the last contestant of the class, the rankings are decided the moment the score comes in. With 215.5 points, he secures the third place, behind another rider and Bon Jovi, who has held on to the lead. An impressive result, one that he knows his uncle is going to be very pleased with.
When the Dean exits the arena, he is met by his girlfriend, who is smiling widely. “You nailed it!” she chirps with enthusiasm. “They did good,” Dean says, rustling Ringo’s black mane, more than satisfied with the performance of both young horses, but not taking the compliment upon himself.
The cowboy gets down from the saddle, noticing that the gelding is tired from all the first impressions and new sensories that come with the first show. Ringo’s coat is damp, a shade darker because of the perspiration; he gave it his all. Intending to hand-walk the horse back to the stables to shower the animal and give him his hay, he strolls to exit the warm-up area, but Bobby stops him. “Dean?” his uncle calls out, beckoning him to come over. Y/N glances up, following Mr. Singer’s voice. Noticing that Fergus MacLeod has found who he claims to be his ‘old friend’, her face falls slightly. She wonders what the Englishman would want, and why Dean has been invited into the conversation. Questionly, she looks back at her boyfriend and takes over Ringo from him, reckoning she should leave since it’s none of her business what will be discussed, but the man in black has different ideas. “Y/N, do join us, and bring the horse as well, love.” The hair on the back of Dean’s neck rises; what did he just call her? Unable to prevent his jaw from clenching, he steps towards the two ranch owners, trying to keep his cool. Who the hell is this dickhead? “That’s Fergus MacLeod,” Y/N whispers, as if she just read his mind. “He’s the founder of some of the largest stud farms in the country and even has stables in Europe. Owns at least two dozen licenced stallions.” The wrangler nods in acknowledgement. Great, some snobby bigshot. Very much aware that this new face might have something to offer Bobby, he keeps his mouth shut.
“Ah, the one and only Dean Winchester,” Fergus’ grins mischievously. “Nice work there in the ring. Your uncle here told me it’s the first time those two horses are competing.” “That’s right,” the cowboy confirms. “Macleod is the name. Pleasure to meet ya.” The Brit extends his hand, which Dean shakes a little firmer than normal. He’s not even sure what he’s trying to accomplish with the display of his own physical strength.
“Fergus here is interested in buying the four year olds,” Bobby explains, apparently noticing his head wrangler’s suppressed hostility, shooting it down with a piercing stare, warningly. Dean’s demeanor changes instantly as he raises his eyebrows. If this horse trader is going to bring the big bucks, he knows he needs to keep himself in check for the sake of the ranch. “Mind if I have a peek?” Macleod asks, gesturing at the horse. “Go ahead.” Dean steps back, making room for him to inspect the horse.
Fergus circles the horse, taking the bay gelding in from several angles. He feels the hindlegs for any swelling or abnormalities and does the same with the front legs, after Y/N has removed the bandages Ringo wore in the ring to prevent any injuries. The horse trader then proceeds to look Ringo in the face and check his teeth. After a satisfied nod the man turns around, straightens his impeccable suit. He then takes a tissue from his breast pocket and wipes his hands. “It’s a fine looking animal you’ve got here, Singer,” he compliments. “You may take the horse away, my dear.” Even though she isn’t fond of the degrading way he is talking to her, Y/N obliges. Taking care of the horses when she’s not riding herself is her job after all. “Oh, and Miss Y/L/N…” She halts the horse next to her and turns around. The Englishman has his hands in his pocket now, twinkling hazel-colored eyes looking her up and down. “Bobby here tells me that you’re a well-educated woman. A master degree in Business & Economics? Impressive. Someone as smart as yourself has to acknowledge that it’s a good deal. I assume you will consider my offer on your horse,” he pauses, more intrigued with every detail he learns about the woman before him. “I would like to point out there’s room for six figures on that cheque. What numbers to fill in, is your choice.”
