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#my art#calien de riva#rook de riva#dragon age#dragon age the veilguard#veilguard#datv#dragon age rook#a talented crow with a bright future ahead of him :)#hehehe been thinking about magical exhaustion. local fire mage coughing up smoke after overexterting himself :))#nothing to worry about here at all#(<- i worked out his immediate future after veilguard. at least about uhhh 3-4 months. healthy and normal times)#it includes almost getting himself killed (repeatedly) and nearly ruining his relationship in the process#(ive also been thinking about magical exhaustion with neve specifically bc ice..... fire and ice fun to think abouuutt)#(i should maybe yap about All This sometime)#post game aka the time calien tries to outrun his grief and fails over and over again until it nearly kills him (or it does. au territory)#ive GOT TO draw his death chart
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Kyojuro Rengoku; The Flame Burning in My Soul
Genre: Angst
Pairing: Kyojuro Rengoku x Male Reader | (side) Tengen Uzui x Male Reader
Warning(s): Very Narrative Driven, Very Long(?), Slight Manga Spoilers, Mourning, Death
Summary: Living without the love of your life can do a number on you, especially when youâre living everyday wondering if you even want to go on.
Part I
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Heâs goneâŚ
It feels like it was only yesterday that he was holding you and promising to marry youâŚ
Heâs goneâŚ
He said the mission was going to be easyâŚ
Heâs goneâŚ
He was supposed to come back safelyâŚ
Heâs goneâŚ
Heâs just playing a prank!
Heâs goneâŚ
He sent that crow with a phony letter to scare us!
Heâs goneâŚ
Mr. Uzui must be in on it as well!
Heâs goneâŚ
Theyâre such pranksters!
Heâs goneâŚ
Heâll be back soonâŚ
Heâs goneâŚ
I canât wait until-
HEâS
GONE
NOW
âŚ
It canât be realâŚ
it just canât beâŚ
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You tried to convince yourself it wasnât real. That it was all some sick game Kyojuro thought would be funny. That was until you saw his crow flying to the estate while you were outside cleaning with Senjuro, followed by a young boy with a scarâŚ
âAre you Senjuro? And Sir Rengokuâs lover?â The boy asked before politely bowing.
âI take it you know about Mr. Rengoku? Iâm so sorry. Before he died, he asked for some messages to be delivered to you, your father, and his lover. Iâve come to pass them on.â He stated.
âFrom my brother? Thank you, but iâm already well aware of what happened to him.â Senjuro solemnly stated. You moved closer to him to rub his shoulder. âWhatâs wrong?! Your face! It looks as pale as a ghost!â
âKnock it off!â All three of you were surprised by the sudden outburst. âWhatever message he left means nothing anyway! Why would he become a swordsman when he had no talent to being with! Itâs no wonder he died! Heâs worthless.â You gripped on the broom tighter, your eyes beginning to swell with tears at Shinjuroâs words. âHe was a fool of a son from the start! A personâs potential is determined the day theyâre born. Only a mere handful have any talent⌠the rest are just dregs of society. Youâre either born a genius or someday killed by one!â Shinjuro stopped to take a drink. âItâs clear which one Kyojuro was. He had no future to begin with. No surprise he got killed.â Senjuro cuddled closer into your side.
âYou shut your mouth!â You screamed, surprising all three boys. âKyojuro had a bright future ahead of him! He was to come back and marry me! We were to be wed and start a life together! All my life, I dreamed of spending my last days with him, so donât you dare stand here and soil his name by calling him worthless because he meant everything to me!â You fought back tears as Senjuro leaned closer to comfort you. âJust because youâre a sad old man who gave up on his own life doesnât give you the right to speak badly about an otherâs!â
âGive me a break! The funeral is over! Itâs high time you both move on with your damn lives!â You held the youngest Rengoku behind you as he cried into your kimono.
âJust a moment!â The boy with a checkered haori moved to stand in front of you and Senjuro. âDonât you think youâre being a bit too harsh? Please show some respect for your son!â He yelled.
âAnd just who the hell are you? Answer me! Or get off of my property!â Shinjuro yelled.
âIâm with⌠the demon slayer corps!â He announced. Something he did somehow caused Shinjuro to drop his jar of sakĂŠ.
The next few moments were a blur to you. One second, he was yelling at the young slayer boy about sun breathing, the next he had him pinned to the ground, and then you were holding Senjuro after his father had hit him.
âDonât you dare lay a hand on him you monster!â You rushed to put some distance between Senjuro and the altercation in front of you. âWhy are you acting so hostile like this in the first place? Insulting your own child who lost his life⌠in front of his fiancĂŠ no less! And striking your son; whatâs the matter with you?!â
âAre you alright?â You examined Senjuroâs face. He nodded, but still held the injury. âIâll get you some ointment after he calms down, okay?â Senjuro nodded and you held him close to him, before turning back to see the boy lunging at Shinjuro.
âYoung slayer, be careful!â You yelled. âHeâs a former hashira!â Senjuro shouted as the boy was punched in the face by Shinjuro. âPlease father! Have mercy!â You stepped away from Senjuro to rush towards the boy.
Your eyes widened as you saw the boy knock out a former hashira⌠with a head butt? You put your shock aside and caught both of them.
âSenjuro, please take this boy inside. Iâll deal with your father.â The young boy eagerly came to assist you as you painstakingly took the older man inside.
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Now you three found yourself in the main living area of the house as you applied some ointment to Senjuroâs injury and examined the other slayer boyâs injuries.
âI feel like Iâve made a grave mistake.â The boy said with a bowed head after you applied a simple healing balm to his forehead. You left to your room soon after, but you kept your door open to keep an ear out for Senjuro.
âPlease sir, have some tea.â
âThank you very much. I hope you can forgive me⌠for head butting your father and all. Heâs okay right?â The boy asked.
âOh yeah, heâll be fine. (M/n)âs an amazing doctor, so itâs not like heâd be down for too long. And besides, heâs back to getting sakĂŠ already.â Senjuro explained.
âWhat a relief.â The slayer huffed.
âYou have my thanks.â Senjuro said, seemingly to the other boyâs surprise. âFor standing up to him. I was too scared to. Even when he badmouthed my brother like that. Iâm sure (M/n) is grateful too.â You watched through the back door as Shinjuro wobbled off to purchase more sakĂŠ. âTell me. What were my brothers last moments like.â You suddenly remembered why that boy was here in the first place. As that all too familiar pain began to emerge in your chest, you shut the door. You didnât need anymore grief. Your heart has had enough as it is.
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A knock to your door awoke you from the nap you hadnât even noticed you took. âCome in.â You groggily called and watched as Senjuro slowly walked in. âOur visitor has left.â He said. You nodded before Senjuro ran over and collapsed in your arms. You raked your fingers through his hair as he loudly sobbed into your shoulder. âItâll be alright. Weâll get through this.â You cupped his face and looked into his teary eyes. âFor Kyojuro, okay?â You held out your pinky to him. He nodded before interlocking your fingers.
âIt was difficult getting him to accept Kyojuroâs sword guard. He swore he couldnât accept it.â Senjuro lightly chuckled recounting his encounter with the young slayer boy you now knew as Tanjiro. âHe said that you shouldâve kept it.â He smiled. âI couldnât keep that thing even if I wanted to. Iâd get too sad.â You said, running your fingers through Senjuroâs hair.
ââDonât let me limit your heartâ,â Senjuro said out of the blue. ââPlease allow someone else to give you the love i wish i couldâve, because you deserve the world and more. I hope you find a man who will treat you like the prince you are in my place.ââ âWhat are you on about?â You turned to face him. âThose were Kyojuroâs last words to you. Tanjiro said he had the most to say about you. Apparently he wouldnât shut up about how excited he was to marry his boyfriend when he returned from his mission.â You felt Senjuroâs tears falling in your lap before you even noticed the ones dripping down your cheeks.
You two cried a lot that nightâŚ
And the nextâŚ
And while you couldâve sworn you were hearing things, you knew Shinjuro was crying too.
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âYou shouldnât push yourself ya know? Thatâs not very flashy of you.â The sound hashira called to you as you continued to train.
You had chosen to become Tengen Uzuiâs tsugoku as a means of defending yourself after Kyojuroâs death. It would be hard for anyone to train like this, but now imagine youâve gone your whole life without as much as touching a sword, to now pushing yourself to train every day with one until your heart felt like it was on the brink of giving out.
âIf you expect me to be ready for battle within the current century, youâll let me continue.â You said, not even sparing a glance towards the older man behind you.
He scoffed before walking towards you and gripping your sword. âThatâs enough (M/n).â He sternly instructed. âWeâll pick this up tomorrow.â
You let go off your sword and stormed off, leaving the taller to slowly trail behind as he fiddled with your blade.
âYou can be quite the brat ya know?â He commented as you made your way back towards the Rengoku residence.
âAnd you can be quite the headache.â You pulled off your geta and made your way towards the kitchen, not before greeting Senjuro with a hug and kiss to his forehead. Afterwards, starting on dinner for you all, as well as your unwanted flashy guest.
âI donât know why you insist on staying here. You have a home with three wives to return to.â You snidely commented as you poured stew into Senjuroâs plate.
âWell, my home doesnât have my cute tsugoku at it now does it?â Tengen smirked at your irritated expression.
You inhaled deeply before launching his plate at him; however, he caught it rather easily and began to dig in as if nothing happened. Curse him for being a skilled hashira. âAnd besides, you know theyâre not there.â
You took your place next to Senjuro and angrily began to eat. Stuffing your face full of stew and barely even giving yourself time to chew.
