#mmmm corruption arc
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hekuuu · 3 months ago
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ascension of the god of ambition
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the-kipsabian · 2 years ago
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i have so many more corruption arc thoughts still left in my brain if you care btw
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mohgreal · 1 year ago
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now that elden ring dlc / shadow of the erdtree is days away i want to simply say that i would except something about miquella to disappoint people.
the griffith people wont like it if hes pure because "the signs were always there" / "thats bad storytelling" and so on. If he has depth then maybe they'll shut up but still say shit like "well the bewitching branch-"
and the people who think him betraying malenia would be stupid and ruin her character would be disappointed if he did, people who wanted miquella to betray her (mmmm angst) would be disaapointed because it would have okay buildup and be interesting.
people who think hes pure and nothing else would be disappointed if hes not pure good because "we already have enough morally gray characters"
people who want him to be morally grey would also be disappointed if hes not because "just pure good/evil isnt good writing"
people who want him to be corrupted would be disappointed they didnt do more with him, people who dont would be disappointed if he was because "thats a cheap way to end his arc"
if he appears too much people will be disappointed because theres more things to be explored and miyazaki said there likely wont be any dlc
if he appears too little people will disappointed because he had alot of buildup and not enough screentime/lore
in conclusion i feel like no one is going to like miquella or at least not as much as right now, and even currently not that many people like him. I can smell the "bad writing" reddit posts. basically, be prepared
sadly i cant play day one but ill still post abt miq defo
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whosthere54 · 9 months ago
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Prison duo playlist analysis day 7 - Brutus by The Buttress
YES I FINALLY GET TO YELL ABOUT THIS SONG! ME WHEN!
This is mostly gonna be me yelling about the season two prison arc and also probably corruption because wow I’m so normal about that specifically. From Icarus’s perspective mostly is what I’ve thought this through same as most things- though it could be corruption arc Centross too.
Starting off strong with
“I’ve been watching him for my entire life. I hate the air he breathes, his foolish decrees his words so contrived.”
They have known him throughout the first reset that they remember at that point- that being the only thing they remember from their life. They hate him- especially after they remember. They were fine around him before but when they remember their put straight back into the mindset the held during corruption and they hold so so much anger and resentment towards him. They don’t believe a word he says, he broke their trust no matter how little of it was real in the fist place. Why would he tell the truth now? They don’t believe him when he try’s to tell them Rae is sick- because their so sure that Rae would tell them even when they hadn’t fully earned that trust back yet because why would he tell the person who tried to kill everybody here over them?
“And I hate the way the townspeople gather outside. They cling on to every breath, cling to his chest. Home to his heart full of pride.”
Most people of not everyone have met Centross at this point- and most like him. Find him easy to hang out with or are just indifferent to him being there. Rae trusts him more than others, and if Centross said something most would probably believe him especially Rae at this point. Would people believe Icarus? Who’s to say- especially if Jamie and Athena remember. Athena I think trusts Centross more than Icarus with that memory. Easton I don’t know about- I think he would be able to tell if they were lying- but I don’t think he’d trust them so easily.
“The Oracle told him beware the Ides. And I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t wishing for untimely death or demise”
Mmmm. See if this was s3 “The Oracle told him beware the Ides” would be a great line.
I don’t remember off the top of my head if anyone except Centross himself was worried about visiting Icarus- so I can’t make the best connection here.
They would be wishing for his death- not exactly knowingly but they don’t want his here. They don’t want him to be around to hurt anyone anymore and the easiest way to do that would be for him to die. They don’t immediately want to do it themself- but they would be lying if they didn’t wish something would happen to him for what he’d done to the people they cared about- as well as what he’d done to them as much as they try to make it about everyone else.
“Or am I just wishing I could be like you? That the people would see me too as a poet, and not just the muse.”
THIS ONE. THIS IS WHY I SAY SEASON 2.
They wished they were like him in many ways in season one- he was Enderian’s favorite. Her speaker, her first choice. She talked to him the most. They wish NIW that they got the same level of trust and support from others he is getting, wishing they could walk around and not have to pretend they don’t notice the shifting feet and fearful glances when they talk to someone, pretend they don’t notice when Rae talks to them different after maybe a nightmare or something else that reminded him of them then. They wish it was like Centross- where he walks around freely and can gain the trust back of the other people on the server. What they don’t know is how he worked for it- he built that trust back and they haven’t taken the steps to do that yet.
“Oh it’s not true, I don’t wish harm upon you. From birth we’ve been like brothers of different mothers. Within the spirit of the same womb”
Even if they hate each other- they probably understand each other the most out of many of the characters on Fable. They’ve had experiences together through corruption and then have probably seen each other at their most vulnerable in both prison arcs- stretching into season 3 where there’s more trust and vulnerability for it to actually be a healthy exchange.
“May the gods strike me down if I forsake you. Frater meus, you’re beautifully made. And to you I’m forever grateful.”
Mmm. Me when. They didn’t want to hurt him at first- they just wanted to make sure he wouldn’t hurt anyone else.
He taught them a lot though season 1- I think. Just in their mental state really- even if it wasn’t a healthy environment they learned a lot about themself and what they were capable of specifically due to his help. He was part of the people who enabled them to do what they did- even if it was a bad thing. That turns into him enabling and helping them heal and do good later in season 2 and in season 3.
“You’re beautifully made” is a line for sure. Mhm.
“I’ll never forget that you showed me to make art. And I know the love you showered me came from a pure and noble heart. I love you, and if you want I’ll call you king. But why do I lay awake at night thinking instead of you it should be me?”
I don’t want to repeat myself- but same things as I said above he taught them a lot, as well as their respect for him vs their returned lingering hatred and resentment toward him wanting to be in the place he had been from season 1.
“something wicked this way comes. And as I’m set to face it, I’m unsure, should I embrace it? Should I run? What motivates me? Hatred? Is it love? What’s more wrong; that I too wish to be great, or my mother wished she’d had a son?”
Agh- me when. What’s more wrong; that I too wish to be great, or my mother wished she’d had a son?
Tell me that’s not so Icarus coded. Or my mother wished she’d had a son- because- was Icarus ever rally her son? She was their mother, yes, but Icarus was always Creations child. Always in fables shadow, his mini me, his perfect golden child that would do whatever he say. They looked like him too- the spitting image of their father taking on his temperament too.
Skipping a bit because- I’m so normal about this part-
“My name is Brutus and my name means heavy. So with a heavy heart, I’ll guide this dagger into the heart of my enemy. My whole life you were a teacher and friend to me. Please know that my actions are not motivated only by envy. I, too, have a destiny. This death will be art. The people will speak of this from near and afar. This event will be history, and I’ll be great too. I don’t want what you have- I want to be you!”
Oh me when they nearly kill Centross. I’m so incredibly normal. About that in particular.
“Please know that my actions are not motivated only by envy”
They didn’t just do this for what he’d done to them- at-least that’s what they tell themself- they do it to protect their family. The only people they care about that he hurt. Their actions are not only motivated by their care for what happened to them, but for what happened to the grove.
“I don’t want what you have- I want to be you!”
Now- contradictory to my last statement- this is about them. About the lingering mindset of corruption that has them in the same place of envy and anger and want that they were stuck in before. They want to be him now- wanting the respect of others like he had, wanting people to care about them in the same way- trust them and believe them the same way they do him. They want it to be easy- to not have to be looked at like they’re crazy or with pitiful gazes lines with fear and panic when the people they love look at them like they’re a monster.
“I always knew I could be the one. Though I feel the endless pain of being, and I am scorched by the sun. Of humble origins and born of the cursed sex. My name is Brutus but the people will call me Rex”
NOW THIS IS THE LINE IF BEEN THINKING ABOUT ALL DAY-
“My name is Brutus but the people will call me Rex”
They don’t know their name at this point so I am not going to say it here- but- “My name is Sherbert but the people will call me Creation(Creation’s child)” BECAUSE HEAR ME OUT- Fable was a military guy, he probably taught them a lot about war strategy as a child of them sitting in the war room as a little kid is anything to go by- and he’s a killer though they don’t know that yet. Following in their fathers footsteps, they’ll hurt the people they care about the most when trying to do something they deem as good for the people. Good for a kingdom, or good for the grove. And then end up with angry looks and sharp words that they didn’t want- that they did this to try and *avoid*
Just- me when they’re called Creation’s child and they follow so closely in his footsteps that sometimes it almost makes the lines blur between the two- even just in their tone of speech. Their tone of speech during the S2 arc and also the corruption arc nearly recreated Fables sharp and angry tones he speaks in and I just. Mm. This is all I’ve been thinking about right now.
That’s all I’ll say- I’ll cut myself off here but I have so many thoughts about this and the season 2 prison arc specifically- hence my whole playlist… it’s fine- I’m normal guys totally.
Anyways!
The image chosen from my prison duo Pinterest board today is-
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I’ll leave it at that.
You are loved! Go take any meds if you need to and Go eat and drink water if you haven’t already today <3
Have a good rest of your day/night :]
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elementofdawn · 7 months ago
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4 + 10 for cm? :0
4. And reverse, which one of the four things [the character's name, appearance, personality or their role in the story] did you struggle with the most?
mmmm personality, i think. CM isn't the most immediately distinct character, i still kind of worry that they're a bit forgettable.
10. What is their main character arc in the story? Where do they start and how do they develop? Do they get a happy ending or is their story a tragic one?
petty criminal focused on their own survival -> learned to care about others, became a parent and was inspired to clean up their act to be a better role model -> oh no turns out they can be corrupted by bat *****, the "caring about others" development is narrowing back down to "caring about their loved ones foremost and increasingly letting the rest slide", uh oh, oh jeez
so it's going well
they don't have an ending yet :) could be good, could be bad, i have a few... ideas... but nothing is canon
ask game
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bleue-flora · 2 years ago
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Me and my fellow fanfic author @error-dream-was-found yesterday were a bit unhinged on discord and I thought ya'll might enjoy it... so umm please enjoy this discord chat fic I guess. :) (mostly left the way it is btw)
Oh guess I should do warnings huh…TRIGGER WARNINGS: Quackity (… lol oh for real though) Descriptions/Mentions of Torture, Blood, Death, Injuries, Forced drug usage and Cussing… you know the standard prison arc stuff… ;)
If It Pleases The Court
{Prelude}
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 3:52 PM
Ah yes… getting arrested with all those dsmp laws… mmmm yes those………
Wait what laws?
“QUACKITY What Laws?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 3:53 PM
True
We don't do laws on Smp
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 3:54 PM
exactly
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 3:54 PM
Unless you're Dream in that case we have many laws you have conveniently broken
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 3:55 PM
Sam and Q check book - “Yes that is correct!”
Good glad we cleared that up……
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 3:55 PM
I know the laws of Smp so well ... damn I could be lawyer!
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 3:56 PM
Thought that was my job🙃🤣
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 3:56 PM
Damn
Gotta look for a different career then ....
Maybe Q could use some help with ideas 🤔
You know ... to help enforce the law
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 3:57 PM
Torturing blob does not count
Oh wait no Q talked about his “commute” so nvm perfectly good job
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 3:58 PM
Yay!
I could also be a judge 🤔 I know the Smp law well and I'd have an easy job
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:02 PM
“Dream, GUILTY. Everyone else, INNOCENT!”…. Easy
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:02 PM
I know ... we´d both have easy jobs 🤣
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:02 PM
Lol
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:04 PM
although things would get complicated if someone, god forbid, sympathized with Dream ... although who would ever commit such a crime? Punz, laughs nervously.