Dean wants to snap his head at his girlfriend, but keeps his posture. Did this man just offer her several hundred thousand dollars for Meadow? Eyes wide in astonishment, he exchanges a look with his uncle, both trying to keep a straight face. “She’s not for sale,” Y/N makes clear one more time, pronouncing the words slow to prove a point. Amused with her stubbornness, the corner of MacLeod’s mouth twitches upward. Cocky, he holds her gaze, but eventually yields. “Very well, then. Let me know if you change your mind. The offer stands.”
Without responding to Fergus’ tenacious reply, she turns away, nudging Ringo to follow her. The three men watch her leave, Dean knows her well enough to be able to tell that MacLeod has her blood boiling. He’s not surprised Y/N didn’t think twice about shooting the bid down. Meadow means the world to her, more than any amount of money could ever buy. But holy shit. Six figures! Realisation hits him; it would be enough money to save the Ranch.
The Brit who made the generous offer pulls him from his thoughts. “Alright, lads. Let’s talk business, shall we?” The three walk away from the few people that are lining around the warm-up area. A little further down, on a crossing of two paths, they stop. The little square is still quiet at this hour. Safe from lurking eyes and eavesdropping ears, they gather around one high table near a drink stand. Even though it’s a non-serve area, the influential man calls the bartender to take their order. The young guy comes back with a coke for the rider - who still has a run later this afternoon - and two bourbons. Dean didn’t even know they served whiskey at this event, let alone this early.
MacLeod cuts right to the chase. ���I will offer you thirty grand for the four year old Quarters, and I will take them off your hands right away.” Dean doesn’t flinch, being in these kinds of conversations before. He can maintain his poker face, no matter how amble the offer. It is a negotiation after all. The owner of the two horses thinks about it for a second, but then comes with a counter. “Forty.” “C’mon, Bobby. Is that how you treat an old friend?” Fergus clicks his tongue, shaking his head slightly after which he takes a sip from his drink. “Now, I know times are tough and that you’re experiencing difficulty staying afloat, but do realize I am already doing you a favor here. Thirty thousand dollars is more than fair.”
The head wrangler is taken aback by the Englishman’s comment. How would he know the ranch is struggling? Did people in their close circle spill the beans? Apparently MacLeod spots the unpleasant surprise on the faces of the men opposite of him, because he comments on it without missing a beat. “It’s a small world, lads. People talk. You should know that by now, Singer.” Bobby moves past the comment rather quickly and ponders about the sum. Fergus isn’t wrong; it’s not just a decent offer. It’s a generous one, one he isn’t going to decline. The Englishman across the table knows it too; the owner of the Gold Canyon Ranch is desperate for money. “Cash,” he demands, accepting the original offer. The dark haired man strokes his neatly trimmed beard. “I can arrange that.”
The head wrangler might not like the horse trader, but he did just make this weekend ten times better. He gulps down the last of his coke, crumpling the can before he dunks it in the trash on the side of the crossroads. The cowboy figures the deal will be sealed with a handshake before they go separate ways, but MacLeod has a second matter to settle. “I have another proposition for you.” Having their attention, the middle aged Brit observes their reaction, his eyes full of mischief. The two members of the ranch near Phoenix share a look. “We’re listening.” Bobby says.
Fergus swirls his whiskey, studying the amber liquid in his glass. “I own a stallion,” he starts off, putting the drink to his mouth in the short pause. “I bought him at the Derby Quarterhorse Auction for over a million dollars. He’s licensed, one of the best pedigrees I’ve ever seen, not to mention his conformation and movements. He already covered four hundred mares this year. I expect great things from this horse, he is supposed to bring in the money. There is one slight issue, however.” Dean listens, intently, wondering where he is going with this. “And what would that be?”
“The horse has some… behavioral issues,” the stud farm owner claims, careful in his choice of words. “It has quite the temperament, one his former trainers haven’t been able to use in their advantage, my advantage.” Slowly the head wrangler begins to realize why the price MacLeod is willing to pay for the two Quarters is so steep; he is playing a game of give and take. The way the owner of this stallion is talking about money and business, calling the animal ‘it’, doesn’t sit well with him either. Where is the horse’s well-being in all of this?
“What’s his name?” Dean likes to know. Fergus frowns at that, clearly not understanding why it would matter, but he answers anyway. “You might have heard of this horse; his name is Cain.” Dean has heard of the horse. The whopping 1.2 million that was paid for the talented Quarter made headlines in the industry.
