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My ultimate fantasy:

Eat and eat, until stomach hurts

Admits to eating too much and asks me for comfort

Packed full tummy is round and solid,

Occasional burps, to relieve the pressure

Leaning my ear against the stomach, I can hear growling and struggling to digest

Moans and groans to me about being so full, needing my care and comfort

Pressing my hand into the belly and feeling the rumbling

A long groan and loud belly grumble accompany the big burps

Intense hiccups worsen the already aching belly

Drag my nails up and down the belly, occasionally pushing in and causing a reaction

Massaging in a pattern to help digestion

Kissing where the tummy is most tender

Falling asleep to the sound of tummy growling

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Rubbing someone’s poor overstuffed belly while they sit in your lap, just kneading and pressing into their plump sides while they let out the softest little burps and whimpers from you relieving all that pressure 😵‍💫

Giving them little kisses all over their blushed pudgy cheeks, still massaging their taut belly as you feel their body start to loosen up and sink heavily into your lap and against your body

Telling them what a good job they did, and how you can’t believe how big they’re already getting while they slip into a little food coma in your lap 🥺

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Is it just me or does the sight of them slowly gulping down the fizzy liquid also give you goosebumps, as their belly slowly but surely expands, filling out and gurgling while it struggles to hold the bubbly liquid. As their breathing starts to get heavier and they slow down needing to take a break to let out a few burps. As they put the bottle back to their lips, groaning and huffing while they get closer to emptying the bottle. As they finish it, instantly letting out a loud belch, eyes almost shut, wincing and gently patting their distended, big, bloated gut to get out more burps.

Is that just me or...?

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Ugh loud swallowing noises drive me crazy. When someone's chugging a drink and you can hear every single gulp? Ough. When you can hear their stomach protesting the sudden massive increase in volume, while they're still drinking? OOOUUHHH

And then when they let out a belch the moment that last glug goes down, like the pressure in their belly was so intense that they couldn't hold it down for even a second... like please just kiss me already

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A sub whose master loves to make her drink soda so she's full of bubbles and has her sit on his lap and just burp it all out. Cooing at her whenever she gets embarrassed and tries to get out of his lap in shame. He pulls her back and grips her cheeks pulling her close before going in for a long drawn out kiss. She gets excited and starts grinding on her master before she realizes his other hand is making its way towards her chubby belly, and grabs at it and she lets out a wet belch into his mouth. He moans euphoric as his princess gives him what he wants

So as it turns out I'm nowere near as proficciant at talking about this kind of stuff as I thought because simply reading this is making me curl up and wonder if I'm not inturrupting something lmao, but wow-

Do you think the dom could try burping as well? Maybe to rile the sub up if she's into it? He could pretend to have it stuck and ask her how to get it out, and she'd shyly demonstrate by belching loudly, only for him to let out this quiet little burp and smirk

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teasing someone for burping when they’re stuffed to their absolute max and can’t help it, especially when it was you who stuffed them, knowing full well they get like that when they eat too much or too quickly. knowing they need help soothing their packed belly, their cheeks red as the pressure brings up thick, deep belches with an embarrassed “excuse me.” or whining “you fed me too much” or “I can’t help it, I’m so full baby, please don’t stop.”

praising them for eating so well interspersed with gentle teasing “oh baby, you must be full” or “good job darling, let’s get another one out, okay?”

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i love this blog smmmjenjarakern i rlly like the idea of someone getting off on burping and stuffing themselves to the brim in private,, allowing themselves to be as shameless and slobby and gross about it as they want and then being all embarrassed and hesitant with a partner,, needing some praise and coaxing to really let loose and be as open about it as they are in private asheahwwkbrhebh

bonus points if they're usually prissy and well put together in public and being a total slob when theyre alone,, being lowk humiliated to have someone see them in such an unfiltered, gluttonous state but trusting them enough to show them anyway hhgnnrnnenrsgtnd

See generally I’m pretty averse to slob because of sensory issues and (suspected but not diagnosed just wanna make that clear) OCD, but if it’s like, subtle slob? Like a few crumbs here and there, lazily laying on the couch, burping- I don’t mind that! And in situations like this? I think it can be pretty cute ❤️

I like to imagine this person is quite gentlemanly/lady like when out and about, everyone knows them as this really nice person who’ll make polite conversation and help you and you need it, but they’re also really careful with their manners. Then maybe one day their friend or partner comes over for a visit but they don’t make themselves too known beforehand (imagine they’ve been visiting so often it’s casual for them to just enter the house) so they catch the polite person not being so polite- stuffing their face or downing a ton of soda, burping and enjoying the feeling of it…until they see the other person and kinda implode lol

