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My old enemy....writer's block 💀
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A Perhaps Better Chance At Writing?
.Never Ending Fight
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Act one: A Cold Night
In the cold dead of the night when the world was asleep and the only light in the small village illuminated through the glass window was a single candle.
The strings danced in and out a ball of its own except it had no dim lights, food, dazzling outfits or a hall to dance on. An un-amusing ball it was indeed.
"Look mother!" The boy on the desk exclaimed holding up a book of adventures for his mother to look at, the book had a drawing of a mighty sword on the right page "It says here anyone could become a hero if they wished too!"
The mother didn't bother to look up from her strings as she talked "Dear, you have already reached 15 the age of marriage and yet you still talk of these silly stories believing the nonsense they spout into your head?" The boy put the book back on the desk "It's no nonsense, Mother. Uncle Paul had told me a hero has a heart of gold, don't I too have a heart of gold, Mother? Uncle Paul said I did" the boy declared his uncle's words from heart, he truly believed he could make it into a hero but his mother saw no hope in his dreams "Darling don't just believe everything your uncle said, a hero is a heart of no gold but full of courage and bravery and bravery something you don't have. What you have to focus on is getting a noble lady and a decent home not these folktales".
The boy huffed there was no talking his mother into believing in him, alas even if she does not believe in him he suppose he have to believe extra in his soul though it would be nice to have one's support. "As we talk about marriage" the boy's sister looked up from her strings aware where this is going "Athilen my beautiful flower how are things going with Albert Soft?" The mother eyes finally left her work and spared a glance at her dauther "Oh mother it's the same as always nothing new to talk of!" The girl talked in a rushed tone trying to appear as un-different to the unpleasant question "Nothing new? Why I heard he plans on paying us a visit very soon and there might be a ring involved!" The mother exclaimed but instead a look of happiness on Athilen face it was painted with shock and horror.
"Mother I'm not sure that marriage is convenient for our Athilen at the time being maybe when she's a bit older" the boy said as he looked at his sister's horrified face there mother did not know of it but marriage was not on his sister's list "Oh? Then I guess we could talk about you and Annie no?" The boy froze as it appears it was his turn "Mother, you know we're on odds with one another and Annie always has her nose in my business" his sister broke out of her horrified stage and jumped to help her brother back "I agree with Athill, Mother! Annie is not a very nice girl" their mother looked at him before declaring "Darling if a girl picks on a boy it means she likes him! It appears you already have a perfect fit for you perhaps I was worried over nothing" the mother said happily as it appears she didn't get the message the siblings were trying to send "With all duo respect Mother but hurting someone is no sign of love but hatred" the boy said only to be once again ignored his thoughts doesn't seem to weight much.
"What are you knitting Mother?" The sister said as an attempt to escape the dreadful conversation "A dress for your father for when he returns" the mother said going looking at her un-finished work "Is Father returning soon?" "Yes dear he sent a message in the morning and declared he'd be back 3 nights from now".
"I can't wait to see Father again! I really missed him, Mother do you believe he'll perhaps stay longer this time" Athill said excited it appears he forgot the conversation that happened a minute ago "Maybe but nothing is for sure, I do want to suggest you follow him this time and not create un-sensible pretext not. Now shoo you two it's quite late now" the mother said signing her children to leave the room as Athilen put down her knit inside the drawer and excited followed by her brother. Perhaps she would be able to talk Albert into giving up that ridiculous idea of his.
Act two: Caged Bird And Mad Dreams
Athilen despite her looks was no sane but far from it as she was a mad-lady with a mad-mind as Athilen wished to be a boy and that was no sane but mad, but of course no one knew of the mad girl's thoughts no one but her brother who talked her into it being no madness but thoughts of nature as silly as that is.
'Perhaps you were simply born in the wrong gender?' Were her brother's words but no matter how mad she is Athilen was no fool and knew that it was no possible for nature to make such mistakes to such a beautiful girl as she was and maybe if she endured it long enough the harsh test of the Gods will be passed,
She only had to wait and she could because as mad as she was Athilen was also as patient able to contine her mad thoughts and make no fuss over these silly non-existence problems, how else was she able to hide them from her poor parents? Hide them deep under her bed, pillows and closet? Tuck them away and make no sound of them to nobody but Ahill?
Athilen was mad but she was patient and she would wait as long as the Gods' test pass so she could finally be rewarded for her enduring and by the power above will she wait be it until she dies and passes to ashes.
