#This has to be a contender for Worst DDD I've ever drawn

[stupidgalaxybrain]

The longer I go between doing a journal touch-up, the more I end up changing from the original page. By far this one has the most dialogue adjustments, including getting rid of Kirby's dialogue which felt ooc (For the bad dialogue, not necessarily speaking on its own). Anyway- Dark Matter! Like nearly everything in this franchise I've got thoughts, and some of them are on display here, like Blade being kind of a dork. And with Gooey, I HC his eyes look different directions because he has to concentrate harder to focus them after having one eye for so long. If he's really tired they'll start to melt together. I also imagine Gooey stowed Blade away after KDL2 because who would suspect Gooey would hide anything? It's the perfect plan.

Transcript and Original:

Dark Matter Blade, possessing DDD: Is this... friendship?

Waddle Dee: Great King, you've been awfully quiet- Are you snoring?

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Blade, about to get his ass handed to him: I bet I look so cool right now

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Zero's Top 2 Least Favorite Kids

Blade - Failed 1st invasion

Gooey - Literally helped kill Zero

*Honorable mention to all of Zero's kids in general

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Gooey: Aw geez, Kirby, think we could stop for a snack?

Kirby: Ice cream? (I guess they've got some on hand lol)

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ChuChu: What do ya got there?

Gooey: A smoothie. (He has more than a smoothie.)