And yes, coaxing burps out of a shy person is 👌👌👌

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so, burps in general are pretty hot, right?

what really gets me off is uncontrollable burps — the kind that you can tell are erupting from a full, taut, gurgling gut pushed to its limits. those are the hollow, bubbly belches that you can tell are forced out only by those poor, overstretched tummy muscles, desperate to reduce the growing pressure inside.

i especially love how they catch the person off guard almost every time — how there’s always a hint of audible surprise when all that gas loudly forces it’s way up. And these wonderful burps are usually accompanied by groans and whines that are genuine to an unmistakably bloated, gassy, gurgling belly.

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the loud gurgle in someone’s stomach right before they burp reblog if you agree

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When your S/O has just finished a huge dinner and is immensely stuffed. Not only is he stuffed, they are bloated. You sit on the couch next to them, providing soft kisses and whispers of comfort. They moan and ask you for a little favor. You accept. They explain that they feel too tight and need help getting comfortable. Your eyes trail down to their stomachs, and it's as tight as a drum. Your hands carefully rub the surface to find any pockets, but no such luck. Maybe a different position may help. You ask them to roll on their as best as they can, but S/O doesn't like the idea much. They complain that it hurts to move and that their belly is too heavy. You don't want to force them, so you urge them to relax (like that's going to happen). You suggested getting ginger ale, but your S/O immediately declined. Their face almost going white at the thought of anything else entering their tight belly. Well, the only option left is to rub the pressure away.

You carefully keep rubbing, but nothing is budging. S/O is starting to drift off from the soothing motion. However, you can't help but see a hint of discomfort on their beautiful face. You certainly can't have that! As you rub their belly, you try finding any pockets. Your fingers search and search until you decide to press your ear lightly to hear where it could be. Found it!!! Right by the belly button. You feel it to make sure, and yet it's confirmed. You look back up at your S/O, and they are still asleep. Much like its name, you press firmly. Then, their belly starts burble and shift. The noises get louder and concerning. Next thing you know, a humongous belch rattled the very room they sat it. S/O was startled awake from the sudden eruption, and their cheeks turned a deep red as their breath was taken. You couldn't help but laugh and apologize. S/O couldn't help but do the same. S/O's belly was still bloated but not filled to the brim with air. Both eventually crashed out on the couch, now knowing what to do if S/O is ever bloated again.

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Currently going insane over the idea of massaging burps out of a massively bloated belly. Like not only do I get to see whomever I'm with lose themselves in how good my hands feel around their taut gut, but also seeing their mind go blank as burps are forced out is heavenly. A double plus if what’s below rivals their gut

HOT!!!

when someone is so full even just light pressing is enough to dislodge a thick burp

or, even if they tell you it hurts, soothing them as you press harder, working up the trapped gas because you know they need to get it out to feel better

hearing their stomach gurgle and groan from everything they’ve packed into it and then when they belch it’s such a relief

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Soft feeding is just 🥰 I want somebody to sit me in their lap and help me eat. Talking with me and encouraging me to stuff myself more. Rubbing my belly gently while they bring food to my lips. I want to be taken care of before, during and after. Be told I'm a good girl for eating everything they give me and encouraging me to burp when I need to. They don't want me to get a tummy ache (even though they love it). After I eat, they help burp me. They pat my belly and rub my back like a baby, helping out all the gas in my stuffed belly. Calling me a good girl, sweet girl. They tease me just a little for being so greedy and gassy. They squish my bloated belly and listen to me belch, kissing me and petting my hair. Ughhhhhhh

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100 Dialogue Tags You Can Use Instead of “Said”

For the writers struggling to rid themselves of the classic ‘said’. Some are repeated in different categories since they fit multiple ones (but those are counted once so it adds up to 100 new words). 

1. Neutral Tags 

Straightforward and unobtrusive dialogue tags: 

Added, Replied, Stated, Remarked, Responded, Observed, Acknowledged, Commented, Noted, Voiced, Expressed, Shared, Answered, Mentioned, Declared.

2. Questioning Tags 

Curious, interrogative dialogue tags:

Asked, Queried, Wondered, Probed, Inquired, Requested, Pondered, Demanded, Challenged, Interjected, Investigated, Countered, Snapped, Pleaded, Insisted.