âThank you for the meal (M/n)!â Senjuro hugged you before running off to his room, realizing the tense atmosphere he found himself in the middle of.
âIf you want a real answer, I worried about you (M/n).â Tengen stated as he placed his bowl down. âYou never wanted to even touch a sword, but now you push yourself to train with one every day. Itâs not healthy.â
âWho cares how I was in the past. So what if I want to wield a sword now? You should only concern yourself with training me.â You glared at him.
âYou wonât defeat the demon that killed Kyojuro.â He deadpanned. âYouâre far too weak⌠and if you plan on pushing yourself like this, youâll be dead before you even have the chance to try.â
You tighten your hands into fists and inhaled deeply, attempting to keep yourself from crying.
Tengen shifted to be seated beside you and laid your head on his shoulder. âItâs okay to cry ya know? Just let it all out.â You sobbed into his shoulder as he rubbed your back.
âOnce we get back from this mission⌠please listen to me. I promise Iâll help you get stronger, without you pushing your body so hard.â You nodded against his body and he smiled gently down at you. He cupped your face so that know you were facing his.
âGo get some rest.â He pushed a strand of your hair behind your ear. âMeet me at the Butterfly Estate tomorrow morning. Iâll be there to find a girl to help on this mission.â You nodded. He smiled and placed a kiss to your forehead before standing up. âSee you later (M/n).â
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âYouâre an idiot you know that?â You cried as you held the only hand Tengen had left.
While you expected to engage in battle during this mission to gather information on the sound hashiraâs wives, you never expected to encounter an upper moon, much less two of them. Now you sat in the aftermath of the battle: bloodied and bruised; but your injuries were nothing compared to Tengenâs. His forearm had been cut off and he was poisoned. He didnât have much time left.
âHey calm down.â He cupped your face gently. âNice to see that pretty face of yours wasnât damaged.â
âShut up! Focus on yourself!â You yelled at him as you struggled to apply pressure to his severed arm.
âAppreciate the effort sweetheart, but itâs not this injury thatâs gonna kill me.â You realized that the poison was still ravaging his body.
âShit! I forgot my medicines back home. If only I wouldâve brought them none of this wouldâve-!â A small tap to your shoulder averted your attention from the sound hashira to the young kamado girl that now sat beside you.
She gently pressed her hand against Uzui before⌠SETTING HIM ON FIRE?! You and all of Tengenâs wives screamed in horror as you watched the older man being engulfed in pink flames. Makio, Hinatsuru, and Suma bickered amongst themselves as they yelled at Nezuko, but you focused on how Tengenâs once purple skin now began to clear.
You sat amazed as you watched Uzui heal from what was once a deadly venom.
Tengen slowly turned to you and smiled. âI guess Iâm so flashy, even death canât beat me.â
You wept as you tackled the larger man into your embrace, the others watching with endearment as the sound hashira held you. âDonât scare me like that you asshole.â Uzui simply laughed as he wiped your tears.
âWhat do ya say we get out of here?â He announced to his wives as they, alongside you, helped him get up and walk away.
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You very carefully worked on reapplying the sound hashiraâs bandages as he carefully held you in his lap.
âYouâre really cute when youâre all focused like that.â Tengen commented once you finished wrapping him up.
âShut up.â You walked away from him as you worked on reorganizing your ointments and medicines. Uzui chuckled to himself as he lovingly watched you work.
âHey (M/n)?â Tengen called out which caused you to turn to face him. âYes?â He beckoned you to come closer to him, and you obliged. Adjusting yourself to sit in his lap. âWhy donât you come and live here with us?â He offered. âWhat do you mean?â You looked up at him, confused as to what his true intentions were. âWill you allow me to court you and become my husband? I could use another man around the house to balance things out ya know?â He smiled gently at you.
You slowly moved off him as you attempted to put some space between you. âIs something wrong?â Tengen shot you a concerned look, looking shocked when you rejected his attempt to hold your hand. âI-Iâm not- I canât⌠I stillâŚâ Tengen grasped your hand. âItâs alright (M/n). I understand.â He rubbed your knuckles lovingly. âIâm sorry-â âDonât be.â He cut you off. âYou have no reason to explain yourself.â He knew your heart still belonged to Kyojuro and he respected that. You two sat in a comfortable silence as you slowly allowed yourself to return to sit in Tengenâs lap.
âMy heart still isnât ready to move on, but I promise you, the day it is, itâll be yours.â You looked up at him. âAnd Iâll be more than happy to accept it.â He brought your hand to his lips and pressed a sweet kiss to your knuckles.
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It all moved entirely too fast.
One day you were enjoying a day out on the town with Uzui and his wives, and now you watched as the demon who killed Kyojuro faded into dust.
âWe did (M/n).â Tanjiro wept as he attempted to apply pressure to the wound in your stomach. âYou did it.â
You smiled and coughed up blood. âYouâre not injured are you?â You looked up at the scarred boy.
âNo sir.â He wiped some tears from his face. âIâm glad.â You breathed deeply before realizing one of your lungs mustâve been punctured as you struggled with something as simple as that.
âYou should be worried about yourself. Youâre in two pieces.â Tomioka quietly stated as his sat down beside you.
âIâll be alright.â You felt your eyelids slowly become heavier and heavier with each blink of your eyes. âStop with this nonsense Mr. (M/n)! Youâre going to die soon! Please speak with some urgency!â Tanjiro cried out. You simply chuckled and reached up to cup his face. âWhy should I be sad? The killer of my lover has been killed by my efforts and now Iâm presented with the opportunity to see Kyojuro again. I have no reason to be upset. In fact⌠Iâm rather relieved. So please, donât mourn me. Who knows how many lives I have helped to save by ridding the world of that demon. I will go on with no regrets in this world.â You explained, watching as both men before you accepted your death.
âTanjiro, please tell Senjuro Iâm sorry to give him another loss, but please assure him I will be watching over him. Me and Kyojuro both will be excited to see the great man he becomes.â Your breaths started to become much shallower. âAnd for Mr. Uzui, please tell him I apologize I couldnât give him my heart, but that I will cherish all the love he still gave me in spite of my inability to do so.â Tanjiro became more panicked as he realized your heart beat was slowing down. âPlease, save your breath-â Tomioka covered his mouth, allowing you to continue. âAnd for you both, go out there and save the world. Iâll be cheering you on.â You shut your eyes. âSet your heart ablaze.â
And just like that, you were goneâŚ
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You awoke in a grassy field. The sun was bright and wind was warm, feeing almost as if it was pressing kissed against your skin every time it passed by. The tall reeds swayed in the blowing wind and brushed against your legs, slightly tickling you. Everything was perfect.
âIâm proud of you!â A familiar voice boomed through the air.
You slowly turned around as you laid your eyes on the man you have longed to see ever since that faithful nightâŚ
âK-KyojuroâŚ?â
âItâs me (M/n).â He smiled to you and opened his arms.
Your eyes rang and your breath hitched. It couldnât beâŚ?
Your shock was short-lived as you rushed towards him, immediately landing in his arms and tackling him to the soft grass. His body was as warm as you remembered. His arms immediately resting at your waist, just like he used to. His scent was as vibrant as you recalled.
It was him.
He was here.
With you.
âWhere are we?â You looked around you. While it was peaceful, it was not where you recalled ever visiting.
âWeâre in heaven love.â Kyojuro stated as he ran his fingers through your hair.
âAh, I guess I died during that battle against Akaza.â The former flame hashira nodded as he held you close to him.
âNo matter how you got here, you did amazing!â He smiled brightly at you, causing your heart to skip a beat. âAnd now weâll never be separated again!â
You smiled back at him.
Sure, nothing has gone how you would prefer it to, but life has a way of subverting expectations, yet somehow managing to give you everything you wanted.
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Note(s): I wasnât planning on making a part 2 to the original fic, but I had a sudden urge to write a bittersweet ending and immediately got to writing. I apologize if itâs too choppy, but I didnât want it to be crazy long and a lot of what I originally planned was really just filler lol. Anyways, I hope you enjoy and have a great day/night!
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Have I Known You 20 Seconds or 20 Years? â Nikolai Lantsov Series
Chapter 1: Devils Roll the Dice, Angel Roll their Eyes
Chapter 2: You Did a Number on Me
Chapter 3: You Could Call Me Babe for the Weekend
A very short summary: Y/N has been working with the crows for a few years. Her life feels complete until she meets the insufferable Nikolai Lantsov. She finds herself forced to work with the King of Ravka on one of Kaz Brekkerâs crazy schemes.
Word count: 2k
A/N:Â Finally starting to get somewhere!! I just started writing chapter 4, so it might take a bit longer before I upload again. I hope you guys enjoy this chapter in the meanwhile.
Thank you for reading! Just send me an ask if you want to be added to my taglist :)Â
Chapter 3: You Could Call Me Babe for the Weekend
The next morning went by in a blur. They had moved everything to Wylanâs house on Geldstraat. Kaz was right. It wouldâve been too suspicious if they had left for the party from the barrel. Questions about the job were being thrown from one person to the next. Various answers about cues and schedules flying in every direction.
âWait, what time are we supposed to get to the party again?â
âQuarter after 6 bells, Jesper!â Yelled Wylan running by with an armful of party clothes.
âNikolai and I are getting there at 6 bells. That way it wonât look like we know each other.â Y/N had been heading off in the opposing direction.
âWylan! You forgot your jacket in the music roomâ Kazâs raspy voice was easily recognizable above the others.
