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CREATIVE NON-FICTION

AUTOBIOGRAPHY

I am Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales I was born in the year of the dragon March 29 2000 my mother gave birth in the hospital of Makati. My mother is Divina R. Ordiales and my father is Renando Y. Ordiales. I have 3 siblings they are older than me and I’m the youngest of th Ordiales Family.

           When I was a kid, I like to play with my friends I even sneak out of the house just to play with them. My mother hates when seeing me play in the noon she said I should be sleeping at that time. Everytime I go to school I’m to excited to see my classmates and friends but everytime I step my feet at the entrance of my school gate I feel like vomiting I feel scared. I don’t know why so I decided to go home. Until everytime I go to school I feel the same way. My mother got nad at me she asks me why I don’t what to go to school, I just cry and cry that day that I didn’t tell my mother the reason why I don’t want to go to school.

           One day my mother punch me in my stomach she was mad at me because I sneak out of school i said i was scared i didn't want to go to school because I was scared. Before it all happens one afternoon at the it almost the end of the class when i hear the bell rings it's a sign that the class was ended i get up at my chair took my book and put it at the bookshelf but i was shocked when my teacher shout and she smack a book on my head,she said she doesn't say that it's already ended of the class and that's the I became scared of school. But now I 'm trying to face my fears about going to school sometimes I'm still overthinking about things when it comes to school. But now I look at it as a challenge.

  BIOGRAPHY

There was a girl named Grace she was a big K-pop fan when she was in her highschool days. Her family was poor that she can't even buy what she wants she stays as a K-pop fan until she goes to college all her dream was to watch her idol perform, she wants to see her idol not just in a screen but in person. While she was studying in college in the course of Bachelor in secondary teaching, she struggled a lot that sometimes she doesn't in their school because her allowance was short so she did everything just to graduate and ended these hardships. She's been into so much struggle.

But one she saw the news that her idol will be performing here in the Philippines so she buys a piggy bank so she can watch the concert of her idol but before she bought the ticket her tuition fee was on due date her family doesn't have money that day so the money that she kept for the concert, it was the money that she pay for her tuition fees.

She promised to herself that after all of this she will be able to see her idol. Until the day she graduated and have a job the first thing she bought in her salary was an album of her idol and now every K-pop idol that have a concert here in the Philippine nes she came without thinking twice because she has money to pay for the ticket she also helped her family with their bills, and for now she even influence her little sister being a huge K-pop fan now both of them are watching K-pop concert.

Personal Narrative

           They’re was a little girl that like to play a lot with her friends everyday she sneaks out in their house just to play with her friends she plays doll house, tago-taguan, agawan base and pogs she play with them a lot that sometime she forgot to eat dinner the reason her mother got mad at her. She always did that until the summer ends and the class will be starting soon, she prepares a lot she was so excited to go back to school and they bought school supplies for her upcoming school she so happy and excited at the sametime. The school has begun she go to school with a wide smile in her face and with an exciting feeling and an open heart to meet new friends and classmates, her first day went so well that she meets a new friend named Ruth everyday they are always together they also play. Her first month in school was so much fun for her she meet an invrideble friend, until one day when she heard the bell rangs it’s means it is the end of class of the day she got so excited and got up from her chair and took her books to place it in the bookshielf the teacher got mad at her and went to and smack her a notebook in her head, the girl was so scared and after that day the happy girl became scared of all things she always overthinks on her own actions. After that day happens the feeling of exciting feeling going to school became an scary feeling for her every time she will go to scho she became terrified and scared so she’s not attending school for a day and the next day after her mother left her the school entrance, her mother taught that she is already in the class but when her mother got back at the house a few minutes ago the girl is also in the house she supposed to be in the school her mother got shock that she able to sneaks out of school without parent’s consent start that day it repeated many times until her mother got lost and got mad at her, her mother punch her in the stomach and struggle her in her neck her sister was there so is the one who stop the little girl’s mother and that day the little girl became an extrovert person she doesn’t give trust to anyone even the member of her family. But she changed, extrovert to ambivert she now capable of communicating comfartably with others it starts when she became a fan of every known k-pop she loves that group so much that she said to herself she will saw them someday she did everything to have a high grade she have an inspiration. Her sister saw her doing a graet work in school so she gave her a reward she bought a ticket to her favorite k-pop group, she was so happy that day. Until that day come, she was screaming her heart out because of the joy she’s feeling that day. That day became the most memorable day of her life.