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:06 PM
If Punz spoke up on behalf of Dream, Dream would kill him because that defeats the whole point…
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:07 PM
oh! So easy again! Plus we have another point against Dream
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:07 PM
Exactly
He’d be so mad… imagine getting torture for a guy in prison for that guy to just ruin everything in court…
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:07 PM
Yeah, valid reason for murder
{DSMP Court in Session with Error-DreamWasFound as presiding judge}
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:08 PM
Now death penalty…. Or…forever in a torture box with a highly corrupt warden?
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:08 PM
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brings down the hammer "Torture box!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:09 PM
Tommy: “BOTH!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:09 PM
points at the kid "that! That´s the spirit! I approve!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:10 PM
Everyone cheers
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:10 PM
"The case is closed!"
"what a productive day it has been"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:11 PM
True
pulls out next case - Pandora’s Box Vs Dream
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:13 PM
"Pandora wins. Next!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:13 PM
(Before it gets nuked that is🤣)
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:14 PM
"wait, wait, wait who approved the nukes! That wasn´t me!
It´s probably Dream´s fault ... time to add to his sentence!
I'm officialy making it 2 forevers in a torture box!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:15 PM
Tubbo walks in “I approved them because I'm big Law!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:15 PM
yells I´M THE LAW!
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Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:16 PM
"you´re lucky you´re not Dream ...."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:17 PM
Dream screams “ACTUALLY THIS IS MY FUCKING SERVER SO IM THE LAW AND YALL ARE ALL TRESPASSING!!!!!!….. except Punz he’s nice he can stay… and Techno… BUT EVERYONE ELSE GET OFF MY DAMN PROPERTY!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:18 PM
"Shut up accused!
Why is he still here?! Sam!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:19 PM
Bad stands up “Actually I pay for it, so technically it’s my property… and language!… but yea no y’all leave because you don’t have souls and the egg is better than yall anyways.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:20 PM
"Who let the lunatic in 🤦‍♀️ I thought I said it clearly, no cultists in my court hall!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:20 PM
Sam too busy cutting off Ponks arm for frowning at Dream’s sentence
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:21 PM
"Awesam! Leave the guy's arm be and come get your prisoner!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:22 PM
Sam walks over awkwardly, before pulling Dream out with a wide smirk
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:22 PM
"Thank you ... finally
so what is on the schedule next?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:22 PM
Quackity sneaks out the back door after them
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:22 PM
looks away so I can´t be hold accusable later
"And someone already see the Egg fanatic out, please, he´s disturbing the process"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:24 PM
Skeppy grabs Bad and takes him out passing Ponk who’s bleeding out on the floor
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:24 PM
"Thank you
so is that all for today? Or does anyone has any other case? No Ponk you can´t sue Sam"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:25 PM
Ponk looks up “What?!?… why?”
“That’s not fair, can I at least sue Dream?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:25 PM
"Yes!
congratulations, you won
no need to trouble Sam and have him drag the prisoner back
Anyone else wants to sue Dream?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:27 PM
everyone raises their hand
Minus Punz who left
(Techno does it with smirk)
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:27 PM
sus .... gotta ask Sam to check it later
"Okay everyone, quiet down ... do you want this the fast way or short way?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:27 PM
Tommy stands up “I vote the Quackity Way!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:28 PM
"That´s my boy! Everyone, stand in line and pick a weapon of choice"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:29 PM
(Sam does not check later, too busy forcing potatoes down Dream’s throat to keep him alive…)
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:29 PM
mumbles to myself "why are we employing that idiot? ... Q do you have a minute?"
"No, don´t worry about Dream, others will keep him entertained"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:31 PM
Q looks very displeased, blood dripping down his shirt “Yea? What’s up?… I’m kinda in the fucking middle of something…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:31 PM
"Punz is acting sus and Sam´s ... ehm ... busy so I need someone to check"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:32 PM
Q pouts “Can’t this wait until later….”
“These noobs are gonna have all the fun without me…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:33 PM
mumbles again "another idiot ...." out loud "You can have fun later, go check now"
"or get someone else to do it I'm not paid enough to deal with this"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:33 PM
Ponk struggles to carry an axe with his one arm
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:33 PM
"Remember, it´s all Dream´s fault. If it weren´t for him you´d have your arm, I know it´s hard but this is to make him pay! You can do it! Chop off his arm!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:34 PM
Ponk and Foolish look at you disturbed, then Ponk whispers to Dream “I’m sorry�� before doing just that
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:34 PM
"and by that I conclude the case Ponk vs Dream closed! Justice has been served!"
"Damn I´m really good at this job
now someone please reattach the arm so another person can have a go"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:35 PM
Q looks over at you “yea no kidding, you’re fucking nailing it!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:35 PM
"Aw thanks"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:36 PM
Sam sighs waking over “this is gonna be a long day…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:36 PM
"yeah, better get the healing pots in advance. And stop whining! You're getting paid for this"
"Just play some relaxing music and ignore the screams for a few hours 🤷‍♀️"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:36 PM
Ponk stares at him with a look that could kill
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:37 PM
"you want another go?
I´m sure it could be arranged 🤔"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:37 PM
Ponk looks back to you mumbling “No I want my arm back…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:38 PM
".... you can have Dream´s arm?
Everyone! Will any of you miss Dream´s arm?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:39 PM
they all pause in a longer then should be contemplation… “nah it’s fine.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:39 PM
"Lovely, Ponk, you can have the arm 🙂"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:40 PM
Tommy stutters “wait why does that bitch get an arm?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:40 PM
"Cuz he lost one because of Dream, duh" rolls eyes
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:40 PM
Ponk looks at said mutilated arm “….thanks?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:41 PM
"you´re welcome"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:41 PM
Sam attaching Ponk’s new arm “at least this one has all the fingers still”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:41 PM
nods "Okay so who wants to go next?"
"And where the heck is Q? What is taking him so long ....?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:42 PM
Tommy clearly outraged “ Yea but like that’s not fucking fair!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:42 PM
sighs "Why not Tommy?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:42 PM
“Because Dream didn’t even touch Ponk, why does he deserve the arm?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:43 PM
"So do you want to sue Dream?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:43 PM
Tommy grins “Yes!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:43 PM
"Should´ve started with that! Okay, what do you want to sue him for?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:44 PM
Quackity wandering all over the smp muttering profanity, looking for Punz who’s sneakily disappeared
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:45 PM
reads the report on my comm, mutters another idiot ... I'm surrounded by idiots ... "Sam! Go help Q"
"He´s lost or something ...."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:45 PM
Tommy looks like he’s solving world hunger in such deep thought “Everything?… ruining my life?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:45 PM
checks some papers "yeah seems valid"
"Dream? Do you have anything to say in your defense?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:46 PM
Sam in the middle of stitching up a long gash in Dream’s chest “Aw what now? I’m kinda busy here!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:47 PM
"Damn it ... turns to the rest can some of you please go look for Q?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:49 PM
Dream on back trying not to choke on his own blood “Oh come on, FUCK YOU TOMMY! You ruined my life by being a little annoying bitch.” coughs “…If anyone’s guilty it’s fucking you.”
Techno and Foolish make their way out rather fast, looking relieved
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:50 PM
notes down - the accused is not cooperating and is verbally attacking the plaintiff
"Since the accused decided to not make use of his chance to defend himself I declare him guilty!"
"Tommy, you won, congrats"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:51 PM
everyone claps, Niki and Jack making eye contact
Jack buts in “You’re honor, if I may, he was just pleading his case as your requested”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:52 PM
"Ehm, I didn´t say you may so the argument is invalid
Anyone else has some objection?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:53 PM
Ranboo recording the notes “just so I’m clear we would like to strike Dream’s testimony from the record as Here Say?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:55 PM
"Yes, please"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:55 PM
Ranboo brushing his hand to remove the blood that landed on his paper- it just smears in one red line over the word Dream “Ok.”
George raises hand like he’s in class, half awake “To be fair, Tommy burned my house, So he ruined my life!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:55 PM
"Thank you Boo ... finally someone competent"
thinks it through ... "would you like to sue Dream for it?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:56 PM
George looks at Dream bleeding out on the floor as Sam frantically tries to stop the bleeding “Nope. I wanna sue Tommy!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 4:56 PM
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"Alright, let's hear it. What are your accusations?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 4:58 PM
George clears throat “Tommy has stolen and burned my house, but also griefed and robbed countless other properties. He is also a whiny childish bitch.”
Niki and Jack step up “We agree, he always starts conflicts that results with our homes being destroyed.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:00 PM
"I see, and are you 100% sure that this was by no means Dream's fault?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:00 PM
George looks from side to side sheepishly “I mean…”
Dream stares at George looking half hurt and half wanting to kill the man who’s so easily turned
Niki and Jack sigh “yea… I mean… you do have a point but…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:04 PM
glares at Dream to make sure he doesn't say a word, then looks at George encouragingly "you're safe here George, feel free to continue. And you" looks at Nikki and Jack "please leave your opinion for when it's asked for"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:06 PM
George looks like he just want to crawl back to bed and give up because it’s too much work to continue “Well I mean… Tommy burning my house wasn’t related to Dream. Was it? Dream hates me…”
Dream looks at George, rolling his eyes then looks at Sapnap, who looks on the brink of tears, and he just snorts bitterly amused
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:08 PM
"Oh, so he may hate you? Does that mean that he could, theoretically, be responsible for the destruction of your house?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:08 PM
Tommy raises the axe about to take Dream’s other arm, while Sam tries to move out of the way in time
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:08 PM
"Sam! Get out of the way! We don´t have enough doctors to stitch you back together 🤦‍♀️"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:09 PM
George getting exasperated like a child refusing to go to bed “BUT HE DIDNT BURN MY HOUSE! Tommy did, Dream helped fix it!…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:10 PM
"And are you certain that this wasn´t just one of Dream´s manipulation tactics to mess with your mind?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:10 PM
Philza buts in confused “He helped fix your house? I thought you said he hated you?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:11 PM
"Phil, please ... you know what, since it´s a very good question I´ll let it pass."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:12 PM
George bites his lip watching Tommy and Sam struggle with the axe over Dream’s body
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:13 PM
follows his gaze, mumbles to myself "what are those idiots doing?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:15 PM
George still staring blankly “I don’t know… he did he… said so.. or maybe he didn’t doesn't matter.. he hates us” George decides on before clenching his fist and turning to Sapnap “He hates us!… doesn’t he?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:16 PM
turns to Sap "Sapnap, can you confirm this statement?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:17 PM
Axe held between them Tommy holding the handle Sam holding the blunt end, they turn to look at George as everyone goes quiet
Tears weigh in Sapnap’s eyes as he stares at Dream who’s looking hurt and hopeful and pleading “He does. Tom—Quackity said he doesn’t care about anything!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:20 PM
nods "are there any other witnesses to confirm this statement?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:21 PM
Dream laughs something broken and bitter and hysterical  pulling Sam's and Tommy's attention back to him
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:21 PM
pinches the bridge of my nose "Sam, keep your prisoner in check please, we´re in a middle of something here"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:23 PM
Tubbo looks at the scene conflicted and thinking “He did… but… he didn’t say Sapnap and George so… and he was… Tommy was…. He was…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:24 PM
"Is that a confirmation to Sapnap´s statement Tubbo? I'm afraid I need to you to express yourself more clearly"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:24 PM
Sam slaps Dream in the face making Dream choke in amusement
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:24 PM
"Thank you Sam"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:28 PM
“Tommy he—he was using Spirit’s remains to… black mail him and….” Tommy takes his venomous eyes off Dream and stares at Tubbo dumbfounded “What?”  Tubbo ignores him “He was… Tommy he burned George’s house because he knew it’d piss off Dream… and … Dream was upset he was…. Well he never said he didn’t care about George he only said that he cares about the discs…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:29 PM
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"Tommy, what is your version of the story?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:31 PM
Dream looks up at Tubbo absolutely dumbfounded like Tubbo has walked on water
Tommy steps on Dream’s hand yelling “WHAT NO! Tubbo, what the hell man?… look me and Ranboo” Ranboo looks up freaked out “we were just having some fun…and Dream he was being a bitch and he put walls around L'Manberg and he-he said he didn’t care about anything except my discs!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:34 PM
look at others "is that so?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:36 PM
everyone looks at Tommy then Tubbo then Tommy again “Tommy never lies, he’s always right!… but Tommy did just kinda confess to burning George’s house so…..”