âIâll go ahead and scout for the best location for you to hide to summon the storm. Iâll come get you at a quarter to 8 bells.â
Nikolai had to admire the crowsâ ability to understand each other and get the job done in such chaos. They were running back and forth in every direction trying to get everything ready. Even Zoya seemed at ease discussing the plan with Inej. He needed this job to succeed. He needed to guarantee his countryâs future. Once he was done dealing with this newest threat from FjerdaâŚ? Heâd like to work with the crows again. He felt much freer. Maybe it could become a side hustle for him and Zoya. It would give them a nice break from ruling a country.
He felt a soft hand rest on his arm. âHey, we should probably go get ready for the party. Weâll meet here at 5 bells? That way we can go over last-minute details and head over.â She was smiling up at him. Her smile was soft as if she could tell he was anxious. He let his eyes trail over her tailored face and couldnât help but miss her true features once more.
âSounds good. Iâll see you then, my darling.â He pressed a quick kiss to her knuckles and watched her disappear up the vast staircase.
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Nikolai made his way to the room Wylan had so graciously offered him that morning. It was not his room at the Grand Palace, but it was much nicer than the one heâd had at the slat. He took his time putting on the rich merchâs clothes Kaz had picked out for him. He was still in awe of the work Y/N had done on him. The young king found himself unavoidably staring at himself in the mirror mounted to his wall. He finished buttoning up his shirt and folded his suit jacket on his arm. It was almost 5 bells. He knew he should make his way back to the mansionâs parlor.
Nikolai had barely sat in one of the large armchairs when an appreciative whistle sounded on his left. He followed Jesperâs gaze to the stairs. Y/Nâs dress accentuated her new body in all the right places. Nikolai couldnât help but think it wouldâve suited her even better before the tailoring.
âNo one warned me Iâd have to fight off every man who lays eyes on my wife.â He complained.
He watched as Inej and Zoya approached Y/N. The women shared a few whispered comments before they lead Y/N to him. He couldâve sworn he saw the girlâs cheeks turn red. He had to put up a lot more effort than he was used to in schooling his own features. The way the dress moved along to the sway of her hips, with every step she took, made his brain go blank. He imagined the way it wouldâve been even more sensual with her natural curves. Maybe he could convince her to wear the gown again once sheâd tailored them both back to normal. His mind was racing with images of her, twirling in his arms, wearing that damned dress.
âAnything you want to go over before we get going?â She was looking at him expectantly, her eyes bright, her tailored lips stretched in a small smile.
His mouth felt dry. All eyes were on him. He had to fight to kick start his brain again. âNope, I think weâre ready.â He offered her a hand, his natural charm coming back to him. âShall we, my darling wife?â
She took his hand and they headed for the door leading to the elegant boathouse. âNo mournersâ she called over her shoulder.
A unified âNo funeralsâ rang out behind them. Nikolai made a mental note to ask them what the saying meant, at some point, when he wasnât so distracted by the beautiful Grisha on his arm.
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Theyâd taken a small, polished boat to make their way to councilman Van Verentâs house. It had only taken a few minutes for them to reach the sophisticated boathouse on the councilmanâs property. A Stadwatch officer had taken their invitation before guiding them to the stylishly decorated mansion. Flowers from every guestâs country were arranged in beautiful crystal vases matching the colourful silk ribbons adorning the banister. As they entered the main hall, they were stunned by the sheer number of guests already in attendance. The main floor was filled with dignitaries from Kerch, Novyi Zem, Shu Han, Fjerda, and the Wandering Isle. Nikolai noticed the absence of anyone representing his country. Good, he thought, itâll make the job easier.
To his dismay, Y/N was already catching the eye of a few men standing off to the sides of the room. He wrapped his arm tightly around her waist, pulling her closer, sending the interested parties a nasty look. He felt her breath hitch but didnât release his hold on her body. She was his wife. Anyone who wanted to get to her would have to go through him. Nikolai was surprised by the jealousy he felt. He was usually in control of his feelings, always choosing to be pragmatic rather than emotional. He knew they had to put on a convincing act. He still wasnât supposed to be this possessive of a girl heâd only met a few days ago, right? All the Saints and their mothers, Zoya will murder me if she finds out about this.
Y/N had maneuvered them towards a group of Zemeni dignitaries, quickly engaging in easy conversation with one of the wives. Nikolai used the opportunity to present their made-up business proposal to a few interested parties, promising to send them more information as soon as they went back home to the Wandering Isle.
They navigated group after group of foreign and domestic dignitaries for about an hour. He had to admit Kaz had done a wonderful job when creating their false identities, but he was tired of the constant mindless chattering. How lucky, he thought, the dance floor seems very appealing right about now.
He leaned in close, letting his lips brush against Y/Nâs ear, interrupting her conversation. âYou are doing a fantastic job, my love.â He felt her shiver against him. âIâm sure weâll have plenty of business partners once youâre done here. Now, however, I would very much like to dance with my beautiful wife.â She looked at him, surprise evident in her deep brown eyes. Nikolai smirked; he could get used to this. He offered her a hand before guiding her swiftly to the dance floor.
He felt men staring, once again, at âhis wifeâ as they graciously made their way to the middle of the floor. The small orchestra started playing a beautiful soft song, perfect for a romantic moment between lovers. Nikolai rested his right hand on the small of Y/Nâs back, pulling her close, keeping her hand tightly in his own. He felt her free hand gently come to rest on his shoulder. His heart beating more quickly than he wouldâve liked. Why am I so nervous? She was gazing up at him, a gentle smile gracing her lips. He swallowed hard. Nikolai had never felt more grateful for the dance lessons heâd taken as a child. Heâd only done it to please his mother. He had to admit he was glad they were paying off now. To anyone watching them, they simply looked like newlyweds, madly in love, eager to share a dance.
They turned elegantly, in time with the slow music, their bodies completely in sync. Their breathing even, their steps well-balanced. The deep green skirts of her dress following every graceful movement they made. She followed his lead perfectly as if theyâd been partners for years. She seemed to trust him completely, showing him how safe she felt in his arms. Time slowed for a moment. Nikolai found himself forgetting all about the job, about the plans they had to steal, even about his country. He wanted to stay in this moment, holding the talented Grisha against him, forever.
The sound of applause brought him out of his reverie. He took in their surroundings. Y/N looked as surprised as he felt. Her eyes wide, cheeks flushed. He had no idea how long they had been dancing, how many songs had been played. It dawned on him that they were the cause of the applause. People had stopped dancing and talking to watch the young couple, completely lost in each other, moving elegantly across the floor. He saw Jesper and Wylan, wide grins plastered on their faces, in the far corner of the room. They looked way too pleased. Saints, I hope they wonât tell Brekker about this.
He bowed, Y/N following his lead once again, before walking off the dance floor, towards the grand staircase. They had to stop drawing so much attention to themselves. He wished he could have a moment to talk to Y/N, alone, away from the prying eyes of the crowd. She was playing her role to perfection, all smiles, as couples complimented them on their dancing for the next few minutes.
The ornate wall-mounted clock chimed. Zoya, Wylan, and Jesper would create the distraction in 15 minutes. Wylan subtly nodded to him, indicating he had already placed the small incendiary charge in the dining room. He had developed this newest marvel by studying and modifying one of David Kostykâs discoveries. It seemed the boy truly was a genius. Jesper would detonate the charge at 8 bells, the sound of his shot covered by the storm Zoya would summon. The fire would require all-hands-on-deck to be put out, leaving the office unguarded. If everything went according to Kazâs plan, it would give him and Y/N about 30 minutes to pick the lock of Van Verentâs office, crack the safe and make their way back to the party with the blueprints safely tucked in the sheath hidden beneath Y/Nâs dress.
They came to a halt in the shadow of the staircase, ready to spring to action at their cue. Nikolai made sure to pull Y/N close, slipping an arm around her waist.
âI didnât know you were such a good dancer, my love.â He murmured. Better keep up the act. She makes it easy, though. I donât even have to lie.
She laughed softly and turned in his arms, snaking her own arm around his neck, pressing her lips quickly against his cheek. âThank you, darling. I am full of hidden talents, you know...â the raise of her eyebrow and her tone so suggestive Nikolai had to fight to keep a straight face. Sheâs only doing her job. Sheâs supposed to be my wife. Itâs only normal that a young wife should flirt with her delightfully handsome husband. He was trying to convince himself but the playful look in her eyes told him otherwise. She spun around once more, keeping his hand on her waist, leaving him to observe the guests enjoying the party.
The clock chimed once more. 8 bells. Thunder boomed outside, rain battering the windows. A high-pitched scream sounded to his right, coming from the dining room. Other screams quickly followed. Guests ran past them, fleeing the room. Guards came rushing down the stairs, towards the fire. It was complete chaos. Nikolai found himself impressed, once again, by how brilliant the crows were. Maybe I could convince Kaz to help me plan my next military campaign? Or get Wylan to come work with David. I should at least sail with the Wraith and her crew.
Y/Nâs fingers closed around his wrist. âThatâs our cue.â She said with a sly grin on her lips.
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The Scholarâs Love Ch. 1
Genre: Romance, Drama, Alternate universe
Pairing: KenxOC
Warning: none
Summary:Â Â Â Â
âDon`t you want to find a good husband and get married?â he raised an eyebrow, âSomeone noble, handsome, valiant, brave, courageousâŚâ
I narrowed my eyes. Was he trying to describe himself? My sister would probably gush over a man like him but I wasn`t really familiar with men. I never paid much attention to them and as expected I spent most of my life away from them because propriety demanded that.