  Travelogue

When I was 17years old my family went back to our province on the month of April we went there to have a vacation for 3 weeks. For the first week we just stay in the house of our grandparents and eat lot of fresh vegetables and seafoods. On the day of April 13 2017 is a Good Friday my mother and my grandmother prepared a lot of seafood dishes we can’t any meat on that day because it was Good Friday and on the Eastern Sunday my cousins and aunties decided to go on a beach we went to the nearest beach in our grandparents barangay because Esatancia Iloilo has a lot of seas. We have a lot of fun that day all the Delos Reyes clan has reunited because it only happens once in a life time so all of our relatives come to join the celebration so that day was a lot fun.

On the 3rd week of our vacation our last week in province my mother again decided to go in the Islas De Gigantes the island that have a lot of beautiful and clean sand and water beach. Island hopping, we go in different beach in island of gigantes because Islas De Gigantes is an island chain within the larger Western Visayas archipelago in the Visayan sea. The first island we went in was the island of Bulubadiang is just a small island so we didn’t take long in that island and we go to the next island the island of Antonio this island has the longest beach among the islands in the Islas De Gigantes and you can also can do a rock climbing in that island we took a lot of pictures. Cabugao Island this is island is isolated but it has a lot of big trees and an overlap rocks the rocks are very clean and flat it’s another place that we have a lot of pictures. Tumaguin island we stop there to have our luch break when I saw what dishes they prepared I got so excited to eat there are meatballs, liempo, shrimp, adobo and the most delicous dish is the crab  it’s so big and it’s so delicous I’m so happy while I was eating that dish and after that we take a break before we go to another island we have an 1hour break. After we have take a break we go to Sicogon island the most beautiful among the island in their it has the cleanest water and beautiful sand the sand there is white as the clouds in the sky and that island is the only island that have water sport we ride and banana boat.  

   It’s so much fun and after that it’s getting dark to we decided to go to anisland that have cabins so we go to North Gigante island we got an discounts because my mother know the ownerof the cabins we got rest there comfotably and the last day of our island hopping before we go back to my grandparents house we decided to go to WhiteTower it’s so beautiful and at the same time it gives a mysterious vibe so peaceful and calming for me to all the island we go that day this island is the most beautiful it’s so quite that you can hear is the bird humming and the waves of the beautiful and clean water in the sea. That’s the last day of our island hopping and after that we are able to go back in our grandparent’s house safe and sound. After our vacation I realize that there are places such exist the beauty of the chain island of Visayas.

                Literary Journalism

They’re was a girl who always want to prove something to her family. She gives her all just to see her parents being proud of her she listens to their advice; she follow their rules even sometime she doesn't their decision for herself. They say girls are built with sugar, spice and everything nice but not this girl, she always trusts her instinct stand up on her own feet and love herself first, this girl stands on her feet she finishes her work by herself. She works on her own and listen to her heart and brain and trust her guts that she can do this thing, she also taking risk for the sake of others. When it comes to trust she barely give it to her friends evwn her family she doesn't trust easily, she puts a wall everytime she encounter with others but once that wall was break by a person she give her trust and loyalty to that person, but she easily forgive but never forget.

She knows her priority so she steps aside those things she doesn't need. Always think of what will she do next, she like to finish her work within the time. Sometime peolple around her mistook her as a rude because sometime she hates communicate to people that wasting her time and she's being sarcastic to those people. She doesn't believe in luckyness she stops waiting for things to happen, because she goes out and make them happen. She doesn't live in a life of expectation she lives in life of reality. She is a grown woman who doens't stick to succes she is a woman who believe in progress. Because she was believing that she was progressing she is now little by little giving trust to the people who trusting her ability.

 She opens her minded now to her sorroundings about other’s people feelings. She also trusts her family and friends because she knows that their’s presence can be her source of energy.

   Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales

12- Diamond

Reaction to a Personal Narrative of Jeanyl Ann Mopas

               They’re a little girl who did everything just to be on top of everything in her school, she did everything that even make sure that she knows the right answers in her exams, she expect that she got all in her periodical exams. But her expecting prize was given to her compititer, but the teachers said that her competiter was got failed in two of their examination but they give him another chance to retake that exam because he was blood related to their school principal, she was awarded as salutatorian, but still she not happy in the result because she work really hard to be a valedictorian. But she just became a salutatorian because of just her competiter was blood related to their school principal. She feels the betrayal of the happenings, she deserved more than that because she works hard for everything. For her when that painful event happens to her she tought that was the sign that this game is over.

           She did everything just to prove herself that she even expects a prize for jer hardwork, but because of of her competitor is a blood related to their school principal her expectation became upside down she feels betrayed. in the world full of betrayal because of some circumstances our view point on people changes we are scared to give are all just because we are scared that our painful or hurtful past might happen again. We are scared to open up with others because of the tought that painful event of our life will comeback that sometimes we even miss the opportunities to knew people who are much deserved our trust. But she needs to open her mind and heart if she able to give a trust to a wrong person why not to a deserved and right one. She’s takes challenges in herown ways. Standing strong amdfight back at and problem she never gives up and always make everythings right. She’s the type of girl that will do anything just to be okay and if she needs any help, she’s not afraid asking for it.

   Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales

12- Diamond

Facial Recognition

           A face with a wide smile that a smile like everything is fine. Her face gives a good vibe to people around her, she gives the atmosphere of freshness and light sorroundings. She gave a great empathy to her friends and people around her, and her simple and bright smile makes others smiles too and forgot their problems. She kicks back when life try to kick her, her face says it all she doesn’t like to give up she always have the solutions to her problems. She faces her challenges with a bright smile in her face, just by her expression says that she is sincere and honest. Sometimes she makes faces that are cannot be denied that saying she is not in the mood to joke around. That make faces that say brutally honest about things she doesn’t like. Questions doesn’t need to know if she in the mood because she shows it by her expressions. Just by expressing her cheerfulness in the use of her expressions it is already clear that she is sincere in her actions. Her smile are always makes other people comfortable by being her side her face/expression says it all that she is a person doesn’t give up even the word turn their back at her she has the presence of a strong, dependable and independent woman that she will do everything by her strength and intelligence and also with carefulness not to hurt others. She expressing her thoughts by her expression so her friends already know what she’s thinking or what she’s gonna do and she’s always known what she wants to do. For her life she’s fighting in her own ways. Whenever I see her, I see myself in apositive way. Don’t have doubt on herself will do anything and stand for her rights. It just sad that in this world all of us need to have connection just to be on the top of the pyramid.

       Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales

12-Diamond

Reflective Essay

           When I was a kid, I experience the most terrifying event in my life. Well we use to live in a house that very close to another house before my house there was two house in front and a way in the middle, when you enter that path you will see our house its just a small house, we have two bedrooms and one bathroom our house is only a first floor. My family are just new there in town our neighboprs are very friendly I got a friend immediately. Well in our 3 months of staying there we doesn’t feel any strange at all, but our neighbor always said that if we saw a man in the iskinita just ignore it, at first I don’t experience or see and other man in the iskinita except my older brother and my father. But one night my father open the lights in the iskinita because its getting dark I was in my room, my room has a window that near in the iskinita so I saw whoever go in that way, and that night I saw a man’s shadow so first I thought it wasmay father or my brother so I didn’t mind it at all, then my father called me to eat dinner then I saw may father and my brother at the table they’re already sitting and my father tell me to took the Electric fan at my room to use it when I look at the iskinita I still saw the shadow of the man, but I just ignore it maybe it just a reflection of any things that shaped like that so I just ignore it that day. The days goes by and my father experience the same thing not just that my father woke up at 3:00 am just to getting ready to go on his job, he was sitting at the chair near the door and he hears and knock at our door at first he though it was just our dogs stracthing the door but after a few seconds he hears a voice calling he’s name he said it was a female voice and saying “ open the door”, we actually never saw in person but it still give us creeps whenever we passing trough that iskinita and my father change his time work before he woke up at 3:00 am at the morning but he request to change his time schedule to 2:00 pm in the afternoon. After all the things we experience in that house my parents decide to move to another house, then they bought a house here in Cavite now we are living here in peace but still whenever we remember our old house still gives me creeps, and thanks god our house here are very peaceful. My father and I experience that terrifying horror story in our old house, before I forgot our neighbor used to say that their was a couple used to live their in old times they say the husband always lock his wife outside the house mybe that’s the reason why there are always knocking on our door at 3:00 am in the morning, and still we have our new house so we don’t have to feel that creepiness whenever I remember that it gaves me goosebumps.

   Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales

12- Diamond

Testemonio

Right to stand for myself

           A grade 2 student in the school of Pembo Elementary School, I am here to testify the wrong doing I have done, I’ve done a terrible mistake in my whole life that in some times I regret doing it. When I was in the elementary I did it to my classmate for bullying me, he was teasing me to the point I can’t handle it no more when he was teasing me I was holding a ruler so what I did next was I smack it on his face and I punch him really hard that he was in the floor crying, that why we called in the guidance council the councelor asked us what happen I didn’t speak about it, and what happen was just the councelor let us leave the room we didn’t got any punishment I would say that my school was also terrible they can’t hadle things like this very well. So that’s why the bullies are still not doing things right they never learn because no one wants to tolerate their wrong doings. My classmate that I punch is still doing his bully things, still doing it to me I didn’t listen to him so I don’t lose control I might do the same thing to him if I listen to him, so I just let him say whatever he want to say or do, seen he just an immature boy who things what he’s doing was cool. He’s doing it again and again until I got sick of it, so I told the councelor what he’s doing in his classmates, the councelor said she will handle that but in the past few days after I said it to the councelor what’s his doing but still nothing happens, he’s doing whatever he wants to do until he got into my nerves this time I got saw an pencil in my table I took it and I scratch him in his right hand I did a very unexpected  thing in my whole life I hurt someone and it’s not just simple hurt but I scratch him a grade 2 student did that that’s what I heard every time teacher saw me and that bully guy. What the councelor did was to suspend me for two weeks, in those two weeks without him I realize that the the immature one I didn’t control myself doing but things I’m also like him but an brutal one, in that realization in my life I said myself that whatever happens I will control myself from doings things I didn’t want to do. I confess to my parents that hurt one of my classmate they discipline me, I learn my mistake even its really my classmate fault if his not doing bad things to I will not smack and pencil in his legs, I learn my lesson that I will control myself whatever that person will do to me and I will report things like this in the councelor first so they are the one who will handle it properly even the guidance councelor didn’t do anything I will report it to the higher one that will do the right thing and will handle it with fair judgement.

  Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales

12- Diamond

Self- Obituary

           Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales a 19 years old girl who died in her deep sleep, born on March 29, 2000 and died on December 03, 2043 yougest daughter of Renando Y. Ordiales and Divina R. Ordiales. She was born in the clinic of Oblisa Lying-in in Makati, the death was an uexpected event she was doing so fine before things happens. She a girl who have a big ambition in her life she wants to do lots of things in her life but the sad news make its just a dream for her now. She leave a bucket list of things she wants to do while she was in this worl, first she wants to finish her school and became a teacher, second she wants to buy a house for herself and live with it,third she wants a car that has only two passenger seat, fourth is she wants to go to korea, Japan and Maldives for a vacation she wants to yravel on her own she wants to travel alone she wants to feel free that no one will judge her on what will she do, and for the last one shw wants to make her parent’s proud and happy of what she’s achievein her life.  In the past few years that I’m living my life in this world full of happenings, maybe I want just to say that I experience lots of things I grown as a women who is confident of doing what I want that no one will affect, I stand tall whenever I stumble and still walking in my ways what ever problems that come in the life of a person stand tall and keep on walking like a runway model you need to slay your own runway and the eyes of people that watching while you were walking in your own and judging what your are and you do, do the things make you happy and you are the star of your story no one will be you are the one who make your story became a happy ending. In her life experience she always thinks about her family and doing things that make s her family happy. She was happy on the things that happen to her life atleast she will go to the peaceful place. Now I’m here saying goodbye to all of you, I’m thankful for all the things that happens to me in the years that I’ve been living in this world I did my thing and I’m able to make myself happy of what I have achieve in my life I’m blessed with the loved you gave to me and I’m here in the stage that I need to go. Living in the world that a lots of happenings there is one thing I learn that is to trust myself that I can do everything as long I’m confident to finish it in my own way, being myself is not bad sometimes I can voice out the truth about myself if I over do somethings, in this world be confident on what you do because no one like you. Thank you and Goodbye.

     Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales

12-Diamond

Definition Essay

Who I’am?

           I’m Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales 19 year old a grade 12 student who like to do like of things but also a lazy person, I like watching kpop and kdramas and also anime, I love being alone because being alone is I can make myself comfortable and I’m able to think of the solution to the prblems that I’m facing, I also like reading comic books the genre I’ve reading was sci-fi, comedy,school romance and also like dancing, and in my free time I also like watching thai series, I also like taiwanese romantic movies my favorite taiwanese actor is Darren Wang because his smile is so cute, in korean kdrama I love the School 2015 series because it’s shows what kind of student life in korean and I like the korean movie Werewolf Boy its so cute, in anime I like the series Assassination Classroom it’s shows how the teacher love his students and I like the anime movie Your Name because of its Sci-fi Love story and I also like the 5 Centimeters per second it’s a very sad anime movie.  I think I’m good at it it just what I think, and I can do what I want to do,but sometimes I’m so lazy that I did nothing just laying in my bed, but I’m also wants to know a lot of things about myself what can I do, what skills do I have I want to know what I’m capable of I want to prove myself being useable in the my family and in this world. I want to know what thing makes me happy and I want to do travelling I want to discover myself who am I or what I’am. For me things are very difficult in the past few years whenever I go home I don’t the home sweet home I feel nothing whenever I’m I in house I’m being difunction in the house, I’m doing household chores but still feel nothing I feel invisible in this house. Who I’am what I can do what I’m supposed to do to feel the happeness I want to feel? I want to be complete I want to discovered things about myself. I’m still young so for me I can still do lot of things and discovered what I’am. For now, I want to feel the happeness that I’ve been missing for, for these past few years. I want to travel and feel the things that I’ve been craving for, I want to know the things that I can do I want to be an independent woman who can do what ever she wants I’m a strong person who is finding herself and not afraid of what will she facing. I will find thing that what makes me happy and what I’m good at, I’am an ordinary girl with extra-ordinary dreams. Finding myself is one of my greatest dream I want to find myself I want to know what I’m capable of. Things are hard there are lot of rock that I will be facing in my way to success but I will face it with open mind and strong personality, still I’am a girl who is finding herself in these crowded worlds.

   Ma. Renaviel D. Ordiales

12- Diamond

Critique Paper (Coach Carter)

             Coach Carter played by Simuel L. Jackson; Coach Carter was a real-life event. Ken Carter who is known as Coach Carter is coach in the school of Richmond Highschool. In the year 1999, Ken Carter goes back in his old school Richmond High in California to became a coach in the basketball team in Richmond High. He’s a strict coach with tough rules and acadimic discipline he imply a very tough rules to his basiketball team that streak them into success, but the team only focus to their sports that they forgot their academics, Coach Carter lock down the gym and shut down their championship season, he got criticize by the team and their parents for shuting down championship season, but he stick to his decision he wants the team to not only focus on their sports but also to their their academics so they can have scholarship in any university they want to go. Coach Carter was incharged of the basketball team richmond high, he became the basketball coach of that team because he wants to teach the students aboit their strength and responsibilities not just being a basketball player but also a student. The Movie also teach us the lesson of not enough is enough not doing your best in your life but expecting great price but progressing on things and achieving on your dreams. Life is not easy it's like going on a battle ground if you want to succeed in your dreams you need to have a plan to make it. " Average is not good enough" once Coach Carter said in your life you need to do everything if you want a better life and doing you best is like a success, and descipline is a biggest weapon you have when going to a war. I like how he apply the discipline to his team that it makes the team realize that every moments or minutes are very important, but in some things, I don’t agree in his being strict to his team that some of them are being hard headed. But still he sticks to he’s promise that he will make the team got into universities, when Coach Carter was about to quit his job he goes to the gym and saw his team that working really hard on their academics. One of his kids thank him for saving his life in the misery happens in his life he thanks Coach Carter for realizing that his life is important, Coacg Carter Give them a Lesson of there are a lot of important things happens in our lives it’s not just about ourselves. In this movie shows how Ken Carter discipline his team not just in the athlete but also in academics so after their Senior Highschool they can go to any universities they want to go, he also make sure that he’s team will also focus on their academic performances so they will have a good result and can go in universities that they want to go.