#ー❁lizzie's lovely anons

[minho-hoho]

Do you like garam ⁉️

Oops, it was hidden between some of my other asks.

I don't like her. But I don't hate her either. It feels wrong of me to hate on a teenager, especially when they have done nothing to me personally.

Now, I don't condone her action at all. In fact I've been bullied almost my whole life.

I'm really upset at how the whole situation is handled, it's really shady and does not put Garam in a good light and makes people believe that she did, in fact bully someone.

You could have kicked her out of the group :/ I wouldn't want it to impact LE SSERAFIM, as I love the girls and their music, and it would pain me to see them fail because of one girl.

Anyways, sorry for the late reply, and I hope you have an amazing day🤍

[minho-hoho]

....... your theme is too light for you profile pic. I think you should change your theme according to you profile pic.

It's actually a matching pfp with @sh1mzu :D!

I always get the same asks about my theme not matching my pfp when I have a matching pfp :')

Which is FAIR.

It's just a hassle to change a whole theme, and there's always the possibility of changing the matching pfp with something else and having to redo everything.

Anyways, I think the colour of my pfp is really pretty, so I'll change my theme to match when I have time on my hands!

Hope you have an amazing day Anon btw🤍

I just wanted to keep yellow, it's my fav colour lol

[minho-hoho]

I just have to say that you are a great writer, i like really much how you do it. So yeah, plus, i think you are a very creative person. ✨

Ahhhlsjdjzbz 🥺

Thank you so much, it brought a huge smile to my face!!

I hope you have a day just as fantastic as you are 🤍🤍

[minho-hoho]

You are so sweet 💓 I wanna be friends with you but I'm shy 😭

aw noo 🥺🥺 you seem so sweet too🤍

i'm quite shy too, but i'd love to be friends with you 🤍 my dms are always open 🤍🤍

[minho-hoho]

I umm reada your post and I had some things you could change. The diary of a spy.

“I’m a busy woman” she told you, which made you raise an eyebrow. “I can’t afford to show you the place and train you myself” You almost the biggest eye roll known in history, but you couldn’t get fired before even starting your first day. “So instead, Heeseung will do that.

The sentence in bold isn't proper. It seemed incomplete

“LEE HEESEUNG!” The old lady screamed, which startled me a little. Heeseung rolled his eyes behind a shelf before coming to us.

Notice how you used you before and then the pov suddenly changed to me and then again to you. That's not good

“Take care of them.” She said before going her own way. As soon as she was out of sigh, the young man in front of me let out a sigh before looking at me in the eyes. He was very tall, handsome and he had a pretty imposing figure. But you didn’t let that impress you.

It should be Sight. And again the pov problem. Write only me or you. Probably you because it was not yn's pov.

Hope this helped 💓

Hi! Thank you for the feedback, it's mostly dumb errors or typos or just me typing too fast to notice that some words are missing. I should really stop quickly over looking my texts.

As for the POV changes, it was also stupid. And could have been easily resolved by me paying better attention.

I ended up changing point of views after writing the story and I had to change everything and I skipped over some words, shame on me, boo🍅🍅

Thank you again for telling me all of this, it was a a work full of mistakes and it's honestly embarrassing lol.

Hope you have a fantastic day/evening/night 🤍

[minho-hoho]

Hello guys! :D

I just got out of school, so I'm going to take this time to say a few things.

First, thank you to the anon that sent me multiple asks of feedback! I read each one of them thoroughly, and will work on everything that you mentioned. I didn't have the time to answer them because I was at school. So I'm taking the time I have right now to do exactly that. Thank you for taking your time and telling me exactly what was wrong kindly.

To the second Anon telling me what was wrong in TDS?! I'm so grateful that you told what was wrong especially the POV mistakes. I changed it as soon as I had time, next time I proofread I won't do it sleep deprived. It probably went over my head as I probably skimmed over the lines rather than actual looking at each line and try to find any mistakes, which is on me, I need to get rid of those habits.

I'll still answer each of the asks, just doing this now in case I don't have time to do so later.

If this also has errors and whatnot blame it on me sleeping less than hour lol.

Alright, thank you for the feedback, it's always greatly appreciated and welcome.

I love y'all and wish you all a great day/evening/night 🤍

[minho-hoho]

I felt like it was natural because the way you wrote it didn't seem awkward yk? Some people write a few things but it seems awkward and as if they were forced.

But reading it I got to know different perspectives.

The way you wrote that yn had feelings for Jungwon but they eventually got away. That was really good. People don't really like to be led on but you wrote it so good .