The mad girl walked side by side with her sane mother to the Clovers' shop for fabric and fabulous dresses as she and her mother needed more for her dear father's dress as it was supposed to be finished before the owner of it return.
"Greetings Mrs Clover my dearest how have you been?" The mother spoke as soon as she saw the owner of the shop, her friend greeting her with a warm smile yet respectful manner coating her way into perhaps a less prized fabric and possible alliance.
"Ah! My if it's not my favorite customer and my future dauther-in-law! I am more then happy to see you dear Mrs Alclorn as well as your beautiful daughter. What may I serve you today?"
The woman's flaw of words seemed endless as it appears they were dead set on wedding Athilen to Albert but has she no say in it? Perhaps asking her opinion was a matter of non existence but then again when were young women of their village asked if they wish not to be wed to whom proposed?
Her words were for Albert to be negotiated upon and if he was merciful enough he'd let it go she had hoped, but of course putting her full trust in a man other then her Athill was a no option as she knew her brother would rise swords and hell had Albert not let her go willingly.
"Some blue silk would do as you see my husband is on his way and I wish to gift him a new dress but it needed be dond before his awaited arrival" her mother talked eyeing the fabric of the shop spotting if not many blue clothings.
"Oh my! That sure is wonderful words to be heard, and if that was the case then I shall pick red silk with it for you to see happiness on your nights and maybe gift your children with an extra sibling" Mrs. Clover spoke winking as the girl's mother hide her giggled sounds behind her hands as she put them upon her mouth not to be loud.
The woman took out 12 coins from her purse to pay the other "Oh no Mrs Alclorn! I wish for our trade to be of your famous lemon pie, you see Mr Clover has been craving for it badly" "Oh of course Mrs Clover, whatever Mr Clover wishes for, then I shall make him the finest pie to be delivered through our Ahill first thing tomorrow with the rooster if you would!"
Athilen was vigorously waiting to leave the shop so she shall not run into Albert, not now with both mothers around, she needed to talk to him and she would be fond not of it being anything but private.
"Ah! And if I may ask for just the perfect time for my Albert and I to visit your lovely home Mrs Alclorn?" "Why of course! We would be waiting for perhaps the following Sunday Mrs Clover?"
"My! We would be there with gladly good news for both our homes" the woman give one last glance to Athilen with her sweet smile and it took everything in Athilen to smile back.
When they finally left Ahilen immediately had her teeth pressed agains her lips and clenched her fists as if looking to the future Athilen decided on it being a rather terrible week until Sunday.....
Act three: No Surprise Tactics No Hunt
Athill ran across the forest path breath heaving in his chest as he heard the whistling he ran faster and faster until the whistler was detected too close to his comfort,
Athill turned slowly the whistling never stopping until he let out a scream Ahill tripped and feel on his back a laughter breaking out from the hunter "Heavens! At least you got quite far this time" the other crouch on knees level scanning Ahill with his eyes of gold.
"Was the scare necessary though? I'm sure there was no screaming before now" Athill sat on the grass his hands supporting him as he half amused eyed the other boy "Why of course! What is a real hunt with no surprise tactics after all?" Ahill only rolled his eyes in return extending on of his hands for the other to take,
"Whatever just help me up you moron! I almost had a heart attack because of you" the other took his hand and lifted him up before asking sarcastic "Whose moron? I thought my name was Ltairen" at that Athill only pushed him lightly smiling a bit before saying while walking "Yea well it's now moron" "Why, as the All Might Athill Alclorn wish" Ltairen said before warping Athill with his arms.
Athill suddenly felt a wave of heat hit him before he pushed Ltairen's arms away, the two walking side by side towards Ltairen's tree-house before they heard a movement,
Before the movements' owner could see them Ltairen had Athill pulled on the sidway of the tree house as he caught a glimpse of a yellow dress Athill kept quiet and narrowed his eyes on the intruder both boys recognizing the high confidence yet annoying in the person's voice as they examined the name crafted on the tree "So it was true huh...that Savage really found a hiding spot away from us..",
"But Annie! What if they catche us?! I don't want Athilen to hate me" the brunette of the kids behind the girl spoke up as a younger girl kicked his leg suddenly he let out a whimper "Don't be a such a coward Albert! I saw her with Mrs Alclorn on our shop today talking with mother, it is only the other two today" the little girl said as Annie chuckled,
"See Albert, and you're supposed to be the oldest yet Eli takes all the hard work off your back, should you not be ashamed?" The girl said causing Albert to hesitate not quite sure about the situation but look down as another kid laughed "Albert is such a coward! We shouldn't even let him join us" the kid laughed with Elizabeth,
Annie dismissed the last part of their show scanning the area as she heard soft noises before climbing up the tree followed by her three companions Albert being the last to climb up.
