Your writing style is seriously so good and I'm obsessed with everything you put outš Will there be a part 2 or a follow up of all too well?
No follow up.
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thank you for bringing back training wheels š„¹
Low engagement truly discouraged me for a minute there but...well, it is what it is. I can only write.
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Do the pouges know that she and Parker live with Rafe? I imagine theyād find out, it would be difficult to hide that but they wouldnāt just sit around and do nothing. Or would rafe force her to explain to them that āitās all okayā or āit all worked out in the endā so that theyād leave her alone?
Theyād try to intervene but tbh Readerās beyond defeated and wouldnāt want Parker any more upset by the situation especially now that he knows Rafe is his dad. Rafe also gets in her head about being a bad mom which she starts to believe. In her head the best she can do is be a good wife and mother because Rafe makes her think that.
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hey, just wanted to asked do links work for you? i can't open any fic in masterlist or masterlist in general and it's so frustratingšš
They work for me! Idk whatās going on, sorry.
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I can imagine reader trying to be happy and not stress with Parker even when Rafes around. But then Parker saying something like āI want a siblingā after seeing other kids playing with their siblings, and Rafe just fully supporting the idea. Like towards the end of the fic they seem to get a pretty close bond as Parkers unaware of the situation and Rafe would use it to his advantage as a way to manipulate the reader, by kinda ganging up on her with Parker.
Eg, reader doesnt want another baby, Parker and Rafe do. Parker is innocent and unaware of the situation so he just sees his mom as the bad guy since his ālovingā father is agreeing with him. If heād want another baby he wouldnāt need her permission (as we know how rafe is) but her being put in the spot infront of her son would make her pretend to agree and be happy, putting up the act of a happy family which I think Rafe wants
If I continued the story, that is 100% what would happen. I think Rafe would enjoy being there every step of the way this time and pretend this is a wholesome experience even if the Readerās unhappy to be trapped with him.
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all too well has so much lore to it, all the background juiciness reads sm like a multi chapter fic. youāre amazing for condensing it into a one-shot š
Thank you. There is SO MUCH lore to explore and expand upon with obx.
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loved ur writing for all too well sm! idk anything about rafe but now u motivated me to continue watching outerbanks! tysm I lovee seeing mom readers .. esp in dark contents cus itās scary the lengths a man will go to in order to ensure u donāt escape again </3 even if it was accidental Iām sure his mind now canāt thinking of anything else BUT seeing u round w his babies </3
I love mom readers too. Raises the stakes.
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HEY LOVE!
I just wanted to say that Oblivion is GLORIOUS! Holy shit?!?!? HOLY SHIT!!!! I can barely process it.
When he said "You're leaving me?" My heart SANK. and then when you had the reader rush to him i was like AKSHWOHCOS
And i love how smoothly you made the obviousness of his use of the voice fade over time. Like over time his commands just became whatever he said. He didnt have to use his voice so onviously because she just needs to follow the basic commandment he ingrained in her. Following everything he asks, regardless of his use of the voice, is a commandment.
Forget everything but him.
Love him.
Stay.
UGH!!!
And the passage of time? I was right there with her. Shook to my bones! I understood how terrfied she was and rightfully so! And the set-up in the beginning with him? Perfection. PERFECTION. I cant say enough good things! His loss of chani his rebound that fed his dark desires. Irulan's dismissive and mocking tone. Pauls desperation and insecurity. The reader confusion and fear.
Damn, you did that.
I keep telling myself holy shit, if she every DID leave. If chani came back to liberate her cousin??? If stilgar saw what Paul had done and went behind his back? I just know paul would burn down arrakis so she would have nowhere to hide.
ITS DELICIOUS AND TERRFYING AHHH
I love it!!!
Thank you for sharing such a gem š„¹ A Blessing frfr
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Y'know, I see a lot of posts urging people to comment on fics, so I just want to say, to all the people who do comment, and especially the long commenters:
thank you.
Long comments can be time-consuming. They can be difficult to write, but you leave them anyway!
Thank you, thank you, thank you, to everyone who comments.
You are the highlight of fanfiction writers' days.
