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I like listening to your playlists :D

Looking forward to reaching the „National Anthem“ part 👀

thanks!

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My favorite moments from OUATL so far:

Ch.1

"I... didn't fall", Christen whispered harshly, lifting herself off of Tobin. "Just so we're clear".

"I only caught you out of instinct", Tobin muttered. "Just so we're clear".

Ch. 2

The princesses chatting and bickering in the stables

Ch. 3

Before the dinner went to shit, T was gagged at C in that champagne-coloured silk dress and pearl earrings

Ch. 4

T jumping onto C's balcony of course

Ch. 5

The post-waltz kiss on the hand

Ch. 6

T recognizing that C's animals are standoffish but not recognizing that she herself is standoffish, too

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I love chapter 3!! You painted chrishoven so vividly i imagine there is no night time there the sun shines 24/7 and chris communicates with animals like she’s snow white

Very much so lol, thanks for reading x

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The Overexposed 2 lying and cheating CP will forever hold a special place in my heart 💙

Chapter 1 and 2 have me pumped for 3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19 and 20

🫶🏽

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I’m having a rough week so only got to read chapter 1 so far and it’s great!!

My 2 cents on a slower response is: lots of people travel during summer, so usual schedules and free time might be less regular; and there’s TONS of international soccer happening at the moment, and if people found TC fic through soccer, they might be watching lots of that (myself included)! Also, I feel like the first chapter(s) was a lot of world building and background, which is so so important for the story and setting the stage for what’s to come — and you’ve done it so well that we already care about these characters in such a short time — but with that, there’s less to discuss as we haven’t delved as deep into the drama, interactions between the two, intense emotions, etc.

I’m so SO excited for what’s to come, please don’t get discouraged, we’re here and we so appreciate you and we absolutely love your writing!

Yeah, that's probably it. I'm sure that once the worldbuilding and set-up scenes are done, people will have something to say.

And if all else fails ill just make C a liar or cheater... that always gets the people going

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absolutely love chapters 1&2 so far!

i think my favorite moment so far is the morning after scenes and their reactions

Well thanks for reading x

I liked that part, too. I like how they both were worried about their image, but for different reasons. C because she's trying to turn a new leaf and T because she just doesn't want to get swept up in the drama.

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I’m on vacation but am trying to read bits and pieces here and there. Love your story writing brings me so much joy!

Thank you x

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I love enemies to lovers with bickering, so I’m really enjoying this, even though I’m not that into the whole princess system and stuff. I was kinda hesitant about original characters at first, but I ended up being surprised because I actually like them a lot and their personalities too. Honestly, no shade to Miami Heat, but I’m enjoying this one way more and I’m so much more excited for the updates.

Hope you don’t get discouraged, you’ve got your loyal readers 🥺. I do comment on chapters sometimes, but I get shy since it’s not anonymous like here… like, how would I freak out over a duck named Daniel 🤣🤣🤣. Yup, that’s me.

Just so you know, when you posted chapter two, I was having a sinusitis crisis and barely read it properly, and today I’m all stressed with family stuff, but I’m happy that when I get home I’ll read it properly. My lil comfort for a friday night

Take care, don’t get discouraged.💕💕

Thanks for sharing x

It's still only 2 chapters. Maybe people are waiting to read or maybe they're waiting for something big to happen in the fic - something noteworthy.

Luckily chapter 3 is very very juicy 👀

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I was super busy this week and just couldn’t get to the chapters. And I am usually among the first to read, so don’t get discouraged- the fic is amazing and thank you for gracing us with it

Yeah I'll just keep posting and hopefully it picks up. I know people have lives and jobs, I'm in a weird position cos I don't work full time, so I have a weird schedule, I'm always just chilling around the house so it doesn't always register to me that people have lives and responsibilities 😅

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I think the people on this tumblr are the real ones who enjoy the fics as well as hearing my take on things. I really appreciate yall because I love once upon a timeline and I'm still excited about the story. But i was having more fun talking about it than I am posting it now. It's just been a bit of a bummer posting it and feeling like it's not really liked by people, which is a shame cos I love it.

But, I'm still positive that it'll turn around ✨️

In the meantime, what are your thoughts on chapters 1 and 2? Let me know, let's talk about it 💚🧡

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ok i cracked and read the first 2 and….. im already in love w this dynamic and tweaking out waiting for monday LOL

ya killed it as always bestie

Thanks for reading x

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Bestie, where should we send comments on this new story? Here or on thewriterx account?

Idc, wherever u like

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It's still early days, maybe you're waiting for some more eventful chapters, I get it I get it 😅 I also know a bunch of ppl don't read until there's a substantial number of chapters so I'm sure that's the reason this fic has been slow to catch fire. Nevertheless, we move 🫶🏽

Enjoy the chapter x

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A great start… already invested

Really like the background of both of them

Thank u bestie x

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i hope you know you put a smile on a lot of peoples face ❤️

I try to 😂