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willowser · 5 months

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hi willow 👉🏾👈🏾, i have a writing question if you don’t mind me asking. how do you personally write with such detail??? i find it so challenging to make my writing consice and to the point but also interesting without dragging unnecessary descriptions out, and you can only use so many adverbs without them becoming annoying. i know writing is inherently telling, but how can you still show the readers without being too boring or over-descriptive?

hi kennie, friend !! i don't mind you asking at all, though i don't know if i'm the best person to ask alkfhagha also i didn't know how to get all my thoughts together enough to type out (read: eepy....) so have these two voice notes instead LOL

#i considered reading an example from the book i have on my desk bc i think i'm really bad at explaining but #that felt like too much LOL #anyway i hope this helps you at all !! idk if it will !!#but i think stories that really stick with me for a long time always have relatable description #i read it and i can just feel exactly what they mean and how they feel and it feels so personal to me #also art doesn't have rules and you can do whatever you want and whatever you think will tell your story best !!!#adverbs..........i have a deeply personal relationship with them............................................we have much history........#all this to say i wish i added more description to my writing but it's hard LOL !!!!#✿ ask willow

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