theonlinereader

[theonlinereader]

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Hello, everyone!

Before you continue scrolling down on my page, I would just like to say a few things.

All of my reviews are honest and filled with jokes. however, if you find that my reviews are causing such distress in your life to where you simply cannot do anything else, feel free to send me a message full of your concerns.

I don't promise to take my post down or give your message much attention but regardless, feel free to do so nonetheless if it helps you.

next, if you see a story you wrote on a post of mine and you would like it to be taken down, just let me know and I will take it down. but, just as a reminder, if you don't want negative reviews on your stories, don't write shitty content :).

lastly, my page is filled with mature content. some of the stories I will be reading are directed toward mature viewers. I do not care what age you are, as long as you can handle mature content and won't go crying to mommy because you see a curse word or two.

have fun reading!

xxx

[theonlinereader]

Twisted Kisses- The Weasley twins x Reader

Review on Twisted Kisses- Weasley Twins x Reader by Yosmuttywriter

This story has 10 parts and is marked as ongoing, however, it hasn't been updated since early 2020.

As one can see, this story seems to have a large amount of views. Nonetheless, the votes to reads ratio is quite off, so I went into this story with a grain of salt. And good thing I did.

The parts to this story were extremely short, making this a rather quick read. I finished this book in roughly twenty minutes. Though, I wouldve finished it quicker if I hadn't been held back by the lack of details within this story.

due to how short the parts were, there was an absence in detail, causing the reader to have to work harder to figure out what the author was trying to imply. This also made the story feel very rushed.

On top of that, there was a severe lack of content warnings. The characters in the story were 11 years old and were participating in mature behavior such as kissing, sexual touching, and heavy flirting. It was rather disturbing to read about children who have barely hit double digits participating in sexual activities. I think this story and its readers would highly benefit from content warnings that inform the viewers they are about to indulge themselves in a story that contains child sexual exploitation behaviors.

In addition, all of the parts in the story were not entirely dedicated to the plot. There were random parts in the middle of the story that were completely irrelevant to the tale. The writer of this story had included an "About Me" page in between the story. While author notes are not a bad thing, in fact, I appreciate a good "About Me" page, I also know that there is a time and a place for them. and in the middle of a story is not one of them. I advise the author to keep those unrelated pages either at the very beginning or at the end of the story.

[theonlinereader]

Reblog if nothing can come between you and fanfiction.

[theonlinereader]

Tom Riddle x Reader

Review on the wattpad Tom Riddle x Reader by claudddddddddddd

This is an ongoing story about a young muggle-born girl who meets the young, dark-haired orphan, Tom Riddle.

While reading the ten parts that are out on the unfinished story, I've noticed little spelling errors, making it easy to follow along. The story doesn't feel rushed. Though, it can get a little repetitive here and there.

I'm interested in seeing where this book will go as Tom and the reader began growing closer together.

Though this book is unfinished, I recommend giving it a look. just be aware, that the characters start off at a young age, given that they're going into they're the first year of Hogwarts.

[theonlinereader]

Provocative

Review for the Wattpad story 'Provocative" by Makalyiemalfoy07

This 7 part story took roughly 30-40 minutes to read. Based on this story's number of views, I expected much better.

This story was quite hard to read. between all the grammar and spelling errors, I felt like an elementary schooler learning to read for the first time. Not to mention, the storyline moved so quick, I've never seen a story jump so fast, I had whiplash by the time I was done reading it.

Something else I noticed while reading this book was the lack of trigger warnings. starting on part 2 of the book, there was a "spicy warning" on the top of every page. However, I don't believe that should be enough to warn the readers of the upcoming nonconsensual, unprotected, and underage sex that is about to take place in the following few paragraphs.

I was unable to finish the book completely. once I reached part 4, I decided to skip to part 6 and finish the book up. To no surprise, the book ended the way it started: confusing.

If you choose to read this book, please do so on your own accord and I recommend taking medicine before you do because you will have a headache after finishing this.