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The Clone Wars Voyage of Temptation

(Season 2 Episode 13)

...... ^^ Any way... Episode Opens Up With . Guard

Ah yes

“ Obi-Wan apparently fucks things up,”

[Why the focus on the guard’s blue eyes?]

The Sequel;

Old Friend

[With no familiarity-

This is really focusing on all the wrong scenes . .... Whelp

*Gets glass*

‘pparently I’m ready for some nonsense

. .

How deep does this go?

(Almost all the bad scenes]

Even the narrator- Seems To Struggle - Making Sense-

‘Satine claimed neutrality

Then there was an attack by -Deathwatch

So Satine

Had to go pled her innocence To the Senate?

-See how that doesn’t make any sense

Involvement in the war

She- - She didn’t do anything - You just said it was a terrorist organization.

Anyone who didn’t watch the last episode- Is going to be so lost (Even those that did..)

[We’re not even passed that recap]

Fun

Er-

?

Why?

what?

Why stick bug? (Skeleton thing)

As-sassinate her

Since when? I mean Okay...

(For those of you that don’t know the deathwatch, Totally bitched out, When it had a chance to kill her)

After their plan had been revealed,

Legit “let her go”, Ominous empty Hook.

Now apparently giving chase . . .

With more bodyguards and protection . . .

Sharp

One unaccompanied ship..

yeah they’re screwed

[at least there’s no Ahsoka-]

Presence

“Retnu” ?

What

[Retinue; a group of advisers, assistants, or others accompanying an important person] Oh

How to take the clones

Show offs “Anxiety,”

Sense?

[can someone just say ‘feel’. once? Not everything has to be “sensed”

Stupid Jedi mind reading bullshit

Safer Hand

The idiot that got knocked out by one of them

And Anakin.

[also is there like a Padawan babysitter?

Question

Don’t want to see them

Just Cur.]

Any way

Why?

He doesn’t seem too anxious

Oh observant one-

[I know somethings can only be feel- But seriously, ed

You’d think it’d show up in his body language

No dreamy look. ...

No wrist ful ness

Just rubbing his beard You need to do better than that

[Because at this rate I’m starting to believe they were just friends

Which I don’t think the writers were going for]

Also, geez, was that sharp And with no defensiveness Just anger

Let’s try it again, with a little more- sadness Emotion-

“Ah! No, it’s It’s all the past,” [Sadness]

More intensity on the hair grab

Narrowed Eyes (Eyes Only, Eye Brows Taut)

[Look Ing at Ground]

Possibly Shift- Ing - Hands - Into Pockets —- Head tilted upwards —— For absolute dejection - - - And Des -peration - - - Neat

‘Aight,’

‘How Do I-’

[Like, that’s not a typical reaction, Shout Ing- No emotion- I have just decided to -shout,’

‘Okay,’ Anakin

Whelp

Why is everything dark?

This is a very important Person, yes?

Why are there crates?

Are you storing Salt Ine with the luggage?

(The Se- nate’s gonna kill-

[Wait, was there a perspective change?]

Are- Are we dealing with the other clone troopers?

That- was very badly done-

You went from one area with people in an enclosed space

To people who look exactly the same

Coming out-

[You- You needed more distinction .there.]

Any.way

Investigating crates

In the dark

On a ship

Supposedly escorting a very important person [you’re telling me the Senate couldn’t splurge, On the lights, For their very important person escorting plane?

What happens if she wanted to get something for herself?

She has to walk through the dark?

Probably trip on a lot of things,

And possibly-

This set wasn’t thought out well,

Gotta Say,

Whelp

Okay

[Ah, the music is a little blaring]

It’s- been going on for several minutes-

[nothing against music [or sound effects] Just... This one doesn’t really match the tone (Being pretty loud bumbling and curious) (Needing less Brass, Or to be played at a lower frequency) For Shorter Periods Of Time) As It’s really fighting with the other effects, ....

Worst transport vehicle ever,]

War is intolerable Uh, did I walk into a philosophy seminar?

What

Also; SUBTLE!

And sorry to be a complainer;

The colors clash- Horribly (Which could be the point, the red of blood against her blue Red Oni-

But it’s not-

The red in this scene is clearly Displayed as nobility

(But that’s gold.)

And this scene - it clashes (Sorry to critique.)

Horr-ibly

The nobility music is drowning out her words

Which are not ones; you would speak with acquaintances or court; Far too uptight

And...

