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oc story, please read and SHARE FEEDBACK, I really need it for motivation

I'm looking for bored, willing to read oc stories and actively share feedback on them, ppl. To read this. The text I wrote in Discord ~1 month ago. I'm in a dire need of feedback and activity, I hate talking to a wall. Please share feedback. Now to the copypaste. Btw whatever is in () is my commentary offscreen. And these characters are cats who act like ppl. Not entirely furries bc Im too lazy to furrify them completely:

" Fictional story about an oc called Grey. So, Grey. Original name - Ashford. A new son of the royal family. Since he opened his eyes all he saw were supportive loving parents. And no less nice servants. His life felt good. Once he got old enough to stay alone - he was left with the servants for the majority of his days and his parents went elsewhere bc the King wanted so. His father. Grey spent time learning all necessary about the castle and behaviour from the servants in the meantime. They didn't tell him all too fast, but it was fine. He was obedient and didn't throw a fit about waiting. … Unlike a certain someone all the castle remembered (whenever Grey was offscreen, usually). Grey apparently had the same personality as his quiet obedient mother. (Also I'm used to calling him Grey, so I'll be doing it, but the story called him Ashford yet). Which satisfied his father enough to visit him more often in his spare time. (Unlike he didn't certain someone else). (Could you guess who this is? He'll appear soon)

Eventually here happened one day when Grey suddenly heard the servants discussing a certain someone called Hawksword (whom I'll be calling Knifesk bc I'm used to it). And discussing him in a bad way. They said he sucked big time. Grey never knew anyone named Knifesk(Hawksword) before, so he curiously asked who it was. And the servants squirmed a bit, trying to ditch the topic for some reason. Apparently they didn't want Grey to get interested in that. It wasn't allowed. So Grey had to go silent about it … until his curiosity peaked again. And eventually here was the evening when he met his parents … and since the servants didn't tell - he asked them: who is Knifesk? Parents tensed up and the King asked where does Grey know his name from. Grey said the servants told him, so the King moved back up and disappointedly strictly said he'll have to punish them later for this disobedience, for he intended Grey to never learn about this guy. Perhaps his mom leaned down a bit sadly, at the edge of the scene, as she heard these words. .. Grey still repeated his question and so his dad strictly and wordily told him to not learn anything about Knifesk for he's a big bad guy and no one likes him. … Hmm, weird, - thought Grey.

(We don't talk about Bruno, no no no) (Also may have typos) … Days later Grey's life didn't change much, but he was wondering about Knifesk sometimes. Who's this is. Why he's considered bad and why he can't learn info about him? While he walked he sometimes still caught servants talking about Knifesk, usually when Grey hid and didn't make himself visible. Who was Knifesk? …. After careful listening in Grey learnt it was someone apparently mean, fighty, breaking stuff, and was royalty too, which means … It's his relative!! … But why he's so banned from their life? He never saw him ever. … And on closer listening he heard a comparison of Knifesk to himself, where he was made a better variant … And some final clue that pointed that Knifesk was his brother! Way older one perhaps, bc he fights outside of the castle a lot. Perhaps he's a grown warrior, is he? And he is busy protecting their country. That can explain why he wasn't seen much by his family … And perhaps he's just so caught up in his fighting that he can forget when he shouldn't fight anymore, so he ends up destroying stuff in the castle or harming other ppl in it, and maybe that's why Grey was told to keep away. (Btw in their world wars are constant and warriors are very valued. Usually)

For safety. … Well, but other ppl don't understand the problem and think Knifesk is just all mean. And say he's only bad. .. And IT'S bad! He is his brother, a Prince, perhaps even an heir to the kingdom! And he is not liked by his servants and maybe family … Grey should fix it! By showing that he can befriend the "big meanie" and that this "big meanie" isn't mean after all! (As you can see, Grey is naive, he's about ~7+ btw, and likes to eavesdrop and investigate. And perhaps is for now more confident than at some future story point. Spoilers! If you seen artworks it's not a spoiler) So, Grey's new task became to find Knifesk somewhere. So he was searching … But alas, no matter how hard he looked (btw familiar scene) - either the castle was too big or Knifesk wasn't in it yet. When does he even come home from the battles? And does he live here … Well, yeah, he should, he is royalty, they live in castles. Right! … But he isn't here … (bro lives in a cardboard box /j) (and would have my head for this joke if I wasn't "the god of his world" /hj?)

