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Client Feedback Review
Feedback is an important step because feedback gives reactions to a product or a person’s performance of a task. Feedback is used as a basis for improvement. My client gave me feedback when we first met and all I had was a bases for my story. My client told me what I had to change and what needed to be added.
Once I was finished writing my original script which was ten pages long I met with my client again, my client read through my script and then gave me feedback. My client told me to remove a good portion of my script, three pages of script. I agreed with my client and took out those three pages that did not contribute to the story. My client also pointed out some spelling and grammar mistakes I missed. When my client meeting was finished I returned home and started to correct the mistakes.
The Client requested these changes as the three pages that were taken out had useless information and was not contributing to the story at all. The Client also pointed out a few spelling and grammar mistakes that I had missed when I had read my script.
I agreed with the changes that my Client told me to make as I had missed these mistakes, with the exception of the three pages, and I corrected those mistakes once I had left the meeting and returned home.
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P2
6) The target audience for this animation are people who are in the age range of fifteen and thirty-five. This is appropriate because during young adulthood the teenagers are learning about the world and they want to try new things and experiment with different emotions and feelings. However older people may seek thrills from watching horror movies.
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P2.Character Sheet 2
Shannon Moss
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Shannon Moss
Name & any addition information about name (eg. Nickname; story behind choice)
Real name: Shannon Moss
Nickname: Mossy, nickname from childhood
Age: actual age/age they give/age they look
Actual Age: 25 years old, age they give: 25, age they look: 25
Month of birth & birth sign.
Do they believe in birth signs?
She was born on the 16th of May, 1993. Her birth sign is Taurus, she believes in birth signs.
Clothes size
How do they feel about their clothes size?
Medium clothes size. She likes the clothes she wears when not in ‘uniform’ for school.
Where do they live/ City, town, village? Type of property?
She lives in a house: Number 23 Langley Hall, in Jordanstown in Northern Ireland
What car do they drive?
She drives a 2014 Chevrolet Volt.
Occupation: actual/aspirational
She is a teacher in Belfast high but aspires to become an author.
Significant Relationships?
How successful are these?
She is Single but has a crush on the Girls P.E. Teacher. Miss Viollette Thackeray.
She tries to ask Viollette out many times but always fails due to the students and her own stuttering.
What do they most enjoy?
She enjoys reading.
What do they most hate?
She hates bullying.
Most noticeable physical traits
Her most noticeable physical are her natural Emerald eyes hidden behind her glasses.
Most distinctive aspect of their personality
She enjoys teaching but loves reading and writing.
What’s their dream?
Her dream is to become a very successful writer.
What’s their worst fear?
Their worst fear is being mugged.
How would they describe themselves? (5 words)
She describes herself as Confident, Kind, Friendly, Brilliant and Intelligent.
How would their mother describe them? (5 words)
Joyful, Ambitious, Charming, Dependable and Sweet.
What is their ethical perspective
She is confident but not overconfident due to her intelligence.
Are they dominated by emotion or logic?
She is dominated by logic but that logic can be overruled by emotion on occasion e.g. talking to her crush or encountering the poltergeist in her house.
What is their flaw?
She is afraid of being mugged.
How are they seen by others?
Shannon is seen as Welcoming, Reliable, Modest, Brilliant and Friendly.
What is their biggest secret?
Shannon’s biggest secret is that she is afraid that her crush might reject her.
What do they want?
Shannon wants to succeed as a writer and to ask out her crush.
How far will they go to get what they want?
Shannon works hard on her book and her attempts to ask out her crush.
What do they need to learn?
She needs to learn how to properly write a book.
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P2.Character Sheet 1
James Celestial
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James Fenras Celestial
Name & any addition information about name (eg. Nickname; story behind choice)
Real Name: James Fenras Celestial
Nickname: The Detective
Reason behind nickname: It is his job
Age: actual age/age they give/age they look
He is twenty-eight years old, looks twenty-eight and is twenty-eight.
Month of birth & birth sign.
Do they believe in birth signs?
He was born in June 28th, nineteen ninety-eight. His birth sign is Cancer and he believes in birth signs
Clothes size
How do they feel about their clothes size?
He is a medium to large clothes size. He likes the clothes he wears because they usually reflect his job.
Where do they live? City, town, village? Type of property?
He lives in a house on Abbeyville street, Whiteabbey, Northern Ireland.
What car do they drive?
He drives a BMW when off duty otherwise he drives his police car.
Occupation: actual/aspirational
He is a detective/paranormal investigator.
Significant Relationships? How successful are these?
He is single but has a child with his ex-girlfriend.
He does not have the best relationship with his ex but does his best to be a father.
What do they most enjoy?
He enjoys his job a bit too much.
What do they most hate?
He hates people who do not take his job seriously.
Most noticeable physical traits
His most physical traits are his Heterochromia eyes: He has one Sapphire and one purple.
Most distinctive aspect of their personality
He enjoys investigating and solving crimes and investigating the paranormal in his free time.
What is their dream?
His dream is to find actual paranormal evidence.
What is their worst fear?
His worst fear is finding actual evidence of the paranormal.
How would they describe themselves? (5 words)
He is adventurous, brave, foolhardy, grim and composed.
How would their mother describe them? (5 words)
Bright, focused, intrepid, kooky and miserable.
What is their ethical perspective
James has a strong scene of justice however; it is tempered by his fear of the unknown.
Are they dominated by emotion or logic?
James is dominated by logic most of the time.
What is their flaw?
He is afraid of the unknown and the paranormal.
How are they seen by others?
James is seen as a modest person by others, he is friendly, has a good laugh when off duty, funny and a workaholic.
What is their biggest secret?
James’s biggest secret is that he fears that he is being laughed at behind his back.