It just doesn’t work

- Gives me a -headache-

(Not good)

What is dude doing here?

What?

Why?

Er, Not As Bad As The . Abo mina tions.

Life

What

[Okay

She’s got a point ... Admittedly. It Is Framing- Her As Claiming . . . God?

. . . Gathering thoughts ... My issue with the scene- (Besides- the music) is how it presents Dutchess

Here she’s calling about the power of life And this could work; There’s nothing wrong with poking fun at authority assumers-

The excessive involved - The words with no meaning - Extrava gance-

But it isn’t doing that

It’s presenting hi- larious antics straight (Like this is normal behavior Or Just Urgh- Every-thing’s off And everything’s so overwhelming that I can’t pinpoint the exact problems.. ... It’s not Played Up ... For Humor

*Some Of It, But Could Be More

That’s The Ish

Small fix; Gold, Extrav agant Music, Lower Tempo (Volume) Calling Up Obi- Won To Chat, “The Jedi”. Jedis? There’s Your Scene . . . Neutral . . . . Aight Doing The Ey-

Inter-

She invited

Yeah you should’ve knocked-

And not come out swinging

But-

No-

Senator

??

Confusing this is

?

Serious

Also a lot more people..

?

Seriously emotions . ?

Yeah I don’t know what kind of emotions are going on here either buddy

Just that the writers are playing defense for Obi-Wan again

-Seriously

2 In A Row All For Obi-won

The only emotion and responsibility being when Duchess is talking

Author favoritism isn’t cute

Let them argue like adults

Not lowering the standard - ?

Peace keepers

There’s a difference

They’re both authority assumers.

Peace

So is enabling for peace .

Okay, seriously

Look effects can be used To Accentuate What’s already there,

Not replace

Your audience will know who’s right and wrong Regardless of how many cheap tricks You use

All it does is make you look bad Have faith your audience can tell right from wrong

And don’t use cheap tricks to try and avoid accountability

(Equal Accoun tability In The Narra. Tive)

Any Way -

No such thing

Yeah, why are these fuckers here?

Last we saw they were getting on Anakin’s ship and leaving

Now this

It feels a little Ret-con -y

And the story isn’t much better to justify it

Also did you just call them up here so you could lambaste him in front of your friends?

Don’t get me wrong she’s being damn tox

But Obi-Wan is an adult and can get himself out of the situation.

Now, moving on; Did

When?

Even they looked confused ... Hide

She’s got a point

Aight, Stop, How is this happening . Two Sides

If only the authors would let them argue as equals

No avail

[Also what even was the argument?

“A lot of people want to stay neutral because we don’t want to screw over our lives and that’s how I’ll be presenting our case”

“ A lot of people like taking the initiative and being involved in the action,”

I don’t recall.. .

[Public hum.]

[Puppy Dog]

[You’re nice]

[slightly guilty] Yea, I am

[Here’s Anakin]

Anakin...

[Puppy Dog]

“Your couriers asked me to do it,”

Couriers- no

“You’re hiding behind people,”

Blue dude steps in

I know she was the only one contributing any actual philosophy

Obi-Wan getting one line in

Before the writers went full defense.. ...

That was like the junk food (the potato chips) Of Arguments

Something happened but there was no value . . .

There was more dead air in the conversation than anything else,

Indeed

Non-sense

That was junk food

Stop padding yourself on the back For writing a void argument

Also I really don’t trust the courier guy...

[Call it old grudge]

Why would Duchess invite one of a her servants...

To a high class Senator event..

Look at this guy ... Look at everyone else . . He sticks out like a sore thumb . . . And he’s done nothing but be insubordinate this entire time.

Essentially being Obi-Wan’s “Yes” hype man,

(Are we sure guy isn’t a court jester)

I think multitude makes discord and not a good counsel

!

...

She...

(Constant character ization!)

Do it

[or hold them accountable to hypocrisy!)

