ITโS HERE!!! ๐ฅณ Iโve been waiting for this since you posted that you were part Daddyโs Home Fest. I love me some domestic fics with cutie babies ๐ฅบ I would just like to say that this might be all over the place cause I wrote my comments on my notes as I was reading so please bear with me ๐
Right from the sneak peak you showed us, I knew their bickering was gonna be a fun ride ๐ I canโt really blame them for being mad at the other cause I see both sides and can understand each one.
I love how right after talking it out with Yoongi being told to just not park there anymore, he still calls it HIS parking spot ๐ I mean if thereโs no official spots for staff, then itโs the spot of the one that parks first. So their fight over it is hilarious to me ๐คฃ And why does he keep ruining her clothes?!?!? I canโt really blame MC. Even I would think itโs intentional by now, but knowing it isnโt makes it funnier. He gets annoyed cause he already apologized but itโs kinda hard to accept his apology when it keeps happening. Heโs pretty clumsy and unaware of his surroundings, good thing heโs cute ๐
Poor Tae, must be hard since he knows Jimin isnโt a bad guy but also wants to be loyal to his bff ๐
but I love how she doesnโt want Tae to be caught between their โfightโ.
I also want a JK and Hobi to give me a basket of products frequently ๐ซ cause that ainโt cheap and my broke ass could only dream of having friends THAT generous ๐ณ
MC being petty with by taking the last hazlenut coffee and taking her d*mn time to finish making it. Pure evil ๐ there goes being โcordialโ ๐คญ Theyโre both so petty, i love it ๐๐
And itโs so cute how Harin and Mc adores each other ๐ฅบ
Oh no, MC is upping her game and convinced Tae to help her scheming. And now the prank war begins and no one wants to be the first to back down ๐ Personally, I am not a fan of pranks, especially those being done to me cause Iโm also petty and hold grudges ๐ฌ
Not Tae calling her out the she like him ๐ Those two just wants to rile up each other with these pranks ๐ฅด
Ohmygod! The fake poop ๐ฑ๐คข I would seriously be mortified if I saw that on my car ๐ญ Harinโs reaction was adorable ๐ฅบ๐
I knew when friday the 13th and the chocolate cake was mentioned that it was Jiminโs bday cake so I was already dreading when MC took a slice of it ๐ซฃ Good thing Jimin laughed it off but I would seriously still be dying of embarrassment in MCโs place ๐ญ
Are Harin and Jiminโs bday the same or just really close?!? And Mama Park setting Chim up with MC ๐ Good thing cause this petty โwarโ needs to finally be done ๐ฎโ๐จ
Koo and Yoon are having the time of their lives finding out who MC is and then Jimin and the others finding out too ๐คฃ
Not MC daydreaming about Min right beside him during the game ๐
Theyโre flirting ๐ฅด And they finally apologized, took them long enough ๐๐ The kiss at the end was ๐ค
I really loved this story ๐ That was so good and you wrote 16k worth of it ๐ณ I really loved the characters you created and hopefully, you can let is see a glimpse of them in drabbles in the future. Only if you want to ofcourse. No pressure โบ๏ธ All in all, it was written really well and I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for this and I hope you take care of yourself ๐
Ah, honestly this fic came to me so easily after i signed up so I'm glad i was able to post it :)
you took notes? I'm screaming thank you!
A lot of schools I worked at as a substitute teacher or tutor (especially our office) had limited parking spots so if you didn't get there early, good luck finding a spot! once i parked, that's where i stayed until I had to leave lmao
Imagine if they're fighting over the spot, and someone else entirely uninvolved took it one day lol they'd be dumbfounded or perhaps think the other got a new car lol i can see them staking out the spot to confirm and be confused af when someone else gets out
Yoongi was trying to be the voice of reason lol but Jimin just would not listen lmao in his head, it was HIS spot lmao maybe they'll carpool after their date. And something i learned in college and later on from working in schools, always have an extra set of clothes in the car, undergarments included bc you never know when you'll have to change. Jimin was so clumsy but it wasn't his fault (okay it was) he wasn't aware of his surroundings and the pudding had a mind of its own ๐๐๐
Taehyung was in a rough spot. He tried not to get involved but he did without being fully aware of what was going on when he went to lunch but overall i think he did a good job trying to stay neutral ๐
JK and Hobi had ulterior motives for the skincare lol they figured if they did it as a friendly gesture, Jimin wouldn't suspect they wanted him looking fabulous before they suggested he start dating, so all in all, they were trying to butter him up. if he hadn't found MC then the next step was a new wardrobe
They did their best to get on each other's nerves lmao MC loves annoying Jimin, especially since he got coffee and pudding on her clothes. so any opportunity to annoy him was a win ๐
Harin absolutely ADORES mc, they get along so well, and Harin is MC's star pupil :)
I wanted the pranks to be as harmless as possible, more of an inconvenience than anything else. i HATE hurtful pranks so I went with the desktop background thing and the googly eyes and fake poop. and Jimin left his car in the lot over the weekend. he was originally going to get picked up in an uber in front of MC but Yoongi was already picking up Lila and Harin, so it made sense Jimin would get picked up too lol
Harin's reaction to the fake poop was hilarious! she's so cute! and Tae immediately realizes that MC has a crush on Jimin! he's been around for ages so he knows how she gets with a crush lol
I loved the Friday the 13th cake incident! i was so excited to write it lmao Harin's birthday is the 14th of October so they shared a birthday party and yes, MC was mortified when she realized she had cut and eaten Jimin's birthday cake. Jimin found it hilarious!
Jungkook and Yoongi were having a wonderful time laughing at Jimin's expense! everything just clicked! and mc can't help but daydream about Jimin lmao she wasn't expecting to meet Jimin's friends and her mom's friend of a friend who wanted to set her up with her son who happens to take her parking spot everyday lol the kiss was my favorite! they were supposed to kiss the second time they fell on each other but i wanted it to be a little more private.
I definitely had so much fun writing this story, i was surprised i hit 16k whoops, editing was rough, i had to do it in sections and then go back and fix a few more things. and then tumblr wouldn't let me post so i had to use my husband's computer lol bless him. i would like to write a few drabbles for them in the future, maybe of their first date and a few of them later on in the future and perhaps Halloween and their first time carpooling lol
thank you so much! i know i say this every time but i appreciate you so much ๐๐๐ take care! ๐
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