“What are these behavioral issues?” he needs to know, not taking the bait just yet. “Typical stallion behavior; dominance is the main problem. The horse has character, what can I say?” MacLeod laughs it off. “Anyway, I am looking for a capable horseman. Someone who can actually break him in.” The owner of the horse in question shifts his penetrating gaze from Bobby to Dean. The cowboy realizes they are at a verge of a possibly very important business deal, but he cannot stop himself from commenting on the peculiar choice of words. “I don’t ‘break in’ horses. I teach them to trust and to cooperate,” he states firmly. “Potato, potahto,” Fergus dismisses. “Are you up for the job, or not?”
Dean exchanges a glance with his uncle, a silent conversation happening between them, only possible by years and years of working together. When Bobby rights himself, he has a crucial question. “What’s in it for us?” Again that small smile on the Englishman’s face; he knows he’s close to persuading them.
“A thousand dollars each month, paid in advance, and a fifty grand bonus when Cain successfully completes the stallion performance tests in April. Plus, five percent of his earnings in coverage for the coming year. After he passes the exams, we can set up a contract in order for you to remain his permanent rider,” MacLeod sums up.
Bobby analyzes the offer. It’s tempting in many aspects. Fergus just mentioned that the stallion already covered four hundred mares this year. With his stud-fee being at least a thousand dollars, they are looking at twenty grand cut already. Then there’s the regular income, not to mention the bonus. This deal might be the lifeline his family business was frantically fishing for. It’s up to Dean, though. He is the one who is going to work with this horse, and the only one who can make an educated guess if it’s achievable in five months' time.
“We would like to see Cain first,” Bobby decides, wanting to offer his head wrangler a moment to evaluate the animal. “I’m afraid that will not be possible at this time, but I tell you what.” The Brit finishes his bourbon, setting the glass down on the high table. “The horse will be delivered to your property and you will have a week to decide if you want to take on this job. If not, no hard feelings.”
Dean glances aside, spotting the slight nod of his uncle. Seems like they can’t go wrong here; if Cain turns out to be more difficult than Fergus leads on, they can always send him back. “You got yourself a deal,” Bobby concludes, extending his hand to the man in black. “Splendid.” The horse trader smirks, delighted with the arrangement they agreed on, shaking their hands. When he grips Dean’s hand tight, he looks him deep in the eye, as if he recognizes something in the handsome cowboy.
“You’re John’s boy, aren’t ya?” he realizes. “I bought a couple of horses from that Winchester back in the day. How is he?” Tension grips Dean’s body, the sound of his father’s name on Macleod’s tongue sending a shiver down his limbs. He tries to breathe in without it being too obvious, finding it difficult to keep his mask on. “I wouldn’t know,” he answers curtly.
Fergus furrows his brow at that, clearly curious as of why the two aren’t in touch anymore. He allows a silence to linger between them, their handshake holding on to the apprehensiveness. “Hmm,” he responds at the peculiar answer. “Well, you are just like your father. I could’ve sworn it was him when I saw you in the arena earlier; spitting image. You have his ways.”
It’s like MacLeod is deliberately trying to get under his skin, and no matter how hard the young cowboy fights it, the man he’s making a deal with is succeeding. The words spoken with that distinct English accent ring in his head, much louder than they were pronounced, cracking like a whip on his back. You are just like your father. You have his ways.
Dean releases the stallion owner’s hand, quickly slipping his into the back pockets of his jeans, drying his clammy palms on the denim. He hopes neither of the men in his company notice him shaking. He inhales through his nose, squares his shoulders and stands tall, pushing down the anxiousness that is stirring in his stomach. Disappointed in himself, he chews on the inside of his cheek in search for distraction. He can’t let a simple comment get to him like this.
Now that he has shut down the attitude the ranch hand was giving him, the Englishman looks down on Dean with a sinister smile on his lips. He keeps a hold of the Winchester’s gaze, until he averts his green eyes. Only then MacLeod steps away. “We’ll stay in touch. I’ll have my men pick up the two Quarters this afternoon,” Fergus announces, his long, dark overcoat swaying slightly as he turns around once more. “A pleasure doing business with ya.”