Seriously,

So far this is neither mentally engaging or funny,]

And it’s ONLY to screw with Duchess

Seriously, Stop playing defense for Obi-won

[I know it’s called Star Wars but that doesn’t mean you have to glorify militarization]

Outside of in universe characters

Right

Two Sides

(For five seconds)

Before you started hiding behind meat shields and puppy dog eyes

Hers

As do you

[That wasn’t funny, Movie, Save the soundtrack for when something funny happens)

Now, Oof

See, that was emotion

Somethings the writers Refuse to let Obi- Wan do,

It’s either a bad ass or puppy dog eyes,

- -

You know what as nonsensical as this is It’s better than the fake arguing-

Con-tinue

Aight

Neat

Can’t see anything in here

Dark

And a high-class vehicle meant to escort a very important person

Yeah I’m aware thanks for rubbing it in my face

Doesn’t it make any sensical, or fix the problem Or make it funny ...

Whelp

“Not funny”

Hey, my thoughts when watching this episode

[except that was actually funny and slightly good foreshadowing]

Guess we know where we disagree,

Prefer laughing at their own un-balanced narrative,

Made by cheating...

.....

Hey an actually argument where they treated as equals!

You don’t get a star for that

Why did you bother with the other shit instead of just skipping to stuff like this?

This is good

Also shut up courier guy

[you have helped no one ever]

Rest

Hey this is actually good

Dinner..

Oof

Right

That was almost a facial expression

.

?

Who these guys ?

Where did they come from? - Aight, Neat-

Red

That’s unfortunate-

? Ship?

(What is that design?)

History

See you look at all these lighted and gold.. Extended Mission,

Okay, that’s good to know. - - Would’ve been nice to be clued into that the previous episode.

Okay,

Right,

Bountry Hunters

That sounds really traumatizing (Aka. terrible)

That actually does sound pretty terrible for him

Still an enabler

But nice characterization.

.

Hand to mouth

Now realizing how terrible that sounds

Rom-antic

No sounds terrible

Also they were children likely,

(Don’t think that’s cool,)

That wasn’t really an emotion

Whelp, Crud

?

Whelp

(Now you’ve scared the baby droid) /j

Violence

Wait did we just miss her whole backstory?

Also whoa, whoa, Whoa

Did you just try to assume authority over a grown woman’s decision to not like violence?

(People aren’t just buttons and numbers decided by the trauma of their childhood- or lack there of- (If so)

And tried to claim authority over a grown woman‘s decision

What the HELL movie?

(I want to believe that’s a mistake and Obi-Wan is meant to come across as the asshole For saying that,)

But all the writers previous choices regarding writing women Leave that up to concerning amounts of doubt)

Difficult task

Which she seemingly manage quite well until you showed up

Problematic..

Yeah, jedi Masters don’t really do not being over involved assholes

Else where

And your master

Demanded

Feelings

Hold up we saw one decent episode (instance) where they were characterized as being equals

A) That doesn’t mean necessarily romantic love

B) we have seen literally none of it

No instance where there actually seems to be any fondness

Between, the both of them

Just... Toxic

(If you need to pull that off you need some actual emot ional stimuli Aka. Emotions Where are they actually care about each other

So far it’s been snipping with no personal (Romantic) Attraction

Example; (Note Romantic is not naturally my field)

Intro;

“Satine - I,”

“ I wish to keep this strictly professional)

(Under “For both of our Breath sakes,” To Her self;

Argue;

“Well, I at least don’t leave the people who require my assistance,”

“I’m a better peacekeeper than you,”

And so forth;

It’s about the longing;

These two; nothing..

Decison

Did

Seriously, why are we watching this, passive tone. .

Whelp

Remorse

Which you haven’t felt this entire episode,

Also, regret and longing are better synonyms.

?

Aight ...

Okay,

Oh yeah and the other half of this “love” story is a horror story (Completely unconnected, No one’s going T’sundre) What ever

. .

The rest is pretty good Also it was totally the courier guy, I call it,

Me

That’s almost charming. . .

Find Out.

?

Seriously no one checked it?

Worst security ever

It

This security sucks

. . .

Worst ship ever ..

What?

Okay?

Aight

What..?

Aight,

Whelp

Aight,

Traitor

Courier

He changes his opinion on a dime and starts shit

Okay

And not attacking shit Logic,

?

Okay

Everyone just got attacked

Surprised everyone’s not jumpy

Or decided to go to bed

On this nightmare cruise

(”The luggage compartment is under-lit, Senator,”

“The - Security is horrendous

“Bugs in All the Food!”

The HR department is going to have a fecking fit (As well as anyone managing quality)

?

Courier

Again, what does the little things do?

They just seem to be basic annoyances

But..okay

That makes some sense.

