#if they would...................THIS WOULD LOOK SO MUCH BETTER UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Okay I js read Candlelit and I am going to rant now.

Can we talk abt the fact that sunghoon is so loser in this like LMFAOOOOOO but he's so bitchy and sassy to fr like man wtf. sunghoon calling jay and player and not even two minutes later we read how he has a new girl in his arm every 3 days was so 💀💀💀 and him saying “good think, i’m not looking forward to be liked by you,” like mhm you're gonna eat your words park trust me.

AND I LOVEEE HOW YOU ADDED HIS THOUGHTS SM INTO THIS. also he is such a fucking snitch bc No way did he tell y/n mom she was smooching someone like fawk yew. and the way he kept on getting jealous over jay like him texting back that classmate as y/n was talking on the phone and she mentioned jay

BUT THNE THE THING THE GIRL SAID??? I WAS LIKE NOOOOOOOOOO JAY WTF NO HOW COULD YOU. also y/n needs to chuck his beer out fr bc why is this man always drinking it. Like it makes your mouth stink so bad fr.

HIM STUTTERING WHEN HE COMPLIMENTED Y/N god he’s such a loser fr. love my loser men so much fr

ong this paragraph was so fucking cute "“she went on a date with jay,” he responds in the most miserable and sullen voice known to mankind. his shoulders practically slouching at the mention of he-who-shall-not-be-mentioned, finger tracing the rim of the glass in front of him with incoherent whines falling off his lips." like Chat why is this so cute omg

THE FACT THAT HE CRIED OVER Y/NGOING ON A BLIND DATE WHEN HE GOT DRUNK? OMG THIS IS TOO FUNNY FR. Then Y/n getting her heart broken like noooooooooo :( I am going to find you jay from this fic. AND IT BEING A BET LIKE UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH but at least he apologized so meh

okay now here are some of the best sentences in this part of the fic.

“you’re cute, and it’s eating his brain cells.” 

“of course, do you think i’d ask you to cook when you look like you went through a divorce and lost the custodies of all your three kids?”  (okay why is he so Sassy.)

“focus on my lips,” (I fainted.)

“we’ll stop when the candle goes out,” (I hope The Candle is Immortal LIKE OUWAHONDOWWQIOFUAGFGBAUFNJKBGVHP9IQEJ298RYUO3ENAL)

now here is the worst paragraph here. “it was a mistake,” he cuts you off immediately, a heavy pause following shortly after. he looks up in your eyes for the first time since the morning. “let’s just forget it,” Trust me when i say that I am going to Find You

AND THE ANGST? OMG THE ANGST? IT WAS SO. LIKE WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS SUNGHOON. YOU'RE SUCH A JERK. but then the fluff >>>>>>>>>>>>>>

oh god when he did this “i’ve got it so bad for you, yn, really,” —he speaks as if he’s out of breath due to the nervousness— “really bad. i tried to keep you out of here,” he said, pointing at his chest, cheeks flushing red as the words fell off his lips. “but you won’t go, you just won’t.” LORDY LORD LORD I AM BLUSHING.

Cece you ATE DOWN with this fic. it was so fucking good and I'm in love fr.

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HELLO TEDDIE NONNIE I'M AB TO FRAME THIS ON MY WALLS 🙁🙁🙁🙁 you're so sweet TT thank u sm for reading my silly lil fic i love u mwah ♥︎

loser sunghoon is truly the best sunghoon ^^ i think i could've done better with the characterisation but oh well, that's done is done :"> he's such a snitch .. AND JAY PLEASE ofc i had to give him a redemption arc and make him apologise like in no universe will that man something like that :< he's too sweet to play with someone's feelings

to be very honest, i worte that fic only for the make out part 🙏 the 'we'll stop when the candle goes out' part is my fav and the reason why i wrote this fic lmfao. also i really wanted to add more angst and go in-depth with the no-contact period but that would've added another 5k and i litch was only looking forward to finish writing this asap ><

AND THE CONFESSION YESSSS my fav :D again, so so thank you for leaving this sweet sweet feedback, i love u sm and i'm happy u enjoyed reading it :D