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-Oriko and Kirka-

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College should be free and you should be able to study “useless” degrees just for the love of learning

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it is honestly amazing how much of writing and editing is just. logistics. like... do i use a name here or a pronoun? if i move this dialogue tag to the middle of this line and break it in half, does the end of the line hit harder that way? what if i move the tag to the front? what if i remove it entirely? ...wait, whose point of view am i in; can i reasonably say this character is appalled, or must i say they look or seem or sound appalled? is this a deliberate action or a step-removed one; is her hand closing on his shoulder, or is she closing her hand on his shoulder? environment environment environment, we need to break all this dialogue up with some narration, the scene is coming untethered. what! are! they doing! with! the rest of their bodies that are not hands! fuck fuck fuck FUCK i forgot we covered this two chapters ago and now i either need to cut this whole chunk or find a reason to reprise the conversation from earlier. name or pronoun? name or pronoun? name or pronoun? move this clause around in this sentence? oh i'll add this phrase-- nope, never mind, past!me added the same phrase two lines down. okay, if i add too much environmental narration it's going to take away from this bit, but not enough and it won't feel grounded. what if i move this to its own line? where the FUCK are their hands?

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He was SO dramatic this episode

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STOP giving characters 6 pack abs and start giving them soft bellies instead. Right now.

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Get off c.ai and find a tumblr blog who rps as a fictional character or read fanfic like a sane person

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rip yosuke you would've done numbers on tiktok

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church clothes :)

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overhearing my neighbor rant on the phone top of his lungs and his friend is saying something in calm voice and he goes NO. NO NUANCE. STOP SAYING NUANCE. MY BOSS NEEDS TO DIE

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Family

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carworth

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redraw of the tiny aa section of kinu nishimura's 2012 capcom heroes calendar cover, except i've taken the bold and never-before-seen creative liberty of making them hold hands

(also ryu because he's walking by them in the original lol)

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They only had one beer each

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