The eyes of Athill and Ltairen both widened as they shared a look Ltairen's palms still on Ahill's mouth, they would dislike the group breaking into their tree-house but they would hate it if they took the medicine for Ltairen's mom which they worked oh so hard for!
Short on options and time the two climbed after them with no weapons as they did not want to break the medicine with rocks "Rafael!" Ltairen said as he was the jar between boy's palms holding it quite up with one hand "You can take anything you like but please give me this jar; it is of much importance" Ltairen said as he moved slowly and carefully,
He knew it was not in his favor to appear stressed at the sight but he was desperate and if Annie told him to he was willing to lick her shoes if it meant getting back the precious jar.
Annie snickered at Ltairen misfortune "well well well if it isn't Mr I'll hit you with rocks if you don't shut up, but aww you don't look so mighty pleading for a simple jar hmm? I wonder what would happen if it accidentally broke?" Annie cooed and it was then Athill joined the scene "Annie, Albert please we don't need yo do this you can take anything you want just leave the jar" Athill said trying to negotiate with the elder ones of the group "You're right we don't need to do that and we thank you for your generosity Athill darling buuuuttt you see the jar is in Rafael's grasp and it's not like we're in a place to tell him not to break it as he really REALLY thinks he needs to, isn't that right Rafael?" Annie winked at the child as he smirked,
"Annie is right and it's not like you asked of me nicely especially with how hard the rocks were last time either..." the boy said as he pretended to think "Rafael please Rafael we're sorry really sorry tell you what I'll give you a treat! A very delicious treat that you choose if only, if only you'd give us back the jar" Athill said as he moved closer to the boy "A treat huh? Hmm....no thank you!" Rafael said before dropping the jar as it made a loud shattering sound Ltairen fell onto the floor as his thouughts shattered, his friends worked so hard to help get that medicine only for a mere child to end their hard work in few countable seconds!
The time felt like it froze as the three but Albert laughed as he felt like something else was broken other than the jar "Annie..I think we took it too far.." Albert said before Annie cut him off "Oh don't be too silly! And Ltairen please don't be so sad after all it would've been shattered in a lesser nice manner by your mother no? You should be thankful to our thoughtfulness" Annie said causing Ltairen to grawl and almost jump at the girl had it not been for Athill holding him.
Athill soothed Ltairen "hah! Whatever! Let's go guys" Elizabeth said as Annie glared at them before leaving with the other three Albert stopping for a moment to spare them a stare of guilt returned with coldness before he too left head looking down.
Once Athill was sure they were far away he pulled his head away from Ltairen body still holding him a smile creeping into his face "What if I told you your lessons worked after all?" Ltairen heard him say bead rising up a bit as he let out a confused "waht?" Looking at Athill's ever so growing smiles before snickering "You were right what is a hunt with no surprise tactics? I knew they'd cache air that I hide the real medicine under some other ground they know not of!"
As the words came out Athill's mouth Ltairen felt the anger being replaced with shock and fondness "What?! You did?!" Athill only nodded at the other before the two breaking into laughter Ltairen tackling Athill to the ground in a huge "Oh my Heaven! Thank you thank you thank you Athill! You truly are a hero; MY hero at that!" Athill would let Ltairen cling into him an odd feeling creeps.
Ltairen was happy, he looked happy, he sounded happy, he acted happy and Athil felt somewhat lacking, he did not want to shake the feelings he had wishing to tell Ltairen that Annie is right and it is indeed useless but he didn't he couldn't not when the other's happiness as much as its temporary is more important;
"I love you" Athill heard Ltairen say growing brightly in red wondering to how long may it take for him to be embarrassed not of simple words light touches or gentle movements; not anytime soon at that for sure.
And when Ltairen was finally done with body connection Athill took him to behind their tree-house, moving grass away from the ground and exposing his well-crafed hole to which contained a smaller jar then the one which had been broken but none the less Ltairen would be able to work with it, only that is, if his mother doesn't break it again..
Athill looked up as the sun rose down signing for the two to bid one another goodbye and go each their home and hope for themselves they shall meet again the world to not separate their bodies.