âMy parents will choose a husband when the time comes,â I answered flatly.
  One.
I straightened myself in my blue robes trying to look taller and more authoritative. I knew that it was useless since I hardly looked the part but I could see the girl in front of me trembling with fear and it wasn`t a pretty sight. Â I wondered why she was so scared, none of us were going to be slaughtered, none of us was a criminal. It was Acceptance day, a day of glory for all of us. Maybe she felt small and visible because there were only twenty of us. Our line was practically non-existent compared to the men`s one. One hundred of them, advancing towards the Palace in steady strong pace expecting to have a bright future as officials, to help governing our country of Nava.
All of us wore navy blue robes with a tiny white dragon embroidered on our chest. Those who`d be elevated in rank later would switch to a bigger silver dragon but the gold embroidery was reserved only for the royal family. The robes made for the future female officials were slightly wider, made to resemble a dress but other than that the uniform wasn`t so different. The difference lied in the fact that most of us would probably never make it beyond librarians or historians. But had I been born fifty years ago I`d have only dreamed about being accepted here. I`d have remained the daughter of a third rank scholar doomed only to marry and produce kids.
I threw a glance at the male line. Some of the young men there were ogling at  us. Probably not me since I rarely looked agreeable and consciously kept my face as stern as possible but there were some very beautiful daughters of scholars around me. The girl in front of me was blushing furiously from what I could see.
âRaise your head,â I whispered to her and tried to steady her when she swayed startled by my voice, âThey won`t dare to say anything to you if you don`t look scared.â
She drew a weak shaky breath and tried to look at me while walking. Unlike me she was wearing makeup. She was beautiful; her hair lighter than mine and braided in the obligatory way for female officials.
âBut it`s scary.â
âIt`s not,â I said reassuringly, âWe are going to serve His Majesty and our country. You can`t be a mess. You represent yourself, your family and the monarchy.â
She nodded hastily, and then she straightened her body a little.
âThank you,â she whispered.
I patted the side of her arm and continued our solemn march towards the gates. Then we stopped at the parade ground in front of the House of Justice and Valor. There was the male part of the Royal family. I couldn`t see them well because I was too far behind but I could make out  the ceremonial robes of our King, the Crown prince and his two brothers. On both sides there were the Ministers in robes of brilliant azure blue.
I heard the ceremonial drums and fell to my knees along with everyone around me. Suddenly I felt so small, like a tiny ant in the sea of more ants, pressing my forehead to the cold ground. I wondered how my sister was doing.
She was probably very excited for her own Acceptance day. I tried to think of her to seek some comfort and feel less alone. She wasn`t far away from here and she was probably now bowing to the Queen and the Princess in front of the House of Elegance and Virtue. I knew that she used to dream of this day for years. She always wanted to be a lady-in-waiting, and then part of the harem, a glorious concubine dressed in silk and precious stones. Â She wouldn`t stop dancing when our robes arrived three days ago. This is when we knew that we were approved. For me it was countless of nights of studying and writing and for her ruthlessly cultivating her beauty and talents. And in the end it all paid off. Now we needed to make our family proud, each of us in her own way.
âFuture officials,â Â the booming voice of the King reached my ears and I quickly directed my thoughts towards the current task, âToday you begin a journey towards self-cultivating to serve your country and its citizen. From now on you shall dedicate your lives to this purpose and the this purpose alone because the nation needs you. We have the army to protect it but we also have you to help me govern it well.â
King Jiyeong, I thought, the second King of the Dragon Dynasty. My father used to describe him as a trustworthy ruler, one who never let things out of control, who looked into the details. And probably rightfully so. His dynasty was young to our ancient kingdom, his ancestors fought with King Yalta from the Crow Dynasty to get to where they were today. They had to set new customs, new rituals, new fashion, everything to erase the previous rulers and their ways.
The Kingdom of Nava was founded by too many tribes and each of them had different beliefs. It wasn`t easy to unify all of them even after centuries of settling on the same piece of land.
I sighed and returned my attention to the Kings`s speech.
âFollow the laws and keep the order. Strive for perfection and bring glory to Nava.â
There was a moment of silence so that we make sure that the King had nothing more to say. Then all of us bellowed:
âGlory to the one true king!â
I finally rose from the ground. I did what I could to rub my sore knees and looking at the other officials around me I wasn`t the only one.
We didn`t have much time to tend to our poor joints though because we were herded by people in brown robes towards three massive stone tables. I saw the long lists spreading like bed sheets. Somewhere there was my name and its assigned position. We weren`t supposed to start with any important position but it also depended on the ranks of our families. Having a third rank was neither good, nor bad, just in the middle. What was worse was the fact that I was a woman.
I was grouped together with girl in front of me. She looked a lot calmer now, as if the worst part was over when in fact it had only just began. It was up to us now  to show what we were really capable of.
We waited patiently and it didn`t take much time before it was her turn.
âName,â the man at the table demanded without even raising his eyes.
âAdra An,â she mumbled, her voice trembling once again.
âLibrary,â the man said, âNext.â
âNala Ae.â
He threw a quick glance at me. Maybe he had heard of my father.
âLibrary. Next.â
I knew I couldn`t expect much but I still felt disappointed. Adra was there waiting for me. She looked relieved.
âWe`re together,â she chimed happily clinging to my sleeve.
I wish I could return the smile. The Grand Library was the standard starting point for most female officials. Men usually got assigned to different departments at  the ministries. I sighed deeply at the thought of spending my time with dusty books rather than people.
âWell, let`s go,â I did my best to look enthusiastic and headed towards the group of officials who were supposed to work there as well.
âIt`s not that bad,â Adra tried to comfort me, âMany others never had the chance to come to the Palace in the first place.â
I nodded. After all she was right.
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I slowly went down the polished wooden ladder after returning a couple of atlases to their rightful places. Then I scanned my desk where a dozen more lied stacked neatly.
Three days had passed since Acceptance day and things were going as expected. Boring. It was boring. Mornings were nice since we had lectures with renowned scholars but afternoons dragged on and on at least here in the library. It was something I had to endure for now. Later when gaining more experience I could submit a memorial to the King and eventually attract his attention. I had a long way ahead of me though. No one came with brilliant ideas three days into their new duties, so in order to outshine hundreds of intelligent men in His Majesty`s court I had to study diligently for years.
I had this dream of attending court like a proper high rank official but in the history of this dynasty there had been only one woman who was able to achieve that and she lived during the reign of the previous king. I knew my chances were low.
I grabbed a few maps and checked if they were rolled properly. And since they were I headed to the shelf dedicated to topographic maps.
It wasn`t that bad, I tried to soothe myself, I liked the smell of books. The other officials here were nice and helpful. We slept in good rooms and all of us, the new ones, had our own small court. It was quiet most of the time so I could focus on my studies and work. I couldn`t complain really.
I carefully placed the maps on the shelf and headed back to my desk. To my surprise there was someone standing there. I could only see his back but he was tall and lean and was tracing an open map with his finger.
I slowly approached the stranger and sensing a movement behind him he spun his body to face me. I stopped dead in my tracks. He was a young man with soft pillowy lips, full eyebrows and dark eyes. His robes were the color of honey and despite being sewn to be only informal attire, they were adorned with elaborate embellishments such as branches and leaves. He was what most people would categorize as charming I suppose. Â And noble. He was definitely noble. Probably part of the extended royal family.
I curtsied awkwardly partly because I never cared to learn these things properly. My mother used to scold me a lot for that.
âMay I help you?â I asked.
He didn`t bow in return which confirmed that he was indeed way higher in the hierarchy than me. Instead he looked at me from head to toe and his eyes lit playfully. I wasn`t ugly but I also wasn`t the prettiest girl out there, so it baffled me.
âYou`re new,â he stated and to  my horror he casually sat on top of my desk.
I felt the urge to pull the open map away from him before it crinkles but I had to contain it somehow because I couldn`t afford to face the consequences of pushing a nobleman from his seat of choice. So I just swallowed hard and nodded.
âWhich house?â he puffed his full lips.
âAe,â I almost hissed at him. I needed him to remove his bottom from the map as quickly as possible but he didn`t seem in the mood to budge, âDo you need me to help you with something?â
âAh, I was just looking for a map but that`s not important now,â he waved dismissively and continued mumbling to himself, âAe⌠Ae⌠Ah, could it be that your father is Ying Ae.â
My father has been active in court lately, so no wonder that his name was familiar to the young man.
âThe very same, my lord,â I answered and grabbed the map from the desk.
He almost tumbled down trying to dodge it but I wasn`t going to care at this point. But he didn`t seem to mind it at all actually because he let out a giggle.
I rolled the map carefully and walked to its respective shelf. I heard his steps behind me. He wasn`t going to let meoff so easily.
âIt must be pretty boring to work here.â
âIt`s only temporarily, my lord, everyone should start their career from somewhere,â I placed the map.
âOh, an ambitious lady!â he exclaimed. I couldn`t shake off the feeling that he was toying with me.
      He leaned on the shelf casually towering over me. His body omitted a sweet musky smell.
âDon`t you want to find a good husband and get married?â he raised an eyebrow, âSomeone noble, handsome, valiant, brave, courageousâŚâ
I narrowed my eyes. Was he trying to describe himself? My sister would probably gush over a man like him but I wasn`t really familiar with men. I never paid much attention to them and as expected I spent most of my life away from them because propriety demanded that.
âMy parents will choose a husband when the time comes,â I answered flatly.