Puffy frowning “But he’s a child!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:38 PM
"this is indeed a very difficult situation" thinks "however taking Tommy´s age and Dream´s well known negative influence into consideration, I came to the conclusion that Tommy is innocent and all the blame should be rightfully blamed at Dream as the SMP´s law says!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:38 PM
Ranboo looks like he’s going to throw up and in Tommy’s distraction Sam manages to get the ax
everyone kinda pauses… “No yea fair enough, seems about right”
Dream smiles sadly like he expected nothing less and yet finds it mildly entertaining….. until Tommy wrangles the axe and tries to cut off his arm-it doesn’t work but gets about half way
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:43 PM
"Tommy! Stop with the murder! It´s George´s time now!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:43 PM
George and Sapnap stare at each other in conflicted confused gazes before Dream screams and they turn to him again… everyone does… Sam cuts in “Shut up Dream! You’re fine.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:44 PM
"Thank you Sam turns to Dream Dream, please, don´t disturb. We´re discussing something important here"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:44 PM
Tommy halfway through another swing stops “Awww but I want an arm….” he pouts “this green bitch just tried to turn everyone against me!…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:45 PM
thinks it through "does anyone here object against Tommy getting the arm?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:45 PM
Dream just stares at his mutilated shoulder involuntarily tears streaming down his face
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:45 PM
"Dream, please, stop making a scene
Sam, stitch him up, I don´t want him to bleed out ..."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:46 PM
Everyone just stares at the gory scene quietly
Sam exasperated “That’s what I’m trying to do!… “
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:47 PM
"Try harder!"
"Okay everyone, unless you have another thing you want to sue Dream for I suggest we call it a day"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:47 PM
“I’m out of potions! Q used too many before they got here!”
Eryn wordlessly holds out a potion to Sam
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:49 PM
"Thank you Eryn"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:49 PM
Tommy takes the open opportunity to finish the job as Sam grabs the potion
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:49 PM
"Everyone, please go home. We can continue tomorrow when the guitly is in better condition"
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:49 PM
"Tommy!"
makes attempt to stop him
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:50 PM
-were too late- Dream screams, Sam drops the potion and everyone else just looks grossed out
Tommy picks up the severed arm and slings it over his shoulder, blood dripping over the sides “Ok I’m ready to go now”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:51 PM
is mildly disturbed by the scene
"O-okay ... everyone please go now. The process is over"
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:52 PM
takes deep breath trying to process the scene
searching my stuff for a potion, just short of frantic while Dream´s bleeding out a few steps away
"Does anyone have a potion?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:53 PM
Eryn gives a whole hand full of potions to Sam not taking his eyes off Dream as he leaves
Sam rushes to Dream and tries to pour a potion down his throat but Dream just continues to cough it up with blood
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:55 PM
"Shit" seriously worried now, tries to help Sam "come on Dream don´t do this"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:55 PM
Sam getting frantic “Damnit Tommy! does someone have a splash potion?!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:56 PM
searches my stuff again hoping that I just missed it the first time
"damn don´t stand there like idiots!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:56 PM
Dream just smiles widely up at you and Sam as he chokes
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:56 PM
finds the potions "Not, yet Dream"
"No way you´re fucking dying this soon"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:58 PM
Hannah pulls out a potion hesitantly “Wouldn’t it… maybe we should just… let him die… I think he’s paid enough hasn’t he?… what happened to the death penalty?"
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 5:59 PM
stops in my attempts to save Dream and bits my lips hesitantly
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 5:59 PM
Dream’s wounds try to stitch back together as he looks at Hannah surprised and conflicted
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:00 PM
looks at Dream trying to decide. It was law ... it was my job and I liked it but ... for the first time I wondered ...
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:00 PM
Dream looks around at everyone for an answer… something… anything as he continues to bleed out
Dream’s pulse in your hand grows fainter as his skin gets cold
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:02 PM
"Fuck"
"Hannah! Give me the potion!"
I reach towards her urging to her to give me the glowing pink vial
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:03 PM
Hannah looks at you at everyone looking for something.. an answer? Humanity? Empathy? Murder?… getting nothing she turns to Dream who looks at her with tear filled pleading eyes
she hands you the potion
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:04 PM
I breathe out a sigh of relief, the yell for her to hurry dying on my tongue
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:04 PM
Hannah mouths an apology only Dream notices
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:04 PM
"Thanks"
pours the potion on Dream´s wound and watches it close
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:05 PM
Dream closes his eyes as it seals the wound on his shoulder-did he really want to live?
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:06 PM
"Dream ... I- ..." I hold down whatever I wanted to say, I saw that haunted look in his eyes, the resignation in them and my chest tightened with an unfamiliar feeling
"This is enough for today, everyone, leave. You too Sam
And tell Quackity to not come back either"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:07 PM
Sam opens his mouth to argue but closes it
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:07 PM
glares at him, challenging him to protest
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:08 PM
Sam sighs leaving, leading the others to follow the blood trail Tommy’s arm left behind
Puffy is the last one to leave her eyes lingering on her duckling an ‘almost’ conflicted look in her eyes
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:10 PM
I breathe a sigh of relief now that they´re gone, some of the tension I didn´t even realize was there, leaves my shoulders and I turn to Dream again
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:10 PM
Dream stares up at you face scrunched in pain and confusion
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:10 PM
I don´t notice Puffy´s look as I already reach for another potion, pressing it up to Dream´s lips, with a simple order "Drink it"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:11 PM
Dream obeys best he can as he watches behind you Puffy leaving
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:12 PM
observes the wounds all over his body close, my eyes lingers on his missing arms ... "I didn´t expect Tommy to ..."
"damn! I didn´t even really expect Ponk to ..."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:13 PM
Dream laughs, it sounds terrible “You didn’t?”
“Really!?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:13 PM
"I shouldn´t be surprised right?" shrugs
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:14 PM
“I mean I thought you were one of the non idiots”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:14 PM
laughs sadly
"Yeah ... sometimes I forget how messed up this place is ..."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:15 PM
“I think…. I think we all do…”
“It’s easy to be fucking reminded it isn’t it?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:15 PM
"Yeah ... yeah it is"
laughs again, edging on hysterical fuck, "this was- the job was supposed to be easy not- not this!" gestures around
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:16 PM
“Ah… I mean to be fair nothings ever fucking easy.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:16 PM
"Are you .... are you okay?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:17 PM
Dream stars at you “that’s a joke right? Tell me that’s a joke.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:18 PM
"Right ... dumb question" looks around trying to distract myself from looking at him
feeling awkward and wishing to leave but at the same time finding myself unable to do so
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:19 PM
Dream snorts at your clear guilt
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:19 PM
jumps at the sound and my eyes snap back to him
I open my mouth to say something, then close it again
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:20 PM
He stares up at you quietly asking “Why?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:20 PM
"What?"
I blink in surprise, trying to process what he´s asking me
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:22 PM
Dream coughs clearing his throat before going on raspily “You know why not let me die? Why send them away when I didn’t?…. I mean were there—were there not more cases you wanted to pin on me?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:24 PM
"I ... "I trial off unsure what to say. Because he was right no? Why? Why did I do it? There was no reason to, leaving him to die or letting them continue after he didn´t would be better, it´d be justice. Or ... would it? "I don´t know" I admitted weakly
"It wasn´t ... it wasn´t right ..." then why did it feel right at the start?
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:25 PM
“Wasn’t it? Wasn’t it justice?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:26 PM
wasn´t it? It should be ... but looking at the blood around it didn´t feel like it
"I don´t know" the tears pushing into my eyes blurred my vision, it was a mercy, I didn´t see the fresh wounds all over Dream´s body so clearly now
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:28 PM
“Hmm… you don’t know….” he trails off watching you, trying to read you
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:28 PM
"No ... not anymore"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:28 PM
“Aren’t you the judge?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:29 PM
"I ... I am. But I don´t make the rules ... there are laws ... I need to respect them" it sounded weak even to my own ears
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:29 PM
“Laws… right those” he says sarcastically
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:30 PM
"Dream ..." I try weakly, desperate to change the topic
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:31 PM
“You know… I get Tommy… I get all of them, but you? I mean you—I just thought maybe you’d see….”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:31 PM
"I'm sorry, I'm so fucking sorry Dream-"
I felt terrible, how could I be so stupid, how could I let the server corrupt me like this?
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:33 PM
Dream laughs he knows it isn’t funny but lying there aching with missing arms and a hole in his heart drilled by their lingering words and looks, he can’t help but find it funny
“That’s a first…”
“I don’t… I don’t blame you you know… they just—Tommy just… the rules I think are different here aren’t they?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:35 PM
my heart breaks a little at his words ... he doesn´t blame me? How? ... unable to bear it any longer I get up and start collecting the potions scattered all around
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:36 PM
“You just followed everyone else… ‘Dream is the problem’… you’re right, its the law right?…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:37 PM
I stop, clenching the glowing vial with enough force to make my knuckles go white before I force myself to relax my hold. I avoid looking at him when I answer "Don´t say that ... it´s not right"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:39 PM
Dream wants to ask ‘why?’ He wants to scream it, he want to know why the rules are different for him, why are his words always unheard… why does it hurt so much….
but he doesn’t
he knows the answer…
~meanwhile~ Techno and Foolish catch up to Q and Techno promptly punches him in the face
Punz watches from behind a building and laughs… Foolish notices
Punz knows he screwed up… but he’s also not sure why they are out here….
Techno, with his back turned, addresses Punz while pulling up Q from the ground where his punch put him “Hey Punz, wanna turn? He’s very punchable I assure you.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:46 PM
Quackity curses them all out while Punz considers the offer
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:47 PM
Punz moves out of the corner causally cool “You don’t say?”
Techno handles Q to be stand and brushes the dust off him before shoving him towards Punz “I swear but ya know don’t just take my word for it.”