Athill walked down their village way his thoughts were of displeasure as he tried to not think too much of Annie's words, Athill doesn't need to worry and Ltairen would be alright he is after all good at avoiding anything thrown at him; even if Athill wishes nothing to be thrown at him.
And yet despite all the reassure from himself and to himself, he still feel news terribly wrong ought to strike them when the night dies and their eyes close for the sun to rise once again.
Act 4: A Traitor
Ltairen stood there frozen up, he did not think of his mother to be awake let alone sitting in the dark room waiting for him with eyes mixed of excitement and rage fuel he held to the jar of medicine;
"Ltairen! Oh my precious boy do you carry me your poor mother some gleeful news my darling?" His mother said with such happiness and Ltairen felt the blood in his body travel beneath to his legs warning to break out of his body and stain the floor.
"Hello to you mother I um....I got you your medicine though it spilled I managed to get more in a much smaller jar though I do hope it is enough for lasting longer if you do not break it that is...again" as he said his mother's happy face twisted to stain red of anger as his answer did not please her in fact.
"So you did not huh...I give you one chance Ltairen ONE to find that shameless excuse of man and you failed me again mind you! Is this what the world gone to? My own flesh and blood betrayed me and for what a stupid useless medicine for!" The woman spit her words with so much hatred as she stood from her chair and walked across the table very slowly towards her son.
Ltairen suddenly felt his fear be replaced with anger and despise "Mother please! Father did not cheat on you and flee he died I and everyone of the village saw his body!" Before his rage with fully released Ltairen felt a grip on his neck slamming his head against the door and preventing him from air as he struggled for dear life "I told you they were lying" his mother said with a emotionless yet full of emotions stare
"What use are you to me now child? What use do I have of you when you could not do one simple task?" Ltairen felt tears fell down from his eyes to his face then the floor as his vision became weak.
Is this how his story shall end? Dead at the hands of the mother he broke his back to achieve medicine for? Will he die without making a thing of himself? Without proving them all wrong? Without saying goodbye to his only two friends..?
No, he did not wish for that he did not wish for himself to bid Athill goodbye for the last time or to miss his time with Athilen, Ltairen wanted to live he demanded of the Gods to grant him life of his own name not of his dead father or mad mother.
In the rush of heat Ltairen held his mother's hands in his fest grabbing them before shoving the hands off his mother being shocked was pushed back too before she stood up looking at him with murder screams of eyes "You little wrack! How dare of you lay your hands on your own mother?!" His mother shouted marching at him.
Ltairen felt fear and defensive of his life pushed his mother off once again but before she could grab him hearing a crashing sound Ltairen looked in horror realization his mother had her head hit the table's end hard blood dripping down from a crack which should not be in her head.
The boy felt sick from the scene as well as himself but how could he do this to his own mother who birthed him? Perhaps he was indeed an ill to their society and they were all right; the thoughts ran through his head as his body ran through the houses causing light to turn in on each house as he was screaming for help to save his mother.
Ltairen stopped at the Doctor's door banging on it with all his might as his eyes cried river before the man opened the door for him "Help I beg of you I made a grieving crime to my own mother!"
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loo011 · 10 months
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loo011 · 1 year
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I like to think that Angel is alastor's #1 simp. I also believe if a alastor fangirl joined the show angel would say 'step in line girl, I'm the number 1 fan here'.
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loo011 · 1 year
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Vows for me ain't lying when I say
'That through any kind of weather I want to watch Karmaland'
But the truth is I don't know Spanish at all!
No I don't have time to learn it
In my schedule there's no room
But I still want to know what the hell is going on!
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loo011 · 1 year
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I know that Fizzarolli is supposed to be antagonist, but if he and Asmodeus broke up, my heart will break too.
They're like this couple who you think are always fighting and on each other's throat but in reality one of the most wholesome and lovey dovey couple, I mean just the way Asmodeus holds Fizz after being knocked down its just pure wholesome!
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loo011 · 2 years
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Can I just point out that even though the whole smp restarted and stuff I still want a cfundy final lore? And I would very much like it to be a wholesome stream in which one of smp members would just comfort him? Someone to finally tell him that everything will be fine from now on? And actually mean it unlike the empty words everyone else tell him?
