#also they're both beautiful and bald and I rarely get/take the opportunity to draw bald characters so this commission was brilliant for that

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Hello Yoka!

First of all I want to say I already love the premise.

I can't wait for my MC to shower Daemin with love.

Then I want to say OH MY GOSH YOUR ART IS STUNNINGLY BEAUTIFUL, I'm in awe!

Pleasantries aside, I have a few questions, if that's alright? Feel free to answer whenever you feel like it, no rush :3

I apologize for this ask to get so lengthy!

1) I'd like to doodle my MC so I was wondering if you know what sort of customization we can have for our Angel? I think I read in the stickied post that they're missing one wing. If I saw correctly the angel in your beautiful banner has a halo. Does our MC has one as well, then? And is it a normal halo (like most people would imagine) or is it possible to headcanon a few custom designs? (for example: Exusiai's E2 art from Arknights as a more unique design for a halo)

Any restrictions you'd say we should be mindful of when designing? Certain clothes, unavailable hair/eye colors (is heterochromia possible?), colors of wings/halo, scars etc.

2) everyone is in love with MC's dearest brother, rightfully so, but I'm curious about the ROs. Could you tell us common tropes they would fall under? Maybe some short facts about each of them?

That's it! :D

I wish you a lot of fun with this story of yours and am looking forward to not only read more, but also see more of your beautiful art!

Please remember to take breaks, eat and hydrate! :D

Wish you a wonderful day/evening!

Baiibaii

Hello Rkgk! I am happy to hear you are interested in what I have so far, and AAAA I'd love to see a drawing of how you picture the MC! And your art is so amazing ooOAAAAA!!

And thank you for reminding me of those things, when I read your message I was like “oh right I’m a living person” and got myself some water, LOL. 

All information is below the cut! 😊❤️️

MC Customization:

Hair -

Length - bald, short, medium, long

Type - pretty much all the types that there are

Color - from list or custom color option

Eyes - 

Heterochromia option (now that you’ve mentioned it 😊)

Color - from a list, but will contain the whole color range. The type will open up unique dialogue/flavor text

Skin - 

Natural tones

No scars (plays a role in the story and has reasoning behind it)

Height - 

Lowest is 5 ft and under

Highest is 7′2″

Clothing - 

Start out in a white suit of armor

Or, start out in a white and gold scholar uniform with a skirt or long pants

At a certain point, MC will have the opportunity to change out of the starting attire for something else. There'll be a fair amount of variety, ranging from fantasy to modern styles

Halo & Wing - 

Missing their left wing. There isn’t a mark or anything on the left side, either.

Color for both - from list or custom color option

Style for halo - from list or custom style option

It would be cruel of me to force players to have a simple halo style. I myself LOVE unique halo designs such as the one you mentioned

MC will also be able to summon and de-summon their halo and wings for incognito purposes

If you’ve noticed from the banner art, MC and Daemin have branches of wings that branch out from the main limb.

(The Angel in the banner is another MC of mine that I drew for artistic purposes. In the story, MC won’t be locked in to look like the one in the banner) 

At the start of the story, Daemin and MC only have one base wing with no branches. The more essence they have, however, increases the amount of wings branching out from the main limb. So in the banner they both have three wings worth of essence.

Essence

Color - from a list, but will contain the whole color range. Different colors will open up unique dialogue/flavor text.

Red, pink, orange, yellow, and white are common for Holy beings

Grey is common for both Holy and Unholy

Green, blue, purple, brown, and black are rare for Holy beings

Daemin’s essence color is red :)

When an Etherian (Holy and Unholy) uses essence, it looks sort of like this:

The area they are either transferring or concentrating their essence will glow the color that it is. If two individual’s essence colors are different in color, transferring essence will create a cool little mixture of the two colors. :D 

For combat, summoned weapons will be the color of the essence.

Elemental essence manipulation is the same, so liquids, shards, air/mist, and fire will be the same color as the essence.

Transformation utilizes essence, so transformed MCs will have accents, a glow, or a shadowy aura surrounding them. Transformation makes them look more otherworldly.

This is an example of one of my personal views of the MC, whos transformation is humanoid with an ethereal . This is how I visualize accents, too.

(This is just my view of the MC. Players are free to visualize their MC however they wish for transformations)

There are three main types for transformation: 

Humanoid - Purely bipedal, looks the most human-like

Hybrid - Imagine something like a centaur, for example. Humanoid upper-body and an animal lower body.

Beastial - Looks much like an animal. Quadrupedal. 

And the sub-types for these three breaks into two options: enigmatic or eldritch. Enigmatic basically means that the MC has a ethereal, calm-looking appearance. Eldritch is terrifying and aggressive looking. 