With those words, MacLeod walks away and leaves the two men in the middle of the square. The sun is suddenly uncomfortably warm to Dean. He sniffs and takes a few steps from his uncle, as if the two or three strides would actually be enough to walk it off. He places his hands in his side and dips his hat forward when he faces Bobby again, making sure the older man can’t sense how unsettled he is. But Bobby is no fool. He knows his nephew better than the boy’s own father did, and that’s exactly what’s bothering Dean.
“You alright?” he checks. “Yeah, why wouldn’t I be?” Dean returns just a little too rapidly, shrugging it off. “Just…” His uncle is careful not to address the subject directly, yet at the same time he needs to offer the opportunity for the wrangler to vent. “With what he said about John--” “Don’t.”
The simple word comes out harsher than he meant it to leave his lips, the darkness in his eyes when he shoots his father-figure a glare soon replaced by regret. Dean knows Bobby is trying, like he and Ellen have for the past fifteen years. But no matter how much time passes, he can’t bring himself to talk about what happened in the past.
His uncle isn’t mad, nor is he disappointed in his surrogate son. He just nods slowly at the dismissal, before he begins to make his way to the stables. Dean remains in the middle of the crossing, his hands still firm on his hips, closing his eyes for a moment as he breathes out. The deal they just made should bring much needed relief, but the meeting leaves a bitter taste in his mouth.
He gathers himself and follows after his Bobby. They have more showings to prepare for, but nothing can cast out the words spoken by Fergus MacLeod. Not the rhythmic thumping of hooves in the dirt, not the chatter and laughs produced by the growing crowd, nor the music that comes from the main arena. All he can register is the painful message, which reopens the deep scars on his heart every time they bounce off the walls inside his head.
I am just like my father.
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Mr. and Mr. Refreshing
read it on the AO3 at https://ift.tt/2XQHqAa
by Raven_Bagels (dreamganronpa)
Finally given a day off from college and volleyball, Sugawara takes the much-needed chance to tidy up his dorm. The problem is, it was also the perfect chance to talk to Nishinoya, his boyfriend. Their schedules rarely matched up, but Suga really wanted to clean up his living space. Unfortunately, cleaning takes a while when you're reminded of your high school days with everything you pick up.
Words: 5850, Chapters: 1/1, Language: English
Fandoms: Haikyuu!!
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Categories: M/M
Characters: Nishinoya Yuu, Sugawara Koushi, Tsukishima Kei, Sawamura Daichi, Azumane Asahi, Tanaka Ryuunosuke, Hinata Shouyou, Kageyama Tobio
Relationships: Nishinoya Yuu/Sugawara Koushi
Additional Tags: characters are listed in order of importance, Alternate Universe - College/University, mostly involves canon events, Fluff, First Dates, Long-Distance Relationship, HQ Rarepair Bang 2020
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I think part of the problem is because, in many writeblr and rp circles, people will only post "tell me how my writing is going!" and "give me a suggestion to improve my writing!" memes because they want... pardon... ass pats. They don't actually want concrit, and they don't actually want to improve. They're happy with where they are. They just want compliments.
Yes, I'm serious. This is a huge thing and most people who have been in those spaces will probably agree.
If you send these people even the most polite, friendly, compliment-sandwich-y bit of genuine concrit, even if they openly posted a meme requesting it, they react badly and offended, like you don't know what you're talking about. It's almost as if these people want compliments without the embarrassment of actually just asking for them, so there's a whole new kind of doublespeak surrounding it.
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I believe that the problem lies mostly with how a lot of people don't know how to give constructive criticism. Some use it as a shield to be assholes, picking a part a story and focusing on the negatives. Or trying push their own preferences, trying to influence the story itself, especially if it's still on-going.
Don't pretend that they don't. Not everyone who is offering to give constructive criticism is trying to be helpful. They like to pretend they are, and some, in their own minds believe they are, but in truth, they are anything but helpful.