Perhaps he'll be by the night! Aw, but Grey goes to bed then! He'll miss Knifesk unless he'll somehow disobey his father, or anything. Or perhaps will find another time. (Btw his og name, Hawksword, perhaps can tell Grey Knifesk likes swords. So - being a warrior. Also Hawk. Their kingdom may be named Iron Hawk Kingdom or smth. I wasn't sure about the name, but if I remember correctly - that's it) … So perhaps one day Grey tried to stay around 'till evening, but then his parents came to lead him away. He can't let them know he's searching for Knifesk, they're against their meeting! So he can't tell or show anything sus (inexistent among us emoji). So he went along and then nervously sat in the room, worrying he'll miss Knifesk. … Fortunately his parents eventually did leave his bedroom and went to their own. He waited a bit more and crawled outside into the corridor. And was tip-toing forward, searching for Knifesk. … Where can he be? Gasp! And Grey had to hide bc servants walked in the corridors! …

Fortunately he's small and his fur isn't bright, so they didn't see him. And he continued his way. … After several moments of searching he heard some noise. Metallic clanging perhaps, if we'll write in somewhat anthro form for now. This can count as a sound of someone dropping their armor or a weapon or smth. He very carefully crawled a bit more forward, excited to perhaps see his brother .. And he perhaps did see. A very big cat shadow huffing in frustration and going forward. Perhaps his steps were heavy, plus the shadow was big. So Grey figured his brother was indeed way older than him. He's huge! Big strong warrior! .. Who returns very late from his fighting. .. Good job! Hopefully someone appreciates his efforts! (no one does :/)

… In the following days Grey's life was relatively same, he was happy he did somehow witness Knifesk tho … But how can he witness him More often? He barely saw how he looks … Was his fur black, like their father's? (Btw --- the father, the King - King Cosmo. A black big fluffy strict cat with red eyes, some red ornaments on his face, paws and tail tip. And he also has many grey spots on his entire fur, like some cheetah. And the Queen, Queen Cinder. Lighter grey colored with purple paws, tail tip, inner side if the ears, nose and underbelly. Has purple eyes. And Grey - he is darker shade of grey, his belly isn't purple, his paws and tail tip are same light purple shade as his mother's, s o are his inner sides of the ears. He has purple eyes, like his mother) After some time Grey realised he couldn't collect info by eavesdropping on servants more, especially when he pretends to not hear them at all, when they worry if he heard their Knifesk vents/rants again. And so he could listen more. And think how great it'll be when he'll befriend his brother and show ppl he's a good cat! No way he'll hurt his younger brother, right? It's just a precaution just in case. Better safe than sorry. Or perhaps it's just so he won't distract him, or simply bc cats don't think Knifesk is a good cat. Well Grey will prove otherwise! …

… It took a while, but he did get clues on where Knifesk can go and on which time. And tried to get here in various times. He did see some broken pottery and other interior things. .. Huh, Knifesk must be tired after his fights, so he just carelessly drops stuff around when he comes home, like this night. Plus servants are sort of expected to gather stuff for the royalty??? … Well, they perhaps also got tired of always cleaning after Knifesk (yep, they certainly did) … And will Grey's efforts eventually be rewarded, you think? … They will. One successful (or who knows) day Grey FINALLY succeeded at seeing Knifesk. Which happened so abruptly he froze in awe for a moment. He walked into corridor and almost forgot to hide as he saw a big cat returning from his fight. A big fluffy black cat, like their father, with red lobe and purple underbelly, paws and down side of the tail. .. He looks like both their parents! And more like their father actually. As black, as big. Perhaps even has the same serious personality, does he? …. Alright. It's either now or never! And so after gathering himself for about 5 minutes … Grey did step forward to meet Knifesk (edited)

And here my small draft ends until further notice

Hope anyone will read it and give me feedback

Then I went to listen to "we don't talk about Bruno"

Gotta remember to continue on a better day. Also I wrote the next scene months ahead. I mean I imagined it. And only on the day of posting I wrote this small Grey text "

// Btw I made them new names only bc Grey and Knifesk didnt sound like royalty // I'd draw refs, but I'm absolutely not in the drawing mood rn. And not in a good mood either

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oc story, please read and SHARE FEEDBACK, I really need it for motivation

I'm looking for bored, willing to read oc stories and actively share feedback on them, ppl. To read this. The text I wrote in Discord ~1 month ago. I'm in a dire need of feedback and activity, I hate talking to a wall. Please share feedback. Now to the copypaste. Btw whatever is in () is my commentary offscreen. And these characters are cats who act like ppl. Not entirely furries bc Im too lazy to furrify them completely:

" Fictional story about an oc called Grey. So, Grey. Original name - Ashford. A new son of the royal family. Since he opened his eyes all he saw were supportive loving parents. And no less nice servants. His life felt good. Once he got old enough to stay alone - he was left with the servants for the majority of his days and his parents went elsewhere bc the King wanted so. His father. Grey spent time learning all necessary about the castle and behaviour from the servants in the meantime. They didn't tell him all too fast, but it was fine. He was obedient and didn't throw a fit about waiting. … Unlike a certain someone all the castle remembered (whenever Grey was offscreen, usually). Grey apparently had the same personality as his quiet obedient mother. (Also I'm used to calling him Grey, so I'll be doing it, but the story called him Ashford yet). Which satisfied his father enough to visit him more often in his spare time. (Unlike he didn't certain someone else). (Could you guess who this is? He'll appear soon)