What fundy been through is cruel, maybe even more cruel then Tommy because Tommy after all had tubbo by his side but fundy had no one
Leaving him like this would be just even more cruel and I would hate a fate where he will never get the reassuring that he not just needs but also DESERVES whither he restarted with everyone else or not he deserves better,
He deserves someone to finally reach out and take his hand instead of it being empty or him being the one to reach out.
If Tommy suffered because of the discs and his arrogant behavior toward dream, then what reason is it that fundy have to suffer?
The fact that he's a furry? That's just a dumb and even cruel reason to hurt him
Or is it the fact that he's wilbur little son whose spoiled? Because as far as I and anyone else who watched his stream know, he's always been a higher achiver, even though that he's been lied to betrayed and put down he didn't stop trying until he endured more then most people can.
So yeah give me that wholesome final fundy stream with a well deserved huge and assurance for our fox! 👏
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loo011 · 2 years
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I generally believe that Connor is biologically schlatt's kid, and dream's ADOPTED son,
Why? Well looking at the conon of schlatt and quicktly being married as well as fundy and dream bring married/engaged.
It just doesn't make sense that dream is biologically Connor's other parent, especially with him literally hating schlatt, and that he had BANNED him from the smp before, just HOW??
Until someone finds an answer that actually makes sense I'm going go stick with dream adopting Connor
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loo011 · 2 years
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*Gorege objecting to dream and fund's wedding as well as ruin it claiming it's something he was supposed to do long ago*
DNF Shippers: YES!
FWT Shippers: NO!
Also George: btw I did it because I wanted to be the one marrying fundy! 😃
DNF Shipper: . . .
FWT Shippers: . . .
FNF Shippers: YES! suck it up ya'll!
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It is said that both the FWT and DNF Shippers decided to ignore the existing of the statement made by said Georgenotfound,
It was an important historical choice both parties came up with after lots of arguments,negotiations,tears and sweat.
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loo011 · 2 years
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What do you think about our new book cover for EVELYN?!
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We are so happy to finally find an app to create our books' covers!
It's not the best but it is a good one for our first book of the 'R.O.S.E' series
By the way? Have you heard that we're gonna start another horror online book?
Wait for 'Servival Guide To Fix The Apocalypse' from the R.O.S.E series!
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loo011 · 2 years
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The stereotypeing for making fundy lovesick/clingy in some different fictions & george a bit*h in fwt fictions.
Okay ya'll someone really REALLY needed to step up and talk about that, but since none is willing to, I'm taking the bullet
There is this thing with fans making fundy in fwt and dnf naive,clingy and lovesick, which is annoying 🙄
Before you come at me yes I know c!fundy is quite clingy to people around him (especially c!wilbur back in the days)
Now I didn't say that in the start, I'll say it now
I am NOT making an argue wither fwt or dnf better, you're free to ship whatever you like
My argument is about how you stereotype the characters, that's all so please don't come at me saying stuff like dream loves george or fwt is better
Fundy WAS the one to constantly ask dream on that date, he was the one to confess, and the most to talk/prepare about the wedding
BUT after the wedding desister he was very much the most annoyed at dream, he kept calling back stuff that annoyed him about the relationship
Now I don't know about you guys but that doesn't sound clingy,desperate or lovesick to me,
And despite his anger about what happened he didn't do or say anything bad about George in that matter, his anger about what happened was directed at and only at dream.
In fact the one who's more clingy in the fwt relationship ever since the wedding was dream,
he constantly tried to get fundy back, so how come this went by unseen?
Meanwhile, many MANY fwt shippers like to make george the evil guy,
Okay I get it, he objected to the wedding that wasn't very nice of him really, but fundy himself didn't say anything about him being evil or smth, like I said his anger was on dream alone
And george did say later on that he wanted fundy, and was pretty much jealous dream was marrying him,fast forward saying he wanted to be the one fundy marrys
Looking at George's character,
he's not a bad guy, he likes his friends, and he wants to be king because that's what dream promised him
And he sleeps, like ALOT
Fundy and George's characters are very much alike to say the least,
Both are good and nice people who have suffered and been betrayed by people they trust,
However both have some kind of grey circle, one that they do things that are considered evil while still going back to being good afterwards
Like george betraying dream after he was dethroned
And fundy helping destroy lamburge after wilbur died (and he NEVER got blamed for it, everyone pretty much thinks it's teachno fault)
Both have similar nightmares/dreams,
My point is they very much are NOT enemies, so stop making them to be in your mind because of dream.
Dream as well in that matter,cares about both
Wither he loves fundy or george is not really important here,
All in all the moral of this post is
Fundy is not a lovesick puppy
George is not an evil assh*le
End Of Story.