"I feel this scene would have gone a lot more smoothly if you went in this direction instead." Or "The characters you used in this scene fell flat, maybe you should have used these characters instead." Or "I feel that the plot is too predictable, you should go in this direction instead." You might think they are helpful, but they are not. They are trying to push the author in a certain direction. In your preferred direction.
Giving constructive criticism can be very tricky. Some authors genuinely want it, they can take it. But even then, not when it is nothing but negativity and the critic's own personal preferences they are pushing.
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All I'm seeing is a few anons trying to explain that constructive criticism in general can be difficult and a bunch of entitled RPs deciding the OP and anons were talking about them specifically and the scenario centered in their community, and absolutely refusing to budge from that.
"How dare you even suggest that my perfect concrit is anything but!"
"Ok, but concrit in general can be difficult."
"Not my concrit, in my scenario, in the RPC!"
"Ok, but others do use concrit as an excuse to be assholes."
"But I don't! You're not even in the RPC STFU!"
I feel sorry for the original OP. Nothing they said had anything to do with the RPC, but about writing advice. But here we have a bunch of RPs have little temper tantrums because someone dared to suggest that maybe the concrit they give isn't all that helpful. Jfc. I no doubt will get screamed at by the same RPs for not adhering to the same RPC scenario.
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Not to beat a dead horse, because I'm pretty sure we're all actually in agreement that some people use concrit as an excuse to troll or be gross, and some people think they're being polite but worded things badly...but people are actually right on the money with RPers being obscenely sensitive, and it's easy to believe them when they say they are being civil because I see it too. It gets worse the younger people you're around. Maybe it's because the RPC attracts a certain subset of people who really want validation, or who are dealing with stuff at home and don't actually want anything that isn't shining positivity, even if they think they do, who knows. But the scenario where someone asks for feedback, then reacts disproportionately if they get anything that isn't a perfect compliment, isnt a new thing. I looked at two confession blogs and found these in five minutes of searching.
https://www.tumblr.com/roleplayerconfessions/678565733649842176/get-over-yourself-you-asked-how-your-portrayal
https://www.tumblr.com/confessionsofa-roleplayer/179831150654/i-find-myself-always-hesitant-to-give-feedback-to
https://www.tumblr.com/confessionsofa-roleplayer/159494723029/a-partner-claimed-they-were-looking-for
https://www.tumblr.com/roleplayerconfessions/673105147180826624/note-to-self-send-me-honest-feedback-on-my
https://www.tumblr.com/confessionsofa-roleplayer/169621860191/what-they-say-send-constructive-criticism-about
https://www.tumblr.com/roleplayerconfessions/672554002970525696/its-hard-being-autistic-in-the-rpc-people-ask
So...it's a thing, yes.
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No. Do not pass go. People in the RPC can be manipulative as fuck, and false requests for writing advice are only the tip of the iceberg.
Reblogging PSAs that say their blog is "hate free", but trash talking fans of certain characters and certain demographics with language like "degenerates" in the next breath? Check.
Saying they lost their threads every other time they post an open starter, even though it was tagged "open rp" as per their own tagging conventions (and still is, so it's very much findable on their own blog)? Check.
Vague posting about how nobody wants to roleplay with them and "nobody would even notice if they deleted" and "maybe they should take a break", every other week? Which gets them positivity anons so the behavior just ramps up more and more? Check.
People sending themselves anon positivity when it's painfully obvious that's the case, because they use unsearchable language you've only ever seen in your discord threads with them, and they don't currently have any other mutuals? Check.
People reblogging memes that ask for writing advice, and acting like anyone who sends them writing advice, no matter how constructively it's given, is somehow out to get them because I guess everyone else was supposed to realize they only wanted yes-men replies, and not even a tiny bit of advice? Check.
The roleplay community is stuffed with these people, it's annoying, and it's even more annoying that you're waltzing in and thinking there's sufficient room to play devil's advocate about some of this stuff. It's not subtle. It's painfully obvious. Don't lecture people on nuance if you aren't familiar with what they're talking about. People do concern-troll, and people do send asks that could be better worded, but who is disagreeing with you?! That's not what people are talking about, they've been saying it ad nauseum in the comments. And many people are, in fact, capable of exercising basic self-awareness and knowing (or not knowing) if their advice will come off badly. Just stop.
