#ahhh shitt here we go again

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Firstly to start off with, ummm a white kurtan, yes please, I know this bitch looks good whatever hes wearing, so it dont matter, BUT THE BLACK TANK TOP OOFFFF YOU BETTER STOP, ITS NOT GOOD FOR MY HEALTH. But moving on, I've finished reading the whole thing now, and I'm writing this in notes, so if you're getting thing like 40 minutes later it's because I'm drafting my ask. Basically I'm just gonna skim read it again and just give you my thoughts and any feedback, if that's okay with you, you can ignore this if you want to, I completely understand. I dont mind at all 😊😊

Ok to start off with, the exposition was really good, you've set the tone and introduced the Ackerman family really beautifully. When I read it initially the fact that Levi did not want a family or to get married was quite emphasised upon to me, and I'm really looking forward for the inevitable development and how his view changes as the chapters go on. I also love how you introduced Farlan and Isabel, and lightly touched upon how they met, you didnt go into too much detail and I really like that, it kept me focused on the actual story itself, which is about Levi and not Farlan. And Farlan wanting tto marry her 😢😢. I think it's really really sweet and I cant wait to see more of them. I love it so much.

The transition from setting the scene to their father being poisoned was not something I was expecting and made me go oh shit he dead. Part of me felt like it was moving too quick, but the other part of me loved the shock factor of it since it happened so suddenly. I didnt think of it as too big of an issue though, it was still enjoyable to read.

The whole encounter with the peasant guy made me wonder just how many more people there are like him, that dislike the Ackermans and would try to kill them. And whether y/n would be one of them. Also I got a bit confused as to who was speaking whether it was Farlan or Levi, but I read the sentence again and it was fine, I understood, so maybe I was just being a dumb bitch.

Oooh a quick point Levi sympathising with the criminal was really touching and made me feel warm and gooey. It shows that hes not a dick and does actually care about his people. But it also shows he has clear boundaries and is really firm. He will make a great leader in the future.

YESSS BODYGUARD ERWINNN!!!!! I WAS LITERALLY TELLING MY FRIEND THE OTHER DAY, ERWIN AND LEVI BODYGUARD AU IS THE BESTT. YES SWEETIE UGH ITS FANTASTIC. IVE SAID THIS BEFORE BUT IM SAYING IT AGAIN I LOVE IT.

Carrying on, I love the whole Erwin/Levi/Farlan interaction, of course Erwin knows everything, why wouldnt he, hes a boss ass bitch. Also again, reaffirming that Levi does not want a wife, nOicE. Really builds up his future development.

The difference in Levi's and Farlan's reaction is comical. Ones there waving and smiling and the other ones there like fuck off leave me alone. ALSO WHOEVER SAID THEY'LL GIVE UP THEIR VIRGINTY SAME GURLL SAMEEE, I WOULD TOO YOURE NOT ALONE. AND YES FARLAN IT IS FUNNY, IT MADE ME LAUGH.

Awww the people are so nice, offering things for free, that's how you know you're loved by your people, I rate it, rate Levi sm.

Okay my guy, imma need you stop for a second and relax. Taking your top of??? And your scarf??? Okay big man, I see you, I see you, looking fine af. Ahhh I love imagining this in my brain, so stimulating.

Anyways, Y/N'S HERE NOWWW YES BITCHHH IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS ONE, TURN IT UPPPP.

Nanaba being my sister is absolutely exquisite *chefs kiss*. I really thought you'd maybe put Petra, and then Petra would like Levi as well, but no its Nanaba and I fucking love her so so much. Also not really relevant, but I dont have any older sisters, but I do have older cousin sisters and I call my favourite one didi mooni (I think that's how you spell it, or muni idk) and yeah it just reminded me of her. I haven't seen her in so so long because of the pandemic and I miss her :(

Ah. So. Y/N does hate the royals. I wanna know why?? Does she think they're overrated?? A bad experience maybe?? Everyone else seems to love them. I'll just have to wait and see I guess.

ALSO PLEASE TELL ME THE LITTLE KID WAS MIKASA!!! IM HOPING SO SO MUCH ITS MIKASA, IT PROBABLY ISNT BECAUSE SHES AN ACKERMAN HERSELF BUT I CAN STILL HOPE!!! SHES SO CUTEEE AND ADORABLE AWWWW WEVIIII 🥺🥺🥺

THEY SELL TEAAA AHHH ITS A LOVE STORY BOUND TO HAPPEN. AND HE HASNT TRIED THEM YETT!!!! YES OMGGG TEA DATES, THEY CAN BOTH SIT DOW AND SHE CAN INTRODUCE HIM TO NEW SHITT AHHHH MY HEARTTTT 🥰🥰🥰IM GETTING WAYYYY AHEAD OF MYSELF.I need to calm down.