Keep going 👍

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Ahhh, thank you for Elaborating! Knowing what's good is great, so that I can try and include it in other future work to make it better to read and more enjoyable overall.

Thank you, that makes strive to be better in my writing🤍

[minho-hoho]

can I request yandere enhypen reaction to

their s/o trying to poison them ( like their s/o puts poison in their food or water )

My requests are closed at the moment but! I really like your idea as I already have ideas for it. I will be realising your request in the week~

Hope you have an amazing day Anon 🤍

[minho-hoho]

Seeing you post something makes a smile appear on my face. I love your writing so freaking much. Like you are incredible 👩🏻‍🎤 💓 💓

Ahhh my heart 😭😭🤍

You sending this made me so so happy 🤍 It really warms my heart🤍

I bet you are 10 times more incredible than me 🤍🤍

Luv you Anon🤍

[minho-hoho]

wait this is the same anon IF THERE ARE ANY PROBLEMS IN THE TEXT TELL ME its so difficult to use tumblr on mobile sorry 💀

There are no problems in the text don't worry! Hope you have an amazing day/evening/night 🤍

And thank you once again!! 🤍

[minho-hoho]

ASK 3 — loud vs deafening)] uhh thats all i could think of for now LAWL SORRY FOR SENDING 3 ASKS i hope this helps T__T sorry for any inconsistencies in the text I FORGOT TO DOUBLE CHECK I ONLY REMEMBERED TO DO IT NOW

It's totally fine! I don't mind having multiple asks or a long one! I really appreciated the detailed feedback. As far as I know there wasn't any inconsistencies!

It really helps, once again thank you 🤍

[minho-hoho]

ASK 2 — [ 2. instead of using adverbs (ex. very, so, too) and adjectives (ex. beautiful, mean, cold), try writing sentences that describe without having to pair the two. using similes and metaphors may help (ex. he is a cold person vs he disregarded others feelings)[ 3. instead of using the actual word, describe it (ex. blood vs crimson red liquid, cry vs tears fell, punch vs threw a fist)][ 4. use synonyms and deeper? words (happy/cheerful/excited vs enthusiastic, cute vs endearing/adorable, +

Ah yes! I never use metaphors and similes when writing in english as I have a hard time translating it correctly. I think I'm going to need to read more books in English :')

I should definitely use more precise words to describe what I want to show, it's an effort I'll need to make so it becomes a good habit.

[minho-hoho]

ASK 1 — hmm... since you want constructive criticism in your not for sale fic, here are my honest thoughts about it (sorry in advance if it's messy! ill also try my best to keep it short since im on ask) [ 1. refrain from using the same words over and over again (ex. of the words you used frequently: present, propose, club) search for synonyms, or find one or multiple ways on how to refer to something without having to repeat the same phrases]

Ah thank you for your asks on the criticism that I asked, I'm really glad to have advice, to be able to improve.

On this one, I totally agree. Even I found it redundant to write, but I was at a loss for words to describe my thoughts directly into proper English, one of my biggest weaknesses. Pretty much any descriptive words that I had in mind were lost due to lack of vocabulary.

I'll work on that!

[minho-hoho]

ur not for sale fic, when jungwon k worded hyunjin... it reminded me of yandere simulator IYKYK (i wonder if you got inspo there?)

Yup! As much as the game is really not my thing anymore, it still had a huge part in my childhood, so I decided to take a little bit of inspiration there!

Glad someone noticed lol

Hope you have a fantastic day/evening/night 🤍

[minho-hoho]

these kind of fics can sometimes feel a little awkward but yours feels really natural ♡

Ah really ? I'm glad you feel this way 🤍 I'd really like if you could elaborate on why it feels natural, it's all up to you and if you can't describe why it's fine🤍

I'm just glad you liked it🤍

Hope you have an amazing/evening/night🤍

[minho-hoho]

hi! i saw that you were asking for feedback on your ’not for sale’ fic and just wanted to say that i really enjoyed it (its probs one of my top fics rn) however i wish there was more of a build up in the story like jungwon first noticing something about the reader then having it snowball into an obsession with them. i still REALLy enjoyed it though and am looking forward to read more stuff from you 💗

(hope this wasn’t too long and makes sense)

Thank you for giving me feedback!

I absolutely agree with you on that one, I'll work on that when doing my other fics, as it does make the story more interesting and make the story seem less “rushed”?

I'm really glad you enjoyed it and that you gave me feedback! I hope that I might get your feedback on my future fics🤍 I strive to be better in writing🤍

I hope you're doing well, that you you'll take care of yourself and that you'll have an amazing day/evening/night 🤍