“If you insist” Punz smirks
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:49 PM
Quackity stumbles and panic overtakes his features "Wait what-?!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:51 PM
Punz punches him and he lands in the dirt again this time his nose is bleeding… not that anyone can really tell considering all of Dream's blood
“Sure enough… You’re Right Techno, that was fun.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:51 PM
Q stares up at Punz in shock, then anger "You fucking-!"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:52 PM
Foolish looks on from the side surveying stoically
Techno steps on Quackity’s hand as he tries to get up “My monetization!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:55 PM
Quackity yelps in pain and looks at Techno with a look that could kill, an insult already sitting at the top of his tongue
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:55 PM
Techno stares back amused
after a moment to make sure his point got across Techno removes his foot
Punz just glares as Q gets up holding his bruised hand
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 6:57 PM
Q glares at the other 3 wanting to curse, fight, curse some more- but the memory of his last encounter with Technoblade is still fresh in his mind
he thinks better of it
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 6:58 PM
still watching Q, Punz ask coolly “So… What are y’all doing it out here? Thought everyone was still at the trial…”
Foolish respond crossing his arms suspiciously “Everyone was… “
Techno cuts Foolish off “We left… it was getting…. Not family friendly so me and chat had to go… What about you? Thought you’d for sure have some cases to file with Dream, didn’t you like work with him or something?…”
Punz looks at Q at Foolish then at Techno…
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:02 PM
Quacktity eyes the piglin warily, trying to plan his escape
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:03 PM
Techno pretends not to notice… eyeing Punz like he's the only one there
Punz responds analyzing Techno’s expression… which is per usual rather unexpressive “I mean I worked for him sure, but it was about the money really and if he's being sued by everyone I hardly think I’ll get any money out of it. So I figured it was a waste of time…”
Foolish eyes him wearily still on guard but mostly accepts the answer
Techno smiles back friendly “Right right yea I had been wondering why you’d work for and then betray the Teletubby, but then again I guess everyone betrays him eventually….’
“I’ll keep a mental note to always have cash around to pay you huh.. don’t want to get betrayed and all… speaking of betrayed!” Techno lightens turning back to Q
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:09 PM
Q shies back involuntary, realizing that fuck this is bad
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:11 PM
Foolish shifts uneasily
“Quackity, what cha doing out here? See anything?…” Techno leads fishing for intel
Punz grips his sword staring at Q
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:15 PM
Quackity takes a step back putting his hands up
"Hey no need to get violent-"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:16 PM
Foolish steps behind him blocking his exit
Techno chuckles “No one's gettin violent Quackity, we’ll just chillin here, just me and my enemy and some dudes.”
Punz staring down Q “… Yea but like things could get violent… that’s a lot of blood on you Quackity… should I add some?”
Techno buts in to Punz approaching Q “Hey Hey there. we’re all friends here no need to get nasty… no need to cut off anyone’s arm here or nothin..”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:21 PM
Q forgets about Foolish and tries to step back
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:22 PM
They bump and Foolish contemplates his move, looking from Punz to Techno to Q waging their threat levels
“Then again I was thinking about opening another dentist practice… what cha think Punz, could be profitable? I was gonna open it with Dream but ya know you could be a good assistant too..”
Quackity flinches after bumping into Foolish “Hey look Punz if its money your after, I run a very profitable country”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:24 PM
Quackity is visibly scared now
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:25 PM
“You know we’ve got casinos and restaurants and all kinds of money… You could join and make a ton like you know…Foolish you want to back me up here?”
Foolish eyes Q contemplating, noticing all the blood… “I don’t know Quackity maybe the dentist would be more beneficial…”
Techno smiles “Yooo pog lets go, we’re gonna be dentists chat.”
Techno pulls out his pickaxe
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:29 PM
Quackity begins to shake, trying desperately to find a way to get out of it
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:32 PM
Tommy shows up covered in blood carrying an arm over his shoulder “Hey big Q, bitch you missed all the fun… Tubbo he well fuck him” Techno sighs “My monetization Tommy!” Tommy carries on unbothered “He he defended the green bitch can you believe that?...But hey it doesn't matter I still won!”
He starts skipping along the prime path leaving a trial of its builder’s blood behind
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:32 PM
everyone stares at him in utter shock
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:33 PM
“What the fuck!” Punz lets out
Techno almost shames Punz for his cuss but stops just staring at the hand that’s bouncing back and forth behind Tommy as he skips… Foolish just stares
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:35 PM
Even Quackity is at loss of words because what the hell just happened?
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:37 PM
Punz pulls out his sword looking at Q then Tommy then the blood line leading to where Tommy just came from… presumably the owner… trying to decides who to kill
He wants to kill everyone but the more his eyes follow the path back where Tommy came he grows concerned
Punz and Techno make eye contact before both of them sprint down where Tommy just came leaving Foolish and Q stunned
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:40 PM
Q immediately tries to take his chance and get as far away as possible
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:40 PM
But Foolish is bigger and stronger and tackles Q to the ground
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:41 PM
Quackity tries to wiggle out from under him
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:42 PM
The blood makes him slippery and he manages to get free from Foolish sprinting away as fast as he can
Foolish stands there now also disgusting “Shit…”
He contemplates going after Q but he doesn’t feel like running, its not his fight anyways
He thinks about going towards where everyone else is but he almost doesn’t want to know what happened… He think’s he prefers a million of Bad’s pranks over whatever the hell this is…
So he heads home for a shower… not sure what else to do…
by the time Punz and Techno arrive they are pushing and shoving through everyone who’s leaving, noticing the shock on their faces… including a very disturbed Phil which is a rare find
Puffy bumps into Techno falling and stumbling, Techno helps her get back up he doesn’t miss the tears in her eyes… but he can’t place the emotion
Before you know it, Punz is standing with a sword pointed at your throat
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:49 PM
I raise my hands in surrender, one if the healing potions still held in them
"Hey, hey no need for that"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:50 PM
Techno walks in to the scene taking it in “Woah there Punz… I think she was helping him”
Punz just now takes the moment to looks down at the armless man below him… his hands are shaking as he holds to sword but he doesn’t put it down “Dream?…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:51 PM
I look at him thankful, nodding to the best of my abilities with the sword at my throat
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:52 PM
before getting a response he turns back to you forcing the sword closer to your neck to which you back up until you hit the wall
“You!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:53 PM
I want to say something but the sword under my chin makes me think twice. I look at Techno begging him for help with just my eyes
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:53 PM
Techno slowly walks in and Punz looks back at him. Techno raises his hands
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:54 PM
A single drop of blood drips down my neck where Punz´s sword digs lightly into the sensitive skin. I barely dare to breathe
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:54 PM
Techno steps closer, slowly with his hands raised “Hey man calm down… no need for that. I think there has been enough violence. Lets.. lets hear the woman out we don't know what happened here.”
Punz wavers his whole body shaking with anger or something else its hard to say
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:56 PM
I press myself more firmly against the wall, trying to lighten the pressure of the blade on my neck
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:56 PM
Techno glances at you worried “Chat this isn’t workin help me out here…”
Dream coughs “Punz put down the sword… there’s no need for that.”
Punz hesitates before dropping his sword
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 7:59 PM
I take a deep breath, massaging my throat where the blade cut it
"Thank you"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 7:59 PM
Punz turns to you and glares, but doesn’t say anything
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:00 PM
I bit my lip, feeling terribly small and unsure under his gaze. A part of me wants to return to tending to Dream's unhealed wounds but I feel like that´s not the best idea in the current situation
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:00 PM
Techno walks further in and crouches down next to Dream “Bruhhh you don’t look to good…”
Dream breathes back sarcastically “Really? I didn’t notice…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:02 PM
I feel terrible listening to them, this is my fault ...
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:03 PM
Punz finally turns away from you “I swear Dream if you’re about to utter the words in any form that you’re fine…”
Dream chuckles “I’m clearly not fine Punz they cut off by freaking arms!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:04 PM
I watch their exchange feeling out of place. I had no right to be here. I should leave but I wasn´t sure if I´ll be allowed to. Besides I wanted to make sure that Dream´s fine ...
Or well ... as fine as he can get
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:06 PM
Punz turns to you coldly “What the fuck happened here!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:07 PM
"I- I messed up" I said with tears in my eyes as the reality of what I let happened- what I caused came crashing down on me
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:08 PM
Punz grips his sword tighter “So it was you!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:08 PM
I felt like I couldn´t breathe as I slid down the wall not even noticing Punz´s reaction. I caused it. It was my fault- I felt nauseous
I began to tremble and press my palm against my mouth for the first time really realizing what I had done
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:10 PM
Dream spits up blood and responds “Technically it was Q-Quackity’s fault or was it Tommy’s and.. I don’t know I lost track… there were a lot of sharp objects to be fair…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:11 PM
I don´t even hear him as I keep spiraling deeper. I caused it, I caused it, I-
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:12 PM
Techno watches you but turns back to Dream as blood pools from his mouth… Techno hovers his hands over Dream wanting to help but not even sure where to start… Punz comes up beside him a potion in hand
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:12 PM
I hug my knees to my chest tightly, wishing it´d all just go away
A silent voice in my head berates me for the scene I'm making, I should be helping Dream not having a breakdown, stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid attention whore. I´m not the victim here so why am I crying?
I should do something - help, let Punz kill me, do it myself- anything would be fine but instead I just sat there unable to move, feeling helpless and exposed, wishing for a smaller cramped space to curl in and pretend that it´s not happening
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:15 PM
Dream starts coughing again, wheezing, sounding like his lungs are filling and Techno gets frantic “Your Honor, we need your help here! Teletubby is dying you can have your angsty panic attack later!”
Dream just watches Punz his eyes stone
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:16 PM
my head snaps up, I feel dizzy but I do my best to crawl over to them and offer the potion I still had
I try to form a coherent sentence but the words get caught up in my throat
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:18 PM
Techno pours the potion on his chest hoping it’ll fix it… but Dream still continues on struggling for air “It’s not working!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:18 PM
I end up only passing the potion before returning to my little ball again, hating myself for being such a wreck
My heart skips a beat in fear upon hearing him No, no, no, no, no I mumble not even realizing that I´m speaking out loud
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:19 PM
“Don’t die on me Teletubby! Not today… Chat will be very upset and I’ll lose so much money… please Dream...”
With you and Techno caught in frantic hysteria yall don't even notice the look Punz and Dream are sharing as if they are in their own little world
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:22 PM
I try to get my body to work again, I can´t be this selfish right? I can´t have a breakdown while someone is dying right next to me. I should have more potions right?
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:23 PM
“Punz, please tell me you have more potions man…” Techno pleads
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:24 PM
I dig around my pockets, certain that there were more potions somewhere, the cloud of panic and emotions I couldn´t be bothered to name at the moment clouding my mind
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:25 PM
Punz pulls one out slowly beside him, Techno doesn’t see it yet as Dream shakes his head looking into Punz begging with his eyes… “p—please Punz…” Dream pleads between gasps quieter than a whisper
Punz’s hand shakes holding the potion as he watches Dream suffocation on his own blood… wanting to step in but the sound of Dream’s words linger in his ears…
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:27 PM
I finally snap out of it at least enough to see Punz hesitating "Punz!"