The whole meeting with Levi and Y/N was so adorable. It felt really short and I want more, but its okayyy, hopefully there are more chapters. Them locking eyes, him following her to get the leaves, HIM HELPING HER PICK UP THE BLOODY LEAVES, THE HAIR PART REMINDS ME OF IN BOLLYWOOD MOVIES WHEN THE PROTAGS HAIR GETS STUCK IN THE GUYS WATCH OR THEIR DUPATTA OR SOMETHING. OMGG Y/N IS ONE LUCKY BITCH.

Also since you havent specified the race of y/n, just wanted to ask is she Indian?? Or it it unspecified?? You wrote that she blushed bright red and many dark skinned readers wont be able relate. So yeah I'm not too sure whether that was intentional or not, I'm sorry if I'm mistaken though. I mean no harm at all.

Farlan's relationship with Levi is just beautiful, like I know I'm using the word beautiful a lot, but their broship is immaculate. Something else that I love.

Both Levi and Y/N not wanting to get married is hilarious. I really like how you've characterised her, shes really fierce, independent and seems really kind and caring as well. I really like this Y/N, very family oriented.

If I was her dad I would've taken the money. 🤷🏾‍♀️🤷🏾‍♀️ Not complaining about it because my dad would've done the exact same thing, but if I was him I wouldve taken it. Sis is broke, sis needs all the money she can get.

Both parties questioning Levi and Y/N is hilarious, fucking Erwin, I love him so much I stg. I'd sacrifice my life for him. Hes best boy 😇😇

I feel like this is really really long already so I'll quickly sum everything up, if you got this far you deserve a clap on the back and a medal, because I've basically just waffled. I really really enjoyed this chapter, it was very good in terms of introductions and getting to know the characters, I loved the initial meeting between levi and y/n and it did make my heart flutter quite a bit so that's that. I dont have any complaints really, just small minor things I've mentioned before and that's it. I really look forward to the coming chapters!!! Thank you so so much for writing it. Please make sure you're taking regular breaks and keeping hydrated and healthy. Thanks sweetie xxx 🥰🥰🥰

I’ve read this WHOLE thing..twice. I can’t stop smiling omf you’re so sweet! But, yeah minor shit I didn’t mention and I left it up to reader. Like the skin tone, sheesh. I don’t want any problems with that, I just said red blush to signify embarrassment. Reader is reader no matter what.

Aren’t we all broke af? But I liked the idea of the father being humble about it. Lol. Idk.

I don’t want to get into too much detail because that will obviously ruin the story but I love your ideas. Tea dates?! How cute! Erwin is the best, of course. He knows ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) and he’s the kind of person who would follow his princes no matter what. Till the end, you know?

As I said, highly inspired by Bollywood movies lol.

You took your time and wrote all of this and I’m so fucking happy that you did. I can’t wait for all of you to see the upcoming chapters. I hope that you’re staying happy and hydrated as well. Also, happy Shivratri! (If you celebrate for it) and to everyone else celebrating.

-Caddy.

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Trace

Part 6

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A/N : My tumblr went crazy so i had to repost this part .... FUCK!!

(Y/N)’s POV

 “I.. I like you, (Y/N) like .. I’d like to hold your hands, I’d like to hug you, like I’d like to kiss you, that kind of like..” He looked down, concern and worries ebbing from him. I know how it felt, to finaly realize your feelings toward someone that you never thought you would. Dean, is straight in every sense possible, but then I came to his life and made him feels things he never felt towards a men before. At least thet’s what Sam told me, but being the stubborn ass myself, I keep on deniying the affection Dean gave me no more than brotherly affection. Now seeing him sitting there, eyes downcast, and the fact that he just admited his feeling for me makes my heart swell. I wanted to say it too, that i also like him, but my body moves faster than my brain could process.