Eventually here happened one day when Grey suddenly heard the servants discussing a certain someone called Hawksword (whom I'll be calling Knifesk bc I'm used to it). And discussing him in a bad way. They said he sucked big time. Grey never knew anyone named Knifesk(Hawksword) before, so he curiously asked who it was. And the servants squirmed a bit, trying to ditch the topic for some reason. Apparently they didn't want Grey to get interested in that. It wasn't allowed. So Grey had to go silent about it … until his curiosity peaked again. And eventually here was the evening when he met his parents … and since the servants didn't tell - he asked them: who is Knifesk? Parents tensed up and the King asked where does Grey know his name from. Grey said the servants told him, so the King moved back up and disappointedly strictly said he'll have to punish them later for this disobedience, for he intended Grey to never learn about this guy. Perhaps his mom leaned down a bit sadly, at the edge of the scene, as she heard these words. .. Grey still repeated his question and so his dad strictly and wordily told him to not learn anything about Knifesk for he's a big bad guy and no one likes him. … Hmm, weird, - thought Grey.

(We don't talk about Bruno, no no no) (Also may have typos) … Days later Grey's life didn't change much, but he was wondering about Knifesk sometimes. Who's this is. Why he's considered bad and why he can't learn info about him? While he walked he sometimes still caught servants talking about Knifesk, usually when Grey hid and didn't make himself visible. Who was Knifesk? …. After careful listening in Grey learnt it was someone apparently mean, fighty, breaking stuff, and was royalty too, which means … It's his relative!! … But why he's so banned from their life? He never saw him ever. … And on closer listening he heard a comparison of Knifesk to himself, where he was made a better variant … And some final clue that pointed that Knifesk was his brother! Way older one perhaps, bc he fights outside of the castle a lot. Perhaps he's a grown warrior, is he? And he is busy protecting their country. That can explain why he wasn't seen much by his family … And perhaps he's just so caught up in his fighting that he can forget when he shouldn't fight anymore, so he ends up destroying stuff in the castle or harming other ppl in it, and maybe that's why Grey was told to keep away. (Btw in their world wars are constant and warriors are very valued. Usually)

For safety. … Well, but other ppl don't understand the problem and think Knifesk is just all mean. And say he's only bad. .. And IT'S bad! He is his brother, a Prince, perhaps even an heir to the kingdom! And he is not liked by his servants and maybe family … Grey should fix it! By showing that he can befriend the "big meanie" and that this "big meanie" isn't mean after all! (As you can see, Grey is naive, he's about ~7+ btw, and likes to eavesdrop and investigate. And perhaps is for now more confident than at some future story point. Spoilers! If you seen artworks it's not a spoiler) So, Grey's new task became to find Knifesk somewhere. So he was searching … But alas, no matter how hard he looked (btw familiar scene) - either the castle was too big or Knifesk wasn't in it yet. When does he even come home from the battles? And does he live here … Well, yeah, he should, he is royalty, they live in castles. Right! … But he isn't here … (bro lives in a cardboard box /j) (and would have my head for this joke if I wasn't "the god of his world" /hj?)

Perhaps he'll be by the night! Aw, but Grey goes to bed then! He'll miss Knifesk unless he'll somehow disobey his father, or anything. Or perhaps will find another time. (Btw his og name, Hawksword, perhaps can tell Grey Knifesk likes swords. So - being a warrior. Also Hawk. Their kingdom may be named Iron Hawk Kingdom or smth. I wasn't sure about the name, but if I remember correctly - that's it) … So perhaps one day Grey tried to stay around 'till evening, but then his parents came to lead him away. He can't let them know he's searching for Knifesk, they're against their meeting! So he can't tell or show anything sus (inexistent among us emoji). So he went along and then nervously sat in the room, worrying he'll miss Knifesk. … Fortunately his parents eventually did leave his bedroom and went to their own. He waited a bit more and crawled outside into the corridor. And was tip-toing forward, searching for Knifesk. … Where can he be? Gasp! And Grey had to hide bc servants walked in the corridors! …

Fortunately he's small and his fur isn't bright, so they didn't see him. And he continued his way. … After several moments of searching he heard some noise. Metallic clanging perhaps, if we'll write in somewhat anthro form for now. This can count as a sound of someone dropping their armor or a weapon or smth. He very carefully crawled a bit more forward, excited to perhaps see his brother .. And he perhaps did see. A very big cat shadow huffing in frustration and going forward. Perhaps his steps were heavy, plus the shadow was big. So Grey figured his brother was indeed way older than him. He's huge! Big strong warrior! .. Who returns very late from his fighting. .. Good job! Hopefully someone appreciates his efforts! (no one does :/)