Many female officials never married. At least those without a proper backing. They basically led a life of a nun till the day they died. I tried to push this thought out of my mind.
âSo you don`t want to choose for yourself?â
He bent a little so that his face was inches away from mine. The fragrance which came from him intensified.
I wasn`t someone who blushed easily but his closeness made me uncomfortable. Partly because I was taught my entire life that men and women go separately except if they are married. His frivolous behavior was too much for me. Yet I spent a minute studying his eyes. They were deep dark brown like bottomless pits which devoured light.
âEveryone with an able body and bearable personality would do,â I answered at last and took a step back to break the spell between us, âAs long as my marriage does not interfere with my job as an official, I am fine with anything.â
He bit his lower lip to suppress his laughter.
âEvery girl dreams of her future husband,â he said confidently, âEven  those who take the official exams.â
I shook my head.
âI never did.â
He stared in me and I could see that he was very skeptical about it.
âMaybe you haven`t met the right man⌠until now.â
I blinked a couple of times. Was I mistaken or his voice sounded almost seductively? Â
For the first time in my life I met someone who`d openly say indecent things. I have heard that some of the members in the royal family were spoiled rotten and good for nothing but I imagined they would indulge in such behavior in the privacy of their own manors. Or brothels.
âI can assure you, my lord, that I have YET to meet such man.â
He clasped the fabric of his robes right above his heart dramatically.
âAh, that hurts so much,â he whined, âBut the future lies ahead and I have just planted the seed of love in your heart.â
The seed of love? I wanted to say something clever to him, something to insult him in a subtle but my mind was blank. All I felt was indignation which threatened to make me faint. Luckily I wasn`t that frail.
Who was that man after all? He never introduced himself in the first place.
âWe shall meet again, my lady,â he said finally making his exit, âI`ll come to keep you company some other time.â
I was ready to gladly send him off when something flashed in front of my eyes.
âMy lord!â I called after him.
He stopped and looked at me. But my eyes were fixed on his chest. It has been there the entire time, hidden between the embroidered leaves in plain sight.
âI could do without your company, my lord,â I said with all the courage I managed to muster. Because, gods, I needed it considering who stood before me.
He smiled and disappeared down the staircase.
A tiny golden dragon in between the leaves. A tiny golden dragon on his chest. He wasn`t just part of the extended royal family. He was from the royal family.
The entire time  I had been talking to a prince.
#vixx fanfic#ken fanfiction#jaehwan fanfic#jaehwan fanfiction#imma back in the game with my rusty writing skills cause quarantine#gotta battle depression and anxiety somehow#it`s not my best work but also i haven`t written anything ages soooo#vixx#jaehwan
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Phan Cam: Top Three (Dream FES Finale [for the year])
WARNING: This post may be a bit long.
>Saturday.
GOOD EVENING, TOKYO! Itâs the last day of Dream FES! Itâs the moment youâve all been waiting for. The competition to see which Rookie Idolâs dream of becoming True Idols and making their CD debut come true! If any of our Rookie Idolâs make it in the Top Three, they will become True Idols. If they come in 3rd, thatâs okay, theyâll still become a True Idol. Itâs only if they make it in 1st or 2nd that they will get their CD debut. However, 2nd place will got you only some song recorded. But in 1st, youâll record even more. Also, we have a grand finale is store for you. The collaborated song with DearDream, KUROFUNE, and ANSwer!
>The crowd cheered. Then, Haruto Mikami gets on stage.
So, are you all ready for the show?
>The crowd cheered again. Then, the Rookie Idols come on stage
Our goal is the Dream Festival! Dream FES is about to start!
Rookie Idols: Enjoy the show!
>In the backstage dressing room, as the Rookie Idols perform on stage, Skull waited for his turn with the others. The idol next time him, letâs call him Guren Ike (since using his real name would expose our true identities), spoke to him. Guren is an upbeat kind of guy, always looking on the bright side of things.
Guren: Are you as excited as I am, Sakamoto kun?
Skull: Well, maybe Iâm a little nervous. But my friends and family are watchinâ, so I guess it should be okay. What about you, Guren kun?
Guren: My dad and little sister are in the audience, too. My mom canât make it because of her job. I think some of my friends from school are there, too.
Skull: I see. Good for you, then.
Guren: You, too, Sakamoto kun.
???: Oh, please, the only reason Sakamoto made it this far is because some of those friends are Spider-Man and Harry Osborn. Not to mention youâre already a member of KUROFUNE.
>They quickly turn to see another Rookie Idol had come to them. Letâs call him, Kumokuro Kazebaggu. He a bit more stuck up and is only an idol to emerge from the overwhelming success of his parents.
Skull: (a little upset) You wish, Kazebaggu. They just gave me a push. The rest came from me.
And what about you? Scared Mommy and Daddyâs money wonât save you this time?
Kumokuro: (more upset) Weâll see about that you-
???: Both of you, please.
>It was another Rookie Idol. Letâs call him Unakarui Kurume, Kuru for short. Apart from being an idol, he also plays Duel Monsters and hopes one day to meet the King of Games himself. Heâs also the calm type and is in the same unit as Guren.
Kuru: I know you both just want to get to the Top Three, but remember, you have to be fair to your opponents. Even they deserve a little kindness.
>They just stared in silence.
Guren: Uh, Kuru, buddy, this isnât a duel, you know?
Kuru: ... Itâs not? Well, same difference.
You sure are... Unique.
Worker: RosyRosy, youâre up!
RosyRosy Leader: Guren, Kuru, weâre needed!
Guren: Coming, senpai! See you soon, Sakamoto kun.
Skull: (happy) You go well tonight. See ya.
>With that, RosyRosy leaves for the stage... Then, me, Fox, Crow, Peter, and Harry come in.
Hey, how are you?
Skull: Fine.
Really? Arenât you even a little nervous.
Skull: Okay, Iâm a little nervous. Like...
Is this actually happeninâ? Or, am I just dreaminâ?
Kumokuro: If you are, then itâs time to wake up and leave.
We werenât talking to you.
Ryuji, you are here. This is really happening.
Donât start doubting yourself. That just wouldnât be beautiful.
You just need to believe in yourself. Or, are you thinking of quitting?
Hell no! I ainât done yet! Not at all!
Now thereâs the Ryuji Sakamoto we all know and love.
Right. You never gave up on me, so I ainât givinâ up on you!
>Suddenly, Skull felt something in his heart and looked inside.
WARNING: Some Persona 5: Royal spoilers.
That is right, Ryuji Sakamoto. You will not give up. You have come so far.
Yes. You would not back away if this did not mean anything to you. Would you?
>Then, Captain Kidd and Seiten Taisei come together in a burst of light...
Now the time has come. Are you ready?
You bet, William... In fact...
>Skull turns to Crow.
Skull: Akechi, did you bring your notebook with you?
Crow: Yes. You never know when a mystery will strike. Why do you ask?
Youâll see.
Kumokuro: You mean a new song? I doubt thatâs going to work.
You might be surprised.
>RosyRosy comes back in with the worker.
Worker: Kumokuro Kazebaggu, youâre on!
Kumokuro: (stuck up again) Now to show you how a True Idol works.
>With that, he leaves.
Such arrogance. You better defeat him, Ryuji.
Skull: Thatâs the plan.
Harry: Good luck.
Peter: Knock âem dead out there.
>With that we leave. Skull takes the notebook and begins writing away.
>Back on stage, Kumokuro had just finished his song.
MC: And that was Kumokuro Kazebaggu, ladies and gentlemen!
>The crowded applauded... Somewhat.
MC: Next up, heâs a bleached boy who once ran for his school and is now taking his magic legs to the stage. He just joined KUROFUNE as a part time member, but hopes to become a True Idol. I hear he has a huge fan club in the audience tonight.
>We all cheer louder than the rest of the crowd.
MC: Alright, ladies and gentlemen, here he is, the Pirate of the Track, the Full Sail Athlete... Ryuji Sakamoto!
>With that, Skull runs on stage and the audience cheers loudly.
Skull: Yo, Tokyo!
>The crowd cheers again.
Skull: At the last minute, I wrote a new song. This song talks about how far Iâve come in the idol world. But I couldnât have done it alone. My friends and family helped me along the way. Ren, Ann, Yusuke, Makoto, Futaba, Haru, Akechi, my mom, Harry, Peter, and all the others who we hold dear to our hearts, thank you.
Hmm?
Yeah, you, too, Diego.
Diego: (quietly) Thank you.
Skull: This is a song about dreams and how we hold them dearly in our hearts. And before you know it, you will also be realizinâ just how important it is to believe.
Now to show you how to KEEP RUNNINâ DREAM!
Dorkia Time!
Catch Your Cheers!
Skull: Let the race begin!
>Skull changes clothes.
Cheerful Jam Series! Complete!
(Just want to remind you that J-pop is one of my weakest points.)
(Beat box opening) Dreams They come true everyday Dreams Helping make you way Dreams They help you speed on And in the end your future you have won
Keep running dream To your future ahead Don't stop until you are dead Through the sunlit beam Go on and on To the day is done Keep running dream Keep running dream Keep running dream!
>After the song, everyone cheered and applauded wildly. I guess this song actually reached out to everyone... Way to go, brother.
MC: Epic! Really Epic! I couldnât think of anything other than the words of that song!
Thanks! And thanks, everyone!
>Everyone cheered loudly. Especially us.
>Back in the dressing room, we, including Stark and the Future Avengers, come to congratulate Skull for his performance.
That was really great, Ryuji senpai!