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5850: Bruh I'm afraid to get involved with the RPC there's so much hostility wow
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"I'm not in RP circles."
Well that explains a lot
If you don't have experience in the community and you haven't been exposed to what people are talking about, you don't really have a place to opine on it and play devil's advocate by saying we don't know something lol
The rpc has so many quirks and niche things going on, people who haven't dipped in their toes can't possibly understand what the vibes and culture is like, especially in certain trendy fandoms and cliques.
The roleplayers who turn around and snap because someone sent them advice as asked, are just like the roleplayers who write open starters, reply once or twice, then claim they "lost" the thread when I ask about it, even though I have the url still saved on my phone and when I go to their blog, the url goes to a 404 because they deleted the initial starter and all their replies to it. You don't lose something you intentionally deleted, and this happens over and over with the same excuse that they lost track of it, and this is a common thing with roleplayers because a lot of them aren't capable of just saying they lost interest because they don't want what they think is confrontation
Maybe you and the other respondents both got off track, but there's still a difference. They didn't imply that you didn't understand what tonality of asks you were sending to other people, or that you didn't understand how the asks would be received.
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I'm laughing so much at this ask, holy smokes. It's so desperate to make it sound like multiple people in the comments are in the wrong and simply don't know they've been jerks when sending feedback to roleplayers, when I know for a fact it's way more likely that roleplayers they've sent asks to are just being ultra-sensitive weirdos who asked for one thing, while trying to imply they only wanted something else, and having it backfire on them, then freaking out because people sent them what they conveyed they wanted.
I actually went through my mutual's interactions to dig this up because apparently you need convincing, and I'm tired and cranky enough to say something about it:
"I really love your writing! You have an amazing way with similes and metaphors, I especially love (example). I did notice sometimes there's a tendency to mix up "you're" and "your", but that's really the biggest thing. I love reading your threads and love our muses' interactions, looking forward to more!"
How on earth can someone look at an ask like that with a straight face and say, "you were being dickish, the other person has full right to be upset"? Get out of here.
They posted a meme that said, to paraphrase, "tell me how I'm doing with my writing!" with a slightly cheesy subtitle that acknowledged how writers are "always improving". There were a lot of them going around. In this interaction, my mutual accepted the feedback because they literally asked for it. A lot of roleplayers, however, think "literally asking for it" means "not actually asking for it, but everyone will know the difference", even though they're posting the same frigging meme and there's zero context clues in their tags to suggest they want people to not actually send some flavor of constructive criticism.
It's true that people aren't always aware of the tone of their criticism. But literally none of the asks have denied that fact, including me now, so what's your damage? What are you trying to convince people of that they don't already know?
Because all you're doing at this point is being condescending towards other people in the comments, and digging your heels in when they insist they've been putting things nicely. I've been roleplaying for 20-something years, it's a hobby I've taken from neopets to gaia to tumblr, and I can completely back up the fact that tumblr roleplayers can be incredibly manipulative in what they ask for. I've dealt with it so many times, and at this point, it's even second-nature to be able to point out, and identify, the exact "type" of roleplayer who does this.
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Listen, this is my two-cents worth. Both anons have some merit. There are RPers who ask for con-crit but actually want validation. There are reviewers who use con-crit as a shield to be cruel.
Look, you can point to the first Anon and say, "but the first Anon is talking about this!" all you want. I get it. Others get it. Those who read the post get that. The second anon went off on a bit of a tangent, I get it too. But they didn't go completely AWOL. They simply pointed out that sometimes reviewers think they are being kind and helpful with their advice and criticism when in reality they are not being actually helpful.
No one wants to think the advice they give is actually bad. No one who wants to help someone improve wants to think their con-crit might actually be harmful. No one wants to believe that. A lot of reviewers have good intentions. They do. I understand that. Others understand that.
First Anon used "polite, friendly, compliment-sandwich-y bit of genuine concrit" to describe their con-crit. That is their belief. That is what they think they are providing. And it might be so, we don't know. The words could be as sweet as can be. But the advice itself could actually be harmful. We simply do not know.