He can´t, he can´t, he can´t-
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:28 PM
Techno turns to Punz and Punz turns to you… Punz just frowns not saying anything… Techno does though “What? Punz do you have a potion or not, man? He’s dying on us…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:29 PM
"Punz you- you can´t- you need to- he´s gonna die"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:31 PM
Punz with glossy eyes looks away from you back at Dream who’s closed his eyes scrunched up in pain “I know…”
Techno feels for a pulse panicking as Dream’s uneven breathing stops
Techno looks up at you and Punz “Guys I think… he’s”
“Dead…” Punz finishes darkly
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:33 PM
I stop breathing for a moment, simply forgetting how
the world narrows down on the single thought, playing on loop in my head: I killed him
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:34 PM
you all stare at his destroyed body as he slowly dissolves
only the blood remains like a snow angel where his body was
bitterness coating his tongue Punz reasons “It’s what you wanted right?… the death penalty remember?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:37 PM
I don´t hear him, I'm too lost in my head, drowning in the feeling of guilt
other thoughts raise to surface as I eye the shattered remains of a potion bottle, close to where Dream´s body used to lay
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:38 PM
Techno’s hands begin to shake as Chat calls in his head for blood
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:38 PM
It´d be fair if I just-
I reached for one of the larger shards
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:40 PM
Techno grips your hand before you get one “Bruhhh… that’s not what he would want”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:41 PM
I blink blankly at him. Why not? It´d be fair
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:42 PM
Techno stares back tightening his hold on your arm to the point of near bruising as he watches you
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:43 PM
I don´t mind the pain, it merely suits as the substitute to the pain I wanted to inflict on myself
I turn my head a little, looking at him through teary eyes, trying to understand why he won´t just let me do it "Why?" I manage to whisper
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:45 PM
Techno looks at you with what must be maybe pity maybe something else “That’s not justice ya know…”
“The Dream I know wouldn’t want that.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:46 PM
"But ..." I don´t understand it "I killed him ..."
the tears are now streaming down my face freely
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:47 PM
“Maybe… but its not up to you to decide.”
“You tried to help him… that has to stand for something...”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:47 PM
I just shake my head, my eyes already trailed on the glass again
I tried to help ... but he died anyway. I killed him. It doesn´t matter what I did, I still killed him
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:49 PM
Techno whispers to Chat “a little help here… I don’t know what to do guys…. I’m not good at this ‘people’ stuff…” he turns to Punz in desperation but Punz isn't looking just pacing back and forth stuck in his head
“Dream… He stopped Punz from killin ya, remember? He wouldn't do that if he wanted you harmed or dead…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:50 PM
"... he should´ve let me die"
"I deserve it, I killed him"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:53 PM
Techno shrugs “deserve is a strong word… and trust me I’ve done vengeance… but it—it never solves anything…”
“Dream’d say that’s unproductive and pointless…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:54 PM
I consider his words for a moment, still feeling detached from myself "What if I want to die?" I ask numbly
Finally, I managed to tear my eyes from the glass. Instead my gaze slids to Techno´s hand grabbing my wrist. I didn´t understand it: why try to stop me?
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:56 PM
“I mean…. I wouldn’t recommend that… but like I can't really stop you in the long run… but like can ya at least wait till tomorrow so I can spread out the deaths for Chat… they get very upset”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:57 PM
A little hysterical laugh escaped me "Yeah ... we wouldn´t want that." I replied, my voice edging on bitter
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 8:57 PM
Punz snorts
Techno watches you before slowly releasing your wrist making sure you don’t try anything
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 8:59 PM
I consider reaching for the glass anyway. Imagine dragging it across my forearm leaving angry red lines in it´s wake. I imagine bringing it to my veins, would it hurt more if I cut those?
Eventually I decide against it, letting my hands drop into my lap as I just blankly stare ahead, getting lost in my head again. It was the only other thing I could think of
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:01 PM
Punz finally stops pacing “Does anyone have a flint and steel or some form of fire?”
Techno looks up at him “why planning on blowing some shit up because I’m down?”
“There’s a country just screaming to be blown to bits…” he smirks turning to you “what cha think, sounds fun right?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:03 PM
I don´t hear him, staring ahead blankly, basically dissociating at this point
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:04 PM
“No no no… god, not that… I mean yea it does but… anyways that's not the point. Do you have a fire source or not?” Punz replies exasperated
Techno searchers his inventory “oh yea sure thing dude, I got a… oh wait did you say fire?”
“Well dang all I got are buttons to light TNT but I don’t suppose that works for ya huh…”
Punz turns to you desperately “please tell be you have some burning something…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:08 PM
Blinks slowly trying to process what he wants from me "I ... m-maybe?"
However I make no move to look for a flint or steel, not really realizing that I should
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:10 PM
Punz moves over to you and shakes your shoulders frantically not meaning to be rough but it is a little jostling
Techno speaks up trying to calm Punz “Punz calm down you’re scaring her. Chill out dude.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:12 PM
my eyes snap to Techno trying to piece together the situation. It shouldn´t be as hard as it was
but I was still feeling floaty and lightheaded, vaguely I realized they wanted something from me but I struggled to remember what.
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:15 PM
“I can’t chill out, Techno!… Dream is… He’s dead! … and I need…. Something to burn with….please”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:16 PM
Burn? ... I could burn myself ... maybe Techno wouldn´t mind that like the glass ... the thought was unexpected but not really unwelcome, I dig through my pockets for a flint and steel.
I find it in a matter of seconds
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:21 PM
Punz looks like he’s going to explode “Well? Did you fucking find anything?”
Techno-“Come on man… Chats innocent ears…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:24 PM
I hold up the flint and steal, crooking my head a little, is that what they want?
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:25 PM
Punz practically rips it out of your hands “Yes! Yes thank you”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:25 PM
I jerk a little at how rough he is, I didn´t expect it and I feel confused. Why did he take it?
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:28 PM
Punz pulls out a book, scribbles on it, dips his fingers into Dream’s blood on the floor and wipes it on the page. He uses the flint and steel to start a fire and drops the book in… it’s dust within seconds and the fire turns green before going out…
Techno doesn’t even process what happened before Dream’s laying on the ground under him again
Dream turns to Punz smiling “Long time no see buddy!”
Punz slides to the ground and wraps Dream in an awkward hug… Dream hugs back (with his newly back arms) “It worked. It worked. Oh god I was worried”
Techno stares shocked “Bruhhhhh… you’re a necromancer too?”
Dream takes a moment to take in his surroundings, Punz still clinging to him… His eyes narrow at you and Techno “Punz…… what the hell did you do?… come one, you were supposed to wait till they left.”
Punz finally lets go with glossy eyes meets Dream’s green ones “I know I just.. I didn’t want you to have to wait long and… I…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:35 PM
I stare at them not able to really process what I'm seeing (also kinda wanting my flint and steel back)
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:35 PM
Punz sniffs hugging Dream again.. Dream just huffs “idiot.”
“Sorry dude..” Punz finally settles on actually pulling away from the hug this time
Techno turns to you “Did you know he had the revive book? Like bruhhh I want one.”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:38 PM
I shake my head slowly, not even sure if I'm answering correctly. I'm not in the mental state to process this right now
A part of me wonders if I lost it completely and am just hallucinating at this point
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:40 PM
Dream moves trying to stand, swaying a bit before steadying himself… Punz just watches not getting involved even though he really wants to….Techno just sits there and tries to process
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:40 PM
I sit next to Tech trying to process as well
it´s not everyday I see someone raise from the dead
"D-Dream?" I breathe out eventually
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:43 PM
“Yes Si——…. Oh you’re still here…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:44 PM
the most intelligible answer I managed was a single nod. I was, indeed, still here
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:45 PM
Dream clears his throat “If it pleases the court, Your Honor, may I…. leave?…. You aren’t going to like call Sam in here…. Right?”
Punz growls going for his sword “She better not”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:46 PM
I finally snap out of my shock a little "N-No! I- I won´t ..."
I didn´t even think about it. I would never ...
Not after ...
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:47 PM
Dream eyes you looking for lies but finds none… he’d be lying if he didn't say he was surprised…. But you tended to surprise him so it made sense
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:50 PM
I stand up, swaying on my feet and almost falling immediately. However I manage to support myself against a wall. It takes a moment for my head to stop spinning but eventually I look at the 3 of them with an unsure look. "I-" I have to clear my throat before continuing "I think you should go, before someone shows up ..."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:51 PM
Techno looks concerned and ready to catch “and you?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:51 PM
"I-" I looked around the cell, unsure "I think I´ll stay here for a bit longer ..."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:52 PM
“I mean no offense but we can handle ourselves… well besides Teletubby who looks like a walking corpse. Well I guess he is a walking corpse huh…”
Techno looks at the glass and Dream follows his look frowning….
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:53 PM
I nod, looking at Dream with concern "You should get him out of here"
I don´t notice where the two of them are looking, or at least I pretend not to
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 9:55 PM
Punz looks at the two of them oblivious “Guys lets go!…”
Techno and Dream stay staring at you with concern “Your honor, I believe I would like to sue Tommy over the property of my arm… so ya know I need a judge” Dream smirks pleading with his look
“You have your arm! Dude you can’t sue for that you already got one!…” Techno laughs
Dream snorts under his breath “idiot” then rebuttals “Fine fine how bout for emotional damage… or assault?...you know because he did kinda kill me to be fair…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 9:59 PM
"I ... I'm sorry, the proceedings are over today" I chew on my lip not liking the fact that they´re staying. Why weren´t they going already? "You ... you can- your request can be processed tomorrow?"
I tried not to think about that last part. It wasn´t Tommy who killed him, it was me
he was here now, breathing and alive ... still I couldn´t forgive myself. The glass looked even more welcoming than before and it was scary in a way. I was no longer being hysteric, I shouldn´t have those thoughts anymore
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:01 PM
Punz joins in “Your honor, who do I have to sue to burn Las Nevadas to the ground?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:01 PM
"... try Quackity?"
I offered weakly not really sure at the moment
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:02 PM
Techno and Dream join in at the same time “so to court?”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:02 PM
the law would pretty much blame it all on Dream, I wasn´t even sure if any of these cases would be possible to push through
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:02 PM
Dream offered his hand… Techno pushes him aside and offers his
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:03 PM
"I-I already said ... you need to come tomorrow ..."
I shied away from their hands, why were they doing this? They should just leave me here and go ...
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:04 PM
“Tomorrow… I have to let them live till tomorrow?…” Techno asks outraged
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:05 PM
"I mean ... you can do it without the court?" I offered. It was how most of the things on the server were dealt with anyway ...
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:05 PM
Dream snorts “but what about the laws…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:06 PM
"... you know how they work ... you wouldn´t win at court anyway ..." tears sprinted to my eyes again
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:06 PM
“Eghhh maybe….” Dream responds a calculating look in his eyes
“Bruuhhhh…”
“Chat… really wants someone dead now… and Teletubby would be the easiest but he also just came back so like… Tommy sounds good…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:06 PM
I laughed a little but it wasn´t happy laugh "So suddenly they want more death huh?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:07 PM
“Always.”
Techno sighs… “Chat always wants blood… “ he gestures to the floor “you’d think this would be enough…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:08 PM
Despite knowing better, I couldn´t help snapping back at him "That´s not what you said 10 minutes ago."
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:08 PM
Techno looks at you “Look they didn’t want your blood ok?… they were all crying for Dream  and calling me TechnoSoft but I couldn’t deal with them crying for you too….”
Dream turns to you “Wait what?!”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:10 PM
"Why would they cry for me?"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:11 PM
Techno sighs his headache getting worse “They like you…”
Punz off in the corner wonders -Do they like me?
Dream laughs “Well that’s unfortunate if Chat likes you it usually means you’ll be a wanted criminal… that's ironic…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:13 PM
"What?! Why?!" I didn´t understand what I could possibly do to make them like me
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:14 PM
"Well ... I'm letting you go ... that will probably mark me a criminal in many people´s book"
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:14 PM
Techno shrugs “How should I know?… The shits liked Tommy too at one point so ya know their judge of character is questionable…”
Dream-“true”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:16 PM
I nodded. That seemed about right. It was probably just a phase and Chat will grow out of it soon. Hopefully ... I really wasn´t someone they should like
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:16 PM
“Guess that means you gotta come with us for like protection…” Techno adds
Dream finally processing Techno’s words “Hey what the hell is wrong with you?!… Chat likes me too you idiot.”