Yeah, that was amazing.
You did real great tonight.
Skull: I have you guys to thank. You gave me the courage that touched my heart.
Thatâs true. Only a True Idol can sing from the heart. And the heart has many connections to others.
Donât I know it.
I say you pretty much leveled up in my game.
Thatâs pretty much Futabaâs way of saying that you showed real talent.
Whatâs this? The great Sojiro Sakura actually praising someone?
Joker: Actually, heâs done it before with me.
Now cut that out.
Either way, the was a pretty neat show.
Thatâs my Ryu kun. He really knows how to put on a show.
I know I normally prefer heroes, but man, you really blasted us there.
Same here. Still, this was good too. (By the way, this is my anime form.)
True. Itâs nothing Iâve ever seen before.
Skull: Iâm glad you guys liked it.
We actually loved it. Youâre sure to at least land the Top Three.
Keigo: Heâs right. If you can at least make it into the Top Three, you'll become a True Idol. But if you make it in the Top Two, youâll record a CD.
Skull: I hope youâre right.
Youâll make it. We promise.
Besides, Iâve have a betting pool with Michael right now. If you end up in the Top Three, heâll have to pay Japan another visit to kiss your feet.
And if he doesnât.
Toshi: I go over to his place and kiss his feet.
I guess that sound fair... I think.
A chance to see a world class chef and author get humiliated like that? Iâd love to see it.
Is your idea of fine like that?
Alistaire: Maybe.
Maybe?
(whisper) Sicko.
The point is, Sakamoto, we know youâll make it.
Skull: You think?
If not, I can always pull a few strings.
Harry: You probably shouldnât.
Skull: Thatâs right. What happens now, I want to show everyone I can do this without havinâ to rely heavily on those with a lot of power. But Iâll still need you guys in my life.
Thatâs true. Though you want to stand on your own, but that doesnât you have to be alone... Isnât that right?
Pretty much.
Itâs the same with me.
Grady: And me. Donât be afraid to rely on others.
Yeah, weâre here for you, Ryuji san.
Thank you , everyone.
Youâre welcome, brother.
>I look at everyone who is now happy for Skull... Especially Makoto who seems the most happiest for him. Although Bruno is trying to hit his own smile.
Worker: Hey, theyâre about to announce the winners. You better hurry.
We better get going.
Good luck out there, Sakamoto... Or is it break a leg?
Iâll explain later.
See you soon.
Weâre rooting for you.
>Later on the stage, the MC, the Rookie Idols, DearDream, KUROFUNE, and ANSwer were ready for the announcement.
MC: The time has come, time to announce which Rookie Idolsâ dream is about to come true.
We wish only you young idols the best.
If you can make it in the Top Three, you will become a True Idol.
If you come in 3rd, you wonât be getting a CD deal, but you will still become a True Idol, and you will be eligible to start your own Idol Unit with D-Four Productions.
If you come in 2nd, you will get a CD deal, though, the number of song will be limited.
And if you come in 1st, you will get a CD deal and record as many songs as you desire. Just donât forget to include other songs from other idols.
Yuto: And the rest who didnât make it will be given a consolation prize of your choosing.
Keigo: And youâll be able to perform for a chance at being in the Top Three again at next yearâs Dream Festival.
And you can keep going as many times as you desire.
Or at least until your contract with D-Four expires.
Yes. Now, let's begin.
MC: When I call out your name or the name of the Unit you are in, come forward. Now, in 3rd Place...
Ryuji Sakamoto!
FOR REAL!?
Keigo: (whisper) Well, go on!
>Skull comes forward.
MC: So, Ryuji san, how does it feel to know that even though you wonât get a CD, youâre still a True Idol?
Skull: Itâs... Itâs actually pretty sweat. No one thought I could do it. I almost believed them. But my friends and family supported me and I kept at it.
Thanks, everyone! I love you all!
>The crowd cheered. We love you, too, Ryuji.
>After the other winners were called (Kumokuro came in 2nd and RosyRosy came in 1st), it was time for the grand finale.
Kanade: Now itâs time for our last song of the night and the end of another Dream Festival.
Keigo: But donât worry. This will all happen again next year. And we will look forward to seeing you again.
Akiomi: So, from all of us, we hope that your own dreams will come try just as dreams did tonight.
KUROFUNE, DearDream, and ANSwer: ENJOY THE SHOW!
>The crowd cheered.
Keigo: Ryuji san, care to join us?
You bet!
>Weâll skip this part because... Words just canât describe it.
WARNING: Spoilers for Persona 5: Royal ahead.
>Kichijoji. Stark reserved Penguin Sniper for us so we wouldnât be bothered, especially by reporters... Well, except maybe one.
Thanks for pulling a few strings and letting me in here.
Joker: Itâs no trouble. Iâm sure Mr. Stark wouldnât mind.
Stark: (coming to us) I would... But Iâll make an acceptation since sheâs so cute.
Ohya: You say that to all the female reporters.
Stark: True. Youâre not the first female reporter to fall for my charm... I really should pay Nanami a visit the next time Iâm here.
Ohya: Anyway, Iâm not here to interview you. Iâm here for KUROFUNE. I want to get in a word before tomorrow when Blondie and the Detective Prince leave.
Keigo: Alright, but make it quick. Iâm about to own Flash kun in darts.
Flash: Yeah right!
>With that, KUROFUNE go to get interviewed by Ohya. I return to my billiards game with Diego, Crow, Mikoto, and Bruno.
Mikoto: So itâs actually happening to him.
Joker: It is. And heâs even thinking of returning to the tack team to get into a good college.
Diego: Can he?
Crow: Ryuji is pretty much famous now. Iâm theyâll make an acceptation.
Mikoto: But I thought he wasnât going back.
Itâs still up for debate.
Crow: By the way... Why did the Future Avengers come to Dream FES? Makoto san, you said that you are a distant relative of Ryuji....
I really donât buy it.
Makoto: (sweating) Umm... Well...
Bruno: (quick and stern) Makoto will tell you everything you need to know when heâs good and ready. Letâs just leave it at that.
Okay, okay. I wonât question anymore for now.
Bruno: Forgive me. I know as a detective, you canât help but feel a little suspicious.
Crow: True. Thatâs just how it is. However, Ryuji and his mother trust you. So does Tony Stark. So Iâll be fine for now.
Makoto: (whisper to Bruno) Thanks. (normal speech) Anyway, we trust you just as much. So donât worry.
Joker: Just make sure Ryuji and Akechi will be okay there in New York.
Makoto: (smiling) You can count on me and the Future Avengers, Ren!
Thank you, Makoto.
>I know I can trust this Future Avenger. I can sense he has a tight connection with Skull just like he has with Harry... Now I can sense one with us, as well.
I am thou, thou art I⌠Thou hast acquired a new vow.
It shall become the wings of rebellion that breaketh thy chains of captivity.
With the birth of Chance Persona, I have obtained the winds of blessing that shall lead to freedom and new powerâŚ
Confidant: Hurricane
Arcana: Chance (This Arcana is made up for this Confidant.)
Rank: 1
Ability: Type 5: Speed
Automatic Masukukaja at the start of battle during Cloudy weather.
Harry: Hey, donât forget me and Pete!
Joker: Donât worry, I havenât forgotten you guys, either.
Peter: Good. But donât worry, we also know the Future Avengers and weâll help, too.
Makoto: You bet, Spider-Man! I mean, Peter. I forget, Iâm suppose to call you by your real name when you donât have the mask on.
Peter: Itâs okay. So, Ren, itâs your shot now.
Okay. Watch and learn.
>I take the cue stick to the billiard table.
Adi: (surprised) Is he really going to play like that?
Diego: Believe it.
>With one hit, I knock one of the balls into one of the holes.
Peter: Score!
Joker: Now...
Itâs your move.
>I hand the cue stick... to Adi.
Adi: (surprised) Me!?
Makoto: Câmon, give it a try!
Adi: ... Alright.
>Adi takes the cue stick. He pauses for a moment and then... He goes into the same position I was in.
Diego: (surprised) Wow! Heâs gonna do it!
>Adi then hits the whit ball... And knocks the eight ball into a hole.
Bruno: How did you learn to do that?
Adi: I... I donât know. When I saw Ren do it, I couldnât help but want to do it myself.
Joker: Well, it is a stylish way to play. I could show you a little more.
Adi You would? ... Thank you.
?????: Well, he did learn from the best.
>We quickly turn to see who just arrived. It was Pantherâs mother, Kathrine.
Panther: Mom, youâre here.
Well, I would have arrived sooner, but I ran into an old friend.
>The person who came with her comes forward... I canât believe who it is.
Well, I canât help it if my own son spends more time here than he does at home.
I see. Sorry I made you feel that way... Dad.
>With that, everyoneâs jaws drop.
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Introduction to those who run the show
Time flew by quickly, people coming and going, drinking coffee, drinking tea and smoothies, the shop was usually busy, today Gabrielle didn't pay as much attention to it as usual though. She might not work full shifts there anymore... or might have to sign up for overtime. Which it would be, was still not clear, even by the time she joined several other girls in the entrance hall of the opera, waiting for their official introduction. A stern middle aged woman welcomed them with a short nod, and voicelessly beckoned them to follow her, leading them into the ballet training hall.
Young women nervously standing underneath high arching pillars from the 19th century, their eyes reflecting curiosity, some worry, some fear in the cold mirrors on the wall. AÂ few leaned on the ballet bars, relaxing, waiting, the woman had left again and closed, hopefully not locked, the door behind herself.