 He kissed back softly, snaking his hands to my hips, i stradle his muscular thighs and raked my hands to the back of his head, angling our head for a better access. The kiss become more and more heated, we poured the passions we tried to deny. Once that just meant as a soft innocent kiss from me turnned out to be more and more passionate as the seconds goes. Overwhelmed by the pleasure of his kiss, i let out an involuntary moan. Dean strightly shoved his tounge to my  opened mouth, mapping each and every single place he could reach. Felling his tounge in my mouth, i locked my lips on it, and suck it back and forth. Dazed by the pleasure of it, Dean opened his eyes and pulled back a little while bitting at my lower lip. Panting hard, all of our senses are focused on eachother. We stare at each other searching a glint of love in eachother’s eyes, and we found ocean. Still gasping for an air, we both smiles and hold onto eachother tight. Making sure that we wouldn’t wake up from it like any other night i would dream about this. I closed my eyes, and let my body relax more and more. Enjoying the feeling of Dean’s heat that not only warm my body, but also warm my heart.

“So…. What was that for ?” Dean asked.

“I like you too silly ! Wasn’t that clear enough for you ?” I answered him, while I played with his hair at the back of his head nervously.

“Hmm..I think I need a little more assurance little boy..” He wiggled his eyebrows and lean to kiss me again, but I put my index finger to his lips.

“We’re on a hunt Dean, and Sam would be back soon.”

“How do you know he would be back soon ?”

“My power.. remember..?”

“Right… But does that mean you foresaw this ?” He gestured his hand toward both of us.

“No… I just saw when Sam leave the motel and when he’ll back, not even a glimpse of this..” i repeated his gesture.

 As I finished pulling down my shirt, Sam opened the door. All of us looked at each other, and Sam being perceptive guy he is, give us understanding look.

“Soooo…….” He drawled

“Zip it Sam!” Dean responded fast

“Well good for you two, but no funny business while I’m around. As much as I’m happy you finally together I don’t want to witness anything.”

He put the foods he carried on the table and the other two followed to enjoy our dinner.

 The next morning I woke up to a feeling of someone breathing behind my neck, and whoever arm that is, is the strongest arm that ever huged me this tight. I wiggled in my sleep hazzed mind, only to be halted by the tightening of the arm that pulled me plush to his chest. I sighed out of the comfort this arm and chest owner gave me. I put my hands on his arm and intertwine our fingers, I wiggled back to his chest, but my eyes shot open. The feel of something hard, long and thick sliding between my butt cheeks startle me. Then the memories of last night rushing to my brain, after dinner, the bothers settled for a drink. But beeing a light drinker I am, I pased out after four or five glass they gave me. I lift the comforter and I feel relief washed over me, I still have my clothes on, so nothing happens then? I looked back and see Dean, I let my body relax to the feel of his body, and the way his hips rocking back and forth onto my butt slowly arouse me. I responded to his movements, hips moving in unison, my dick’s getting hard slowly at the feeling of Dean’s strained thick shaft. I tilted my head back, and rest it on Dean’s shoulder, my breath became faster as well as him. I wonder if he’s awake yet or not, but I couldn’t care less. I felt Deans hand that holds me raking down my front and dive right into my pants. At this point I’m glad that I always sleep without underwear on, and it seems that Dean like it too. He grabed my dick and start stroking in tune with his hips movement. Our breath getting heavier and heavier, I looked to the side and then met by Dean’s lust hazed eyes. The intensity of his gaze  itself implify the twitch on my dick, he felt it too, and I felt his dick twitching on my butt too. He wishpered on my earin hushing voice

“You’re such a naughty boy you know that ?”

“I’m.. I’m always naughty and you know it… you like it…” I answer him breathless

“Yeah, I love it… I love the way you move your perfect butt, how warm it is around my dick…. If Sam wasn’t around I will surely take you right here and now …”

“Wait.. Sam is here ?.. We gotta stop..” The reminder of Sam existence makes me worry, yet it sends a shiver on my spine and made mi dick twitch on dean’s grasp.

“Ahh.. I see… you like it don’t you ? the hance of we’re getting caught? I feel it (Y/N), you’re getting closer.. would you come for me ? come all over my hand ?”

“But Dean… ahhh.. shitt!...” (Y/N) cursed in a whisper

“Don’t worry, I’m right behind you… let go.. come for me little boy..” Then Dean claim my lips, shoving his tongue to my mouth to stiffle my whispered moan. I came, in spurts on the inside of my pants, on Dean’s caloused hand that stroked me. I feel it too, wetness on my butt, Dean’s cum sipping trough whatever he wear to sleep on to my pants. With our labored breath, the speed of our fast beating heart, and the feel of Dean’s tongue inside my mouth, made my mind hazzy and again, I fell to the island of sleep again.