It happens. It does happen. Reviewers have given what they thought was well thought out, gentle con-crit only to have the author/artist rage at them. And when they read over their advice, they realize it was not that helpful after all.
There might be a genuine reason some RPers respond negatively. Or it could because they simply did not want to be critiqued at all. Or it could because the con-crit was actually hurtful.
First Anon could be a hundred percent right. I'm not in RP circles. They could be the pinnacle of gentle advice and con-crit.
But both Anons have merits. And both are allowed to say as such.
Oh, just to finish this ask off - these asks/comments have little to do with the OP at all. OP was talking about how those who ask for critique get flowery responses like "do whatever have fun!" instead of actually getting genuine, helpful advice. I think everyone involved went off on a tangent, don't you?
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"Literally none of the asks I've seen where roleplayers got suggestions lacked tact. We're not talking about situations where someone sends an ask and doesn't know how to phrase things, op literally said the asks did everything right in that sense?"
The point of that ask went straight over your head, didn't it? I was simply pointing out that some people think they are being helpful when they are giving criticism when in reality, they are not. There is no need to rush in and defend the original OP.
You claim that the constructive criticism is tactful and benign, but is it really? How many times has someone given hurtful or negative criticism and then screeched "Omg I was just trying to be helpful!" How many times has someone ripped apart someone's story, someone's role play, someone's artwork, and then hide behind the constructive criticism shield by exclaiming that the author/artist/RPer can't take criticism?
Critics play innocent all the time. They pretend that they are only trying to be helpful as they rip apart and point out all the negatives of someone's work. And they get huffy and belligerent when someone takes offense to what they do.
How do you know the suggestions, the criticisms were tactful and helpful? Critics claim that all the fucking time!
There are indeed some critics who do want to help others improve. There is no doubt about that. But don't pretend that ALL critics are like that. Don't pretend that every critic that offers criticism is just some innocent little bean who is trying to be tactful and helpful. Don't pretend that critics can't lie when they say that they are trying to be helpful toward others. And don't pretend that authors/artists/RPers are all sensitive little assholes wanting nothing more than asspats.
Can some authors/artists/RPers be rude, aggressive assholes? Absolutely! Can authors/artists/RPers want nothing more than validation and head pats for their good work? Of course! I'm not saying that they're not.
But to pretend that authors/artists/RPers asking for advice/criticism are fishing for nothing more than asspats, and the critics who give them said advice/criticism are innocent little beans offering nothing but help and support is absolutely ridiculous.
It goes both ways. Constructive criticism is difficult thing to give and to take at times.
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If anyone is interested, the post that started it all is #5850. I don't want to stir up trouble as it's apparently a very heated subject, but if you're curious about that little debacle, have at it. And see for yourself who you identify with.
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Not nonnie but you're getting awfully defensive over a post that isn't yours. All that was said was that sometimes critics aren't as helpful as they like to think they are. Which is true. I read it as a tangent to the original post. I'm pretty sure others did too. They happen all the time, why take exception to this one in particular? Criticism can be offered with good intentions but what is said can still be hurtful and negative, even if you think you're right. Nonnie did rant a bit in that second response, which was a little bit over the top. But you both need to calm down. And the way you keep going back to the original post makes one thinks you're the actual OP of that post. After all, how can you be so sure that OP was telling the truth? For someone staunch about criticism you can't seem to take it in return.
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Saying they lost their threads every other time they post an open starter, even though it was tagged "open rp" as per their own tagging conventions (and still is, so it's very much findable on their own blog)? Check.
You forgot the roleplayers who say they lost a thread, then as soon as you submit a link to it for them, so they know where it is, they pull a ninja and go to the url to delete it, then pretend it was never actually there, and the only reason you still saw the page was because "your browser must have cached it!" True story... I work in IT, I know how to refresh a page lol...
I dropped them so fast. But seriously people in the tumblr rpc have the constitution of a banana peel, if you're looking for someone who can actually communicate even the bare minimum that's required for, you know, a multi-person hobby, you're looking for a needle in a haystack...
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