Punz snorts, Dream glares at him and Techno chuckles
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:18 PM
I snicker at that but I´m still a little hesitant to go with them ... Punz would probably stab me if I went anyway ... which actually might not be the worst outcome ... I probably shouldn´t think like that
still I couldn't imagine why they´d want me to come with them. Surely not to protect me ... but maybe I should go ... I owed it to them no? If they wanted to execute me ... well ...
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:20 PM
“Ya know you do have a point though, Dream… considerin you were like tortured to death a minute ago… whoever Chat likes doesn’t have a good time…”
“See exactly why you have to come with us.” Dream adds
he stares at the remains of the pool of blood on the floor
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:21 PM
I follow his gaze, feeling the shame nag at me again, it never went away to begin with
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:22 PM
“Wait… are you saying this is Chat's fault?” Punz poses curiously Dream glares at him unamused
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:22 PM
I chuckle a little
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:22 PM
Techno shrugs “How should I know?”
“Look Dream is the one who looks like a god, ask him about the millions of children in my head…”
Error-DreamWasFound — Yesterday at 10:24 PM
"Millions of what? ... and they demand blood on a daily basis?" I´m slightly concerned about Chat's mental state now
Bleue_Flora — Yesterday at 10:26 PM
“Well they aren’t all children… even if they act as mature as them… but yea…”
“Also chat would like to say umm ‘F you they are perfectly sane thank you very much’… I wouldn’t believe them”
{The end... aka I fell asleep}
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cittycatplay · 11 months ago
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Mmmm
Enemies to lovers?
Redemption arc?
Corruption arc?
Modern aus?
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A++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
B+
C
That's all!
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ancientmyrddin · 2 years ago
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mmmm having corruption arc ideas
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ruumirmir · 1 year ago
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HEHHEHGHEHGHHHEHEHGH HOW COULD I NOT GET THE HOUSE OF WOLVES REFERENCE that was THE roman empire that got me So invested into the harbingers. ESPECIALLY PANTALONE cause the umbrella + gun combo was Doing it for me. Ladies first ig cause Navia is slaying that gunbrella now >︿<
J Michael Tatum agenda coming in with the STEEL CHAIR in the holy year of 2024 cause the new black butler season just dropped OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH wdym sebastian is wearing GLASSES with the HANGING METAL CHAINS as well. I will die perhaps. Also im breaking my silence today: I think Pantalone's japanese VA was the biggest L of the century. Naur..... why is it that deep.... Threw me off so hard.... IM going to rank the VA's in order of how i like them:
English (beautiful. Evil boy. Cunning. Your typical (^_^) faced anime snake. perhaps a little mischievious. Teehee. Fucking kills you <3)
Chinese (your shady coworker. But hes fairly chill. You guys do your accounting maths homework over a cup of coffee sometimes)
Russian (its giving Zhenya from Codename Anastasia. I need to run far away as possible. Sexy 10/10 tho)
Korean (feels like hes mentally spitting on my face. okay damn egocentric ceo boss I wont ever breathe the same air as you please forgive me)
Latin Spanish (yeah i can see it. Kinda. Might have to squint tho.)
French (this is what the commedia del arte pantalone would sound like. VA caster was nawt aware of the gacha game design changes however)
Indonesian (im calling a trusted adult. Speaking like he wants to steal christmas)
JAPANESE (Brother eugh (σ`д′)σ )
movnig on- MILDLY DEGRADING PANTALONE down on my knees im going 🧎‍♂️🧎‍♂️🧎‍♂️🧎‍♂️ nothing rivals a "good boy" imo but MMMM. maybe. JUST A LITTLE. very small amount to keep reader on his toes. We wouldn't want to make the Loverboy cry- Also my small HC that earlier on in Pantalone's years of fatui work,, he had a much shorter temper that blew up in places. inexperienced with ambitions and was much more OPEN with his emotions. But now as we're seeing it- mellowed out over the years. Devleoped a GOOD poker face,, a businessman is nothing without one after all. Does this make sense-
Ough Pantalone with that aura of cocksure appreciation and disapproval to prod and poke loverboy off his rails of fear and reservations to grow into his own beautiful and deadly UNIT . Which the future harbinger would love to keep under his thumb. "Im doing whats best for you" kinda thing.
Thats the very basic spoiler-free skeleton principle of what drives Hannibal- if you've seen/read it by now ...(* ̄0 ̄)ノ Hannibal recognizes the deep buried down potential of Will Graham becoming someone like him and pushes him towards it. Hannibal doesn't DO the corruption arc,, just winds up the key on the toy's back and watches it go. Tips one domino to send it tumbling all on its own. Thats how pantalone would operate i think. Its never NOT a game of chess for him.
Ririto brain fart moment?? 😭😂 its ok bb i forgive your big silly happens to the best of us </3 Who did you think to write as the Anon source? Some chara we already know? 👁👁
OKAY that was outta NOWHERE- dont worry,, like father like son- hes gonna be riding THE fatui dick during his career at somepoint too- WOOAAHHHH who said that . Hilarious how this is suposed to be a Male reader but i wouldnt mind self inserting as pantalone cause a Loverboy whimpering audio isnt something I'd pass up.
NOW onto the main event: I've done some thinking for the small revisions/ fitting that oneshot into the timeline,, Reader is a born and raised Snezhnayan,, Pantalone is born in Liyue (pry this hc from my dead HANDS hoyoverse) but he's renounced that nation and its god for never lending a helping hand,, and now resides in Snezhnaya under the Tsaritza. Based on Arlecchino's jab at him in the Lazzo trailer,, Im assuming Pantalone RARELY ever travels out of snezhnaya.
For this,, let's just say: This is Loverboy's 3rd year of service, where all fatuus are mandated to carry out orders abroad. Work experience and what not. Maybe 4-ish months into working bank in liyue, reader is vibing- but orders come from Pantalone,, a handful of fatui are expected to dig up dirt on a Liyuean man's business and report back to Pantalone. It's CEO boss would be meeting Pantaloone soon. Small group project. No biggie. Loverboy isn't stupid. The fatui didnt make it to where they are WITHOUT underhanded ethics.
So he goes. Back to snezhnaya in his group with trade secrets in tow. The meeting goes terribly. bullets and blades fly. So does loverboy and pantalone out a window. A hydro vision is granted. Pantalone does the kill FOR reader. You know how it goes-
Im thinking that this mission with loverboy's first blood can be the follow up Part 2 of that. Pantalone gets to: 1. tie up loose ends with any witnesses that got away. Can't have the scandal of a failed endeavor run thorugh the streets. 2. take his relatively naive subordinate for a spin. He simply Had to see what made Celestia grant their authority unto loverboy. And not him
Afterwards when all is said and done, man killed and Loverboy dismissed back to liyue to finish his final year of duty,, pantalone can rest a little easy knowing reader is on the right track for now,, afterall, there's only so much he can do as a High ranked fatui Officiant. He has his own goals to conquer for now,, maybe he'll get back to his loverboy pet project After becoming a Harbinger.
Good things come to those who wait. It's a matter of how long. I think pantalone can already guess that reader would quit the fatui business after his mandated 3 years. Thats fine with him tho. He know's Loverboy would come right back.
BONUS ANNOTATED THOUGHT:
His smile doesn't falter. "Speak up. When we want things, we ask for them directly. Do I make myself clear?" You hastily nod as best you can. 
plus this part from my other req:
Regrator is 28, and then 29, and then 30. And his offer is finally accepted afterall, because he needs to resist smirking at the one who came crawling back.
OOoOOoOOoooOOOoO what if this was the character development of what pantalone said to him. After the time skip of many years, Loverboy returns with a sharp glint in his eyes, stalks right up to Pantalone with his gaze held firmly and asks- if not, downright demands to avail that extended offer now. Loverboy does want (him) it now.
ok thats enough yapping for now i fear. Goodnight everypony-
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Ok lets go SImply reblogging your oneshot for my req isn't enough i need to analyze and annotate the entire thing like a literature professor and tell you Everything. (✿◡‿◡)
pantalone might be ooc
He's not!!!!!! by which i think this is fairly a Really Good portrayal of the guy considering the 5 sentences we know about him. He's strict!!! frankly a little scary!! And also chill and positive about loverboy!! But it felt Just Right!!!! ( •̀ ω •́ )✧
descriptions of blood
description so good i might as well have killed that man myself
...pretend that his lore has a spot where this fits perfectly
I think i can make it fit!! would you be cool with making minor changes if so?
"You're very good at what you do."
Imagining the same voice as sebastian michaelis saying this with the sexiest buttersmooth voice is eviscerating me. Very self-indulgent but praise kinks will always slay so hard.
...on the verge of stabbing him a moment ago. 
This,, and the small thing i wrote about loverboy launching them both out the window to escape an onslaught of assassins in my other req. get you a ship where one of them has completely normal knee-jerk reactions to kill the other <3
...as he crushes their hand beneath his shoe without mercy
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Fatui Harbingers - House of Wolves - KIERU 0:15
...Instead, Pantalone looks unfazed by it all, stopping as he reaches the other side of you, free of most of the blood. He greets you with a knowing smile as he usually does.
hey ririto this is so ominous and eerie for some reason not known to me. Just the backdrop of grey and snow and probably a gruesome corpse right next to loverboy and Pantalone has a silent smile through everything. Delicious sentence 10/10.
"I knew making you a banker was a good idea,"
THIS IS SO. The confidence and quite calm assurance that pantalone says this with is SO. You'd never be sure whether to lean into it and let out a sigh of relief,, o r back up further becuase it sounds so good but all in the wrong ways.
...thumb brushing across your bottom lip slicked with blood.
fellas is it professional to feed double edged words of honey to your young inexperienced subordinate while kneeling in front of his battered and bruised self who killed someone for you,, and run a gloved thumb across his blood soaked lip. ( ͡• ͜ʖ ͡• )
"Who knew you had so many other talents,"
you are infusing these dialouges with crack cocaine giggling kicking my feet while being slightly concerned because Sir. What do you mean by that.
"Ah ah," he says, a harshness seeping into even just that sound. "Stay."  You stay put,
thank you for making loverboy so Ouppy.
"Lord Harbinger," you try to say
yes,, this could be a minor thing to adjust: i think we could actually fit this oneshot somewhere AFTER he gets his vision,, and BEFORE Pantalone becomes the Harbinger Regrator. Can be a valid reason for Pantalone to see that reader failed to kill the assassin from their shitty negotiation meeting,, and wanting to newly test him again after he had his vision + ambitions awakened to see if he can get past the fear of killing NOW. (Even then,, maybe due to inexperience/unfamiliarity of using visions, reader didn't think to raise his advantage of supernatural powers against another visionless man in this scenario.)
I'd think his first kill was one of the factors that caused him to leave after his 3year duty, not sticking around for Pantalone's promotion to Regrator.
"You are much like your father."
Top 10 things Not to say to someone with daddy issues-
...they're as wet behind the ears as you are.
Dear diary, Today i learned a new speech of expression
...Pantalone's hand that rests on your chin moves... "Now, try again. Dear banker, whatever do you mean?" 
this whole paragraph. What on earth do you mean 'ooc pantalone'. This is the MOST pantalone thing you could've written. Strict and intimidating about improving reader's meek attitude. a Push in the right direction.
"Is this a test?" you manage, words muffled by the way he squishes your face like putty beneath his fingers.
(thank you for making loverboy so Ouppy) x2
...and you know who, regardless of how 'anonymous' that source may have been in his words.
