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What is the meaning of undocumented immigrants?It means immigrants who live in the United States without legal status.It is everyone that left their country and risked crossing the border to get to the United States to have a better life.The united states is home to  approximately 13% undocumented immigrants.How do undocumented immigrants get transported from Mexico and settle to the United States?Some people come with visas but when their visas expire they never go back and decide to stay in the United States.Also some illegal immigrants pay for them to be transported in hidden vehicles such as cargo trucks that transport hundreds of million undocumented immigrants.They are all tight fitted in the cargo trucks.Immigrants come to the United states for a better future and to get help from the government.They should let all immigrants come to the United States because they come here with good intentions.

 Give a brief description (1-2) of what changes you made and why. Does this revision sample reflect your learning and growth in this course? From another course? What are you proud of? What are you still working on? The change I made is I found out to do a thesis statement properly.And how to explain the solution.The revision sample helped me grow in the learning process because know I know how write a bit better.I'm proud of the way I find evidence to explain my sentences.

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Writing Sample

Undocumented immigrants are the most popular ethnicity living in the United States.Every year a bunch of mexican immigrants come to the United States so every year the United States gets filled with new lations and that’s how the populations grows.Population could mean a whole number of people living in the same country.It states in ‘��Mexican Americans’’ by Theresa A Segura-Herrera,talked about that Mexican Americans are mainly the whole population group of latinos that compose of the United States’’.Most of the undocumented immigrants live in these cities Los Angeles and Phoenix but they all live in the United States but these are the popular cities that make up most of the Mexican population.According to the ‘’Mexican Americans’’ by Theresa A Segura-Herrera,talked about ‘’The U.S. Latino/a population has grown substantially over the past two decades, with a growth rate more than three times that of the total U.S. population’’.The United States is home to many undocumented immigrants when they finally make it to the United States they get happy because this was their dream is to be able to meet the United States.Since their home country didn’t have many opportunities so they decided to come to the United States.

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First Year Of College

I think this half of the first semester in college has been tought with managing working and school at the same think and all the homework's I get in each class. And like failing in each test I have taken so far is so sad because at the end you just want to pass all your classes with a good grade.For me I would say I have not had an easy class it has been challengig college is so different from high school and adapting to a new environment has been exahusting.The thing I have been surprised is that professors give you homework back to back and due the same week that I don't even have time to turn in on time and get stress.I feel like having a studying tool is difficult since I'm not used to studying before college.If I could start the semester over I would not take the classes I'm taking right now because they are all difficult and include a lot of studying.What I'm looking forward to the second half of the semester is to to study harder and not get upset for my grades.I feel like I see myself as more isolated not wanting to go out because I have a lot of homework to turn in.

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Hobby

If I had to lecture the class for an hour I would talk about a hobby that most of the people like would be Shopping. I chose online shopping because I know how to get discounts and shop where they have great deals going on. Fetch Reward is an online app that every time you shop and get a receipt you can scan for points. Once you have enough points you can redeem them for free gift cards. If you also refer a friend you could get points about 2,000 point for friend. Shopping has so much good benefits because if you don't have money at the moment of your purchase you can purchase with Klarna which is an app buy now pay later you can split a purchase in four payments. It makes it easier for consumers to afford their purchases when they don't have money at the moment but you want to buy something.

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Writing Process Reflection

I chose to pick a horror movie as my topic because I like to watch scary movies it will be more entertaining for me to talk about. It is important to me because I will write down about my favorite parts of the movie I'm going to discus about. I have learned that not most people like to watch horror movies because they get scared. I found it interesting because people that don't know what horror is could read my essay and they will find out more facts about horror.

2.It has been difficult to brainstorm because sometimes I don't even have thoughts on to what to write about . It comes easy when I'm relax and calm it comes easy for me to write . I'm trying to be more brief when I write I try to capture every thought that comes up to my mind. I feel like college work is tough it expects more time from us to study .For this project I need to focus on writing a good body paragraphs and introduction. I'm going to go to writing center often. My steps is going for me to reread my essay because I know I'm going to need to revise some sentences.

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Exercise 3 

How did this summary fall prey to the closet cliche syndrome? This summary falls prey because which the summary mistakes the authors viewpoint by substituting a well known cliche for what their author conveyed .''Sometimes because the writer believes it and mistakenly assumes the author must too.

What a better verb to use than ''say''? Why do you think so ?

I think a better verb would be convey because so the author could know the audience got the message . 

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