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loo011 · 2 years
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'EVELYN' chapter 5
It was already 5:45pm when James dropped by to pick Melissa,
Leya and Melissa came down to find Alex chatting away with James, they seemed to get along quite well.
When they were already downstairs, James stood up to great the sisters, obviously being more interested in Melissa's makeup.
"You look...nice, I mean you always look nice!"
"Um yeah thanks you too look nice as always!"
The awkwardness was clear in the air.
Leya put her arms around Melissa's shoulders then gazed at James with her deadly threatening expression
"You'll be good to our Meely, and you'll bring her before 10pm won't you?"
Melissa didn't need to look to know that Leya was very much threatening her date, her tone said it all.
"Um yeah! Of course"
James said sweating, before being grabbed away by Melissa not wanting Leya to scare off her date.
"Then we'll be on our way"
Melissa said before grabbing James out as Alex shouted a "goodbye and goodluck on your date sweetie!" to her.
It was when they were a few foots away that Melissa turned to apologize about Leya.
"It's all good really, not the first time Leya acted like that"
"Yeah heh..."
Melissa laughed awkwardly before turning her gaze away, James noticed her discomfort about what happened
"You know...you're lucky, it seems like she loves you more than you think"
Suddenly Melissa stopped walking, making James look back at her
"I know"
She let the words slip, face darkening as memories flashed through her mind.
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EVELYN Chapter 4
Once they were back home, without a warning Leya pulled Melissa all the way upstairs to her room, set Melissa on her bed as went through her closet.
Leya was acting like it a matter of life or death,which was funny since it wasn't HER date,
Melissa was worried before but seeing Leya like that made her feel like she wasn't worried enough.
As Leya went through her clothes Melissa observed her letting a small smile creep over her face, before she quickly washed it if away and instead looked around the room.
Leya's room was nice, it was nothing fancy really, and it was clear that Leya sticked with the basic.
Almost everything was either white, brown, or both,
Funny to think she has such an annoyingly cheerful attitude and yet her room was so basic, and yet she still hand many trophies put on the nightstand,
There was also some family pictures some hanging on the wall and others on her bedside,
The one that caught Melissa the most was an old picture of the both of them right next to Leya's bed.
They were so....happy in that picture,
and Melissa would lie if she said she didn't have the very same picture on the drawer next to her own bed.
"Found it!"
Leya shouting snapped Melissa out of her thoughts, quickly turning her head to look at what Leya had picked for her.
It was a light blue dress with white flowers on it, and a white belt around the wrist, with a bare of blue shoes.
Melissa blinked at the dress a few times before grabbing the dress and shoes then going into the bathroom to change.
Leya looked at the closed door with a smile, shd was undoubtly happy to have some 'bonding time' with her sister,
such an opportunity doesn't come as often, and she vows to use it.
Before she knew it, the bathrooms door clicked and Melissa walked out, looking away with a shy expression, Leya didn't need to hear Melissa say that she liked the dress, it was written all over her face after all.
"Oh, you look so pretty Meely!"
Leya squeezed happily.
"Yeah..? Well I guess your teast is not too bad.."
"Of course, now let's do your hair and you'll be good to go!"
Melissa blinked a few time at Leya, showing obvious confusion but Leya just smiled at her holding a brash, and Melissa instantly understood before backing away and holding her hands up as a sign for Leya to not come a foot closer, but Leya, being Leya only stepped closer causing Melissa to step back farther in return.
"No! No touching my ponytail!"
Melissa threatened, not liking the idea of Leya doing her hair.
"Oh come on Meely! Ponytails don't fit with this dress"
"No! D- don't come any closer!"
But Leya only stepped closer,refusing to listen
"How about this! A Single bun"
And at that, Melissa stopped backing away
"Single bun..?"
She asked to confirm what she heard,
"A single bun!"
Leya confirmed.
And at that Melissa let out a sigh of defeat, letting leya know she had won this time.
"Fine..."
Melissa said keeping her vision away from Leya, knowing all well she had the happy smile she gave everytime she got excited, this time 'cause she won.
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EVEYLYN: Chapter 3
As the school day went on Melissa River had on thing going on her mind
"He asked me out on a date!"
