#but a lot of it just feels stilted and descriptions feel clinical and very tell-y once again so i need to do some maintenance
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chapter 4 of art therapy...............
#stormy shouts#i'm noticing things... i must edit... i have to rectify.... i MUUUUUST RAAAAAGH#there are whole sections i think that i can word a lot better#see ch4 was also another thing; i had no idea what i was doing with art therapy still#and i had switched to a harry pov bcs i thought bringing harry and heather* in would be interesting#and make the overall narrative richer obviously like a relationship is a two way street#storytelling 101 get with the program#but a lot of it just feels stilted and descriptions feel clinical and very tell-y once again so i need to do some maintenance#like it's not the worst it could be i just think it could be a lot better with where i am now i suppose#ch4 is very much like..... several months to years old writing atp so 😁 [grinding my teeth]#ANYWAYS#art therapy
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