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All Too Well | Rafe Cameron
A tragedy in your family forces you to return to the one place you fled from years ago. Your hometown of Outer Banks.
Warnings: NON-CON, Mom Reader, Pogue! Reader, Mentions of Abuse, Blackmail, Threats, Child Abduction, Gun Use
This is a dark story. Heed warnings before reading under the cut.
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GIRL that rafe fic was SO FUCKING GOOD what the hell?!!?!? It'll always baffle me how you don't think your writing is good bc when I say I was shivering in my seat from how good & dark rafe was??? i am NOT exaggeratingš
Loved that so fucking much and I was feeling so depraved of rafe content so ur fic was like drinking cold water on a hot day. Tysm Lune luv yaš
Thank you so much!! I know I write well š, I just donāt like to gas myself up more than I think I deserve.
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I was the previous anon who just sent my thoughts on All Too Well and I had another lol: why do I feel like Rafe had something to do with her sister death cause that whole fell thing sounded suuuper sus
He had something to do with it alright.
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Omg All Too Well is everything!!! Such a great read! The plot was so good and every scene had me RAPTURED. The dynamic with Rafe and this reader was so intense and toxic. Like the way he talked to her and still felt like he had control over her despite not seeing or hearing from her in 4 years showed that he still felt possessive over her whether she was in the same state as him or not. Iām so curious about how they met and how they got together with her being a pogue and all. Also what was the straw that finally broke the camels back and made her leave him? Was it her finding out she was pregnant? Or did she find out after she left?
Also I saw from your other posts today that your not feeling well mental health wise and I just wanted to say to make sure youāre being kind to yourself and find some way to show yourself that you love yourself today whether it be a sweet treat or writing down traits about yourself that you like! I know itās small and silly in the grand scheme of things but when my noggin is in the blues I feel like I need to reminders to take it easy on myself and not berate myself for being depressed. Go towards the light my friend!
She was completely wrapped in the relationship with him but finding out she was pregnant put everything in a different perspective for her. She wanted more for her herself and her child.
Thanks for the advice and the kind words. I definitely heard of people writing down positive things and I love that you have that, Iāve just never been able to see too much positive in myself or my life :)
But thank you.
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Training Wheels is back on along with a new series that Iāll drop this week!
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Hi, I was the person that asked why you were shelving it. I hope I didn't come off as rude that wasn't really my intention I was just curious, In response to not caring before, I didn't see the previous post. That was my mistake I should have checked before asking.i genuinely hope you're doing ok , I enjoy your work and I know it takes a lot of time and effort to produce the quality of work you put out, I hope you do anything that you think you need to do better your state of mind. (Also sorry if its hard to read english isn't my first language)
You werenāt rude in my opinion. Thatās just the way I express myself; Iām kind of nonchalant and joke inappropriately.
I havenāt been ok for weeks tbh but itās unrelated to TW. I genuinely, honestly felt like no one cared if I continued it or not.
But since some apparently do care, I suppose Iāll release the remaining chapters at my own pace...thereās only 8 to 10 left anyways. Iāll just keep updating it along with the new series.
Your English is fine, seriously. Your meaning got through :)
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Started watching Outer Banks today. Also tbh partly to see what the fuss about Rafe is all about š how did you like the show?
The show is more of a fun ride imo and more about the vibes and atmosphere? Like when you watch you want to hang out with the Pogues, you want to be invited to Rafe Cameron's parties, you want to be at the beach with your friends, you want to sunbathe on a boat, etc.
If you think about it the characters are more archetypes/stereotypes and there's no development or arc for them...it's about crazy shenanigans, fun adventures and the power of friendship? Rafe might be the only one with any kind of depth and that's because the actor killed it. I'd argue JJ too maybeeee?
The show isn't deep but it's fun and every cast member is eye candy.
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Hi my dear Lune!!
Wishing you nothing but the best and would like to let you know your writing was my inspiration for writing for our dear tyrannical soon-to-be Panem President. Thank you for sharing your work with us and I fully support you no matter what ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
You're too kind. I can't imagine me inspiring anyone tbh, this is wild lol but tysm, and I wish you nothing but the best as well :)
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