I MAY BE STUPID. (;´д`)ゞ I CANT TELL. who you are hinting towards 😭😭
"Hold this," he adds, an unnervingly tender instruction for the way he was just behaving. 
There he is. its reminding me of: the same pantalone that washed reader with a clock in my very first req to you.
...looking probably about as pathetic as you think you do.
POV: You're Pantalone looking down at Loverboy.
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I forgot how much of a bug-eyed wet dog loverboy is before his time-skip "character development" so to say. Thanks i love him.
"next time someone approaches you from behind, don't wait to stab them. Don't reach for your wet knife with your wet hands, either. Both of those things will get you killed."
I think pantalone is entirely having too much fun with observing Loverboy try climbing the ropes to how REAL fatuus run business.
"Come now. You want to go home and back to Liyue, don't you? I'm tired of this cold." 
Σ(っ °Д °;)っ back to liyue??? Loverboy is Liyuean??? pantalone stays in liyue??? I ALWAYS THOUGHT arlecchino called pantalone a bitch in Signora's funeral for "never leaving the comfort of his homeland?" Whuh-?
ALL IN ALL,, CLOSING THOGUHTS,, GOOD FOOD RIRITO DINNER HAS BEEN SERVED, ATE, AND LICKED CLEAN 10/10 ILY
I GOTT THIS JUST BEFORE I WENT TO SLEEP AND ONLY JUST GOT THE TIME TO ANSWER IT BUT I KNEWWW YOU WOULD GET THE HOUSE OF WOLVES REFERENCE
That is true actually and I realised after I posted it that like, wtf is in character for him?? 😭 he's said like two things and while I have memorised those things they're not a lot to go off but I'm glad you enjoy him (ノ´▽`)ノ♪
Also if you can make it fit, feel free ☆(≧∀≦*)ノ I sorta only had a vague idea of where it might go, but at that point in time, loverboy works abroad in the Northland Bank. I'll also throw in that he travelled there for that job and unfortunately does not come from Liyue 😔 (unless he's supposed to?? I got the impression he was from Snezhnaya) it was more a "I bet you'd love to be back at a desk job rn" or something to that effect, loverboy is going back to the bank once things are settled where he belongs but Pantalone isn't going with him (hence why they're in Snezhnaya when this happenscause I also interpret at as him not liking to leave Liyue)
I'm so glad the J Michael Tatum love never stops but also you're so right praise kinks absolutely do. I also noticed that them trying to kill each other is like, a repeated theme so far 😭⁉️ LIKE WHEN PANTALONE WENT TO FIND HIM LAST ONESHOT HE WAS GONNA KILL THAT FUCKER
Confident possibly mildly degrading Pantalone is literally my favourite thing, like I chew on him. I chew on him being unnervingly calm because what would he have in the eyes of a wet mop boy besides an unwavering poker face. Get yourself a man who uses the blood of your enemies like your lipstick and knows he made good choices stationing you at his shady probably money laundering black hole of debt he calls a bank
Yk I agree actually I was trying to figure the timeline out in my head and realised it would've made more sense to happen before he was a Harbinger so I agree with this revision that actually makes it fit the lore and if I ever decide to make it a longer multichapter fic I'll definitely fix that 💀 t'was a victim of laziness
YES YES THIS Pantalone basically shaping him up so he doesn't literally die and being strict with it get so him. He'll prompt him to say it again but won't let it slide because that behaviour isn't going to be beneficial, especially not with someone who may be working under him long-term
I went back to read the part about the anonymous source line came from, and I think I figured out what happened here, so allow me to explain  (;゚д゚)   Ok so, it has a bit to do with the weird way I wrote this because when I said I wrote this on the train that was half a lie. I wrote some of it on the train and the rest at the library where I also edited what I already had because the spelling mistakes were atrocious. I did write down who it was but cut it when I decided it cluttered the story a bit which retrospectively was also a mistake because I didn't think about the fact it would seem like I was hinting at something at the time (゚▽゚*) the shorter, boring answer is that there's no one Ririto did a big silly and cut context in the chaotic editing this suffered
LMAO NOT THE CLOCK AGAIN
I love him the wet mop boy. I was like I want him to be at least a lil pathetic rn because his concerns are completely different. He's thinking about how to not die, and how much he misses his mom and his much fatui dick his dad must've been riding before death to think this career path was worth it (slash JOKING but he is still wondering why his father would have done this job willingly) that and I think men who whimper are cute thanks for coming to my Ted talk
HE IS ENJOYING IT and I love it sm
Hehe I am glad to know you haven't gone hungry today (^o^) and such high ratings for the banker and loverboy
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I think the creepy fey stone is starting to effect Imogen…
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for some reason seeing prowler like this reminds me of scp-682, thanks mun for putting that mental image inside my mind
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OH BELIEVE ME YOU’LL BE SEEING A LOT MORE OF THAT VERY SOON AT THIS RATE-
Prowler roars loudly and clocks aoi kao right in the mouth, causing the inner demon to back away, snarling slightly and coughing, before it could recover. prowler unleashes a powerful beam, knocking it backwards towards the ground as he roared, still changing and forming as he snarls, rushing towards aoi kao as he clamps his jaws around his neck, the inner demon roaring out loudly and steaming as it felt it’s energy getting drained slowly, aoi kao roared out in pain as it kept punching prowler, and punching and punching, it didint want to be lose like this! it screeches out loudly before clamping it’s own jaws onto prowler’s neck, before releasing a exploding shockwave, knocking prowler back, before the demon had time to react further to that, aoi kao roared out loudly before firing out a massive magma colored looking beam, with the full intent of burning prowler to nothing but dust and ashes, prowler snarls in surprise at being engulfed, before roaring loudly as his aura bursts, the inner demon raises a eyebrow, what was happening now?! the entire aura bursts with a huge energy, as waves of heat and flames sprayed everywhere as his aura bursts rapidly, roaring loudly as his form changes once again, as the excess ink and stuff were sprayed onto the corrupted demon, who twitches slightly, aoi kao roared as he crashes into a mountain due to the impact, alpha and susan were shielded by the blast thanks to lizzie, she uncovered them as soon as the smoke cleared as alpha coughs a bit, rubbing his glowing eye as he and susan looked onward on the changes that happened to prowler. one thing for sure. he looked way more taller than usual. and his colors were slightly off. along with the fact his gills had now been replaced by extra eyes.... “hmpt.... well.... this is new......”
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his overloaded form no longer looked anything like it once was, thrashing around his two tails as he stood in a upright bipedal hunched over manner, growling and hissing as his body steams with magma leaking out of cracks around his body, steaming and wisping as he stares at where aoi kao crashed into, growling and slowly walking over, unaware at first that the corrupted demon behind him was slowly waking back up. prowler stares at the rubble as he snorted, before raising his claws as they glowed purple “time to end this little game it’s doing....” he says quietly but before he could even bring it down, the inner demon bursts out of the rubble, roaring and nearly slamming prowler away to the ground, cracking and steaming as the damaged messed up monster roars loudly in anger at prowler “YYYOUUUUU!” it roared louder as it’s aura spiraled “YOU FUCKING SON OF A BITCH!!!!”
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“LOOK WHAT THE FUCK YOU’VE DONE TO ME!!! YOUR RUINING MY FORM!!!” it roared out in rage and anger, it’s body cracking and steaming as it looked almost similar to the other form the corrupted prowler took before it’s shell was shedded. prowler grunts, getting up a bit as he snarls and snorts “that’s your own fault, bitch.” he says, grunting as aoi kao twitches it’s many eyes. before screeching out loudly “IM GOING TO ENJOY TEARING YOU APART BEFORE TAKING YOUR BODY!!!” it said as it roared and charges towards prowler, the demon himself huffed and side-stepped, punching the inner demon straight in the gut as it screeches out loudly, before being sent flying towards the ground, it groaned, staggering up but in a more quadurple fashion since it’s original form was starting to break apart. the weight of all that thick ink was making it’s movements more slower and broken, coughing as it staggered, glaring at prowler as purple sparks pierced out of it, crystals sprouting around it’s body as it’s eyes widened “WHAT.... YOU... YOU WOULD DARE USE YOUR STATUE ABILITY AGAINST ME?!?! YOU FUCKING PRICK!!” it screeches out loudly right about to go beserk and unleash it’s last resort attack, before getting punched away quite a distance by a familiar screech, prowler looks over, blinking in surprise as aoi kao groaned, twitching and staggering up, coughing up ink before it’s eyes widened “.....COME... THE... HELL.... ON...”
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The Corrupted Prowler looked less monstrous than usual. but then again that could just be due for most of it’s excess features and parts being eaten up by the other. but even then it was still the same height as before, scoffing and grunting, before screeching loudly at aoi kao, lumbering towards it in a gorilla like fashion as the inner demon coughs and stumbles, hissing and glaring “YOUR REALLY BEGINNING TO MAKE THIS SO DIFFICULT..... URGH...” it coughs, stumbling and holding it’s stomach, seeing crystals sprouting and covering chunks and parts of his body. he grunts, coughing as he staggers a bit as prowler watches. he grunts. he cant let the other one get to it first. he has to be the one to merge them all back together.... his hands and body glows a faint purple hue as his aura glowed slightly, his eyes pink and red as he stares, his hands sparking and glowing as he grunted “only got one shot at this..... please let this work.....” he says to himself, before starting to run over, emitting a loud roar as the others watches in both confusion and awe.
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Mmmm, what was the whole deal with the 5 minutes corruption arc of Gem on the Actor AU? xD
It was a plotline that they had to cut out due to time limits. The writers were overly ambitious and didn't realize how quickly their finale was coming up so they had to rush to resolve a couple things.
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cubedcoffeecake-33 · 2 months ago
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I see where you're coming from!
I interpreted the scene differently, tbh. I didn't feel like Sam was being pushed against that hard. maybe just me hearing what I wanted to hear lol but I think it's very in character for Sam to refuse to cooperate with a team put together and operating by a known shady crook of the govt. presuming Bucky and Sam are as close as we assume from TFATWS and CA:BNW, Sam was probably aware of Bucky's motivations for running for Congress and of the situation with impeachment against Valentina.
...then Bucky gets strong armed into being part of a state-sanctioned group of Avengers in a way that let's Valentina get off scot free. her power limited in ways, as Yelena pointed out, yes, but she's certainly not impeached and behind bars. and consider what happened to Bucky's Congress friend and everyone else who'd been opposing Valentina. by cooperating and becoming the New Avengers, they did effectively endorse the corruption.
and I honestly think it makes sense for Bucky's characterization to do that!! I rambled about it somewhere already but clearly Bucky had been trying to do good by playing within the rules of the system, and now he has the system wanting him to help by superheroing. given his fears and insecurities and general position in life, I think it makes sense that he thinks that doing this is for the best. he's trying to do the right thing by cooperating.
Sam tried that and we all saw how it went in BNW. so I think this is a really understandable divide for them to be at a cold standstill over: from Sam's POV, the world can't afford for the superheroes to be payrolled and following orders from the rich and influential, and that's exactly what Bucky has agreed to do. Sam was already putting together an independent team and he's just staying on course.
also, while I love the potential for character growth for all of them bc of this, I definitely see the Thunderbolts at the end as having made it to the stage where they all Do Good Things now but not all of them having reached the point of doing the good things for good reasons. true heroism ala the original Avengers is doing the right thing selflessly, with the focus and all the heart going into wanting to help others. I get the impression that most of the Thunderbolts in that end credit scene are more on the vibe of needing for their lives to not fall apart again so this needs to work goddammit - and just mmmm the potential for a next step in their character arcs where they grow and learn healthier mental habits and begin to shift their motivations for doing the good things from fear of failure to an honest desire to help others. yes plz.
but in light of that i felt like their criticism of Sam and his team spoke favorably of the character of Sam and his team, since we hear through this conversation that the Thunderbolts do Not have their shit together and their primary concern is preserving their own status. I love all of the characters and I love them together, but at the end of the day they are currently a publicity stunt of a corrupt faction of the govt and it sounds like they may care more about their negative press bc of the possible implications for their job security than they care about helping people.
