#making an observation and demonstrating its truth all in the same post. I'm so good at this
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cutting down written dialogue to be put into comic format making me realize just how much I overexplain things LOL
#rambumbles#like yeah it's supposed to be a loredump but come on man#stay on the trail stop pointing out every weird bird/bug/branch you see#sometimes! less is better! and more coherent!#why did my english essays do so well ohh wait brain blast hold on#essays Need more words and explanation because that's all they are#with comics & dialogue they have other parts to carry them and not rely entirely on the text description itself#like imagery and context of the character speaking#and also needing to consider pacing moreso than a piece designed Solely for explanation or analysis#pacing and coherence and consistent characterization#ohhhkay it makes more sense now#“wow” I think to myself#“I sure do talk more than I need to. I should make a post making fun of myself for it”#and then I proceed. to talk more than I need to. in the tags. again.#liveblogging my connection of dots#making an observation and demonstrating its truth all in the same post. I'm so good at this
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