Melissa squeezed happily face as red as tomato as she told the guy next to her all about her crush
"Oh....well that's nice"
Blonde short hair ,light brown eyes,wearing a white shirt with long sleeves and red hoodie with short sleeves, white jeans and red sporty shoes
Clover Illywhacker (N.E)
His name not to be told yet
"It is! He's the sweetest"
Melissa said with dreamy eyes, still unable to believe she was asked out by her crush
"I mean....there are sweeter then him but sure, whatever you want"
As Clover said Melissa took a minute to think about his words before shaking it off, she doubt he knew anything about how she feels after all he wasn't a girl, he was a boy
"Well I'll leave now, have fun at your date I guess?"
Clover said as he held his back at his shoulder and made his was outside the building
'I need to get more girl friends'
Melissa thought before collecting her bag and putting it on her back, then making her way out as well.
And as she made her way out she found a white car with Leya standing on the side
That was their mom's car, Leya's mom
Alex River
Just like her daughter, she had black hair cut short enough to reach her shoulder, and blue eyes,
She didn't come pick them up as often since Melissa told her off for showing up at the 2nd grade of elementary school
Some words were said and Alex never picked them up after, she still waited for them next to the door and if they're a minute late she'd panic and call the principal
Melissa took it as her way of caring for her child, not children as she probably only care for Leya.
Melissa decided to go with it, she was happy and didn't want her mood ruined, so she quietly got into the car earning a smile from Leya as she followed her to sit inside the car instead of standing on the sidewalk.
"Mel, honey how was your day? You seem more happy then usual, did something good com up?"
Right away Alex started chatting, and Melissa actually didn't mind it instead she even gave as smile as she replied
"Yeah um I have a date later today"
Just ad the words escaped her mouth, Leya's smile dropped face turning pale with shock, Melissa ignored her sudden change and took as her not believing a guy would actually ask her out.
"OH! That's wonderful news hun! Tell me all about him"
Leya's smile returned, but much awkward and the worry could be seen leaking in her face
"Y-yeah, you didn't tell me anything about that meely, who is he?"
Leya made out the words, this time Melissa glanced at her
"James Watson"
"Oh that's nice! I heard the other girls talk about how great he is, I'm so happy for you love"
But Melissa kept her eyes on Leya as she turned into shock then relief then happiness, which confused Melissa
"OH that's a relief I thought it would be someone else, I talked to James a couple of time, I'm glad that he's a nice guy"
Leya let out a relieved smile as she continued talking about how great that James is a nice guy and not a jerk.
"Maybe I could help you pick out something to wear?"
Leya looked at her with sparkles in her eyes, washing away all the worry she had on her face just minutes ago.
"Oh um yeah okay..."
Even though that Leya was acting weird before knowing who it was, Melissa still took her offer after all Leya was pretty and Melissa wanted to look pretty for her date, Leya would know what Melissa should wear best,
Unlike Clover who wouldn't care less about her date.
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EVELYN Chapter2
Leya River
An absolute goddess, adored by all for her unique beauty and outstanding personality,
Melissa's Step sister and antonym.
You'd think it's all thanks to her heavy makeup that she's so pretty,if it wasn't for Melissa seeing her countless times without makeup on and she was still the pretties.
Cara turned hear head looking at who dared to touch her and gasped in awe upon seeing how held her hand
"What are you doing?" Leya said, voice sharp and threatening
Cara inhaled as she tried to collect her words, unknowing what to say to get herself out of Leya's sharp looks
"OH that, I was just messing around with Melissa, why do you care anyways?"
Leya's eyes sharpen even more as she gave Cara an ugly look causing Cara to flinch
"If I may ask, of course it is none of my business but it's just curiosity you know"
Leya softened her grab on Cara's arm and smiled speaking clamily as if she wasn't holding Cara's arm threatening to harm her
"Oh! Well she's my sister of course" Leya moved her eyes to look at Melissa holding that sweet smile of hers
"Right, Meely?"
"Yeah, of course, we're really close.."
Melissa gave up a smile at Leya as she signified her to let go of Cara's arm,
Leya took the hint as she let go of Cara's arm letting it fall
"Sorry about that, I'm a little bit protective of my dear Meely"
Melissa cringed at the last words
'Really now?'
Leya noticed Melissa cringing and gave a sad look but it took only a second for it to disappear being unnoticed by the other 2 girls and putting back on her sweet look.
"Well, I'll take my leave now"
Leya turned her body on the opposite direction to walk away before stopping second later
"OH and Cara"
Leya said turning her head to look at Cara dead in the eyes
"Be nicer to Meely next time, will you?"
