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https://www.humanesociety.org/resources/animal-cruelty-facts-and-stats

Talks about Cruelty and neglect cross all social and economic boundaries and media reports suggest that animal abuse is common in both rural and urban areas. The shocking number of animal cruelty cases reported every day is just the tip of the iceberg most cases are never reported. Unlike violent crimes against people, cases of animal abuse are not compiled by state or federal agencies, making it difficult to calculate just how common they are. 

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Animal abuse

why do animals get abused - bad owner - lack of care - bad treatment

is it right to do this? - why do people have the courage to do such horrible things to an animal?

What kind of respect should animals get? - Always be there for the animal. - take care of it - act like its your own child.

What punishment should the people get? - Time in jail - some sense knocked into them - never touch a animal again.

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My best paragraph

 I woke up the next morning and all I could hear was screaming from my mom crying out loud and I woke up and i go outside and I see my dad dead on the floor he was just laying there cold and empty I dropped to my knees and started to ball my eyes out it was the worst and most scariest day of my life because me as a kid I didnt' know what to think all I could think about was what he told me i couldn't stop crying because I lost my dad my bestfriend he was dealing with stuff that he didn't tell us he took his own life because he was scared.

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prewriting

have you ever been afriad of losing someone like your mom dad or even a bestfriend. Its hard to even imajine that no one wants that to happen but in life you never know what could happen the scariest moment in my life was when i was 13 years old before going into my freshamn year of highschool a day i will never forget a saturday night dont know the date but a saturday night this day changed my life complety and it still dose to this day it made me who im today even though i was young i still carry it with me to this day.