3. Emotive Tags 

Emotional dialogue tags:

Exclaimed, Shouted, Sobbed, Whispered, Cried, Hissed, Gasped, Laughed, Screamed, Stammered, Wailed, Murmured, Snarled, Choked, Barked.

4. Descriptive Tags 

Insightful, tonal dialogue tags: 

Muttered, Mumbled, Yelled, Uttered, Roared, Bellowed, Drawled, Spoke, Shrieked, Boomed, Snapped, Groaned, Rasped, Purred, Croaked.

5. Action-Oriented Tags 

Movement-based dialogue tags: 

Announced, Admitted, Interrupted, Joked, Suggested, Offered, Explained, Repeated, Advised, Warned, Agreed, Confirmed, Ordered, Reassured, Stated.

6. Conflict Tags 

Argumentative, defiant dialogue tags:

Argued, Snapped, Retorted, Rebuked, Disputed, Objected, Contested, Barked, Protested, Countered, Growled, Scoffed, Sneered, Challenged, Huffed.

7. Agreement Tags 

Understanding, compliant dialogue tags: 

Agreed, Assented, Nodded, Confirmed, Replied, Conceded, Acknowledged, Accepted, Affirmed, Yielded, Supported, Echoed, Consented, Promised, Concurred.

8. Disagreement Tags 

Resistant, defiant dialogue tags: 

Denied, Disagreed, Refused, Argued, Contradicted, Insisted, Protested, Objected, Rejected, Declined, Countered, Challenged, Snubbed, Dismissed, Rebuked.

9. Confused Tags 

Hesitant, uncertain dialogue tags:

Stammered, Hesitated, Fumbled, Babbled, Mumbled, Faltered, Stumbled, Wondered, Pondered, Stuttered, Blurted, Doubted, Confessed, Vacillated.

10. Surprise Tags

Shock-inducing dialogue tags:

Gasped, Stunned, Exclaimed, Blurted, Wondered, Staggered, Marvelled, Breathed, Recoiled, Jumped, Yelped, Shrieked, Stammered.

Note: everyone is entitled to their own opinion. No I am NOT telling people to abandon said and use these. Yes I understand that said is often good enough, but sometimes you WANT to draw attention to how the character is speaking. If you think adding an action/movement to your dialogue is 'good enough' hate to break it to you but that ruins immersion much more than a casual 'mumbled'. And for the last time: this is just a resource list, CALM DOWN. Hope that covers all the annoyingly redundant replies :)

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she twirls her hair around her finger. she bites her lip.

she squirms in place, her hips shift. her mouth opens, then closes.

slowly, her hand moves up to touch her tummy. she puts it down. soon, it goes back there again. her hips shift. she bites her lip.

her hand presses into her tummy. you hear a gurgle, a squelch. her face cringes - oh, her tummy’s upset. it looks full. you wonder what she ate. her tummy clenches. her hand grips. then her mouth opens and -

“uuuuuurp.”

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ok i am not the same anon as the system anon but i am also a system in which two of us have a kinky thing going and i have a story to share. for context one of us is a feedee/gainer and the other is a feeder/encourager, and both are also really into burping. today the feeder spontaneously had the me writing this/the feedee try burp denial for the first time and it was the hottest thing ever. he made me chug a bunch of soda and physically kept me from burping. i got so turned on by how bloated i felt! he only let me burp a few minutes later when we were driving, giving me permission to use a bumpy road to help get those burps up. but by that point they were pretty stuck, so he had me drink more soda and told me to let loose. and when i did, holy shit, those belches practically exploded out of me! i'm still super turned on, and i feel really lucky that we can be together and have fun like this.

your blog and the other system anon kinda do have us wondering how many of us there are. idk if there's a correlation between systems and this kink or broader feedism dynamics, but it's cool knowing we're not the only ones!

Damn, this is both sweet and hot! It sounds like you had a lot of fun, and tbh I think it's cool that you're able to enjoy kink dynamics in a complex way like this. If you've got any other stories you want to share now or in the future, I'm always down for that!

As for the last part, I can't say I've personally seen people in these sorts of circles openly IDing as systems beyond just a couple blogs. I suspect part of that could be because of stigma, but I don't really know for sure what else might go into that. I suspect the number is definitely higher, though, since this is tumblr after all and there's so many neurodivergent (sub)communities with substantial presences here, including systems. That said, even if people prefer to not to openly ID themselves as such, would it be helpful for you to see something like a poll on systems in feedism and adjacent kinks?

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Hi! For the thanksgiving requests, maybe someone burping either unexpectedly or uncontrollably after dinner? Thank you!!

surprise! 🫧🫧