Cara once again flinched in horror at Leya's threatening look
Once again Leya smiled sweetly and turned her head back walking away, this time she did not stop, both Cara and Melissa looking at her,
Cara soon after turned to look at Melissa giving her a hateful look
"This is not over"
Cara said in a whisper still in fear of Leya coming back any second,
she turned away and walked away probably to join her group of mean friends.
Being left alone Melissa let out a sigh she didn't know was holding
She still needed to go see James.
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After 10 minutes she made it to the empty classroom where James asked her to meet,
She had let him wait long enough, 15 minutes exactly
She needed to know what he had to say
He'll get bored of waiting for such a long time, a hot guy like him probably have plans to hangout with his hot friends thrn wait for 15 minutes for her
Shd should go in now, so why was her legs frozen in their place?
She can't do that, she can't go in and get her hopes up only to find that she was being delusional.
She needed to leave, and so turned to walk away before hearing someone calling here, slowly turning to look, and here he was.
With green sparkly eyes, black hair, beautiful face clear of all worries and that stupid smile that got her heart flattering,
dressed in a black shirt with short sleeves and two lines in the middle one yellow one orange,a black jacket lines on it on top of it, dark blue jeans, and orange sporty shoes.
James Watson
The boy that got her along side with other girls head over heels was walking to her with two cans of soda
"Here you are! I was waiting for you, can you help me with this math question I been struggling with? and maybe um...I don't know hang out at the Café after school maybe?"
If she hadn't noticed the clear pink shade on his cheeks she would've thought he was playing her, and yet she still couldn't belive nor denie the possibility of him liking her back.
"Um yeah sure, that would be nice"
She felt her cheeks grow reder as she managed to let out the words
"Great I'll come pick you after 7, it's a date!"
He said in a hurry as she tried to listen to every word he said, making sure of each one and-
Wait
'Did he say a date?!'
She opened her mouth to speak despite knowing no words would come out, but he was quick to run away, leaving her dumbfounded.
'I have a date....with James Watson?!'
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EVELYN: Chapter 1
As soon as the bell rang students hurried out, dark brown long hair tied in a ponytail,big black glasses,blue middle sized dull eyes, and thin weak body
Melissa River hurried out, she was supposed to be somewhere else as she had an important date with the school hot jock,James she had to give him tutorial classes and after a full month he asked to meet her in private after class, she couldn't deny him even though she needed to hand in the science project, collect the physic's paperwork and re-practice her history project last time before the class started.
She was an idiot in love, but could you blame her? This was the first time someone ever been nice to her outside of her family, everyone treated her like garbage, even her sister won't talk to her much inside school and refused hanging out with her outside because she had plans with her friends instead, whom of course were more important than her....
Thankfully Jason texted her all night that day,
No one had ever been so kind to her and as selfish as it was she like the attention given to her by the boy, she only prayed it was not out of pity.
And as she hurried through the hallway she ran right into trouble, bumping into light brown hair,hazel eyes and beautiful skin dressed in tight blue jeans, white top shirt with puff sleeves that barley covers her arms,a pair of white heels on the bottom and a silver necklace with blue heart,
Cara Imogen, a transfer student who didn't take days to fit right into the school environment and now after a month she made it into the popular kids list,
And if that wasn't enough to make Melissa envy her rumors had it she's dating James, as if Melissa didn't feel like he was way out of her reach.
'Hey! Watch it four eyes' Cara moved to spill her soda on Melissa, nothing new from the stereotype bully,
Melissa stood in place, after all she was used to this kind of treatment, it was best to take it instead of fighting a fight she would lose.
She closed her eyes and waited to feel the cold drink spilled on her it was gonna stick for a while and she'll need to find an explanation when she gets back home, and she would have to text James to tell him she's not coming as she can't go like that and make a fool of herself infront of her now crush hopefully he'll understand.
It took a minute for her to realize that Cara hadn't spilled the soda on her, and as she opened her eyes came an arm holding Cara's hand tightly stopping it from spilling the soda on Melissa,
Dark long black soft hair, crystal blue eyes shimmering like diamonds, glass-like skin, cherry soft lips, dressed in the school uniform.
Leya, the school most popular girl and the one that brings back trophies for the school in almost every single competition she joins, if someone envy Cara for her looks and quickly adjustment to the school environment then they haven't met Leya.
The girl was a goddess of beauty and confidence, and one way or another her last name was also River
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