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Chapter 5.

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Slay this means we wrote this in the same room!! Can't wait to see exactly how many more pregnancies we get in this chapter.

🫵🫵AURAS🫵🫵 MOMOKO IS VIEWING AURAS. I SAID THAT IN THE LAST POST. GIVE THAT SHIT TO THE FLAT4 GIVE THEIR RANDOM KNOWLEDGE MORE LORE. Also gotta appreciate @pippelulu actually explaining where her references come from.

Every scene inside the "FLATY5 Household" is just two seconds of insanity with no plot progression I swear.

But with that said... Akatsuki is out here picking his best man as if their wedding would ever actually get written.

Also why are half these lines written like a clickbait YouTube title.

me.

"Ai-chan has been acting really weird lately, since you had the privilege to mate with her!" Momoko said.

Odd sentence. No more to add.

I was about to question why Momoko knew that Leon and Aiko slept together but I guess if she's spotting extra auras??? that she just assumed. Was Leon coming to tell Aiko about it earlier? I am... so confused.

I'm currently rewatching Ojamajo Doremi and the steak gag is really getting old even though I'm only on Sharp #33, but whatever fucked up nonsensical steak gags we have going on here WORK.

[Doremi] was watching a camera installed on her computer, that went through to Aiko's bedroom, so, TECHNICALLY she isn't really minding her own business.

Are we just gonna... gloss over that?

Wait Leon DIDN'T know Aiko was pregnant? What happened to the wizards knowing before everyone else??? What was the deal with that LeAi scene earlier? Huh?

We put our whole ass into writing romance scenes between Leon and Aiko and just abandoned all the other couples lmao.

No, seriously. The closest we got to "lemons" was with those two fr. "Hormones" my ass.

Nothing confirms the fact that we just characterised Aiko as later seasons Piper from Charmed than us just giving her Piper's main power lmao. Also Momoko????

The in-text author's note before this shows I wrote this part. Wtf is this?

This ending scene is just... we have more or less established (or at the very least, implied) that each pairing is in an actual relationship, so why are we pulling the period drama "show the sex scene before the character winds up pregnant so you can clearly see how they got pregnant!" trope??? All I have to say about this YaMo scene is: "I am in need of sexual attention."

Right, onto chapter 6 now.

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Chapter 4.

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Alright we said the pregnancies start here so let's see if we hold true to that 🤨

WHY DID I START THIS CHAPTER WITH DOREMI AND MOMOKO TRYING TO SPY ON ONPU AND TOORU ALONE IN THEIR BEDROOM???? "They don't even know what perverts means." IN THIS STORY THEY ARE EIGHTEEN I ASSURE YOU THEY KNOW WHAT IT MEANS.

Hang on a minute. That scene happened. Doremi and Momoko woke up Onpu and Tooru. Then the next scene starts with the title "Three Weeks Later." So. You're telling me. Doremi and Momoko just missed out on witnessing the conception of ToOn's baby? Wtf was wrong with me????

There is a LOT more going on in this scene but I'll focus on just this excerpt. You ask the engaged couple when the last time they slept together was???? Insane behaviour. The "weird cravings" in question are pickles. And I'm sure we can agree that nausea doesn't really mean anything by itself.

But on top of that the next lines have Aiko joking to call 911. Girl this is Japan that is NOT their emergency number smh this fic is so unrealistic 😔

Ok I'll touch on these strange Tooru scenes shortly but I love how we include the last names of the FLATY5 even though they are not brought up in canon once. Last night I was reading the Light Novel chapter with the FLAT4 and there's literally a line where Doremi's like "wait I don't even know if the names they told us are their first names or their surnames. Who knows what their full names are?" But no, in the WAOF universe we have claimed Kounna Tooru.

"Wherever Tooru-kun's gone, that's where Leon-kun's at." Aiko hissed.

Idk why this is making me laugh lmao.

Right, onto the weird Tooru scenes. I was going through my old ffn messages with @pippelulu looking for something else entirely and did spot a few messages where we were like "hey the flat4 should totally realise Onpu's pregnant before anyone else" which is fine if there was like. reasoning behind it? We made Aiko a pixie in the last chapter, let the wizards have the power to read auras or something. But why does EVERYONE know except Onpu? Well actually, that's not true. Why do the Ojamajos, Tooru and Akatsuki know? This is so bizarre lol.

Why is Aiko shooting lasers out of her eyes now 😭.

I haven't even finished reading this scene of drunk Leon and Aiko and I'm already cringing with embarrassment. Yikes. But this is the time for me to question the story arc of those two in this chapter. Why was Aiko trying to kill Leon earlier and now she's willingly doing shots with him??

I'm not including the excerpt I'm too embarrassed but I fr stole a quote from THE BIG BANG THEORY in this chapter. Why did we write these characters getting drunk in the first place, we had never touched a drop of alcohol in our lives at that point.

My ONE attempt at questioning the continuity of this story was in the author's notes after PippElulu says LeAi are engaged. Bestie those two have barely spoken two nice words to each other.

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Chapter 6.

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The chapter opens with an author's note saying the original Chapter 6 was deleted which is funny since I had put my Chapter 5 post in my drafts and when I came back to it my internet dropped out when I saved it again so I thought I lost everything I added (which was most of the post!) Luckily it synced up lol.

This flashback has a lot of plot relevance and was definitely necessary to include in the story.

So here begins the hormonal Ojamajos as if they were written by some old men who don't know the first thing about them. But nope, just 12 year old girls who also don't know the first thing about them. Aiko bursting through the wall all cheery is funny tho.

Yet another bizarre scene, I don't even know which part I should clip in here. We have Momoko trying to... hit on Yabu??? I can't tell. And then he hits her with a frying pan after I steal yet another scene from a tv show (although this one is much harder to spot). Followed by Aiko fighting to get the frying pan back, and crying over how she wishes she could be normal (because, you know, hormones).

Not the knife song reference... But onomatopoeia works guys, I laughed out loud at the "thwang" lmfao, best word choice.

So we have Aiko and Leon sleep together to "fix" her hormones? Weren't they doing that in the last chapter when she found out she was pregnant? We had absolutely no idea what we were doing lol.

"Well, that's what happens when you mate with your mate!" Momoko said, adding the beans to the mince for the Nachos.

Why do I clearly remember writing this line?

dubcon? in waof? more likely than you think apparently 😬 (not to mention drunk leai sex)

Not my note at the end of the chapter saying "now we can finish chapter 7" girl did you start writing it BEFORE you made sure you didn't lose all of Chapter 6??

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