How much essence they’ve obtained determines the height difference. One wing and they remain the height they were regularly. For each additional branch of wing, their height increases about a foot or so, when in transformation.

Note: Still conceptualizing and deciding what I want to do for transformations, but I think these are the key factors I’m sticking with for now ^.^

Comprehensible veil and natural appearance - 

The veil and natural appearance looks the same for Etherians. However, mortals are able to see a VERY clear difference.

For example:

(Credit to my friend for discovering this AI art bot. I like to use it for some concepts)

This is what mortals would see if a Holy or Unholy did not have the veil. The veil Etherians cast upon themselves allows mortals to see an Etherian for how they already view themselves as—humanoid with wings and a halo or horns (if they have those summoned).

So if MC and Daemin hear people screaming bloody murder and running away from them when nothing is happening, they might not have their veil up. They can sense whether or not the veil is on them, but they themselves cannot see it.

I can go more in depth about transformation and these two appearances if needed.

Facts about the ROs:

I’m not gonna tell who is which, but each character is centered around one of the seven deadly sins. ;D

Crych

Trope/themes of their path - Anger born of worry/love

From Kier. (World map at bottom of post)

They’d be a computer junkie if they had immediate access to a computer and life’s worries didn’t get in the way. So much information in one place, and such a complex machine!

Didn’t realize this until my friends tried pronouncing their name, but their name is pronounced “crit-ch” and not “cry-ch.”

I’ve mentioned in the tid-bit from this post that they are from a place where individuals choose their names based on sounds they feel most attuned to.

The idea of Crych having eyespots on their ears is something I borrowed from another story I was working on back in 2019, but never finished.

Crych doesn’t have four ears or looks animalistic like this, but the idea of their ears perking up to reveal eyespots is kind of like the top right image. Difference is the eyespots are on the inner fur of their ears instead of on the sides.

Yonas/Yoelle Cava’dren

Trope/themes of their path - Shared suffering, beneath the smile lies something more.

From Tarlean. (World map at bottom of post)

Since they don’t have any visuals of them yet, here’s the Pinterest board for them. 

Knows sign-language, and they often talk smack about Remilia when signing to Fenrir. 

Eve

Trope/themes of their path - They knew you before you knew them, enemies to lovers, little rat of an enemy to ✨ respectable frenemy ✨

They’re not easily willing to say where they’re from. 

Pinterest board for them can be found here since there are no official visuals yet.

They 100000% have the INTJ stare. 

That one video ‘Halloween Party’ on Youtube featuring Michael Myers describes their mysterious, yet humorous vibe well. 

For people planning to romance them...uh....there’s going to be some rough choices to make... :D

Fenrir Alphenstein

Trope/themes of his path - Friend to lovers, friend to bestfriend, single adoptive father who’s just doing his best. :)

He’s not easily willing to say where he’s from.

Pinterest board for him can be found here since there are no official visuals yet.

He’ll have a more light-hearted, fluffy path compared to everyone else.

Loves to do and try a lot of things! If he had a blog he’d probably show pictures and posts about all of his travels and experiences.

Lunari Pyan

Trope/themes of her path - Friendly rivalry, flirt battle, getting over grudges.

From Northern Omisty. (World map at bottom of post)

Pinterest board for her can be found here since there are no official visuals yet.

The themes for her and her sister are very telling of their bond and their personalities. I’m not a music expert, but both songs have a repeating ‘bump’ to them, if that makes any sense? Lunari’s theme is here and Ashuri’s theme is here.

Captivated by brawls and wrestling. Deep infatuation with the art of fighting.

Remilia Mhova 

Trope/themes of her path - Defrosting the ice queen, 🎵 anything you can do I can do better 🎵

From Spriark. (World map at bottom of post)

Her intended vibe is kind of like Spectre from Dungeon Fighter Online.

She’s been trying to learn sign language in her free time.

Spoils Cava’dren. :D The dynamic between those two is like two people going shopping: Cava’dren wants to sit down, rest, and not be there, but Remilia is like “We’re buying you ten different shirts, and I don’t care if you don’t want to watch me look at the same three boots for an hour.”

Sorin Laigar 

Trope/themes of his path - Slow burn, oblivious to love, deep talks

From Northern Omisty. (World map at bottom of post)

Oldest one in the bunch, being in his 30s

Defining symbols for him are phoenixes and fire. 

Dad jokes even though he isn’t a dad.

All I can say is that I feel so sorry for him 💀 There are other characters I feel sorry for, but man...thinking about what’s to happen pokes at my heart.

His Pinterest board can be found here since I only have the sketch of him without color.

My favorite character aside from Crych!

Eldris World Map - 

This is the first draft of the world map, I might change some things here and there, but this is the general idea of where everything is.

[ If something from what I’ve said confuses you, or you want to know more, feel free to send me another ask :D ]