A bright blond schock of hair pushed its way towards Gabrielle, pulling at the hem of her t-shirt. "Gabe!... Gabe! Oh gosh welcome! I haven't seen you since bandcamp!" It took her a moment to recognize the freckled bundle of energy. "Mi-Michelle? Is that you? What are you doing here?" They held hands and hugged each other, Gabrielle blushed, glad to see a familiar face. "I'm a ballet girl, duh? My mom looks after the girls here so I get to hang out with the fresh meat, are you fresh meat Gabe?" a thin finger stabbed her side with a little more force than necessary. "Yes, I made it in... I think." she sighed and hugged Michelle once more.
"You think? You're here! You'll love working here, it's really fun and exciting." They were two years apart, had met each other in summer music camp. Michelle was the kind of girl you could steal horses with, or kidnap, torture and kill cheating ex boyfriends. Loyal and lively, to say the least.
"I don't know," Gabrielle groaned "... Carlotta sent me home in the casting, but the Email said I'm in, and I haven't met anyone in charge yet to confirm it.â Michelle's mother... that means the woman who had lead them in. â - could your mom tell me?" She hadn't expected the smaller one to stare at her like she had exclaimed to have biked to the moon.
"Ohhhh. Ohhhh!!! She donât need to! ... oh you're in, you're in alright!" she whispered ominously, awe in her voice. "Like, they sent you home and you still got an invite, that's no mistake girl. That doesn't happen. Unless he wants it. You're definitely in." the younger one grabbed her hands again and pulled her further to the front, leaving Gabrielle just utterly confused.
"Who he? The manager?" Two women, different as day and night, and two men walked in, the crowd grew quiet, girls standing straight.
"Yeah, he's the manager alright..." Michelle whispered back, then put her forefinger on her mouth. "Now shhh, Mama is quite strict, we'll talk more later..." and she scuttled off through the sea of girls.
"Welcome to the Opera, you may address me as Madam Giry, you will spend the next years under my supervision. These gentlemen, are Monsieur AndrĂŠ and Monseur Firmin, the managers of this illustrious business. They -" she looked at the men, at the girls, then at the corners of the room, her eyes lingered at the mirrors. "- are the ones who pay you, without them, this house, your future would be nothing." Her voice was clear and filled with conviction, the silver strands in her dark blond hair told of age and wisdom, tight lips but hints of crow's feet and indeed a resemblance to Michelle. "They deserve nothing less, than your utter respect. Make them proud. It is for your own good, after all."
The men took a bow, then with much gusto, introduced the lady between them. Even though she did not exactly need introducing, her face was in leaflets and posters distributed all around the building. And stand up displays strategically placed in the entrance hall. There was even one with a mustache painted on, some stickers decorated her more or less flatteringly. Currently it was shoved aside by a broad shoulder, nothing mean, just a tired bump on a man's way to his workstation. He slumped into his chair, taking a sip of his coffee, trying not to choke on a yawn. He had overslept. Introductions were already beginning and he was still feeling barely conscious. Fingers brushing through his hair, guiding the headphones in place, covering the ears and shutting out any unwelcome noise entirely.
So many young aspiring talents, handpicked in auditions over the last weeks, finally ready to start their small yet exciting careers. He groaned quietly as he caught a glimpse of the woman he'd met a few hours ago. Still unable to grasp the magnitude of his stupidity and inattentiveness.
Then again maybe he had just been overwhelmed by the range and potential he had heard, the urgent need it caused in him and it's not like anyone would expect a girl from a coffee shop to audition for the Opera Populaire... So no need for him to pay attention to any coffee shop girls to avoid accidentally employing them... He placed his forehead on his keyboard, groaning again, then lifted his head again and smashed it down, as much as anyone working with computers was willing to do to their equipment. Not for long though, the sticky key notification screamed in his ears and called his attention back to the matters at hand. It would be a crime to not form her voice into the fire that its spark promised. Akin to physical pain, was just thinking about it going to waste... and here he was, having to drop her, for his own safety.
No matter how often he would recall it. No matter how much he would regret it. No matter how much it would occupy his mind. No matter how much he would cringe about it, whenever he heard Carlotta. No matter how much he'd lay awake at night, loosing sleep, gears grinding about whether he did the right thing. No matter how heavy his heart would be every time he'd see the girl working in that coffee shop instead of the opera and it would be his fault and it would be even worse, because he should just not have sent the e-mail after Carlotta had rejected her, but now she was here and he'd have to get rid of her again and then it would always sit at the back of his head and UGH.
Such a shame, considering, with the right vocal training, she could easily rival the somewhat overrated lead.
Clearly a lot of the other girls were big fans, their eyes shining with idolation, others with respect and fear at the sight of such an experienced woman.
"Madame Carlotta, Prima Donna extraordinaire!"
The womand who had sent her home.
An obligatory round of shaking hands followed, Carlotta merely nodding at the young Êlèves.
Gabrielle was not surprised. After all... one of them might one day surpass and replace the first lady of the stage. When their eyes met, Carlotta frowned, Gabrielle bit her lower lip. It was no secret, that AndrĂŠ and Firmin were quick to please their star to avoid any kind of drama.
If she remembered, and sent her home again today, in front of the managers... Besides of a probably fucked up E-Mail, she still had nothing official. The older woman looked her up and down, clearly straining her memory, the moment seemed to last forever. Gabrielle was not sure if it was better to keep or break the eye-contact. A feeling of dizziness began to rise in her head, fingers tingling, hissing in her ears.
Then a tiny yet excited BWUWAFF! resounded from Carlottas big handbag. Gabrielle almost suffered a heart attack. The Prima Donna fished a treat out of another pocket, feeding it into the tiniest white snout peaking out of the container and cooing about her precious Petit Souris.
The goblet passed, the Prima Donna moved on to the next girl and Gabrielle thanked the gods for this distraction.
They did not stay long, naturally, all three had important matters and vocal training to attend to. The atmosphere in the room noticeably relaxed, with some deep sighs and slouched postures following.
A hand squeezed hers, Michelle had returned and smiled, as usual.
"So, ladies, enough introductory niceties. You are here because you posses the most basic abilities to dance and sing. You want to become stars of this stage? You have years of hard training ahead of you. Sweat, blood and tears. Hard work, dedication, discipline and obedience." Michelle did not exaggerate. Her mother really seemed quite strict, the black high cut business dress accentuated her body and aloofness well. "Once you have reached the level of a professional, you might perform in the OpĂŠra Bastille, until then, for your training and all ballets, the Palais Garnier will be your home.â She seized up the girls giggling in the background. âLet this be your first and hopefully only warning, these walls are old. They have seen many tragedies both on and behind the stage. The ghost of history roams this building. When you dance, when you sing, when you walk these halls, show respect. Don't linger in the corridors and loiter in the shadows. Shadows are for spirits and ghosts, and they don't like nosy girls sneaking around in their domain.â Well that was certainly an interesting way to give them the houserules. âSo be warned, behave, be on time and take you training here serious, and the ghost will smile upon you.â Gabrielle leaned over to her friend a bit, very quietly whispering. âShe isn't serious, right? There are no ghosts here, right?â Michelle only shook her head, again shushing with her finger on her lips. No talking over mama. âI will now give you a tour of the rest of the building, stay close or you might get lost and never be seen again.â confused and amused they followed their new warden. Gabrielle had heard a story or two before applying, about people disappearing, just not showing up anymore to the next rehearsal. But that was usually that, wasn't it. People dropped out of all kinds of jobs. She wouldn't do that though, she was dedicated. âThere aren't really ghosts here, are there?â she whispered at Michelle again, her father had always taught her to accept that there were things between heaven and earth that you simply can't explain. And whatever causes them, were forces not to be trifled with. They chose people with pure hearts to bestow their favors upon, and paid those seeking harm their due... âNah, no ghosts-â Michelle skipped a step, waiting for Gabrielle to catch up and sigh with relief. âNo ghostS, just one...â a big grin and an ominous eyebrow wriggle. âWhat? Michy, don't be like that!â It wasn't like she was afraid of ghosts, but when you worked in the theater business, these things needed to be taken serious. She felt a cold shiver down her spine as they fell behind a bit. âOh don't worry, Gabe, it's like mom said: If you follow the rules, you have nothing to be afraid of. Just listen to mama, be on time, be diligent, be respectful and stay away from the shadows, lest you bump into a dark mysterious figure-â she might not mind that â-and the walls start oozing blood-â she would mind that certainly, though which respectable ghost would want such a mess in their house anyway. âMama said he was mad this morning, all moany, terrifying. Which is weird, because usually you only hear his ghostly howls at night or after bad performances... Oh come on Gabe, you know how old buildings are... I mean, I work here... and I'm still alive, right?â at least now it was clear her friend exaggerated. Gabrielle raised her head, turning in a circle once, speaking loud and clear, to whatever god or ghost or angel might hear her. âAlright, I hereby promise to behave and in return, expect my life to be spared.â she followed with a curtsy. âThank you.â Gabrielle twitched as they caught up to Madame Giry and the other girls, the old, thick wooden doors did sound like an ethereal being complaining. He groaned. Not only had he squandered his chance to get rid of her, she also was kind of adorable... not that that mattered... and dedicated... which did. He would just have to make sure, he never listened in on any rehearsals and performances with her. As if that was going to be possible. He dipped a finger in the fig marmalade and licked it clean, thoughtfully watching the screens, following the girls through the rooms. She had a thing for the Giry girl. That one was nosy and curious, but also her mother's daughter. So their... friendship?... could be both of advantage or disadvantage for him. Certainly would be easier to keep her supervised like this. As the tour was ending, both girls left the building together, he sighed, switching to a different camera and opening his accounting software. Her name was already in the system. There was so much to do today... Making sure the new girls all actually got what they were legally entitled to. Changing the order of dog treats Carlotta had placed with the managers, she just kept ordering the brand her dog didnât even like... He could, naturally, switch casting and understudy orders to favor Gabrielle. But he still didnât want to fully admit, that he was going to keep her in his house. He just... didnât have the right opportunity to send her home yet. She was young and friends with Michelle, sheâd fuck up sooner or later and get thrown out by the two fools ârunningâ the place. And even if he wanted to keep her, her voice had potential... that didnât mean she was making much use of it yet. No no, she was leaving soon, until then, she could join all the other girls... He downed his coffee and got up to bring the can over to his desk. Time to get to work like every other responsible taxpayer.