… In the following days Grey's life was relatively same, he was happy he did somehow witness Knifesk tho … But how can he witness him More often? He barely saw how he looks … Was his fur black, like their father's? (Btw --- the father, the King - King Cosmo. A black big fluffy strict cat with red eyes, some red ornaments on his face, paws and tail tip. And he also has many grey spots on his entire fur, like some cheetah. And the Queen, Queen Cinder. Lighter grey colored with purple paws, tail tip, inner side if the ears, nose and underbelly. Has purple eyes. And Grey - he is darker shade of grey, his belly isn't purple, his paws and tail tip are same light purple shade as his mother's, s o are his inner sides of the ears. He has purple eyes, like his mother) After some time Grey realised he couldn't collect info by eavesdropping on servants more, especially when he pretends to not hear them at all, when they worry if he heard their Knifesk vents/rants again. And so he could listen more. And think how great it'll be when he'll befriend his brother and show ppl he's a good cat! No way he'll hurt his younger brother, right? It's just a precaution just in case. Better safe than sorry. Or perhaps it's just so he won't distract him, or simply bc cats don't think Knifesk is a good cat. Well Grey will prove otherwise! …

… It took a while, but he did get clues on where Knifesk can go and on which time. And tried to get here in various times. He did see some broken pottery and other interior things. .. Huh, Knifesk must be tired after his fights, so he just carelessly drops stuff around when he comes home, like this night. Plus servants are sort of expected to gather stuff for the royalty??? … Well, they perhaps also got tired of always cleaning after Knifesk (yep, they certainly did) … And will Grey's efforts eventually be rewarded, you think? … They will. One successful (or who knows) day Grey FINALLY succeeded at seeing Knifesk. Which happened so abruptly he froze in awe for a moment. He walked into corridor and almost forgot to hide as he saw a big cat returning from his fight. A big fluffy black cat, like their father, with red lobe and purple underbelly, paws and down side of the tail. .. He looks like both their parents! And more like their father actually. As black, as big. Perhaps even has the same serious personality, does he? …. Alright. It's either now or never! And so after gathering himself for about 5 minutes … Grey did step forward to meet Knifesk (edited)

And here my small draft ends until further notice

Hope anyone will read it and give me feedback

Then I went to listen to "we don't talk about Bruno"

Gotta remember to continue on a better day. Also I wrote the next scene months ahead. I mean I imagined it. And only on the day of posting I wrote this small Grey text "

// Btw I made them new names only bc Grey and Knifesk didnt sound like royalty // I'd draw refs, but I'm absolutely not in the drawing mood rn. And not in a good mood either

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I made the funny doodles last night! Can you name the easteregg guest character? (and guess me from my new accout if you saw me drawing him before-) (hi btw👋)

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To all who ask me for commissions:

I will make them gladly if you'll help me find the good unrestricted way to receive small foreign payments into CIS countries. Because I have no idea what to use for it, all i googled doesn't work anymore. (Or maybe boosty works, tho it struggles to connect to my card). But other than that - I'd gladly open commissions, i need money. Sfw art only btw. But I can draw blood and violence. Mostly draw cats and cat furries

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Small wip of the artwork I'm making. Thanks to the kind comments in reblogs btw :D, I see ya

Technically their story goes in the Bendy and the ink machine universe, but while writing my stories I change the story so much the canon resemblance is small. So I not always tag such with fandom tags, unless they look too obvious to be from certain fandoms 👌

(couldn't find the one with white outline in good quality, so try to make out where his legs end by yourselves-)

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This one was drawn weeks ago. And previous Chain art was drawn like 4 days ago

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Told ya

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redrawn from vid frame

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I called it "mind and body"

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I am alive!

(Immortalised-)

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I almost forgot to share my New Year art

The guy on the right was inspired by snake when he was created, so I chose him. Also guy on my pfp is his father

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Guys, i'm alive! Happy New Year!

Have last year's art of Clyde(unless I'll change his name) and Grey

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" C'mon, I'll just talk to them! 😊✨🪓 "

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Here's my cartoony boi and his reference, say hi

Also I'm aware of the mistake with the writing- . My excuse is that he wrote it while already holding the bottle this side 👌

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Guys, I made the!

(the lineart took a ~week, the colouring took a few minutes)

(I wonder if Tumblr will make it visible since I usually draw only cats)

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Tired man in an armchair👌

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More furries 👏. One of them is real, the other is his hallucination clone.