my dear lovely amazing talented sweet em๐ซก i'm used to sending you my long ass feedbacks privately BUT this time i'll send it on here since i have many pics i wanna insert and i'm so stupid idk how to do that in chat๐ค๐ผ LET'S START
before saying anything THIS IS A FEEDBACK PEOPLE THERE WILL BE SPOILERS (OBVIOUSLY :) )
the introduction??? I MEAN IT SEEMED TOO REAL๐ฉ that's the hottest wet dream i've ever read like?? and the way she realised she's in deep shit after waking up DAMN๐ญ i really hope deep down that yoongi heard her moans๐คญ
it was soooo sweet when he calmed her down and was like: that's fine๐ซถ๐ผ๐ซถ๐ผ when they talked with that racist mf. also i absolutely love that cliche where there's only one bed like damn๐ฉ AND HE CHOSE TO SLEEP ON THAT BRICK FOR HER?? HE THOUGHT SHE WOULD MIND?? OUCH๐๐
i LOVED the new characters๐ป wait- i fucking forgot her name BUT I LOVE HER๐ค๐ผ loved how she gave mc some advice ๐ซ she's super sweet AND funny (reminds me of someone๐คญ)
when mc asked yoongi to sleep on the couch. THERE'S NO NEED FOR EXPLANATION BUT MY HEART DIED.
i was so happy cause i knew something would definitely happen on that bed. I MEAN TWO HOT PEOPLE WHO ARE ATTRACTED TO EACH OTHER OBVIOUSLY THEY WOULD FUCK๐ซถ๐ผ๐ซก
here i knew why you said she's stupid ๐ญ LIKE GIRL OPEN THAT MIND OF YOURS PLEASE WE'RE DYING HERE
"You make me so fucking hard. Dreamt dreamt about fucking you in this bed." WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK??? MIN YOONGI CALM YOUR TITS WE'RE TRYING TO LIVE HERE๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ
so fucking hot and respectful ๐ฉ y'know idk when that happened but when you kept mentioning everything with "fictional" or "fiction" the other day THERE WAS NO NEED CAUSE THERE'S NO REAL MAN LIKE THE MIN YOONGI๐ค๐ผ๐ i mean that "Can I go raw again?" made me come (kidding) ๐
who. is. ruining. who. WHAT???? I MAY NEVER BE ABLE TO BREATHE AGAIN๐ฅฒ em i love you but please have mercy on us๐ซถ๐ผ
yeah i discovered i have a voice kink after this part๐ซฑ๐ฝโ๐ซฒ๐ผ i remembered that one yoongi live IYKYK with that orange hair damn๐ฉ๐ฅ
this scene actually killed me multiple times in a RAW see what i did there?๐ ahhhhh sooo goooddddd
ummmmm so he didnt win a grammy๐ญ i mean i love being right๐ idk why but i kind of loved the idea of him not winning๐ญ WE GOT CUTE SCENES PEOPLE!!!
ok, the disappointment he felt was truly heartbreaking for all of us๐ and if you ask me him not winning makes sense actually ๐ฅฒ but then they got wayyyy too drunk and y/n could witness agustd's tongue technology ๐ฉ they sang and danced with each other๐๐ซ
damn em. THIS HIT HARD
the thing i absolutely adore in your writing is that in can be so relatable? it's sad but it's true๐ค for some reason it's comforting to me, your writing comforts me๐๐ i've noticed that in many of your books especially TSOYB (i'm so proud of you btw) AND I LOVE YOU FOR THAT ๐๐๐๐
SMOOTH LIKE BUTTER. BUTTER COULD NEVER. wait did that just rhyme??
i can't insert more photos unfortunately but the last photo is of his confession๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ IT MAKES SENSE NOW. IT ALL MAKES SENSE. they way he talked about jungkook and when he told her to date him was not him mocking or making fun of jungkook he was in love๐ญ๐ญ i did NOT see that coming ๐ฅน๐ฅน the fact that he was the one who confessed first has me screaming, crying, throwing up AND CURLING MY TOESSSSSS AHHHHWIDISBXISHSUXH
AND PLEASE WHEN HE SAID "STUPID" ?? BABY WE'RE ALL STUPID FOR YOU YOU DUMB SHIT
we got the best wet dream, soft yoongi, SQUIRT GOD MIN YOONGI, new lovely characters, one of the best smuts AND A FUCKING CONFESSION.
don't get me started on when she started to cry and when he thought he fucked things up cause i almost cried so hard๐ซถ๐ผ๐๐๐
WHAT A MASTERPIECE ๐๐๐๐๐
thank you so much babyyyy for this!!! it's so well written and i can see you're improving so fast!! ๐ซถ๐ผ๐ซถ๐ผ๐ซถ๐ผ i absolutely adore you and your writingssssss MWAHHHH
hi sarahhhhh ๐ฅบ thank you for taking the time to send such long and lovely feedback ahhhhh! it always means so much to hear what parts stick out to someone and why ๐
GAH the stupid black text on the screenshots ๐ฉ tumblr why did u paint my whole fic black for no reason..... why is this website broken lmao. i fixed it now but i'm still mad about it hahdskjfdfg ANYWAY
LOLLLLLL airplane sex dream we had to do it ๐คช hopefully she wasn't loud enough for anyone else in first class to hear ๐ but also if yoongi had heard maybe he would've realized she was down to share the bed ๐คฃ but he did instead take the brick!!!! it's funny for someone who has been labeled an asshole for the entire series, yoongi actually cares quite a lot about consent at basically every point of the story, and is always like.... overly cautious abt not overstepping boundaries ๐คญ wonder when reader will catch on ๐
tiffanyyyyyy my girl ๐ฅฐ and not you comparing me to her GET OUTTA HERE that's too nice ๐ฅบ sometimes the most honest/sweetest conversations happen with a girl you just met in the bathroom lmfao, it's like the rules of feminism! we look out for each other ๐
OPEN THAT MIND OF YOURS WE'RE DYING LMAOOOOOO..... i'm dead ๐ she really can be so dense sometimes like HELLO.... 2+2=4 MA'AM..... LET'S GET IT TOGETHER.....
eeeeee i'm glad you enjoyed the smut ๐ฅต i love writing these two together especially now that it's started to get softer (but just as dirty ๐ฉ need me a min yoongi like this lmao)
ohhh thank you for calling out that yoongi line bc it's one of my favorite bits ๐ฅบ him actually being nice for once instead of laughing at her for not figuring jk's crush out sooner..... bc he does get it (AND TALK ABOUT WANTING TO AVOID AN INCONVENIENT TRUTH HELLO..... THE CALL IS COMING FROM INSIDE THE HOUSE LMAO) and i'm so honored that you find my writing relatable and comforting!!!! that really means the world wow ๐โโ๏ธ๐
THE CONFESSION ๐ฉ AND YES YOU GET IT!!!!! he feels like jk is the more obvious/better choice for her bc mans has no self esteem ๐ซ and even at the end we can see him starting to worry about if he should've told her or not.... somebody come get this man and tell him he's a prize!!!
thank you so much for reading sarah my love ๐ฅบ i'm so glad you're enjoying this series and these twooooo, i love them so much and can't wait to show you what's next!!! ๐
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