#and echem is devastated

[revalition]

[rynli]

Hi, can I just say I'm in love with your fic? Cause I'm in love with your fucking fic. Did I finish binge reading it just five minutes ago? Yes. Yes I did. But it makes the brain worms fresh, so.

1. IM IN LOVE WITH YOUR CHARACTERISATION. Harry is enough of a sopping sack of old man sadness coupled with incompetence of a guy who forgor everything about the current reality - even down to the simplicity of 'wait, where do you buy ingredients?' and needing someone to explain how to do his own goddamn paperwork. And of COURSE Pryce needs him back on his old caseload - which would just kill him. Again. AND BY GOD, MAN.... The way that breakdown/relapse chapter went down? God. He really did just try to go on a run. At least he got a bowl out of it, though. Absolutely love the way you write the skills and all the failed checks, too, cause man is Harry struggling. Absolutely delightful. (Also this is small, but electrochemistry being more than the 'take drugs!!' guy is. Actually refreshing which is unfortunate. He's the HAPPY CHEMICAL GUY!! THE THINGS YOU ENJOY DOING!! SEEKING SEROTONIN AND DOPAMINE! He's gonna be excited over a new fuckin thing that makes you happy!)

2. KIM. THE MAN HIMSELF. I love that you're making him act appropriately silly actually. He's not serious all the time. Yes he's a killjoy but he'll also call you a schoolboy. The banter??? God I love the banter. The bit with 'papa' at the lake actually killed me and I almost whipped out a whole essay right there. GOD he plays off of Harry so well. ALSO!!! ACTUALLY VALIDATING HIS FEELINGS IN THAT SCENE!! MEETING HIM HALFWAY, NOT TAKING A STEP BACK. HARRY IS MENTALLY ILL, AND YOU DON'T TELL THOSE PEOPLE THEIR DELUSIONS/BELIEFS/IN THIS CASE BRAIN VOICES ARE NOT REAL OR THAT THEY DON'T MATTER!!! GOD. The talk of Kim being actively curious about Harry's voices, too? The 'Dreamer' bit? Oh my godddd. I hope we see Harry introduce more of the skills to Kim, I'd love for that to be an ongoing literary thread of Harry giving bits of his heart on a silver platter. Man.

Okay I'm rambling but the last thing I'll mention is the actual MYSTERY!! It being mostly kids/teenagers??? KNOWING AND ACKNOWLEDGING HARRY USED TO BE A GYM TEACHER AND USED TO INTERACT AND TEACH KIDS? That has to be devastating, right?? You could have known them. In another life. One was LITERALLY coming back from soccer practice. It could have been you, losing one of your students. Whos to say be didn't lose them before? God. Just- god. He joined the cops for the city, for the people- and they keep dying anyway.

(I AM SO NORMAL ABOUT YOUR FIC!!! SO NORMAL RIGHT NOW!!! I PROMISE. IT'S VERY LOVELY.)

Holy shit thank you for the fresh brainworms!! Eating them like a bird.

Poor Harry is sopping wet and going through it. He's exactly the mix of pathetic + weird + potentially scary that I love to read and write about, and I am throwing him against the wall to see how he splats. Kim is less intuitive, especially when it comes to things like Harry's voices (the game text is very clear that he doesn't believe things talk to Harry, but also he cares a lot for him at this point and he knows that this is important to him!!) so I'm very happy to hear that that hit the mark.

Fun fact! I almost didn't even start this fic because I didn't think I could come up with skill dialogue! Thankfully they flow surprisingly easily. Echem 👏redemption 👏 arc! Give the guy some natural dopamine!

Oh god... Harry would have known so many of the district's youth... he absolutely had to take cases with kids he used to know. screaming and crying. I'm always thinking about how he's a cop to try to help people, but as a homicide detective he can only ever show up after it's too late. I'm hoping to find a place where he can help people (and the city) preventatively, rather than posthumously! I've found several lines in the game that point in a certain direction; hoping I can get there.

I'm glad we can all be so normal together :)

[abegailmarie]

LET YOUR DIFFERENCES FLICKER

by: Abegail Marie Dahan, Vanessa Echem, Kristine Jane Sontosidad, Quenith Sondrita and Jay Michael Uba

FG ESSENTIALS

France Angelo Capistrano and Golda Taldo the owner of FG essentials where they market basic essentials of a person (medicine, diaper, water, first aid kit and etc.) and on the side of their store you can see an ice cream freezer, the very popular ice cream stop of every children in Purok 6-A Poblacion Lagonglong Misamis Oriental.

Last year, during the pandemic the couple decided to occupy the vacant room in a little commercial building and come up with the idea of having a store in regards of selling medicine since they noticed that that is whats the baranggay is lacking.

A first its an uphill battle for them especially the fact that they were selling medicine, its hard for the citizens to trust someone new with their health but along the way they proved themseleves and people have trusted them completely that led them to continue their business fair and stable. In exchange they never break the peoples trust.

MARWIN STORE

A sari-sari store started by both of his parents and continued serving the people by selling different goods. From the food people ate till the food people fed there animals. The store isnt really that big before when both his parents managed it but when Marwin managed it he said to himself that she shouldnt stop himself from selling just foods and soaps so he added and added, and years after years he almost sell everything. He even market school supplies

The hustle of the tussle:

In the year 2019, in the middle of the night where all people in Purok 6-A Poblacion Lagonglong are peacefully sleeping an enormous fire came out of nowhere. All the people were in the state of shock seeing th fire ate over twenty houses and stores combined and one of that is Marwin's.

How did the businessman cope up with the accident? His statement says:

"I cant do anything to save both my store and house so what I did was just watch it from afar and think on where to start again. I was devastated yes but if I will mourn like what others did would it change anything? No. Would it feed my family? No. So I did what a father and a son should do. I loaned a fair amount of monet like what I did before and builded my store again like how it was before. People know me already coz I have been in this business for years already and starting all over again isnt that much of a problem"

HEARING THE STRUGGLES THEY HAVE TO FIGHT WITH IN ORDER TO REACH THEIR DREAMS BROUGHT DIFFERENT IMPACT INSIDE US...

It inspired us tocontinue believing ourselves despite the big waves the ocean gives.

Upon hearing the hustles they have exerted in order to fight the antagonist of their story it encourage us to exert more and do more.

Stimulated that little technopreneur inside our hearts to let it grow and release the potential that was hiding all along.

Arouses the interest to learn more in prder to gain more.

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DONT QUIT WHEN YOU FAIL.

FAIL UNTIL YOU SUCCEED.