I mean it is logical

But he is being a dick

(Also bold you to assume none of the clones did it)

Ha

Knew It

Merrick

Senator?

I thought he was a courier, or some kind of servant?

What?

Throw the table will you?

Whelp

Also;

R.I.P one Senator dude (Who I don’t think was ever named)

Shall be missed (The bug Obi-Wan will definitely hit that senator)

WHERE THE FU-

Where?

Worst. Security. Ever.

Tal Merica

I have problems that I haven’t found

He’s learned well from Obi-wan

And will make the Jedi Masters groan.

Okay

Team Command.

Aight

Oh yeah those guys got screwed over?

But they’re totally dead now right?

Heck

One nuisance bug. .

?

Clone’s have bug phobia (Dis like)

Thanks

Mother

How do you know?

S’up guys

Straight out of a puppet show,

Anyway

Whelp,

Whelp

Okay,

Saltine’s probably gone by now.

?

Are there no escape pods?

W-h -elp

Aight apparently not

Also the centerion guard are bitches) (Non derog)

Pfft

That.. line

Also Satine, Why did I bring the weakest freaking guards

And everything involved in it.

Monster

You literally-

Pfft

Okay..

“Get used to it”

What?

Whelp

Hi

.. .

Bull

Do you just took out the Centurion Guard, Ain’t some clones gonna stop him

Or deter,”

Help

?

What?

?

.. .

Elevator

Dude you were just spilling your fecking epilogue a few seconds ago (Also wrong tone to make this work)

?

Not reasonable progression of emotions,

?

How does this help?

?

Aight, Okay,

What’s

“Deathwatch command, You’re listening to our talk tunes at-”

?

- -

They’re not gonna be any help

They’re a small moon base .

Possibly a Gaztrillion miles away,

Liar

Not likely

Aight- -

?

How

Like if this is supposed to be a luxury ship design for the best of comfort and greatest of experience,

No way dude’s caught up in that quick a time

Especially with the little support

Whelp

It’s just went downhill. .

Into crazy nonsense.

Dead.

?

How

Girl-

That hasn’t even been remotely established enough

My-

-

Stop-

No gun

You gonna..

duchess

?

-

Aight

(Please Do)

Did pretty good at getting hostage Chips . . .

Four (five counting her)

And I don’t know how many others in terms of clones

Point being, it seems to be a mostly empty ship

Run by droids

.

Anakin Do Thing? - - - Okay

Guy already dead.

?

Hey, the centurion guards actually did something,

?

Who are those guys-

Nerrick

? ?

Whelp . . Okay

. “I don’t know how to say this,”

I swear if you say “I love you in that tone of voice, With ‘no emotion,

Whatsoever

Ight

Uhm

Okay

Right...

The lack of understanding of love And any emotion in this scene, Does it for me,

?

Neither do I Gag me

It’s so poorly done . .. Hardly

(Screw the music you didn’t earn that and you know it)

?

-

?

-

...

The Episode ... Was better than its predecessor, Which isn’t saying much, From Me

The first bit is as dis-jointed a mess as it’s predecessor

The middle reaches good levels

Then promptly declines back into (less-than) mediocrity

And Nonsense

The romance is nonexistent..

Only getting to friendship At around beg in ni ng Of The Half Way.

The love confession so forced..

(There’s a reason The- cheesy- in the middle- of battle

Was Dis Continued

Note; cheesy as in badly done

And ‘dude has a point’ is the least I Can Say about the Snark To-ward s It

Fix It;

Episode-wise; Separatist pre -sence causes Obi-won And Anakin To Be Inter- rupt ed

Only Anakin Being In- Vited Obi- Won Heart- Broken But Return- Relent

[i’m sorry I just can’t work with the, “have to answer / defend before the Senate (For no Reason) Nor the mystery train bit

(With The Chara C-ter I-zat ion)

Anakin Just Chill -ing there

Alt;

A cross Un- requited Love (For- Bidden-) (Episode) Mashing This Episode And “Hostage,” Elements, Specifically the professionalism argument; Obi- wan’s Side Show -ing The Consequences Of Restriction (Self Restraint) Gone Too Far . Anakin (and Padme’s) Too Little ... Possibly a Cross where they both lie to each other about their relationships ....

For Symbolism ... And Toxin Is Still Toxin ...

Sequence:

Anakin Takes Obi-wan’s Place And Learns About The Hist -ory

Acc- identally Stumbles Across Death Watch

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