 I woke up to the feeling of someone’s arm around me, then it’s like déjà vu the arm tightening around my body.

“wake up sleepyhead…” It’s Dean, oh my.. how his gruff is so sexy even in this early in the morning

“I am Dean… You have a good sleep ?”

“I am… especially after your gift..this morning..” He smirked

“My gift ?.. Wha…oh shit that wasn’t a dream was it ?”

“Nope” His response to my question

“Sam… hi din’t hear a thing did he ?” I panicked

Dean just chuckling and looked at me with so much adoration that makes me feel so full “Don’t worry, he sleeps like he’s dead, plus he had a lot last night…” He kissed my forehead.

“Oh… okay then…”

“And now that he can wake up any moment, maybe we should try to get to the real thing …” He wiggled his eyebrows

“You’re kinky little prick!”

 Our morning then started like usual, i would pack our belongings, and Sam would take a shower, while Dean get Baby ready. The last case didn’t give any signs about the Rating Game, nor the individuals that might involved in it. What the vampire said weeks ago still linger in my mind. Sacrifice of sixteen troops, when I look back, there was fiveteen people that related to me killed after my father left. And now after what the vampire said, it is clear that someone tried to force me to oin the game. But for what ? I don’t even know there’s such a game, because I’m Chronos’s son? I’m not even sure he’s my father. But if they are not trying to make me join the game, then why they killed my family ? Why now ? I was lost in my deep thought when Sam called me.

“Hey (Y/N) I’m done, you can use the bathroom now..”

“Oh.. yeah okay… thanks Sam ..”

“You okay ?”

“No… I’m not, I’m just confused that’s all” I grabed my change clothes then headed to the bathroom without second glance.

After all of us was ready, we drove to the nearest dinner in town. Sam had his chicken and salad, I had my beacon, toast, and salad too, while Dean and his cholesterol combo, fries, and burger. We were caught up in our conversation about how Dean was oogling on my butt while I wasn’t looking, or how Sam would always whine to me when Dean used his laptop and made it stoped working because of porn sites, and even about how I became more agresife while interogating someone. All and all the morning seems pleasing. And I can’t help to look at Dean because of how he wouldn’t look away from me, and Sam would always pretend that he’s disgusted. But I know, Dean know, we all know that Sam is the one that always have our back even before we all realized. Dean excused himself to go to the bathroom, saying about how he put to much jalapeno in his burger, and Sam went to the cashier to pay. I was left alone, just staring outside the window next our table when I saw him. The men that killed my grandpa, the Alpha vampire standing there, and smirking outside the window. Without thinking, I run outside in hope to catch the bastard and skin him alive. And of course he has to ge gone when I’m finaly out. I whipped my head franctically, in hope to see maybe just a glimpse of him so I can go after him. But nothing, he just disapeared like he did after he killed your grandpa and your whole family.

“You okay? What happened?” Dean rushed to me and pulled me into his hug.

“I..i saw him, the alpha”

“Are you sure it’s him (Y/N) ?” Sam asked

“Yeah… I saw that bastard’s face once and I remember it always.”

“Can you look at his trace then ? where he goes ?” Dean pulled back and looked into my eyes

“I couldn’t he just vanished… Dean there were fiveteen people around me killed for the reason of recruiting me to the game. They need to kill one more, and it would be either of you… I .. i.. how if he’s coming for you?” By this point, the tears polled on the corner of my eyes.

“hey..hey sweetheart.. just calm down, we could take care of ourself just fine… besides, we have you to fight with us.. so don’t worry okay ?” He swipe his thumbs on my cheeks to soothe me. Sam, being the little shit he is decided to just tease his brother.

“You’re getting sappy while (Y/N)’s around….. I wanna throw up” He then just walks away to get into Baby. The comment itself ease the worries that clouded my mind that time, I let out a sigh and smile to this men that hold me tight.

 Dean Winchester, I love you, I can’t really say it out loud right know. Im afraid that if I say it, and you say it too, would put you in danger of these people that tried to include me in their stupid game. I love you, I know that you feel it too, and I saw it from the way you look at me. I love you, I’ll tell you someday when I think that I’m ready, that we’re ready. But now we should make sure that the game would never begin, for the sake of the universe, for the sake of us, so I can tell you that I love you.

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