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After the siren: Hawks face biggest test after Suns shock
BEWARE the team and the star player that has copped flak all week. So often they come out firing the following week and that was certainly the case in Sunday eveningâs match at Metricon Stadium.
This game was never in doubt from the moment Gary Ablett won the opening clearance after a week under the microscope and bombed it forward. The Suns were always a sneaky chance to get the win, and Ablett with 36 touches was a big factor, but what also helped them was the return of Jarrod Harbrow, whose hard running off half-back gave Gold Coast so much drive and small forward Brandon Matera whose six goals was a career best.
Hats off to Rodney Eade. The veteran Suns coach had to deal with a week of bad press and the spectre of an opponent his club had never beaten and he masterminded a complete performance and one of the clubâs best wins and the sort that might be a launching pad towards that overdue maiden finals appearance.
âRocketâ always enjoys sticking it to his old club when he can and you think he reminded his players before the game they werenât the only ones on shaky ground because there was no âlet-upâ.
The spotlight is now on the Hawks and deservedly so. The competition was always going to catch up with the club that won three straight flags between 2013 and 2015, but the lack of spark and urgency is what will gall Hawthorn people at present. They are slow, reactive and if the finger-pointing at times on Sunday night is an indication, they are disorganised as well.
Tom Mitchell has brought his good form across from the Sydney Swans, Ryan Burton has pocketed a NAB AFL Rising Star nomination, but it is hard to think of one Hawthorn-listed player from last season who has improved, which means Alastair Clarkson is facing his biggest challenge since he walked into the doors of Glenferrie Oval as a hungry young coach in September 2004.
The Hawks are on the bottom of the ladder and now have a pair of marquee MCG home games in the next fortnight against Geelong and West Coast. It will be intriguing to see what they do at selection and with their gameplan, because not much has worked until now.
⢠Nine things we learned from round three
Tigers still roaring
Maybe, just maybe, your 2017 Richmond Football Club is the real deal.
Opening wins over Carlton and Collingwood were nice enough, but there was something emphatic about the manner in which they outlasted and indeed, out-toughed West Coast at the MCG on Saturday.
Perhaps the Tigers are ready to ride on the coat tails of Dustin Martin, who with 40 disposals and an insane 15 clearances, is already enjoying a special season.
The Tigers are quicker and more direct this year. But it is their small forwards that have created the buzz. Jason Castagna and Dan Butler have been terrific additions, while there have been no second-year blues for Daniel Rioli â in fact it has been the complete opposite. Every week provides something for the highlight reel.
The Tigers should start favourites next week at the Gabba against the Brisbane Lions to make it 4-0, before a huge Anzac Day eve clash with Melbourne. Win those and theyâll be off to their best start for 22 years and the AFL will be delighted.
In a year in which the some of the flag favourites reside outside Victoria, the emergence of the Tigers and the huge crowds they generate, is great news for the beancounters at the AFL.
West Coast wonât win every match as coach Adam Simpson said after the game. But the poor intensity from the Eagles will gnaw, as will the reality of four defeats from their last five visits to the MCG. Theyâre back there in a fortnight for what will be emotional afternoon as Sam Mitchell faces Hawthorn for the first time.
But before then, they face a five-day turnaround ahead of the Thursday night home game against the Sydney Swans. It will be physical and mental test for the entire club, but one they will embrace given they signed off on this clash before the fixture was released.Â
⢠Fantasy form watch: Dusty cleans up again
The futureâs so brightâŚ
Itâs wearing Schade. Excuse this column for going a bit retro and bringing back some Timbuk 3 from 1986 into the mix, but the work on Friday night of Collingwood defender Henry Schade deserves some praise.
It was a night set up for a virtuoso performance from Lance Franklin as he celebrated his 250th game. But the former Gold Coast defender had a splendid night, keeping âThe Budâ goalless in Collingwoodâs stirring one-point win.
Nathan Buckley coached really well after a difficult week. The gilt-edged midfield dominated early and for once the effort with the ball was matched by grit and effort without it.
This is what Collingwood will give us all year, and it will likely be a white-knuckle, rollercoaster ride all the way to the end of August. The midfield will deliver some victories, such is the quality, but as vital as the win was for the Pies, weâre no more convinced that the forward line is finals-worthy.
The Swans are 0-3 and facing the reality that this might be a development year. Injuries have forced their hand in this regard, but with West Coast and the Giants to come, theyâre facing a 0-5 start to the year and the almost impossible task of making the top four.
The Swans have played five debutants so far this year plus Jordan Foote, who had played just one game before this season. The Swans coach their youngsters as well as any club and theyâve each shown something, but this might be a rare year in which they wonât be serious flag contenders.Â
⢠Around the state leagues: Who shone in your clubâs twos?
Home cooking
For years, Fremantle threw the chequebook at whatever big names they could in various bold, but unsuccessful bids to bring big names from the east over to Western Australia.
Last October, the Dockers moved on from that plan and instead targeted West Australians looking to move back home and on Saturday night, that move started to pay dividends.
In the shock win over the Western Bulldogs at Domain Stadium, the four local recruits brought home by the Dockers all played their part. Leading the way was Joel Hamling, a Bulldogs premiership player last year, who kept Travis Cloke to 10 touches and no score.
Forwards Shane Kersten and Cam McCarthy each kicked two goals and McCarthy in particular looked lively. Heaven help the rest of the competition when he starts clunking all the marks he threatens to take. Speedster Bradley Hill had 25 touches and of the new quartet at the Dockers, has been the most consistent so far this year.
The Dockers sent Matthew Pavlich off into retirement last year with a handy win over the Bulldogs at Domain Stadium, but this was a far better night for the club. Younger and fresher, the Dockers zipped the ball around and attacked the corridor and looked entirely different to the turgid team from the opening fortnight of the season
The first step for the Dockers is to become difficult to beat at home and on that count alone, Saturday night was a step in the right direction.Â
Other observationsÂ
1. Once again, form counted for nought when the Blues met the Bombers. The dreadful weather at the MCG narrowed the gap between the sides but what did it for the Blues, apart from masterful displays from Marc Murphy, Bryce Gibbs and Patrick Cripps, was a tidy defence and more patient use of the football. When the Blues fail this year, it will likely be because of a gap in talent, not coaching.
2. A whopping 32Â shots on goal by Melbourne to Geelongâs 26; 58 inside 50s to Geelongâs 46. Yet the final margin at Etihad Stadium on Saturday was 29 points in Geelongâs favour. The Demons will rue one that got away, taking control of the game in the second and third terms, but so wasteful in front of goal that they left the window ajar just enough to keep Geelong in the game. And for the second straight week, the Cats came home like a steam train, with Patrick Dangerfield and Joel Selwood again leading the way. The Cats donât like playing home games at Etihad, but theyâre two from two there and while theyâre not in great form â the big two excepted â theyâre banking early wins with loads of games at Simonds Stadium to come later in the year.
3. Like the honesty from Cats coach Chris Scott. His men caught a break with Jesse Hogan and Jordan Lewis suspended and Max Gawn missing with a hamstring injury in the second half. If two of those three play against Geelong and the Demons likely win. It was a frantic game and Melbourneâs brand stood up pretty well for the most part. But a month without Gawn, the most influential ruckmen in the competition, will be a challenge.
4. Josh Kelly did well on Saturday, with 31 touches on a bung ankle in the game between the two clubs that desperately want him to sign the dotted line. For now he is a Giant and he played his part in an important and reasonably impressive 42-point win over North Melbourne, which reportedly has dangled a nine-year, $9 million offer. Already, the opening round stumble against Adelaide seems an eternity ago and the Giants appear to be top-four material once more.
5. Another cracking Showdown and the ledger now stands at 21-21 apiece after Adelaideâs slashing 17-point win over Port Adelaide on Saturday night. Thatâs three wins of equal merit for Adelaide and Don Pyke has built a team that can win in a variety of ways. And while it remains an unconfirmed rumour at this stage, the Crows coach might even have cracked it for a smile afterwards. As well he should have.
6. The Saints are on the board for 2017, with a 31-point win over the Brisbane Lions that could have been much heftier if not for a 14.23 scoreline. Glass half-full for the Saints is that they got there thanks to great performances from elder statesmen Nick Riewoldt and Leigh Montagna. Glass half-empty is that they needed them after the Lions came hard at them in the second and third terms. Huge game against the Pies coming up on Sunday and theyâll need both David Armitage and Jack Steven back for a game that could well be decided through the midfield. Nice break for the Saints to play an âawayâ game at Etihad against the MCG specialists Collingwood.
7. No. That is not an error. The Hawks and the Swans are in the bottom three.
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