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i don't usually make these kinds of posts but in the tags tell me what symbolic imagery you associate yourself with i'm curious. personally i associate myself with eye injuries, the color red, and scorpions.

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fiery redheads! 🔥🔥

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it is honestly amazing how much of writing and editing is just. logistics. like... do i use a name here or a pronoun? if i move this dialogue tag to the middle of this line and break it in half, does the end of the line hit harder that way? what if i move the tag to the front? what if i remove it entirely? ...wait, whose point of view am i in; can i reasonably say this character is appalled, or must i say they look or seem or sound appalled? is this a deliberate action or a step-removed one; is her hand closing on his shoulder, or is she closing her hand on his shoulder? environment environment environment, we need to break all this dialogue up with some narration, the scene is coming untethered. what! are! they doing! with! the rest of their bodies that are not hands! fuck fuck fuck FUCK i forgot we covered this two chapters ago and now i either need to cut this whole chunk or find a reason to reprise the conversation from earlier. name or pronoun? name or pronoun? name or pronoun? move this clause around in this sentence? oh i'll add this phrase-- nope, never mind, past!me added the same phrase two lines down. okay, if i add too much environmental narration it's going to take away from this bit, but not enough and it won't feel grounded. what if i move this to its own line? where the FUCK are their hands?

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i really do fucking love the train. i sit it goes we arrive etc

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i can't quite remember her face actually

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"anybody"

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burning food is an inherited trait

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working with little kids is so dangerous. you get one kid who has a unique way of speaking & then spend the rest of your life with an internal monologue like “me’s go bathroom?”

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I love texting someone on discord and seeing the gray activity notice turn green. Look at your phone boy

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zelink for the soul

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day 1 - at first sight

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Show me how unwell you are by telling me what your top song of 2025 is so far

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*scrolling tumblr* hmmm. i agree with the sentiment of this post, but the phrasing feels off to me. it doesn’t really have that Reblog factor, you know? *scrolls* oh good, a post that just says “i jerk off till my penis scrweam” . i better reblog this

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Zelink week day 1: First Sight

Across the parapets, Link catches sight of Princess Zelda and Impa. He doesn't know why, but he feels a strange pull toward the Princess he's never met, as though magnetized to her through the distance between them.

Shaking himself out of it, he goes back to sweeping the stones.

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Zelink week day 2: Wish

tfw you and your girlfriend are stargazing in the marsh and then have to run for it.

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