What do they want?
James wants to find evidence of the paranormal.
How far will they go to get what they want?
James goes far in his quest to find proof of the paranormal and eventually does find proof at the end of the show.
What do they need to learn?
James needs to learn to get over his fear of the paranormal.
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P2
1) I only have one idea that I will be working on, however if I had to create other ideas for future products I would use the website: bubbl.us. I would first make a spider diagram about the different Genre’s and pick three from the diagram and then start forming stories around those genres e.g. Sci-Fi, this story would be about a two people on their way to a new world via a classic looking naval ship, the ship then gets attacked by pirates, the crew of the space ship defeats the pirates and then the two main characters get married on the new planet.
2) The two genre that my story are: Mystery and Horror.
a. The Mystery genre revolves around the solution of a problem or a crime. It often focuses on the efforts of the detective, private investigator or an amateur sleuth in order to solve the very mysterious circumstances of an issue by means of discovering clues, investigating the area and clever deduction. The main characters are usually detectives who set out to solve the mystery. For example Scooby-doo and the Mystery Gang or Sherlock Holms and John Watson.
b. The Horror genre taps into humanities deepest fears and anxieties and what is suggested is more than often frightening than what is revealed. For example the Germanic Expressionistic films of the 1920s, influenced by the English Gothic novel, were among the first examples of the Genre. The typical character of the Horror genre is a victim, rather than a hero; the antagonist, who is often manifested as a technological aberration like Frankenstein’s monster or social aberrations like Jason from the Friday the 13th movies, or Freddy from Nightmare on Elm Street or Michael Meyers from the Halloween movies; unbridled aggression and character sexuality usually plays an important role. Technology, science and scientific activity often unleash the antagonist.
3) The conflict of my story is that there is a ghost that is haunting a house of the secondary protagonist, whose name is Shannon Moss and it is up to James to stop the poltergeist, and at the end of the animation it is revealed that the poltergeist is Shannon Mosses grandfather.
4) My story has four acts. A standard story usually has three acts however occasionally stories have more than three acts. My story is going to have four acts because I have decided to split Act 2 into 2 acts.
a. Act 1 introduces the viewers to the main characters and what is going to happen to them in the story. This is my Act 1.
b. The animation starts off with James waking up, he gets out of bed and goes to the sink; he brushes his teeth, bends down to spit, the camera pans but up to the sink’s mirror to show a ghostly face in the mirror that introduces the title of the show. He leaves the bathroom and gets dressed, he then walks down his stairs to the kitchen; he makes cheese on toast and leaves his house and travels to his work place.
c. Act Two is the conflict of the story, this act is where the major conflict between two or more people occur or between a person and a creature of an unknown thing. This is my Act 2 which has been split into 2 sub Acts.
d. Sub Act 2 – 1: He is ordered by his chief to go to a nearby house which has reported some very strange occurrences happening in their house. James makes his way to the house and knocks on the door, the door opens to a dishevelled looking woman, the woman asks who is it and James replies that he is Detective James Celestial and he was sent over by his Sargent. James asks if he can come in and is let in, he asks who he is talking to and the woman introduces herself as Shannon Moss, he investigates the house and doesn’t find anything, he then goes out to his van and takes out some ghost hunting equipment, he then places infrared/night vision cameras around Shannon’s house and sets up a broadcast to his home computer so he can monitor the house. He then leaves and returns to the police station to make his report. He then returns to his home and sets up his computer. He loads up the camera feed and proceeds to record the cameras. Over the night the cameras record footage but start to white screen. In the morning James check’s his computer for the camera footage and discovers that over half of the footage (between the hours of two am and six) are nothing but white static.
e. Sub Act 2 – 2: He rewinds the footage and watches as the video starts off normal, the woman eats dinner, watches T.V and then goes up to bed. The video feed continues normally until eleven, where the T.V. in the living room turns onto a white static channel, the chairs in the dining room stack themselves, the clock beside the camera in the hallway reverses itself from the current time to five o’clock and very different things happen, James then looks at the feed in the main bed room, where Shannon was sleeping, the covers start being pulled away and a dark figure can be seen in the corner of the room. Before the camera cuts to white static James gets jump scared when a black silhouette appears in the screen and what is very creepy is that the silhouette has white pinprick eyes and a white teeth smile, feeling very creeped out James stops the recording as the recording had gone to white static. James then makes copies of the recording and goes to work. He presents his findings to his superior, James’s superior orders James to stay on the woman’s case. James then goes to Shannon’s house and is invited in, James feels as if he is not welcome in the house, and for the first time he sees the ghostly beginnings’, James then bed’s down for the night and has a restless sleep.
f. The third and final act is usually where the story ends and has a resolution to the conflict and story, however some stories can end on a cliff-hanger. This is my act three:
g. The next morning James wakes up on the kitchen table, the house a mess and nearly all the camera and recording equipment destroyed, hurriedly he checks the laptop, luckily the laptop is not damaged, he gets dressed and travels home, he opens the laptop and checks the video feed, nothing happens until the witching hour where everything happens and then the ghost makes its appearance and four were the ghost picks up James and take him down to the table. Then the camera cuts out. Then the camera cuts to James looking scared out of his wits, later at night time, James goes to bed, when he lays down in and closes his eyes the last shot is of the ghost appearing in his room before the screen goes to black.
5) The two main characters of James Celestial and Shannon Moss. James is a police officer/detective and a paranormal investigator in his spare time. James is sent to Shannon’s house by his superior in response to a nose complaint. Shannon Moss is a teacher at Belfast High. In the Middle of one night Shannon is awoken by creepy sounds and her belongings being thrown around the room, eventually she is chased out of her home and one of her neighbors phones a nose compliant on her.
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