#how incredibly talented she issss

[movedyourchair505]

Hi, my absolute darling. You did it again. You’ve never disappointed me and I can guarantee you never will. So first of all, love how I get this subtle vibe, so subtly from your writing, that Jade is bored and impatient and misses her man’s attention haha. Can you imagine how annoyed he’d have been being culled away from his girl? She’s drinking a Jade! I love. Miles was wonderful as always, you capture his flamboyance as his NN self so well, being an extra babe and looking incredible, flirting

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with Jade (thinks he can get away with it a bit more when Alex is occupied) and then letting slip how much effort baby boy went to with her drink. Still so addicted to her calling him baby and kissing his jaw, like not only is he weak for her affection, that’s such an ego-boost for Turner, for people to see her doing that. Stroking his jaw - pffff - can’t stop touching him, reminding him how great he is. Also - “And if yeh’re talkin’ 'bout tha’ guy earlier, 'e were eyein’ yeh inappropriately, alreyht?” - what a possessive bitch, what an idiot, I love him. His panic when there’s danger is so good. She is his priority now and watching that slow shift has been gorgeous, each time something threatening has happened (someone pointing a gun at them, the attack at the headquarters, the threats) he’s shown more and more care for her and you’ve carried that off sublimely. He’s such a cocky bitch, stone cold on the outside, that I get scared for him like don’t push it you idiot, there are guns pointed at you. He has such a temper and it comes across in such subtle but smart ways. Love how everything went back to before at his command but he barely had to do a thing. And then ugh, baby boy is so frustrated, angry and scared. You can tell how stressed he is and how important it all is to him. Has he ever sworn so much? Idiot. Loved the fact Jade knew he wasn’t finished and just nods at him to let that anger out because she knows there’s more. Also, love how she just reassures him constantly, doesn’t change him just reminds him how powerful he is, makes sure he knows he’s capable and is so in control and in charge even when things are going wrong. And there is so much development in her being honest and blaming herself because we know she’s a leo bish and wouldn’t say it if she didn’t think it. Then the smut. Her taking control to prove how powerful he is such a power move on both their parts, their struggle for dominance has shifted so much but is still just as intense and important. Can he not - “ran his fingers possessively through her hair to keep her close as she undid his belt buckle” - weak for that? Love her coaxing him to trust her, to relax, to let go for him and to stop thinking (I’m sorry is this Al to Lo, haha????) Him saying “please, sit down on meh” - shook. Him saying please is so sub whether he realises it or not so he justifies it with “fookin’ get teh work” like the demanding little shit he is. Just genuinely weak for every time he says her name or swears or you know… breathes. I love how much character development there is in every single chapter, laced throughout their sex, their conversations, it’s all so rich and complicated in the best way but so them and it never fails to impress me. After realising how far we are in the story I’m actually so sad at the thought of it being over sooner rather than later. Not ready to let them go or give up our brianstorming sessions or get each other so excited. This universe is incredible.I love you more than i could ever say, nothing compares to your talent and I’m so proud of you for everything. ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ 

Urgh babe, you are insane!! 😭😭😭 Jade is annoyed and bored when she doesn’t get attention from her man, and yeah, he’s deffo just as pissed being called away from her!! I love writing extra Miles and I’m so glad that it shows and that you enjoy it as well, especially when him and Jade are flirting and he’s just spilling tea about their boy. I attack you purposely with those jaw and shoulder kisses and you know it, but I appreciate that you appreciate those, and I’m really glad I manage to show that Alex is an egoistical boss despite all his softness, because as worried as he is sometimes, he’s such a possessive and controlling bitch! He deffo wants to save his own ass and look powerful most of all, but she issss so important to him. Urghhh and I’m excited that I build at least a little bit of tension where you’re screaming at him in your head because he literally doesn’t care that there are guns pointed at him! People do what he says even without him doing anything just like Jade, and she needed to show him that again! But he has neverrr sworn so much!! She definitely tries to just remind him and show him that it’s all up to him and all in his control, especially because she does carry blame partially. Hahaha I love the Al and Lo parallel, but I’m really glad you see that it’s a power move on both their parts, that’s how it was meant to be! Thank you for always giving me the lines you enjoyed, it’s so encouraging and we all love a bit of sub Al! Just so weak for him in genereal??? I’m really happy you pick up on all these things and reassure me, it honestly means the world and you know how grateful I am for you! Well, it’s not over yet, there’s still loads and we’ll keep brainstorming because even when the story is over I will do the one-shots or maybe even a sequel, but we’re not anywhere close yet! Planning with you is so exciting, be it NN or something else, we’ll keep doing that either wayyy, don’t be a dramatic bishhhh! Thank you so much for being such a wonderful friend, I don’t know what I would do without you. I love you so so so much! 💓💕💗💖💜✨💛💙⭐🎇