Sam's priorities are in the opposite order, and I think it's that that makes the convo at the end not sound critical to me. the Thunderbolts kinda ARE fake heroes. I don't think the characters would even all get along on the same team - I think the Thunderbolts have a great Runaways kinda team dynamic that would be beautiful if they didn't have to deal with the pressure to perform.
and so lastly. (i am tired and this has no structure sry 😭) Bucky is trying to be the good experienced mentor of the team and help keep everybody on the path toward doing good things for good reasons, but they are currently mostly at the good things for selfish reasons stage AND they're sanctioned by a corrupt govt, so he's in a bad position. and Sam is looking at this team of people who aren't exactly heroes yet, who have a history of doing bad things for bad people, and seeing that they are agreeing to be state sponsored by bad people, and he's not okay with that and not happy that Bucky is going along with it. I think Sam would be worried for Bucky, and thinking that Bucky's going to backslide, and feeling like this shows Bucky already has, and that's not unreasonable of him. I think it makes sense that they's talk it out, Bucky would insist this is the right thing to do, and Sam would refuse to accept that leading a team under the sanction of bad people is a good idea. Bucky's playing with fire, even though his motivations are good.
I’ve seen Thunderbolts*! Here’s my full, SPOILER review!
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OKAY.
Buckle up, i’ve got a lot of thoughts and a lot of word space.
Well, that was a pretty great movie! If you’ve seen my non spoiler review you’ll know I gave it an 8/10, and rightfully so. The first hour, hour and a half of the movie eats the rest of the movie up and if the ending had been as good as the first acts I would give it a 10/10. it kind of felt underwhelming and almost like it was a “power of friendship” moment—though none of these people are really friends, so maybe that’s the point.
First of all—Yelena and Bob. God, they were amazing, I loved the dynamic between them and it was really interesting to see the whole void thing come into play with how they felt about life. It was great.
The first scene when Taskmaster, Yelena, Walker, and Ghost all meet—that was amazing. my jaw DROPPED when Taskmaster got shot in the head, I wasn’t expecting her to get taken out so soon or by one of the Thunderbolts. I mean, we all knew she was a goner but I really wanted to see a little more of her. I liked her suit a lot!
Obviously, I have to talk about Bucky. I have two small complaints—one, I wish we saw a little more of him. Considering he was listed second in the credits I think he was a little underused and slightly nerfed but honestly not by much. to go off that, I WANTED TO SEE HIM IN THE VOID! the only thing we got was a nod to the fact that while he was in his void searching for yelena and bob (“i have a great past, so I’m fine” that whole thing) he obviously saw something to do with the winter soldier. call me crazy but i saw blue lights in the room behind him that he crashed through from and it gave very much cacw winter soldier flashback vibes. and i WANTED TO SEE THAT! i wished we could have seen more than yelena, bob, valentina, and walkers voids.
Oh, valentina. she was so horribly great, i was so ready for the thunderbolts to rock her shit but then she turned it around and called them the new avengers. oh i hate her so much they did so good. her assistant was kinda slay too but eh!
NOW ONTO MY COMPLAINT AS A SAMBUCKY ENTHUSIAST—WHY TF DID WE ONLY GET A MENTION OF SAM? AND IN THE POST CREDITS? Honestly, i find it crazier that sam and bucky talked off screen and they didn’t even show us. and that APPARENTLY the conversation didn’t go over well, and now sam is suing them… guys we might actually be in the sambucky divorce era im gonna crash out. can they just kiss hug it out and get over it. and considering how close they got in tfatws and we saw them talking the cabnw i just really liked their dynamic and how happy they seemed as friends and now that’s just gone (but it is funny that sam is suing bucky and co). although, it will make for an interesting dynamic come doomsday, which makes me nervous considering that bucky’s time in the mcu is coming ever so closer to an end… (someone start recommending me bucky fics NYOW)
honestly, i kind of don’t like the whole new avengers thing. i kind of wanted them to stay as the thunderbolts, as dumb as it might be. I don’t like valentina though and I really wanted them to kick her ass. it was a funny credits sequence tho, with the “new avengers? nope!” love that they’re still universally hated i guess.
BUT OH MY GOD I WAS GONNA GO FERAL FOR BUCKY IN THE POST CREDITS. GOOD LORD HE LOOKED FINE. OH EM GEE, HIS HAIR? OH THE WAVES. SOMEONE TAUGHT OUR BOY ABOUT CONDITIONER AGAIN AND HE LOOKED INCREDIBLE. PLEASE LET HIM HAVE THAT HAIR IN DOOMSDAY AND PLEASE DONT LET HIM DIE.
okay, i’ve gotten past how much i love bucky and must move on to the Other Things that happened.
now, about the INSANE DROP IN THE CREDITS? the second i saw the “fantastic four: first steps theme” in the music credits i was like oh it’s so over. AND THE SHIP? oh dude their world is so cooked, doomsday is gonna be fire AND ARE WE GONNA SEE THE THUNDERBOLTS (new avengers) AT THE END OF FFFS? ARE WE GONNA SEE THE AVENGERS AND THE NEW AVENGERS WITH THE FANTASTIC FOUR? see, that’s why thunderbolts* was a good movie! it’s got me actually planning to see Fantastic Four: First Steps because i NEED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!! i’m hooked!!!
Walkers one liners were great and even though i hate him i kinda feel for him. Yelena and Bob and Red Guardian were stand-outs; I LOVE BOB! and red guardians entrance was incredible as well, along with the car chase scene up to bucky rocking everyone’s shit.
Like i said, the first half of the movie was a 10/10; the last maybe 45 minutes was more of a 7/10. i did love the thunderbolts getting applause in the street which valentina definitely liked once she got the idea to market them as the new avengers. also the fact that they operate out of the old avengers tower? the fact that yelena and bucky are lowkey leading? the outfits that kinda ate down? i kinda vibe with it, but like i said i would hav really liked it if they weren’t considered the new avengers. maybe it would have been better if sam had shown up in the end to rally them for his cause as the avengers or if they just stayed the thunderbolts and did missions more akin to what steve and nat did in the beginning of catws. obviously not with them unknowingly working for hydra, but them as undercover ops would be cool.
idk! i just got out of the movie like an hour ago and i can’t remember it all right now bc it was so much good content.
tldr: the characters were great, the movie was solid/great, the post credits were worth it/insane and the story was good. if i missed anything that anyone wants me to cover (as if im some prime news source lmao, i am not, im just a mcu blogger who has been waiting for years for this movie) then lmk!
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on jaunes inspiration being the maiden of orleans ( and how she was called the holy maiden or la pucelle ( the maiden ) a theory I have often seen and believe is that the crwby originally planned for jaune to be the next ozpin (but due to effectively gotten threats from fanbase to miles (the attacks on him ) they created oscar ( I mean the maiden powers came from ozpin and the wizard of oz in the books was a fraud who pretended to be a wizard and got into a leadership position which is like how jaune forged his transcripts and got into a position of leader both the wizard and jaune got trained by an active practicioner ( glynda trained oz in magic pyrrha trained jaune in combat ( though oz's best asset was still his head) plus the whole salem wanting to see ozpin burn ( jaunes inspiration being put to the fire for witchcraft ( among other things ) and salem witch trials being associated with witch burnings not to mention the ozark mountain range which includes the salem plateau. ( and
And I thought of the word Ozark, as in the Ozark Mountains/Plateau in the central/southern US, and I know that both Ozpin and Salem are (to a degree) named after places already
So I looked it up on Wikipedia, and it turns out that it’s split into subdivisions, including one called the Salem Plateau
Which made me think maybe I’m on to something here, speaking crackpottily
So then I looked at the etymology of Ozark(s), and learned that it might be a corruption of the French phrase meaning “of the arches,” (It is even suggested aux arcs is an abbreviation of aux arcs-en-ciel, French for “toward the rainbows) aux arcs
aux arcs
Ozark
Oz Arc
arc en ciel means rainbow
( jaunes family symbol on the shield is the rainbow ( and the only color jaune doesnt currently have in his design from the rainbow is the color green the one color missing from the rainbow)
Hi!
Mmmm I am sorry, but I am generally not interested in these kinds of theories...
When you start a series, you are gonna brainstorm for ideas... so obviously you are gonna come up with tons of plot-points you are not gonna use... I am only interested in what is in the final story... not because alternative ideas are bad or uninteresting, but simply because they were not written, so... there is really nothing to comment
In general, I don't like people deciding writers change things because threathened by the fandom... Unless it is stated by the writers themselves (like... for example Conan Doyle and Sherlock Holmes), I am not gonna get interested in such behind the scenes theories. Moreover, I think there is this idea going on in the fandom that Jaune has been somehow "downgraded" from MC and is now a secondary character. Well, imo this is simply wrong, he is a MC/deuteragonist and his importance is not less than the beginning. It is just this is an ensembled cast, so he has to share focus. His arc and story is still one of the most important in the series.
Oscar's introduction and story work for several reasons and I think he was always meant to be put in the narrative. His existence is foreshadowed since ep 2/3 when Blake speaks about a man with 2 souls. His story strongly parallels Ruby and they comment each other's arcs. I think the writers stated that since Jaune was growing they wanted a new newby that could give a fresh perspective on the other characters and the conflicts they were going through. Finally, his own allusion sets him up to be introduced later on. Princess Ozma/Tip is a key character in the Oz series, but she doesn't appear in the very first book. So, it makes sense for Oscar to appear after the first arc as the 8th true MCs after Pyrrha's death.
In short, I think the idea of having Oz reincarnate in Jaune is interesting and would bring a very complex dynamic and different plot-points and arcs for the characters. However, this is clearly not what the story wanted to do. Jaune and Oscar's arcs are similar, but different and both are important for the story... Having Oz reincarnate into Jaune would simply be a completely different series :) I also think it is totally fine for people to speculate and headcanon, though!
Thank you for the ask!
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archivedandmoved · 8 years ago
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Look, fursuit is god tier but Breakup is good too?? 
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fortes-fortuna-iogurtum · 3 years ago
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just finished listening to ‘The Passenger,’ and mmmm yeahhhh, I can definitely see why people are calling this story the weakest/most throwaway episode of the set.
I didn’t *dis*like it, though? I always appreciate seeing the ways in which the Time War compromises all sides involved, and how it turns factions within the individual ‘sides’ against one another. this war corrupts everything it touches, no one is immune.
plus the idea of completely turning a Time Lord human with no chance for return to Gallifreyan biology was something I don’t think I’ve ever seen in the lore before?? (fobwatching exists of course, but this is like fobwatching but with a complete *erasure* of that Time Lord identity, not just a temporary hiding/storing-away-for-later of it). now granted, I haven’t finished the other two stories in the set yet, so I may end up not liking this one at all by the time I finish and see how the other two tie into the overall arc. but for right now, I’m finding it an interesting standalone-ish story within the Time War demonstrating just how corrupt and morally-shady ALL sides of the war have become.
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