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zoe-oneesama · 1 month

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Since you’re on that hating Wish train (I’m there with you), I think you might be interested in checking out Jonah Who Two on YouTube bc he’s re-written some of the songs (his “This is the Thanks I Get?!” is really good and way more villainy)

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Jokes on you, I ALREADY HAVE!!! >:D

#there's two components to the problems with the songs:#there's the technical issues like rhythm and flow and line length and overuse of slant rhymes #and there's the contextual issues where it's clear they gave the writer very little information #the 'villain' song is the most egregious because he goes from being angry at the people for questioning him...#...to opening his song by talking about his genetics?? No one was talking about him being handsome in the previous scene...#anyway watch these videoes lol he does what he can #wish salt #wish movie

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