I canāt believe I have stuff to work on from an alpha read, this is so cool. I love notes! Canāt wait to find some beta readers who will REALLY tell me where the dumb shit is!
If you are still not convinced by the wisdom here, this is a very short clip that is forever burned into my mind:
He said, "You are my son, Tarl Cabot."
"I am Tarl Cabot," I said.
"I am your father," he said.
This is very early on in the FIRST BOOK. It wonāt get better.
Now, if you have friends with similar interests and you love trashy barbarian movies there are two truly stupid film adaptations, but at least you can be drunk with friends while watching.
If youāre intrigued by me and Systlin hateposting and becoming Bernice Green truthers b/c itās unbelievable that John Norman has actually seen a woman in real life, and you think to yourself āMaybe I should read the Gor books, I bet it would be funny,ā take it from me: Donāt.
Words canāt really express how gawdawful these books are. Theyāre so bad itās worse. I guess the wooden prose and the bizarre worldbuilding are kinda funny but then youāre dealing with the misogyny and rape fetishization and Ragnar-Redbeard-ass worldview in addition to the wooden prose and bizarre worldbuilding.
If you simply must investigate for yourself (perhaps as punishment for some terrible transgression), all 34 of them (yes you read that number right) are on Archive.org. Please donāt give Norm Johnman your money.
okay, i think i know what iām doing for november. iāve been experimenting with a fantasy world and since iām having fun, iām hoping that momentum carries me through next month.
so! adventures with witches, dragons, familiars, werewolves and demons sounding fun? itād be nice to have a circle to talk about november projects with. i love hearing about other folks stuff as well.
I legit have zero excuses to not do NaNo this year. No school. No full time job. No excuses.
Iām currently mentally rummaging trying to figure out what I want to focus on. Do I pick up something Iāve started and push for 50,000 fresh words? Do I start something new? Iāve also got an old work that could really stand to be rewritten.
Soundscapes, foley and music would hopefully guide you along a story. An example would be āThe Revengeā from ā78. An audio play with no dialogue but definitely is telling a story.
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This has an interesting breakdown of it.
No. See above.
Would you listen to an audio drama podcast with no dialogue? Or extremely minimal dialogue?